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Prologue: Matters of State

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Hi everyone! This is my first AAR. I'm running a heavily modded playthrough as Count Ernst of Wien starting in 1066. I'm aiming for a slow-paced, narrative-heavy report, but that may change depending on the interest level and feedback.

I am neither a historian nor a professional writer, and in particular I'm still getting the hang of the finer points of dialogue. Feel free to make suggestions that would improve the clarity of the writing or that would add detail to the setting.

I can post the full modlist later if anyone is interested. The main ones I'm running are 1) More Bookmarks +, which imports title histories and starting characters from CK2's HIP mod, and 2) Fullscreen Barbershop which is just way too cool not to use.

With that, let's get started!

Edit: Better image quality and consistent formatting



Prologue: Matters of State

September, 1066— Wien, Austria


It was after dark but Count Ernst of Wien found himself seated behind a pile of papers at his desk. For years his mother pleaded with him to find matches for his two unwed nieces. His wife, Adelheid, pointed out that there were several unwed courtiers as well. That led to an unusual number of weddings in the spring, followed by a barrage of letters and well-wishes in the fall. He hated these frivolities but he had resigned himself to working on them most evenings. At least the weddings themselves were not a complete waste; Adelheid saw to it that the newlyweds were talented additions to the court rather than the typical sycophants.

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He was roused from his self-pity by a knock at the door. He ignored it at first, but it returned accompanied by a hoarse voice:

"My liege, are you awake? It's Bishop Amalrich. Our delegation has returned."

Grunting, Ernst rose and unlatched the locks. Bishop Amalrich and Baron Poppo shuffled in and seated themselves next to the fireplace. The Count poured two goblets of wine from a decanter.

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"You look parched. I imagine the roads were difficult this time of year."

Amalrich downed his cup and wiped the corners of his mouth "Not overly so. In fact, Poppo and I rather enjoyed the exercise."

The baron raised his eyebrows but said nothing. Amalrich’s complexion was pallid and his hands were still shaking from the cold. Ernst shook his head. He should have waited until after the spring thaw to send them. A snowstorm would be a greater threat to the bishop than any bandits on the road.

"Did the meetings go well? Will the other lords support our claim to Sankt Pölten?

The priest looked away. "They will not oppose us, I think."

"You think?" Ernst felt a sharp pressure between his eyes. "Amalrich..." he trailed off. "This is not the answer I was hoping for."

Amalrich opened his mouth, but Poppo interjected. "My liege, the other lords are preoccupied with their distaste for Duke Otto. Their indifference is almost as good as support."

"That may change if we declare war," the Count replied. "Otto is clever. He knows the key to his power lies in keeping the counts at each other’s throats. If we act, he will rally them against us for his own gain."

Poppo nodded. As chancellor, he almost admired Otto's skill at playing the counts against one another.

"So you understand, then, why I'm disappointed by your lack of progress." Ernst continued. "Did you meet with anyone from Count Markward's court?"

Amalrich cleared his throat. "Apologies, my lord, but they were away on business elsewhere."

"Elsewhere?"

The two men traded nervous glances. "They are currently in Count Wernher's court in Sankt Pölten," the bishop whispered.

Ernst gritted his teeth. "Sankt Pölten?!" Count Wernher had only a handful of soldiers, yet he continually thwarted any attempts to claim the county. It was a small miracle that Otto had not named him spymaster. At least, not yet.

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Suddenly the pain in Ernst's head was more acute. He took a deep breath and then slowly exhaled. "My apologies, friends. I'm afraid we won't find any legal or diplomatic insights at this hour. Get some rest. I will convene the small council before the end of the week."

Poppo bowed and showed himself out, but Amalrich was too exhausted to get up. God, he was pathetic. Over the years Ernst had become somewhat inured to the Church's hypocrisy. But Amalrich was the worst kind of sinner: he was useless. A less charitable man might even say he was borderline illiterate. Amalrich, to his credit, recognized this. At times the two of them treated his appointment by Pope Alexander as a sort of private joke.

Barron Poppo was a competent chancellor—nothing more, nothing less. He managed a small fief in Florisdorf that was only a short ride from the capital in Wien. This bothered Ernst to no end; he could easily run the castle on his own without delegating it to a baron. As far as he could tell, the appointment was a vestigial one, dating back to a time when his family held more lands.

The thought of these former holdings was so pleasant that, for a moment, Ernst forgot all about the drudgery of paperwork.



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By midnight, Ernst had finished his work and had locked his study. He was on his way back to his chambers when he found his wife, Adelheid, waiting for him in the hallway. He was only half-surprised she was still awake.

“Husband, you have a sour look on your face,” she grinned. “Either you have been talking with your councilors or else all the wine in your study has gone bad.”

Ernst stifled a laugh. “Am I that easy to read?”

“Like an open book. You have many talents but lying is not one of them." She clicked her tongue at him. "Twelve years of marriage and I still haven’t taught you a thing.”

“Bishop Amalrich and Baron Poppo stopped by to see me."

"And?"

"As best I can tell, they have nothing to show from their little diplomatic tour."

Adelheid waited, knowing there was more.

He sighed. "Count Wernher is hosting representatives from Markward's court."

"I see." She pursed her lips. "You think we've been beaten?"

"I think Wernher is running circles around my councilors."

"Dear, Wernher is just stalling. He has nothing to offer—only three hundred men and no eligible family to wed. Remember that Markward is not the oaf he appears to be. He will see through this charade soon enough."

"And when he does, what then?"

She moved closer to him. "Play the cards you've been dealt. We may not have land or men, but we have a good family name."

"Always mourning, seldom rejoicing" he recited.

Adelheid laughed. "Yes, the morbid family motto of House Babenberg."

"Morbid? I think it has a certain gravitas to it."

"That is does, dear. But more importantly, it's recognized everywhere from Poland to Calais."

He hesitated. "I'll send Markward a letter tomorrow."

"You will send him an invitation tomorrow."

"Adelheid, no..."

"Stop it. I hate hosting nobles just as much as you do, but these matters must be handled in person." She paused. "In. Person. What kind of gravitas do you plan to project with a letter?"

Ernst sulked. She was right, of course. "Fine, but I won't entrust Poppo with something this important."

"Then don't send him. Send Vilhelm. Markward is a fine soldier..."

"And Vilhelm is our best knight," he chuckled. "Built like an ox. They will get along splendidly."

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She waited for him to say more. Ernst thought for a moment. He was missing something obvious.

"He's married to my niece, Justizia. I’ll send them both along with her sister, Oda. Maybe... maybe Markward will get the hint."

She smiled.

"I admit, it's a good plan." He paused, then laughed to himself. "Better than anything Poppo and that moron Amalrich could come up with."

Her smile faded. "Have you been quarreling with our bishop again?"

"Adelheid, you know I can't stand him."

“Ernst, listen to me. We have had many luxuries up until now. Time. Anonymity. But once plans are in motion, we will be beset by enemies on all sides. Amalrich will never be useful for our purposes, but it would be a disaster if someone turned him against us. We cannot afford these petty squabbles once…”

Her voice trailed off as he leaned in. “Once I am a Duke?”

She pulled him closer and kissed him. “Yes. Once you are a duke.”

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The following day Ernst rose with the sun and enacted the first of his daily rituals: taking breakfast in his study. As he ate, his eyes fell on a well-worn map of Europe hanging from the wall. He unpinned it and spread it across the table.

In the center of the map sat the Holy Roman Empire. God, in His is Infinite Wisdom, had entrusted the Catholic world to two powers: a spiritual pope and a secular emperor. Ernst's opinion on this divine appointment was split. On the one hand, it was clearly a load of drivel. On the other, it was an ambitious load of drivel. The fact that the Empire persisted was proof that the popes and emperors were among the great conmen and grifters of the era. Since Ernst was a spymaster, he felt he owed such men a level of professional respect.

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In reality, a divine coronation did little to prevent scheming in the Empire. It was a cauldron simmering with discontent, and at present it was in danger of boiling over. The Emperor, Henrich IV, had already ruffled the pope's tail feathers by raising the issue of investiture—that is, whether secular rulers could appoint their own bishops. Ernst thought of Bishop Amalrich, and he suddenly felt a pang of sympathy for young Heinrich. But he also remembered his wife's words on the topic. "Quarreling with the church was a dangerous game," she would say, "and clergymen can be as cunning and ruthless as any lord." Pope Alexander II was no exception in this regard. He had already begun to show favor to a young Italian Duchess, Matilda, and was likely fanning the flames of Italian independence to spite Heinrich.

Beneath the surface, the Empire consisted of a patchwork of states with borders that were, in a word, farcical. Ernst's own situation was a perfect example. His two counties, Wien and Hohenhau, were currently under the purview of the Duchy of Bavaria to the west. And the Duke of Bavaria was a Saxon lord named Duke Otto II. A Saxon! The man did not own a single holding south of Nordgau, let alone in Bavaria. Naturally, the proper Bavarian counts were livid with this state of affairs. But Ersnt was neither properly Bavarian nor bothered. The patchwork structure of the realm meant that there were plenty of wars, alliances, and backroom deals for an enterprising lord.

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The count's eyes wandered over the map. To the north, in Osterland, was his sole ally: his father-in-law, Count Dedo. Dedo was a veteran of many wars, although at 56 his best fighting years were likely behind him. The old man knew this, and it was rumored that he had taken a recent interest in spiritual affairs. Ernst was baffled by this turn of events. Perhaps there was some substance to the rumors about Dedo's lecherous youth.

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Finally, Ernst's eyes settled on his own borders. They had not changed in a decade—not since before he was count—and the longer-term trend had been one of steady decline. When he passed, his two sons, Leopold and Adelhard, would inherit a single county each. Pah! He would work himself into and early grave before he handed his children table scraps.

To the north lay Sankt Pölten, currently ruled by the Count Wernher, as well as Frestadt and Krens, ruled by Count Ulrich. Count Wernher was too vile to think on, and Ulrich was a wastrel who had squandered much of the family fortune. Miraculously, both had navigated duchy politics well enough to avoid outright invasion to this point. Ernst begrudgingly admitted to himself that Wehrner was a brilliant schemer, but Ulrich baffled him. He was entirely unremarkable.

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Ernst sighed and walked over to the chess board in the corner of the room. He began the second half of his daily ritual: collecting the pieces and laying them on the map one by one. Each day he grabbed the same pieces, and put them in the same places, in the same order. But today was different. He paused on a piece he had never used before: a simple wooden knight.

Adelheird was right. Despite all the papers and missives and weddings in the spring, he still had one last card to play: the marriage of his niece, Oda. He took a long look at the knight, and then gently set it on the County of Osterland.

With that, he rose from his seat and smiled. He spent the rest of his morning seated at his desk composing a letter to Markward.

No, not a letter. An invitation.

