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Wonderful... A little dash of clashing personalities at Congress (I particularly enjoyed Rutledge making an ass of himself), an 'interesting' peace proposal, an appearance by Von Zähringen and then the mysterious Mr. Black and The Being Formerly Known As Jasen Exeter (TBFKAJE? Nah, a little too unwieldy).

I do hope Von Zähringen managed to escape. Preferably with Stewart's prototype rifle. Since his death wasn't explicitly mentioned, I have hope, but knowing how rare his appearances in your story have become, it might be a couple of game years before we see him again.

Here's hoping that you'll accept the peace deal - not because it's the best deal for the United States (though you do get a lot of prime real estate in Canada), but simply because Rutledge would never survive it politically. And anything bad for Rutledge has to rate highly with me. ;)

But Rutledge having the political savvy he has (not to mention story-related concerns), I assume I'll see this peace offer rejected.
 
Hmmm, this is getting positively Lovecraftian or Smithesque. I like it. I too hope Von Zähringen is alive and kicking, though the new and even more murdereous Jasen Exeter makes up for a lot... Nasty. Very nasty... Now who can the woman in congress be? Someone historical, or someone new... Nice update!
 
Whoa. Interesting update and with a lot happening. I wonder if maybe it was super steriods that transformed Exeter into a hulking goliath or could it perhaps have been something far more sinister. I'm leaning towards the sinister, but who knows.

Seems that America will be forged. I am rather curious how it will develop and begin to grow from this point.
 
J. Passepartout: von Zahringen escaped. He was off grabbing Tom when Black attacked.

jwolf: Regarding Exeter..well, it's simple really. While Stewart was reinventing the breech-loading rifle, Black was using steroids. Who's the man now? :rofl:

Judas Maccabeus: In case it isn't obvious, that peace proposal was the 'AI curve ball' I've been warning about: A proposal that pretty much shakes my story to the core, but which my NPCs (idiots) in Congress would probably go for.

Draco Rexus: Maybe Black is this AAR's answer to Bruce Banner, with Exeter as the Incredible Hulk:

"You wouldn't like me when I'm angry."

Stuyvesant: I dunno...Rutledge is a survivor. Though I agree, this treaty is a major setback.

Dead William: The woman in Congress is the one who debriefed Captain Andre in Nova Scotia. She wants to make sure her plan goes off without a hitch.

Machiavellian: Hmm..well, definitely assume the sinister. (Though I like the steroids option. Now that would be one weird AAR!) America is indeed forged...but her trials are nowhere near done.

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This will bring us to the end of Part II. The more observant of you will wonder where the heck Part I went. Currently it looks like this:

Part I: (1773-1778) - The first revolt. Introduce most of the characters. Buildup to...

Part II: (1778-1782) - The second American/British war. To my knowledge all the characters are in at this point.

I'm estimating two more parts, though this game (and AAR) have already taken wild turns I never expected, so who knows. I hope to have this AAR finished by 2013 or so. ;)

There will be a short delay, as I can't really go on until I get an EU2 game patched together that brings me to this point. Enjoy!
 
-= 100 =-

10 January, 1782
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania



Captain John Andre, a/k/a Jonathan Andrews of New Hampshire, repeatedly wondered how these Americans had achieved so much. In his youth he'd seen dog fights in London, animals beaten into viciousness tearing each other apart, and they reminded him of this Congress. Reverend Witherspoon had been right: They showed almost no unity whatsoever. Indeed it was from their discussions that Andre's plan was born: If the peace treaty could please enough states, then it would pass even if other states were hurt in the bargain, and the northerners had far more votes than the south.

"Indeed, what escapes me," Edward Rutledge roared, "is how intelligent men such as yourselves can even consider this odious proposal!" He was out of form today and he knew it. The God damned Brits had crushed his plans without even trying! "With apologies to our honored guest," he sketched a bow in the British woman's direction, "her masters obviously believe us fools, easily pacified by inconsequential grants of land that not only fail to strengthen America, but in fact weaken her!"

"Stuff," John Adams admonished. "This is land our scouts have been through in the past few years. Prime land, sparsely settled at best. This is exactly what we need, Mister Rutledge: Land to expand and develop. Land that my children and your children can use to make America great. We wanted to announce ourselves to the world, Mister Rutledge, and if this does not make clear that we are a power to be reckoned with, I do not know what will!"

