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Stuyvesant: Hm...if this were Crusader Kings I'd say Heyward is 'stressed' right now. He does need to pull back, he's heading for obsessive fast.

jwolf: Preston's attitude hasn't really changed so much as it's a case of the old ...I think Arabic... saying: "Me against my brother, me and my brother against my uncle, me and my uncle against the stranger." He still thinks Tom's a jerk (and now a deranged jerk), but Tom's his jerk.

Dead William: Tom will be a historical leader once this phase of the campaign is done. In game Gen. Lafayette joined the southern army. Since I don't see the Marquis having a further effect in the story, I'll probably just change his name in the save game file. That also keeps things 'balanced' by not giving the Americans a free leader ... not that they need one.

Late in the story, if all goes as planned (hah!), John will be a historical leader as well.

Draco Rexus: The war in the north. We'll get back to that in a few updates. Machiavellian's old friend Colonel Leyton will be returning to us.

Storey: Well...I know where I want to head, but whether I have the skill to pull it off remains to be seen. It's not on paper so much as half-written posts and imagined visions. You're right though, Heyward's as desperate at Stewart...and it's hard to say who's the greater danger to him right now.
 
-= 90 =-

20 May, 1781
Greenville, East Florida


He shook his cup at the passing traders, listening to the hollow rattle and clink of three pennies within; his 'investment.' In the fourteen months since fleeing to the Florida swamps he'd learned that people who otherwise might be willing to help hated to be the first to give, so he always kept what was left of yesterday's take in his cup to encourage more donations. Theoretically he could still work, but with everyone who could afford to run long gone..no jobs to be had. Anyway, no one wanted to deal with a mute ... and if they ever figured out who he really was, they'd hang him.

Which, Jasen Exeter reflected bitterly, would at least end this nonsense.

Still, he wasn't quite ready to die yet so the former general, now hunted by two countries (or three if you counted the Cherokee,) begged for a penny here or there. Sometimes he could get a shilling from someone, or hire himself out as a cheap thug for this or that smuggler. Exeter learned that when you don't have a roof and there's a big question mark in front of your next meal, you have to do anything to survive. Anything.

"Rrrrrrrrrr?" He stabbed his cup like a weapon at a trader with little more money than he who shook his head and kept walking. They all did that now. The American war and pirates off the coast destroyed any trade southeast Florida might have held. Some even followed the rumors of a 'colonial' cavalry force charging south eagerly. At least then they could either try to go home or set up a shop in an American city: Savannah or Charleston perhaps.

Exeter could not forgive them their desperate straits though, not when it could mean a day without eating. He couldn't forgive the Americans who bested him, or the English who forgot about his leadership the minute he was checked. He had little memory of his family, and that overlaid with bitterness at having them stolen. He hated life, but couldn't bear to leave it, which in the end meant he hated himself too.

Damn them all.

A few blocks away the church bell - a shrine really - began ringing. Slowly the Union Jack slipped from its pole, to be replaced by a tattered, beaten and not entirely accurate version of the Stars and Stripes. The colonials are coming, whispered the handful of traders and laborers.

Jasen Exeter didn't know whether to be pleased or scared.

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Preston's Ride:
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Whoever put trading posts this far south in the middle of a bleeding swamp had a sick sense of humor, of this John Preston was sure. The temperature was in the nineties (mid thirties Celsius) EVERY day with the ever present stink of salt and decaying wood in the air. Of the four hundred men he rode south with a month ago, over thirty had taken ill after passing the aptly named Mosquito Island. Then there was the tainted river...half a regiment immobilized by the runs.

Hopefully Major Engels was having better luck with his 'special' orders from John to find this Stewart fellow and stick his head on a pike.

Preston paused outside of the next post on his list: Greenville. Like the others they'd raised the American flag ahead of his arrival. They were afraid of what he'd do, and though he wouldn't admit it the sense of power pleased him. True to his instructions (if not his will), he didn't abuse or kill anyone nor let any of his men do so. Those who wanted to go north could do so. Those who wanted to stay... well, that was their problem.

