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I take issue with Andrew/Andre for saying the war would end within Witherspoon's lifetime, and then killing him. However, he does have the makings of a good character, and I hope that Witherspoon gets revenge from beyond the grave in the form of the failure of Andre's mission.
 
Some really fine updates. I really enjoyed the last one and I am somewhat happy about the introduction of this Andre fellow as it means that we will soon be having some new congress scenes. I really enjoyed those in previous chapters and it has been some time since we have had the pleasure of one.
 
-= 98 =-

29 December, 1781
Charleston, South Carolina



Even today, in our modern world of computers, satellites and sensors, where predicting the weather a week in advance is chancy but not out of the question, no one is quite sure what happened in the winter of 1781.

Some say it was a hurricane. It acted like one: Coming ashore somewhere in western Florida, it tore northeast into Georgia, weakening steadily. It strengthened again upon reaching the Atlantic and followed the North American coast up, sliding past South and North Carolina. It chugged north past Virginia, skimmed Delaware and so north causing flooding in Philadelphia. The storm swept straight north, making final landfall at New York City and finally dissipating somewhere near Saratoga Springs.

December is too late for a hurricane in North America though: Hurricanes are tropical storms. Some think it a brutal nor'easter. Again, it bore the signs: Heavy winds, heavy rain and as it moved northwards, heavy snow. If it moved oddly, then so what? Any number of factors could have changed its direction.

The Natives and black slaves knew the truth though. It came to them through older faiths, through a hundred vision quests and a thousand stories. They knew this wasn't natural and in huddled whispers the tale spread northwards of a terrible evil spirit, one that hated all creation and would stop at nothing but its utter, complete destruction.

The CTD.

The CTD had a hundred mouths and a thousand hands with a thousand swords. Its very breath could freeze, its scream was death. It fought like a whirlwind, and that if one could avoid its flaming hooves which opened fissures in the earth with every step. Any time a nation abruptly fell or civilization verged on total collapse: Atlantis, Babylon, Rome, Genghis Khan, the Black Plague, the fall of the Timurids and of Ming China, it was the number of the Beast, or at least had it on speed dial.

It was fortunate then that the CTD ran into English reinforcements marching past Fort Ticonderoga who, mistaking it for a giant thousand-limbed tree, promptly slew it with sword, musket and bayonet.
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Not knowing how close he'd come to losing everything he ever loved or believed in, Edward Rutledge sat to dinner at his house. It was a relatively private dinner, a growing rarity in the lawyer's life. He smiled at his wife, Henrietta then at their long term guest, Cassandra Rafferty.

"Ladies, you can not guess how much your presence at the end of a long day lightens my mood." He raised his glass. "To beauty!"

Rafferty looked down. Mrs. Rutledge hid her scowl behind an urbane smile. He'd been looking at their guest with that last statement.

"Did you hear anything of the war today?" Cassie asked.

Henrietta's mood soured further. Every night she brought up the war, and every night her husband would give a long discourse on how gallant and brave their soldiers were. If he thought they were so wonderful, maybe he should join them! She would be glad to see the war end, first to stop these constant questions and second because Colonel Preston would return, marry the girl and take her away. Preferably far away. Spain came to mind. She'd settle for New Spain.

"I am happy you reminded me, ma'am. The courage and valor of our men shall not be forgotten at this table. Every morning I pray for their safe return, and every evening as well. I shall eternally be grateful." This was true enough: Rutledge's plan depended entirely on the army. If they held up their end, he'd happily give them their due. He'd even help that bastard Heyward along, who was doing nobly enough now that he'd gotten his nose out of politics and learned to mind his betters. "In fact, I believe this belongs to you."

Cassie snatched the letter out of his hands and stared at the seal. "It's from John!"

"What does he have to say, dear?" Henrietta purred, knowing full well that while Cassie knew her letters, she wasn't very good at it.

"I shall read it later."

"I will read it, if you choose," Edward regarded her intently.

"No!" Cassie blushed again. "I mean, thank you but...please excuse me." She stood and left the room.

Henrietta shook her head. "She hardly touched her meal. It's very unseem...Edward!"

"Eh?"

