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Hmmm, now there's a woman who might get Tom out of his doldrums. And a Tom without doldrums might just surprise a few people of course.

Are you going to keep calling her Whiting? It would be sort of neat.

Oh, Mettermrck, I still think Tom has the best papers of becoming the replacement for Washington. Unless Arnold gets promoted to the top spot. I think those two are the only real candidates since the death of Kosciuski. Preston is an idjit and Rutledge not a war hero. We'll see. No doubt, we'll see.
 
I quite frankly am hoping somewhat that Rutledge's plans to hook up Tom fail utterly, but I don't really have a good reason to hope this.

I think it would be both consistant with the story and hoghly amusing if Arnold were to become king, assuming of course that a king is eventually chosen.
 
Nice turn of events.... mayhap Mrs Whiting will assist Tom in loosing his coldness and allow him to lossen up a tad bit?
 
Very nice update. I especially enjoy the base name, White, as compared to Mr. Black. Was that on purpose? I'm not so sure Whiting and Heyward're going to hit it off right away, but eventually...? If anything, I could see Whiting finding out about Jessie and tearing into Rutledge or someone else and letting them know that the rumors about Tom aren't true.
 
Dead William: I'll probably keep Whiting since that's her name. :) As for whether she can get Tom out of his doldrums..I'm not sure. He's starting to surprise me.

J. Passepartout: Well, king or president makes little odds when the time comes. The first president will be appointed rather than elected. Washington's elections in 1788 and 92 were little more than charades with delegates going through the motions. Arnold is definitely one of the main contenders, since he's assumed Washington's role as Army Commander in Chief and enjoyed quite a bit of success in the north. Heyward (to go back to William) might be a contender for the same reason, but here Rutledge's manipulations would betray him. I can't see the northern delegates handing the presidency to a Carolinan in the current balance. If there was an election right now, though, the major politicians like Rutledge, Jefferson, John Jay of New York and Adams would also throw their hats in. It'd be sheer chaos.

Draco Rexus: Perhaps. As I said, Tom's starting to surprise me. He definitely will need help in the days ahead and needs to snap out of his cold lethargy. Tom's greatest weakness is that he feels disconnected and remote from those around him. It makes sense given his twentieth century memories. He absolutely needs to snap out of that if he's going to have any kind of chance against 'Mister Black.'

jwolf: Yes, if nothing else Heyward's found an ally against Rutledge. In game....yes, I suppose you could call it the calm before the storm. Nothing much happened in the EU2 'verse during this time, though you'll see it wasn't entirely quiet in the next few chapters. Right now I'm building up again...there are certain things that pretty much HAVE to happen for the plot to go forward. (Assuming it doesn't change on me again.)

Samuel Clemens: Actually no, that was entirely coincidental.

We don't know Black's real name. Stewart called him that because Black has a habit of wearing...well, black. Black clothes, black cane. As for Mrs. Whiting, a whole slew of posts ago right before Jasen Exeter destroyed Lincoln's southern army, Heyward debated a Colonel Whiting concerning the Code of Hammurabi. This is his widow.
 
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21 September, 1782
Georgia (near modern Statesboro, northwest of Savannah)



Edward Grey knelt in the perpetually moist soil of his farm, picking through leaves ravaged by too much water and far too many insects. Yes, that cabbage was good enough, and it went in a sack joining the rest of his meager bounty. It wasn't much, but it would just do..for now. Fortunately the Georgia winters were exceptionally mild and, so long as he didn't foolishly exhaust the soil and picked crops carefully, there was no reason he couldn't keep growing right through the year. That was probably the only reason his gamble was at all possible.

Being out here was a gamble. They were two days from the nearest British garrison, a small fort on the Carolina border, and three to five from Savannah itself. No help then if the crops turned bad or if he or his wife became ill. They were too close to the Cherokee, and while they showed no interest in his land and even traded once in a long while, if one of their patrols turned ugly.... Edward instinctively raised his head and looked across the low, swampy ground towards the distant foothills. He saw nothing of course, nothing but trees half-doubled on themselves, thin upper branches almost touching the ground.

Being away from Savannah had its good points as well. For one thing, no one contested how much land he chose to claim for himself, and with just a little more money he might go down to Savannah and make it legal. It might take the rest of his life, but one day his yet to be born son or daughter would own a vast estate. Yes, that was something to look forward to, something to make the long days worthwhile. It also kept him out of politics.