"It is not power our brother nations will consider when they see this treaty, but how easily we are duped. I've read these scout reports, Mister Adams. You said yourself: sparsely settled. A series of trading outposts and farms connected by a road system that even the Indians would scoff at! How much will it cost to maintain these settlements? More than we can earn in taxes, I assure you. How much harder will it be for us to maintain order in the nation if and when we have to station a permanent garrison by Hudson Bay of all places?"

"The chair recognizes Mrs. Foster?"

The British woman rose and lifted her chin defiantly to the men. Fools, all of them. She glanced at Captain Andre, then turned to Rutledge, the only real danger in the room. "I regret that South Carolina is concerned by our proposal," she began mildly, "but I assure him there is no dark conspiracy to make anyone look foolish. Our only goal is peace - an honorable peace. While some people in this room might wish that Britain abandons all her possessions in North America, that is not reasonable and will not happen." Foster gripped the chair in front of her and smiled at the northern delegates.

"I am gratified that others agree that we have spent enough time fighting each other. Britain's interests have been and will be with her colonies and friends. You have declread you are not the former, so we are interested in the latter. I do not need to counsel you gentlemen that as a nation, indeed as a world power there are protocols to be observed...and one of them is not to embarass your foe unnecessarily. It is not civilized. You wished to make a point, and do so by arms? Very well, we concede your point. There is no more need for bloodshed." She cast a glance over her shoulder. "Or does South Carolina believe the only good Englishman is a dead one?"

Rutledge rose stiffly. "Certainly not," he answered a little coldly. "However, we do expect that if Britain is so eager for peace, as all right thinking men are, they will make a reasonable offer. Savannah and Saint Augustine are in our hands. Mobile, Montreal and most of the St. Lawrence River valley are under siege. New Brunswick is under our control. With a few adjustments I am certain we can reach a compromise."

"It grieves me to dispute you." Foster didn't sound grieved. "But I do not have the authority to negotiate, but only present. This is what His Majesty's government is prepared to offer at this time. I suppose if you wanted to present a counteroffer, you could do so..in London."

"Agreed." Rutledge turned. "Mister Thomson, I would like to prepare a counterproposal to be sent to..."

"That would take weeks," John Jay of New York interrupted, "then weeks more to sail to England, get a response and come home. C'mon Rutledge, be reasonable!" He had no wish to see New York invaded again, not with Arnold's army now unable to protect them.

"Haven't we all forgotten something important?" John Hanson of Maryland retorted.

"What?" Jay demanded. Andre leaned forward, interested.

"Georgia. Gentlemen, this treaty is interesting but it leaves Georgia squarely in enemy... in British hands. Doctor Hall has been with us since day one offering us counsel and advice. Georgia was one of our reasons for going to war!" He pointed to the embarassed and upset doctor. "If we are indeed united, if what we wrote in Jefferson's letter about pledging our lives, fortunes and honor is to have any meaning, then it must apply to all the states. You will find Doctor Hall's signature on that letter!"

"Hear him!"

Adams shook his head. "Oh be quiet, Rutledge!" He paused. "Georgia will be in good hands. If you look in Article IX of the treaty, you see general amnesty is offered to anyone who joined us during the fighting. We made sure Hall and his family would be cared for. Mister Thomson, this bickering is pointless. I call for a vote!"

"Do we have a second?" Thomson dipped his pen in ink and began writing.

"Aye," New York answered.

"Fine. Resolved, the British proposal for an end to hostilities received on the 19th day of December, 1781 should be accepted. Please indicate your agreement by voting aye, or rejection with nay. New Hampshire?"

"New Hampshire's not ready," Andre replied. "Please come back to me." No sense revealing his hand unless it became necessary.

"Massachusetts?"

"Aye!" Adams slammed his hand on the table.

New York agreed also, eager to reclaim their lands. Rhode Island and Connecticut followed their stronger neighbors. New Jersey's new delegate, shaken by Witherspoon's death, was eager for peace and a chance to settle in. Pennsylvania wanted time to figure out what to do with the Shawnee on their border and also agreed.

"Delaware?"

Thomas McKean had served off and on since 1774. America would remain free, that's all he cared about. "Aye."

