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Well, that little update has brought up more than a few interesting threads that could blow up into major developments of the AAR. They definitely bear watching. :cool:

I feel for Tom, the poor bastard. I really wouldn't/don't envy him at all. Mayhap we'll read of him getting some relief before all is said and done?

I'm wondering where the devil Mr. Rutledge had himself off to during the wedding. Most peculiar. Most peculiar indeed.

Seeing the lengths that Cassie is/has gone to keep certain skeletons in her closet, just exactly what kind of skeletons does she have and when (note not if :D ) are they going to come out and do the most potential harm to our dear heroine?

Ah, so many questions. Canna wait to have 'em answered!
 
CatKnight said:
Cassie hesitated just long enough for John's heart to annex his throat.

Nice mix of EU and romantic metaphors. :) As for Cassie's skeletons, well after all she was raised as a tavern maid so I kind of suspected she had been involved in certain activities, either willingly or not. And she has reflected darkly on some very bad times after her family was killed. Remember that dream of vengeance she had? So yeah, her heart needs some healing that Preston may or may not be capable of providing. It's up to Cat. :p

Poor Tom, I can't imagine how he'll find a happy solution. Where is von Zahringen?
 
I was a little surprised to read Cassie considering her options right before her marriage to Preston. It seems she is at least in part getting married for the security a marriage offers. Reading her considering running, however fleeting, makes me wonder: what is she hiding, and what is she running from?

Not concerned about the changing-the-sheets routine, but I do wonder what it might signify regarding her other skeletons. Maybe there IS a birth certificate somewhere in Canada, maybe there's also a marriage certificate in Canada?

And Jwolf raised a good point, mentioning that long-forgotten (by me at least. And no, Storey, it doesn't mean I'm old!) bloody dream of Cassie... What is her secret and when will it blow up in her and everybody's face?

Questions, questions. All of a sudden, it seems Mrs. Preston, née Rafferty, is worthy of a lot more attention than I had been paying to her.
 
First of all, I cannot let the treaty go undiscussed... :mad: :mad: :mad:

We Georgians will never stand for such back-stabbing, sirrah! And you can bet your sweet boots that the bleedin' English will have no end of troubles here!!! And it's the reason you started the bloody war in the first place...Hrmph! :mad:

With that said...great writing Catknight. The Congress scene where the treaty is discussed was pitch-perfect. I can just watch the men making their show of support of Hall as they marched from the room.

As well - what the hell has Black done to Exeter? Some have suggested steroids before, but it sounds like that Nazi from Hellboy to me (can't recall the guys name - the one with the wind up heart.) Sounds extremely menacing and will take over for Stewart well. Should be a damn sight more successful I should think as well. Plenty gruesome, Stewarts death was on top of it. Excellent.

And now for the next part here - your setting up something with Cassie. Can't quite put my finger on it yet, but there is much more there than meets the eye. I was intrigued when she started having second thoughts. Maybe they were not second thoughts afterall, but fifth, sixth or seventh, eh?

And as for Heyward and Rutledge - still going strong - one in a mess of nerves, worry and confusion - the other seemingly in control but not quite getting his way the way he would like to. Their paths should be very interesting to watch through the next many pages.

As for trying your hand at another AAR, beware - it can be difficult to do more than one at a time. Others seem to be able to manage it fine, but I always find one of the two gets neglected. Just my two ducats. Glad I finally got caught up here. It's been a terribly enjoyable read as I did so and I'm looking forward to more.
 
LewsTherin: Hmm...without giving away too much I think I can say this:

Cassie has only one skeleton in her closet. Unfortunately it's the size of a brontosaurus.

Draco Rexus: Tom's brought some of this down on himself by being so reclusive. On the other hand, he's learning that a friendly Rutledge can be worse than a mortal enemy ;)

jwolf: von Zahringen is with the Cherokee. I'll try to pan over to him in the next few posts and we'll see how he's doing.