"There's still someone else at this table, Mr. Rutledge!" she fumed.

"I am well aware of it, m'dear." Edward patted her hand. "Now, what were you saying?"

She sighed at him. She was fond of him, he treated her well, and despite his wandering eyes she didn't suspect him of any intrigue. Their marriage was political in nature though and once, just once she'd like to know what Cassandra saw in her fiance's scarred, shot marked face.

Cassie:

Just a few quick words. We'll be going into battle in a few hours. We besieged Mobile fine, but the Brits just landed a few thousand men west of town and they're going to give it a go anyway. They have about two thousand to our nine, I don't expect it to be more than a diversion.

Tom's doing well.
That was it. This puzzled Cassie, usually 'Tom' was good for half a page of rants and rails. Had they finally patched things up? Or was something very wrong? John understood the chance of a letter being intercepted as well as the next person.

Our efforts at negotiation have failed. Another oddity. Since when was the army chatting with their enemies. What was he trying to say? Her eyes narrowed as she read on. It seems they are eager to fight. But so are... something scratched out ....we.

Rumor is
..another scratch... when we take Mobile their back will finally be broken and we can go home. That will be good. I for one am ready to get on with the rest of my life ... of our lives.

With all my affection, I am:

- John Preston
Colonel, Army of Carolina


Cassie traced the last two paragraphs gingerly. Her reverie was broken by a sudden slam and running feet. She ran into the dining room just as a messenger burst in followed by James, their black butler.

"What is the meaning of this?" Edward Rutledge demanded, rising and throwing his napkin down.

"I tried to stop him, sir," James protested.

"I beg pardon, sir," the messenger huffed. "Ma'am," he half-bowed to Mrs. Rutledge. "I come from your brother. He bid me give this to you the moment I arrived and not later."

My brother? Now that the war was drawing to a close, he wanted someone he could trust in Congress to deal with any difficulties. He tore open the messenger's letter and read. He paled and flushed. "You came here by ship?"

"Aye, sir. And it's ready to go with the tide. That's in two hours."

"I'll be there. James, prepare my travelling clothes. I'll also need supplies for a sea voyage. Move!" Ignoring his wife's protests, Edward Rutledge stalked out of the room.

She picked up the letter:

Ned:

Come to Philadelphia now. It will not wait. We have trouble.

- John
 
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Comments: Well, it happened. The CTD. Something corrupted my copy of EU2, and took both of my saved games with it. I already restored EU2, but the files are...ruined.

(I'm currently debating whether to stick to 1.08 or go to the beta. The beta lets me download more mods, but I seem to have the damndest time getting colonization and tech to work right in the beta mods. I don't know why. Stay tuned...)

The good news is since this IS primarily a story, losing the save file isn't as crippling as it would be in most AARs. I played through the end of the war, and the next few chapters are written in my mind. I have reasonably good notes and a reasonably good memory. I'll do what TreizeV did for his Napoleonic AAR....replay, get as close as I can, then hack the save file and restore what needs fixing to get back to where we were. The CTD isn't gonna win!


LewsTherin: Not much for Andre to explain regarding Witherspoon's death. "We were attacked by bandits. One of them shot him before I could intervene." Forensics doesn't exist, and even if it did...he used the bandit's gun. (Though his powder and shot.)

Judas Maccabeus: Very good. Yep! He's only a captain because he hasn't had as many opportunities to 'shine' in this AAR as he did in real life.

Stuyvesant: Those plants were heroes. :sniff:

Draco Rexus: Unfortunately the CTD was NOT the AI curve ball. That's still coming. Hang on, it's going to get rough fairly soon.

J. Passepartout: I did hesitate on that line. I figured at that point in time Andre had no intent of killing Witherspoon, so he meant what he said. He only did it because Witherspoon figured out he was a Brit.

Machiavellian: Hmm...well, Congress is about to show up. I'm not sure how you're going to feel about 'em, though I suppose with a name like Machiavellian you might do. :)

Brinoch: Thanks, and incoming!
 
hey knew this wasn't natural and in huddled whispers the tale spread northwards of a terrible evil spirit, one that hated all creation and would stop at nothing but its utter, complete destruction.