When the second American/British war started, Edward was just old enough to slip across the border and join the Army of the South under Lincoln. He'd fought credibly until the disaster at Mobile when he'd simply gone home, watching sullenly as American and Brit alike sacked Savannah. In the end other than a lot of people being killed nothing had changed and he was sick of the lot.

Grey lifted the sack onto his shoulders. This was enough for tonight, and a few of the turnips needed more time anyway. Next would come the animals: a horse for their cart and plow, a cow and bull for meat and milk, and three pigs because they were cheap and easy to maintain. Normally he'd see to the animals and his wife to the garden, but Amanda had been sick this last week. She insisted it was a simple fever, but he could hear her wheezes when she talked and feared pneumonia. How in God's name would he get a doctor here?

He stopped as the three pigs started squealing, all at once. The horse neighed loudly and backed against the thin fence of its corral. Edward looked over and saw four men - he assumed they were men - approaching on horseback. All dressed in white robes slit at the legs with white cloaks billowing in the wind, and all wore white executioner's masks. They spotted him, and the one on the left barked something and pointed.

"Amanda!" Edward cried, dropping his sack and running for the cabin and his rifle. "Bolt the door! Raiders!" The pro-American raids had grown steadily worse over the last few months, and once even a British patrol had been ambushed. This was more their style though, isolated farms or travelers on the road from St. Augustine. Damn them!
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"The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots and tyrants." Eric Crawford muttered this statement, first offered by Thomas Jefferson at the end of the 1773 War of Independence, morning and night almost as a prayer to some forgotten god. Of course, it was far preferable if only the tyrants bled but that wasn't always possible and then he fell back on a seventeenth century poet, Matthew Prior: "The ends must justify the means." As far as Crawford was concerned, freedom justified anything.

Having been forsaken by the cowards in Philadelphia, there was only one way left to secure Georgia's freedom: Make the land ungovernable. Crawford reasoned, correctly, that the great nations of Europe kept colonies primarily for the resources and prestige they offered. Therefore, if Georgia simply became more expensive than it was worth, if it became a constant drain on English coffers and manpower...then they just might give up.

He was a patriot, or at least he thought so. His companions had other motives: Jacob was an escapee from the American prison colonies in southern Florida, a murderer who won deportation from Baltimore rather than death, but could now expect nothing if caught but a noose. Ephraim had been a 'privateer' until the Americans cleared the seas and his ship ran aground near Savannah where most of the crew was hung for piracy. He didn't care about revenge, but he did like money. There were enough patriots with money willing to pay others to do the raiding for them.

Eric didn't think about that now though, he thought of the fleeing farmer. He signaled again and Ephraim broke off to secure the animals; they would be very welcome back at camp. Eric drew his sword, an American cavalry saber and swung. A glancing blow, just enough to break the farmer's scalp and force him to the ground. Jacob galloped right behind, trampling the fool beneath steel-clad hooves.

Crawford turned sharply, sawing with his reins to pull away from the cabin. He trotted to the groaning farmer who didn't try to get up, but, simply lay on his stomach gasping with blood trickling from his mouth and his right side partially caved. He waved Jacob over and pointed. "I wanted this done cleanly." He'd do what had to be done for liberty, but saw no reason for senseless brutality.

Jacob wiped his nose and glared at the farmer like it was his fault. "I'll tak' care o' it," he promised, leaping off his horse and drawing a wicked curved knife, almost like a miniature scimitar.

Eric grimaced and turned to the cabin. It was small, pale wood already dark from water stains and slightly raised on a foundation. It wasn't likely anyone out here would have anything worth taking, less food and animals of course, but it didn't hurt to check. He dismounted and marched to the door. Locked, which meant someone was inside. Before he could address this stranger the farmer's dying shriek filled the air.

"Jacob!" He whirled as the murderer lifted a bloody scalp grinning like he'd found a new toy.

"Wut?"

"There's someone in here." Eric knocked hard. "Open up and we won't hurt you!" No response. "Open the door!"

"Look out!" Jacob dove to the ground as a musket barrel poked out the open window. It fired, filling the warm, humid air with acrid smoke.