Stuyvesant: She's running from a lot of course, but much of her hesitation was simple nerves. While women in the 18th century certainly expected to get married (and society pretty much demanded it,) it often meant a loss of freedom. Wives were only a few steps up from property in many cases. Of course love won out. For now at least.

coz1: You're the second one to associate Mr. Black with the Nazi from Hellboy. I see I'm going to have to do some research now - I've never seen it. And don't worry, Georgia's not done ... not by a long shot.

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Again, apologies for the delays. (I seem to be doing that a lot lately :( ) I was rather ill last week and it took some time before I could remember there actually was a revolution and I was writing a story set in it!
 
-= 104 =-

1 August, 1782
Williamsburg, Virginia



"Aaron?" Brigadier General Roland Steving glanced at his slave. "Bourbon for me, and ... I believe it was scotch for you, sir?"

"Scotch is fine. Thank you." Thomas Heyward studied Aaron, dressed in a light blue waistcoat and breeches and wearing a powdered wig that clashed horribly with his ebony skin.

"We'll take our drinks on the terrace," Steving added. Aaron bowed and left.

Tom followed the older general to his terrace, whitewashed and spotless overlooking acres of his plantation. In the distance he could see field slaves picking tobacco and its distinctive, heavy scent filled the air. "It was good of you to see me."

"Not at all, General!" Steving beamed, drawing a handkerchief and wiping his forehead. "It's always good to see old friends. Please sit. I declare," he chuckled, "after what we've seen I should be used to heat, though this summer seems particularly onerous. Or perhaps I'm just getting old."

It probably didn't help that Roland was only one step below formal attire, with a thick waistcoat and breeches and an open jacket, but Tom merely smiled as the slave returned.

"Thank you, Aaron," Steving took his drink and sipped. Alcohol in heat was of course ridiculous, but it helped ease a nagging toothache and he smiled at his guest. "Word of your coming outpaced you by some days."

Heyward grimaced. "Rutledge?"

"No! Not directly at any rate. No, certain members of the state legislature believe your coming to Williamsburg is a God send. Coincidentally enough, these are the same people who encourage closer relations with our southern neighbors."

"Coincidentally." Tom sipped at the scotch and grimaced.

"Is there something wrong?"

"Not at all. Though now that I think about it, in this heat I'd love some lemonade if that can be arranged."

"Of course it can. Aaron!?"

While they waited, Steving gave his inexpert opinion about politics ('a tool of the devil, no doubt originally rooted in the sins of Sodom and Gomorra') and politicians (`a pack of old women, not unlike his grandmother, except while his grandmother would cane him if he deserved it, politicians would poll the other children and debate endlessly before deciding on an appropriate punishment three years later.') He paused at his guest's expression. "Do you disagree?"

It was a matter of public record Tom had served his stint in Congress, though he didn't consider himself a politician. "No," he smiled. "You're just usually not so....direct?"

"Of course I am," he huffed, "you just haven't noticed. I fought for this country and what she stands for, same as you. I bled for her. I watched good men die ... too many good men. I'll be damned if I won't use those liberties we fought to protect!"

"So you're running for office?" Heyward looked up and nodded his thanks to Aaron, taking the lemonade.

"God, no!" Steving shook his head and sipped at his bourbon, then studied his guest warily. "Though I will tell you true, sir. I do not care for what's happening. Not at all."

"The alliance with the Carolinas?" Tom knew of his disagreement with General Allen during the St. Augustine campaign.

"That's part of it. At least the way it's handled. I don't much mind they're attempting to turn you into a war hero, God knows children needs all the guidance they can find, but these state wide tours are really quite enough."

"I agree."

"I thought you might," Roland smiled faintly. "This isn't your style at all." Everyone, which is to say Rutledge, state governors and even some businessmen, believed it vital that 'their hero' was out among the masses putting a face to the savage war they'd just fought. A victorious face. 'It will comfort them amazingly knowing you're out there,' one soothed, 'unyielding to his enemies, supportive of his friends. You are the symbol this country needs after years of hardship, the promise that the worst has past.' As a result Tom found himself bustled from town to town for the past month. "General, do you know much about military history?"