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Some notes from the player’s perspective:

-This start has everything you love about Crusader Kings. A questionable council! A bishop with 4 learning! Never change, CK3. Never change.​
-For some reason I decided to pick a character who would be a challenge to write and to play. A spymaster with a mere 12 intrigue who is shy and honest…yikes. And to add insult to injury, his next-door neighbor has a whopping 22 intrigue at the age of 18. He’s Cersei living next door to Littlefinger.​
-Ernst is almost at stress level two already because I decided to reset his perks and then I recruited several knights to court, which grants ~20 stress a pop thanks to the shy trait. He might die of a heart attack if he’s not careful.​
-I decided to fudge the timeline a little bit so I could sow the seeds of the Investiture Controversy. As of patch 1.4, factions are stronger, but they are prohibited from forming at game start for 1 year for dukes, 5 years for kings, and 10 years for Emperors. Based on my last game in the HRE, I’m expecting fireworks in the late 1070s with Matilda playing a starring role. I’m trying to keep it vague for now because I haven’t played that far ahead, but with any luck the Babenbergs will move up in the world just as the excrement hits the fan.​
 
Chapter 1: The Count of Ortenburg
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Chapter 1: The Count of Ortenburg

March, 1067— Wien, Austria


Ernst groaned at the sight of the sun as he opened the main castle doors. Count Markward of Ortenburg had arrived a few days prior, and every night since there had been a lavish banquet for him. Adelheid hated hosting—they both did—but she managed to procure large amounts of quail, figs, and spiced wines. Perhaps too much, he thought. His stomach lurched at the recollection of last night’s festivities.

The Count made his way to far end the courtyard, drawn by the thwack of dulled swords on shields. Several knights had cleared a patch of snow and arrayed themselves in loose circle around it. In the middle Ernst saw his oldest son, Leopold, locked in a practice duel with Marshal Alarich.

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“Shield up!” barked the mayor as he launched into a flurry of strikes. Leopold parried the blows, but he was losing ground. The bout ended after several minutes when Alarich caught him square in the ribs with the flat side of his blade. Ernst was sure it would leave a nasty mark, but the boy didn’t flinch. Leopold had a reputation as fierce duelist—some would go so far as to call him nasty—but he was still lanky and inexperienced. He had not beaten Alarich once in all their years of training.

The two opponents broke and moved to opposite ends of the ring. Vilhelm stepped forward, took Leopold’s shield, and handed him a waterskin. “Not bad,” he said, adjusting the boy’s hauberk. “Does anything feel broken?”

Leopold waved his arm “no” and took another swig of water.

Vilhelm clasped his shoulder. “Good man. Best thing you can do is mind your footwork. No knight can keep raining blows like that for long. Wear him down and he will give you an opening.”

The young knight nodded and exchanged the waterskin for his shield.

Both competitors stepped into the ring again and another bout was underway. Once again Alarich launched a barrage of strikes, but Leopold was tired and his stance had worsened. Then, as if to punctuate Vilhelm’s point, Alarich hooked his ankle behind the boy’s calf and gave him a solid shove. Leopold tumbled backwards, his armaments clattering against the flagstones. Marshal Alarich wasted no time, and in an instant his sword was at the younger knight’s throat.

“Yield.”

Leopold glared up at Alarich. He opened his mouth as if to speak, then swiftly delivered an un-chivalrous kick to the mayor's shin. Alarich swore and swatted the boy's sword arm as it reached for his sword.

Ernst had seen enough. He waved to Vilhelm to signal that today's session was finished, and the knights dispersed and filed out of the courtyard.

“How did it go this morning?” asked the Count.

Alarich and Vilhelm looked at one another but Leopold spoke up, “It went well, Father! Vilhelm says my form is improving. Within a year I'll be the one hand out thrashings to Mayor Alarich."

"It's Marshal Alarich so long as you're wearing that helmet," growled the older man.

Ernst raised his hand to silence them. "Leopold, you will thank Marshal Alarich and Vilhelm for taking time away from their duties to train you. Few counties are blessed with a single man of their caliber, let alone two."

Leopold grumbled something that resembled gratitude.

"Marshal Alarich, if you have nothing else to report, I have matters I wish to discuss with my family."

The mayor was all too happy to take his leave, although part of him wanted to see the brat get his comeuppance.

As soon as he was out of earshot, Leopold spoke up again, "Father, I urge you to reconsider my council appointment. My talents are wasted as a steward. I may not be as good at hand-to-hand as Alarich, but I am nearly his equal in manuevers and field riding."

“Is that so? I am not sure I have use for a Marshal who spends so much time on his back. Nor one that specializes in dirty kicks.”

Leopold slouched. “Of course, father. I spoke out of turn.”

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Ernst thought better of their family meeting and dismissed his son. Vilhelm turned to leave as well, but Ernst signaled for him to stay behind.

“My lord, what's the matter?" Vilhelm said cautiously. "You seem uneasy today.”

The Count ignored the question. "I'm told you spent most of yesterday riding and talking with Count Markward. Do his skills live up to his reputation?"

"I've never seen anything like it. We lined up troops for a mock battle with Alarich on one side and Markward on the other. When Markward won, Alarich was sore. So Markward offered to switch places and then beat Alarich again with his own troops. The rest of the day they tried different scenarios: low ground, high ground, stream crossings—” He shook his head. "Didn’t matter. Alarich and I might be better in a duel, but Markward's a better leader by a large margin.”

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This response only agitated the Count more. He began to pace. "Do you know why Count Markward is here?"

"No, my lord, no one has told me anything. Not even my wife, Justizia."

Ernst stopped pacing and looked him in the eyes. "But you've put it together on your own, haven't you?"

Vilhelm hesitated. He was being tested. “Count Markward is unwed. If he takes Oda's hand, that’s 1400 troops we could call on." He cocked his head to one side. "Or maybe you’re worried your enemies would get him first? That would be a swing of 2800 troops in our favor. And we would deny them their best commander and gain him for own.”

Ernst smiled. So Justizia and Adelheid were right. Vilhelm was more than just a strong sword arm. He was quickly proving to be a valuable addition to the family.

But the Count had one final topic to cover. "Now that we are alone, how did it go today with my son?"

Vilhelm cleared his throat. “His form is improving, my lord. He's tough. He will be a fine warrior once he adds some meat to his bones. He’s not quite Alarich’s equal as a leader, but he’s not far off, either.”

“You mean if he adds some meat to his bones,” the Count grumbled. “And when will that be? A year? Five?”

There was a sudden look of recognition in the knight’s eyes.

“Is there something else? Spit it out.”

“You—” he stammered. “You intend to go to war soon. For Sankt Pölten.”

Ernst was taken aback, but he did not deny it. “Yes. And my son will want to fight for his birthright. A noble sentiment.” He put his hand on Vilhelm’s shoulder. "And a foolish one, too. I need you to make sure it doesn't get him killed.”



After a week in Wien, Count Markward's visit was coming to an end. Ernst was pleasantly surprised to find that he enjoyed the man’s company. He had known Marward previously by way of Duke Otto's small council, and their cordial working relationship helped ease the stress of the visit.

Nevertheless, the Count of Wien found himself seated in his study with a pit in his stomach. The pleasantries were over and there was only one thing left: to propose a union between House Sieghardinger and House Babenberg. He poured two goblets of wine and waited with his hands folded on the desk. Adelheid had coached him on how to conduct the negotiation: its ins and outs, and how to push through objections. And he had gathered as much information as possible from Vilhelm, Justizia, and Oda.

So why am I nervous? he thought.
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Markward entered shortly before noon and seated himself on the opposite side of the table. He took one of the goblets, sniffed it, and gingerly set it off to the side.

Did Markward think this was an attempt on his life? Ernst put on his best smile: "Let me pour some fresh goblets," he soothed. "I don't blame you for not drinking something the spymaster poured while you were out of the room."

"I meant no offense,” Markward laughed. “You know what, Ernst? You’re alright. I didn’t know what to expect when the invitation showed up—you aren’t exactly known for taking visitors. I'm happy to say I had a good time. But after a week I still have no idea what I’m doing here in the first place.”

Ersnt leaned forward in his chair. "I want to know why Bavaria's most decorated commander hasn't found a wife yet."

The man’s face darkened. "Decorated commander? Tell that to Otto. Last spring I confronted him about why I'm not Marshal. Do you know what he told me?"

This was not the response Ernst had expected.

"The Duke laughed. 'We Ottos have to stick together,' he said. That's it. That's his reason for naming that PRICK Count Otto as Marshal and NOT ME!" He slammed his fist on the table so hard that the goblets rattled on the desk.

The Count of Wien was speechless.

Markward looked around sheepishly. "Aw, I'm sorry Ernst. I just get so worked up about Otto. I really hate him." He had entirely forgotten that he had brought up the Duke in the first place.

Luckily, Ernst had recovered somewhat. "Duke Otto has many faults. Chief among them is he neither recognizes nor appreciates talent." I have to get back to the topic of marriage, he thought. "If Otto was half as clever as he thinks, he would have offered you his daughter's hand a decade ago."

Markward flared his nostrils at the idea, but Ernst pressed on before he could start up again. "Are you currently entertaining any marriage prospects?"

The question was blunt enough that it threw the old soldier off guard. Ernst saw his opening and took it.

"You and I have the same problem," he continued. "Our options in Bavaria are limited. The other counts are from families that have sprung up in the last few decades. New blood. Upstarts. ‘Sieghardinger’ and ‘Babenberg’ are the only names left in the duchy with any real weight to them."

The man nodded.

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"Which leaves us with two options. We could look outside Bavaria and risk entangling ourselves in foreign wars. Or we could join our houses."

Markward's eyes widened. "Ernst, I am at a loss for words. Your daughter—"

"Is too young. But I have a niece, Oda, who is as dear to me as if she were my own sister. She would make a fine wife for you."

The Count of Ortenburg stroked his chin. He recalled that she had journeyed to his estate several months prior along with Vilhelm and Justizia. "Oda, huh? Charming woman. Well read." He paused. “I don’t know, Ernst. She’s almost thirty, isn’t she?”

Ersnt settled back into his chair. Adelheid told him this would come up.

"Markward, I'm going to be honest with you. I invited you here for all the reasons we've discussed. You come from a good family. Your military career is well-known, and we all need strong allies in these times. Both our interests lie within Bavaria and not beyond. But those reasons only got you an invitation. We—and I mean all of the Babenbergs—don’t make marriage offers lightly. We wanted to see you for ourselves.

"Oda and I were young when my brother passed. If he had plans for her, he never told me—" Ernsnt trailed off momentarily. "I have to make the match that best honors his memory. Every year I get dozens of letters"—he patted the papers on his desk—"asking for her hand. Sifting through them hurts, Markward. They remind me of my late brother. But I have an obligation to do what’s best for my family. For Oda. And do you know what I've found?"

The Count of Ortenburg shook his head.

"Nothing. Most letters are from no-names with no land. A few are from respectable families. But it's always the same story: they have a spoiled, good-for-nothing heir that would just toss her aside after the wedding. Complacency is — it's a rot, Markward. Half the great houses in this realm are sick with it. I won’t stand for it."

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He poured another drink for his guest, who accepted it without hesitation. "But then there's you. You're the most eligible bachelor in Bavaria. And chivalrous” he laughed. "I've heard enough about your chivalry this week to last me the rest of my life. They all go on and on about it—Vilhelm, Alarich, and Leopold. Leopold! My son has done nothing but quarrel with Alarich since the day he picked up a practice sword. But you walk in here, whip Alarich in field exercises, and all the sudden Leopold thinks you're eight feet tall. " He paused to clear his throat. "And Oda—she talks about you like you rode straight out of a minstrel’s tale. If you marry her, she will be a happy woman. My brother— he would be happy, too, had he lived to see it."

