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First an announcement : given the time required to write updates (the research work to do something not too wildly inaccurate takes a good chunk of it), and given the apparently small interest for the story (maybe I should have chosen a clickbait title...), I will write them less often. I like the story, so I don't want to abandon it. I'll try for now a more-or-less bi-weekly scheme and see how it goes. So, next update tuesday, probably.

Yes, and now someone else has to pick up the pieces that Sigurd has left behind ... well, she is no doubt better than he deserves.
Well, being captured in battle was not really a predictable event !

Ingibjörg seems to have a good handle on the situation. But the Thing may be a good test of her abilities. There's likely to be a few ambitious people who look to capitalize on Sigurd's captivity.
It will be a tense moment, no doubt.
 
First an announcement : given the time required to write updates (the research work to do something not too wildly inaccurate takes a good chunk of it), and given the apparently small interest for the story (maybe I should have chosen a clickbait title...), I will write them less often. I like the story, so I don't want to abandon it. I'll try for now a more-or-less bi-weekly scheme and see how it goes. So, next update tuesday, probably.

Research will cut into one's time for sure. Best of luck with that.

I would caution not to get too worried about views/comments at this point, just because it can take time for a story to gain interest. When I looked back at my AAR to do the threadmarks, I noticed how I didn't receive a lot of comments early on. I don't think until we got 30 chapters in was I getting 3 or 4 comments per update consistently, and then didn't see another uptick until 60 or so where I'd get a lot more. It can take a while, so don't lose heart.

A bi-weekly update schedule is still solid commitment though. Keep up the good work. It will find audience in time.
 
First an announcement : given the time required to write updates (the research work to do something not too wildly inaccurate takes a good chunk of it), and given the apparently small interest for the story (maybe I should have chosen a clickbait title...), I will write them less often. I like the story, so I don't want to abandon it. I'll try for now a more-or-less bi-weekly scheme and see how it goes. So, next update tuesday, probably.
Whatever schedule works best for you, but like @JabberJock14 I would advise to try not to worry over-much about views/comments. As he says of his own AAR, things started more quietly there, and he grew a readership and one that included a number of active commentators. The commentators are really just the tip of the iceberg when it comes to readership as well. Also - sometimes an AAR just gets missed.

I would advise persisting with this tale for so long as you wish to tell it - Sigurd is in an interesting situation and there is surely going to be a revenge plot going on to enjoy thereafter. At some point though the tale will come to a natural resting place and then if you choose to bring it to a close, do so. Then consider starting another AAR, and when that one is done start another. Persistence and perseverence are two very good watchwords for any writer. Apart from anything else, in general terms the longer you write the better you write so future works will tend to be "better" than current ones.

Also I would "get out" more and comment in other folks' AARs. I have seen you make a start on this already - keep it up! Comments are the lifeblood of the forum, but also importantly it gets your name out there. Then your AAR is no longer "written by some random guy on the internet" but "written by a person who made that neat comment" and people - over time - will be more likely to take a look.

Finally - CK2 is just a very crowded place for AARs these days. This is good - lots of creative energy to feed off, but it can make it hard to get noticed.

In recap: don't get disheartened, keep going, read and comment in other AARs, and just have fun telling the story.

I know I am enjoying reading it.
 
Thank you @JabberJock14 and @stnylan for your kind comments.

First, I'd note I added a cover picture for the story, based on Torrblom's coat of arms. Hope you like it.

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Research will cut into one's time for sure. Best of luck with that.
Strangely, it seems it takes more time as I'm 20 chapters in than at the start. Though, I expect it to improve soon, with less new things to search about. For the last chapter, money took a lot of time.

I would caution not to get too worried about views/comments at this point, just because it can take time for a story to gain interest. When I looked back at my AAR to do the threadmarks, I noticed how I didn't receive a lot of comments early on. I don't think until we got 30 chapters in was I getting 3 or 4 comments per update consistently, and then didn't see another uptick until 60 or so where I'd get a lot more. It can take a while, so don't lose heart.
To be honest, I keep a look on views, and one thing I find frustrating is seeing how much the title matters. Had I put something about Arthur in the title, I'd have twice or thrice the views. I'd edit the title if I had a better one (or more exactly, something to add after or before the current one and which push curious people to look).

