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Närpiö, Suomi/Ulvila, Suomi
July - August, 1192​

Marja sat on her horse staring at the wide river before her, feeling the breeze from the Baltic. The sun was peaking over the horizon, coating the crossing in a golden sheen. And obscuring the vision of our archers, no doubt.

She was flanked by two dozen men, her own personal guard, with Giedrius on her left in command. On her right Aapo sat, carrying her banner with stiff-backed dignity. She had extended him the honor after his stalwart words the night before.

Marja would not be defeatist in front of her men, but she was worried. She had seen with her own eyes what boys made up her levies. How many of them would be dead before the day was out? How many injured, doomed either to die from infection or from the neglect that this world extended to cripples? Why do men talk of the glory of war? All I can imagine is suffering and hardship. It was one more crime to heap on Turo’s head, she decided. She would not have sought this war, had he not forced her hand.

Her small company was a tiny island of trained men on the army’s left. The bulk of the men here were her husband’s, from the vast and thinly populated duchy of Vasterbotten. She could see men in Sámi caps inspecting their blades, while others called out ribald jokes in Swedish. Men were laughing, but a hair too loud. They would not let themselves be afraid in front of their brothers, but they worried nonetheless.

Ulinninks and his Swedes would attempt to secure the river crossing first. He had made no bones about the dangers involved, but he claimed that there were no men better prepared than his own. Opposition from Turo’s army would be fierce, but they were so much fewer that the numbers favored Marja’s men. In addition, she had a new weapon at her disposal, one once unknown to the Suomi.

In the years since the northern crusade, her father had begun to raise new companies of heavy horse. They were styled after the knights of Christendom. A few, Poles anointed in the Christian fashion, really were knights. Regardless of their gods, they were all minor nobles, trained for mounted combat from their earliest days and just now raised to manhood. Their charge could shatter a shieldwall, or so the story went.

She had thought to send them over the river first, but Ulinninks convinced her otherwise. The river crossing would rob her horse of their most valuable asset: mobility. So instead the horse had left camp hours ago, in the dark of night, to a second river crossing miles away that her scouts had discovered. While Ulinninks’ heavy infantry fought with the enemy from the front, the cavalry would attack from the side.

Or so the plan went. Marja did not think it would be quite so easy as that. They were on Mielus’ lands, and so if she knew of that second crossing, he must as well. That old familiar itch came back to her. There is something here that I’m not considering.

“Your majesty?” Giedrius indicated the position of the sun, and she nodded.

“Call the advance,” she commanded in a loud voice. A trumpet sounded out, three long blasts; and all along the line, she could hear others playing the same mournful song. The battle had begun.

In the distance, she could see Ulinninks and his heavy infantry starting the river crossing. One man lost his footing on the treacherous riverbed and fell beneath the water’s surface. She did not see him right himself, weighed down as he was from the armor. Just like that, the first man had died in the war against Turo. But not the last.

On the other side of the river, the Karelians had formed a shield wall. They were flanked by regiments of archers on either side, firing directly at her advance. At this range, they could scarcely miss. She leaned over to Giedrius: “We need to disrupt those archers.” He nodded, and called for their own archers to step forward.

NOTCH! A dozen of her Swedes fell to Karelian arrows, just while she was watching. DRAW! A squire was flailing around, gasping for air, a yew shaft jutting through his throat. LOOSE! The dawn reversed for just a second, and then arrows were falling on the far side. The Karelian infantry raised their shields, but the enemy archers were not so lucky.

Then there were cries of alarm from the other side, and she saw that her heavy horse had made it back. Thank the gods, Turo had not been careful. A regiment of archers broke at the sight of the destriers, throwing down their bows and fleeing into the woods. The shieldwall dissolved into confusion as well, as some men spun to face the horsemen while others worried about her infantry. Ulinninks roared in enthusiasm, and she could see her armored infantry practically running through the river to join the fray.

Her brother’s men might have routed right then, if Mielus had not charged forward with his own horse in a desperate rearguard action. Even then, it was all he could do to stand between her horse and the infantry. His decision permitted the Karelian shieldwall to reform, but by then her own men were on the other shore, pushing forward. There was perhaps three feet of dry ground behind them, but it was enough.

“He’s going to lose,” one of her guards said excitedly. “The traitor’s going to lose.”

“We are not winning until we’ve won,” Giedrius cautioned. Marja agreed with him. There was still much that could happen.

The front line resembled a shallow bowl, it seemed to her. More and more of her own men were crossing, giving their strength to the men in front of them. Besides them, Mielus was engaged in a fierce melee with a Polish knight, the air ringing with the song of steel. He had given ground half a dozen times.

Behind her, she could hear new trumpets blare. Marja spun around, but could see nothing–not at first. Had Elzbieta’s Masurians come to join them? She would have chided her cousin for leaving Ulvila so exposed, but right now the thought of reinforcements made her heart leap.

But no. She began to make out banners in the distance, all red and gold. That was not the Masurian arms, that was… Östergötland. Harald. What in the name of all the gods was Harald Sigurdrsson doing here? Nothing about this made any sense.

And just like that, there he was. Giedrius was saying something to her now, but she could scarcely hear him. She could only watch in mute horror. Her horse reared and began to run. Giedrius had slapped her horse on the flank, she realized belatedly. Besides her, Aapo was screaming in her ear. “Your majesty,” he said over the sound of slaughter and death, “we must away. We cannot stand against foes on either side of us.” She nodded, hollowly.