"Not I."

"You know I have. I've learned, sir, that any time a government goes this far out of their way to idealize their generals ... something's wrong. Bread and circuses, sir. Give the populace something to admire while the true corruption eats at the fabric of their society when they aren't watching. Rome is perhaps the best example, but they hardly stand alone."

Tom jumped slightly at the word 'true' and studied his artillery general with renewed interest. "What do you think is happening then?"

"I think your Mister Rutledge wants to be king," Steving answered bluntly.

"I thought the whole idea of this rebellion was to throw off the monarchy," Tom barked, alarmed.

"That was my understanding as well." He smiled grimly at his guest's expression, satisfied he'd raised a grain of caution in his friend. "I'm probably mistaken."

Tom nodded. "Where's Daryl?" he asked abruptly.

"Daryl?" His sister's child, formerly his assistant until the south campaign turned brutal. "He's in Austria!"

"Austria? What's he doing there?"

"Continuing to learn his trade, I imagine. Our allies are quiet now that we are, I certainly can't send him to England in the current balance. Austria's moderately friendly and they're fighting the Poles, who I must say are putting up no kind of fight whatsoever. The Prussians mauled them cruelly last year and word is the Austrians are doing the same. I doubt they'll last the century in the current balance."

Tom thought of 1939 and frowned. "It doesn't seem fair."

"Fairness doesn't enter into it," Steving disagreed. "A nation's first responsibility, above anything, must be to the safety and security of its citizens. The Polish government is no longer able to fulfill its responsibilities. It must stand aside for those who can. What if we'd lost at Altamaha River, if the Redcoats ran through Charleston, Wilmington, Williamsburg. Would we really be able to claim authority over the folk here if we couldn't protect them from their enemies? That seems less fair."

"Yes, but by that logic anyone, no matter how cruel, has the right to conquer his neighbors if he's strong enough to do so. You can't believe that."

"I believe the 'cruel' one is welcome to try. Military history also teaches that whenever someone goes too far - wants too much, or treats his subjects so barbarically that he loses his right of sovereignty - God ensures someone will come to redress the balance."

You're wrong, Tom thought grimly.

Steving sensed their conversation had taken a dark turn and his guest was brooding. That wouldn't do at all. "Are you attending the ball tonight?" he asked lightly. To his surprise, Heyward just grimaced more.

"I am. I thought about claiming to be sick, but I think that would insult too many people."

"Why don't you want to go? Half the town's coming out to see you."

"I didn't ask for this publicity, Roland. Maybe you're right and they're up to something. All I know is I'm starting to feel like the prize horse at the fair. Not to mention I'm apparently for sale."

"Eh?"

"Haven't you heard? Those bastards keep trying to find me a wife."

Steving nodded gravely. "And that is...disagreeable?" he asked mildly. Rumors in the army began circulating when it became apparent Heyward had no interest in the comforts of any of the female camp followers. He wasn't married, no fiance to be loyal to. Could he be...?

"I'm not looking for a wife," Tom answered sharply.

Just so. "Still, they make good camouflage. Women, I mean. I cannot tell you how many awkward situations my own Beth has pulled me out of." At Heyward's hooded, even cold expression he continued. "If you want them to stop ... trying to help you, then you must deny them a target. That is logic. Find someone you don't mind talking to that seems comely enough and pay attention to her. Your... people... will be at ease, and if anything happens, or nothing at all, I would say that's between the two of you."

Heyward frowned. "I'm not going to use someone like that."

"As you will," Roland shrugged, rising. "Though she would be using you also, make no mistake. There are many women who are happy to have someone around to deflect unwanted attention, and of course there's the prestige of being associated with a war hero." He smirked at the last. "Plus, you might not have to go to so many balls."

Tom grumbled and stood. "Perhaps." He smiled wanly. "Thank you, I'll consider it."

"Do that!" And go home. I like you Tom, but get your Carolinan master the hell out of my state!
 
