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This is my first experiment with AAR and for me it's a little exercise in writing fiction in English, which is not my mother tongue. So, please be patient! :) Moreover, beware: my focus is on the fiction, so no attept to world conquest - or at least, so I think now.

The AAR will follow the Ui Mordha dinasty - rulers of the Dukedom of Leinster in 1066 - in a few "interesting" years. As you will see from the first entry, in this story we will meet dark creatures of old times, benevolent gods, wicked beings eager to return in the world and of course the Irish Stone of Destiny.

But since I've already played the first 15 years of the game, I can assure you that both blades and poisons will appear in huge amounts!
(SPOILER for the ones who cannot wait: in the year 1081 the Ui Mordha still are not High Kings of Ireland, but they are almost there. Moreover, they possess a dukedom in south France)


What follows is the first section of Chapter 1 ...




note: in Ireland the political situation in the XI-th century was a bit confused and feudal law was not really used. In practice, every ruler called himself "King", so, for example, Diarmat and his son Murchad Ui Mordha were respectively called King of Leinster and King of Dublin. The true King of Ireland, in that tradition, would be called, then, "High King". In the story I will stick to this historical fashion.
 
The Ui Mordhas are jolly good fun, and I recommend them for people wanting to play an interesting path from count to king - start as the duke's son, and enjoy that 'til the old codger dies, and then start marrying around and vassalizing nearby duchies until you can form Ireland. Good luck!
 
The Legacy of the Tuatha Dé Danann.
A Duchy of Leinster AAR.

CHAPTER 1. The Gods’ Treasures

1.1 The Fir Bolgs

Following the trail of the beast was harder and harder every mile they rode. The horses were almost exhausted after one day and one night, but their foe was escaping. Diarmat considered for one moment the possibility of giving up. Then he remembered the cottage.

Three children, literaly reduced to pieces, half devoured, in a pool of blood. Their parents could not protect them, both had part of the neck torn apart by powerful claws. The baby, poor thing, was the worst corpse. The eyes removed, the chest partly eaten, till the heart.

Diarmat’s only companion in this mad hunt was the old Faelan, his ancient body hard as iron, his will undeniable. It was him who convinced Diarmat not to go and fetch guards, huntsmen or just some peasants to accompany them. The trail is still fresh, he stated plainly, looking at the huge wolf-like prints outside the devastated house, but if we wait even a few minutes, we will never catch him. So they went, and Diarmat hoped no great turmoil would come from that. After all, he was riding in the countryside of his vassal, the King of Osraige, when all began; it was far from Leinster and his wife was not expecting his return that night. She wouldn’t worry. If we come back alive, at least.




Faelan slowed the pace of his horse, approaching a forest. Guessing from the coldness of the air, Diarmat decided that it would be dawn in less than two hours. His hands, gripping the reins, were badly aching, he had not been riding for so long since the Munster campaign twenty years before. Twenty! He was younger than Faelan of half a score years, but still he had celebrated his seventieth birthday the last winter. He was an age really few men could reach.

I think he stopped nearby to rest, maybe along a river, said Faelan. He dismounted and unsheathed his longsword. From here we should go on foot. And say our prayers, just in case. Do you recognize this forest?

Diarmat realized they had reached the borders of his vassal’s dominion and the forest already belonged to the Kingdom of Connacht. Of course they should not trespass. But the words of the old Faelan sounded somewhat odd, and even more disquieting was his hard look. He knew something about the beast, that was sure. Diarmat slowly dismounted and started to feel worried. He had never been a great warrior and did not know how two old men could ever confront the dreadful, murderous beast. Passing an hand on his chest, he prayed the Lord to spare his heart. And maybe even the neck. And all the rest, if you have time. Amen.




Everything was silent around them, but the merry sound of the spring. The water was refreshing, and a little of light was showing in the sky. Dawn was close, now. And luckily, the forest was less dark and thick than what Diarmat had expected. But everything was still. Everything was too quite. I think, said Diarmat, we were just one or two minutes late. Look how fresh are the prints, it has just run away! But Faelan did not look at the trail, he kept still, eyes closed. Then he whispered, He is not running away, he is closing his trap on us. Prepare your blade, Diarmat. Prepare yourself.

Diarmat looked around in dismay realizing that the hunters had become the prey. A kind of cold fear overwhelmed him, then he saw some kind of shape moving almost outside his area of vision. Suddenly his heart was beating furiously. His hands were almost shaking. Never he had felt so powerless, not on the field of battle, not in the complexities and poisons of politics. But here... A shadow moved, too quickly to be seen, then vanished. But something was looking at him, Diarmat knew. And then he realized, and with the realization he felt utterly paralyzed by panic. The two of them were old, but their foe was older, and more wicked.