She chanced a glance back once more, and saw Giedrius and Harald exchange fierce blows. Harald was younger, though, and his longsword carried a longer reach. Giedrius is going to die, she thought numbly. Harald is going to kill him. Her witty friend.

Dear Harald, who now wore the red cross on white of a crusading knight. Who was wielding a two-handed longsword in a fearsome arc. It was smeared in blood, she realized. Suomi blood. Her people’s blood.

*****​

News of the slaughter at Närpiö sent the city of Ulvila into a panic. Thousands had died. The traitor prince had made a secret alliance with a Christian duke of Sweden, and many believed that he meant to get baptized and defy the gods themselves. Marja was missing, presumed dead, along with half the Suomi nobility. But most terrifying of all, Turo was coming here, to Ulvila. A man as cruel as Turo must surely mean to put the city to the sword.

Elzbieta was an old woman, and she had seen much. She knew that reports of a defeat were often confused, and hysterical. However, the official reports were scarcely more encouraging. Only three thousand men had managed to escape from Närpiö, less than one man in two. Turo had indeed benefitted from the support of one Harald Sigurdrsson, whom Marja had cultivated as a friend–or so she had believed.

She had not heard from Pavel. She had sent him out months ago on his usual assignment: the removal of obstacles. He had become so reliable in the last fifteen years that she no longer needed to specify precisely how a man was to be killed or when. In theory, then, he might still be lying in wait to strike at Turo. In her heart, she knew otherwise. Pavel was likely dead, another corpse that she intended to lay at Turo’s feet.

However, all hope was not lost. The royalists had retreated to Västerbotten, where soon the frigid weather of the Sámi lands would be their shield. They might hold out there for six months at least, long enough to make new alliances and launch the campaign anew in the spring. If Marja was dead, then surely Turo would have paraded her body around for all to see. The fact that he had not meant that there was still a chance.

One morning, Ulvila awoke to discover a forest of banners and tents outside its walls, Karelia and Oulu chief among them. Duke Ruslan of Novgorod had apparently also been swayed to the rebel cause, an alarming sign. To make matters worse, a merchant ship discovered to its horror that the enemy had scuttled a hulk in the Kokemäenjoki river, blocking access to and from the sea. The city was now under siege, for the first time since the founding of Suomi.

However, while the city had quailed before the arrival of Turo, once he was there at the gates demanding to be let in, they responded with sisu, the stubborn defiance that the Suomi were so famous for. When she had been through the market the day before, she had seen very little sign of distress. Somebody had erected a painted kraken, the sigil of the war god Tursas, and the commons were touching it for luck. One merchant said apologetically that stocks would be low “until the bastard kicks it,” but aside from that, nobody spoke of the war outside the city walls.

After a few days of desultory arrow fire and the slow construction of siege engines, a breathless page arrived at Elzbieta’s solar to inform her that the rebels were seeking to parley with her at the gates of dawn on the eastern side of the city. She considered the notion for a minute and then replied that she would be there within the hour.

Elzbieta was still getting dressed when Agafana arrived with the castellan, Foma of Pinsk. “They say that you mean to treat with Turo,” the tietäjä said cautiously.

“I do.” As she spoke, she inspected herself in a silver mirror, trying to decide if her hair should be up or down for the parlay.

The tietäjä looked helplessly at the castellan, who said bluntly, “This is surely a trap. The man has no honor.”

“I know it’s a trap,” she said. She decided that she should leave her hair down, and eschew excess ornamentation. It would be best to convey that she understood the seriousness of the situation.

“Then why…”

She silenced Foma with a look. “See to the city’s defense while I’m gone, yes? Do not give that man an inch.”

The weathered old Russian blinked, and then nodded. “As you say, your grace.”

On her way to the gates of dawn, Elzbieta touched the kraken of Tursas. She had been a Christian her entire life, and yet in this moment it seemed to her that Suomi needed all the help it could get.

On the other side of the gates, she was met with two Karelian spearmen, along with a scruffy looking guard with a crossbow. She gave the men a crooked smile and showed them her empty hands. “Don’t worry, gentlemen, I’m unarmed.” When the crossbowman could only snarl, she laughed out loud. There was a begrudging quality to their escort after that.

In the gloom of Turo’s command tent, she took the opportunity to size up the enemy. Turo had not aged well, she was gratified to see. The arrogant young prince had grown into a fleshy man with deep frown lines and a cluster of broken veins on his nose and cheeks. The reports that he had taken to drink were not exaggerated, she could see. Even in ermine and silk, he resembled a dockyard tough more than a king.

Beside him, Mielus was hovering like an anxious mother watching her son take his first steps. She could imagine the tension between them: Mielus wanting to manage Turo, and Turo lashing out when he was managed. Duke Ruslan was making a show of inspecting a large map on the commander’s table, but it was not hard to see the irritation in his eyes. Only Kauri, hiding behind that wrought mask of his, was able to hide his feelings.

There was something else too. Turo the younger, the son and ostensible heir, was not here. Why not? Was there a rift between the boy and his father? The intelligence she had received suggested as much. Of course, there was the matter of Turo’s most recent marriage… No doubt Turo’s new bride would like to see her own child on the throne, should that happen. There is a lot of tension in this room, and only some of it has to do with me.