"Fine," Thomson looked up. "The motion passes, and..."

"I would like the rest of the congress polled, if you please," Rutledge called coldly.

"That is your right." Thomson didn't see the point, but shrugged. "Maryland?"

"Maryland votes no," Hanson answered angrily.

"Virginia?"

James Madison glanced at Hanson. His orders were to vote yes, but he saw no reason to antagonize both Virginia's neighbors on a vote that no longer mattered. "No." Not surprisingly, North and South Carolina followed suit.

"Georgia?"

Hall rose unsteadily. "After my vote it will be 7 to 5," he announced softly. "Seven votes to violate your promises to your brothers in arms. Seven votes for expediency rather than honor. Seven votes to betray friends and allow tyrannny to prevail. Will not one of you recast your vote?" He paused. "No one?" The silence lengthened.

Finally Thomson coughed uncomfortably. "Georgia votes nay?" he asked gently.

Lyman Hall looked around one last time. For a moment he slumped and Rutledge reached for him, but shrank at the Georgian's furious glare. Slowly he walked to the room's large tally board. It consisted of thirteen blocks, one for each state, running on slides between yea and nay. It remained unused now that Congress had no clerk. Patiently, using a long stick, Hall updated the board. When he reached the last slot, he tore Georgia's block off the board and held it.

"My only regret," he announced quietly, "is that I should have lived to see this day. The words you wrote to the different assemblies, promising freedom, justice and brotherhood were lies. Your pledges to support and defend each other were worth less than the paper you used to write them. Even the youngest child, even the basest knave knows better than to abandon his friends!"

"Doctor Hall," New Jersey began. "You are hardly being just. The matters before us..."

"Oh, do shut up," Hall snapped. "Since '73 your state has not once suffered at British hands, not once seen the switch of reprisal nor the carrot of a broken promise. Mine has seen both repeatedly. It is far easier to cry that it's time to stop fighting when your people aren't the ones suffering! No sir! You will be silent! I have observed all of you for years, watching your bickering, double dealing and outright stabs in the hope that this Congress would come together long enough to accomplish one good thing, and in the end you cannot even be trusted to keep your word. He regarded them coldly. "You want respect? One must earn respect, and all you have proven today is that you are liars and cowards, and that when the trials grow too rough you will turn on each other like rabid dogs." He threw the block down, and stalked out.

"Get up," Edward hissed.

"Eh?" John Rutledge jerked, then nodded and stood.

"Where are you going?" Adams demanded, rising.

"The air in here is a bit rancid," Rutledge retorted. He walked out, followed shortly by the North Carolina, Virginia and Maryland delegations.

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North of Mobile, British West Florida


Smoke still whispered upwards, grey and black on pale blue as Thomas Heyward approached the campsite, flanked on either side by Colonel Preston and Dieter von Zahringen. Two Indian trackers brought by the German fanned out on either side, while three American scouts rode ahead.

"He was just behind this hill," von Zahringen reported solemnly. "I left him tied to a tree with five Cherokee guards."

"Obviously it wasn't enough," Preston retorted, glancing at Tom worriedly. Heyward had never recovered from his first brush with Stewart, continued to ramble about his greater evil. It was General Steving who'd finally convinced him that only through decisive action could this war end and the killing stop. Steving insisted it was all shock, that it must be somewhat disconcerting to know someone is trying to kill you in cold blood. John wasn't so sure.

He suspected Heyward was going insane.

Tom seemed game enough when he'd heard Stewart was captured, however. He would've ridden in the middle of the night if they'd let him. "You're sure he wasn't hurt when you left him?"

"A blow to the head, nothing more." von Zahringen shook his head. "My Indians were very careful. They wouldn't have started a fire, and I assure you Herr Stewart couldn't have."

"Isn't it obvious? Stewart escaped. Probably sliced up your Indians too," Preston huffed.

"I doubt this."

"He's still there," Tom informed them. He has to be!

One of the Indians turned to the Badener and said something.

"He believes your scouts should have returned by now," von Zahringen turned back.

"He has a point." Preston drew his pistol. "Wait here." He kicked his horse lightly and rode up the hill.

Heyward slowed to a stop and sighed as von Zahringen drew his new rifle and studied it intently. Awkwardly he opened the side breech and inserted a bullet.

