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Hello fellow paradox members, I will start a new CK2 AAR in which I play as House Strazzi, a custom dynasty that I have created within The Most Serene Republic of Venice. I will play from 1066 until the end of the game and will try to find a way to make Venice and by connection House Strazzi the dominant power in the eastern Mediterranean. Just a disclaimer, I am very new to the AAR process so it may not be as perfectly executed as other aars that have been created. Also if you haven’t already read it you guys should check out Before Plantagenet which is a high quality aar which has convinced me to start my own. Also feel free to add constructive criticism or suggestions when necessary. I have every DLC except some of the unit packs, Sunset Invasion and Rajas of India. So without further adieu let’s begin.




September 1066

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Patrician Ludovico of the newly formed House Strazzi stood on one of the balconies of his family palace, the Adriatic in all its glory captivated him. Before her death when he was 25 his mother often told him that his eyes were as blue as the sea before him, but as he stood there, pensive he realized that it was simply one of those things that his mother told him while she raised him to make him more confidant.”Not that it really worked, of course it didn’t help that my father, a merchant of modest means did not legitimize me until he neared death. But at least she cared enough to try and she was indeed a very loving mother.” He inhaled the warm autumn air feeling truly at peace when he was interrupted by the voice of his chancellor Benedetto
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a tall and thin blond man,”My patrician I request that you meet with the council today to discuss some pressing matters particularly that of seeking out a suitable bride.” Hiding a scowl Ludovico silently nodded and after a pause responded,” Of course, summon the council to discuss this.”

“Yes my liege”

As Ludovico followed him through the humble let elegant confines of his family palace he thought about how he ended up here,”My maternal grandfather had captained a galley in the service of the Serene Doge and after helping to annihilate a band of pirates near Dalmatia was promised to be rewarded with this palace, the title of patrician and the city of Veglia. Unfortunately the reward was delayed until this year and my grandfather died two years ago. Fortunately months before her own death my mother convinced the Serene Doge to transmit these titles to me.” Once they had traveled through the corridor they found themselves in the council chambers where Ludovico sat at the head of the table helping himself to a glass of red wine and an apple while Benedetto sat to his right drinking some water. Within a minute the rest of the council entered the room. His marshal Boris
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a local Croatian, who was known to reward his bravery and hard-work with visits to the local brothel, in which he generously paid the prostitutes for their time, sat to his left. Yet despite this exterior he was a scholar at heart and spent a significant amount of time reading philosophy. Then came his spymaster Pietro Faliero,
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who was willing to do gruesome things for his liege provided that he was well compensated, who sat to his far left. His older brother steward Vitale Faliero
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who despite his meek demeanor was a man of ambition sat across from him. Finally, directly opposite to Ludovico sat Riccardo
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who’s vow of chastity made him a decent enough candidate for such a career.”Lets begin” ordered Ludovico.

“We have narrowed down the search to a three primary candidates, bring in the portraits.”

At his command servants waiting outside the double doors brought in the portrait of a pretty teen with black hair, green eyes fair skin and full lips. “This is Rocca de Hauteville
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, she is niece to Duke Robert the fox of Apulia.”

“She is young and pretty I admit, but is there some sort of catch?”asked Vitale

“Yes actually, her uncle demands a hefty bride price of three hundred florins to wed her due to her distinguished ancestry.” Responded Benedetto

“She would help you scheme though”quipped Pietro

“What do you think my patrician?”
Ludovico sipped his wine,”Show the other candidates, I will not make a decision until I see all of their portraits and see what benefits and drawbacks each union has.” the next portrait of young brown haired woman was then presented,”Unia de Combron
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, her brother is the Baron of Combron.”

“That is in France is it not?” asked Riccardo

“Indeed it is.” confirmed Benedetto

“You know what they say about many young french women?” Riccardo suggested

And then without waiting for an answer he bluntly said,”They are whores and the descendants of Satan.”