No force on Earth, no matter how idealistic, could make his men pay for what they wanted though. John didn't care: Tom may have forgotten who the true enemy was, but he hadn't!

"All hail the liberators," Preston muttered as they rode into what passed for the post square - one church, one administrator's building by the single rotting dock, and a small handful of homes and farms scratching out meagre livings. Total population, perhaps twenty.

"Alright Captain," he panted in the unbearable heat. "You know the drill. Round everyone up." Far easier to explain the American position once then five or ten times. "Send some men to look for traitors." Their collaquialism for 'gather everything of value so we can split it fairly.'Then he wanted to find a place to rest. Preston's stomach still hadn't recovered, and the bouts of pain followed by relief left him exhausted.

Five minutes later Captain Hutchins ran back. "Colonel, you're not going to believe this!"

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Preston followed him across the town, a walk that took all of two minutes and stared at the dirty, unshaven, sunburnt figure in torn clothing held limply between two soldiers. "What's this?"

"Don't you recognize him, sir?"

John leaned forward, until he could smell the man's rancid breath. His eyes widened. "Exeter?"

"Yes, sir!" Hutchins grinned. "A rare prize!"

"Indeed." Preston leaned forward. "Do you remember me, General? I remember you." He pointed at his scarred and pockmarked face, the result of cannister shot at point blank range. "I remember you quite well."

Exeter looked in the colonel's eye sullenly. He didn't remember Preston: He'd killed so many Americans...

Hutchins' grin broadened. "Bind him men, we'll take him with us."

"...No," John answered finally, drawing back. "No. Don't."

"Sir?"

"If we take him back there are rules we have to abide by. We have to feed him, treat him well and bring him back for trial. He'd probably lose that trial, but a good lawyer can still make a right mess." Not to mention a 'fair' trial could embarass quite a few people in South Carolina, like Edward Rutledge.

Exeter growled incoherently at his analysis.

"On the other hand, if we leave you here," he turned, "a beggar in a ruined trading outpost." John smiled coldly. "Scraping and bowing for a copper until the end of your miserable life? Yes, I think that redresses the men you butchered much better than a trial. Don't you?"

Jasen surged forward, breaking the soldiers' grip. Preston replied with a roundhouse that sent the sick and weakened general sprawling. He followed up by kicking the man's ribs.

"That's for my first command," he whispered softly.

Hutchins held up three pennies. "We found this on him, Colonel."

"Keep it. Call it partial compensation." He nodded to his men. "Leave him. After all, General Heyward wanted us to be merciful." He smiled cynically, then shook his head. "No...wait! There's a brook a quarter mile here. Throw him in." Preston leaned forward to stare in the gasping general's hate filled eyes. "He could use a bath."
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After crawling out of the brook Exeter spent the entire night staring into it. No money, no prospect of more, no real chance of food. Only God knew what might be edible in this swamp, and God abandoned him long ago. His life was over.

Once under the half moon he tried to drown himself, but couldn't override his instinct and surfaced gasping. Yet again a failure.

Dawn came, and still the former general, the terror of the Southern campaign sat wondering how everything could have gone so wrong. He heard a soft step behind him, but didn't turn.

If you've come to finish it, I would be grateful, he thought.

"No, General. It is not time to die. Not yet."

Exeter whirled and stared at a man dressed in black from neck to foot, yet strangely not sweating. He leaned on a cane for support and studied him intently. How did a stranger find him?

"I have come to make you an offer, General. My current servant has failed me, and I require your services. In exchange I will give you what you want more than anything."

"Rrrrrrrrrrrr?" Exeter laughed cynically, ending in a coughing gasp..

"No, General. I cannot restore your voice. I said I would give you what you want more than anything." The figure in black smiled coldly as realization dawned on Jasen's face..

"Yes. I will give you revenge."
 
Ooh! It's the return of the mysterious Nazi! And Aah! He's going to use Exeter (I knew he would return. Okay, I'll admit that wasn't much of a prediction)...

I almost felt sympathy for Exeter, begging in Florida and being abused by Preston. If only Preston had killed him... But that wouldn't make sense for the story, of course.

Heyward better watch out, it's the OTHER vicious and desperate bastard coming to hunt for him...
 
I can hear the ominous music building in the background. Me thinks I sense also the gathering of some quite dark storm clouds.

I agree with Judas:
Only Zähringen can save us now! ;)
 
Only Zähringen can save us now!

Oh god how much i miss that character! :D yes! save us he must!

A trapen eh? that doesn't sound good for Heyward.....perhaps a nice bleeding can cool his head what what? ;)

excellent story catknight, glad to see that you've resumed :cool: And i'm hating john preston a lot. He isn't really a gracious winner is he? I actually felt pity for Exeter!
 
CatKnight returns!! Huzzah!!!

I am pleased to see the resumed courtship between John and Cassie going well, if interupted. And Heyward's "lapse" is quite interesting. A shock to the system, I suppose. It will be fun to see how it manifests itself. But most curious is how you have set up the potential rehabilitation of Exeter, if one could call it that. Successful? We shall see.

Great series of posts and great to see you back fast and furious like. :)
 
I am actually quite sympathetic towards Exeter now. However, I grant that this sympathy will rapidly disappear if he joins the Nazis.

I think that you should use the old surgery for Heyward. He doesn't need it, but every one of your readers would be shocked. Shocked!!

And, as Judas said,
Only Zähringen can save us now!
 
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I think Arabic... saying: "Me against my brother, me and my brother against my uncle, me and my uncle against the stranger."

It's a gypsy saying. But arabs maybe use it to.

The story's going great!!!

Go Heyward
 
Machiavellian's old friend Colonel Leyton will be returning to us.

Yay! What's better is that my old favorite Jasen Exeter has also returned. I found the scenes with him quite gripping. While it is true he is a villain, I also like the fact that you have fleshed him out rather well. He has his ups and downs and his last near death and defeat seems to have taken a lot out of him.

I knew Exeter would return, like all great villains, a mysterious death will always lead to his eventual return.
 
Stuyvesant: Preston should have just killed him. No one would have known but Hutchins. Now...yes, Heyward can just about start his own fan club.

Judas Maccabeus: Zahringen? He's busy playing swashbuckler!

Draco Rexus: Hm, I like that. You can be the AAR's music conductor. :)

TreizeV: I think we can forgive Preston...he takes it personally when someone fires cannister at him. ;)

coz1: Thanks! Heyward's lapse is certainly shock related. Fortunately he doesn't have to make any major decisions for a little while - he just has to avoid Stewart. As for Exeter...I have plans for General Exeter...

J. Passepartout: I thought about it. It might still happen depending on how noticeable Heyward's lapses are. Hmm...

Dante Essex: You could well be right, I don't even remember where I heard it anymore. Fine, gypsy saying it is!

Machiavellian: Yes...Exeter's back. Lucky us... :D
 
-= 91 =-

1 July, 1781
Poplar Ridge, New York



Wesley Harding sat in Rafferty's Pub House, reflecting on the twists and turns of fate. It really wasn't so long ago that he'd been a prisoner in the fort nearby with then Sergeant Waymouth, Red and the rest of his squad, only to be rescued by John after he'd met some girl ... probably in this very room. They were all gone now: Red fell during the Cherokee campaign, Waymouth retired to Massachusetts due to his injury. John of course had gone mad, and his girl died in '77. Even Colonel Exeter was long gone.

And so was the beer... "Caulkins!"

Private Caulkins looked up from a very illegal but generally ignored dice game and paled, which only served to make his freckles, pimples and cysts stand out. The poor bastard had elected to go through puberty in mid-siege and no one wanted to send him home until his skin finished sorting itself out. Salem, Massachusetts was one of those quiet, almost provincial towns that tended to read far too much into unfortunate occurences like dead cows, sick children, or acne.

"Caulkins, run to the quartermaster and tell him we need another keg." For several months now drinking was about all there was to do: The handful of English holdouts refused to leave Fort Carleton, and General Arnold didn't see fit to go in after them.

"Which there ain't none, sir."

"Don't give me that!" Harding stood. Years of hardship and training had taken the edge off his mass, but he still weighed over two hundred pounds and had long since mastered the scowl any good leader required to be effective. "I saw two kegs come in this morning."

"One was stove in, sir." The road from Albany was particularly treacherous, having served as the front line for years. "'N the officers took t'other."

"Damn them." Harding sat again. It wasn't just the drink, though that certainly demoralized the troops ... food, clothing, powder and shot, all dwindled as the months passed. Shipments just couldn't keep up with demands. If the Brits held out in their little fort until the bitter New York winter struck, things could turn ugly fast. But General Arnold had to know that, right? He'd assault the tiny fort sooner or later....right?

A messenger Wesley didn't recognize ran in and saluted. "Sir. Major Whiteaker's compliments, and he requests your presence immediately."
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"Cornet Harding reporting as ordered." Wesley stood straight, staring at the back of the captain's tent.

Roger Whiteaker waved him to a chair. "At ease, Cornet."

Harding sat and studied the New York militia officer keenly. He'd heard of their stand in western Virginia that destroyed Lord Cornwallis' men. Ever since then it was the Brits on the defensive. When asked he'd jumped at the chance to serve with him. As the northern campaign progressed and companies suffered attrition due to illness or just because their contracts were up, General Arnold started merging units regardless of home state. Harding, for example, was from Rhode Island.

"What is the state of your company?"

"I...beg pardon, sir, but shouldn't you ask Captain Wilcox?" Harding looked down nervously.

"Captain Wilcox is unavailable," Whiteaker replied cooly. "I'm asking you."

"The company is ... fine, sir."

"No problems?"

"None!" Harding frowned as Whiteaker flushed.

"Son, you haven't been here long so let me explain this to you once. Loyalty is a wonderful thing, but when I ask you a question I expect a straight answer. I'll ask you one more time: What is the state of your company?"

"....They're a little tired, sir. A little frustrated...." Harding flailed about, trying to imagine what Whiteaker wanted to hear.

"Natural enough in a siege. So you would say the company's demoralized?"

"No! I mean...well, like I said the men are a bit frustrated. They're bored, they want action. I'm sure you know what I mean."

"I do." Whiteaker leaned back. "And Captain Wilcox, do you think him a good leader?"

"Prime! I mean..."

The major said nothing, just folded his hands and stared at the younger man intently.

"...I suppose he's frustrated also. He's not done much the past few weeks. But," Harding rushed ahead, "There isn't much to do. And I've hardly been better!"

"You're not a company commander," Whiteaker replied. "There is a malaise - an apathy - in your company, Cornet. I know you've seen battle, so I know you realize how dangerous that is."

"Yes sir....but, I truly believe they will be fine once the siege is done. We just need a little action."

"Really. Well, I dare say I can help you with that, Cornet. Do you remember...."
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"Wolf Hill." Colonel Leyton stabbed at the map. "That's where I would go."

Benedict Arnold nodded, as did the other colonel in the room. "General Wayne, do you concur?"

Anthony Wayne frowned at the map. He was, bluntly, fat but moved with surprising agility when he wanted and had fought numerous credible actions against the Shawnee Indians. Disgraced by the treaty he signed though, he'd been relegated to a subservient role. Congress' message to him had been clear and blunt: Stick your neck out, and we will chop it off. Ever since then he said very little and took no active part in any discussions. "It's not unreasonable," he allowed.

"Good. Then let us use Colonel Leyton's plan." Quebecois loyalists had rallied under a minor officer and invaded New York for the second time this war, working their way down the Hudson River to Albany. Leyton hoped to ambush them on the road south from a nearby hill, and so sweep down and destroy them. Arnold found it ironic that Wolf Hill had been the site of one of his defeats to Cornwallis, when it was the British who occupied the high ground. "I don't think we need the cavalry at this point, so General Wayne: You will take four regiments of cavalry and secure Wolf Hill. Then at a time of your choosing you will engage this Quebec force and force them to rout."

Wayne frowned. "And you, sir?"

"I think it is time to finish this."
 
* Amid the sounds of dark German and Russian symphonic music gaining volume in the background as dense dark clouds swirl about overhead. *

Great update. My questions were answered AND I got a job in the AAR! Sa-weet!

As for Exeter.... I really don't have any sympathy for him. He's gotten all that he has deserved and still owes some payback to the Americans. Mayhap is joining up with our Nazi will allow our heroes to cash in that payback, eh? :D
 
A nice additional update. I can see you are back to the regular updates, which is always nice. I just hope I will be able to keep up. Ironic that the action in the North will once more focus around Wolf Hill.. nice touch.
 
Draco Rexus: I'm not sure how I'll feel about Exeter at the end. This isn't going to go down as his most brilliant move....but as I wrote, when you're starving and have no prospects, you'll do anything.

Machiavellian: I'm trying for the regular updates if the boards will cooperate. As for Wolf Hill...the British AI seems to like sweeping into New York and through Catskill province. It's really gotta stop that.

Judas Maccabeus: Oh yes, Wilcox won't be bored for long!
 
-= 92 =-

14 July, 1781
Wolf Hill (near Albany,) New York



"I can't believe we're back on this God damn hill."

"Shut your damned mouth, Wilkins!" Cornet Wesley Harding bellowed, secretly agreeing with him. Time and battle hardened the former messenger who'd once tried to stop the war. He now swore when he whined. He lumbered up the hill that nearly claimed Waymouth's life one short year ago, cursing as the hidden but omnipresent wolves, the true masters of this land, howled.

As before, Wolf Hill was a steep incline dotted with dens, hence the name. Poplars, elms and oaks covered the slopes while rocks, broken ground and raised roots dotted the landscape making any reputable charge out of the question. Why General Arnold continued to insist on using cavalry here was beyond Harding's ken, though at least this time it might not matter as much. This time they would own the hill, would be fighting down towards the post road rather than up. The momentum would still be theirs.

The Rhode Island born merchant's son listened to the wolves and grimaced. If I die here, I think I will haunt this place for awhile and see how they like it!

Captain Wilcox walked by, pale and gaunt. He and Major Whiteaker disagreed almost every day and Wilcox determined to show the New Yorker what for. "Cornet, raise the banner. We will organize the company by squad."

"Yes sir." Wilcox's trumpeteer obediently blew the signal to come to arms. "Trouble?"

"I just want to be ready," the captain muttered.
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Captain...no, Colonel, wait...why be shy? General Villers in charge of the Quebecois Volunteers rode back and forth in front of his brigade. This wasn't a massed column and rank of regular infantry, barrels and bayonets piercing the morning air in perfect order. His people moved in a rolling mass down the Post Road towards White Plains in a leisurely advance. They chatted and exchanged witticisms as well as random slurs against the American mongrels who had tasked them for so long.

No, these weren't regulars but volunteers - the fathers and sons and servants of Tories and other loyalists who fled New York, Massachusetts and New Hampshire after 1777 when anti-British sentiment reached a fever pitch. Gentlemen for a good part, and what they lacked in perfect discipline was made up in ferocity and contempt. Very little hatred though: Would you truly hate the dog who bit you? Or would you thrash it and bring it to heel?

'General' Villers wasn't foolish enough to think he could conquer America alone. He might just force them to the table though. If New York caved, then her neighbors would as well and they could force a number of concessions. He smiled at the idea of forcing those stubborn slack-jaws in Philadelphia to bend to his will. Hm...why 'General' when Governor-General might be within his grasp? His grin broadened. "Sergeant Daniels!"

"Sir?" Sergeant Daniels was a survivor of Cornwallis' failed advance last year serving as army 'advisor.' He spoke little and smiled less, dark eyes everywhere with a mixture of piercing awareness and melancholy, like one who expected to see something and didn't really want to.

"That hill there. Do you know it?"

"Wolf Hill." Daniels didn't smile, but his mood lightened at the handful of victories he'd seen there.

"Oh, yes." A good place to be if Arnold ever got off his tail and chased them, but General Arnold's force outnumbered his by almost ten times - allowing any kind of confrontation would be criminally negligent. "Dispatch some scouts, make sure the hill's clear."