The CTD.

The CTD had a hundred mouths and a thousand hands with a thousand swords. Its very breath could freeze, its scream was death. It fought like a whirlwind, and that if one could avoid its flaming hooves which opened fissures in the earth with every step. Any time a nation abruptly fell or civilization verged on total collapse: Atlantis, Babylon, Rome, Genghis Khan, the Black Plague, the fall of the Timurids and of Ming China, it was the number of the Beast, or at least had it on speed dial.

I found the description of the CTD both gripping and amusing. It is unfortunate that the saved games got wiped out, as I am sure there will be little things that can not or will not be corrected, but I trust that the story and the game will beat out any pesky CTD. Looking forward to more.
 
CatKnight said:
It was fortunate then that the CTD ran into English reinforcements marching past Fort Ticonderoga who, mistaking it for a giant thousand-limbed tree, promptly slew it with sword, musket and bayonet.

Thank god for the British and their arboricidal* tendancies. ;)
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*Yay, I made up a new word! :D
 
That is too bad that the dreaded CTD attacked. I have heard many a tale about that montser, tales that would freeze your blood, blind you, and hack your ears off due to the sheer fear instilled in you by the hearing. Indeed, once upon a time, I had an encounter with a CTD that ended with several people dead, and more, including myself, severely wounded. I personally was hospitalised for nearly a year.

I liked the line about the british killing it. :)

I hope you can repair everything, and I am also looking forward to the upcoming story.
 
Cat, my sympathies with the horrific CTD. Lucky those damn pesky British reinforcements were able to slay the fiend!

Originally Posted by Judas Maccabeus
...arboricidal* tendancies.
*Yay, I made up a new word
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

May I have your permission, Judas, to use that word in day to day conversation? :D
 
Good luck replaying eight years or so of the game in an attempt to recreate your earlier game... That must be a daunting prospect, though I guess you won't care too much if things turn out different outside of North America.

Shame to hear you had one of those all-out CTDs that actually leave a permanent trail of destruction. Often has EU2 dumped me unceremoniously back to the desktop, but I think maybe only once did it affect my save games. A tough break. But (it has to be said) a nice way of writing it up.
Aboricide, indeed. :p

Mr Andre seems to be stirring things up very quickly, considering Rutledge's desperate response to the messenger's news. And what's up with Preston's mysterious letter to Cassie? What's that, am I supposed to think and figure out what his carefully chosen words are intended to convey? Aargh! I demand instant gratification! Okay, I'll settle down now. I'll try to re-read it and see if it makes any more sense then. :)

Glad to see a CTD isn't going to stop this story!
 
Originally Posted by Judas Maccabeus
Yes, but you'll have to pay 100 bucks for the royalties. :D

Is that a day, week, month, year, or a one shot deal, sir? :D :rolleyes:
 
A CDT just as things are getting interesting. :eek: Well all right things are always interesting in this story. ;) Now what trouble is causing Edward Rutledge to rush off? Congress going to do something foolish like make peace with England?

Joe
 
Very nice updates, CatKnight, especially your vivid description of the dreaded CTD. I am puzzled, however, at what AI curveball as you put it would be present even after a CTD corrupts your files. :confused:

Are you playing some mod that brings greater risk of file corruption? I am curious because, although I have had many CTDs in my day, I never had worse trouble than having to revert to the previous save and recontinuing from that point.
 
Machiavellian: Yes, I was quite vexed when I found EU2 wouldn't load - then after restoring that the saved games would CTD. I'll correct everything I remember, though outside of North America my knowledge is limited.

Judas Maccabeus: Arboricidal. Hmm, that's not bad! Maybe you should contact whoever handles dictionary updates. It makes more sense than putting 'ain't' in there!

J. Passepartout: I'm confident I can repair the major points. Actually, if the game goes as expected (hah!), I anticipate a major save game hack going into Part 4. (We're currently near the end of part 2.) I suppose this is good practice!

Draco Rexus: Yes, the English save the day! (As usual, so they'd say.)

Stuyvesant: This is the first time one of my saved games died. It was rather distressing...I heard about it in other AARs, but I thought it was from far older versions of EU2.

