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One Winged Angel
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AAR info:

Country is Czechoslovakia, and the scenario is vanilla, no-mods 1.05 1936. The goal is to survive to the end of the game.

Writing wise, I'll be jumping between a lot of different viewpoints. No exploits will be used, no cheats, but- full disclosure- I did have to reload once, to make sure those pesky Austrians joined Germany.

On with the show and the first post. Cue the lights.
 
March 14, 1936- Prague

It started, as all true stories should start, with a dream.

An eagle, flying in the air above a thickly wooded forest; down below, small furry animals skitter away or cower in terror. But running from the threat doesn't help- it just annoys the proud eagle, who is hungry. And at last, the eagle spies a maimed rabbit trying to limp through a clearing, hoping to be done before the eagle can see it. The forlorn hope is dashed when the black eagle folds its wings and plummets down, down... and the rabbit is no more.

But still the eagle is unsatisfied, circling lazily in a thermal above the forest. No mere hare could fill it. It needs more, and better fare. Then it catches a glimpse of a bigger meal; a turtle, waddling along the ground without a care in the world, secure in its shell. Again the eagle folds its wings and swoops down, down; But this time, the turtle sees it coming and retreats inside its hard shell. Annoyed, the eagle raps at the shell with its beak; nothing happens. The eagle picks up the turtle in its talons, gains a few meters of altitude, and drops it; the shell thuds off some rocks without apparent damage. The turtle peeks its head out of the shell to see the commotion, and when it spies the eagle coming down for another pass, faints of fright, its head exposed to all the world... and the turtle is no more.

Edward Benes woke in his room with a start, dripping with sweat. It was the dream again, the dream he'd had for months. Always the proud dark eagle terrorized the forest, and always the rabbit and turtle died at it's talons. He had no idea what it could mean- an eminent Czech psychoanalyst prattled on ceaselessly about sex, but somehow Edward felt in his bones that this was something more than a passing puerile fantasy about his mother. He knew it was important. But, not knowing what it possibly could mean, the Czech leader passed back into a fitful sleep.


March 15, 1936- Prague

Bedlam erupted in the council chamber.

"The people won't stand for it! The mood in the cities and on the farms is for peace, for rebuilding after we fought so hard and long. To take good farmers, good factory workers and turn them into rifle-carrying mind numbed drones... no offense, Marshal Machnik... is almost a blasphemy to them."

Having said his peace, the security minister of the Czechoslovakians, Ivan Derer, sat down and glared balefully out at the rest of the ministers. Edward sat, discontented, but did not interrupt.

"I cannot protect my country with the piddling forces we have now." The dependable, stolid Machnik- Chief of Staff for all of the 'piddling forces' of the country- stood and began. "If the Germans come after us, and they will, Ivan, they will, we will be overrun in a month's time. We need at least double the infantry on the ground in the Sudeten Line. The numbers don't lie."

"This is ridiculous! Edward, how can you stand for this?" Derer was now flushed deeply, upset. "We still haven't recovered from the crash, and this... this warmonger wants to double the size of the army in a year? The people won't stand for it."

"No. They won't." Edward finally spoke up. Ignoring Machnik's martyred look towards him, he went on. "This government would be thrown out by the socialists inside a month if we tried to increase the army by that much. Would you care to see the budget coming out of their reign, Machnik? I promise you it'd be even less than what you make do with now."

Machnik worked on that, visibly, a vein beginning to bulge in his forehead. Finally, he said, "If you give me nothing, Edward... please allow me to resign, so that I don't fail you and the nation." He sprang to attention, relieved that his own personal impasse had been conquered.

"Oh, don't be a stiff-necked old fool."

Stunned, the Marshal sat down suddenly, caught unprepared by Benes' outburst.

Edward sat silently for a moment, working on plans and ideas. At once, unwanted, he began remembering the dream of the eagle and the hare and the turtle; as he shook his head to clear the cobwebs he felt the weight of consequences and history bearing down on his shoulders. At last; "Ivan... what about a building program? What if we tried to strengthen the Sudeten Line, even extend to completely encircle the nation? We'd make the gloomy marshal here happy for some new toys, and also provide employment for a lot of workers still hurting from the panic..."

Edward trailed off, aware that another member was already shaking his head sadly. Josef Kalfus rearranged his notes for a minute, studied them. "We don't have the industrial capacity, I'm afraid. We're struggling as it is to keep the people happy and fed, and the army in ammunition and food; if we diverted the resources you'd need to build minefields and pillboxes..." He shook his head, sadly. "Now, just strengthening the Sudeten Line... we can do that." Josef bit his lip. "Barely."

Gauging reaction, Edward looked around. Several looked unhappy- Machnik, and Derer notably- butn one looked outright mutinous.

"Let's do that. I'll announce it to the people."
 
Great start, rocky!

You better follow this one, kids, he is good!
 
ooh i smell long and complicated ad well told story AND plot
 
I've Always wanted a Czech AAR, good luck with the Germans, those Bulgarians and Romanians can't be trusted either so sit tight, join an alliance and pour out infanty on the Sudeten Line! Your a pretty good writer, one of these days I need to write an AAR about the wacky adventures of the Saudis
 
Bleed em white, and join the allies.
 