For a long time Markward sat there swirling his wine in silence. Ernst felt the knot in his stomach tighten.

Finally, the man stirred. "I am touched, Ernst. Really." He swallowed hard. "You've given me a lot to think about when I get back. But one way or another I’ll write you soon with an answer. I promise."

Ernst smiled. That was all he wanted to hear.



The next morning Markward and his retainers exchanged well-wishes with their hosts and set off for Ortenburg. The Count and Countess took their youngest children, Adelbert and little Adelheid, up to the ramparts. The children were delighted as they watched the flapping banners of the knights disappear in the distance. After a few hours a servant, Ragnhild, fetched the children and returned them to their studies.

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The couple stood on the walls for another half hour enjoying a rare moment of peace in the mid-morning sun. They had just turned to leave when Adelheid spotted a contingent of armored riders on the horizon. They were headed towards the castle.

Ernst looked at the sentry on duty and nodded. The courtyard sprang to life as the guards assembled to behind the gate.

Adelheid squinted. “Is it Markward? Has he run into trouble on the road?”

"No, I don’t think so,” Ernst said as he shaded his eyes.

The horseman drew closer.

“Dear, they’re flying a blue and white standard. Bavarian.”

The Count grimaced. Otto’s men. The Duke's council was not scheduled to meet anytime soon. Something was wrong.

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The riders approached the gate and halted. The sentry peered at them over the wall. “Who goes there?”

The standard-bearer lifted his visor. “In the name of Duke Otto of Bavaria, open the gates!”

A great rumbling shook the walls as the massive wooden gate creaked open. Ernst descended from the walls and made his way through the crowd that had gathered in the courtyard.

"Where is the Count?" they demanded.

Ernst approached. The standard-bearer looked down at him but offered no greeting befitting his rank.

Typical Saxon swine, Ernst thought.

The rider spurred his horse forward a few steps and held out a sealed roll of parchment with Otto's insignia.

Ernst took it and broke the seal. The horsemen departed in silence before he had even finished reading the missive.

Adelheid caught up to him and stood on her toes behind him, peering over his shoulder. “What is it?”

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“Bait,” he replied. “Otto has finally made his opening move against his vassals.” Ernst read the proclamation over once more and then chuckled.

“What’s so funny?”

“I feel sorry for the poor prick who delivers this to Ortenburg,” he said. “Markward's fist will be the last thing he ever sees.”
 
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Good opening, good details on the characters, enjoyable story to read. The words are woven into the arc nice, and the plot waves through the story smooth. Kudos.


But Amalrich was the worst kind of sinner: he was useless.
"Adelheid, you know I can't stand him."
Neat details on characterisation regarding the view of protagonist towards others through its eyes, with respect to the intended depiction of the conflicting personalities.


Edit: Corrected grammatical mistake.
 
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Good opening, good details on the characters, enjoyable story to read. The words are weaved into the arc nice, and the plot waves through the story smooth. Kudos.
Thanks so much for the encouragement! I really debated opening with a traditional council scene, but I wasn't sure that I could effectively introduce more than two or three characters at a time. The downside has been a rather slow narrative with few maps and little action. But hopefully that will change soon; Ernst has three claims to press and he's not getting any younger. And I'm planning on keeping the cast small, so once they're mostly introduced there should be some more action.

As an aside, I'm still getting caught up on all the ongoing AARs but I took a look at the first few chapters of The Secret History of the Bargas. Very cool mix of real world history, maps, and some unique poetry and narrative devices!
 
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Hope to post a new chapter tomorrow or later this weekend. Player notes for Chapter 1:

-Everyone get out your CK3 bingo carb because we have another classic: the sub-optimal heir! Leopold only has 12 martial and 5 prowess to go with a two-star martial education. Honestly, I think we could make him work if we can find him a wife with high martial and he goes down the chivalry tree. He’s ambitious and sadistic, so it remains to be seen how well he will get along with dear old dad, the honest spymaster™.

-Vilhelm is sort of an “adopted” family member as he is married matrilineally to Ernst’s niece, Justizia. I tried to balance “pure” roleplaying with gameplay; he’s a free knight, has an inheritable trait, and good stats. He’s also the best character I could find who was Central Germanic group culture and not lowborn. I might have been able to find a genius Orthodox man somewhere, but I’m still finding my feet with the narrative, so I thought I’d aim a bit lower.

-The marriage proposal with Markward was somewhat interesting. He does have a fair number of troops, has 20 martial, and is a strategist. He is also very close by, has the same culture group, and his dynasty’s level of splendor is higher than “obscure”. Again, it might have been possible to find a better ally abroad, but it roleplaying it this way was helpful for the narrative.

-Should Markward trust the honest spymaster™? Ernst did tell him the truth here...but it's also a politically convenient version of the truth . And one that, with Adelheid's help, has been specifically tailored to its recipient.

-Duke Otto raising crown authority is a good example of a problem I’m having where everything is “static” at the game start and then everything explodes at once in 1066-1067. It’s a bit of an issue as to why Count Ernst has been twiddling his thumbs for 10 years when he and his father-in-law could easily push his claims. So it made sense to me to explore the internal duchy politics: everyone recognizes his claims, but if he acts as an aggressor they may all gang up on him. Better to wait until they are all distracted (e.g., by Otto) and then make a move.
 
Chapter 2: The Gathering Storm
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Chapter 2: The Gathering Storm

April-June, 1067— Wien and Florisdorf, Austria


Count Ernst of Wien could scarcely recall the last time his small council debated anything. Yet months after Otto's letter, the din from the meeting was so great that it spilled out of his chambers and into the corridors beyond. Ernst just sat at the head of the table and listened. He kept his opinion to himself, not out of respect for his councilors, but because the political situation was delicate. Otto had stoked a certain esprit de corps among the counts—at least, according to the letters on his desk. But camaraderie was not the same as discontent. And discontent—public or otherwise—was not the same as opposition. Besides, there was the more immediate issue of the upcoming war with Count Wernher of Sankt Pölten. Ernst was content to let the current matter rest as soon as he gained control of his councilors.

Bishop Amalrich looked down at his notes. "As far as I can tell, Otto has done nothing illegal." He wiped his brow. "And the change is not without precedent. The oaths of vassalage can be terminated by the liege lord under specific circumstances, especially treason. It's usually a right reserved for kings, but some counties and duchies assert this right as well. Swabia, for instance."

"And you expect us to believe that's all it is?" grumbled Poppo.

"I didn't say that!" Amalrich protested. "I am only commenting on the legal precedent. That's—that's the job I was assigned."

Poppo sat back in his chair.

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"Has the church issued any guidance on this matter," Ernst cut in.

"No, my Lord. The pope is more concerned with Emperor Heinrich. And should they come to blows, he will need the support of the dukes of the realm. The archbishop of Bavaria is, of course, squarely in Duke Otto's pocket."

I suppose I can't blame him for that, thought the Count.

Justizia spoke from the far end of the table. "Poppo has a point. We are debating the 'how' of Otto's letter but not the 'why'. Why send it without convening the council?" She smiled. "I wonder why he would keep uncle spymaster”—she nodded to Ernst—"in the dark. It hardly seems wise."'

There was a smattering of laughter.

Leopold puffed out his chest. "If he wants a fight, he can have it! Together we outnumber him ten-to-one!"

Ernst frowned. He didn’t want his family members to voice such opinions, even in the confidence of the council chamber. "When I want military advice, I will consult my Marshal." He looked down the table at Mayor Alarich, who nodded appreciatively.

"Cousin," Justizia soothed, "what Otto wants and what we give him are two different things."

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By this point the discussion had died down, and one by one the council members turned towards the head of the table. Ernst cleared his throat. "You have all raised good points. Poppo and Justizia, we do not know what Otto intends. Perhaps he just wants us to bow and scrape while we renew our oaths." His face darkened. "Or maybe he wants to provoke us into open rebellion. In which case we need to know the strength of our allies against his. We wait."

"The hell we will!" said Poppo. "We should at least send a letter to Otto stating our discontent."

There was a murmur. Leopold nodded his head vigorously.

"There will be no such thing," stated Ernst.

Poppo raised his chin defiantly. "Let's put is to a vote then. "

Ernst suddenly felt a very sharp pain between his eyes—more intense than he had felt in weeks.

"All in favor? I vote aye."

"Aye!" yelped Leopold.

Bishop Amalrich hesitated. "Abstain."

Ernst flared his nostrils and glared around the room. The the veins on his neck were almost bursting.

"Nay" said Alarich.

All eyes turned to Justizia. She looked at her uncle. "Nay." “You owe me,” she mouthed.

Ernst breathed a sigh of relief. "Nay. And the 'nays' shall have it."

The council murmured again, and several members stood up to leave.

Suddenly Ernst slammed his palm onto the table. "I did NOT ADJOURN THIS MEETING!" he yelled. "Everyone sit. Except for you, Poppo."

The man froze as all eyes were fixed upon him.

"Baron Poppo," said Ernst. "Would you kindly recite the oaths you swore to me."
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"My lord, I—"

"Repeat them.”

The baron coughed. "I, Poppo, Lord of Florisdorf, swear to my Lord to be right and true—"


"The Lord of which title?"

Poppo saw the trap closing around him. "The Margaviate of Austria."

"The Margraviate of Austria?" said Ernst, feigning surprise. "Why, that implies we are a still a border march! And despite your best efforts, Otto has refused to reinstate us as such, hasn’t he?"

Poppo bowed his head in defeat.

"Well, then"—he clapped his hands—"since we are not officially a border march, it seems that your vassalage is on tenuous legal ground." He looked at Amalrich, who said nothing. "Baron Poppo, I hereby release you from your oaths of vassalage. You will vacate Florisdorf within a fortnight, and its holdings shall henceforth be returned to—"

Poppo stormed out before he finished. The other councilors remained seated with their heads cast down.

"It seems that our business has concluded. Meeting adjourned." He paused. “Next time we will introduce a new, less disappointing chancellor.”

The councilors all dispersed except for Justizia who remained behind.

“Very prudent of you,” she nodded. “I have no problem with Poppo, but reclaiming Florisdorf will make it easier to call up the levies. And I have the perfect candidate in mind for our new chancellor.”

Ernst could barely hear her as he was too busy massaging the pain in his forehead.


By April, the prospect of war was an open secret within the keep. The Count had been working long hours, and Countess Adelheid had grown concerned about her husband’s health. She arranged for him to go riding with Marshal Alarich and the household knights under the pretense of a military exercise. On the day they departed, she revealed that it was, in fact, a hunting trip. The plan worked perfectly; Ernst barely had time to protest before he was on his horse and headed out to the countryside.

After a few days the hunters had left the farmlands behind and arrived at a clearing at the edge of a small wood. The Count was surprised by how light he felt and how little he missed the damp castle in Wien. Leopold was with him, and the boy—no, the young man—had brought several barrels of ale he had purchased from a nearby monastery. Several raucous nights were had, followed by more subdued evenings where each day's catch was skinned and cooked.

