Throughout the Victoria 3 text boxes Comprised is used incorrectly. For such a well-polished UI this stands out.
For example when a lobby is formed we have:
The new Lobby is comprised of the Intelligentsia and Landowners.
It should be either:
"The new Lobby comprises the Intelligentsia and Landowners."
or
"The new Lobby consists of the Intelligentsia and Landowners."
The first choice is preferred because 'comprises' means made up of. this is better than "includes" because includes allows for there to be more than those listed when, if I understand correctly, only the 2 listed are included in the lobby.
For example when a lobby is formed we have:
The new Lobby is comprised of the Intelligentsia and Landowners.
It should be either:
"The new Lobby comprises the Intelligentsia and Landowners."
or
"The new Lobby consists of the Intelligentsia and Landowners."
The first choice is preferred because 'comprises' means made up of. this is better than "includes" because includes allows for there to be more than those listed when, if I understand correctly, only the 2 listed are included in the lobby.
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