Two eyes of fire burned in front of him.

Diarmat tried to move, stumbled, was on earth. The beast was a few feet distant and could easily leap on him. Then Faelan interposed, raising his sword with both hands, and looking at the great wolf. Faelan, the ancient eighty-one years old warrior, the greatest soldier of his generation. The wolf was on him, attacking him, and then fell. The old one had moved quickly, the blade arching in the air, cutting the chest of the beast.

Then Diarmat closed his eyes, thanking the Lord. When he opened them again, Faelan was on the beast, that was severely wounded. With all his strength he hit the wolf, and than he hit it again, and again. The howls of suffering were terrible.




When Diarmat went close, the beast, even with a dozen of deadly wounds, was still alive. And raging, powerless. A though beast, he said to Faelan, And I owe you my life. However, it was not the old warrior the one who answered. The beast could barely move its fiery eyes, most of its body cut and smashed. But when they moved to look at Diarmat, he felt again paralyzed and scared. It is you, a voice said in his mind, you that call yourself Diarmat, King of Leinster. You are the beast, and all your kind. You have infested all the world, but soon this will change...

Almost fainting, Diarmat put hand at the golden cross he had at his neck. You are a demon, son of Satan, creature of sin! May the Lord... But he was interrupted by his companion. Stop this non-sense. Look at the wounds, do you see? They are healing. At this speed he will be dangerous again in less then an hour, and my bones are tired. And I bet the “Lord” is not going to be very useful. He sighed. For ancient desease, ancient cure.

Faelan put his hand to the neck, but as Diarmat had observed for all his life, he never wore a cross, only a tiny bag. According to his father, he was still pagan, or maybe a worshipper of the Devil, but he never took those words seriously. Moreover, a great soldier was more valuable than a pious man. My grandsire, said Faelan slowly, who was your grandsire’s gransire, was a great man. Cinaed. Cinaed, the last High Druid of Ireland.

What do you mean? He was not an heretic, cried Diarmat, our family has embraced the Christ since the time of Saint Patrick! For one moment he almost forgot the great beast at his feet, and the danger for his life. The honour of his family and his immortal soul were at the stake.

Then, replied Faelan, see if you can do this with that cross of yours. He took from his bag a small talisman, with the shape of a bronze sword. Than, slowly, he touched with it the head of the wounded beast and whispered words in a language Diarmat could not understand. There was a terrible howl of pain, and the fire in the wolf’s eye was extinguished. The wounds that were healing opened again, and blood flowed on the ground.

Ancient being, said Faelan to the beast, you will regenerate no more. Now you will die, but unfortunately for you, your body is strong. Death will come slowly. He paused for a moment. I can show you mercy. But you must answer me in earnest. So I ask you, by the Claiomh Solais, that this talisman represents and was the bane of your people, why have you trespassed the border of the country that was given to you? Why have you broken the ancient pact with the Gods?

The beast was clearly suffering, and fear was in his now mortal eyes. Diarmat heard again the voice in his head: I was ordered to bring chaos and mayhem. Faelan looked puzzled for a moment. Who ordered you?

The voice in the mind revealed the utmost fear and reverence. The Fomorians. They have returned. And I conjure here their assist... With a quick slash of the sword, Faelan beheaded the beast.




Diarmat put an hand on Faelan shoulder. I beg your pardon for my religious hysteria. I couldn’t imagine... He gave a quick look at the corpse. After the beast had died, it quickly changed. It had no more the shape of a wolf, but now it was painfully similar to a naked man. Or a kind of caricature of man, deformed and ugly. What was it?

Faelan slowly answered. A children of the old times. One of the Fir Bolgs.
 
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Ah, I love supernatural elements in an AAR. Will be highly interesting to see what's on next!
 
phargle : thanks for the first post! Yes, the Ui Mordhas are a funny family and, I assure you, a murderous one if only you let them free!

Enewald : I hope so!

Snugglie : have a little patience, this update is a political one, but in the next...


And so, here the second part...
 
1.2 A Winter coup


Diarmat shivered.

The cold wind of winter was raging furiously over the Osraige Castle and the first drops of rain hit Diarmat face. He had not closed his eyes for the last three days, but his body was keenly aware of the surroundings. Both seen and unseen.

He wore the cross no more.

One legend had already become real in front of his eyes and he barely escaped the trap. He had been lucky. Now, he was going to get the lead and need no more Lady Fortune’s help. Not by chance he had become the most powerful Irish king, in spite of his lack of martial abilities and dislike for treacheries. He believed in three simple rules: know thy enemy, confront him on the ground in which his strength is useless, hit him in his weak spot with all the power you have. Check mate.