Eesh.. you people frighten me, I'm used to the quiet, reticent people in the EU2 AAR forum...

Hamilcar- thanks, here's the twenty.

Mucky- I hope so.

Hotdog- I'll read it if you do. Those Saudis are one of the few countries that isn't pressed for resources- unlike the Czechs, who are effectively living off their stockpiles until the execution. No comment about what's to happen.

Prufrock- (And note to the audience, it's his fault you're reading this now) But... Offense wins championships! Wait, no, it gets thousands of men killed for very little point. Er.

Faeelin- *eye twitch* I'd love to. *twitch* REALLY. I WOULD. ARE YOU LISTENING, CHAMBERLA-

Sorry about that.

Update tomorrow afternoon.
 
Love the style. I'm bookmarking this one. Keep it coming!
 
good keep it up man
 
Sheesh, you people ARE vocal over here. Over in EU2, if I got two comments a page, I counted myself lucky..

No individual responses right now, or I'd be repeating myself too much. How many times can I reply to compliments differently?

No screenies, unless someone volunteers a hosting place, at which point... I'll try.

And the reason this wasn't posted yesterday I promised is... well... because I'm not a pathological liar.

Camera? Action.
 
March 12, 1938

And so it went. Diligently, formerly unemployed Czechs sowing mines and the concrete dragon's tooth obstacles, pouring pillboxes, hauling machine guns to the fore... and the already impressive Sudeten Line grew deeper and stronger. "As strong as Maginot" was the rallying cry of the foremen, despite that line's unapproachable superiority; but the Sudeten would make a solid second best.

For many though, it was not enough, as opposed Derer's adamant opposition. And so when elections came, the government was swept out of office by a triumphant coalition under the leadership of Emil Hacha and Jan Masaryk, who had promised the voters to 'strengthen defense funding'.

They were not pleased when they reviewed the budget and realized that they couldn't possibly fulfill their promise.

"There aren't enough *people*." Masaryk groaned, rubbing the bridge of his nose. "You want the keep expanding the Sudeten Line? You want to keep the power, the water on? Then we're not going to have the warm bodies to expand the army."

Machnik sat with quiet dignity to one side, not even deigning to comment.

"How many troops do we have? How many do we need?" Blunt as ever, Hacha interjected.

Machnik finally rose and strode over to a map. "We have some thirty well-equipped divisions manning the Sudeten Line from thirty kilometers west of Troppau along this broad arc, following our border, nearly to Vienna. In reserve, we have... very little, actually. A few motorized divisions here in the capitol. Two armored divisions equipped with the new R-38 tank over in Pilsen."

He reached for a glass of water and drank it. Taking advantage of the lull, Hacha ventured; "That sounds... more than sufficient to me."

Machnik slammed the glass down onto the table with a high crack. "The Germans have more than five times our number, and almost half of them are staring at us over the line."

Hacha seemed at a loss for words. "A hundred and fifty... But how, the Treaty..."

Machnik grimaced. "They repudiated Versailles years ago, sir." Then, obviously enjoying the chance to twit his commander, hazarded; "You do read newspapers, sir?"

"Of course!" But Hacha was discomifted. "What if we abandon the second phase of the planned Sudeten expansion, leave it where it is, and instead devote some of the resources to building up our army; would another ten divisions suit you, Marshal? And the rest can go to building an extension of the Sudeten line through Troppau to Bratislava north to south."

Masaryk sketched out the path on a map, then spluttered. "You're abandoning the Slovaks! They'll never stand for it!"

Hacha smiled for the first time in the meeting, a death's head grimace. "Who will invade them? Poland? Germany has no way to get TO Slovakia, let alone garrison it without exposing their flank to a punishing attack from our reserves. Besides... it's truly just to keep the people in work and happy."

An uncomfortable silence reigned over the table; this was entirely too much like the policies of Benes to be comfortable. The policies Hacha and Masaryk had derided as socialist meddling in the economy now turned out to vital to the defense of the Czechs.

Slowly, carefully, conversation turned to what the R&D was bringing. Here, Masaryk was more than happy to babble; speaking of the new R-38 tank, at least the match of Germany's latest model (The Panzer III, according to intelligence) and of the new infantry guns and artillery pieces seemed to resurrect the inner young soldier of Masaryk, gave him a new spring in his step as he declaimed on the relative merits of the new antipanzer rocker instead of a large caliber rifle... but despite it all, Machnik sat like some malevolent gargoyle in the corner, always seeming to silently say; "It is not enough."

Suddenly, the door burst open. Jan Cerny, the new security minister, burst in, plump in the face. He waved off offers of water and a seat, but nevertheless took several seconds to calm down. When he could speak, he told the group in a voice like a corpse;

"Anschluss."

For a few final, blessed, innocent seconds nobody understood. Then Masaryk mentally translated it and hissed. "Austria."

That was all anyone needed to know. In seconds the room was in uproar at the sudden addition of hundreds of kilometers to the German-Czech common front, and what to do about it; Only Machnik sat apart, calm and collected, secure in the fact that he'd get his rapid army mobilization after all.
 
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