"It's backwards."

"Pardon?"

"The bullet's backwards." Heyward turned expressionlessly.

"Is it?" von Zahringen sounded pleased. "How did you know? I've never seen a gun like this before!"

"I have." Heyward returned his gaze to the hill. He nudged his horse into a trot.

"Where are you going!?"

"I have questions for Mister Stewart."

They found Preston and his scouts in the campsite, staring at a tree. One man had already been sick: The smell of a surgeon's tent in mid-battle - vomit, feces, blood and fear - filled the air. Another scout crossed himself repeatedly and muttered a prayer that sounded suspiciously Catholic. von Zahringen paled. Preston made an automatic grab for Tom's reins, but Heyward simply rode past him and stared up.

Henry Stewart had been nailed to the tree, dangling by his shattered wrists. Someone had sliced his side open, and behind the stinking, bloody wound Tom could clearly see part of his large intestine. Heyward regarded him silently.

Damn.

The Indians finally caught up. After exchanging a shocked glance and wondering at the savagery of the white man they began searching for clues among the broken bodies of their friends. None, just a footprint no one could identify...a huge footprint.

"Bloody hell," Preston swore. "He's alive!"

Heyward looked up quickly. Stewart's eyes were open, though he doubted the assassin could truly see anything. "Who did this?" Tom demanded.

"..who?" Stewart asked through broken, blood crusted lips. If he felt any pain, if he felt anything at all it didn't appear.

"Who did this to you?"

"General Heyward," von Zahringen offered. "Perhaps..."

"TELL ME!" Tom roared. He jumped off his horse and shook Stewart's tree, eliciting a weak, shrill cry. "TELL ME!"

"General!"

"Tom!"

"...black..."

Heyward glanced at von Zahringen's appalled face. "Mister Black? Your superior?"

"...yes..."

"Is he a Nazi?" No response. "Wake up, damn you!" Heyward shook the tree again. "Is he a Nazi? I said, IS HE A..."

"Yes!" Stewart cried with the last of his strength before slumping again.

Tom stared for a moment. "Just so." He mounted his horse and turned for the army camp.

Preston and von Zahringen exchanged glances. "Uh...Tom? I mean, General?"

Heyward stopped his horse but didn't turn. "Yes?"

"We can't leave him like this. It's not..." human.

"Eh?" Tom glanced over his shoulder. "Right." He drew his pistol and casually shot his nemesis in the head. "Burn the body. Tell no one about this."

He rode away.


END OF PART TWO
 
I never thought I would actually feel sympathy for Stewart, but I have to admit Black and Exeter went a bit overboard in their execution of him. I wonder now what Heyward's friends think of him after seeing a sort of confirmation of his wildest delusions.

The US Congress is split about 70 years ahead of schedule. :eek:
 
Darn Southern states. Wouldn't know a good thing if it got up on a table and sang "Good things are here again." :D

Suspiciously Catholic? I'll ignore that one for now... ;)

Nasty way for someone to go, even a hireling for the Nazis. :eek:

Now, if you want the right way for Nazis to go, just take from Indiana Jones:

-Ripped up by a propeller;
-Have their car drive off a cliff;
-Melted by the Ark of the Covenant;
-Have their tank drive off a cliff;
-Melted by the Holy Grail;
-Fall into a bottomless pit;
-And so on.
 
Interesting the way the southern states have sort of walked out of Congress. I wonder whether the CSA will form so much earlier in the history. Not that I'd mind a country without Georgia. :rofl: Just kidding.. maybe.

If your story did bring it to that, could you modify the game files to create two colonial nations in North America? This is clearly the plan of the british. Divide and conquer.
 
Damn fine updates, sir! I was a bit shocked at the Congressional split, but it does make sense, and I loved the Distinguished Gentleman from Georgia's speach. Hopefully them damn Yankees will be shamed into re-thinking their stupid and cowardly vote.... but I'm not gonna hold my breath.

I'd like to say I felt some sympathy for Stewart, but I ain't gonna lie. Yes it was inhuman and I wouldn't wish against my worst enemy.... well, maybe my worst enemy, but not most of 'em. Hopefully seeing Stewart's condition will allow Heyward's companions to give him the benefit of he doubt moving forward... but as above, I aint' gonna hold my breath for it!