I think that Steving is actually correct, in a sense, when he says God sends someone to redress the balance, because Heyward has travelled in time to redress the exceedingly evil and unbalanced country of his time, Germany.

Even if it is not God, per se, sending him back in time, it might as well be.
 
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Rutledge as King? That's interesting. Seems he certainly likes player with power, though I'd suggest more as power broker than power giver. But that's just me.

And I'd actually meant to suggest above that I thought the new (and improved?) Exeter was the one that seemed like the Nazi from Hellboy. Do check it out. The movie was quite good (can't speak for the actual comic.)
 
Glad to see that someone else is concerned about dear Rutledge!
 
Hmmm, It seems that with the death of Washington a new king must be chosen... Or a new Washington must arise.... :D I am really looking forward to the Constitutional Convention.... Or are you going to let that pass? Great update as usual! Thanks!
 
Dead William said:
Hmmm, It seems that with the death of Washington a new king must be chosen... Or a new Washington must arise.... :D I am really looking forward to the Constitutional Convention.... Or are you going to let that pass? Great update as usual! Thanks!

King! Washington was perhaps the only American with even an infinitesmal chance of become an American monarch. :)
 
Caught up after an absense. Great stuff.
 
Interesting politics playing out in the background. Can't say that Rutledge strikes me as a likely king, but he sure seems the type who'd enjoy holding on to the reins of power from the shadows. Still hope he won't get his way, I still have a healthy dislike of the man. :)

I also enjoy the unfolding of Tom's dilemma: staying true to his maybe-atomised-maybe-forever-unreachable-yet-maybe-still-out-there girlfriend from the 20th century (I forgot her name, was it Jessie?) will mean people will get some wholy unfounded suspicions, but if he does take a wife as camouflage, it will mean the betrayal of the one thing that keeps him going. I had never even thought of that particular obstacle in Tom's path before, I just focused on the battles. And Rutledge's manipulations. And the Nazi assassins. And... Tom's life is just not going to be easy, is it? ;)
 
Just a quick note:

A lightning storm fried my modem (again!) Sunday. At least it was 56K this time, should be easy to replace tonight. I hope.

So, I'll be back in business tonight or tomorrow!
 
Good...I haven't posted much, but I have been lurking and enjoying the story so far.
 
Hmm... So if I have this correctly, so far you've had one (1) CTD and two (2) fried modems? Has the mysterious Mr Black taken a personal interest in preventing you to tell this story? :rolleyes:

Anyhow, hope you can get back on your internet feet quickly (and without too much money changing hands) and continue onward! :)
 
Mettermrck: Yep, Steving's pretty good at giving the big picture. God knows he's read enough! If he was real and living now he'd probably be a EU2 player teaching military history at West Point. :)

J. Passepartout: When Steving said that I was thinking of EU2's badboy ratings. :rofl:

coz1: Actually I'm not sure if Rutledge would want to be king or not. He'd certainly like the power and respect that would engender...but he doesn't necessarily want the bullseye on his chest any more than the next man.

Draco Rexus: Well, one of Rutledge's failings is he never learned when to stop.

Dead William: I'm...not sure how to answer your question, honestly. I have no intention of ignoring a constitutional convention, but it's a little early time wise...and by 1787 I expect there will be other things to write about. Still, it's not something I want to miss, not with these congresses. :D

Mettermrck: Well...yes and no. You are entirely correct of course, in our timeline. In this one Washington didn't get much done before Stewart assassinated him. It's theoretically possible someone with less scruples might rise to fill the gap...but in this scenario it couldn't be Rutledge. It'd have to be a war hero.

King Tom. Nah...

Sir Humphrey: Thanks! Welcome back!

Stuyvesant: Tom has the most difficult journey by far I'm afraid, for the reasons you've lain out. Everyone's after him, including his 'friends', he has a terrible burden and can never be truly at home. This next part deals with his feelings somewhat. He has a lot to cope with, and really there's no one who can help him. I don't know how well he'll hold together.

Amric: Thanks, Good to hear from you!