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Over several weeks, the bonds grew closer among the party members. On more than one occasion, Ernst found himself deep in conversation with Bishop Amalrich. He admitted to himself that he had been too quick to judge the man. Amalrich was still a bad priest—that had not changed—but when had Ernst found a use for a good priest? What's more, he had developed a new appreciation for Amalrich's financial acumen.

"So you mean to tell me that church property is not like a fiefdom?

"In some sense, my Lord." Amelrich took another swig. "But the life tenures are granted in precaria—they are not guaranteed to be inherited the way titles are. And regardless of who the new tenants are, they pay a fee when they are invested. The fees supplement the income from church lands immensely."

The Count gave him a quizzical look. "And what diabolical man came up with this system?"

"I know not, my Lord, but he must have been the fattest bishop that ever lived."

At this they both laughed until their sides hurt.

"There is one other thing, my liege." He stopped to wipe a tear from his eye. "In the secular system, wealth flows from the bottom up—from a vassal to his liege, and so on up the chain. The flow of wealth in the church is more—" he titled his head. "It's more like a web. A rich man may give coins that wind up in the hands of a beggar. And a poor man might give coins to guild the very throne of Saint Peter." He leaned in. "But many coins that enter the web simply disappear altogether."

"They just disappear, huh?" Ernst liked what he was hearing.

Amalrich shrugged. "I'm not a very good bishop, my Lord. No one expects me to look for them, let alone find them."

Their conversation continued late into the night and resumed the next morning. Ernst and Amalrich were laughing and having a good time when the bishop saw it: a stag so large that its antlers stood taller than a horse. The men looked at the beast, and then at each other. It took off sprinting into the woods as the pair gave chase. Hours passed. Neither was a particularly good shot with a bow, but a few arrows managed to find their target. The chase ended in the late afternoon when the stag tangled its antlers in the underbrush. It was almost a pity to slay such a majestic beast down.

Ernst and Amalrich collapsed to the ground and propped themselves up on a nearby tree. After a half hour, they blew their horns until the rest of the party found them. Leopold rushed to Ernst.

“It’s the largest stag I’ve ever seen! Three cheers for Father! Three cheers for Count Ernst the hunter!”

The knights shouted and clapped their hands until they were red.

“Actually, Leopold—I think Amalrich deserved the credit.”

The bishop, who had been resting his eyes for a moment, smiled.

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Ernst had hardly spent a week back in Wien when riders were sent out to call up the levies. He had chosen his newly-acquired holdings in Florisdorf as the staging ground for the war. Within a month the surrounding fields were bursting with an array of tents, supply carts, and engines of war. The Count hoped that the decision to use Florisdorf would make it easier on his family back in Wien. His younger son, Adelbert, was old enough to know what was happening, but the staff was instructed not to upset his youngest child, Adelheid. He found that he missed his family, much more so than he did he visited Otto’s court in Bentheim every year for the Duke’s council meetings.

One evening as he watched the spring showers from his window, he heard a familiar voice behind him "Father?"

He turned to see Leopold wife Adheleid both soaked from the rain. The Count cried out in surprise and hugged his family.

After they exchanged pleasantries, Adelheid nudged her son. "Are we going to war for Sankt Pölten soon?"

"Yes."

"Will you be leading our armies yourself?"

He nodded his head no.

"Send me." He took a step forward. "Send me to fight for our House."

"Leopold— "

"It's a claim by blood, and it must be enforced by blood. You know Wernher will not take the field himself. It would be to our advantage if one of us did so."

It wasn't a bad idea; in fact, it was good political theater. Wernher was not well liked, and many of the other Counts—Markward especially—were soldiers. Having Leopold take the field would allow them to denounce Wernher as both a coward and a usurper. That would soften some of the political blowback from their aggression. And taking the field would help endear Leopold to his future peers.

Ernst sighed. He had come to accept that his son was different from him—when it came time to rule, he would do so in his own way. "You will march with the men to Sankt Polten. I want you to stay close to Vilhelm—"

He was interrupted when Leopold threw his arms around him and squeezed him tight. "Thank you," he whispered. "You won't regret it. I promise" Leopold dashed off to the stables to find a proper warhorse. Adelheid's eyes followed him out of the room.

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"I tried to talk him out of it," Adelheid said with a bittersweet smile.

"I would have forbidden it if you had said so."

She laughed. "And what good would that do? He already has his mind set on it. He will either march on Sankt Pölten as a knight, or he will slip out disguised as a footman."

He shuddered. "At least this way Vilhelm and the others will be able to protect him.

They both stood in silence for several minutes watching the raid fall in the courtyard. Ernst thought about the young man he had raised: the future Count of Wien and Lord of Florisdorf. And by this time next year, by his own hand, he would be the future Count of Sankt Polten, too.

"Ernst?" she said as she put her head on his shoulder. "I want you to do something for me. No matter how much you don't want to."

"Anything, my love."

"I want you to pray for the safety of our son.”

For the first time in many years, the Count did not scoff at the idea of placing his faith in the Almighty.
 
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I'm usually not very interested in AAR's from the Catholic part of the world but this one has really roped me in, great work.
Hey thanks!

I agree that the world probably doesn't need another AAR in Catholic Europe, and originally I was planning on doing one as a Jewish or Coptic vassal in Abyssinia. It's one of my favorite starts and I think there's a lot of rich roleplaying potential. My only issue is that the character density in Abyssinia is quite low, and sometimes the AI lets the ruling Zagwe dynasty just die out because they won't marry right away. I also wish that the kingdom was larger with more vassals at game start. One possible solution would be to run the game in observer mode and then "jump in" after partition has created a more dynamic vassal situation.

I also love Tibet and India, and I'm keeping a close eye on the upcoming changes to India with Royal Court. So I'm hoping to try something really different pending the completion of this playthrough.
 
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Chapter 3: The Battle for Sankt Pölten
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Chapter 3: The Battle for Sankt Pölten

June, 1067—Sankt Pölten, Austria


Leopold shifted in his saddle and scanned the field in front of him. The armies of Wien and Sankt Pölten stood arrayed against one another, their helmets glinting in the morning sun. The scouting report was positive; the enemy was outnumbered four-to-one and they had few heavy troops to make up the difference. Nevertheless, the young knight was surprised to see a banner for House Zelking flapping in the wind across the field from him. He could not figure out why Count Wernher had decided to command his armies personally despite the risk.

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He heard a horse trot up behind him and turned to see Vilhelm, who was commanding Wien's forces. The older knight turned to face Leopold. "Are you ready, my Lord?"

"Yes," he lied.

"We are in luck today. They have few pikes and even fewer knights. There will be little threat to us unless we are unhorsed."

Leopold nodded and sat in silence.

"My Lord," Vilhelm whispered. "Before the day is done you will have killed your first man, no?" He paused solemnly. "I advise you not to dwell on such thoughts. All men make their peace with God before battle, and we all must go to Him one way or another."

"I am more worried about why Count Wernher is here. Why would he risk himself when he is outmanned?"

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Wilhelm shrugged. "Hubris, perhaps? I have served in the courts of many young lordlings, and few of them know their limits."

The young knight chuckled. "I suppose I should thank Mayor Alarich for the beatings he has handed me over the years." He looked over to Alarich, who was commanding the left flank.

"There will be plenty of time for idle chitchat when we lay siege to Sankt Pölten ," Vilhelm said, placing his helmet on his head. With that the men rode off and took their positions at the heads of their respective columns.


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A half hour later the horn sounded and both armies closed in. Wernher held the few knights he had in reserve to protect the flanks of his outnumbered columns. Leopold gripped the reins and swallowed. He knew the best tactic would be to wait for Wenher to charge and then unleash a counterattack to protect the flank. The numbers were in their favor, and Vilhelm knew what he was doing. They should carry the day without incident.

When the centers clashed, the men of Sankt Pölten acquitted themselves well and held despite their inferior numbers. Leopold watched as the infantry on his side began to wrap around the defenders' flank to pressure them. Wernher was running out of time, and soon the young knight heard the sound he was waiting for: a clarion blast from across the field. The enemy knights stirred and broke into a trot.

The young Babenberg straightened up in his saddle and lifted his lance. The man next to him blew the horn in reply and soon his ears were filled with the sound of hoofbeats behind him. But in the back of his mind, he heard Alarich's voice chastise him. "Foolish boy! Wait for the enemy knights to commit!" But Leopold was too caught up in the moment to wait any longer.

He realized his mistake halfway across the field when the enemy knights abruptly cut off their charge and reformed. The opposing infantry stirred as the few heavy troops they had fell in behind the knights. A chill went down his spine; not only had Wernher anticipated the countercharge, he was willing to sacrifice the entire flank in a desperate bid to end the war. A cry came up from the enemy ranks, "Find the red and white shield! Kill the boy, save the city!"


Vilhelm was hacking his way through the center when he stopped to check his flanks. His throat tightened as he saw the knights on Leopold's side clash into Wernher's. "Form up on me!" he cried. The knights in the center withdrew in a moment of confusion. Vilhelm grabbed the youngest knight he saw. "Find Alarich and bring him to the center. Tell him to take command." The just boy looked at him. "NOW," he shouted.

Vilhelm yanked the reins and brought his steed into a full gallop. It was not far to the left flank, but the horses would likely tire before they arrived. None of that matters, he thought, so long as—

The thought came to him just as disaster struck. He watched in horror as Leopold's horse fell from under him, sending the young knight spilling onto the field.


Leopold's head cleared slowly as he clambered to his feet. Nothing felt broken—and if he could still fight, he would make it out alive. He drew his sword and hefted it in his hand, testing the range of motion in his arm. The young Babenberg thanked his luck that he had not been maimed or even killed by the fall. Some of the infantry on his flank had rallied around him, and soon he was at the center of a vicious melee. The enemy horseman circled the edges, fighting their way towards the center—towards him. A cry went up again, louder than before. "Get him, men! Kill the boy, save the city!"

Leopold saw an enemy footman turn and spot the colors on his shield. His thoughts of survival were soon replaced by ones of glory. The man closed in, lifted his sword above his head, and swung it in a clumsy arc. The blow clattered harmlessly off the boy's shield, leaving the man temporarily overextended. Sloppy, he thought. Leopold was ready for the follow-up; when the footman reached the apex of his backswing, the young Babenberg stepped in and brought his pommel down on the man's jaw. He gave a short yelp and collapsed to the ground clutching his face.

The knight stood over his quarry for a second, his heart pounding in his ears. The sight of blood gave him a tingling sensation that spread from the back of his neck towards his toes. He ended the footman's life with a brief thrust.

Soon he had found another hapless footman who was equally outmatched. This time he savored the victory: first, a small cut to the arm, followed by another just above the knee. His opponent hobbled about, eyes wide. With another thrust of the sword, he snuffed out a second life.

A ripple went through the enemy ranks as they felt the tide turn against them. Buoyed by confidence, Leopold caught sight of a knight eyeing him no more than twenty paces away. He swayed indecisively as his ranks threatened to break, but Leopold forced him to engage. This one will make for a fine ransom, he thought. Maybe even enough to shut up Alarich when we make it back to camp.