Can't wait for you to be able to get back on the road with this one, Cat! :cool:
 
I don't see anything dishonorable in getting a big chunk of change (in the form of the prime bits of Canada) and a rest to prepare for the next chapter in the American War of Independence, but to be fair, I might have felt different if I had been in Georgia's situation. :rolleyes:

The important question seems to be: did, or did Congress not accept that proposal? To me, seems the Southern states left before a formal decision was taken. Now that they have left, does the rest of Congress still have the authority to accept a peace deal?

I doubt that confronting and killing Stewart will make Heyward a more stable person. A dying man's cry of "Nazi!" isn't going to convince the Americans that Heyward knew what he was talking about all along (instead of being stark raving mad). I hope he gets his stuff together and focuses more on helping the Colonies rather than on the Nazis from the Future(tm). Aside, of course, from the mysterious Mr. Black and his steroid-enhanced (?) sidekick Exeter, who ARE immediate concerns. But nothing that a few shots of eighteenth century cannister couldn't fix...

Looking forward to future developments in the myriad storylines you've got going, CatKnight. Good luck porting over your game!
 
I agree with Drago, Lyman Hall's speech was first rate. I could feel the blood boiling in his veins. Many possibilities in this situation. But I do think Tom needs to get away for awhile and recover. It's only a matter of time before his subordinates decide he's gone off the deep end and lock him up. As for Exeter I don't know what the hell he is but I don't think I want to run into him any time soon. :eek:

Joe
 
J. Passepartout: Indeed. That kind of execution was neither slow nor easy.

jwolf: Oh they did go overboard. That was the point. Black wanted to send a message, and it was received. As for Heyward's friends, we'll have to see.

Judas Maccabeus: :) In the 1780s it's not illegal to be a Catholic, but it's certainly going to draw notice in both England and America.

Machiavellian: I don't know if it will come to that, but if so then I'll have to learn how. I've decided to stay with 1.08 vanilla, so I have plenty of 'User defined' tags to play with...hmm...

Draco Rexus: No...the north wasn't impressed with Hall's speech. The split got their attention, which is exactly what Rutledge intended.

Stuyvesant: That's probably a good question. I'd have to look up the quorum rules by the Articles of Confederation. Eventually though it would have passed when the southerners returned.

As for our friend Heyward....well, it depends how you define it. Heyward is quite stable after finding Stewart. He's a stable obsessive-compulsive :( I'm honestly not sure where he's going to end up at this point.

Storey: No...Exeter's not feeling likeable at the moment. :)

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I've more or less successfully rebuilt the game. Europe turned out pretty much where it left off last game, I'm very pleased with that. North America needed a few custom events to exchange territory (lose Savannah, gain Canada, France annexes the Creek, etc.) but that should be about right. We should be ready to go, so it's time for the interlude. :)
 
-= Interlude =-

January - June 1782



North America, 1782
na1782.txt


These United States
The southern states didn't stay away from Congress for long. Their defection had never been meant to be anything but two-part warning and one-part threat while John Adams of Massachusetts and John Jay of New York offered Virginia the presidency if they'd return. Thomas Jefferson became the fourth Congressional president on February 4, 1782.

That is not to say all was well. Congressional unity, always vulnerable, had been shattered by the treaty and old rivalries flared to life. New York and New Hampshire bickered over the fate of Vermont, while Pennsylvania and Virginia fought for control of the lands seized from the Shawnee Indians. The 'Carolina/Virginia Assembly', established to improve southern cohesion during the second war, never disbanded and in fact added Maryland to their counsel. This was in clear violation of the Articles of Confederation which forbade such alliances, but they ignored northern protests.

Westward Ho!
Much of the land acquired in the last war was already claimed by Indians of course, though American foreign policy didn't reflect this. Any Indians south of the Ohio River were deported to the semi autonomous Shawnee Reserve, while those in Canada were required to conform to American law (and white dominance) or killed. This led to two uprisings, one near Fort Niagara and another by the Dakota border. General Arnold's triumphant return home was slowed long enough to clear Niagara of any residual native resistance and new colonists replaced the old. Colonists and traders also flooded to the Mississippi River valley, eager to settle and trade with their French allies. Christianity followed these hardy men and women west, but made little impact in the lives and beliefs of those natives who stayed.