Sound of step behind him. My lord, said the guard, your son is arriving with the regiment. The lady queen is with him. They will be in the castle in less than an hour.

Diarmat waived the hand in a dismissive tone, without turning towards the guard. The rain was now stronger, and the sky darker and darker.




What are you doing, Diarmat, in the name of the Lord? The voice of the King of Osraige was loud and slightly hysterical. Then he saw the hard look of his liege. I mean, my lord Diarmat.

The hall of the castle was full of shadows that the torches could not rout. Diarmat was cold. I do not understand what you are upset about, Lord Osraige. I thought you would be happy to be my host for a couple of weeks more than the expected.

Yes, said Osraige, yes, of course my lord. I was not complaining of this. But your actions... I just can’t understand your actions. It was clear he did not know how far he could speak himself. Diarmat smiled inwardly. Seventy-one years old, and still able to bring fear in the eyes of men. His vassal finally decided. The fact is, you are behaving against the faith. You ordered the release of the heretics I put in jail. Master Faelan is reading all the old texts in the castle and in the monasteries. My chancelor, he said, stopping for a moment, my chancelor even told me your men are offering silver for every ancient legend the peasants may tell you!

Diarmat kept silent looking at his vassal.

Diarmat! May I be damned, speak, my lord! I have seen that dreadful cottage, the day you and Master Faelan disappeared and we were searching you. I know it was shocking. But you cannot really think about the old legends. According to my priests...

No. Diarmat stopped him rudely. No need for priests. Listen to me carefully. What if I told you it really was a creature of old?

Osraige stopped walking, startled.

And if I told you I want sentinels patrolling all the border with Connacht, not against an invasion of men, but against supernatural beasts that can be killed only using a pagan ritual?

Quickly Osraiged signed himself the sign of the cross, eyes widened. You lost your reason. Oh Lord, it was as I feared. Both sadness and relief were on his face. I must tell the clergy, you are no more fit to rule. He sighed and raised his hand. Guards, escort King Diarmat in the dungeon.

Half a dozen men draw their swords, looking embarrassed towards Diarmat. He did not raise from his chair. Quietly he said, As I thought. You give me no other possibilities, my friend.

The door of the hall was suddenly smashed. More than a score of armed men entered and confronted the guards. Most of them were so startled they were not able to react effectively, two of them quickly fell dead to the ground. The other surrendered.

A tall, red bearded warrior approached Diarmat. Father, he nodded towards the older man. Diarmat smiled. Good that you have such fine ears, Enna. Good work.

Lord Osraige was completely shocked. What does this mean?

It means, my friend, said Diarmat with a tired voice, that my men have already took control of the whole castle while we were pleasantly chatting. You are going to surrender your kingdom to my direct control, Osraige. I am sorry, but you are not fit to defend your people from our foe. He smiled wickedly to his vassal. Where did you say you were going to house me? In the dungeon, isn’t it?




Diarmat finished quickly his tale, looking to his wife. He was not ready to tell everything to Enna and he did not know even how start with his firstborn, Murchaid, who was so full of the priest-talks. But his beloved Dearforbgail had to know everything immediately. He needed her wisdom.

So, that’s it, said the queen in a quiete tone, little more than a whisper. Her ancient face was a web of wrinkles, but the eyes were as green as a forest in spring, and as bright as a young maiden’s one. For Diarmat, she was incredibly beautiful, as beautiful as the first time he had seen her fifty years before and decided against all odds that she would be his wife. The women remained silent for a few long moments. I always though, she said finally, that the Fir Bolgs were peaceful and confined in the realm of Connacht, that the Fomorians had fled Ireland countless years ago and that the Tuatha Dé were longly dead.

Diarmat smiled. She believed him.

However, Dearforbgail continued, you tell me that the Fomorians have returned. If it is so, all of us is in danger. Still, I cannot understand how Faelan could vanquish the Fir Bolg conjuring the power of Nuada. The ancient god is really dead, and so his people.

Diarmat relaxed completely. She was using the business-like tone she always used when they discussed about state problems. She was getting informations, and preparing counsels. You see, he answered, he did not invoke the power of Nuada , he invoked the power of the Claiomh Solais. If it worked, it just mean that the sacred Sword of Light is still in the world.

The queen nodded. I now where all this is going. Let me imagine the following. If we are to confront the Fomorians, we need power. And now we are sure that at least one great artifact of power is just outside in the world, waiting to be found...

And maybe also Lugh’s spear! He smiled his wicked smile. We will need power to save our land, yes. And maybe, saving the world could also be a rewarding experience.