For your own story, the "Plantagenet" word draws curiosity - at least it did for me, though the page count also did.

A bi-weekly update schedule is still solid commitment though. Keep up the good work. It will find audience in time.
The bi-weekly schedule is more or less calculated to stay always on the first thread page. My feeling is that a fast update pace don't really help me to find audience faster, so I may as well let it go slower.

More generally though, I'm in a lack of time. Had I nothing else to do, I wouldn't care, but I do, and therefore it feels wrong to neglect other things for this.

Whatever schedule works best for you, but like @JabberJock14 I would advise to try not to worry over-much about views/comments. As he says of his own AAR, things started more quietly there, and he grew a readership and one that included a number of active commentators. The commentators are really just the tip of the iceberg when it comes to readership as well. Also - sometimes an AAR just gets missed.
There are a few dozen readers, yes.

I would advise persisting with this tale for so long as you wish to tell it - Sigurd is in an interesting situation and there is surely going to be a revenge plot going on to enjoy thereafter. At some point though the tale will come to a natural resting place and then if you choose to bring it to a close, do so. Then consider starting another AAR, and when that one is done start another. Persistence and perseverence are two very good watchwords for any writer. Apart from anything else, in general terms the longer you write the better you write so future works will tend to be "better" than current ones.
I doubt I'll start any other AAR ever. But this one should last. I had a lot of interesting events in that game, and there are some things 5 years, 15 years, 50 years from the current point I'd like to tell. With 3-4 chapters per game-year and say 100 chapters per real-year, that means that some of the epic drama I'm thinking about probably won't have a chapter before 2020...

Also I would "get out" more and comment in other folks' AARs. I have seen you make a start on this already - keep it up! Comments are the lifeblood of the forum, but also importantly it gets your name out there. Then your AAR is no longer "written by some random guy on the internet" but "written by a person who made that neat comment" and people - over time - will be more likely to take a look.

Finally - CK2 is just a very crowded place for AARs these days. This is good - lots of creative energy to feed off, but it can make it hard to get noticed.
Sadly, I have not enough free time to follow several AARs and write my own one and do various other important things. I comment in Before Plantagenet when I have something to tell, but, say I'd like to do that for The Bold Prince, I'd have to read dozens of chapters before.

In recap: don't get disheartened, keep going, read and comment in other AARs, and just have fun telling the story.

I know I am enjoying reading it.
:)
 
First Arc - Chapter 23 - November 870
Chapter XXIII

November 870 – Nidaros, Norway

After a few days, the convening of the Thing in an extraordinary session had been widely announced across the land, and the local representatives travelled to Nidaros.

Its previous meeting had happened three months earlier, at the end of summer. While it didn’t get any say on Sigurd’s warring, the several days of the meeting had a purpose : numerous disputes were settled, including the conviction of some men accused of criminal acts. The powerful men of the country, selected as representatives by the local Things, met each other and arranged deals, including marriages, in a festive atmosphere. The trading village set up by Sigurd bustled with activity.

This time around, the atmosphere was much more grim. With Sigurd captured, the malcontents who had thought the tribe’s chief could be easily influenced because of his weak family were agitating for him to be replaced.

The Thing assembled in an open field, not far from the village. The days were shorter and colder, but the sky was blue and the men sat warmly dressed.

The meeting began with the ritual sacrifice of a few pigs to place the assembly under the gods blessing.

The Lögsögumad, named Eirikr, directed the proceedings. There was no written laws in Norse society, and the Lögsögumad was tasked with memorizing and reciting them.

Sigurd’s imprisonment was the topic on all mouths when men chattered, but the early morning was occupied by the settlement of some disputes.