Boris added input of his own,”I don’t see why the former is such a problem, eager women are more likely to please the men that they are with and will have more children with them.”

“You would know wouldn’t you” replied Riccardo with a smirk

Before the two could argue further, Benedetto slammed his fist on the table and raised his voice,”Enough damn you, stop acting like clods, you two are learned men. It’s only the Angevins who are descended from satan.”

Can we continue men? I value your consul and would hate to lose it.”

Quiet enveloped the room until Benedetto cleared his throat,”She has a bride price of 100 florins and thus I would consider her a good compromise between paying a large bride price for a woman of high status and not paying one at all for one of equal status to you.”

“You all have good points but I would rather not marry her as she has a haughty look and I would rather have a faithful wife.”

“Very well my liege, bring in the final portrait.”

The servants brought in the final portrait, that of a blonde woman with delicate looking features, dark eyes and a brooding stare.

“I do confess that I am most interested in this beauty, what is her name and age?”
"She is Ricciarda Contarini
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, the youngest child and only daughter of Serene Doge Domenico,
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the second of his name to rule over Venice. We believe she is in her mid twenties and her father will not require a bride price.”

“Very well chancellor Benedetto, send out my request for her hand in marriage.”

“Indeed a good choice.” agreed Vitale, satisfied that his liege wouldn’t have to pay a bride price

All the other members of the council also appeared to agree with this decision.

“Now as to your orders, Benedetto is to improve relations with our Serene Doge, Boris wil train troops in the city, Vitale will collect taxes, Pietro will investigate local schemes and Riccardo will improve relations with his holiness Pope Alexander the second.”

As the council members began to file out of the room Ludovico got up and stopped Vitale,”What do you require Patrician Ludovico?”

“I’m sorry, I nearly forgot that we shall need to build trading posts in Veglia and Senj.”

“A wise course of action, Ludovico.”

“Thank you and goodnight Vitale.”

Although he was practically bursting with excitement at the prospect of being married Ludovico was able to drift to sleep.
 
Looking forward to the AAR.

Are you running any mods?

No, I am not. Thank you very much for reading my aar. I plan on updating it at least once a week.
 
Will follow
 
And I'm back in!
 
I'm in. I've often thought of doing a Venice 769 AAR but the power of Byzantium has always made me think it wouldn't be interesting. SO I'm looking forward to seeing how you do this.
 
I'm in. I've often thought of doing a Venice 769 AAR but the power of Byzantium has always made me think it wouldn't be interesting. SO I'm looking forward to seeing how you do this.

Thank you kind sir/madam! I choose the 1066 start simply because with prior starts Venice has little in the way of competion ( i Don't think that Genoa and Pisa exist)
 
Welcome to AARland, I hope as you will enjoy writting so much. AARs with Venice and republics were few
 
Welcome to AARland, I hope as you will enjoy writting so much. AARs with Venice and republics were few

I think I will enjoy it. Thank you very much.

Everybody: I hope to release the second part on or before Monday!
 
Nice start! Will try my best to keep track of this going forward. And I did notice the little reference to the House d'Anjou.

One formatting suggestion - I would avoid breaking up sentences with screenshots. It can be jarring to have a sentence suddenly stop, get a picture and then continue the thought. I suspect that was mostly something for this part, dealing with character introductions, but I'd probably aim for putting the screenshot after the written introduction/description of the character.

But like I said, good start. Will be interested to see how it plays out since I've never messed around with merchant republics.
 
Nice start! Will try my best to keep track of this going forward. And I did notice the little reference to the House d'Anjou.

One formatting suggestion - I would avoid breaking up sentences with screenshots. It can be jarring to have a sentence suddenly stop, get a picture and then continue the thought. I suspect that was mostly something for this part, dealing with character introductions, but I'd probably aim for putting the screenshot after the written introduction/description of the character.

But like I said, good start. Will be interested to see how it plays out since I've never messed around with merchant republics.