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The young Babenberg was surprised when the knight sidestepped the initial swing and caught him at a disadvantage. The ensuing strikes were smooth, although not as quick and brutal as Mayor Alarich's. Leopold's confidence was replaced by spreading fear; he had badly underestimated the man, and for the first time that day he faced a worthy opponent.

The duel went back and forth, neither opponent scoring a clean hit on the other. Then, in a final desperate act, the enemy knight launched a volley of strikes that pushed Leopold back. He remembered Vilhelm's advice: no knight could keep up a volley like that for long. He just had to look for an opening and set his feet—

His feet.

Leopold realized too late that the enemy knight had backed him against the body of a slain footman. He backpedaled into the corpse, throwing him off balance for a split second. The man saw the opening and swung.

The ground rush up to meet him, and the landing left the young knight breathless on the ground. He could not raise his arms, but he felt something warm spreading over his face and neck. The din of the battle faded and was replaced by a ringing sound. With the last of his strength, he looked up to see Vilhelm and the rest of the knights charging madly across the lines towards him as the enemy army broke.

Then everything went black.

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A shorter update, but likely an impactful one. I had hoped (and still hope) to write an AAR that is heavy on diplomacy and intrigue, so I initially had zero desire to record individual battles. This one especially should have been a simple mop up for a single-county claim. And I can't fault the game for handing me some story beats to write about.

Apologies for the cliffhanger, but we will know soon enough if our heir is wounded, maimed, or even dead.
 
Chapter 4: The Best Laid Plans
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Chapter 4: The Best Laid Plans

July-October, 1067—Wein, Austria


"Move! Make way for the Count!"

Ernst pushed his way through the back of the crowd. He knew that riders from Sankt Pölten had returned minutes earlier because they were greeted with joyful shouts in the courtyard. But the chatter was quickly silenced as an eerie stillness descended on the keep. His hands trembled as he wedged himself deeper into the crowd. Not a single soul turned to look at him; they all stood with their eyes fixed straight ahead.

When he finally emerged at the front, he saw what they were gawking at: Leopold, alive and in the flesh! Ernst took a step forward to embrace his son but stopped short when he saw the bandages. A child began wailing somewhere in the crowd. Ernst turned to see his daughter, Adelheid, sobbing into the folds of her nanny's dress. Even his son Adelbert, who was three years older than his sister, looked away.

Leopold wobbled in the saddle but caught himself. "Vilhelm sends his regards, Father. We have crushed the armies of Sankt Pölten and are now laying siege to the city." He stopped to wait for a cheer from the crowd that never came.

By this point Ernst had regained his composure and began barking out orders. He dispersed the crowd and rushed his son into the privacy of the keep. Soon the boy’s grandmother, Friozza, arrived with clean bandages to wrap the wounds. The tiny Venetian widow had spent her twilight years performing charity for the local churches. She often treated common illnesses among the beggars, but Ernst knew she had seldom seen wounds of war. He cursed himself for not hiring a proper chirgeon.

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Friozza gave her grandson a weak smile and tenderly removed the old bandages. Ernst swore to himself again. The gruesome gash had just missed the left eye—he was thankful for that—but the flesh around it was red and swollen. Whoever treated it at the siege camp had done a poor job, wasting precious time in the race against infection. He looked at Friozza, but she just pursed her lips together and kept working.

After the bandages had been changed, Ernst and Friozza took their leave to allow Leopold to rest. Once they were out of earshot, the Count turned to his mother, intent on asking about his son's condition. But a servant interjected, “My Lord?” The man extended the letter in his hand. “This arrived for you earlier. From Count Markward of Ortenburg.”

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Ernst read the letter and groaned. It should have been joyous news; his niece Oda was to be wed, and he had secured a powerful alliance—for what? Future conflicts? His first taste of war had been a bitter enough, and he could hardly stomach the thought of doing it again. He looked back down at the letter and his thoughts turned to the political consequences of Leopold’s condition. The Babenberg succession was imperiled; they had to make sure that knowledge of his son’s injury stayed within the keep. Public appearances were out of the question. Leopold could skip Oda’s wedding on account of the war, and a soldier such as Markward would not question it.

But what if Leopold’s injury did not heal before Sankt Pölten surrendered? What if it never healed? What if—

Ernst shuddered and stopped himself from finishing the thought.


A few months later the Count found himself in his study once again. He had just returned from a visit with Adalbert, his younger son, to see how his education was progressing. The boy was tutored by a servant, Ragnhild, who was the daughter of a wealthy Danish shipping magnate. She had inherited her father's financial acumen, and she had even taken on many of Leopold's duties as steward since his injury. When Adalbert started to show an interest in books, Ernst was all too happy to encourage an interest in numbers, too. Better to fill his head with tables and ledgers than to let the priests fill it with their nonsense.

Having a son who was good with gold would have other benefits as well. The prosperous farmland in the area made it rather wealthy for its size. Nevertheless, Ernst knew that finances were not his strong point. In more capable hands, the realm might develop the sort of economic foundation that would provide political clout for generations to come. He was sure Adalbert would make a fine Count of Hohenau one day.

Or...he would make a fine Count of Wien if the worst came to pass.

There was a short knock on the door. “My Lord?” came a voice on the other side. “Count Markward of Ortenburg would like an audience with you. He says he was passing by and wished to discuss a matter of some importance.”

This was unexpected. The wedding had not been scheduled yet, and none of Markward’s letters implied that he would rather conduct their business in person. “Send him in at once.” After a few minutes, the door opened.

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“Count Markward! A surprise, to be sure, but a welcome one.”

“Good to see you! I like what you’ve done with the place.”—his eyes drifted over the map on the wall— “Looks like a real war room. Really takes me back.”

Ernst nodded as Markward pulled up a chair. He had guessed by now that Wien’s war had set tongues wagging among the nobility.

“Listen, I know Oda and I aren’t exactly married yet.” He paused to stroke his beard. “But I would certainly honor a call to war if you issued one.”

The Count of Wien sighed in relief. “Thank you, but that won’t be necessary. Our armies met late in the summer and we have scattered them. Even now we are laying siege to Sankt Pölten. It would be frivolous to expose you and your men to disease at the camp or risk a head-on assault.” He paused. “And we already have a family member who has taken up arms for us.”

Markward was beaming. “Leopold is getting his first action, huh?”

“Yes.” Ernst reached over to pour two goblets of wine. “Do you know what he told me? He said, ‘our claim is by blood and so it must be enforced by blood.’ Adelheid was sure he would sneak out and join the army anyway if we forbade him.”

“The little devil,” Markward laughed. “I would have done the same thing at his age. He has the makings of a great Count. You must be very proud.”

Ernst winced, and there was an awkward silence.

The Count of Ortenburg took a sip of wine and then cleared his throat. “I do have something else I want to talk about. And I’m sorry for dropping by unannounced, but I had my reasons.” He pulled out a crumpled piece of paper with Duke Otto’s seal on it. “Did you get one of these?”

Ernst smoothed the letter on the desk and read it. “Ah yes. Duke Otto’s self-aggrandizing missive about his ducal authority.”

The old soldier clenched his fist until his knuckles were white. “I’ll tell you what it is. It’s HORSESHIT!”

“I agree. But I brought the issue before my council, and they did not offer any practical solutions.”

Markward looked like he was about to launch into another tirade against Otto but instead he took a deep breath. “Listen, Ernst. I’m taking a tour of Bavaria to talk to the other lords. I’m looking for some—” he trailed off. “I’m looking for like-minded individuals. And I wanted to come to you first.”

Like-minded individuals? Ernst thought. This must be important if he memorized his chancellor’s exact words.

“I think all of us lords should meet in person and draft a counter missive demanding that Otto recognize the—” he paused again. “Uh, certain inalienable rights of his vassals.”

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The Count of Wien raised an eyebrow. “You’re starting a faction?”

“Ernst," he said shaking his head. "The word ‘faction’ has such a treasonous sound to it. Like I said, I am simply looking for some like-minded—”

“Like-minded individuals,” Ernst sighed. He wasn’t sure what he expected, but this was not it. Had Markward played him? He specifically proposed the marriage because he thought the man had no political ambitions. And what exactly was the benefit of starting a faction? Ernst could not shake the feeling that this was bait and that the Count of Ortenburg had swallowed it whole.

“Markward, this is exactly what Otto wants. His authority to punish traitors is meaningless unless we are branded as such. Your plan would give him the very justification he's looking for.”

“And if we don’t stand up for ourselves now, what will the next letter say? He will only get bolder until I need ducal permission to wipe my own ass!"

Ernst paused. He had not considered that Otto might dismantle their rights piece by piece if they were slow to respond. But more importantly, he felt that he had to give Markward something or else their alliance might sour before it even began. “We are at war now, and I would not risk a fight on two fronts. But I am inclined to the idea. And I suppose Otto can’t object to a simple gathering of ‘like-minded individuals’ now, can he?”

His guest grinned. “I always liked you, Erst.” He stood up to leave. “Don’t worry. I’m not the only one in the Duchy who wants to knock Otto down a peg or two. We’ll have the rest of the lords on our side before long.”

After Markward had left, Ernst sat at his desk for a long time, swirling his wine and staring into it. How had everything gone so wrong? How had he so utterly lost control of the events unfolding around him? He stood up and began to pace. The pressure between his eyes began to build again and his vision narrowed. He caught sight of the chess set in the corner. Ernst often quarreled with his wife over it, telling her chess was a game for clever people who wanted to sharpen their skills in war and politics. Adelheid just laughed at him.

“Is that how war and politics work, dear? Everyone sits in a neat, tiny square waiting their turn to make a move?”

She was right, of course, and the memory of it pushed him towards self-loathing. No, the game he was playing was not like chess at all. The pieces moved haphazardly, animated by malignant actors set against him. He was a fool to have offered up Leopold like a pawn in an opening gambit. He shuddered. That’s exactly what he had done. He had dangled his son’s life, and for what gain? The war would be won with or without him; he had sent his son simply to silence his critics. Was that what was required to be a great lord of the realm? A willingness to sacrifice your loved ones for even the slimmest advantage?

He stared at the chess set for a few minutes longer. Then in a single motion, Ernst violently swept the pieces off the table with his arm and sent them clattering across the stone floor.


Adelheid and Justizia strode through the castle gardens as the sun set over the parapets. The Countess was concerned about her husband. Adelheid was distraught by Leopold’s injury too, but she found that she did not have the luxury of fear or self pity. Ernst had become increasingly withdrawn, and so it fell to her to take up the slack in his governance. The one bright spot in the entire ordeal was that she had grown closer to Justizia. She had always appreciated the woman’s competence as a spymaster, and recently she had grown to trust her as a confidant as well.

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“Always mourning, seldom rejoicing,” Justizia mused. “Such an ominous motto for our House, and all too true these days.”

Adelheid clicked her tongue. “We would not need such a motto if the men of our line did not try to end it with their stupidity.”

“They are a stubborn lot,” the spymaster chuckled. “A blessing and a curse, I think. Have you been to see your son recently?

The Countess nodded. “Friozza has not said whether the wound is healing properly.”
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“Ha! Bless the old woman, but I don’t need her to tell me what my eyes see. As soon as she is gone, the boy is up and about, pacing the room like a caged animal. And he’s always madder than a boar. Death will not come for him.”