“I understand congratulations are in order,” she said amiably. “For your recent nuptials, I mean. Lady Tyyne must be beside herself.”

“I couldn’t be happier,” said the would-be king sullenly.

“And no doubt you are as well, your grace?” Elzbieta directed her gaze to Mielus, who was regarding her now with a half-smile. “Tell me, has Turo hit your daughter yet? Or do you think he’s waiting until after the coronation?”

Turo flushed when she said that, but Mielus would not be baited. “I have no concern for the usurper’s lies. His majesty has my utmost regard.” He almost sounded as if he meant it.

“My heart rejoices to hear it,” she said with a smile. “Was it a church wedding? Since you seem so collegial with the Christians, I thought I’d ask.”

“You of all people…” Ruslan began. He was glowering at her now.

“Me of all people what?” She had not let her smile waver. “I always respected the religious divisions of this kingdom. But your cause seems beholden to Christian steel.”

“Enough of this!” Turo snapped. “You will surrender the city to me. If you do so now, the garrison will be permitted to leave unharmed. You alone would remain, as hostage to your son’s good behavior.”

Elzbieta snorted. It was no more than she had expected. “I have a counter-proposal.”

Turo began to object, but she ignored him. Instead, she addressed her words to the assembled nobles. “Her majesty the queen is willing to retain you in your traditional rights and titles, and forgive this little adventure–provided that you hand over Turo by nightfall.”

“We stand in service to our king,” Mielus said–quickly? To prevent the other dukes from speaking? She could not be sure.

“I haven’t finished,” she began, now speaking more sharply. “You all know my reputation. You know what I can do, to you and yours, if you persist in this folly. Even now, I have agents among the Vepsi tribes, offering gold marks for every Karelian head. Shall I call them off, Kauri? And Ruslan, that bright young son of yours–he does love to swim in the Dnieper, does he not? ‘Twould be a shame if rogues came upon him there. Mielus, I have a veritable army of killers ready for your line.” Duke Ruslan was pale now, and Kauri’s hand had developed a notable tremble. Only Mielus looked unimpressed. “Your graces, I ask you to consider: what is this traitor worth to you? He has no lands, no incomes, no armies. He is a faithless dog, and what he did to Ulavi he would just as easily do to any man of you.”

Turo was purple with rage, but Mielus only laughed. “You’re bluffing.”

She cocked her head. “If you think so, you’re welcome to find out.”

The duke gave a signal, and a servant came up to him with a large bulky item in a linen sack. “You see,” he said to her in a voice filled with menace, “you’re not the only one who enjoys theatrics.” He upended the bag, and a head fell onto the packed earth. Elzbieta knew who it was before she even looked at it. Oh, my dear Pavel. Look what they’ve done to you, my boy.

“There was a curious incident in Oulu a few weeks back,” Mielus was saying. “The royal cupbearer choked to death, right there in the midst of all of us. The children were quite distraught, as you might imagine. And would you know, the tietäjä could not find an obstruction in the lad’s throat? Very curious.

“Of course, I had to investigate. And in investigating, I found this helpful fellow. He gave us a great many names once put to the question–he seemed to know your operations well.”

“He lied. Do you think me fool enough to put so much stock in one single agent?” Elzbieta’s words were bold, but her tone was hollow and unconvincing. This was a blow indeed, one that she could not see how to overcome.

Mielus laughed, but Turo, who had been fuming, suddenly took a threatening step forward. “A dog, am I? And what sort of unnatural creature are you?”

“A faithless fratricidal dog, I said,” she said, giving him a hard stare. Turo took another step forward, attempting to loom over her as his father had oft done to him. It was the best chance that Elzbieta would have.

Secreting the blade up her sleeve had been easy, as these things go. The challenge had been devising a method so she might retrieve it quickly, before anybody could react. She had practiced that for days, ever since news of Marja’s loss had come to them. Now she shook her right wrist just so, and the blade fell into her palm. She stabbed without looking, as quickly as she could, expecting it to slide into Turo’s soft underbelly. It would be a long and painful death, which was just how she wanted it.

She would not survive the parlay, of course. But she had known that all along. Jesu, wherever I am to go, may my beloved be there also. It is the only mercy I require.

Only her blade did not hit soft flesh, but cartilage and bone, and then it was wrenched from her hand. Turo had shifted in some animal instinct of self-preservation. For a mad second, she could not discern what had gone wrong. Then Turo raised his left hand, with her blade, dripping with blood, extending obscenely from his palm.

There was a second, but just a second, when all looked upon this sight with the same stunned horror. Then everything happened at once. The prince howled in pain and outrage, while the two spearmen who had escorted her in now grabbed her arms to hold her. Mielus and Ruslan were both calling out commands, but in the commotion neither could be understood.

As the dukes attempted to restore order, only Elzbieta could see Turo wrest the crossbow away from its owner and raise it with his good hand to point directly at her head. This final action silenced the nobles at last. Only Mielus had the temerity to speak then, and only tentatively. “Your majesty, perhaps we might discu–”

She would never learn what he meant to say. There was a twang from the string, and she knew no more.
 
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I'm glad this came out here rather than later. Better to remember the truth early than late.

@TheExecuter said a lot of what I was going to say on this. Better to learn about Turo’s marriage now than later, but I also think there’s a lesson to be learned about his mother. Why did she leave them behind? I suppose it was the way divorce works in the game. The dad keeps the kids.