In later years historians estimated the US population in 1782 was 1.1 million, mostly in Massachusetts, New York and Pennsylvania. Of this 92% belonged to various protestant sects, while another 4% followed the primitive Indian beliefs. Naturally this didn't include 'non-domesticated' Indians nor slaves.

Economy
American traders were welcome everywhere, and enjoyed strong positions throughout North and South America as well as in Portugal and Spain proper. As the economy shifted out of wartime requirements, the Congress under Jefferson's leadership heavily reinforced the local infrastructure emphasizing the need for a common and fair judicial system and efficient bureaucracy. Her small fleet - six frigates and ships of the line - pushed their pirate 'allies' out of the Atlantic.

Foreign Policy
The war established the United States as a dominant world power. On the British side, Denmark left the war after being blockaded by an overwhelming French navy, Portugal backed out after Spanish raiders swept through their homeland, the Shawnee and Creek were defeated peoples and Britain had lost most of her North American possessions. On the American side, Spain and France both backed out of the war after successful invasions struck deep into their nations, and in those last few days America had stood alone. She maintained an alliance with France, Spain, Baden and Switzerland, and had powerful and well connected embassies (RMs) in Portugal, Austria and Prussia as well. Britain still despised their former colonies of course, but that was to be expected.

If America had a weak spot, it was their new neighbor, the Royal Colony of Georgia. Reaction to the 'Betrayal at Philadelphia' was sharp and immediate. Those who still loved America defected to the tiny colony at Pensacola or north to Charleston, while younger men raided into South Carolina or harassed the English garrison..some say helped by a man dressed in black and his burly friend. Lyman Hall returned in March of that year, beaten but not broken. The English were as good as their word and let him live the rest of his life in peace, but never again would he travel north of the Savannah River, and never again would he speak of the United States with anything but contempt. Doctor Hall would die in 1784.

Having passed through Georgia, past the Altamaha River and later the Savannah, the Army of the South a/k/a the Army of Carolina a/k/a the US Fifth Army passed Beaufort and travelled along the post road to Charleston. The bloodied survivors of over three years war were going home.
 
Originally Posted by CatKnight
The bloodied survivors of over three years war were going home.

At least until the next round, right? I mean, we still have to go and take care of:
...younger men raided into South Carolina or harassed the English garrison..some say helped by a man dressed in black and his burly friend...

Georgia MUST be brought back into the fold AND the British need to be kicked out of the rest of the South! Honor not only demands it, but so does sound military doctrine! :D
 
Looks like a strong US. I'm seeing possibilities for the US tip of Florida as a prison colony. Either people imprisoned there will rot away, or they'll escape into British territories and cause mayhem over there! It's a win-win situation! :p

Your caption says "Atlantic territories not shown". Are there any more a-historical provinces the US has added to its dominion?
 
Draco Rexus: Oh...of course.

If the United States is still around in 1787, of course... ;)

Prufrock51: That's a guarantee. Georgia will be quite unstable for well... pretty much the rest of this AAR!

Stuveysant: Yep, plenty of room to hang myself with. :rofl: And yes. If you go back a few posts you'll see the EU2 map of the peace settlement. I picked up three territories in what's now Newfoundland/Labrador.
 
AND SO IT BEGAN

Thomas Heyward was a normal young man living in Britain during the Second World War. Illness kept him out of the service, which meant he was home when Germans dropped a nuclear bomb on London killing everyone he knew and loved. Begging for a chance to see his love again, Heyward woke up in 1772 South Carolina.

Masquerading as a member of Congress, Heyward travelled to Halifax to end a short, vicious war that secured American independence, but at the cost of Georgia and parts of Massachusetts and New York. Though it was possibly the best that could be hoped for, it left Americans bitter and angry. They immediately began preparations for a second go at the English.

John Preston, Heyward's ward after his father died at British hands, joined the army training under Colonel Jasen Exeter. Exeter ordered a very illegal 'training' raid into British occupied New York and Preston ran from the battle. He redeemed himself by rescuing his squad mates. Meanwhile he fell in love with a local, Cassandra Rafferty. They exchanged letters when feasible, but lost contact when Rafferty's father moved to York (Toronto.)

