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In The Bowels of the Empire - A Narrative Star Wars AAR

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Hello and welcome to my new narrative AAR for Stellaris, In The Bowels of the Empire - A Narrative Star Wars AAR.

I have been writing this for a while, and decided to start posting once I had several chapters ready to go. Writers block and sudden emergencies have ended up blighting my other AARs, which I am hoping to avoid with this one.

Using the Star Wars New Dawn mod for Stellaris, this AAR is set one year after the formation of the Galactic Empire. It follows several members of the Empire's infrastructure and sees how the Empire's growing influence affects their lives. The outcomes and events of my playthrough inform what happens in the story, but it is primarily going to been seen through the characters eyes.

I will be using stuff from Canon and Legends, but my main interest is to try an interesting story, so I will modify aspects of the world if need be (though I will try and be consistent).

I hope you enjoy it and thank you for reading!
 
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Prologue - Wilhuff Tarkin

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The birth of an Empire came not with celebration, but with silence.

To the average citizen, the transformation had been abrupt—a single declaration by Chancellor-turned-Emperor Palpatine, a swift realignment of flags, uniforms, and rhetoric. But to those seated at the highest levels of power, like Wilhuff Tarkin, the shift had been methodical, deliberate, and inevitable. The Republic was always doomed to rot under its own idealism. The Empire, however—this Empire—was built to last.

Tarkin stood near the towering transparisteel windows of the Joint Chiefs Hall, gazing over the metal canyons of Coruscant. The sun was beginning to set, casting long shadows over the endless sprawl of the ecumenopolis. His uniform, a slate-grey cut of military precision, bore no medals, no unnecessary flourish. He needed none. Power, real power, did not require decoration. It announced itself in every word, every command, every breath.

Behind him, the Joint Chiefs were already arguing.

“And what of your ambitions, Director Isard?” General Aloysius Lang’s voice cracked across the chamber like a blaster bolt. One of the elder statesmen of the Imperial Intelligence community, Lang’s patience had worn thin over the last year of COMPNOR’s creeping influence.

“I don’t recall needing your permission to carry out the Emperor’s will,” Armand Isard replied coolly, folding his gloved hands on the polished black table. His accent, polished and urbane, reeked of upper-level Coruscant and old money. “The Enarc situation is within our jurisdiction. The locals are spreading subversive materials and praising the old Separatist Senate. That is sedition. That is COMPNOR's mandate.”


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Director Armand Isard of the Commission for the Preservation of the New Order (COMPNOR)

“Your mandate ends at the barrel of a blaster,” Lang sneered. “What you call sedition is an armed uprising, and that places it squarely under military jurisdiction.”

Seated beside Isard, Director-General Sarn Dornitz of the Imperial Security Bureau—a gaunt woman with pale eyes and tighter lips—offered no rebuttal. She simply listened, taking mental inventory, calculating. She reminded Tarkin of a Nexu waiting in the tall grass.

Admiral Demetrius Zaarin, whose grey uniform was immaculate and tailored to the point of vanity, sipped from a crystal glass and cleared his throat. “Both of you make compelling arguments,” he said, measured and diplomatic. Zaarin’s goatee twitched as he spoke. “Still, I believe we must consider the long-term optics. The Enarc System could serve as a test case. How we respond now sets the precedent for future engagements.”

Lang leaned forward. “Optics? We’re not running a political campaign—we’re quelling rebellion.”

General Cassio Tagge, one of the more pragmatic voices of the Army Council, cut in. “Rebellion or sedition, the fact remains—it’s our troops that’ll bleed for this. I don’t care who found the data first. The Army does the fighting. The Army decides operational priorities.”


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General Cassio Tagge of the Imperial Army and representative of the Army Council

“The Emperor would disagree,” Isard said with a smile that was all teeth.

That was enough.

Tarkin turned from the window, each step toward the table deliberate, echoing off the chamber’s high ceiling. As he stood, silence descended like a guillotine. Even the ever-arrogant Isard quieted, his expression unreadable.

“That will be quite enough,” Tarkin said, voice cold and sharp. “We are not in the Senate Rotunda, debating motions and amendments. We are the beating heart of the Empire. And the Emperor expects his heart to beat in rhythm.”

He let the silence stretch just long enough to command attention.

“Each of you—COMPNOR, ISB, Intelligence, the Admiralty, the Army—serve different functions. But those functions are not in competition. They are components of a single doctrine.”

He paced slowly behind his chair, hands clasped behind his back.

“The New Order is not an ideology. It is a mechanism. It is how we ensure peace in a galaxy that has proven, time and time again, that it is incapable of governing itself. The Republic failed because it was weak. Because it mistook compromise for unity. The Separatists exposed that weakness. And we crushed them.”