I don't think it's a exaggeration to say that Thorfinn's arc depends on whether he can understand why his mother left and why his mother left him behind.

Even if he did send for her, I doubt she'd come back willingly.

Wild horses could not drag her back, I imagine.

And it would be easier for Mielus to blackmail Thorfinn if Frithjof is close by.
For sure. It can serve as a blade to Thorfinn's neck, if need be.

Thorfinn seems to be the kind of character that could end the conflict, in more ways than one

Interesting thought.
 
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“Your graces, I ask you to consider: what is this traitor worth to you? He has no lands, no incomes, no armies. He is a faithless dog, and what he did to Ulavi he would just as easily do to any man of you.”
They overestimate the leverage they have over him, Turo is not someone who willingly listens to anyone else - as soon as he would be on the throne, he would execute a few of his backers to demonstrate that he is in charge.
 
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Turo was purple with rage, but Mielus only laughed. “You’re bluffing.”

She cocked her head. “If you think so, you’re welcome to find out.”

Indeed, the essence of bluffing...

Either call or accede. Talking about it does nothing.

“A faithless fratricidal dog, I said,” she said, giving him a hard stare. Turo took another step forward, attempting to loom over her as his father had oft done to him. It was the best chance that Elzbieta would have.

Well done.

As the dukes attempted to restore order, only Elzbieta could see Turo wrest the crossbow away from its owner and raise it with his good hand to point directly at her head. This final action silenced the nobles at last. Only Mielus had the temerity to speak then, and only tentatively. “Your majesty, perhaps we might discu–”

She would never learn what he meant to say. There was a twang from the string, and she knew no more.

Success...even a partial success.

Mielus has now just seen exactly how 'far' his power over his king goes.

This is going to end in blood and death...and he will be powerless to stop it.
 
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A great final moment for Elzbieta! But who holds power in Ulvila now? The city needs some authority while under siege.

Elzbieta has given Turo's supporters something to think about. They support him out of ambition, not loyalty.
 
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Why do men talk of the glory of war? All I can imagine is suffering and hardship.
I 1000% agree. That said, stories about battle are exciting to read.

There was a twang from the string, and she knew no more
NOOOOO!!! I can only hope that this death will light up Marja’s heart with the flames of vengeance and she will smite Turo. I’m worried, though. Victory doesn’t always go to the most righteous even though it should be so.
 
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Umeå, Suomi
August - late September, 1192​

The holdfast of Umeå was much as it had been when Ingemar ruled it, and more’s the pity. The Norse had built a trelleborg here when they first arrived, a circular fortification of earth and timber with longhouses inside. Marja and Azur had oft discussed replacing it with a motte-and-bailey castle, in the fashion of the one at Ulvila; but the coin had never quite been there. Next year, she had said so many times. Now it was next year, and these ancient structures were all that protected her army from Turo.

Her brother might have sailed here and defeated her once and for all. For days, she had lain awake waiting for the gate to open and a rider to announce that her brother’s forces had just landed. She had been relieved when news came that he had made for Ulvila, although losing the city would be its own kind of blow. With the city, Turo would have the powerful symbolism of ruling from her father’s seat, and to many that might make him seem a king in truth. He would also have the royal treasury to spend, a powerful asset all its own.

But there was an even bigger blow to come: reports had arrived, from both the rebels and her own people, that Turo had killed her cousin Elzbieta during a parlay. The wretch apparently claimed that she had attempted to kill him first, which few among her own people believed to be true. Her loss was grave, both for the royalist cause and for Marja herself. She had not realized how much she had relied on the old woman until she was gone for good.

Still, it should give her the winter to plan her next move, provided that her emissaries were dispatched before the sea froze. She still fumed over Harald’s betrayal, but was that not a strategic error on Turo’s part? Many pagan clans would be alarmed at even the hint of a Christian Virtanen on the throne. The Vepsi, Mordvin, and Moscha peoples held to their own gods, which were not so different from Suomi; and in the final analysis the throne of Suomi shielded them from Christian holy wars. And of course there was one pagan princess in far Zaporizhia who had reason to despise Turo most of all.

The war was far from over, Marja knew that. She just needed time. Blessed Kuutar, give me the winter. Give me the winter at least.

There had been another blessing. Emma and Ulli had made it to Västerbotten alive and well. When she had seen them at the gates, she had raced forward to greet them. She spun her boy around, until they were both laughing, and then she held Emma in a firm embrace with tears in her eyes. It was not until Azur cleared his throat that she recalled that anybody else was there.

Still, she worried about them more than even her throne. She had thought to send Emma to Zaporizhia to treat with Irene, since Emma had been particularly protective of the Greek woman. And if it meant that her love was a thousand leagues away when the worst happened, that too would be a load off her mind. Emma had seen through her ruse, however. “Please do not ask me to be away from you, Marja,” she had said, warmly but firmly. “This is my place, nowhere else.”

Marja could still remember the words that Emma had said to her father, more than a decade before. Always and forever. She prayed that they would not become an epitaph.

The uneasy calm of the trelleborg was shattered one morning when Aapo appeared before her to announce that the scoundrel Harald Sigurdrsson had arrived. The peasant levies had been released for the winter, so there were only four hundred of Azur’s men at arms to stand watch on the walls, plus a few dozen of her own.