“The situation is not as dire as we feared”, said Hrodulfr to Ingibjörg and Eskild.

The three were assembled not far from the main meeting, and prepared what they would say.

“According to my quick inventory, Sigurd and you have north of 8000 silver marks of worth”, added the steward while looking towards the chief’s wife. “And thanks to the ransoms from the Faroe family, a good chunk is already in silver coins. We’ll need to sell some items, but the assembled Thing is a perfect opportunity for this.”

Ingibjörg nodded.

“Eskild, remind us the details of the agreement you reached with Telemark’s envoy”, she said.

“The agreement forbid any and all hostile action from our side for the whole coming year.”

“This is not much.”

“Roald appears to think that the bitter defeat and the lack of money will deter any attempt. What one can hear from some of the Thing must have strengthened the envoy in the belief it will forbid Sigurd to attempt another expedition.”

“Or maybe he thinks Fairhair will have submitted us by then”, weighed in the steward, visibly anxious.

“Better hope that not”, said Ingibjörg. “And what of the rest of the agreement ?”

“The silver will be weighed here under the watch of the envoy, and will be weighed once more upon arrival in Telemark. It will be transported on the ship which brought the envoy, but we will send several warships to protect it against any attempt from anyone to steal it. Then, Sigurd will be liberated and sent back to us. After much negotiating, and raising the spectre of not being able to pay at all, I managed to get the sum down to 4000 marks”, said Eskild.

“So, will we be able to say to the Thing that there won’t be an exceptional tax ?” asked Ingibjörg.

“We will”, said Hrodulfr.

This raised considerably their chances.

“We could even try to release Sigurd without the Thing approbation, but it would anger everyone. I think we should present this as only asking for loyalty.”

“As opposed to asking any kind of sacrifice ?”, asked Ingibjörg.

“Yes.”

The assistant of the chancellor was not a master of words, capable of swinging an assembly by the sheer brilliance of his rhetoric, far from it, but he had a sound mind.

In early afternoon, after a meal, the assembly under the guidance of the Lögsögumad turned towards Sigurd’s fate.

Eskild was the first to speak.

“Sigurd Vagnsson has been chosen as a chief by this very assembly, four years ago. There had been much debate about who to choose to lead us, and most of the men here assembled agreed that he was the best ; a great warrior, intelligent, and honest, who would selflessly strive for our success. Has he not stood by his vows ? Has he not expanded our influence and brought more trade ? For the first time, after a string of successes, he has encountered a setback. Loyalty and honour command us to stand by him in difficult times.”

One after another, various speakers intervened to weigh in on the debate : should the tribe keep Sigurd as a chief ? If yes, none doubted that they would have to pay the ransom.

Most men didn’t say a word. As in all human assemblies, despite the rule of the “one man, one vote”, the mind of the crowd was far from the simple sum or average of the individual thoughts of the men in isolation.

On the contrary, the influence of the group shaped their mind. Rational thought was superseded by feelings and emotions, and the assembly’s inclination, prone to suggestibility, could sway one way or the other depending on the opinion of the latest speaker who managed to impress its members.

The intellectual rightness of a point was of little importance. The most solid demonstration was met by yawns and disrespectful chatter if the speaker himself lacked consideration ; while words could win approbation by the sole force of the prestige of who spoke them.

“I’m Thorsten Dagson”, began a speaker.

Middle-aged, he was from an influential family from the southern part of Nidaros, and the strongest voice to request a new chief.

“Sigurd Vagnsson has failed his vows to our tribe. Instead of defending our interests, he has tried to go on a conquest spree, sending our men to die for his own fame ! Now, his foolishness has got him captured by Roald of Telemark. Nidaros doesn’t need a chief who fancies himself as a king. Who knows how much gold we will have to give to rescue him ? His defenders don’t even dare to tell us this ! All our hard work, going to save him from his own mistakes ?”

There was a muttering of agreement at these words.

“This Thing should choose a new chief, who will act more responsibly and respect our voice”, he concluded.