"Get out of here!" someone screamed. A woman. Christ, what kind of fool dragged a woman out here? Crawford glared at the dead farmer.

"I got her!" Jacob howled. He hated being shot at almost as much as he feared the noose, and he charged.

"Wait!" Eric roared, but he was too late. Jacob threw his heavy body into the window frame, shattering it and falling inside in a shower of glass and wood. A thump, like wood on wood, then a roar followed by a piercing scream. More thumps, something heavy slammed into the door from the inside, a wail and a sob. Crawford stood back, saber out as someone released the door's bolt and it opened slowly.

Jacob stood there, flushed, blood dribbling from his hands. He wiped them, still holding his bloody knife. Behind him a mass on the floor sobbed. He grinned nastily. "No problem!"

"The next time I say wait," Crawford snarled, "I mean wait!"

"I have her first," Jacob added, turning his back. He froze as Eric jabbed him in the back with his sword. "'Ey! Don' worry I'll share!"

"Go help Ephraim with the animals," Eric hissed.

"Later! She shot a' me, I'm gon'have some fun first!" The murderer turned slowly, as if to reason, but abruptly lashed out with his knife. He caught Eric's sword deflecting it away and lunged forward. Crawford had served too many years to fall for such a simple ploy, however. As his blade deflected away to the right, he caught Jacob with a left hook followed by his sword hilt. Jacob's hands immediately rose to protect his broken and bloody nose through the mask. Crawford grabbed him by the shirt and threw him outside. He turned cooly, standing between Jacob and the woman with both hands on his blade.

"Don't ever do that again."

Jacob sat up, still protecting his nose and glared, then stood and ran to the animals. Crawford sighed and turned. Amanda Grey had regained her knees. Along with an obvious fever - face bright red but not a trace of sweat - she sported several scratches and bruises and Jacob had already seen fit to tear the bodice of her dress. She clutched it close and glared at him, more angry than afraid, nor did she stop when he retrieved a blanket so she could cover herself.

"I apologize for your treatment," Crawford told her solemnly.

"You killed my husband," Amanda spat.

"Yes."

"Why!?"

"Freedom." He gave her another moment to collect her wits, then brought his blade down: He watched the gathering red pool somberly, wiped his sword, and sheathed it. "The blood of patriots and tyrants," he murmured.
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There are rules; standards of conduct that govern everything a civilized man can possibly run into. Some of them come from God, some from country and family. Some sneak in as etiquette and custom, and still others are just common decency. These hard lessons Dieter von Zahringen learned at the knee and occasional strap of his Baden schoolmasters, and though he believed some of those rules could be bent and twisted without defying God's will, there were lines no honorable nor civilized man dare cross.

This, he thought looking over the smoking remains of a farmer's cabin and the scalped bodies of man and wife, came awfully close. The Badener wasn't some idealistic fool, he knew people died in war and occasionally civilians wound up in the middle...but there hadn't been a battle here. No sign either of them were British soldiers or spies. This wasn't war, but murder.

Von Zahringen's American uniform was long gone, and that from Baden lay with his rifle within the walled camp of the Echota; they weren't taking any chances after Exeter's raid several years before. Today his clothing was simple tan leathers, his only weapon a knife. He signaled to two of his Cherokee friends, pointed at the bodies and made scooping motions. Both frowned, one folded his arms. Von Zahringen gestured 'please,' and one grimaced producing a sharp stake. He didn't blame them, it would be an arduous few hours for even a minimal burial and they didn't like being around dead people any more than the next man. Especially dead white people. The German had been shocked to learn the distrust, animosity and even contempt between white man and red ran both ways. If not for the technological differences coupled with a strong desire to remain in their ancestral lands the Cherokee would have happily risen up generations ago. They saw the white settlements as a plague, and though they merely disapproved of the French (who at least had the decency to destroy their ancient enemy the Creek,) they hated Englishmen, and absolutely loathed Americans. When he'd arrived in Cherokee lands after the war it'd been a dicey few days while they decided what to do with him. One powerful contingent, mostly young braves, would've seen him killed but the new chief stepped in. He was a proud, wise and seemingly ancient man whose name translated as 'Bear Claw'. Von Zahringen couldn't pronounce Cherokee names for the life of him.