Her frantic calculations were interrupted when Aapo added that Harald had only brought a dozen men with him. Azur looked confused. “A dozen? Can that be true?”

Marja understood, however. “The devil thinks that he can make another bargain with me.” And why not? She had been fool enough to buy his lies all this time.

“I could send the wretch off with a few arrows,” Aapo said hopefully. He looked as if he might enjoy the recreation.

Azur demurred, however. “We should hear what he has to say. He may be a faithless dog, but he also speaks on behalf of the Swedish crown.”

Marja pondered for a second, and then nodded. “He may come in, alone and unarmed, with my honor as his surety. Remind him that my honor, at least, is still intact.” She might, gods willing, get him to say more than he meant to.

She doubted her decision as soon as he strode into the longhouse, still wearing the same ironic smile that he always had with her. She wanted nothing so much as to run him through. “You have a lot of gall to show up here and expect a hearing,” she said coldly.

His smile did not waver. “I’ve always had gall. You used to like that about me.”

She recalled the sight of his blue eyes, alive with righteous fury as he cut down her subjects left and right. “I’m not going to banter with you. You are here to make a demand, let’s hear it.”

He blinked, before continuing. “Not a demand, Marja–”

“Your majesty.” This was Aapo, who had taken a position just behind Harald. He had one hand on his seaxe in case the wretch tried anything.

“Not a demand, your majesty. An offer. Security in an uncertain world.”

Now she wanted to run him through just on general principles. “Louhi’s frigid tits, man, I do not have the patience. Tell me what you mean or Aapo will pitch you from the timbers.”

Harald was pursing his lips in frustration, which was only more annoying. How did you expect this was going to go?

“His majesty will permit you to bend the knee to him, and be confirmed in your rights as duke and duchess of Västerbotten.”

Azur sucked in a breath, and there was a hint of relief in his features. Marja did not trust the offer, however. “In exchange for?”

“You would of course need to be baptized. Azur will further need to make a pilgrimage to the cathedral at Nidaros to repent his blasphemy.”

Her husband looked like he meant to start walking right now. But of course this meant nothing to him, he had been Christian before. However, she was far less enthusiastic about renouncing the gods for this offer of security. There was something that Harald wasn’t saying. “And in the future, you intend to use me against my brother, as you used my brother against me? On and on it will go, until we’ve ground Suomi between us like opposing millstones?”

The facade of diplomacy evaporated on Harald’s face. “I am doing you a favor, Marja. I didn’t have to come here.”

“A favor. A favor.” Even saying the word made her want to throw up. “Was it a favor when you cut off Giedrius’ brainpan? Was that a favor too?”

Harald’s face heated up. “You know, you are acting awfully high and mighty for a woman who sits on stolen land. You came here fifteen years ago and told a lot of sweet lies and then you had a good man killed, so don’t you get outraged with me.”

Marja stood up, her fists trembling with rage. “I was your friend. You only have your seat because of me, because I did you a favor as your friend. If I had known what a wretch you were, I wouldn’t have lifted a finger.”

“A friend? How big a fool are you?” Harald’s laughter was contemptuous. “I love my God and I serve my king and anybody else is a distant third. I played you and your brother against each other for years, I was never your friend.”

For years. Marja stilled, her mind racing. Then it hit her. “You killed Ulavi. You and Turo did that together.”

The astonishment on Harald’s face was all she needed to see. “I don’t… I don’t know what you mean, Marja.”

“Oh, come now,” she said, her voice now soft. Her rage was so powerful that she was beyond theatrics. “You were there, the night he died. You came and we had dinner and you told me jokes and then… you poisoned my brother.”

This is ridiculous,” he said in a quavering voice.

"Then you warned me, that was the real crown jewel of this plan. You warned me and convinced me that you were worried for me and worried about him, and more’s the pity, I believed you.”

Harald went as if to flee, but Aapo’s grip on his arm was like iron. When he saw that he could not leave, only then did he choose defiance. “How many men did your father kill? Your cousin? You yourself? You were there on the council while they plotted murder, don’t claim to be surprised now. There’s no honor between kingdoms, no friendship. The only law is necessity. You always deceived yourself about that, but I never have.”

All was silence in the longhouse, while sparks flew out of the braziers and the light streamed weakly in from the ceiling. Marja stood there and examined the man that she had once considered a friend.

“You’ve convinced me,” she said at last.

Harald blinked, completely unsure of himself now. “I… I have?”

“You have.” She looked to her guard. “Aapo, cut his throat.”

*****​

The Christians abhorred the practice of cremation, Marja was reliably informed. So therefore she had the corpse of Harald Sigurdrsson burned on a pyre. It was a small thing, compared to what he had done, but it gave her some solace nonetheless. She stood and watched the corpse burn for hours, until the fire was just a guttering yellow flame dancing in the empty sockets of Harald’s skull. By then it was just her and Emma in the moonlight, with Aapo keeping a careful eye so that the flame did not get out of control.

“Have a fisherman take the bones out with him on the morning tide,” she told Aapo after. “I don’t want him found.” He had taken her brother from her, so she would take his ancestors from him. It was not justice, but it was something.

When she arrived back in the longhouse, she found Azur standing there, giving her a dark and disapproving look. “That was a grievous error. We are hardly in a position to be insulting anybody, much less the kingdom of Sweden.”