Replaying 8 years is not a problem. Thank God I'm not trying to rebuild a few hundred years! Getting it close...will be problematic, but I don't think impossible. You're right though, most of my notes focuses on North America, and if South America, Asia and Africa turn up a little different that's not a big deal. In Europe only three major things are going on I need to 'protect':
* Poland got hit hard. That's probably not necessary for the story, but I noted it so we'll see. I doubt that'll be a problem.
* France/Spain are allied. It could be useful later.
* France, England and Austria are in seperate alliances. I don't want the big-3 turning into a 2:1 at this time...though if the AI makes it happen later I'll just roll with it. It's not like Austria does much in the Americas anyway.

And yes, Mr. Andre and his British friends have been busy.

Storey: Congress? Foolish? Please!

jwolf: Well, the curve ball happened before the CTD. I could conveniently 'forget' about it, but I thought that'd be cheating...plus, it just adds another evil twist. I can make it work
. You're about to find out what it is.

I was playing 1.08 vanilla. I'm thinking it might not be a 'normal' CTD as seen in other AARs (and certainly wasn't the harmless crash/reboots that EU2 is infamous for.) EU2 itself corrupted, so I'm thinking the hardware where EU2 was stored may have corrupted, or something snuck in and had a party. (If so, it's gone dormant though, no other programs affected.) Once I pulled the old copy of EU2 and reinstalled, it operated normally but the saved games CTDd, so they must have been hit also.
 
-= 99 =-

9 January, 1782
North of Mobile, British West Florida



It had taken several weeks to procure the parts, then several weeks more to learn the basic gunsmithing needed to put them together. No way could he trust any of these local fools to such advanced work, but it was finally ready. Henry Stewart carefully sighted along the barrel of his rifle and aimed at a branch several hundred feet away. He fired. The lock slammed home and sparked, smelling for a split second of smoke before igniting the powder, which in turn propelled the rounded cylindrical bullet violently. The branch shattered and Stewart smiled.

Rifles were nothing new, of course, dating to the early fifteenth century, but custom bullets and a second spiral groove in the barrel improved his accuracy, while being able to load bullet and powder from breeches near the front of the stock tripled his speed. That bastard Heyward kept a constant picket to protect his cowardly hide. Even that wouldn't save him now, not when Stewart had a true sniper's rifle available.

"And Papa said that year in the factories was a waste," Stewart chuckled, scratching his tangled beard. He pulled back the lock and stared down the barrel to make sure it was clear. Satisfied he put the gun down and stared around the campsite that had been home for the last few weeks. It smelled of human and animal defecations along with the rotting body of a bird, an early 'test' of his rifle, that Stewart didn't see fit to remove. His 'forge' was completely unworthy of the title, consisting of a large rock and some stolen tools, but it answered.

He was reflecting on the sheer pleasure of watching Heyward's head explode like a ripe grapefruit, and the probability he could finally go home, when Stewart heard a limb snap somewhere to his right. The Brit glared around wildly and slowly retrieved his rifle. Bullet. Powder. Lock both chambers.

"Good afternoon. Herr Stewart, I presume?"

He whirled, gun raised at the stranger.

Dieter von Zahringen sighed loudly and raised his hands. "That is unwise, my friend."

"Who the $&#@ are you?" Stewart screamed. An American! He didn't look like an American. He sure as hell didn't talk like one. In fact, he sounded sorta German. "Did he send you!?"

"Who would that be?" von Zahringen circled slowly, hands still raised.

"Don't be coy with me! I know Black sent you! Tell him I'm almost done, damn it! Tell him I'll take care of Heyward today!" Stewart retreated from the Badener's advance, rifle still pointed at his chest.

"And Herr Black wants General Heyward dead? Why?"

"You know why!"

"I do not."

"Because..." Something clicked inside Stewart's mind. "You're not with Black!"

"I am not." von Zahringen shrugged apologetically. "Now, please put the gun down."

Stewart screamed again and raised the weapon. The German pointed over his shoulder. Whirling, he saw three Indians stalking towards him.