The Badener liked the Cherokee, even the ones who didn't think so much of him. Their life seemed simpler, more pure, without the intricate courts of Europe where a frown meant trouble and a smile promised worse, and your best friend today might be your mortal enemy tomorrow. At least the Indians told you to your face if they didn't like you. As for these rebels fighting British rule in Georgia ... he didn't really care either way. He applauded their cause, but despised their tactics - and anyway two nations fighting for honor and glory was far different than a small grass roots rebellion. He wouldn't have fought for America in '73, and would be perfectly happy to let these raiders and the Brits sort out their own mess if not for the scalpings. Most Indians didn't scalp their victims, but enough did to make it almost a trademark for those who would demonize the 'ungodly savages.' The British would assume the Cherokee destroyed this farm and others and retaliate. That was intolerable.

Some hours later the two bodies, wrapped in furs were lowered onto a bed of sticks within a hole. Von Zahringen muttered a Catholic prayer, it was the least and the most he could do for them. No, he realized, staring at the corpses as his companions began shoving dirt over them. Not the most. Not quite.

"Can you track who did this?" he asked one of the Cherokee in his abhorrent and laughable attempt at their tongue. The Indian looked around for some moments then nodded.

"Then we hunt." Von Zahringen drew his knife and they were off.
 
CatKnight Some hours later the two bodies said:
Hmmm Von Zahringen is back. Now let's see how the "Patriots" are dealt with. Very nice update, been some time since we saw him. What do the Cherokee call him, "He who speaks atrociously"? Thanks, DW
 
I liked the raiding scene. Especially the confrontation with the woman at the end.

"You killed my husband," Amanda spat.

"Yes."

"Why!?"

"Freedom." He gave her another moment to collect her wits, then brought his blade down: He watched the gathering red pool somberly, wiped his sword, and sheathed it. "The blood of patriots and tyrants," he murmured.


Good stuff...:)
 
I'm glad Passepartout caught that resemblance to the KKK of the raiders, I was afraid I might have been the only one.

As for the return of our dear Badener and see him on the hunt. This should prove to be interesting and quite enjoyable from a vengence point of view, eh?
 
No peace and calm for poor Georgia, it seems. Nor, in an entirely different way, for Tom Heyward. :) It must be only a matter of time before the next round of fighting between the British and the Americans. In the mean time, I guess Heyward could do worse than find himself a token wife. Perhaps a companion, rather than a lover.

Will be interesting to see how Heyward will deal with the pressures on him. And I hope Von Zahringen will catch up with his raiders. Brutal scum that won't do any good either way.
 
I enjoyed the reference to the earlier "spat" between Heyward and Rutledge. Funny that Rutledge left the trench. And I wonder where you might be able to take this Mrs. Whiting. Certainly a new and interesting dynamic for Tom.

And I was intrigued that you chose to utilize an early klan for raids in Georgia. Whether it is believable or not, it certainly is an interesting choice and helps to place the brutality somewhat.

I might quibble slightly with how you characterize the Cherokee. They actually took well to the English/American customs - considered by white men at least as the "civilized tribe" because they made effort to mix in and take upon themselves the anglo-saxon ways. That's what makes the Trail of Tears so very disturbing (outside of the sheer number of deaths suffered on the march.) Here was this Indian tribe that tried to fit in and even they were shoved off their land by pure greed. It certainly doesn't take away from the story in any way, but I was not sure you were aware of that.

Anyway, great as usual and I'm caught up once again. Looking forward to more.
 
Dead William: Hm....I'm not sure, but that's not bad. We need to cut that down though. 'Chicken Speak'?

Mettermrck: Thanks! Don't you love fanatics? Oh, and congrats on your promotion!

J. Passepartout: Yes, Von Zahringen's about to get moderately important to our tale, we'll be looking in on him now and then.

Draco Rexus: Don't forget the blood, you seem to like that part. :D

Stuyvesant: Heyward's approaching a turning point....unfortunately it's a turning point with a cliff, and he's approaching at 100 kph. Whiting may help him keep focused, God knows he has enough people who'd like to see him go over the edge.

Coz1: Rutledge left the trench to perpetually remind Tom about his temper. Keep him just a little embarassed, and maybe he'll hesitate before acting up again.

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Commentary:

I wanted to give special note to comments Coz made, since they're actually pretty important if my plot doesn't change too much. (Good luck to me.)