“You are kind to say so,” the Countess smiled. “Thank you.”

The sun had sunk lower in the sky, and they admired the last orange and purple hues of the evening.

“The servants have been avoiding me lately. Did you talk to them on my husband’s behalf?”

“Yes. I told them that while we don’t mind idle gossip, Leopold is off limits. They are not to discuss his condition with anyone beyond these walls. I mentioned a number of 'suitable punishments' so as to make myself understood. And I have contacts among the servants in other courts as well. We will know when news reaches them, and we will have counter-rumors of our own to spread.”

“Good. Fear is a powerful tool, but do not forget to reward the most loyal among them. We are ascendant now, but loyalty will serve us better if our fortunes take an ill turn.”

“Of course, my Lady.” The spymaster paused. “What do you make of Count Markward’s faction? It does not seem like him.”

“No, it is not like him at all. And Ernst believes his words were fed to him by someone else. Sadly, my dear husband has not given much additional thought to the topic.”

“But you have.”

“It has not done me any good. I can only speculate that there is another player who has yet to be revealed. Perhaps this is a response to our aggression against Sankt Pölten.”

“So Count Wernher, perhaps?”

“I think not. Our armies lay siege to his castle, and it will fall long before anything comes of the faction. On the other hand, Count Ulrich would have a motive; he knows Ernst has claims on his lands. And he might guess correctly that he is next after Sankt Pölten falls. The faction may be a ploy to buy time and find allies.”

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Justizia frowned. “He always seemed like a bit of a boor. Would he really concoct such a plan?”

“No,” sighed Adelheid. “And thus we are going in circles. If it is Ulrich, then someone must have whispered into his ear as well, and we are no closer to finding out who opposes us.”

“What would you have us do?”

“Interrogate your contacts from the other courts. Be specific. Ask for dates or at least seasons during which rumors originated. Markward likely came to us first because of our marriage alliance. If the idea originated at another court—”

“We could track it down. I’ll see to it.”

The sun was very low now, and a chill autumn wind sent the banners flapping on the walls.

“Justizia—” the Countess started and then stopped again. “The Count is not well. Even if Leopold survives, Ernst may never fully recover his wits. I love my husband, but there are things he is not equipped to handle. This family needs us more than ever.”

“And what about you, my Lady? What will you do if the worst comes to pass?”

She inhaled sharply. “My son will not die. But if he does—” She trailed off before finding her voice again. “If Leopold goes to God, then I will send Count Wernher along with him. And I will need your help to do it.”

Justizia gave a single nod as they turned and headed back towards the keep.

 
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Glad you are enjoying it! Editing this week's chapter now, so it should be up over the next few days.

Thanks to everyone who is sticking with this. The plan right now is to keep a weekly or bi-monthly update schedule. As always, feedback is welcome regarding the pace, update schedule, and any rough edges in the writing and/or images.
 
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Chapter 5: The Dogs of War
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Chapter 5: The Dogs of War

November, 1067—Sankt Pölten, Austria


The wind picked up and ruffled the flaps of the command tent. Vilhelm stopped writing and sheltered the candle with his palm. He cursed the interruption. The siege of Sankt Pölten had dragged on for sixth months, and communications ceased after the first snowfall. In response, Vilhelm commissioned riders to carry a letter to Wien. They had enough supplies last the winter, but a malaise had settled over the camp. Vilhelm hoped a personal visit from the Count would boost morale until the city fell. The wind shrieked and rose to a crescendo, then quieted. But no sooner had he raised his quill again than the sound of footfalls interrupted him.

“You there! Are you on duty?” he asked.

A footman poked his head through the flaps. “No, sir.”

“Find the guard assigned to this post. Come back in five minutes.”

“Yes, sir.”

Vilhelm sighed and looked back at the letter. There was no news to report. The walls of Sankt Pölten were too thick to breach, so the attackers resorted to starving out the garrison. He expected a surrender by the spring; the defenders refused to discuss terms, but there was no way to lift the siege. Wien’s forces had routed the enemy in the summer, and they were still disorganized and outnumbered. From Vilhelm’s perspective, no news meant good news—even if the Count was not riveted by the update.

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More footsteps crunched in the snow outside, and Alarich’s head appeared in the entryway. “Mind if I join you?”

“Come in. I’m surprised the door guard didn’t announce you.”

“Thank you,” Alarich said. “I’m afraid I didn’t see anyone out there.”

Vilhelm was not a strict commander, but missing a shift was unacceptable. The missing guard would scrub chamber pots for the next month—maybe two.

Alarich nodded to the desk. “Will the Count read this one?”

“Yes, but he won’t write back. Someone could intercept his letters—or worse, replace them with forgeries.”

“Hrmph. We’ve been stuck here for months without orders.”

Vilhelm knew the Alarich didn't give a damn about orders; neither man needed the Count's advice on how to run a siege. What bothered Alarich was that there was no news about Leopold’s injury since the boy left the camp. They feared that no news meant bad news—the silence surrounding the Count’s son was damning.

“I should never have assigned the boy his own flank,” Vilhelm said.

“You assigned him a command based on his station,”—Alarich leaned in—“not experience. What choice did you have?”

“I should have kept him with me. I’m a damned fool.”

“Don’t talk like that. The Count should thank you for saving Leopold’s life.”

Vilhelm hadn’t expected Alarich to be so supportive. Back when the war started, he worried the mayor would resent being passed over for command. But perhaps age had mellowed the knight, or maybe he enjoyed fighting without the burden of leadership. They had gotten along well, and Vilhelm was glad to have someone who understood his troubles.

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“Alarich… Leopold’s injury wasn’t an accident.”

“What?”

“Wernher’s soldiers were looking for him.” Vilhelm shivered. “I heard them calling out, ‘Kill the boy, save the city.’ They abandoned simple tactics just to go after Leopold.”

“Christ in heaven.” Alarich made the sign of the cross over his chest. “What kind of monster does that?”

“Count Ernst hates Wernher for a reason.”

“I had no idea. He called Wernher a fiend, but nobles always talk like that. I never thought—”

The wind picked up again, causing Vilhelm to glare at the tent flaps.

Alarich followed his gaze. “Oh, don’t worry about the guard. Discipline always breaks down halfway through a siege. Every fresh-faced soldier thinks war is all ringing swords and shouts for glory—until someone launches a cow from a catapult.” He laughed and made an awful squelch with his cheeks.

Vilhelm barely registered the morbid anecdote. Instead, he stood up and walked toward the door.

“Is something the matter?” asked Alarich.

“Arm yourself and a grab torch. We are going for a walk.”

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Soon, two mailed figures emerged from the tent and strode down the hill. The torchlight peeled back the darkness, revealing a footpath flanked by yellowed grass sprouting up through the snow. Another gust of wind rustled the trees at the edge of the camp, and moments later it whistled into their ears and nipped their noses. Alarich rubbed his hands together and blew into them.

A muddy pool sat at the bottom of a deep rut in the path. The rippling surface had not frozen over yet, and it scattered the moonlight peeking through the clouds. They stopped. Something about the pond bothered Vilhelm. He dropped into a crouch and held out a torch to get a better look.

There, in the middle of the rut, was a footman floating face down in the red-tinged water.


The forest stirred as their eyes adjusted to the darkness. Cloaked figures poured out from the trees, climbing the palisades like poisonous vines and spilling into the camp within.

“Bandits,” Vilhelm said.

They had to act quickly or else the raid would turn into a massacre. A group of thugs spotted the two knights and encircled them with a motley array of axes and knives. Alarich gripped his blade with both hands. A challenger stepped up, but the mayor felled him before he closed the distance. Vilhelm disarmed another bandit and skewered him with a follow-up swing.

The bandits fell back, unnerved by the skill of their quarry. Alarich pressed them, but Vilhelm caught him by the arm.

“We can’t fight alone,” he said. “Our only chance is to blow the horn. Go!”

The mayor took off yelling while Vilhelm covered him. The remaining bandits hesitated, but the sounds of combat drew a fresh batch of assailants. A bowstring twanged, and an arrow whizzed past Vilhelm’s ear. He cursed. Another arrow flew by, drawn like a moth to the light of the torch.

Vilhelm had no choice but to run. He threw the torch into the snow, clambered over the wall, and ducked behind a tent. He heard the rhythmic footfalls of the bandits as they fanned out to look for him. How many were there? He tried to tally numbers, but it had been too dark to get a good count. Someone whispered less than ten paces to his left.

“That was a knight,” the voice said. “Maybe the one we are looking for! There’s a pouch of silver waiting for the man who cuts his throat.”

Vilhelm held his breath. He waited for the group to move again, matched his footsteps with theirs, and crept towards the stables. Perhaps there was a mount tied up—no luck. The stalls were empty. By now, Alarich’s shouts had summoned groggy soldiers out of their tents. The bandits abandoned any pretense of stealth and attacked.

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That’s when the rider spotted him.

The horseman wheeled around and lowered his spear to charge. Blood pounded in Vilhelm’s ears; he had no shield, and even a glancing blow off the armor would shatter his ribs. A direct hit would kill him. Vilhelm hefted his sword and set his feet. He thought of his wife back in Wein. I’m so sorry, Justizia. I hope I die as a brave man, rather than a foolish one.

Vilhelm leapt into a thicket of tents as just the horseman thundered past him. The rider circled around, and they both moved deeper into the camp. Wilhelm led his pursuer into a makeshift alleyway with ropes and crates strewn about. The horse stamped and whinnied, panicked by the junk-filled terrain. The enemy knight swore and drew his sword for tight quarters—too late. Vilhelm appeared behind him, and a clean thrust sent the rider face-first into the mud.

A clarion blast rang out. God bless you, Alarich, he thought.

A half hour later, the tide had turned. The defenders rallied and drove the bandits back into the woods. Vilhelm ordered soldiers to block the choke points out of the camp, capturing over one hundred men. It was after midnight when Vilhelm collapsed to the ground, exhausted. The knight settled into the snow and dreamt of a feast back in Wein: roasted pig, mead, and a fire in the great hall. Justizia was there, too. She smiled and leaned in to whisper something—

Someone shook him awake.

“Sir!” a footman said. “Sir, wake up! Alarich is in the command tent. He says there’s something you need to see.”


Vilhelm was not prepared for what awaited him atop the hill. Inside the tent, a half-dozen soldiers surrounded a green-clad figure kneeling on the ground. They pulled back the prisoner’s hood to reveal a young man—not yet twenty—with short-cropped hair. Not much older than Leopold, Vilhelm thought. Alarich had his back to the door, one hand resting on the pommel of his sword, the other bearing a torch. When he turned, the torchlight cast shadows that lengthened and danced around the tent.

“Commander,” a soldier said, “we caught this bandit hiding here after the attack. Nothing on him but these.” He held out a black dagger and a small brown bottle.

Vilhelm turned the items over in his hands. The bottle glinted in the torchlight; it felt empty, but the glass was clouded. Vilhelm tugged on the cork stopper, brought the bottle to his nose, and sniffed it. Nothing. Whatever liquid was in there, the residue was odorless.

One soldier offered a wineskin to the prisoner, who shook his head. The man shrugged and poured a draught for himself. Vilhelm set the empty bottle on the table.