Thank you very much for the tip, I will certainly do that in the future. Also, thank you for reading this, as I'm sure you're busy with your own aar.
 
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October 1066


Ludovico after taking the short naval journey from Veglia to Venezia dismounted his horse in front of a shop, as he was about to enter the shop several of his guards attempted to follow him,"Stay." He grumbled. The guards obeyed and as he entered he noticed that the interior was as opulent as the surrounding city square, with shelves lined with fine necklaces, pendants and a variety of other types of jewelry. "Would you be so kind as to buy something or are you just going to stand there all day."

He stood there for a moment, shocked at the words of the fat old crone that sat on a stool behind the counter. "Yes of course madam."

Ludovico smiled as he picked up a necklace, the sapphire in the center sparkling in the sunlight from an adjacent window."A very good choice for ladies of fairer complexion, that will be 5 florins sir."

He also walked over to a display case, staring at a silver ring with a topaz in its center. "You have a wedding coming up don’t you?”

He nodded,”You know young man it's been 40 years since my own wedding and my late Luigi wasn’t able to afford anything so expensive, I take it you are wealthy then, perhaps wealthier than myself?”

“I am just a simple patrician, so how much for both of these?”

“15 florins altogether, good luck to you milord.”

Ludovico left a coin purse containing the requested amount, took the jewelry and left the shop. The rest of the journey to the Doge’s palace was passed in relative silence and they arrived just short of sunset.


When they did eventually make it to the Doge’s palace he dismounted his horse and as he entered the palace the chamberlain announced,”Patrician Ludovico of House Strazzi.”

He was then greeted by several individuals, specifically his future family in law. First came his father in law Domenico the second who greeted him a with a hug and an obsequious display of graciousness.”Hello boy, since you are to soon be my son in law I would like to confer two honors upon you. The first being that you will be regent should our republic ever need one, I admire your skill in financial matters and think it may be useful if I am ever incapacitated.” Before Ludovico could thank him he continued,”The second being that you will have a place on my council as my advisor, I know I can trust you to deliver sound advice.”

“Why thank you sir.”
“Enough of that sir nonsense, Ludovico, we are essentially blood now, go on and meet my sons.”

Ludovico nodded and advanced further into the palace, silently admiring the elegance of his surroundings.


He then met the men who would be his brothers by marriage, they all shared the same blond hair and fair skin of his future bride. The eldest being Iacopo who with two sons of his own, Domenico and Gaspare respectively, represented the future of his house.”Hopefully my boys will soon have cousins to play with.”

“Yes that would be nice, but don’t you already have nephews by your brothers?”

“Yes I do, I just hope that your union bears plenty of fruit.”

“Why thank you, Iacobo.”


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Then came Andrea, who said,”I am very grateful for your marriage to my sister, otherwise I fear she would’ve been married to some old foreigner.”

“Well, I am just as grateful for the opportunity to marry her.”

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The last of his future brother in laws to see him was Carlo,”You know, there is nothing better than a proper marriage, overseen by god and the clergy, hopefully we will all be working to liberate the holy land from the Mohammedans soon.”

“Yes, it would be a good way to prove to the various monarchs of Christendom that our republic is just as holy as their kingdoms.”

“Indeed, in our republic men our not chosen for leadership based on merely the time of their birth, but on the abilities and wisdom that god helps them obtain.”
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After a few more minutes of conversation with these men, Ludovico and the others went to the palace’s chapel where the wedding was to be held and before he knew it he was standing across from his bride in front of his in laws, council and various onlookers. Riccardo officiated the ceremony,”Today we celebrate the union of Patrician Ludovico, of the house of Strazzi and Ricciarda Contarini, daughter of Serene Doge Dominico the Second of Venice. “

Riccardo turned to Ludovico,”Do you take this woman to be your wife? To love and protect her and to stay faithful to her, until death?”
“I do.”

“My god, even with her veil on she is incredibly beautiful.”
Riccardo then turned to Ricciarda who though smiling, was slouching a bit

“Do you take this man to be your husband? To love and protect him and to remain faithful to him, until death?”

