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Great to get this new chapter. Your perspective writing really helps this along as we are getting nearly a 360-degree view of what is happening.

Plus...

...their futile resistance extinguished like a guttering candle.
Lovely line. Had to call out this excellent writing. Well done!
 
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Will Louis grow to hate Hjalmar as well?

Will Hjalmar's ambition lead to his downfall? What does he even plan to do if he does conquer all of Neustria?
 
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Great to get this new chapter. Your perspective writing really helps this along as we are getting nearly a 360-degree view of what is happening.

Plus...

Lovely line. Had to call out this excellent writing. Well done!
Thank you! There is not much going on in Coutances as of yet, so it's imperative we see from the perspective of the other players in the region. Otherwise I'd have to write 3 or 4 chapters of straight farming and woodcutting as the peasants continue living their meager lives. :D

Will Louis grow to hate Hjalmar as well?

Will Hjalmar's ambition lead to his downfall? What does he even plan to do if he does conquer all of Neustria?
Oh Louis certainly hates Hjalmar already, he killed his parents and destroyed his town after all. I'd wager there is not one person in that town that doesn't hate his guts. Even Haesteinn and some of the Norsemen have started to hate on Hjalmar...

Truly? I don't think Hjalmar has a grand master plan. He's just going along for the ride, trying to see how far his might takes him. It does seem farfetched that he could hold Neustria even if he conquered it though, especially once King Charles stops his warring in Lotharingia and focuses on the Viking threat.
 
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Hjalmar needs to quit while the going is good, otherwise he'll end up dead by spearpoint. But maybe that is what he wants. To have the thrill of adventure and the chance to enter Valhalla as a legend.
 
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Hjalmar needs to quit while the going is good, otherwise he'll end up dead by spearpoint. But maybe that is what he wants. To have the thrill of adventure and the chance to enter Valhalla as a legend.

Yeah, that's my thinking, too. Hjalmar ultimately wants a Viking death with skalds reciting his deeds in the mead halls.
 
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I managed to finally catch up and I’m really enjoying this AAR. Keep up the great work!
 
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Hjalmar needs to quit while the going is good, otherwise he'll end up dead by spearpoint. But maybe that is what he wants. To have the thrill of adventure and the chance to enter Valhalla as a legend.
Yeah, that's my thinking, too. Hjalmar ultimately wants a Viking death with skalds reciting his deeds in the mead halls.
Like any proud Nordic warrior, Hjalmar certainly desires such a death. However he is still filled with youth, and thus he has no plans to join the corpse hall any time soon. He fosters uncertainty in the Viking camp, weakening Haesteinn's authority and hold over the warriors. Hjalmar wishes to supplant the aging Viking Lord, and thus he must perform deeds of bravery that show he is worthy of a following. Also, a lord must have wealth to give his warriors, and so he must plunder to buy the men's loyalty.
I managed to finally catch up and I’m really enjoying this AAR. Keep up the great work!
Thank you for the kind words. I should be posting another chapter before the end of the weekend, so it's good you're caught up :).
 
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Chapter 5 - The Rogue Prince
Chapter 5 - The Rogue Prince

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The news coming from the South had been grievous. Percy and Avranches had been taken by the pagans and its garrisons had been put to the sword. King Salomon of Brittany and Duke Hugo of Anjou were forced to admit their previous plan of marching straight to Cherbourg could no longer proceed, as by doing so they'd be walking into a trap, where'd they could be caught between the main Viking army at Cherbourg and a smaller one out of the recently fallen fortresses to the South.

Both rulers were well aware that their previous indecision and quarreling had led to their slow pace, and thus the loss of Percy and Avranches fell upon them. Frustrated and unwilling to admit defeat, both Salomon and Hugo finally came to an agreement. They figured whatever forces garrisoned the two southern holdfasts would likely be meager, and thus quick to fall if pressed, especially if the attack came swiftly before they could even send word for help. Thus their new plan came to be: Led by Hugo and Salomon, their cavalry, knights and mounted infantry both, would split from the main army and divide into two mounted contingents, with each galloping fast toward the two lost strongholds to the South. Their hope was to overwhelm the defenders with sheer speed, while the footmen stood to guard the pass to the North, ensuring no reinforcements would aid the defenders by land.

Their plan was sound, yet there was a glaring hole in its foundations. If both the King and the Duke were to head South, the matter of who would lead the main army in their absence remained. Duke Hugo pushed forward his half-brother Eudes, son of the late Robert "the Strong" who fell prey to Haesteinn during a previous raid of his, but King Salomon shot the idea down as Eudes was but a child of 10, a mere squire unfit to lead men, and who if given command may fall prey to anger and seek vengeance on his father's murderer, disobeying orders to stay put.

King Salomon suggested his own brother Riwallon, but the man had been afflicted by camp fever and thus was scarcely able to lead himself to supper, let alone lead a thousand men. His own son, also named Riwallon, had stayed behind at Bayeaux to man the garrison which had recently lost their leader, and thus Salomon was forced to rely on more distant relatives to command in their absence. Many had come forward requesting such position, such as Prince Pascueten of Vannes, Prince Guruant of Rennes, and Prince Guihomarch of Leon, but King Salomon was hesitant to grant either of them such power, as they all were landed gentry with ambition of their own, and thus he feared they could convince the army to join a coup against him.*

In the end they settled for Prince Ridoredh of Nantes. Ridoredh was the only son and sole heir to the previous King of Brittany, King Erispoe I, who had succumbed to an assassin's blade in the midst of church service a decade prior. As Brittany faced war with the Franks and incursions by the Norsemen at the time of his murder, the Breton nobility saw fit to crown Erispoe's cousin Salomon instead of his young son Ridoredh, and thus Prince Ridoredh was dispossessed of his inheritance, lands, and titles, destined to a life in the clergy. It was whispered at the Breton court that King Salomon was a kinslayer, for it was an open secret that King Salomon had sent the catspaw that took Erispoe's life, but as he had bribed most of the nobles and granted vast stretches of land to the church, none dared to question his legitimacy to the crown. Finally a consensus was reached and Prince Ridoredh was selected. King Salomon and his nobles thought Ridoredh weak-willed and thus a safe choice to leave in charge of the foot soldiers, for he had never shown any promise or desire to fight for his claim. Duke Hugo was uncertain of the Prince's ability, but as he was eager to depart for Percy he relented and settled for their choice.

That decision would be their undoing.

Prince Ridoredh stood at a crossroads, of mind and of heart. The weight of his armor pressing on his shoulders, which as of late had grown heavy with doubt. The moonlight filtered through the canopy of trees, casting eerie shadows on the ground. The soldiers had begun making camp, their faces a mix of boredom and worry as their thoughts filled with the battles King Salomon and Duke Hugo were to face at Percy and Avranches.

He thought of his father, a righteous man who had ruled with wisdom and justice, and who dedicated his life to the prosperity of Brittany. The memory of his father’s murder at the hands of King Salomon burned in his heart. The usurper had taken everything from him, and now, he was expected to protect the very man who had caused him so much pain.

Ridoredh’s mind raced. If he stayed, he would be honoring his duty to his kingdom, preventing the King from falling into a trap. But the thought of aiding his father’s murderer was unbearable. Marching north to face the Vikings was a certain death sentence, but the loss of men would be so severe that it would greatly weaken Salomon's hold on the Kingdom, perhaps giving Ridoredh a chance to reclaim his inheritance if he managed to escape the slaughter.

He turned to the three peasant brothers from Coutances who had safely guided their armies across the marshes of the Cotentin, and who he invited to share on his fire for the night. There they sat against the flames, fending off the familiar cold of the lands they considered home, lands they had fought and bled for against the Vikings, lands he knew they would follow him into battle for.

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Henri was the oldest of the three, and their undisputed leader. A friend to all, a pious Christian, and a man fierce enough to face any obstacles in his path. He had led the reconstruction of their village after a brutal sack by Haesteinn and Hjalmar.

Louis was the second oldest, a a fierce man more at home in battle than by the hearth. Robust of body and easy to anger, quick to act before giving any thought to a problem. He had served as part of the garrison of Bayeaux, and thus had grown intimate with the ways of war.

Leon was the youngest of the three present. He was snakelike, slender, and sly. Secretive. Ambition flared in his eyes. He could always be found sharpening the small dagger that he liked to hide under his sleeve.

There were two other brothers, albeit they had remained back home to guard their half-restored village. Eudes the fallen monk who had fathered bastards on half the townswomen, and Baudouin the frail and melancholic younger brother who was forced to stay behind, lest he eagerly marched to his death in an attempt to rectify his cowardice of years prior. They also had an uncle Loup and his two sons Raynaud and Godefroy, the first a bishop and the second a warrior akin to Louis. There were two sisters as well, but the three brothers only spoke of Orianne, the youngest of their sisters and who all the men at the village wanted to marry, hesitant to speak of the older one, as if recalling a painful memory.


"Tell me Henri, if you were given the chance to inflict vengeance on your enemy, even if it cost your own life, would you do it?" Ridoredh asked, his voice heavy with emotion. Not expecting the Prince to inquiry into his thoughts, Henri was taken aback and began to think of a response. Nobles thought little about the smallfolk, and even less about their thoughts. Henri began to think of a response the Prince would like to hear, rather than what he actually wanted to say, as was befit of his station. Before Henri could reply however, his younger brother Leon answered in a mischievous tone. "I would seize the chance milord, and never let go. After all, men like us rarely get such opportunities. I would joyfully go to my death if it meant paying back in kind."

Louis punched his younger brother in the arm for giving such a brash answer, but smiled nonetheless, pleased with Leon's answer. Henri apologized for Leon's insolence in speaking out of turn, but the Prince only nodded, finding in that peasant boy Leon a kindred soul. Ridoredh took a deep breath, finally pulling the weight off his shoulder. “We march north,” he declared, his voice resolute. “We will face the Vikings and let fate decide our path.” A worried look appeared on Henri's face, as he feared the consequences of disobeying the King's orders. Timorous to speak out, Henri almost whispered at the prince. "Milord, if I may, your uncle, the King—" Anger flushed in Prince Ridoredh's face. Thundering with rage, he screamed at Henri. "The King," and he said that with derision, "has gone South boy, and I command here! If you wish to keep your tongue you'll be wise to remember that, before you DARE question my decisions again, boy," and he spoke that last word as an insult, infantilizing Henri, putting the older peasant back in his low place.

Before resting for the night, the Prince met with his personal retinue. A band of warriors loyal to the memory of his father numbering a few more than a hundred men. He commanded them to return to their homesteads, claiming he needed to save his strength for the real battle to come against his uncle. He did not wish to shed their blood in the futile battle to come, and so they scattered in the night, leaving before dawn, promising to reform when the Prince called again.

As the first light of dawn broke, confusion erupted across the camp as the soldiers heard of Ridoredh’s new, unforseen plan. "There's been a messenger in the night," Prince Ridoredh spoke the lies dismissively to everybody, and to nobody, speaking at the air more than at his host. "The King and Duke claimed great victories at Percy and Avranches. The bulk of the enemy army has fallen or fled. We must now deal the coup de grace!" And so the army moved with purpose. The air was thick with tension, with each step bringing them closer to the Viking settlement of Cherbourg. Ridoredh rode at the front, with the Coutances brothers at his side, leading the way. His eyes fixed on the distant hills where the enemy lay in wait. His heart pounded with a mix of fear and determination. This was not just a battle for survival, but a quest for vengeance against King Salomon, the man who had taken everything from him.

As Henri was quick to explain to the Prince, their host had long been spotted by Haesteinn's scouts, and a great army had gathered outside the walls of Cherbourg, the Viking leaders surely aware of their numerical superiority. The clash came swiftly. The Norsemen, fierce and unyielding, met Ridoredh’s forces with a ferocity that shook the ground. Swords clashed, shields splintered, and the cries of the wounded filled the air. Ridoredh fought with a fury born of years of pent-up rage. His blade cut through the enemy ranks, each strike a step closer to avenging his father. Or was it? The blood madness had taken over him, and for a second he realized none of this put him closer to the crown. But then another enemy approached, and such thoughts fled his mind.

Despite their valor, Ridoredh’s army was outnumbered and outmatched. The three brothers saw it plainly, this was no battle, but a slaughter. Sheep walking into the wolf's den. They were no warriors, not truly. Even Louis who served at Bayeaux had only fended off a single ship's crew. He knew nothing of battle. The Vikings pressed their advantage, and with their superior numbers slowly overwhelmed the Prince's army. Louis wanted to stay with the Prince, but Henri and Leon urged him repeatedly before he finally agreed to flee, and the three ran before the true carnage began, the clatter of their dropped shields muted by the shrieks of the dying. Ridoredh found himself surrounded, his men falling one by one. Yet, he fought on, laughing maniacally, for Prince Ridoredh did not see the enemy in front of him, only the face of King Salomon as he learned the news of his army's destruction. Soaked in the blood of his treacherous uncle, the Prince smiled with delight, and the Northmen in front of him stood still, stupefied at his frightening visage.

"Spare that one!, with the fancy red coat" Haesteinn yelled and pointed at Ridoredh's blood splattered white surcoat, as the vikings surrounded the last seven warriors who remained of the Prince's once great host. "You can kill the rest."

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*Everyone was a Prince in Brittany. I'm not even going to bother explaining how convoluted it all was, but here's a picture depicting some of the Breton noblemen who appear or were mentioned in this chapter. You may need to zoom in to see it clearly. There are actually a great many degrees of separation between Salomon's side of the family and Ridoredh's, but Wikipedia refers to the King as the Prince's uncle, so I went ahead and did the same.

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I'll post the Coutances family tree next chapter I think. I hope this chapter wasn't too verbose. Thanks for reading.
 
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"Spare that one!, with the red surcoat" Haesteinn yelled and pointed at Ridoredh's blood splattered white surcoat, as the vikings surrounded the last seven warriors who remained of the Prince's once great host. "You can kill the rest."
Ridoredh got lucky there, I wonder if this will help him in his quest to retake the throne.
 
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Ridoredh's plan seems to have backfired. On the other hand, Haesteinn might find that he wants an ally in Brittany. What would Hjalmar think of that?
 
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Ridoredh got lucky there, I wonder if this will help him in his quest to retake the throne.
Indeed he did. His status as a prince, even if an unlanded one, meant he wore armor far better than that of the average soldier, and thus Haesteinn wagered he must be a noble and thus worth a great ransom, hence why he was spared. He is no closer to the throne truly, but King Salomon grasp on the crown has greatly weakened, as the bulk of that fallen army was from Brittany. Even if Ridoredh never gets a chance to grasp the crown, perhaps the other Princes may seek to overthrow the weakened King Salomon.
Ridoredh's plan seems to have backfired. On the other hand, Haesteinn might find that he wants an ally in Brittany. What would Hjalmar think of that?
Well his plan was never truly sound, but it mostly worked. Ridoredh knew there was no hope to defeat the Vikings, so he got what he wanted. A sort of twisted vengeance on his uncle.

Ridoredh did send his own troops away before the battle, meaning his strength, even if small, is still unspent. You are indeed right, Haesteinn may find in the vengeful Prince a good ally to exploit for his own goals...
 
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I hope this chapter wasn't too verbose. Thanks for reading.
I didn't think so. You painted a good picture of Ridoredh's hatred of Salomon in a short time.

Where will the brothers go now? Back to their village?
 
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I didn't think so. You painted a good picture of Ridoredh's hatred of Salomon in a short time.

Where will the brothers go now? Back to their village?
Thanks. Some of these characters I paint may only show up for a chapter or two, so I feel it's necessary to write why they do what they do before they disappear, especially ones who impact the story.

They will indeed return home. The people of Coutances and the Cotentin Peninsula as a whole feel abandoned by their betters, and thus feel no obligation to warn Duke Hugo and King Salomon about the slaughter of Prince Ridoredh's army. For many decades these people have suffered under Viking attacks, and since the establishment of Cherbourg, Frankish and Breton authority in that land had all but vanished. Had they not been left defenseless and ignored for so long, perhaps one of the brothers might have felt compelled to warn them, but instead they went home and sought refuge there among their family and dear townsfolk.

I’m really enjoying the narrative of the story and interactions between characters. It’s more work, but always what makes me keep reading.
Thanks. I know it may not be for everybody, especially as there are very few in-game pictures as of yet. So far it's been mostly setup, but the pictures will come soon.

I should have a new chapter out this weekend, thanks for reading!
 
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Finally, caught up with this AAR again. And what surprises this chapter contained! Looking forward to more of the adventures of the vengeful prince.

I hope this chapter wasn't too verbose. Thanks for reading.

If this is verbosity, my wish is for more AARs to be verbose. Well done. Nicely written.
 
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Chapter 6 - A Failed Gambit
Chapter 6 - A Failed Gambit

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The failed Siege of Percy

"Today, we take back what is ours," Duke Hugo declared, his voice carrying over the ranks of his army. "We will slay the pagan bastards, and retake Percy for the good of Christendom!"

The signal was given, and the men of Anjou began their advance under the last vestiges of darkness. The Duke rode at the front of his column, heart pounding with anticipation. He feared their delays to build siege engines had betrayed their advance, but the plan remained the same nonetheless, to breach the outer defenses before the Norsemen could mount a proper defense.

As they neared the fortress of Percy, the first rays of dawn began to pierce the horizon. Hugo's knights led the charge, their horses thundering across the ground. The men carrying the ladders and battering ram followed, ready to break down the gates of the walled town. The sun was high on the sky, and the Duke failed to consider it when planning his assault. His men laid straight on its path, its beaming rays blinding the attackers, making it difficult for his men to see the hail of arrows raining down from above the castle's walls. The Vikings were ready.

Hugo watched in horror as his men fell under the relentless barrage. The air was thick with the sound of arrows whistling through the air and the cries of the wounded. The knights reached the walls and began to scale them using ladders, while on the ground what few arches Hugo commanded began firing at the defenders, hoping to provide support to the climbers. The defenders began throwing stones down the ladders, causing the attackers to fall and killing more than a few. When they ran out of projectiles, mixture of boiling water and ale began to pour from the battlements, adding to the chaos above and taking the skin off any man unfortunate to be on its path. Despite the carnage, Hugo urged his men forward. “To the walls!” he shouted, drawing his sword. “For Anjou!”

More and more of his men continued to climb the ladders, fighting their way up Percy with a ferocity Hugo had never seen. Both sides were suffering heavy losses, the Vikings determined to defend their stronghold at all costs. Despite being the oldest of three brothers, Duke Hugo had always been the subject of their pranks and mockery, often being called a craven. A third of his men were up the walls already, yet he remained on the ground giving orders. They urged him from above to join, claiming it was safe to scale up already, and Hugo clearly saw his men were gaining the upper hand. Yet he still hesitated. Something seemed off about the whole thing.

Each Viking warrior is expected to carry 2 to 3 shields when they go in campaign, and during sieges they tend to line them up along the walls to inflate their numbers. Making someone who never dealt with their kind think the garrison is two or three times larger than it really is, as they believe each shield represents a warrior, losing morale and discouraging assaults. Duke Hugo was well aware of this deceitful tactic, and yet the count of the shields did not match the amount of defenders at the walls, even when taking such inflation into account. There were far too many shields, perhaps 4 or 5 to every man in the garrison.

And just when Hugo realized he had fallen into a trap, the Northmen launched their counterattack. Hidden sally ports opened all along the walls, and small groups of Viking warriors emerged, attacking the Duke's forces from the flanks and rear. The sudden onslaught threw his men into disarray, and Hugo struggled to maintain order. Then the main gate opened, and even more of the defenders poured out to join the sortie.

“Hold the line!” he shouted, but it was no use. The Vikings’ surprise attack had shattered their formation. Realizing the assault was failing, Hugo made the difficult decision to order a retreat. His forces withdrew under heavy fire toward their horse line, the Norsemen pursuing them to ensure they did not regroup for another attack. The retreat was chaotic, and the smell of blood frightened their horses, sending them into a panic, crushing pursuer and pursued both along their path. Nearly half of Hugo's men were captured or killed, including all those who made the climb atop the walls. The Duke himself nearly lost his life to a Norseman's axe, but the man slipped on the muddy ground and Hugo got away.


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Vikings ambushing the Breton and Frankish scouts

A few hours later, the Duke would stumble upon the remains of King Salomon's army, who also suffered a similar fate under the walls of Avranches. Both leaders were crestfallen. Their gambit had failed, and Haesteinn remained at large, his hold on Francia undisturbed. Their march North toward Prince Ridoredh's army was a quiet one, their combined host sullen after their disastrous defeats. They had sent scouts ahead to link up with the Prince's host, but despite several hours passing, none had returned.

Night had fallen, and Duke Hugo urged the Breton King to pause their march and make camp, as rest was sorely needed and the woods were treacherous to travel under moonlight. Despite his weariness, Salomon denied the request, commanding the army to march on, fearing that the Vikings had continued their pursuit and would attack while they slept. King Salomon would rather join up with his cousin's host before he dared put his eyes to rest.

Exhausted, Hugo and Salomon finally made it to spot where they had left their footmen under Prince Ridoredh's command, but no one was there to receive them. They feared his army got attacked by the Vikings of Cherbourg, but the site lacked any signs of battle. There were no blood to be seen, no corpses scattered around, no weapons littering the field. It was as if they had simply vanished.

Unable to go on any further, and unwilling to spend any more time ahorse, both Duke Hugo and King Salomon agreed to make camp for the night. Ridoredh and the whereabouts of the army could wait until dawn, their men needed respite. But just as the soldiers began to relax and light their nightfires, Haesteinn, Hjalmar "the Red," and all the might of Cherbourg descended upon them.

The Norsemen faced little resistance, they cut through the panicked camp like a hot knife through butter, and they made that hilltop rich with Christian blood. Both King Salomon and Duke Hugo managed to escape the slaughter yet again, but many other nobles were captured, including the Duke's 10 year-old half-brother Eudes, and two relatives of King Salomon, the Count Alfrond of Cornouaille and Prince Guruant of Rennes. What remained of their broken host fled in all directions, but the bulk of them rank East toward Bayeux, where King Salomon's son Riwallon commanded the garrison. Their war seemed all but lost.

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Exhausted, Hugo and Salomon finally made it to spot where they had left their footmen under Prince Ridoredh's command, but no one was there to receive them. They feared his army got attacked by the Vikings of Cherbourg, but the site lacked any signs of battle. There were no blood to be seen, no corpses scattered around, no weapons littering the field. It was as if they had simply vanished.
Uh oh. This can't be good. Either Ridoredh and a large army are gone, weakening Brittany, or he's planning an uprising.
 
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Uh oh. This can't be good. Either Ridoredh and a large army are gone, weakening Brittany, or he's planning an uprising.
Hehe, they are gone o_O, Ridoredh marched them all to their death in the previous chapter. What remains of Hugo's and Salomon's doubly broken host is all that remains to fight against the Vikings. Ridoredh was captured by Haesteinn, but he's not in chains like the guys who got captured in this chapter, but has instead become an ally to the Vikings.

Thanks for reading!
 
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Ridoredh was captured by Haesteinn, but he's not in chains like the guys who got captured in this chapter, but has instead become an ally to the Vikings.
He must think Haesteinn will help him take Brittany. I think he's mistaken.
 
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@Darumaka I would love a little peek behind the curtain on this one. It looks like you’re currently playing as the Vikings. This really dumb split in the armies, was that a case of bad AI that you built a story around or did you orchestrate this by switching back and forth between sides to further your story?
 
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