Stuyvesant: Actually you're mistaken, it's:
1 CTD
2 Fried Modems
1 elongated and painful move
1 well...troubled time offline.

So clearly I'm going for the record of most troubled AAR that somehow limped through regardless. I also suspect Mister Black....I think I need an exterminator. :mad:
 
-= 105 =-

5 September, 1782
Charleston, South Carolina



"A fine day! Mister Calvert, Good afternoon! And this is your wife? A lovely creature! Oh, pardon me! Captain Marken? A word with you!" Edward Rutledge loved these 'small parties' of forty or sixty people that started in his sitting room and spread out the door onto his porch and lawn. He wore a full black suit and coat despite the heat, moving with the ease and grace of a swan from banker to lawyer, politician to ship owner to soldier. He could effortlessly track who knew what, owed what to whom, and what they all wanted. He enjoyed doing so. He enjoyed having his finger on the pulse of all that happened in South Carolina and extending his influence to get what he wanted. Today, however, one of his subjects was being stubborn...

"Captain Marken? I thought you would watch General Heyward for me?"

Marken, a handsome man in his mid-twenties intent on a girl whose family owed Rutledge some favors, grimaced. "I tried, but he eluded me. He asked me to get him something to drink, and when I turned back he was gone again."

"Captain Marken, I do not need to tell you how important it is for him to see and be seen right now," Rutledge began reasonably. "I do not give a farthing for his state of mind. I beg you, find him and bring him....nay, just find him and come back to me. I'll deal with him myself." This was preposterous: Didn't the fool realize what he was trying to do for him?

Thomas Heyward had been a stranger to Charleston these last few years, keeping mostly to himself and engaging in only the most basic civilities. Rutledge even doubted this was the Thomas Heyward who'd grown up here, and frankly he didn't care. The man had done well, for all his vexing qualities. He'd destroyed General Exeter, he'd pursued the British to the mouth of the Mobile river. People looked to him for leadership, and so far he'd been somewhat surly and certainly ungrateful for everyone's efforts to help. He had no wife, no fiance, few friends, and a reputation for cold disinterest Rutledge meant to shatter. Yes, certainly he was using the man's war triumphs to further Carolina's reputation and agenda...but he had much to offer in return: A home. A community. He was sure once Heyward understood the importance of home and hearth, as well as the need to protect them from any and all threats they could do amazing things...

Colonel John Preston and his flushed, canister-marked face caught Rutledge's eye. He wore the full uniform for his rank, sans sword and sweat visibly as he hurried across the yard carrying a glass of punch like it was the Holy Grail. Cassie stood in the shade of an old elm tree, dressed in sky blue, fanning herself and clearly enjoying her momentary superiority as he approached. Now that she was safely married Rutledge could admit - to himself - that he liked the way she looked. Her eyes held the unspoken, defiant challenge of an unbroken stallion, she could brighten a room with a grin and toss of her head. His wife could do that too, lighten moods with a smile and kind words, but it'd taken her years to master that particular skill while it came naturally to Cassie. And her breasts... well, they were hard to miss.

John gave her the glass then chatted, watching the others like an eager hawk ready to defend its young. He understood the importance of defending one's own. Why couldn't he have been the general? Rutledge shook his head and chuckled. He walked over to pay his respects when a flash of red and blue caught his eye. When one wanted to have a successful party of forty people one had to be observant. The lawyer's laughter died, and though the smile never left his face his eyes narrowed. Got you!
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I think the bastard's actually widened it, Thomas Heyward thought to himself staring down into a trench that ran from just beyond the right side of Rutledge's house and one hundred yards belong. Little grew there, nothing but a few brave blades of grass, almost like someone with a very large plow saw fit to till the land. It was an ugly, homely scar in an otherwise immaculate lawn and for the life of him Tom couldn't figure out why it hadn't been filled in and reseeded years ago.

The trench, at least originally, had been his 'gift' to Rutledge following a few careless comments. While practicing with the artillery the lawyer had provoked him, and Heyward retaliated by sending a ball through his house. He'd been foolish to let himself be provoked and criminally negligent - he didn't realize at the time Rutledge was married and hadn't considered the servants. Fortunately everyone escaped injury and now the only sign of their disagreement was this furrow that defiantly refused to heal.