Hrolfr, the marshal, asked to speak. The Lögsögumad gave him the floor.

“Did you hear what this man suggests ?”, he began with a loud and deep voice. “That you all here would have been deceived, that you all would have been mistaken when choosing Sigurd ?”

These words made a powerful impression, as nobody likes to think of himself as a fool.

“My name is among those who have been fleeted by some of those who would like to abandon our chief. If I thought for one second I could be a better chief, why wouldn’t I argue against Sigurd ?”

In truth, Hrolfr exaggerated his own standing and downplayed his ambitions, but his audience was not in a mind to be bothered by this. He tried to impress it.

“When he was fighting for the glory of our tribe, he didn’t back down in difficulty. He has been leading our warriors heroically. I tell you, we should do what is necessary to liberate him.”

Then, Ingibjörg asked to speak. The Thing was predominantly the affair of men, but she had a voice, and an important one, as her husband’s representative. She wasn’t a great speaker either, but she had carefully prepared what she would say. It didn’t delve into what Sigurd had done and how he is. On the contrary, it was simplistic. It didn’t mention her small snags with his cynicism and exaggerated honesty. The goal was above all to persuade the Thing.

“I’m Ingibjörg, wife of Sigurd. My duty command me to stand by his side. But this is not simply out of duty that I speak today on his behalf, for him to remain our chief and for his liberation. I know him better than anyone, and I deeply believe him to deserve it. Some of you have expressed concern about the payment of the ransom of my husband. We have been asked 4000 marks of silver.”

Immediately, murmuring were heard across the assembly.

“This is a huge sum. Two years of contributions from not only Nidaros, but Bergenhus and Rogaland too, according to our steward. But we have been very cautious to not misuse what we got, and today, to relieve the tribe, we will carry this burden ourselves.”

There was even more murmuring.

“Show him the loyalty he deserves”, she concluded.

The Thing then voted on a simple question : should Sigurd remain the chief of the tribe. Some, like Thorsten, where firmly against it and made it known. Others were firmly in favour of the current chief, having directly and personally benefited from his rule. The decision laid in those who, at the start of the session, had no strong feelings on the subject.

The fear of having to contribute a hefty sum from their own wealth having been voided ; the popular sentiment of the representatives went by a large margin in favour of Sigurd.

Now, his liberation and his return as chief of Nidaros were mere formalities.
 
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A well played assembly, but there will be some difficulties for Sigurd I think when he returns.
 
Ingibjörg does well here and I would hope Sigurd rewards her well. I would also think Hrolfr plays his part well, and should get some minor reward of sorts from Sigurd upon his return.
 
A well played assembly, but there will be some difficulties for Sigurd I think when he returns.
His position is weakened by the captivity, no doubt.

Ingibjörg does well here and I would hope Sigurd rewards her well. I would also think Hrolfr plays his part well, and should get some minor reward of sorts from Sigurd upon his return.
Mind that Ingibjörg's loyalty is decisive, but she would herself be in a difficult spot with her husband imprisoned and losing his status. The ties of marriage would remain. So, while she certainly deserves to be treated well, the liberation itself is probably the biggest reward she can expect.

As for Hrolfr, he's until now been a solid help for Sigurd. He certainly deserves to be rewarded.

It was hinted in the second chapter with the dynastic name, but as it took myself some time to get it : Hrolfr corresponds to the historical man whose name had been latinized as "Rollo". You know, the one whose vikings occupied Normandy and who got the king of Franks to name him as Duke of Normandy against him swearing fealty and converting ! The founder of the dynasty who would birth William the Conqueror.

Next part tomorrow if all goes well.
 
I hope half the silver doesn't equal half the leader.
Two-third the silver, two-third. :p

I'm working on the next chapter, it should be ready tonight !

EDIT : Sorry for the delay, as I wrote new ideas kept coming in, and I fell asleep before finishing. The chapter is twice as long as I expected, I hope you will appreciate it !
 