J. Passepartout and Draco recognized their uniform as close to the KKK. For those who don't know, they're uhm...the price of a healthy democracy. They're a white supremacist group founded in the years after the American Civil War, who manage to mix patriotism and Christianity into a doctrine of hate, intimidation and death. My raiders are NOT proto/early clansmen.... with Georgia still a slave state, there's no reason for them to exist.

That said, the 'dress' is intentional. My raiders exist for the same reason they started - desperate men with nothing left to lose, willing to secure their vision of freedom at any and all costs. Their tactics of fear, sabotage and murder are similar. Their effective credo that the ends justify the means are dead on. Stuyvesant is right - these guys are brutal. Worse, they're brutal because they are completely and utterly convinced they are RIGHT. They're what happens when despair yields to hate, and patriotism morphs into righteousness. They're the obsidian blade hiding in the scabbard of gold, and they're a direct warning that (again, if the plot lets me) things are about to get very dark, very fast.

As for the Cherokee...no, Coz, I didn't know what you told me. That's too bad, I could've used it. That said, there're definite reasons they're acting so belligerently.

EU2 does a .. bad job of emulating the Indians. Earlier in this AAR I gave them a fortification and a cannon 'cuz in the 1773 scenario they're Land Tech 15. (I later thought of other ways to simulate forts and tech.) They represent the Cherokee as united...and don't really allow the chance for ANY of the Indians to take white presence well. My relations with them are -200, and that's pretty much the same for all the European countries. The only reason I softened their attitude towards Frenchies is because historically the French treated Indians better, and they DID take out the Creek, historically rivals and enemies.

So...take the -200 relations and the fact Exeter tried to take them out a few years ago, and I can't imagine the Cherokee liking us one bit. I split them into two factions...the older, more conservative members who wouldn't mind trying to work something out - and the young hotheads who, regardless of nationality, always seem up for a fight. The fact the hotheads appear to be gaining the upper hand is another sign America has a problem on its hands.

I honestly don't know where it'll wind up. This next chapter almost didn't happen. (von Zahringen almost failed to convince the Indians to help him.) We'll see what happens, and thanks everyone for your continued support and comments!
 
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25 September, 1782
Cherokee Country



"He lies." Chesmu (one of the few Cherokee names Dieter von Zahringen could pronounce) leaned forward. "He would lead us to our deaths."

The Badener sat cross-legged within a ring made up of the chief, his advisors, and representatives from the entire Cherokee nation. 'Bear Claw' summoned them upon von Zahringen's reporting that a large camp of raiders would be forming in the next week. A lightning strike at their heart, he argued, could effectively end the Georgia rebellion and their attempts to tie their atrocities to Indian raids. So far they didn't seem interested.

"English or American does not matter," 'Night Wind' added. He led one of the smaller tribes that allied with Bear Claw. Considered old at forty-six years, he tended to be the voice of reason, a mediator between the older, more traditional men and women who favored some sort of rapprochement with these white men, and the braves who wanted blood. "Neither have proven good neighbors, neither are worthy of our help. This is their affair, not ours."

"I would agree," von Zahringen spoke slowly, carefully, trying to correct his pronunciation as he went and returning the chief's stare, "if they were not leaving evidence that you were responsible. They hope to provoke a war with the Cherokee."

"Let them come!" Chesmu shouted. "They came a few years ago and we destroyed them. If they come to our lands they will find only death!"

"Many of our own people died then as well," Running Fox whispered. Far older than the others, he huddled in his blanket against a barely extant cold, but his dark eyes were still bright. "A wise man does not seek war." The dark eyes settled on the German and von Zahringen's heart sank. "Any war."

How am I to convince these people?, von Zahringen wondered. He decided to try his luck on the braves. "Chesmu, you say 'let them come.' Why do you not bring the fight to them?"

The Indian's glance flickered to his chief, then back. "It is a trap."

"For what purpose? I have lived and fought with your people for years. If I planned to betray you, I would have long ago."

"You waited until you had a chance to call on the strength of the Cherokee. If we fall, all our people will be vulnerable. That may be your plan."

Night Wind shook his head. "He has asked for two hundred, Chesmu. While their loss would indeed be tragic, we have more men than this."