He didn't like Rutledge. He didn't like the man shamelessly played with peoples lives, needs, desires and loyalties as if they were pawns on some chess board. He found Rutledge extremely selfish and self-centered, and occasionally shockingly blind to what was going on around him. Still, he had to admit the man was effective. If you needed something done and were willing to sell a small part of your soul to do it, he was your man. Like my promise to give him a free reign in politics.

In truth Tom didn't care about that anymore though. Let the man do what he wanted. Did it really matter to him? He'd accomplished his goals, he'd shattered his timeline, and it hadn't brought him one step closer to going home or seeing Jessie again. Whoever or however he wound up in the 1770s had a sick sense of humor and Heyward didn't want to play anymore. Stewart, the only confirmed Nazi, was dead. For all he knew 'Mister Black' was a raving madman's dying illusion, and as for whoever nailed him to a tree...he'd done the country, no the entire world a favor. Maybe it was over. Maybe it was over and this was his reward, not victory or love or hope but simply being allowed to continue in this strange place and time. He'd rather be dead, at least then he'd have a chance to see his family and fiance once more, and if he wasn't certain committing suicide would deny him even that slim chance then....

...No, that was crazy talk, and anyway it wasn't even true. Not really. His dreams of Jessie and home had finally stopped to be replaced by nothing, neither sorrow nor grief, sadness nor rage. Nothing at all. Tom felt like he walked through and lived in a fog and simply didn't care. The Nazis were done, and even if they weren't...what was it Steving said? 'They're welcome to try.'

Behind him Tom could hear Rutledge approaching with some woman. Oh God, not again! He turned, and yes, the damnable man had found some other trollop to throw at him. This one was probably about thirty, with red hair tied high almost in a bun and a yellow dress with long, white gloves. At least she seemed to have some pride, for she looked quite as indignant as he felt.

"General Heyward! I am so happy to have found you!" Rutledge gushed. He actually wouldn't have cared if Tom wanted to stare at his trench all day, but he'd be damned if he'd let the man sulk while people wanted to meet and talk with him! "General, this is Mrs. Whiting. Mrs. Whiting, General Heyward."

Mrs.? "Your servant," Tom answered grimly, remembering at the last to make his leg. She curtsied in reply. "Your husband is a very lucky man."

Her eyes flashed daggers at him and Rutledge intervened. "Colonel Whiting is dead, General. I believe you knew him. He died during the retreat from Mobile a few years ago."

Oh.... "I'm sorry," Tom flushed. "For your loss."

Anne Whiting stared at him. She knew very well what Rutledge was about and resented it. While it might be true what the other women said, that he was reasonably handsome, and somewhat fierce and protective somewhere behind the joyless facade, but she hadn't needed someone introducing her to men in fifteen years and she'd be damned to start now. Plus, she had no interest in another man, the pain of her loss still relatively fresh...and now this buffoon was 'sorry?' Half the town was 'sorry,' and it hadn't changed anything. Insufferable.

"Thank you," she replied, forcing a smile. "He wrote often of you." This was a blatant lie, but she was annoyed and enjoyed the panic in Heyward's eyes. To her surprise his eyes focused and he returned her gaze directly.

"Then that must have been your husband I met just before the final battle," Heyward replied. Mobile had been the vital clue, and now he could dimly recall the man swearing vengeance for the loss of their cavalry. "He was a brave man."

Whiting's eyes flickered downward, unsure whether to believe him or not. "Thank you," she repeated finally.

Good enough, Rutledge judged after another moment or two. "I am going to see to my other guests," he informed them smiling. "I'm sure you'll find something to talk about. Mrs. Whiting, feel free to ask him about that hole in my lawn." His grin broadened at Heyward's shocked expression and he walked off.

"I think I'd rather talk about you, you old goat," Tom muttered after him. To his surprise, Whiting smiled.