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First Arc - Chapter 24 - December 870
Chapter XXIV

December 870 – Nidaros, Norway

Loaded with silver, the Telemark’s envoy’s ship had departed mere days after the Thing, as soon as enough assets had been exchanged with coins to pay the ransom.

It had been guarded by longships from Nidaros, who for the return voyage took aboard Sigurd Torrblom, defeated but liberated.

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The northerly wind was chilling. Even with his warm clothes of fur and his cloak, and his hands protected in each other's sleeve, Sigurd felt its bite.

He wasn’t aboard a ship : he was walking in the dark on a snowy path, his way only dimly lit by the moon in its first quarter, a few men behind him.

He had chosen to land at a few hours of march from the village, with the main fleet not entering the fjord at all until the morrow.

“Is the village still far ?”, asked one of the men accompanying him.

“Not much”, said Sigurd.

They were in the small forested hills west of it, where he sometimes went to appease his worries, and once the trees ceased to block their line of vision, they could sea the village lying next to the fjord.

Sigurd went to Hrolfr’s house.

His marshal soon opened after his knocks on the doors. It was dark still, but he was already awakened and clothed. In spring, it would be day already.

“Hello, Hrolr, it’s me, Sigurd.”

Hrolfr’s eyes expressed surprise, but he moved over to let the chief enter, followed by his few men.

Once the door was closed, the two men hugged and Sigurd gave a pat on Hrolfr’s shoulder.

“It’s great to see you again, my lord”, said the marshal.

“You didn’t expect me”, observed Sigurd.

He sat down in a chair next to the house’s fire. The five warriors with him stood silent close to it to warm themselves.

“I knew you were to come back after we sent that ransom, but…”

“But you wonder why I show up at your house at night without forewarning ?”

“Yes.”

“I will explain it to you soon. Before that, however, tell me what happened with our army while I was detained by this bastard of Roald.”

“Er… Thorolfr rallied the men a few hours after the battle. When it became clear that you had been captured or killed, he led the army back through the mountains before the winter made it too impractical. When he made contact with us through a messenger, the ransom to get you back was already on the way. I instructed him to demobilize his warriors, who went back to their houses. Thorolfr has returned to the village a few days ago… What worries you, my lord ?”

The marshal had noticed Sigurd frowning.

“I’m thinking about these men who didn’t come back, Hrolfr.”

“Oh… Yes, this is war. There is no war without death.”

“So it is. However, I didn’t think about those now in Valhalla.”

“What then ?”

“Those who fought by my side, didn’t abandon me like cowards, and were captured along me. When Roald went to announce me I was going to be liberated after he received the ransom, and asked me to swear to abide by the negotiated terms, I asked him to liberate them alongside me. Do you know what he did ? He laughed at me and told me : “Be glad I didn’t put them to the sword”. My most loyal and courageous warriors are now enthralled somewhere in Telemark.”

Hrolfr remained silent a moment.

“Emund told us you instructed retreat when the battle was lost”, he said.

“The bastard ! He fled like a wimp, and he lies to protect himself. That’s because of him I come back like that. Is he in the village ?”

Hrolfr shook his head, and scratched his left ear.

“He came with Thorolfr, but I don’t know if he’s still there.”

“All right.”

Sigurd stood up.

“I’ll come back soon”, he said, “wait me here”, he added while speaking to the warriors who came with him.

He opened the door, stepped over the door’s frame, and went in the darkness.

The path was familiar : he went home.

There was a guard at his door’s house. There was none when he went to war. He never felt the need.

Bah ! Surely Alfrid’s idea. She always thinks there are threats lurking around, he thought.

He went towards the entrance.

“Stop ! Who are you ?”, said the guard.

Without saying a word, he pulled up his cloak’s hood, showing clearly his face.

“My… my excuses, my lord, I didn’t know it was you. It’s great to know you are free.”

Sigurd didn’t pay attention to the guard’s words and entered in his longhouse.