Having been relieved of command after the New York affair, Exeter began working directly for Edward Rutledge, the senior congressman from South Carolina. Rutledge and Exeter conspired to launch an attack on the Cherokee without congressional knowledge, hoping to win valuable land for the southern states. Heyward convinced Congress to intervene and, with the support of a Badener named Dieter von Zahringen, pursued Exeter into Cherokee territory. Exeter tried to capture him but Heyward escaped, days before the general's army was destroyed by an overwhelming Indian army.

Tom returned to Congress to find that Rutledge had him removed from office and assigned to the Army himself. It was there he learned that Preston ran into serious trouble. John had learned that Rafferty was apparently killed trying to slip across the American/British border and went temporarily mad with rage and grief. Heyward took him home to recover, but the grief lingered until von Zahringen dropped by and shook John out of his torpor.

The buildup to war was almost complete. America now had 100,000 soldiers under capable generals, and numerous partisans in the northern border territories. General Benedict Arnold struck north into Canada and almost turned coat, but retained his loyalties. General Benjamin Lincoln raced south past Georgia into what is now Alabama. His army was annihilated by Jasen Exeter, now in British uniform, who chased the beaten general across the Deep South.

Tom Heyward went to Charleston to raise a fresh army. Rutledge agreed, but only after forcing Heyward to swear to let Rutledge have his way in politics. Placed in charge of the 'new' army, Heyward annihilated Exeter's army at the Altamaha River in central Georgia.

Lord Cornwallis, meanwhile, outmaneuvered Arnold and pushed through New York into Pennsylvania. He was finally brought to heel in northern Virginia when first the 3rd New York Militia, led by Colonel Leyton, stalled him before Arnold arrived and crushed the British. They then merged and raced back north.

It was during the campaign to stop Cornwallis that Cornet Waymouth, John's former squad commander, was seriously wounded. Under British medical care he met up with Cassandra Rafferty, alive and unharmed. Apparently someone had stolen her papers before slipping over the lines and she now followed the British army as a nurse hoping to find Preston. When the Americans retook Albany he took her to Massachusetts, and from there to South Carolina.

In Charleston, she met Rutledge who promptly sent word to Heyward warning him that Preston had apparently been indiscreet. Tom told Preston to go home without explaining why, so John was surprised and delighted to find her. After a disastrous first meeting they renewed their friendship and engaged to marry. John returned to the fighting, leaving Cassie in Rutledge's care.

While he was gone, an assassin named Henry Stewart tried to kill Heyward, having done a number on American leadership throughout the war including the murder of George Washington. Stewart revealed himself as a Nazi sympathizer, also somehow brought through time to fight their private war one hundred fifty years in the past. Stewart failed, but the shock drove Tom somewhat mad and he started raving about 'true enemies' much to his friends' concern.

Both north and south were firmly in American hands, with no less than three British cities threatening to fall, when the British Foreign Office commissioned Captain John Andre to stop the war for them. Andre convinced the governor of New Hampshire to send him to Congress, where he helped pave the way for a treaty that gave America plenty of potential in the form of new land, but kept the established cities (including the Georgia colony) firmly under British control. The failure to regain Georgia was seen by some as a betrayal and Congress split.


MAJOR CHARACTERS:
* I expect these to be the main characters for Part 3. I could be mistaken, the story's changed many times before... :)

Thomas Heyward: Born in 20th century England, Heyward travelled back in time by means unknown. He's convinced that if America survives, he can stop the terrible future that resulted in London's destruction. Currently a general on the way home from years of hard fighting, Heyward's grown obsessed with the idea that the Nazis may have followed him to 1782.

John Preston is the only son of the former leader of the South Carolina Assembly, who was killed trying to escape imprisonment in 1773. Preston hates and despises the English for this and other slights, both real and imagined. Though happy America won the war, he feels the treaty is something of a betrayal since most of the southern army's advances were undone. He is a colonel on his way home to Charleston and his fiance, Cassandra Rafferty .

Edward Rutledge is without doubt the most powerful man in South Carolina. A former congressman, Rutledge now heads the Carolina/Virginia assembly, an 'alliance' of the southern states above and beyond the Articles of Confederation they share wtih the other states. Rutledge is a skilled diplomat and orator as well as a lawyer by trade living in Charleston. His master plan was completely wrecked by the treaty, which gave America vast lands in the north but almost none in the south, and he's currently rebuilding.