“I do.”

“Then by the power granted to me by god, I pronounce you man and wife.”

Though the difference in height was not great, Ludovico sensing her aversion to moving much bent down to kiss her. The kiss was quick yet sweet, exactly what Ludovico had wanted. The witness for their part applauded this act of matrimony. He then reached within his coat revealing what he had purchased earlier,”This necklace signifies your fair beauty and this ring, with the topaz the color of your eyes demonstrates my love for you.”

Riccarda smiled and removed her veil,”Thank you husband, I am fortunate to have married you, and yet I seem to think that we are not completely married, shall we retire to the bedchambers my dear?”

He smirked,”If you insist.”



Later that night…….

Ludovico held Ricciarda in his arms as they layed in bed, her soft snoring being the only thing to interrupt of the sweet solitude that Ludovico was enjoying. The consummation of their marriage went well for the both of them, though Ludovico, despite his inexperience had to do most of the work while Ricciarda was content to be the passive partner.His last thoughts before falling asleep being. “We are now man and wife, I can only imagine the things that she and I, along with the rest of our family will be able to accomplish in this life.”



PS: My apologies but the screenshots of Ricciarda’s brothers were done a little in the future(I forgot to take them during the month that they married) so there may be some minor spoilers. I did use the snipping tool to try to mitigate them.
 
Well, it sounds like a fairly positive start to the marriage. Hopefully that will remain the case.
 
Well, it sounds like a fairly positive start to the marriage. Hopefully that will remain the case.

I also hope so. Ludovico being a man whom (In his backstory at least) had only his mother and mother's father in his life prior to their deaths will likely gravitate towards a wife, plus even before marrying her he was absolutely infatuated. She has the content trait and since she also received a gift from him likely has a high opinion of him. Also as one of her brothers mentoined she at least married someone her own age in the realm. So it is likely to be a happy marriage. I also think Ludovico probably views his brothers in law as potential allies and friends.
 
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April 1067





“Will he live?” Ricciarda asked her brothers and their wives as they stood by the bed within a finely furnished and dim bedchamber, the bed’s occupant having noticeable trouble breathing”It's hard to tell sister, but I will pray that for our father’s survival and do penance should he survive this.”

Bianca Savazzi, Domenico’s new wife, who was about a year younger than Ricciarda shook her head, silent tears dripping from her face,”He has been afflicted with gout since January, and I fear he may die, it’s terrible my father and I managed to steer a merchant caravan to safety in the dead of winter, but I can’t even save my husband from the effects of gout.”

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Ludovico strode closer towards the bed,”It has been an honor to be your son in law and I will do whatever I can to help you live, shall I summon my own personal physician?”

“No that won’t….” Before he could finish his sentence he was cut off by a violent series of coughs

Ludovico grabbed a goblet of water from an adjacent end table and brought it to his father in law who received a little relief and after finishing it said,”Thank you so much, but I must decline your offer as my physician has done everything he could.”

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Ludovico nodded, tears forming in his eyes and returned to his wife’s side.

With a grunt Domenico managed to sit up slightly, leaning his pillow against the headboard of his bed,”Now I have already said goodbye to my grandsons, they mewled like pups, poor boys, but I’m sure you all understand that my death is simply relief from the pain that has plagued for months now, which has forced Ludovico to take the mantle of regent. I only ask you two things, one that you treat each other with love and respect that you all deserve. The second being that you must work together to ensure that the houses of Contarini and Strazzi may lead our republic to wealth and greatness.” He then clutched his chest and gasped,”Farewell my children.”


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PS:I’m sorry that this took a little longer than I intend it to, I’ve been busy in the past week with some work for some of my classes. Also, Bianca's screenshot is a couple years later.
 
treat each other with love and respect that you all deserve

This always went SO well when a dying man said that to his family. I cannot think of an example in history when this went wrong. Nop.