Tarkin stopped and surveyed each face in turn.

“Now, we must crush the memory of what came before.”

He allowed the words to sink in.

“Fear,” Tarkin said, lowering his voice. “That is the foundation. Fear of rebellion. Fear of failure. Fear of the Empire. Fear will keep the systems in line, not compromise, not negotiation. The Senate still exists—for now. But it is a formality. A façade for the civilians. Real power resides here.”

He gestured around the table.

“This bickering… this posturing… undermines everything we’ve built. The Enarc system will be pacified using whatever combination of resources is required. Intelligence will advise. COMPNOR will ensure ideological compliance. The Army will strike. The Navy will secure the system. And the ISB,” he turned to Dornitz, “will observe all.”

Tarkin seated himself again, his voice now calm.

“We are no longer servants of democracy. We are architects of order. The Emperor’s will is not up for debate. Let that be your guiding principle.”

There was no applause. Just the weight of his words settling over the chamber like a stormcloud.

Outside, the skies of Coruscant dimmed, casting the Imperial Center in shadow. But within the Joint Chiefs Hall, something else had taken hold—a colder light, sharp and resolute. The beginning of a new age.

And in the center of it all stood Wilhuff Tarkin, ever the loyal servant, ever the watchful hawk.

For a safer Empire. For a safer galaxy.


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Chapter 1 - Gilad Pellaeon I

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The shuttle engines thrummed like a steady heartbeat—low, deep, constant. To Gilad Pellaeon, it was the most reassuring sound in the galaxy.

Long before his commission, before the rank insignia and war commendations, before he had even held a blaster, that sound had meant one thing: forward motion. He had first heard it when he left Corellia as a boy, clasping his mother’s hand aboard a lumbering civilian freighter bound for the Inner Rim. Even then, it had spoken to him of new beginnings, of escape, of adventure.

Now, decades later, the engine hum beneath his boots whispered the same thing. But the adventure had changed.

Coruscant's skyline slid past the shuttle viewport, bathed in the dying amber light of dusk. The durasteel spires cast long shadows across the planet-wide city, painting the streets below in murky gold. Beautiful, perhaps, in its way—but Gilad Pellaeon had never cared much for Coruscant. Too busy. Too loud. Too many people with too many opinions. It was a city that whispered politics in every alley, in every atrium, in every overheard conversation.

He shifted in his seat, adjusting the collar of his uniform. He wore the grey of the newly christened Imperial Navy, as did the other officers in the transport cabin—freshly minted ensigns, a few sub-lieutenants, one or two captains. All younger than him. Some looked barely old enough to shave.

He caught a flash of silver on one officer’s chest—a Raithal Academy medal. His own alma mater. He doubted they knew what service meant yet. They’d find out soon enough, especially when they ran into graduates from the elite Prefsbelt Academy. There was always a silent war between the two schools: prestige versus grit.

As the shuttle touched down with a practiced hiss and the ramp descended, Pellaeon led the silent procession of officers into the Imperial Navy’s towering headquarters complex. The air smelled of ozone and polished metal. The hallways were pristine, white and sterile, patrolled by duty-bound protocol droids and watched over by blank-faced stormtroopers. This was the heart of the Imperial war machine—cold, efficient, and increasingly merciless.


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Pellaeon’s destination was the 24th level: the Commissions Office. He moved with purpose, nodding once at the junior officers who saluted him, receiving a measured nod in return from a higher-ranked captain. Commander was not a lofty rank, but it earned recognition. And today, it seemed, that might be about to change.

He arrived outside Commodore Rickard Lande’s office to find the secretary absorbed in her datapads, fingers flying across glowing keys. She didn’t notice him at first.

“Ahem,” Pellaeon offered, voice firm but polite.

The secretary blinked, looked up. “Can I help you... Commander?”

“Pellaeon,” he said. “I have an appointment with the Commodore. I believe I’m on time.”

She tapped her screen, scrolled. “Yes. You are.” She hesitated. Her brow furrowed ever so slightly. “One moment, Commander.”

Without another word, she slipped into the Commodore’s office, the door sealing behind her with a quiet whoosh. A minute later, she returned with a thin smile.

“He’ll see you now.”

As she spoke, the door opened again—and a young woman in civilian attire stepped out, cheeks flushed, datapad clutched tightly in her hands. She averted her gaze and walked briskly past. Pellaeon’s eyes narrowed slightly.

Then the Commodore appeared in the doorway.

“Commander Pellaeon,” he said, straightening his uniform, voice just a touch too casual. “You are... on time.”