"Alive!" von Zahringen called in pitiful Cherokee. One of the natives grinned, white teeth brilliant on his bronze face. Stewart fired, but it was a panicked hopeless shot before they were on him. Something hard struck Stewart's skull and he slumped.

"Bind him, then guard him." I think General Heyward wants to talk with you, my friend.
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania


The first thing Edward Rutledge realized, having walked into Independence Hall, was that Congress' former servant, Thomson, now sat in the president's chair. "So much for gentlemen only," he murmured to his brother.

John Rutledge was several years older, a lawyer like his brother. He didn't understand his brother's comment and instead said, "It's been chaos since the New Jersey delegate arrived."

"Oh? Where is old Witherspoon?"

"Dead. Bandits on the road. We almost lost New Hampshire also."

Edward's eyes fell on a woman taking a seat towards the back of the chamber, well dressed, thin and straight backed with blond hair. He grinned. "At least the help is prettier than last time! Stearns finally took my advice and put a waitress inside, eh?"

"Actually she's the..."

"I'll take a beer," he told her. She glared at him.

"Rutledge!" With the war dying down, John Adams of Massachusetts had also returned to Congress. He stepped across the room and shook the Carolinan's hand firmly. "You're still alive!" He didn't sound entirely pleased.

"As are you." Edward Rutledge knew he wasn't happy.

"Yes. Business going well in Charleston?"

"Quite. How is Boston?"

"Booming! The jewel of America gets brighter!"

Rutledge smiled coldly. "Yes, Charleston is."

"Good afternoon, gentlemen. I hope I'm not interrupting?" Neither Adams nor Rutledge turned to the newcomer. Their handshake intensified and both started to turn red. "Gentlemen?"

Adams flickered an annoyed glance then relaxed, but not before his eyes widened as the Carolinan's fist closed like a vice around his hand. "Rutledge, may I present Jonathan Andrews of New Hampshire? Mister Andrews, Edward Rutledge."

"I'm very pleased to meet you," Andrews' handshake was far more friendly.

"I understand you are a very lucky man, sir."

Andrews lowered his gaze. "Yes. Alas for poor Witherspoon. I tried to help him, but..."

"Don't worry about it," Adams answered gruffly. "You did the best you could."

The two Rutledges approached the South Carolina table. Nearby Lyman Hall of Georgia stood and strode over. He hadn't aged well, Edward saw. Hall had never been a thin man, and years as an effective exile had stolen his strength. "Sir, I am deeply in your debt for coming. You do not know what this means!"

"Eh?"

"That's why I sent for you, Ned. There's some danger of...."

"Will Congress please come to order?" Arthur Thomson stood. "Please?" He had never been elected and simply filled the void left by the last president's death, so had no real authority. Sometimes this caused problems. "Gentlemen!" He beat his desk industriously with his gavel. "Now that we are all gathered, it is time to discuss the English proposal for peace."

What!? "Mister....Mister Thomson," Edward stood. "This is the first I'm hearing about an offer. Could someone present a summary?"

"Of course." He indicated a boy of maybe fifteen who sat on the edge of his seat, as if ready to sprint across the city on a second's notice. "Please show Mister Rutledge the map we've prepared. Miss? Would you go over the finer points of the treaty for those who haven't heard it before?"

"It would be my pleasure." The blond haired woman rose and smiled coldly in Rutledge's direction. As she talked of the necessity for brotherhood and an honorable peace, he unrolled the boy's map and paled.

British proposal:
treaty1782.txt


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North of Mobile, British West Florida


Stewart awoke to a scene from hell. It was after dark. The campsite, his campsite was on fire and orange tinted smoke sliced through the sky blotting out the stars. The damn Indians had tied him to a tree, no doubt in preparation for whatever pagan sacrifice they practiced. No sign of his gun. He had a knife in his boot, but no way to get to it.

Somewhere he heard a scream, then the butcher's thunk of steel on meat. Oddly the screaming didn't stop, but rose to an agonized shriek as he smelled burning flesh. It cut off suddenly, then for several moments nothing but the angry crackle of burning trees, flaming spires in the night.