"Aye."
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Harding knelt behind a waist high rock, carefully loading his musket. Behind a tree Caulkins did the same, nervously fumbling with his cartridge. It fell. He cursed, only to be hushed by his mate ten yards away. Wilkins lay on his belly five yards behind Harding, sighting down his barrel. They weren't trained as infantry, let alone skirmishers, but it would have to do until reinforcements could arrive.

Private Wash, in the tree over Caulkins' head, held up both hands fingers spread. Ten. An entire squad of scouts. Not very good scouts, as they sauntered along and chatted. The rustle of leaves, clink of musket on ground, if Harding closed his eyes he could pinpoint their location by sound alone.

Harding attached his bayonet and held it up just enough for everyone to see. The ring bayonet fit around the barrel of the gun, allowing it to be fired unlike the older plug bayonets. It was a relatively new innovation to the US Army, having been introduced in mass numbers only two years ago. Of course, if they fired at all then that would alert the brigade unwittingly walking into an ambush.

Wilkins hadn't attached his bayonet. Harding tapped his blade softly and the messenger looked up at the metallic clink. He frowned. Wesley tapped again. Wilkins licked his lips and stared at his gun, either not understanding or pretending not to.

"NOW!" This was Private Wash, who could see the chatty scouts and knew they couldn't miss the American presence forever. He leapt down on one startled man dressed like he planned a formal hunt. Caulkins ran around his tree, howling like a banshee. Harding heaved himself up and joined them. The now familiar white hot flash from bowels to head as instinct took over, a second of hearing nothing but his own ragged breathing, then he was on some foolish boy not much more than half his weight. He held his musket in both hands, parrying the boy's awkward clubbing attempt before clipping him in the jaw with his rifle butt. Around with the bayonet and down. The boy screamed. To his right Wash had lost his gun and drawn a knife that wept blood over the two bodies beneath his feet. Caulkins appeared to be losing, falling back before an older man's desperate swings - the fools hadn't even loaded their weapons. The child ducked and thrust upward, impaling the loyalist by some divine blessing. To his left the battle was equally short. Distant thrusts and blocks, dark masses in the morning mist, then the inevitable cries.

"One's getting away!" Wash warned. Harding cursed and surged after him, but the loyalist was smaller and thinner. He'd never catch him. Then he heard an explosion behind him, smelled sulphur in the air and felt something hot shoot past his head. The fleeing loyalist fell where he stood, blood staining the grass.

"I said 'hand-to-hand!'" Harding ran to Wilkins, who stood facing the battle side on. His musket, still sans bayonet, smoked.

"You did not!"

"I tapped my bayonet!"

"I thought you were nervous!"

Harding didn't believe him, but it was too late. The rest of his company was pouring over the hill and Captain Wilcox would want answers.
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"Was that gunfire?" Villiers asked. He looked up at the hill keenly, as if expecting to pierce the woods by sheer willpower. Sergeant Daniels needed no convincing as he attached bayonet. Around them Villiers' 'army' rolled and surged to a stop. "Perhaps they shot a wolf?"

"That wasn't a wolf," Daniels growled.

"Why do you say that?"

Daniels shook his head. He didn't have a reason, other than instinct and the knowledge that General Arnold couldn't be more than 100-150 miles away. Despite what Villiers thought the man couldn't be a fool.

"Well, I will give you a chance to find out. I want you to take a regiment and sweep that hill for me."

Daniels stared. "I...have no experience leading a company, let alone a regiment."

"You're more qualified than most of my men, sir - and if you're right and there's trouble, then the honor's yours eh? Don't fear, if there's trouble I will come up with the rest."

"I wasn't afraid." Though I am now. What Villiers said was true though: He had no officer corps. He led a pack of men not used to being led. If the Americans were really up there....

"Good luck, Colonel!"

Yes, now I'm worried.
 
Nice. To bad about the elemnt of surprise being blown by our dear former messenger. Ach Vell, whatcha gonna do, these things do occasionally happen even to the best of troops.

Hopefully this will be the beginning of the British AI stopping it's
Originally Posted by CatKnight sweeping into New York and through Catskill province.
:D