There was the faintest note of disapproval. Pellaeon offered a crisp salute. “Sir.”

Lande returned it and gestured him in.

The Commodore’s office was modest but well-appointed. Floor-to-ceiling windows provided a sweeping view of the Naval parade grounds. Gilad had seen that kind of view before—it usually meant the occupant spent more time at a desk than on a bridge.

“Sit, Commander,” Lande said as he rounded his desk. “I imagine you’re wondering why you were summoned.”

“I assumed it wasn’t disciplinary, sir.”

Lande chuckled. “No need for worry, Commander. If it were, you’d be four floors down, not here.”

Pellaeon said nothing. He’d heard about those tribunals. In the Republic days, dereliction of duty meant a trial, perhaps a dismissal. Now, under Imperial rule... he’d heard stories of firing squads.

Lande flicked through a datapad. “Your record is quite distinguished. Judicial Forces background, action at Hypori, Geonosis, Ringo Vinda... Ah, and Saleucami. Battlefield promotion at Hypori—commendable.”

Gilad nodded. “The Leveler’s commander was killed during a boarding action. I led the repulse and held the ship. A Jedi Knight submitted my name for promotion.”

“Indeed,” Lande said, lips quirking. “Well, Jedi recommendations are of less value now than they were then.”

Pellaeon didn’t react. The Jedi had been enemies of the state for over a year now. Still, he'd seen many fall—not to treachery, but to clone blasters. Efficient, brutal. He’d once trusted the Jedi. He wouldn’t make that mistake again.

“The Empire needs men like you,” Lande continued. “Veterans. Proven officers. Which is why, effective immediately, you are hereby promoted to the rank of Captain.”

Gilad’s brows lifted slightly. “Captain?”

“Yes.” Lande opened a black durasteel briefcase embossed with the Imperial crest. “Please stand.”

Pellaeon rose. Lande unclipped the Commander insignia from his uniform and affixed the new Captain plaque in its place.

“By order of the Admiralty, and by will of His Majesty, Emperor Palpatine, I confer upon you the rank of Captain in the Imperial Navy.”

Gilad inclined his head. “Thank you, sir.”

“Don’t thank me yet,” Lande said with a dry smile. “Your orders are here.” He handed Pellaeon a datapad. “Report to the Imperial Dockyards at Kuat. Your new command awaits.”

Gilad scanned the datapad. No ship name, no details.

“You’ll meet with Vice Admiral Lorrie Cals upon arrival. She’ll brief you further.”

Lande rose and offered his hand. Pellaeon shook it.

“Go, Captain. Serve the Empire well.”

Pellaeon turned, datapad in hand, and walked out.

The rumble of engines still echoed in his ears.

Another new beginning.


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Captain Gilad Pellaeon
 
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Yes. This is it. I can like this. I do like this. :D
 
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How fitting that you post a Star Wars AAR on today of all days. Will absolutely follow! :D

I wonder if you have a plan or an overarching plot? Will we see Tarkin and Pellaeon again, or is this more like a series of vignettes? Either approach could work, I think.
 
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Oh, this is fun. My wife and I were just watching Andor too...
 
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Yes. This is it. I can like this. I do like this. :D
I am happy to provide!
How fitting that you post a Star Wars AAR on today of all days. Will absolutely follow! :D

I wonder if you have a plan or an overarching plot? Will we see Tarkin and Pellaeon again, or is this more like a series of vignettes? Either approach could work, I think.
Pellaeon will be a reoccurring character POV throughout the AAR, Tarkin may turn up again but I mainly used him to showcase how the upper echelons of the Imperial hierarchy interact.

As for an overarching plot, it is informed by the events of my playthrough. The obvious issue with this I suppose is that weird stuff might happen, but half of the fun is to try and string that along into a story.
Oh, this is fun. My wife and I were just watching Andor too...
I have been wanting to write this for a while, but Andor season two may have pushed me across the line :D
 
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Intel Report: The State of the Empire

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Note: Most of the polities you see on this map are autonomous parts of the Galactic Empire circa.1 ISY

Formed in 24,981 AFR (After the Founding of the Republic) or as it was known after the rise of the Galactic Empire, 1 ISY (Imperial Standard Year), the Galactic Empire became the largest power in the Galaxy. Inheriting the systems of its predecessor, the Galactic Republic, the Empire was the only preeminent power in the Galaxy, with a large military and a labyrinthine bureaucracy.

In the early years of the Empire, most problems arose from the left over of the Republic, mainly the inefficient galactic bureaucracy, the many different treaties with autonomous planets and sectors, and the translucent nature of Galactic borders. Then there was the Senate, which had played a vital role in Palpatine’s rise to power. Transformed into the Imperial Senate, much of the rights and privileges of the senators remained, but the leash was tightening as time went on.