“The Swedish king is already at war with us, or have you forgotten?” Her voice was harsh, more than she meant it to be. “What more do we have to be afraid of?”

“He was here to offer us peace, Marja. Time to rebuild, for us to gather our strength and take the crown once more.”

Marja frowned. Azur had been among the Suomi for years now, but he did not understand them. She tried to explain patiently, but patience was in short supply these days. “I could not hold the crown under his terms. I would have to turn my back on our traditions, on our culture, and take the throne with foreign steel.” There was something in her husband’s disapproving stare that made her want to rage at him. “Perkele, Azur, I can’t turn my back on my gods.”

“The way I turned my back on mine, when you demanded it of me?” Azur’s voice was thick with contempt, both for her and for himself. He stalked away then, out of the longhouse and into the cold night.

*****​

Marja and Azur apologized to each other the following day, and for the next few weeks things were a form of normal in Umeå. Peasants were taking in the last harvest, setting stores aside for the long cold winter. People at court began to argue about when the sea would freeze and close them off from the outside world. As far as she was concerned, it could not happen a day too soon.

It was usually a happy occurrence that the port at Umeå was still open this late in September. This far north, it was not unheard of to see frosts in August or May, so one did not take the summer for granted at any time. This year, Marja did not think that she could sleep right until the ice covered the Baltic and the threat of Turo receded at last. She had a recurring nightmare where she woke up and found her brother’s army massed at the gates.

There was something like peace right now, however. She and Emma were lingering by the practice yards, where her guards had gathered to help train Ulli on shield and spear. She thought he looked very cute with his miniature spear, although it would only bruise his boy’s pride to tell him as much. Instead she cheered and clapped and shouted encouraging words.

Azur also liked to watch his son train, but this morning he had brusquely explained that he had business with some merchants from the port. She did not pry too much into it. His feelings were still raw after Harald’s visit weeks before, and so it was no surprise that he was finding reasons to avoid her. She had done much the same.

Ulli landed a palpable hit on Aapo, causing the man to stumble backwards. She beamed, wondering for a moment if ever a boy had shown such promise as a warrior. Every mother must feel like that, she reminded herself. The thought had her thinking about her own mother. Was she grieving in Tuonela, to see her children so at odds? How would Marja herself feel, if two of her children were at war with each other the way that she and Turo were? May I never see that day.

“His grace wants you, majesty. He needs your… counsel on a dispute,” a page announced, interrupting her thought process. She wanted to laugh at the look of dread on his face. Don’t worry, boy, I can stand to be in the same room as him for a minute or two.

There was something queer in the longhouse when she entered, however. There were two of her husband’s guards just inside the door as she entered, as if her husband were desperate to impress these visitors. There at the dais, she could see Azur, wringing his hands and standing in awkward silence with the merchant. There was a youth besides them, perhaps the merchant’s son? She could not make out his features in the gloom, but he was tall, the tallest man she had ever seen besides her father. Why were they all so quiet, so tense? What matter could this be?

And then the young man stepped forward, and she could see his face in the light. She had never seen him before, but the Virtanen look was unmistakable. Thorfinn.

“Marja,” Azur called out at last, “Marja, I’m sorry. You left me no choice.”

Marja didn’t have time to rage against him now. She spun around to find the two guards standing behind her. They had their weapons sheathed, apparently expecting that she could be cowed without violence. They expected wrong.

All nobles carried a knife on their person for dining and so forth. It was no true weapon, but in this moment it would serve. Marja darted away from one guard and slashed at the other’s face. She had aimed for his eyes but struck him on the cheek, cutting flesh until bone was exposed. As he screamed and grabbed at his wound, she was already running out the door.

The other guard was full on her heels as she raced out the door. It was just a hundred paces to where her guards were gathered, but she was a woman in her middling years and he a tall, lean twenty. He grabbed her from behind, lifting her bodily off the ground like a squalling child. By then, they had attracted the attention of the Virtanen guards, and her own men began to race over. Aapo was the first to arrive, and he trained his sword on the Swedish guard. “Lad, I will spill your blood right now.”

The guard dropped Marja unceremoniously and raised his hands in submission, leaving her to scramble to her feet. She could see Azur and the prince emerging from the longhouse, with perhaps a dozen men unfamiliar to her. They must be her brother’s soldiers, she considered.

The page who had summoned her was now racing to the other longhouses, presumably to rally his own men. The sight concerned her greatly. Her husband had six men for every one of hers. In a straight fight, she did not like her chances.

“My liege, you must leave this place,” Aapo said quickly. He must have reached the same conclusion that she had.

“Not you?”

“The east gate is still unpopulated. There should be horses in the stable. I wouldn’t trust the port, your brother may have men there also.”

Marja nodded, thinking quickly. “South. Find a port, go to Zaporizhia.” And pray that Irene feels obliged to take her in, she did not say.

“Aye,” Aapo said. “We’ll buy you time. You and the prince.”

She gave a hasty look back, and saw that Emma had already scooped up Ulli. Finally, Marja nodded. “I’m sorry I broke your nose,” she said quickly.

Aapo shook his head. “No, you aren’t.” He raised his sword in a quick salute, and turned to fight and die.
 
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Marja is quite the diplomat and schemer! She always knows just the right words to say. Such habits could get her in trouble though. Does she truly understand the consequences of supporting Azur's claim?