The throne of High King, whispered Dearforbgail. It was not a question.

My lady, said Diarmat, you really know my heart. Already Faelan is looking for every legend and story of old. His idea, mind me, is to summon the dead gods’shadows and directly ask them! If something, he has always been creative. Your task, he looked serious, making her understand that it was not the husband that was speaking now, but the king, your task is to make our realm ready for the worst. I need efficiency. I need intelligence. Everything should work perfectly.

The queen answered quietly. We have few talented men in the realm, but bachelors in our family abound... I will look for the widows, the last daughters and the old mistresses, my lord. Talent has no problem with sins. If you do not mind so many women at court.

Diarmat, was baffled. Then he understood. It was brilliant and it was easy, like all the ideas of his wife. He desired to kiss her, but at least four guards were in the hall with them. Instead he took her hand. My beloved lady, your word is mine.




At sunset Faelan returned. The last monastery had no interesting books, but one of the monks was a deep expert of ancient lore. “I know those beings, but I do not worship them! I do not worship them.” He continued for half an hour in this way, till I showed him a few of the amulets my grandsire gave me when I was a child. Faelan mood was excellent, and he clearly enjoyed the tale. Then his eyes became huge. Never seen such an afraid man! Under the threat of a pagan curse, he showed me all the notes he had been taking over forty years of folktale research.

And then? Asked Diarmat, impatiently. They were in the king’s private chamber, guards dismissed. Only Dearforbgail and Enna were with them, the latter still quite puzzled by his father adventure and decisions.

And then I discovered nobody can speak with dead Gods, continued Faelan. The look on Diarmat face became grim, but he kept silent, hoping for something more. However, said Faelan, there are a few exceptions. For example, it seems quite difficult to kill a god of death, don’t you think so? I fear, however, that a family reunion is in order. The ritual is quite clumsy without a druid, but since we have the blood of Cinaed, a guile can be used...

So, said Dearforbgail worried, we need Murchaid, didn’t we? He will not be happy to play with pagan rituals...

Oh yes, said Faelan smiling, we need him for at least two reasons. For the ritual and for its playground. We are going to the ancient and misty realm of Manannan. He looked all of the three of them with shining eyes.

At least one of us is enjoying the adventure, though Diarmat. So, he said aloud, we are to depart tomorrow. It seems the Isle of Man is expecting us.
 
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A Knytling saga may have ended, but the replacements to keep me from work are sprouting as if somebody threw about the contents of a box of verbal fertiliser :eek: . Subscribed.
 
I also did a supernatural Ui Mordha AAR for a bit, but got distracted and it fizzled out. This one looks good, hope you have better luck keeping it going. :)
 
Well, this looks very interesting. The mythic storyline seems to blend into the historic gameplay quite well. I just hope Dairmat's successor (will that be Enna or Murchaid? I like Enna better :p ) will do an equal good job as their ancient father in the future. Sadly the old Dairmat never seems to actually live forever
 
nette001 : then I hope to keep you a lot distant from work! :p

Enewald : not only Ireland, not only...

Skyman : thanks for the encouragement, I already have all the material and I hope to find the time to write down the story...

Cecasander : thanks! the blend of story and gameplay events is exactly what interest me most! And yes, unluckily Diarmat is not as healthy as Faelan :(

Brainsucker : well, I think I will post obituary for the characters after they die (or disappear), but outside of the narrative flow - however the poor Ui Mordha are, at the start, the less talented bunch you can imagine!


note: since I'll soon leave my country (taking with me just my linux notebook, on which I won't be able to play CK), I've hurried till a point of the game were the narrative can reach a natural (and epic) end. So now I just have to write down the story using the notes I took. But don't fear, even if the story will finish in 1097 AD, a lot of things happen and were I to post two updates per week, I will finish about the end of January (!!!).
Giving the section titles would be too much a spoiler, but I can write down the titles of the chapters, just to spark a bit of curiousity (in brakets the main character of the chapter, which often will NOT be the ruler):

1. The Gods'Treasures [Diarmat Ui Mordha (995-1067)]
2. The Witch Child [Enna Ui Mordha (1032-1092)]
3. Of Blade and Treacheries [Anastasia Rurikovich (1023-1095)]
4. Death and Glory [Murchaid Ui Mordha (1025-1089)]
5. Adventure in Cymru [Fiachna Ui Mordha (1071- )]
6. A Struggle of Kings [Robert de Normandie (1054- )]
7. The Four Crowns of Albion [Loigsech Ui Mordha (1050- )]


The next update, with section 1.3, in a few hours...