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Imperial Officer Ranking System

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As part of the many Imperial reforms, the military was overhauled. Some ranks were inherited from the Republic, such as Naval Ranks. However, the Imperial Army was overhauled to be more regimented than its predecessor, the Grand Army of the Republic, and the invention of the ISB and science directorates demanded new ranking systems. All Imperial departments followed a statewide Tier system, which denoted their importance in the Imperial hierarchy. Tier 1 was the lowest, often for ensigns, whilst Tier 10 was the highest, which meant you had the Emperor’s trust. Often to be part of the Imperial Joint Chiefs you had to be at a Tier 8 at least.
 
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Will be interesting to see how this relates to the game...in universe terms, the galactic empire is the only real player on the board, controlling most of the galaxy (excepting hutt space, early on the CIS remnants, and later the rebellion...who don't control anything but get increasingly stronger anyway).
 
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Will be interesting to see how this relates to the game...in universe terms, the galactic empire is the only real player on the board, controlling most of the galaxy (excepting hutt space, early on the CIS remnants, and later the rebellion...who don't control anything but get increasingly stronger anyway).
I guess there will be loads of events?
 
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Will follow.
 
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I guess there will be loads of events?

The early game presumably is establishing higher control of all the main regions, and defeating the CIS remnants.

The middle game managing the growing rebellion and revolts as they pop up throughout the now very large empire.

And final stages are...either a big rebellion popping up somewhere or the vong.
 
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Will be interesting to see how this relates to the game...in universe terms, the galactic empire is the only real player on the board, controlling most of the galaxy (excepting hutt space, early on the CIS remnants, and later the rebellion...who don't control anything but get increasingly stronger anyway).
The game progresses through a mixture of events, situations and player choice. It seems to guide you along on a fairly open path.
Will follow.
Thank you!
 
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How in-depth and actively developed is the mod? Is it basically a cakewalk for the Empire as the player (assuming you know what is coming and prepare)?
 
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Nice that you started this one on May 4. Have read the prologue and hope to catch up soon. Quite a strong start!

With this and Andor out, how can fans of Star Wars not be happy?
 
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How in-depth and actively developed is the mod? Is it basically a cakewalk for the Empire as the player (assuming you know what is coming and prepare)?
It seems to be updated fairly regularly (though I've just had to revert for the recent update). Most of the 'autonomous' polities are actually independent in game, and they have fairly large navies that are not that easy to beat.

Also the Empire's income and resources at the beginning are overstretched so an early challenge is basically fixing that situation.
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Nice that you started this one on May 4. Have read the prologue and hope to catch up soon. Quite a strong start!

With this and Andor out, how can fans of Star Wars not be happy?
If I even get 1% close to the greatness of Andor I will be happy :p
 
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Chapter 2 - Mina Arrantis I

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“Stand up straight!”

The bark of Sergeant Cobarl’s voice hit like a sonic charge, cracking through the sleeping haze that still clung to the barracks. The man didn’t walk so much as storm through the room, his boots pounding against the durasteel flooring with deliberate aggression. He was a stormtrooper of the old breed—scarred, severe, and bred for war in an age that had grown cold and institutional.

Cobarl stopped beside a cadet, scowled, then seized the young man’s wrist. “These are disgraceful,” he growled, examining fingernails like they were evidence of treason. “You clean these. You clean yourself. Or I’ll have Corporal Stendt do it with a vibroblade.”

The cadet bolted toward the refresher like he was fleeing a firestorm. He probably was—Cobarl rarely bluffed.

Mina Arrantis stood three cadets down, her stomach clenched, her posture textbook straight. The others might have been half-awake, but she’d been ready since zero-five-hundred. There was no such thing as overprepared under Cobarl’s watch. A single slip—like her failure to fully disassemble her blaster during week one—and he’d hound you into the grave.

She didn’t fear him. She’d seen worse things than shouting and humiliation. What she feared was what would happen if she cracked. If she let herself believe that this place was anything other than a crucible.

Cobarl stepped into her space.

His face hovered inches from hers, breath hot with caf and spite. “Cadet Arrantis.” His voice dropped to a dangerous register, low and sharp. “You think you’re better than everyone else in this room, don’t you?”

I am, Mina thought, eyes locked forward.

“No, sir. We work better as a unit,” she replied evenly.

“Cut the shit, Arrantis.” Cobarl’s tone turned venomous. “You think I want to hear my own words spat back at me like recycled rations? Do I look like a moron to you?”