Plucking this comment from a few months ago for no particular reason. :p

They overestimate the leverage they have over him, Turo is not someone who willingly listens to anyone else - as soon as he would be on the throne, he would execute a few of his backers to demonstrate that he is in charge.

For sure. Turo is too willful to be controlled. Thorfinn may be also. Of course, if Turo has a son with Mielus' daughter, well... that babe would be the perfect puppet.

Success...even a partial success.

Mielus has now just seen exactly how 'far' his power over his king goes.

This is going to end in blood and death...and he will be powerless to stop it.

Too true.

A great final moment for Elzbieta! But who holds power in Ulvila now? The city needs some authority while under siege.

The castellan presumably takes over the siege now that she's gone.

Mielus has played with fire, and many will burn

He's saddled the bear but that doesn't mean that he can ride it.

NOOOOO!!! I can only hope that this death will light up Marja’s heart with the flames of vengeance and she will smite Turo. I’m worried, though. Victory doesn’t always go to the most righteous even though it should be so.

Marja's heart is certainly alight with the flames of vengeance, that much is true.
 
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The facade of diplomacy evaporated on Harald’s face. “I am doing you a favor, Marja. I didn’t have to come here.”

A lie...and an easily seen through one. Come on Harald, you need to try better than than that.

For years. Marja stilled, her mind racing. Then it hit her. “You killed Ulavi. You and Turo did that together.”

The astonishment on Harald’s face was all she needed to see. “I don’t… I don’t know what you mean, Marja.”

Oops...another mistake by Harald...

At this point I was reasonably sure he was a dead man.

There’s no honor between kingdoms, no friendship. The only law is necessity. You always deceived yourself about that, but I never have.”

Really Harald? Did you not just trust in Maria's honor to have this conversation?

Now you tell the woman who has you in her power that honor doesn't matter?

My God Harald is dumb.

“You’ve convinced me,” she said at last.

Harald blinked, completely unsure of himself now. “I… I have?”

“You have.” She looked to her guard. “Aapo, cut his throat.

Yup.

What did he expect?

She gave a hasty look back, and saw that Emma had already scooped up Ulli. Finally, Marja nodded. “I’m sorry I broke your nose,” she said quickly.

Aapo shook his head. “No, you aren’t.” He raised his sword in a quick salute, and turned to fight and die.

The troubles of a political marriage for power...

Looks like the Suomi are doomed to become christianized by force. Will the sword of Virtanen fade into history, or will it be wielded somewhere else?
 
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And of course there was one pagan princess in far Zaporizhia who had reason to despise Turo most of all.
And pray that Irene feels obliged to take her in, she did not say.
I'm sure that Irene would love to take Marja in and protect her from Turo, if she were to return to Suomi I'd wager she'd demand to kill Turo herself.

Harald blinked, completely unsure of himself now. “I… I have?”

“You have.” She looked to her guard. “Aapo, cut his throat.”
Harald not realising that he had been played, after admitting to years of playing Marja and Turo against each other.
 
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Oops! I'd meant to respond to the previous scene and now I'm behind again.

Elsbieta made a couple power plays there, and knew those were her best shots. And either might have succeeded but things don't always work out, even for experts in their field

She's given the empire her very best, and they should be proud of her. Still holding out hopes that someone will gut Turo before he gets his way. Maybe even his son.

I'm worried about Marja and Emma. Maybe this just-posted scene will tell...

Rensslaer
 
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That was great!

The last part of this chapter was tense! Your portrayal of the disharmony between Azur and Maria meant I was suspicious as soon as I read this:
“His grace wants you, majesty. He needs your… counsel on a dispute,” a page announced, interrupting her thought process. She wanted to laugh at the look of dread on his face. Don’t worry, boy, I can stand to be in the same room as him for a minute or two.
But Marja was oblivious, which naturally made me more uneasy.

There at the dais, she could see Azur, wringing his hands and standing in awkward silence with the merchant. There was a youth besides them, perhaps the merchant’s son? She could not make out his features in the gloom, but he was tall, the tallest man she had ever seen besides her father. Why were they all so quiet, so tense? What matter could this be?

And then the young man stepped forward, and she could see his face in the light. She had never seen him before, but the Virtanen look was unmistakable. Thorfinn.
I wonder what this scene looked like from Thorfinn’s perspective? What did he hope would happen?

And won’t he be shocked if Irene protects Marja?!

The other guard was full on her heels as she raced out the door. It was just a hundred paces to where her guards were gathered, but she was a woman in her middling years and he a tall, lean twenty. He grabbed her from behind, lifting her bodily off the ground like a squalling child. By then, they had attracted the attention of the Virtanen guards, and her own men began to race over. Aapo was the first to arrive, and he trained his sword on the Swedish guard. “Lad, I will spill your blood right now.”
I thought they were going to cut her down. I’m glad she survived, but I wasn’t expecting it.
 
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The wretch apparently claimed that she had attempted to kill him first, which few among her own people believed to be true.
An interesting little line here. It reminds us that the characters don't know everything that we know. If Marja wins in the end, Elzbieta's last ploy won't be remembered or recorded.
There’s no honor between kingdoms, no friendship. The only law is necessity.
Such cynicism breeds chaos and violence. And what is the difference between need and want?
“The way I turned my back on mine, when you demanded it of me?” Azur’s voice was thick with contempt, both for her and for himself.
Azur's point is correct here. His resentment over his conversion has simmered all these years, but because he's a foreigner, and because Marja doesn't love or care for him like with Emma, his concerns have gone unheard. Now they've boiled over with Azur's betrayal.

Perhaps if Marja and Azur's relationship was built on sturdier foundations, this wouldn't have happened. I'm sure Azur doesn't want to betray Marja, but his marriage with her is political by nature. When Marja's political power is threatened, it is easier to abandon ship.
He raised his sword in a quick salute, and turned to fight and die.
Another ally bites the dust. o7 :(
 
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Story very well set, good characterisation, and admirable effort on the details, which deserve proper re-reading for further discussion. Should have commented long ago when first started to read, but there it is.

Kudos.
 
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As with @Flockingbird I wonder how that looked from Thorfinn's perspective.

Harald sealed his own fate by playing both sides and getting caught. I'm glad Marja remains innocent enough not to see some of this coming. It fits her.

But I wonder if she's changed now, after this trauma.

Looking forward to seeing how this proceeds!

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I was just checking the writing stats and I'm just over 140k for Sword of Virtanen as a whole. I'm at 28.7k words for part 4 specifically, and it feels as if I'm just about one third of the way through the story. I would guess that it works out to be longer than Marja's story, probably 100k by itself. Which feels crazy to say, because Marja's story was the longest narrative that I'd written up to that point. It also will take longer in time than any of the previous stories; currently I have it going from 1226 to the early 1260s.

Writing has been a little slow the past couple of weeks; I'm taking an Octavia Butler class as an elective, and it's challenging to switch from that to writing. (It's a lot easier to do that with math, at least for me.) Still 'a little slow' means that I'm back to my self-imposed goal of writing the first draft of a chapter every week, just to keep up with the posting schedule. So there's no sign that the pace of updates is going to change dramatically.

At this point I was reasonably sure he was a dead man.

Harald not realising that he had been played, after admitting to years of playing Marja and Turo against each other.

My feeling is that Harald had gotten so used to talking his way past things that he figured he could pretty much talk anybody into anything. (A quality that Marja has a little bit of herself.) Which ultimately killed him.

She's given the empire her very best, and they should be proud of her. Still holding out hopes that someone will gut Turo before he gets his way. Maybe even his son.

She served her kingdom to the last, that's for sure. A good soldier just like her father was, in her own way.

I’m struck by how alone Marja is now. I wonder if Irene has the power needed to provide an opportunity. Is any of this based on in game happenings?

Ask me that again when I've posted the epilogue. I don't want to say anything about gameplay until then, for reasons that will become obvious.

That was great!

The last part of this chapter was tense! Your portrayal of the disharmony between Azur and Maria meant I was suspicious as soon as I read this:

But Marja was oblivious, which naturally made me more uneasy.

Thanks!

Harald bite more that he could chew and his bones sleep with the fishes.

After Arzu´s betrayal, there won't be nice-miss-Marja.

Aapo, I salute you 07 . And no, she doesn't... better a broken nose than a pyre.

If I ever go back and do a second draft, I'm going to work Aapo into the earlier part of the narrative. He really blossomed in my mind in the last three chapters.

An interesting little line here. It reminds us that the characters don't know everything that we know. If Marja wins in the end, Elzbieta's last ploy won't be remembered or recorded.

Such cynicism breeds chaos and violence. And what is the difference between need and want?


Azur's point is correct here. His resentment over his conversion has simmered all these years, but because he's a foreigner, and because Marja doesn't love or care for him like with Emma, his concerns have gone unheard. Now they've boiled over with Azur's betrayal.

Perhaps if Marja and Azur's relationship was built on sturdier foundations, this wouldn't have happened. I'm sure Azur doesn't want to betray Marja, but his marriage with her is political by nature. When Marja's political power is threatened, it is easier to abandon ship.

I think Azur was going to stand by Marja's side until she had Harald killed, and he began to fear that he was going down with the ship. We know that he's a guy who will think of his own skin first.

And yes, maaaaaaaybe he wouldn't have if they were closer.

Story very well set, good characterisation, and admirable effort on the details, which deserve proper re-reading for further discussion. Should have commented long ago when first started to read, but there it is.

Kudos.

Thanks, @filcat. I'm glad that you're enjoying it.

As with @Flockingbird I wonder how that looked from Thorfinn's perspective.

Harald sealed his own fate by playing both sides and getting caught. I'm glad Marja remains innocent enough not to see some of this coming. It fits her.

I was just remembering that Marja was supposed to be the less innocent protagonist. And she is, in some ways, but yes. I like that part of her blind spot here was just, I thought we were friends.
 
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I'm taking an Octavia Butler class as an elective
This makes me happy. I bought her books as they came out, and at the time no one I knew was reading them. It’s been great seeing she got the recognition her work deserves.

If I ever go back and do a second draft, I'm going to work Aapo into the earlier part of the narrative. He really blossomed in my mind in the last three chapters.
Your last entries for him caught my interest; I went back a bit to refresh my memory and would enjoy reading more about him.

I like that part of her blind spot here was just, I thought we were friends.
Didn’t she promise to support his claim, and hasn’t she failed to keep her promise to him? (i can go back and reread later if no one feels like answering this question. :) )
 
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