“What’s your name?”
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The prisoner pressed his lips together and said nothing. After several minutes, a soldier prodded the boy in the back. Still nothing.

Vilhelm squatted down. “Son, I need to know your name.”

The boy’s face softened. “I am Klause,” he said. “My family can pay a handsome reward for my safe return.”

“And what are you doing in our camp, Klause?”

“I am a hedge knight, Sir, but right now I’m starving. When the ruffians attacked… well, I thought no one would miss a loaf of bread. The countryside around Sankt Pölten is barren.”

“And where are your knightly weapons, Sir?” Vilhelm hefted the black dagger. “I should think you are a bandit—maybe even a spy.”

The soldiers murmured. The man with the wineskin took another swig and coughed into his elbow.

“No!” Klause said. “Please, Sirs. I’m not a spy.”

“Even if we believed that,” Alarich said, “what were you doing this tent? It’s far too convenient that you stumbled on our command quarters by accident.”

“If I may be plain? It’s a nice tent, Sirs—the best place to look for bread. And it was far away from the fighting, too.”

The soldiers chuckled, but Vilhelm scowled.

“I see,” he said. “Still, you are a thief, and you will hang with the rest of the bandits in the morning.”

“No!" Klause said. "Take me captive! Let the Count decide my fate!” His eyes widened and flittered about the room, briefly resting on the soldier with the wineskin before meeting Vilhelm’s gaze.

Alarich grabbed the prisoner by the hands. “No callouses—he may well be a nobleman. I hate to say it, but the Count will want to see him.”

Vilhelm stood up and leaned on the table. He was sure Klause was lying; soft hands were not the mark of a hedge knight. But why lie if he was a nobleman? Simple honesty would guarantee he was treated well, even if he was a thief. Wait—he hadn’t stated his family name, had he? That detail would save them both a lot of trouble. The more Vilhelm thought about the situation, the less he liked it.

The soldier with the wineskin coughed again and passed it to Alarich. Vilhem’s eyes drifted down to the glass bottle on the table, then over to Klause. The prisoner did not notice him; his eyes were fixed on the wineskin. A peculiar half-smile tugged at his lips.

The tent erupted. Vilhelm lunged at Alarich and knocked the wineskin away, spilling it onto the ground. The mayor staggered backwards in shock. The soldier who had been sipping wine coughed once, then twice—but the third cough stuck in his throat. He gurgled, flopped over, and twitched on the ground. White foam dribbled down his chin.

Klause sprang to his feet and bolted towards the door. Vilhelm caught up just beyond the threshold and tackled him into the snow. The boy produced a razor from the folds of his robe and slashed at the knight. Vilhelm dodged, but he was losing his grip on Klause. The prisoner was about to wriggle free when Alarich pressed a sword to his neck.

“Yield.”

Klause sighed and put his hands behind his head. Several pairs of burly arms grabbed Klause and forced him back onto his knees.

“So, you are worse than a spy,” Vilhelm said. “You are an assassin.”

Klause lifted his chin. “Your friend here,”—he nodded at Alarich—“is right. I am a nobleman, and Count Ernst will want to see me alive and unharmed.”

“No,” Vilhelm said.

“I demand the Count’s justice.”

“Enough!” Vilhelm clenched his fist, then opened it again. “You have murdered one of the Count’s men—one of my men—in cold blood. Here your justice.” He unsheathed his sword. “In the name of Count Ernst of Wien, I sentence you to death.”

“Wait!” Klause said. But the guards seized him, pushing down until his nose touched the snow. They pulled back on the hood, exposing the white of his neck.

Alarich fidgeted. “For God’s sake, let him see the priest first.”

But Vilhelm wasn’t listening. He rested the blade on the boy’s neck and squared his shoulders. Klause sobbed. “Wait!” he said. “Wait. My name is not Klause.”

“It’s too late for that,” Vilhelm said. “There is no family name that can save you now.” Vilhelm lifted the sword, and the guards tightened their grip as the prisoner thrashed.

“My name is Wernher,” the boy said. “Wernher Zelking!”

Alarich gaped. “Count Wernher?”

The soldiers murmured and turned one-by-one to look at Vilhelm. He stood there, fixed, with sword hovering overhead.

“Is it true?”

“Yes.” he said, gasping for air. “Yes, I am Count Wernher. Spare me, and I will order the city to surrender.”

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The priest arrived and covered the corpse with a blanket. A solemn chant filled the tent, punctuated by the tapping of rosary beads. When the priest finished, the guards filed out to give their companion a proper burial. Vilhelm stayed behind to keep watch over the prisoner by candlelight. Count Wernher tossed in his sleep, his the iron manacles clinking in reply. It would be wrong to kill him now… wouldn’t it? Vilhelm pushed the thoughts from his mind. He tried to finish the letter on his desk, but the quill trembled in his hand.

A few minutes later, Alarich sat down with a fresh wineskin—one unsullied by the brown bottle—and pulled the stopper.

“I almost don’t believe it,” he said. “I suppose there were no bandits.”

“No.” Vilhelm said. “Wernher must have ordered a sortie from the surviving garrison.”
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“As a distraction? It was hardly worthwhile. Poisoning you wouldn’t save the city, even if he succeeded.”

“I can’t make sense of it either.”

Alarich shivered. “What sort of man does that?”

Vilhelm closed his eyes. What sort of monster does that? He recalled the bandits hunting him among the tents, offering a pouch of silver for his life. He drifted into a fitful slumber, dreaming of the battle last summer when Wien’s army routed Sankt Pölten’s. A familiar scene played out: Leopold falling from his horse, and Wernher’s men closing in—

Vilhelm’s eyes shot open as he grabbed Alarich’s arm.

“Christ,” he said. “Wernher wasn’t trying to poison me. He was searching for someone else.”

The mayor furrowed his brow.

“Alarich—he was trying to kill Leopold.”

The chains rustled, and the knights peered at the corner where the prisoner lay. Vilhelm’s hushed tones must have carried because Wernher was awake now. The candles sputtered. Shadows skittered across his face.

“Indeed,” he said. “Kill the boy, save the city.”
 
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Really great AAR so far. It was tense reading the battle chapter.

The pace is great for me, but it's mostly a matter of how you like it (and how you will still enjoy writing your story).
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, sometimes the game mixes in some action with the slow-paced political intrigue :)
Beware of these Hobosburgs or whatever is their name, if they will knock on your doors. Barely above common peasants, but they are very shifty... ;)
I got a good laugh out of this! Not sure if they'll show up in this playthrough, but if they do, I might "borrow" that joke.
 
Chapter 6: The Spoils of Victory
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Chapter 6: The Spoils of Victory

November, 1067-January, 1068—Sankt Pölten, Austria


Ernst surveyed the grand hall around him: his oaken throne, the Babenberg crest upon the wall, and the carpet that stretched from the dais down to the door. The servants had worked hard for weeks to prepare the feasts, and they worked harder still to restore the hall to a pristine condition afterwards. When riders announced Vilhelm had captured Count Wernher, Erst didn’t even need to give the order; the keep erupted in a chorus of shouts and the festivities organized of their own accord. Now the war was over, with only one small formality remaining—an event Ernst saved as if it were a choice morsel. Because today…

Well, today Count Wernher would deliver his formal surrender.

The doors at the end of the hall shuddered and gave way. The Count of Wein fixed his visage into the most regal form he could muster. Wernher shuffled in, flanked by two guards with ceremonial polearms. Ernst had labored over the decision: should he be magnanimous? Or scornful? In the end, he opted for a theatrical yet private affair with few witnesses. Ernst applauded his own cleverness as the former Count of Sankt Pölten drew closer; the tailor had performed his duties well, and the prisoner’s dapper clothing contrasted deliciously with the iron chains.

“Count Wernher,” he said. “Kneel.”

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The boy dropped to his knees before the guards prompted him with their weapons. God, he was young—perhaps a few years older than Leopold. An unbidden twinge of sadness came over the Count, but he steeled himself. Inheritance was a nasty game; if he did not take Sankt Pölten from the boy, someone else would. And every county he gave to his children buffered them against the same fate.

“My commanders tell me you are ready to surrender Sankt Pölten to its rightful liege,” Ernst said.

“Yes, my Lord.”

“Look at me.” Ernst’s face softened. “I commend you for coming to your senses and ending this pointless bloodshed. However, there is still the question of your fate. You have a claim on the county, and my councilors recommend you live out the rest of your days in my dungeon.”

The boy neither flinch nor looked up. Ernst was slightly disgusted with himself for repeating such a suggestion.

“But I have overruled them. I will grant you freedom in exchange for your surrender.”

A guard unlocked the chains binding the prisoner. Wernher rubbed his wrists, still tender which from the iron grip of the manacles. He bowed but offered no other sign of outward gratitude. “Thank you, my Lord. May I go?”

“You may,” Ernst said.

Wernher turned, and the guards matched him by pivoting in unison. Ernst rested his head on his fist and watched them walk in silence. He tried to savor the moment, but stripping the boy of his title was not as sweet as he had expected. His thoughts turned to his two sons. Should he pass suddenly, God forbid, Leopold would be in the same predicament as Wernher, and Adalbert would be even worse off until he reached his majority. It was his duty to eliminate as many potential rivals as possible.

The former Count of Sankt Pölten slowed as he approached the doors and stopped at the threshold. A guard looked back over his shoulder at Ernst.

“Is there something else?” the Count asked. “Out with it.”
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“It’s nothing,” Wernher said. “It's just… I hoped your son, Leopold, would be here. I wish to speak with him.”

Ernst blinked. “He is attending to other duties.”

“Ah, what a pity.” A thin smile spread across Wernher’s lips. “I remember seeing his banner during the battle. My men say he commanded the flank that routed us.”

“I will relay your praise. Now, if there is nothing else, you may take your leave.”

“He should be congratulated on his newfound inheritance.” Wernher rubbed his wrists again, but the move seemed meditated—the boy had the poise of a coiled viper rather than a newly freed prisoner. “I meant to pull him aside at the siege camp, but I did not see him even once during my captivity.”

“You are testing my patience.” A guard rested his mailed hand on Wernher’s shoulder.

Wernher preened at having gotten this rise out of the Count. He held up his hands in a gesture of mock apology, and his smug grin erased any sympathy the Ernst felt for him.

"I meant no offense. Please pass along my congratulations to Leopold." Wernher’s voice was theatrical, carrying throughout the castle corridors as he projected across the hall. "Or perhaps I have it all backwards? In that case, please congratulate… little Adalbert, is it? I do wonder if he shall be your sole heir before the year ends."

The sweetness of victory suddenly spoiled, leaving a rotten aftertaste in the Count's mouth.


The sounds of merriment tittered out of the main hall and spilled down the corridors, stopping at the closed door of the council chamber. Countess Adelheid sat inside, alone, smoothing the creases on the map in front of her. She hated feasts and the crowds they drew, which was unfortunate because the festivities had not abated with Wernher’s surrender. This one, though, contained a singular bright spot: the Count was happy. Ernst was a loving enough husband, and a more typical wife would have doted on him. Ernst learned early in their courtship that Adelheid was rather unconventional, but he also recognized that her considerable talents exceeded his own. Their partnership had grown over years of marriage, and Adelheid treasured it more than any courtly love from a minstrel’s song.