The first person to see him inside was one of his thrall women. She screamed out of surprise.

“What is going on ?”, said a deafened but recognizable voice.

The sound of steps and another scream followed.

“Sigurd !”, said Alfrid. “You’re back.”

“Back I am, my dear.”

She threw herself in his arms, and embraced him tightly.

She sincerely worried for me, noticed Sigurd.

Her presence was reassuring.

“Daddy !”, said a little girl’s voice.

Sigurd looked around, and saw nothing. Then, he felt the small arms hugging his right leg.

Alfrid loosened her embrace, and he leaned to lift Ingfrid in his arms. He had a weak spot with his daughter.

“How are you, my little princess ?”, he said.

She told him about her infantine thoughts and activities, while playing with his beard, as he grinned blissfully. The little thing’s enthusiasm was contagious.

After a moment he put the child back on the ground, and turned his attention back to Alfrid.

He kissed his concubine. The taste of her mouth felt even better after the hardships he went through.

His body immediately reacted with excitation. A part of him wanted to take the young woman right now.

But he restrained himself. There was a force greater even than his lust.

“My dear”, he said, “I need your help.”

“What is it about ?”, she asked, surprised.

“Hrolfr told me that our warriors went home while I was travelling back from captivity.”

“That’s true. What’s the matter ?”

“Has Emund come back with them ?”

Hrolfr had already told him, but he asked again. For one second, she was taken aback, before answering confidently.

“Yes, he has. I keep tabs on him to prevent him from murdering Tore Rögnvaldrsson, as you instructed me to. He was in the village yesterday.”

“Where can we find him ?”

“He sleeps at the inn, and spend most of his time there. An inn’s wench report back to me his moves every day.”

“Good. Put on warm clothes.”

A thrall woman helped her to get dressed, and then a few minutes later Sigurd and Alfrid walked towards Hrolfr’s house. On the way, he explained her what had happened.

“I should have made him arrested when you first told me about his oddness”, he told her.

She tried to reassure him.

“You’re back. This is the most important.”

Once at Hrolfr’s house, he motioned his warriors and Hrolfr to follow him.

“We’re going to arrest this bastard of Emund.”

On the way to the inn, Alfrid warned that it was not impossible for Emund to escape if they weren’t careful. Sigurd sent her first in the inn, to speak with the wench who spied for her. She came back outside, a few houses from the inn, where the rest of the group waited.

“She told me that he’s still there. He has an individual room on the first floor, the third door on the right side of the left corridor.”

“Perfect.”

“She also told me that the door can be barred from the inside, so you’d need to get him to open.”

“I see.”

Sigurd, followed by Hrolfr and his five men, walked to the inn, their swords by their side. Inside, the main room was lit by candles. They walked between the wooden pillars, watched with surprise by the few people drinking and talking at this hour.

The chief went directly towards the stairs. They went up to the first floor and to the door Alfrid had indicated. The inn’s owner rushed towards them.

“What are you going to do ?”

“Arresting someone who deserves it.”

Two of Sigurd’s men passed their weapons to others, ran and hit the door. Under their conjugated force, the door broke down in a crash.

Inside was Emund. He sat on his bed when the door was broken. He looked towards Sigurd, clearly distraught.

“What… what do you want from me”, he screamed with fear.

“We’re here to do justice, Emund”, answered Sigurd.

As the man tried to grab something to defend himself, the chief’s men were on him and overpowered him.

“I’ve done nothing wrong !”, he screamed while struggling.

Hrolfr moved forwards and slapped him.

“Shut up, fool. You betrayed my trust by abandoning our chief in battle while I named you commander. You betrayed him. You betrayed our tribe. And plotting to murder a child ? You’re not a man. Don’t you dare say a word if you don’t want me to hit your face into a pulp.”

Terrorized, Emund remained silent, his eyes going left-and-right searching desperately for some way to get out.

“Take him out of here to some place he can be detained at, bound him and make sure he doesn’t escape.”

Hrolfr and the five warriors went out, dragging the prisoner.

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Sigurd turned towards the inn’s owner.

“Don’t worry, we’ll send you someone to repair this door.”

And upon those words, he left too, under the curious gazes of the inn’s guests who went out of their rooms after hearing all the noise.

Alfrid waited for him outside the inn. He walked with her to his house.

Sigurd felt more calm now. This was done. He still had something else to do, however.

“Where is Ingibjörg ?”, he asked Alfrid.

Her face showed some disappointment. She would’ve preferred him to stay with her.

“She’s at the temple”, she answered.

“Don’t worry, honey, I’ll see you this evening”, he said with a wink.

He left her at home and walked to the temple. The cold didn’t bother him that much now.

When he arrived at his destination, one hour later, the sky in the east was becoming clearer, with the dawn’s white glow.

As others before him, the temple’s guard was surprised to see Sigurd. He let him enter, and one minute later, it was his wife who saw him unannounced.

“Good morrow, my wife.”

“Good morrow, Sigurd. I didn’t know you were back. If I knew I…”

“All is good, darling”, he told her has he drew closer. “I heard of your efforts to get me out of Roald’s hands. The men on the ship told me about your speech at the Thing and what you did to pay the ransom.”

He embraced her.

“I only did what was just…”

“Shuuu… I’m proud of you.”

She smirked.

“I promise you I’ll be more careful in the future”, he added.

He kissed her neck.

“I see your detention has not abated your lust”, she said.

“Should it have ?”

“No.”

In response, he lifted her whole thin body and walked towards her room.

It feels damn good to be back here, he thought.

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So he is back and cleaning house. Now to prepare his revenge.
 
He's back. And suspect he's not going to wait around before rebuilding his strength. He may not look for revenge against his captors immediately, but that time will come.

Ingibjörg looks to be back as his favorite (with good reason). Now if she can have a son, she would cement herself there.
 
I just got caught up on this. It’s great; please don’t give up. I especially liked the way you handled imprisonment, and the detailed look at events over a short period of time reminds me of Before Plantagenet, which I also love.
Thank you for your encouraging comment ! That give motivation to continue working. I'm happy you like my tale. :)

To better introduce future events ; I listed from my screenshots all significant happenings in the years coming, and I've been surprised myself by the overall massive quantity of events. :eek: There is always something going on. The downside of a detailed look at what happens, I guess !

The next chapter will be a shorter one compared to the ~2000 words one I did recently, as the next event don't need as much details as the whole incarceration sequence. So it should be really done this evening without falling asleep in the middle like I did for the previous one. :D

So he is back and cleaning house. Now to prepare his revenge.
He's back. And suspect he's not going to wait around before rebuilding his strength. He may not look for revenge against his captors immediately, but that time will come.
You both predict he's not going to sit waiting after this setback. By the very nature of your prediction, we shall see soon if you are right !

I find it interesting you make those predictions. I guess after more than 20 chapters and a quarter-novel length, a character starts to become familiar.

Ingibjörg looks to be back as his favorite (with good reason). Now if she can have a son, she would cement herself there.
The lack of child after 3,5 years of marriage while she's in here prime youth (and Sigurd has proved with Alfrid he's fertile) is indeed Ingibjörg's chief worry, and it worries Sigurd too. He needs a son (or better : sons) to pass on his legacy, and even if he's young, unexpected disasters can happen as his capture by Roald of Telemark reminded him in the most unpleasant way (but probably the more effective too).
 
First Arc - Chapter 25 - April 871
Chapter XXV

April 871 – Nidaros, Norway

The victories of the past few years had not been forgotten, but the defeat and imprisonment of the previous fall had left a scar in Sigurd’s prestige and made everyone wary of another military adventure.

The winter had been spent caring of internal affairs.

After Emund’s arrestation, he had wondered what to do with him. Banishing him ? Executing him ? Hrolfr had advocated for the latter, to set an example. It was impossible to punish all the ordinary warriors who had followed suit with more than the shame they received for having abandoned their chief ; but it was different with a commander like Emund.

Sigurd’s leanings were to agree with this assessment ; especially as nobody had sympathy for Emund as stories about his fits of madness and his murder plot became widely known. Pending a final decision, he let Emund rot in a cell.

The treasury having been depleted by the ransom, Sigurd spent time with Hrodulfr to improve the situation. Spending was already low, so the focus was on revenue. At the end of March, they successfully rose the taxation levels from Bergenhus to those of Nidaros ; but it remained a small tribal tribute, mostly symbolic.

Sigurd did a tour across the territory of his tribe to show himself to his people and reassert his power. He mostly skied on the snow, as there were inland settlements he couldn’t reach otherwise.

The wintery activity he enjoyed the most, however, was trying to produce an heir, with Ingibjörg and with Alfrid.

Now spring had returned.

Seated at a meeting with his council, Sigurd was listening to his chancellor.

“The chief Knut of the Shetlands has surrendered to the army of Haraldr Fairhair”, said Rögnvaldr.

The threat posed by Haraldr Fairhair had not diminished over the winter.

“He will remain chief of the archipelago but Haraldr is now his liege”, added the chancellor.

“Do we know if the army of Ostlandet has come back home ?”, asked Sigurd.

“We know that Haraldr himself was in Akershus a few weeks ago, but not much more. There are rumours he’s preparing to attack another realm soon.”

“That’s not very helpful”, said Hrolfr.

“Well, I’m not in Fairhair’s head to tell you more ! Some say he’s strongly considering attacking Uppland while Björn Ragnarrsson is prisoner in Britain.”

The sheer audacity of such a possibility awed the other councillors.

“That would be risky…”, said Sigurd. “And it doesn’t match his stated goal of becoming king of Norway. But he could gain much.”

It’s fortunate I didn’t stay imprisoned for long, he thought.

“What are worth rumours, anyway ?” said Ingibjörg. “He could plant false ones easily.”

“Good point. And we have no knowledge of any pact between Haraldr and Roald ?”

“No, my lord, there has been no new information on a pact since last year. There may be one, but then it is secret.”

“Hrolfr, how are going your training efforts ?”

“It’s not easy to inculcate discipline into young warriors. Last week, I did a mock battle with a few dozen men and wooden weapons, and there was one idiot who charged without orders to try and prove his valour…”, answered the marshal. “But our numbers are back to what they were last year”, he quickly added.

“That will have to do, even if I’d prefer to have with me the veterans who have been enthralled by Roald. We can’t attack Telemark without breaking our truce ; but we have no pact with Kjötve of Agder. The better time to act is now.”

“Another war, so quickly ?” asked Alfrid

Sigurd could see the worry on her face and hear it in her voice.

“I’m convinced the war against Telemark would have been won had I not been captured. Against Agder, I’ll take care to not let it happen again.”

“And what about Haraldr, won’t he see this as an opportunity against us ?”, she asked.

“To keep him at bay, we need to make him believe us to be stronger than we are. What better than waging war ?”

“The Thing will be displeased”, observed Ingibjörg.

“Dear wife, the Thing has chosen to keep me as a chief a few months ago, not least thanks to your efforts. They knew how I ruled this tribe for the four previous years, and they couldn’t expect anything different. I’m glad to let them manage petty stuff, but I won’t wait months for the next Thing to decide a war which needs to be declared now, as spring is there. Most will be happy as long as we win, anyway.”

He had made his mind.

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Another victory would do much to erase the shame of capture, and it is wise to be mindful of Fairhair.
 
I've been lurking, and am sorry I haven't commented earlier. This is a very interesting part of the world to play, I follow your saga of conquest with pleasure.
Another war of assujettissement ? En avant, Sigurd ! :)
 
There's really not much point in waiting around. His potential enemies grow stronger every moment he waits around. Maybe he could raided instead, but gold isn't necessarily that important (even if it is useful).