"The strength of the Cherokee lies in our spirit, not in our spears." Bear Claw spoke for the first time, scanning the men assembled before him. He didn't necessarily like the Badener's idea either, but not because he feared betrayal. It might be worth putting Chesmu in his place.

"The two hundred you would give to this man are the strongest, the bravest, the most experienced of our warriors. Lose us and our people are weakened! Rather than our blood refreshing the tribe, it will coat the earth and..."

"Are you afraid, Chesmu?" von Zahringen asked mildly.

"I fear nothing!" The brave shot to his feet and glared.

"You fear me. You fear what I can do to you."

"We shall see about that!" Chesmu drew his knife. In less than a second half the ring was up as well, facing the brave. Some had weapons of their own.

"ENOUGH!!" Bear Claw stepped into the ring. "Put away your weapons! All of you!" As they complied he continued sharply: "There was a time when our tribes and families fought, but that time has ended! Those who come to these meetings do so under a promise of truce. He who draws blood here breaks faith with the Great Spirit and all Cherokee!" Once everyone settled, he returned to his seat. "You were wrong to provoke Chesmu," he told von Zahringen. "You must apologize."

"I apologize for any insult to your people and your hospitality," the Badener replied sincerely. He'd broken the brave's power, at least for now. It would have to do.
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10 October, 1782
Southeast Georgia (near modern Brunswick)



The scouts were late. Late enough to make Dieter von Zahringen pace nervously. Now that they were back on the hunt, a 'war party' some called it, he wore the dark blue and white of the Baden military, faded and patched after so many years away. His saber, thin but deadly clung to his hip. Stewart's breech-loading rifle was with his meager possessions.

Around him stood or sat two hundred Cherokee, simply dressed with knives, axes and a fair amount of rifles interspersed with bows. American muskets of French origin. Exeter's legacy. For two weeks they'd trailed a very large body of riders towards the Georgia coast.

While tracking the raiders who'd murdered the small farming family, he'd overheard the apparent leader mentioning that there would be a huge gathering. They temporarily abandoned their public lives as plantation owners, laborers, merchants and God only knew what else to prepare a massive strike against British rule. The redcoats, it seemed, planned to move two hundred men north to reinforce Savannah. The raiders planned to destroy these reinforcements as they marched up the post road. Though badly outnumbered they'd have complete surprise and superior maneuverability.

If they succeeded and implicated the Cherokee, it would be catastrophic. The United States had now lost three towns in their far flung territories to Indians, and the Dakota were holding their own against French raids. It wouldn't take much to convince everyone a full fledged uprising was in the works. Dieter von Zahringen had to destroy them first.

A cry rose from the edge of their camp. The two scouts appeared, one out of breath and both clearly excited. The Badener strode towards them, but Chesmu was faster, talking too quickly for him to follow.

"What did he say?" von Zahringen asked, partly to remind the brave who led this little expedition.

Chesmu glared at him. It was only Bear Claw's firm warning that if anything happened to their 'guest' he didn't need to return either that stayed his hand. Of course, it could hardly be his fault if the German died in battle... "He found your enemies," he snapped.

Slowly the scouts spelled out a camp, roughly circular with the horses well within their perimeter. The circumference of this circle had eleven guard posts of two men each, apparently rotating through the night. One inner patrol moving from tent to tent, guard to guard.

"And no trenches? No barricades at all?"

None. Apparently they wanted to keep their lines of retreat open if the British found them.

"Fine." von Zahringen turned to Chesmu. "This is what I want to do."

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It was a little before dawn, when sentries are their most tired despite two or three watches, when von Zahringen crouched in a stand of trees a little over one hundred yards away, far further than the flickering torch lamps next to each guard station could shine. No doubt they intended it so one man could see if his partner, or even the station next door fell under attack...but it blinded them to anything beyond the meager light of their lamps. Ten yards, maybe twenty. Anything beyond that might as well be invisible.

Carefully the Badener drew his gun and pointed. One hundred yards was a formidable shot, even for a spiral-grooved rifle, but the guard standing next to his lamp couldn't have been more obvious. Honestly he didn't even have to hit, he just couldn't miss too badly.

"Get ready," he whispered. The Cherokee next to him, one of his companions for the past several years, nodded. Von Zahringen murmured a prayer, then slowly, gently pressed the trigger.

The guard went straight down. His partner leapt to his side and hollered. That was hardly necessary, as the crack of Dieter's gun sounded like a thunder blast in the stillness. Guards foolishly abandoned their posts, no disciplined crowd this. Lamps lit in half a dozen tents.

Von Zahringen fired again, and again the god of war, or at least of guns favored him. The Indians rushed past him, roaring and shouting as the Georgians blindly returned fire. Musket fire crackled in the air, balls hummed, not unlike a bee or wasp flying very fast. More lights in camp, more guards abandoning their post and the firefight was on.

"Open fire!" the German yelled, unnecessarily and now the hum of bowstring and arrow joined the demonic cacophony, sounding almost like an out-of-tune violin trying to join the insane orchestra of gun and shout, scream and howl. Somewhere in the camp an industrious soul found the cook's triangle and its metallic ring joined the fray.

Startled the Georgians may have been, and fighting a near invisible foe, but they weren't cowards nor inexperienced fools, and even as musket balls and arrows alike fell among them order slowly reasserted itself. Smoke, grey and acidic with the distinct smell of eggs gone bad filled the air and now both sides fired blindly.

Chesmu attacked through the abandoned posts west of the raider camp. Von Zahringen could dimly see a number of them break off and join the fight, knifing and axing the raiders from behind only to be shot, often by a comrade in the German's line. Enough remembered their first duty though, to release the horses. They bolted immediately, screaming in fright. Von Zahringen couldn't see the Georgians' desperate attempt to grab their horses while fighting knife wielding maniacs in the muddy, dirty 'streets' of their camp but he saw their fire break off.

"NOW!" he screamed. "CHARGE!!!"

Charging across an open field, even with every possible advantage, is something only madmen do and not every Indian followed. Enough did though, enough received the last determined fire of the rebel guards. In the dim, smoky light - almost like a dream - von Zahringen watched several men fall and then it was too late for regret, too late for thought. He was in the smoke, and there was some tall fool with a bayonet. Von Zahringen stabbed, had his blow parried. The bayonet lashed out almost by magic and tore his coat as well as searing his side. The German spun around, slashed, scored a hit and now the bayonet was gone, part of the grey/white smoke as he neared the torch. Next was a man with an...axe? No! The Indian realized his error a split second before von Zahringen and shoved him away. The Badener cut down someone with long brown hair in farmer's clothing, a quick stab through the kidneys into his heart. A horse screamed and hurtled past his vision dragging someone behind it. Then an explosion, a billowing pillar of fire. They had a cannon? Who gave them a cannon!? No, it was one of the tents no doubt storing ammunition. The pillar soared to heaven like a golden shaft of light, and for a moment despite the choking, blinding smoke everyone could see clearly. The rebels were surrounded. Realizing this many threw down their weapons.

Von Zahringen inhaled to tell his men to stop, but Chesmu's voice roared above the din. "KILL THEM ALL!"

Battle gave way to slaughter, and as the sun rose, crimson across the pale October sky it matched the color of the ground, and the metallic, heady taint of blood filled the air.
 
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Von Zahringen inhaled to tell his men to stop, but Chesmu's voice roared above the din. "KILL THEM ALL!"

Battle gave way to slaughter, and as the sun rose, crimson across the pale October sky it matched the color of the ground, and the metallic, heady taint of blood filled the air.


Now why did I know that would happen as soon as that Chesmu fellow appeared? Ah well. At least the German survived... Nice one again, DW
 
I was waiting for Chesmu to make that announcement. Dieter's plan was working far to well. :(

Wonder how the Brits and Americans will take the news of this... incident?
 
Got a might bloodier than the Badener wanted, eh? At least they found the raiders.

And what you suggest about how you have utilized the Cherokee makes perfect sense. After all, this is not precisely real history. When things change in-game or make it difficult to relate with true history, a good writer will adapt, and this you've done believably.
 
Dead William: Yep, von Zahringen seems to have luck on his side!

J. Passepartout: Yeah...Chesmu isn't helping one bit.

Draco Rexus: Not well, not well at all. Though the Brit reaction depends on how well they investigate. If they realize the Cherokee just killed a bunch of raiders they might....forget to pursue the matter.

coz1: Thanks! I actually have a great deal of respect for Native Americans... but this is just a really bad time in history to be one. Especially in this world.