Cassandra Rafferty was raised in what is now western New York and lived in a tavern with her father, a strong British loyalist. She has a strong mischievous streak, but something serious happened to her when her father moved to York (Toronto.) When she finally returned to America years later she was changed - darker, more grim. She's currently in Charleston waiting for her fiance.

Dieter von Zahrigen is the second son of the Margrave of Baden. He came to America initially as a diplomat and military attache, but ignored his father's call to come home when Baden declined to join the second American/British war. He's grown to trust and rely on his Indian allies, who helped him act the part of the swashbuckling 'Le Lion' who harassed the English coastal settlements during the last war. After the war he disappeared into Cherokee territory to continue learning of their ways and customs.

Roland Steving is an artillery general who served with Heyward first as his commander, ten later as his subordinate. A Virginian and proud of it, Steving is extremely concerned by South Carolina's slow political dominance of their neighbors. He's returning to his family near Williamsburg.

Benedict Arnold, in the end, was the commander of the American northern army. He's proven to be proud and stubborn, and ignored Stewart's attempt to get him to turn coat. Arnold has stayed with his army, as he's now effectively the American commander in chief.

Colonel Leyton is the leader of the 3rd New York Militia, a now elite unit of cavalrymen who stalled Lord Cornwallis then crushed a larger force of infantry at Wolf Hill in New York. Leyton is an experienced tactician with a grim sense of humor who doesn't know the meaning of surrender.

Wesley Harding is a cornet (lieutenant) in Leyton's militia. He is the son of a merchant in Newport, Rhode Island and served with Preston in New York and Exeter in Cherokee territory. He's gone home to his family for now, eager for the break after several years in the field.

Cornet Waymouth was Preston and Harding's sergeant during their stay in New York. A tough and canny leader, Waymouth tried to protect Preston when he went mad, perhaps related to something in his own past. He was nearly killed fighting Cornwallis and nursed back to health by Rafferty. He took her to South Carolina before returning home, no longer fit for military service.

John Andre/Jonathan Andrews is a British spy who convinced the New Hampshire governor to nominate him for Congress. Andre was instrumental in pushing through the last treaty and now openly skirmishes with the New York representative over the fate of Vermont. Though still in Philadelphia, Andre is looking forward to the day he can go home as he fears detection and execution.

Thomas Jefferson is the Virginian who penned the Declaration of Independence in 1773. Jefferson is quiet, polite and self spoken. As a 'bribe' to convince the southern states to return to Congress following their defection, Jefferson was appointed President of Congress.

John Adams is the senior Massachusetts representative to Congress. Temperamental and somewhat undiplomatic, he's responded to the 'Carolina/Virginia' assembly by building a coalition of the New England states (Connecticut, Rhode Island, Massachusetts and New Hampshire.) He believes that only by building a strong coalition can he and his supporters maintain control of Congress.

Jasen Exeter was a former American general, then a former British general. He destroyed one southern army, only to be defeated by Heyward at Altamaha River. Preston found him begging in southern Florida, but rather than capture the 'traitor' he left the general to die. This was a mistake, as Exeter allied himself with Mr. Black who somehow transformed him into a powerful, hulking, near mindless brute. Exeter can't speak because a Cherokee brave stabbed him in the throat, severing his vocal cords. Last rumor has him causing trouble with Black in Georgia.

'Mister Black' is...an unknown. Apparently he's the one who arranged for Stewart to come to the 18th century, and rewarded Stewart's failure with a hideous death. Stewart thought he was a Nazi, but 'Black' apparently is more than that. He looks like a man dressed in black walking with a cane. As Stewart died he swore that since destroying America as a nation was no longer feasible, he would settle for crushing its soul. What he meant by that, or his future plans, is unclear.



COMING SOON:
Part III: What Price a Soul?
 
"What price a soul?" That sounds suitably demonic... Is Mr Black he of the cloven hoof and the little horns on the head?

Paranormal speculation aside, John Adams should think about carving new states out of conquered Canada. A sure way to increase the weight of the Northern states and upset the Southern states even more...

Thanks for the summary, it helps to refresh my memory (and no, Storey, it's not failing just yet!). Me, for some reason, I can't seem to keep Cornets Waymouth and Harding apart. So at least now I have them straight again. :)