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Phoenix v4.0.22-wilderness (9be2) - Paragon Event “Valuable Alloys” - Grammar Errors (“within the our borders”, missing comma)
Game Version
Phoenix v4.0.22-wilderness (9be2)
What version do you use?
Steam
What expansions do you have installed?
All expansions
Do you have mods enabled?
No
Please explain your issue is in as much detail as possible.
The narrative text of the one-time Paragon event Valuable Alloys (for the unique leader Xondar – renamed Santchez in the screenshot as an inside joke) contains two grammatical issues:
Extraneous article:
“…sensor data from all ships within the our borders.”
Should read “…within our borders.”
Missing comma after introductory clause:
“Using algorithms that calculate gravimetric distortions Santchez has discovered…”
Should read “Using algorithms that calculate gravimetric distortions, Santchez has discovered…”
Steps to reproduce the issue.
1. Start a game that can generate the Paragon leader Xondar
2. Recruit Xondar and play until the one-time event “Valuable Alloys” fires.
3. Read the event window:
* Note the phrase “within the our borders.”
* Note the lack of a comma after **“distortions”** in the second sentence.
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Phoenix v4.0.22-wilderness (9be2) - Paragon Event “Valuable Alloys” - Grammar Errors (“within the our borders”, missing comma)
Game Version
Phoenix v4.0.22-wilderness (9be2)
What version do you use?
Steam
What expansions do you have installed?
All expansions
Do you have mods enabled?
No
Please explain your issue is in as much detail as possible.
The narrative text of the one-time Paragon event Valuable Alloys (for the unique leader Xondar – renamed Santchez in the screenshot as an inside joke) contains two grammatical issues:
Extraneous article:
“…sensor data from all ships within the our borders.”
Should read “…within our borders.”
Missing comma after introductory clause:
“Using algorithms that calculate gravimetric distortions Santchez has discovered…”
Should read “Using algorithms that calculate gravimetric distortions, Santchez has discovered…”
Steps to reproduce the issue.
1. Start a game that can generate the Paragon leader Xondar
2. Recruit Xondar and play until the one-time event “Valuable Alloys” fires.
3. Read the event window:
* Note the phrase “within the our borders.”
* Note the lack of a comma after **“distortions”** in the second sentence.
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