Stewart struggled to no avail. Now that his senses were returning he could see Indian bodies, most with their heads twisted until their necks splintered under the strain. All wore shocked, pained expressions. From ahead a dark shape was approaching, a HUGE dark shape.

"Do not move." Black's voice, very close to the assassin's ear. A quick slice and his ropes came free.

"Oh Thank God, Thank God!" Stewart could have wept. He surged to his feet, but his legs wouldn't bear his weight and he sagged.

"Yes. Thank God." 'Mister' Black answered neutrally. He leaned on his ebony cane for support and turned to his hulking companion. "Anyone else left?"

It growled inhumanly and Stewart instinctively backed against the tree. Black seemed to understand however, for he nodded. "Good. Now. Seize him."

Faster than the Englishman would have thought possible, the hulking shape rushed forward. He lifted Stewart by his throat against the tree. Stewart gagged, kicked at the wood. He clawed at the shape's hand, but couldn't gouge his skin.

"No, Jasen." Black watched the confrontation emotionlessly. "Don't kill him."

"General Exeter?" Stewart gasped once he was down. "My God man, what did he do to you?" The former general had never been a small man. Now he was positively HUGE, an eighteen stone (300 lb, 136 kg) brick wall with sunken eyes that flickered in the firelight.

"Nothing he didn't want." Black's tone never changed. "You failed me, Henry."

"I did not! I mean...give me one more chance!..."

"It is too late for chances, Henry."

"I know who was sent back to stop me! I can kill him tomorrow! With your help I can kill him now!"

"It is too late, Henry. You have failed. This country has survived. Jasen?"

Exeter lifted the assassin like he was a puppet, propelling him against the tree with lethal force. Stewart groaned and sagged. A sharp stabbing pain told him the back of one of his ribs had buckled. "Please," he begged.

"Don't cry, Henry. You will be with your family very soon."

Forbidden hope flared in Stewart's eyes. "You're sending me home?"

"No...but you will be with them very soon." At his uncomprehending stare Black chuckled. "They're dead, Henry. Your wife in particular took some time, though not as long as it'll take you I think. I've decided to use you to send a message to these Americans for me. Jasen? As we discussed earlier."

Exeter growled something that must have been obeisance, for Black nodded. "Good bye, Henry." He lifted his chin and watched as Exeter grabbed him.

"No, please! What are you doing!? Let me g...Oh my God, Oh my...!" Several thumps, then steel on steel and a horrible, inhuman shriek followed by another, then another.

"If I can not destroy this country," Black told them pleasantly, "then I will crush its soul."
 
Much to chew on in this update... Stewert is captured, but rescued, only to be killed... So, Black and Exeter killed everybody to get to Stewert, or did some of them, such as Zahringen, escape?

Either way, it is a pity that Stewert slipped out of our hands.
 
I really wanted to see Heyward interrogating Stewart. Maybe von Zahringen escaped, as the story only described his three Cherokee friends having died at Exeter's hands. And, speaking of Exeter, ... :eek: :eek: What on Earth did Black do to him to turn him into a hulking monster?

Re the British, I see you have the typical AI dilemma: how to negotiate a reasonable peace deal instead of the semi-random quilt of provinces they like to offer. Well, it's a more attractive problem than the CTD, anyway. :p
 
Curses, foiled again! Oh, well, hopefully Zahringen's alive and free. If not, then so help me, I'll... *makes threatening gestures*

;)

Oh, and I'd take that proposal. You'll still have a CB on the British; you'll have regained the north; and you'll have a nice chunk of Canada to boot.
 
Oh what a wonderful peace offer from the Brits.... simply bloody wonderful! :mad: I'd say that only and idiot would even think of accepting such a proposal, but then I remembered that we are reading about Congress, eh? :rolleyes:

Damn, that was one helluva way for Stewart to exit our little soiree. And this Mr. Black? Well.... I don't think I'd like to meet him when he's not happy. Especially if he has the new and imporved (?) Jasen Exeter tagging along!

I truly hope that everyones favorite swashbuckler made it out alive, 'cause I'd surely miss von Zahringen... again. ;)

I can hardly wait to see what you come up with next, Cat! Bravo and bring it on, my friend! :cool: