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XIV
November 30, 1936​

Leutnant Adler was distracted. It had been three weeks since he’d left East Elbia, and still no letter had come. He had been certain that the letter posted from Seville would at least pique her interest. To be sure, his mother had written three heartrending masterpieces in that time and if he had actually finished reading them, he might have been persuaded to send her a note proclaiming his intentions on staying safe. Not that he actually intended to stay ‘safe’ while on this particular adventure. The Kondor Legion offered just the sort of action which would, in time, make a great name of Wilhelm Adler. He could see the headlines now, Leutnant…no…Hauptman Adler; the hero of Spain. Of course, he would grace the front pages of newspapers back home, standing next to his gaudily decorated Heinkel. Surely that would induce that proud, chit of a girl to at least give him the time of day. How she would wish she had replied sooner to his letters as he was mobbed by all the other girls back…Wilhelm shook his head clear and went back to scanning the sky for his prey. Spread out below him were several flights of Heinkel 51s in perfect formation. Together, thought Wilhelm, we’ll find glory today!

Ian had been disappointed with the pace of operations. He had assumed that ‘first patrol’ meant dawn patrol. Instead he had found himself impatiently cramped into his Chato on the ground waiting for a scramble signal which might never come. A flock of birds flew over, squawking forth their surprise at finding the day void of precipitation. Ian’s eyes followed the erratic path of the birds in a vain attempt to share in their joy. Finally tiring of watching the birds, Ian looked over at Eddie’s plane and watched Eddie’s excited movements as he showed Maria the dials and controls in his cockpit. Ian smiled as he thought of Maria’s partner in the sewing room. Christina had smiled mischievously at Ian when he had brought his uniform to be mended the day before. As Ian mused over the intentions of a young woman he could barely understand, the field sprang to life. Maria jumped down from her perch on Eddie’s bi-plane and waved goodbye. Belatedly, Ian looked up and saw that the alarm rockets had fired from the hacienda. Ian hurriedly slipped his goggles on and took off with the rest of the LaCalle’s patrol. Ian looked back and noticed that the American patrol was also preparing to take off to join them. LaCalle led the way toward the front.

Wilhelm traced the Jarama River across the countryside with his eyes. The fields and orchards below created a patchwork tapestry of clutter to search through. Somewhere out there was a Republican airplane with his name on it. A puff of smoke appeared from the south bank of the river, and then was joined by five more in the same vicinity. Wilhelm looked toward the north and was rewarded by seeing the shells land with small clouds of mud and smoke just short of a small log structure. Small men like ants poured from the structure and scrambled around in an amusing dance with death. Wilhelm smiled grimly as he watched the life and death struggle from afar. Suddenly a flash of movement caught his eye. Republican fighters! He counted four…no….eight Chatos in two formations. The first squadron of Heinkels rolled over and began to engage. Wilhelm looked over at his squadron leader and was disappointed to see that they would be following the others into battle. His impulse to break formation and race after glory was tempered by the patience and discipline drilled into him in training. A few seconds of delay would hardly mean much at the end of the day.

Ian was initially surprised to see LaCalle waggle his wings violently. However, he soon remembered that this maneuver was a danger signal and began flying in tighter formation. LaCalle waited a few seconds to allow the American patrol to close up, then threw his plane into a tight left bank. Ben followed a second later, followed by Ian, Eddie, and the rest of the American patrol in succession. Knowing the Lufberry circle was a last ditch defensive maneuver, Ian frantically looked about for the danger and finally spotted it when he looked up. The sky was practically full of little dots, all seeming to grow larger by the moment. Some of them were already on their way down to attack, while others were getting into position to start their dives. Ian’s brain coldly estimated upwards of 50 to 60 enemy aircraft, which translated into roughly eight to one odds. A group of four Heinkels were first to reach the circle. Seeing the defensive formation, they fired their machineguns from long-range and then veered off and dove below the Republican planes.

Wilhelm watched as the first Heinkels began lazily flying around below the Chatos. He smiled grimly as he watched one of the Republican planes peel off and dive in an attempt to reach the easy looking targets. The pilot didn’t even get half-way. A second flight of Heinkels was on his tail. The Chato gave a sort of jerk as the Heinkels flashed past, then wavered away to the north in a dive. The plane looked to be heading for a clearing in an attempt to crash land, but ended up smacking into a hill-side instead. First blood had been spilled. Wilhelm’s flight rolled over and began their attack run.

Ian watched in horror as Ben’s plane smacked into the hill-side. Tearing his eyes away from the ground, he saw Eddie loop up and over and go down after the Heinkels below. Without hesitation, Ian followed after him. Eddie straightened out his dive and quickly reeled in one of the Heinkels. A long burst of machinegun fire, and his opponent’s right wing collapsed. The twirling wreckage of the plane dropped quickly from the sky. Ian shouted exultantly with joy at the kill, but his joy ended quickly. Two enemy planes were already on Eddie’s tail. Another burst of machinegun fire, and Eddie’s plane was hit. Eddie came up and over in an Immelmann maneuver, but the stress on his plane was too much and it came apart in the air.

Wilhelm concentrated on following his squadron leader as they dove through the Republican circle. A burst of machinegun fire from one of the Chatos missed wide and he was safely below the main group of circling I-15s. His Kondor Legion flight split into pairs and began following the two new fools who had left the Lufberry circle. Wilhelm wolfishly grinned as he watched his squadron leader shoot the first Chato into pieces. Within seconds he had the second biplane in his sights. There was no way he was going to miss this easy of a kill. He began firing.
 
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Eddie is already dead? This can't be! Okay, calm down, there is obviously more to this than meets the eye. Patience is virtue, or so I am told. Must practice patience. Aaaaaaaaaaaah! It's not working!

I must know what happened!:eek:
 
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Okay , very exhilerating so far and very tense . I'm with grayghost that i'm desperately waiting to see what's going on here . As for the lingo and the maneuvers ; i always always always have loved dogfights so you're making one of my AAR dreams come true , TheExecuter . A unique experience as always reading your AAR !
 
Ahh Eddie will be fine, he's got a parachute on. And the plane has 'come apart in the air' so there's nothing for him to get entangled in, it's a blessing in disguise really. ;)

I assume Adler's name was deliberate, Eddie getting shot down by the German 'Eagle'?
 
Bail out! Bail out! And dodge the jilted, caddish Kraut-type with the nasty-looking machine gun!

Entertaining stuff! I like how you alternate paragraphs between the two. Is that just a single cameo for Wilhelm Adler (btw, as I'm sure you know: Adler means eagle- appropriate or what :D?), or will he be running the course? I rather like him- and he has the appropriate credentials to take part in a love story after all!
 
I just spent the last hour or so reading your story. Well written! I'm enjoying it immensely! Hopefully Eddie will be okay :)
 
Ian was certainly getting into the routine and joining in the gang with cards and girls, but then this happens. It's real now.

Caught up and glad I didn't miss too much. :)
 
Great stuff so far. Happy to subscribe.

It seems to me that Ian and his republican friends need to be a bit more tight on the disciplined flying. If the circle is your "last ditch defence", prudence dictates that you keep to the formation. Of course, I fly a desk, sooo, waddoo I know... :confused:

Regardless, their folly makes for great reading. Pretty sure that I wouldn't want to read an account of how everything went perfectly and all hands on both sides went home unscathed. Apparently, I may be a bit bloodthirsty... :eek:
 
DerKaiser said:
Update any time soon...?

Yes, indeed....an update...uh...soon. Truth be told, I had planned on updating tonight, but the chapter is now only half-written. I've had to rewrite it 'in an entirely different style, and at great expense' of time. Ultimately I hope the end result is in keeping with what the story demands.

grayghost said:
Eddie is already dead? This can't be! Okay, calm down, there is obviously more to this than meets the eye. Patience is virtue, or so I am told. Must practice patience. Aaaaaaaaaaaah! It's not working!

I must know what happened!

Patience is indeed a virtue...I must beg you wait practice just a little while longer! As for Eddie's demise...I really can't say. You'll just have to wait and see like everyone else.

<Inigo Montoya>I hate waiting...</Inigo Montoya>

canonized said:
Okay , very exhilerating so far and very tense . I'm with grayghost that i'm desperately waiting to see what's going on here . As for the lingo and the maneuvers ; i always always always have loved dogfights so you're making one of my AAR dreams come true , TheExecuter . A unique experience as always reading your AAR !

Thanks! That was exactly the mood I was shooting for. More air combat lingo to come I swear!

BTW, congrats on sweeping the ACA awards for the year...quite the impressive accomplishment!

El Pip said:
Ahh Eddie will be fine, he's got a parachute on. And the plane has 'come apart in the air' so there's nothing for him to get entangled in, it's a blessing in disguise really.

I assume Adler's name was deliberate, Eddie getting shot down by the German 'Eagle'?

Guessing my plotlines in advance again are we? Well, we shall soon see 'who is right, and who is dead.' (Man, I seem to be on a Princess Bride kick tonight...)

Adler's name is deliberate...for reasons which will become apparent later on.

Mettermrck said:
Love a good dogfight! And if this is like GI-Joe, everyone survives and everyone has a parachute. Look forward to more!

Thanks! Unfortunately, this is not like GI-Joe...but I can promise that at least Ian survives to make it to the prologue. Oh, that wasn't really much of an admission? :eek: Oh well... :D

DerKaiser said:
Bail out! Bail out! And dodge the jilted, caddish Kraut-type with the nasty-looking machine gun!

Entertaining stuff! I like how you alternate paragraphs between the two. Is that just a single cameo for Wilhelm Adler (btw, as I'm sure you know: Adler means eagle- appropriate or what ?), or will he be running the course? I rather like him- and he has the appropriate credentials to take part in a love story after all!

If Ian could hear you screaming at the screen, he'd...wait, I can't tell you what he'll do yet!

I'm glad to see you have an appropriate view of Wilhelm already! He will be making further appearances in the story. Oops, I just revealed too much!

Atlantic Friend said:
Hun in the sun ! Hun in the sun !

But now we demand an update, as you can't leave us and these daring chaps hanging like that !

:cool: Dear me...I do believe I have left you guys hanging for far too long. I'm a bad boy! Bad! Now if only I could write in hurricane style instead of my plodding, pedestrian pace.

CatKnight said:
I just spent the last hour or so reading your story. Well written! I'm enjoying it immensely! Hopefully Eddie will be okay

Thanks and welcome! I'm glad your enjoying the story! Eddie's fate will be dealt with shortly...I'm afraid thats all I can say right now.

coz1 said:
Ian was certainly getting into the routine and joining in the gang with cards and girls, but then this happens. It's real now.

Caught up and glad I didn't miss too much.

Yep...reality has intruded. Death has a way of rudely intruding into the 'glory and adventure' of war. Don't worry about missing too much for now...work has been monopolizing my time lately. Don't they know I can't be working overtime? :(

Bafflegab said:
Great stuff so far. Happy to subscribe.

It seems to me that Ian and his republican friends need to be a bit more tight on the disciplined flying. If the circle is your "last ditch defence", prudence dictates that you keep to the formation. Of course, I fly a desk, sooo, waddoo I know...

Regardless, their folly makes for great reading. Pretty sure that I wouldn't want to read an account of how everything went perfectly and all hands on both sides went home unscathed. Apparently, I may be a bit bloodthirsty...

Thanks and welcome to the story! Yep, Ian and some of his buddies have just been taught a painful lesson in discipline. We shall see who survives it shortly.

Ah...a bloodthirsty reader, our first! Don't worry, people will die in this story and things will not all end up on the up-and-up. But you already knew that from the prologue!

To Everyone:
Thanks for reading this far and encouraging me to continue. I will try to get Chapter 15 finished and up in the next few days. Look for some form of relief from your 'cliff-hanging' woes. Also, thanks to everyone who voted in the AARland Choice Awards. Your contribution to the community is what powers the authors around here to continue to pour forth such great works.
 
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XV
November 30, 1936​

Ian watched the bits of Eddie’s Chato flutter and twist their way down towards the river below. Despite his best efforts, no sign of a parachute could be seen. Inexplicably, Ian heard a whisper behind him, Look back… As Ian turned to look, the voice shrieked, PULL UP! Pulling back on the stick by reflex, Ian looked back and marveled at the rather pretty sight of a Heinkel with the sun shining through the haze behind it. Little flashes were sparkling through the propeller blades. Like an electric shock, the reality of the danger he was in jolted Ian into a sharp right-hand climb and he began searching for the safety of the circle. As he did so, another flight of Chatos joined the circle from the north, bolstering the Republican numbers to an even dozen.

Wilhelm cursed in rage as the Chato in his sights suddenly popped up and began a tight climbing turn. His initial shots fell short, and the urge to attempt to follow his now climbing opponent was again restrained by his training. Wilhelm’s squadron leader had continued his dive and, though his every impulse screamed for a chance to follow the foolish Republican, Wilhelm obeyed the inflexible rule: ‘Thou shalt not leave thy wingleader.’

Ian concentrated on maintaining formation. The Heinkels, seeing that the Republican fighters had abandoned efforts to break from formation and engage, sought to exploit the circle’s known weakness and began making diving attacks trusting in long-range shooting to have an effect. After a few minutes of mindlessly following the tail of the aircraft in front of him, Ian had an idea. As the next set of Heinkels came diving in, he pushed his Chato into a diving left-hand turn, passed under the circle and, as the Nationalist fighters passed by, got off some shots of his own. After firing, he used his speed and momentum to swing himself back into the formation. Ian busied himself attempting to perfect this maneuver for another five minutes before the Heinkels all inexplicably seemed to dive for their own lines. The cause of this behavior was soon apparent as a whole squadron of friendly monoplane fighters flashed past.

Wilhelm was shaking. He told himself that it was rage; that he was angry with his failure to down or even damage one of the Republican planes. The idea that his feelings were caused by the Republican I-16s nearly catching his Heinkel before he could get over the mountain to safety was instantly over-ruled. One thing was certain; he was going to have to suffer the inevitable boasting from his more successful squadron mates tonight at the canteen. Sighing heavily to himself, Wilhelm vowed that he would make a name for himself in this war…and that the bastard Republicans would suffer dearly in the process.

As Ian followed LaCalle back to the aerodrome, he reflected on his first combat. The sight of the gaps in their formations sickened him. As he looked to his left, where Eddie usually flew, the empty space continued to remind of the slow fluttering of the wing fabrics from Eddie’s doomed plane. He tried to concentrate on counting the losses, and saw that the American patrol had lost two planes, while Jose’s flight was also short by one. Soon, the field came into view and Ian put all his thoughts into landing.

As he taxied to the outbuildings, he saw for the first time how attached the ground crews had become to their pilots. Juanas, Eddie’s mechanic, came flying up to Ian’s Chato and frantically gestured towards the spot where Eddie normally parked. Ian looked down at him and shook his head. At that, the huge mechanic burst into tears and disappeared into the spare parts shed. A few minutes later, Ian heard the sound of the broken-nosed ruffian’s sub-machinegun popping off bursts in the direction of a nearby tree. At lunch, Chang and Ian attempted to convince the mechanics that the missing men might have landed at another aerodrome, but Ian could tell that neither of them was believed. Throughout the day, whenever an airplane engine was heard over the field, everyone would rush outside to see if it was one of the lost pilots returning. Each time, however, they were disappointed, and the entire unit seemed to lapse into a state of deep depression.

Finally, LaCalle sent out a summons for all pilots to report to his car, which had been discreetly parked in the middle of the field. As the pilots arrived, LaCalle handed each a bottle of beer and indicated for the immediate consumption of the alcohol. Each man drank in silence for a while, until finally LaCalle began speaking.

“Comrades, today our squadron lost four planes. It was entirely unnecessary.”

Ian bowed his head, but said nothing.

“The pilots disregarded the instructions and warning which had been given them. You had all been told that the Lufberry formation is the best defense in such a situation. And more, you had been warned that the Heinkels could dive fifty percent faster than our ships, and you were reminded to think of other planes of the enemy besides the plane at which you were firing. The pilots who are missing forgot all three of these warnings. They left the formation, they knew there were Heinkels above, and they had eyes only for the plane at which they were firing.”

LaCalle paused, and took a deep swig from his bottle. As he continued, his tone grew softer.

“But let us not dwell on the past, nor linger on their present fate. I know that the thought of death in youth, with the deepest joys in life before you, could be seen as a great waste. Let me remind you that our comrades knew what they were doing was right, knew that they fought for all Spaniards, and knew that a fiery death awaited them in this fight or the next. They had a deep knowledge that there is a profound, moral difference between the use of force for conquest and the use of force for protection. They came here to protect, not to conquer…and they did not doubt their cause. They were right not to doubt. You all know that some things are worth dying for. They fought and died to protect my people from tyranny. For that reason we must think continually on these men and never forget their names. Their names, memorialized by the streamers of white cloud and whispers of wind in the listening sky. The names of our comrades who in their lives fought for life, who wore at their hearts the fire’s center. Born of the sun, they traveled a short while towards the sun and left the vivid air signed with their honor.”

The silence of the field was only broken by the quiet rustling of coats in the wind. LaCalle looked at each man in turn. “Drink one last bottle in remembrance of the fallen and get some sleep. Tomorrow the sun may call us as well.”
 
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Very well done.

LaCalle's speech was very poetic and poignant, as was his closing statement.

It will be interesting to see what affect Eddie's loss will have on Ian.

And I take it that the young German pilot Wilhelm will become a recurring antagonist for Ian.
 
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Great new post. That was some exciting flying. Sad to lose a fallen comrade but part of the battle.

I enjoyed the touch about them running outside when they heard a plane engine. Nicely done. :cool:
 
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An excellent post. For some reason LaCalle's closing speech had me thinking of a bastardised version of, of all things, a Vinnie Jones quote;

Vincent Jones said:
If Ian's premature demise has, in some way, enlightened the rest of you as to the grim finish below the glossy veneer of a pilots life, and inspired you to improve your flying, then his death carries with it an inherent nobility. And a supreme glory. We should all be so fortunate. You can say 'Poor Ian." I say: "Poor us.."

Now whether that says more about the standard of writing, the hitherto unsuspected philosophical depths of Vinny Jones or my own free-wheeling brain is a different question altogether.....
 
A sobering chapter to be sure . - Takes a swig of his flasked scotch -

Like I said before , I think this AAR as far as I know is unique in the details and beauty of the aerial combat . I rewatched Top Gun the other day too just out of coincidence XD . Well done , ole boy ! Now ... about that business with a girl XD .
 
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