No, Adelheid was not a typical wife, but she looked to her household’s interests as best she could. And… it warmed her heart to see her husband in a relaxed state of mind. His spark had dimmed him when Leopold returned, and she feared it had blown out entirely. But Wernher’s surrender stirred an ambition in him she had not seen since their wedding, when he would lie awake at night babbling on about his plans—wild and endearing in their naivety. She sought to nurture the spark by easing his duties so that he could enjoy the spoils of victory.

The door creaked and Vilhelm poked his head in. “You sent for me, my Lady?”

“Yes, come in,” she said.
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Vilhelm grinned and pulled out a chair next to her. Adelheid returned his smile with one that was equal parts genuine and self-congratulatory. She prided herself on her eye for talent, and Vilhelm’s rise and miraculous capture of Wernher showed she had chosen well. Some courtiers had balked when a mere knight married the Count’s niece, and even Ernst thought the match below her station. Adelheid prevailed on him, as she always did, but the investment to paid off sooner than she expected. It was time to bring him into the fold.

“Have you been enjoying the celebrations?” she asked. “I imagine there is no shortage of toasts for the hero of Sankt Pölton.” Adelheid poured wine from a decanter and offered it to Vilhelm.

His smile widened, and she noted the flush in his cheeks; clearly it wasn't the first goblet of the day. Good. His inebriation would streamline the process.

“You simply must tell me the story of how you captured Count Wernher,” she said.

Vilhelm cleared his throat and recounted the events of the siege camp, starting with the daring raid by the city’s defenders disguised as bandits. His voice was rhythmic, no doubt honed by countless recitations. Still, Adelheid picked out the details that were important to her. He was cunning and resourceful—attributes that would serve him beyond the battlefield. Vilhelm stopped his tale at the part where Wernher poisoned the guard.

“Apologies, my Lady. Am I upsetting you?”

Adelheid must have frowned, but not because she lacked the stomach for gruesome murders. This was the trouble with knights—their chivalry often dictated that they spare women the finer points of their exploits. Yes, the Countess sensed Vilhelm stopped because he was uncomfortable. She would have to press him on that point later. Omitting details was a dangerous habit.

“Ahem, well…" he said. "That is the entire story. Is there anything else I can do?”

“Oh, we are just getting started.” Adelheid clapped her hands together in a manner that did not put him at ease. “We haven’t chatted since you’ve been back. Not only are you a hero, but we have also named you chancellor.”

“It is a great honor, my Lady. I do not deserve it.”

“No need for modesty,” she said. “I have called you here to discuss topics that will arise during your first council meeting. For example, Wernher was released against the council’s wishes.”

“My Lady, it is for the best,” he said. “The other nobles would have found it monstrous had we imprisoned him.”

She smiled. “That is true. And as chancellor, it is your job to consider how we project ourselves among our peers. However, you should know that I recommended he be imprisoned—as did Justizia, if I recall.”

Vilhelm hesitated. “Wernher is toothless without his holdings and wealth.” She saw him shudder, unable to reconcile that his loving wife was also a pragmatic spymaster.

“Wernher is certainly not toothless.” Adelheid tugged on the corner of the map and set it between them. “And worse yet, he is young. Most Dukes in the realm have more ambition than sense—some are even powerful enough to push claims against Otto.”

The knight seemed sober now, and his eyes darted about the map. Adelheid watched him work through the possibilities, his lips moving silently. It was a little test—perhaps an unfair one—but thinking on his feet was part of the job.

“You worry about Duke Berthold of Carinthia?” Vilhelm said. “He has the men to fight Otto, although at his age he wouldn’t enjoy his conquest for long.”

“But what of his son? Do you know anything about his temperament? Pushing the claim would cement his reputation as a political force in the Kaiser’s court.”

The knight scratched his chin. “It’s possible, my Lady. But that seems far in the future.”

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“Vilhelm,” Adelheid said, “Our victory over Sankt Pölton was decades in the making.” She thought again of Ernst in his youth, whispering in her ear while playing with her hair. “Nothing is too minute to warrant consideration from the Count—or me.”

“Of course,” he said. “My mistake.”

He performed well on the first test, but it was time to discuss a more delicate matter.

“Perhaps you are right,” she said. “We have more pressing concerns. Markward’s faction has gathered enough support that they will press demands against the Duke.”

“Who joined him?”

“Count Otto of München and Count Ulrich of Freistadt. Ulrich’s presence is particularly… unfortunate. Ernst wants to push claims against him, but that won’t be possible until we resolve the business with Otto. We promised Markward we would decide when Sankt Pölton fell.”

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“What would you have me do?”

Adelheid leaned in. “Make sure we support the winning side. Ernst has no love for Otto, but treason... well, that requires a clear gain and a clearer path to victory. As both chancellor and the leader of our armies, we will heed your advice. Leave no stone unturned. Tally the troops as best you can, but the Duke has unmarried children to consider. We cannot be blindsided when he calls in new allies.”

Vilhelm’s eyes returned to the map, his fingers drifting over each province of the empire. Adelheid studied the knight, content he would prove a fruitful addition to the council. But knights, much like their beloved horses, were difficult to break in. A skilled handler knew when to use the carrot and when to use the stick.

She started with the carrot.

“Enough about our future—do you ever consider yours? As the Count rises, his successes will spread to our extended family, including you and Justizia.” She paused as he looked up from the map. “One day, when we defeat Ulrich, Ernst will petition the Kaiser to name him Duke of Austria.”

Vilhelm’s eyes widened.

“Yes. And when that happens, he will need a castellan to manage the barony in Florisdorf. Can you see it, Vilhelm? Every soldier hangs up their sword eventually, but few retire to the pitter-patter of little feet in their own keep.”

The knight was speechless, so Adelheid pressed her advantage before he could recover.

“Ah, listen to me, pratlling on like an old hen.” She rolled up the map and pushed her chair out. “I believe we are finished here, Vilhelm. I eagerly await my husband’s report after the next council meeting.”

She smiled as he stood up and turned to leave. Vilhelm simply did his duty when he delivered Sankt Pölten to them. An honorable man fights hard for his liege lord, but he would fight harder still for his future children. Yes, the little knight took the carrot and gnawed it to the stem—but now it was time for the stick.

“Oh, Vilhelm? One more thing. When were you going to tell me that Wernher tried to poison my son?”

He stopped in his tracks, and she knew from the heave of his back that he held his breath when he pivoted to face her. The flush in his cheeks was gone.

“Do not deny it—the fact is written all over your face.” She had told enough lies by omission to spot them. It was the one hole in his story, the single piece missing from the tale of the siege camp.

“I—”

Adelheid raised her hand. “I am disappointed, Vilhelm. Most disappointed. Next time someone tries to kill one of my children, you will notify me without delay. And I suggest you tell Ernst as well, if you haven’t already.”

He bowed his head. “It… it won’t happen again.”

“I know,” she said. “It’s an uncharacteristic misstep, but I still foresee a bright future for the hero of Sankt Pölten.”


Leopold lay awake in his bed and stared at the ceiling. It was after midnight, and the raucous feast in the hall below him had died down. He sighed, closed one eye, and hoisted a knife above his face. His wrist flexed as he practiced the throwing motion, and a final jolt sent the dagger sailing end-over-end towards a small knot in the wood above him.

*thunk*

The tip of the blade embedded itself into the paneling and then hung for a moment before plummeting back towards the bed. Leopold felt a rush as he reached out and snatched the knife at the last possible moment. He wondered if he had become a captive in his own castle—or what should be his castle, one day. Mother and Father hid their fears well, but the servants were not as cautious. Leopold gleaned from them that Count doted on little Adalbert, checking in on his lessons weekly. That lying, two-faced dog. He had the nerve to visit Leopold and pray for a speedy recovery, all while grooming Adalbert as his sole heir.

*thunk*

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Leopold had a… difficult relationship with his Father. He still remembered the day the Count had entrusted him to Alarich to train as a soldier. The Marshal handed him a wooden practice sword, and he turned, eager to show it off. No amount of strain could hide the disappointment on the Count’s face. The look still gnawed at him. He was so naïve back then, thinking that Father would come around. Leopold knew his gifts were so obvious, so numerous, that he would force Father to admit he was wrong. What a fool he was. When Alarich beat him, the Count sneered, and when he showed promise, the Count sighed, wishing his son had more brains than brawn. Father was, above all else, an impossible man.

*thunk*

Sankt Pölten was his chance—his one chance—to change that. For the first time, he and Father found themselves united by a common purpose. He thought about the last hunt they had done before the war, and of the night where he pleaded—no, argued—for his place among the soldiers. But the memory of the battle rose up, unbidden, and brought a white-hot tear to his eye. He wished he could have marched back to Wein with a captured knight in tow, forcing him to bow before Father’s seat. He closed his eyes and pictured it: the surprise on the Count’s face, Alarich’s jealous barbs from the corner…

*thunk*

Returning in disgrace was a fate worse than death, injury be damned. After months, he finally admitted that he hated all of them. He hated his incompetent grandmother and her looks of pity when she dressed his bandages. He hated the servants who avoided him like a leper. But most of all, he hated his parents, who were ready to cast him aside in favor of Adalbert.

*thunk*

He had not suspected their plot—not at first. But the thought had been growing in his mind because…

Leopold set the knife aside and pushed his hand beneath the pillow. He felt the gentle crinkle of paper as he pulled out the letter. He did not know how it got to him—it was just lying there one day when he returned from a short walk in the courtyard. Leopold thought he knew better. He did know better. Deep down, he suspected the letter was from Wernher, and Wernher couldn't be trusted. But he could not bring himself to tear it up, or burn it, or else dispose of it—the plot made too much sense. He slid the letter back into its hiding place and picked up the knife.

*thunk*

The blade sank deeper into the ceiling this time, thrown with more force than before. Leopold was not ready to die. At first he was afraid, but now he persisted solely to rob his family of any satisfaction from his passing. He grew stronger by the day, and soon he would be ready to swing a sword again. Leopold smiled to himself. No doubt the Count would push their claims against Count Ulrich. There would be more wars to come.

*thunk*

There would be more chances to prove himself.

*thunk*

There would be more chances to make them sorry.


Player's notes:

-Wernher had a very unsatisfying defeat in the game, so I took some narrative liberties. He personally commanded his armies in two battles and was captured in the second one trying to break the siege. I wasn't feeling it—why would a deceitful, 22 intrigue character lead a hopeless charge? He wouldn't, so I thought it would be more fun if the second battle was a daring night raid covering an assassination attempt. I don't think we've seen the last of him, either—he might turn up at the worst possible time for our protagonists.

-Oh, Adelheid. I really should not play favorites so much. I usually like Vilhem, too, but he is not in top form here. At least he learned a valuable lesson about the power structure and flow of information in this household.

-Someone really ought to take Otto aside and explain that factions in version 1.4 of the game are no joke.

-And Leopold... I feel that I have neglected his own perspective on his injury. So naturally I doubled down and made my author negligence somewhat cannon. Let's hope mom and dad realize what's going on before he goes to a very dark place.
 
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