No, she thought, just unstable.
“No, sir!”

He stared at her for a moment longer, trying to bore his way through her with sheer will. She didn’t flinch. That had taken time—weeks of beatings, verbal or otherwise, endured in silence. She was no longer the raw recruit from Commenor who had arrived with polished boots and naive hope.

“Hmm.” Cobarl straightened. “Maybe you’ll survive here after all.” He moved on.

That was it. The game. Outlast the bastard. Hold the line. Don’t give him what he wanted.

That was how you won.

Corulag was supposed to be an opportunity.

That’s how they sold it on the holonet—parade images of clean armor, glossy visors, and medals gleaming on proud chests. The Empire's latest initiative: a reformed, human-centric Stormtrooper Corps, built to secure order in a galaxy still bruised from war.

Mina had joined without hesitation.

Her service in the Commenor Planetary Defense Forces had been largely symbolic. She’d enlisted during the tail-end of the Clone Wars, when whispers of a Neimoidian-aligned uprising rattled the Outer Rim. But no invasion ever came. Her unit had drilled, stood watch, and polished old clone-era rifles. Nothing more.

The PDF was a rite of passage, not a military. A year away from home, a taste of adulthood, and a chance to wear a uniform that meant something—if only in ceremony.

But the Empire offered purpose. Structure. An end to the chaos.

She hadn’t expected mud. Blood. Night sweats and bruises. She hadn’t expected to wake up every morning aching, hungry, and only half-healed from the previous day’s abuse. But she hadn’t backed out, either.

Because somewhere beneath the screaming sergeants and slogging marches, there was purpose here. And she wanted it.


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The mess hall smelled of starch, sweat, and nutrient paste. It was the closest thing to sanctuary within the academy. Physical fights were prohibited under penalty of expulsion—or worse. The Empire didn’t tolerate disorder, and neither did its stormtroopers.

Mina moved through the line, grabbing her tray and selecting today’s special: beige.

“Still trying to bulk up?” Klrissa asked as she slid into the bench opposite her, holding a tray of fluorescent red. “You know that stuff tastes like bantha hide, right?”

Mina offered a half-shrug, chewing her mouthful with the determination of a soldier crossing enemy lines. “Corporal Stendt says if I don’t build upper body mass, I’ll fail the cliff ascent. So. Beige it is.”

Klrissa rolled her eyes. “Red’s got more stimulants. Might make you fast enough to run up the cliff instead.”

Danyo arrived, freshly showered—he always found time for it somehow. “Or you could climb the cliff on a stack of excuses,” he said with a smirk, dropping his tray beside Mina’s.

He had the clipped accent of Shawken nobility, polished but too rehearsed to be accidental. Danyo tried to pass himself off as just another recruit, but his posture, his diction—it all screamed privileged academy dropout.

Still, he was sharper than he let on. And loyal. That counted more than class.

“I think,” he added, “if it were up to Sergeant Cobarl, we’d all be made to climb that cliff naked with a pack full of bricks.”

Klrissa snorted. “You’d still pose halfway up, Danyo.”

“Only if the lighting was good.”

They laughed, low and tired. It wasn’t joy—it was survival.

Klrissa leaned back. “At least Commandant Bryer’s still breathing. If Cobarl ever gets promoted…”

“Bryer’s a soft-skull,” Danyo said, more fondly than harshly. “Thinks war’s still fought with chessboards and speeches.”

“He’s not wrong,” Mina added, quietly. “Strategy wins wars. Not shouting.”

She didn’t say it out loud, but she respected Bryer. He’d served in the Judicial Forces and the Grand Army of the Republic during the Clone Wars. His lectures were dry as desert bone, but laced with insight. He spoke of battle with a historian’s reverence, not a sadist’s thrill. Which made him the exact opposite of the men who trained them.

Before another word could be said, the mess hall doors slammed open.

“On your feet!” roared Cobarl.

The room responded like a triggered alarm. Trays down. Backs straight. Silence.

“You’ve had your slop. Time to run it off.” Cobarl’s eyes swept the room like a targeting scanner. “Fifteen miles. Terrain route. Mud, rock, swamp. You’ve got five minutes. Move.”

Mina felt her gut churn.

Fifteen? After yesterday’s drills?

A low moan rippled through the room, but no one dared voice it louder. They filed out, disciplined, exhausted.

Outside, the Corulag wind cut through her fatigues like razors. The terrain ahead loomed, the thick rainforest brimming with the screeches and howls of wild beasts. Here we go again.
 
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Stormtroopers are pretty good soliders, all things considered.

Unfortunately, they are replacing clone troopers, who were much better
 
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