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Boy, when I first started reading these, very few people started any Romanian or Hungarian AAR's, and fewer still finished them! Now that I'm finally ready to start posting mine, we've got 2 Hungarian and 1 Romanian going strong! --Hopefully, you're not sick of them yet, because I'm going to follow through with my Romanian AAR. I promise to finish it no matter how ugly it gets! :D You can view the trailer here:

http://www.angelfire.com/mech/mcheinrich/romania/romania_final.html

or the flash movie

http://www.angelfire.com/mech/mcheinrich/romania/romania_final.swf

Give it a second to load. I haven't figured out how to cache them yet before playing.

BTW, Prufrock451-imitation is the sincerest form of flattery! :rolleyes: :D
 
January 17th, 1936

Viktor pushed the reports back across his desk and sighed. He’d been
reading reports so long, he wondered if his legs might be still attached.
Stretching, he rubbed them a little, and a tingly trickle of blood started
working down toward his toes. “Yep, still there,” he thought. “Damn, and so
is my ass.” Slight movement by stretching had apparently been enough to
remind him of the fact. “Funny how the ass is complaining and my legs just
dutifully went to sleep.” Viktor found himself wondering whether he wasn’t
doing the same thing. He’d transferred here, to Military Intelligence, from
the Cavalry. His father's old friend, General Dumitrescu, was looking after him.

“He shows promise,” Dumitrescu had said to his father last summer,
slapping him on the back in a convivial private moment after a parade
through Sibiu, his hometown. “He should take a headquarters assignment now.
It’ll help his career.” Somehow the Headquarters assignment had morphed
into the Military Intelligence Staff assignment at the Governmental Ministry
of Intelligence. Now he’d spent the last 6 months poring over internal and
external reports. It was a nice break at first, not having to spend half
the year in the field, getting hot meals when you liked, showers, lunches at
the cafes… but Viktor was starting to feel the bureaucratic weight of it
the last few weeks. Maybe it was just the fact that it was January and it’s
snowing. Peering about, he noticed half the desks in the department were
empty. Considering a walk might do him good, he resolved to go to the water
cooler, which turned into a short step outside for some air, which turned
into a ‘quick’ cigarette outside the ministry building. As he lit the
second one, he pined a little for his coat, but not enough to go back into
the building. Instead, he walked around to the side of the great edifice
and took shelter in the archway of a lesser-used door. He soon forgot
enough of his own discomforts to marvel at how the snow coated the buildings
and streets of Bucharest for a few minutes. At least until Grigori found
him.



“Viktor, where the hell have you been?” Grigori asked him. Grigori
apparently also hadn’t bothered about a coat, but wasn’t above shivering.
“The old man wants to see us all right away!” One stubbed cigarette and
five flights of stairs later and Viktor was standing in front of the
Intelligence Minister’s desk. He smacked the desk with the flat of his hand
hard enough to make his nameplate jump. It couldn’t help but catch Viktor’s
eye on bouncing and landing: Mihail Moruzov. Moruzov was just finishing off
a tirade against the limitations of the Foreign Intelligence Branch;
limitations sparked largely by his own budget cuts, of course, but that wasn
’t under discussion. Then again, most state agencies had been forced to
tighten their belts. The country needed new industries, new technologies to
compete, or so said Goga and the King, anyway. “Nice way to co-opt the
unions,” Viktor thought cynically before being pulled by to his current
surroundings by the forceful voice of the Intelligence Minister.


“Codrescu,” Moruzov bellowed, “what do you have on the Russians?”


“Very little, sir,” Viktor replied respectfully, “I was put to work on the
Bulgarians recently.”



“Well, get to work on the Russians. I have to present an accurate assessment
to the General Staff by the end of the week of the troop situation on our
border.” Moruzov linked his pudgy little fingers together and put them in
his lap. Inclining his head to the foreign intelligence liaison, he
continued. “Our human resources cannot be adjusted from their current
assignments biased around the formations based in Odessa. We need more information about the potential troop buildups in Vinnytsa.”


“Yes, sir” Viktor said, but Moruzov scarcely seemed to notice. He was on a
role.


“The information we already have might be the key. Be sure to concentrate
on the supplies.” Moruzov rose from his chair. “You can learn a great deal
from these things. I’ve certainly been able to show them a thing or two
from them.” He pushed his thumbs behind the lapels of his suit and beamed,
no hint whatsoever of modesty. “Yessir, I’ve had an intelligence coup or
two in my time.” Puffed up to twice normal side, Moruzov practically
knocked over the Naval Intelligence officer, but took no notice. He walked
to the window and looked right through the Bucharest skyline. “The
logistics specialist, that’s what they called me. Yes, I’ve had a few
successes.” The assembled officers and civilians in the room shared a few
looks while Moruzov stared out the window, busy being hero of his own
daydream. The minister started to absently remove lint from his jacket, and
smoothed the front, all the better to appeal to his imaginary crowd, then
turned around to the staff, almost annoyed. “Well, don’t just stand there,
get to work on Vinnytsa!” Everyone filed out quickly and resumed their
posts.



“Samovars?” Moruzov said at the next morning briefing.


“Samovars, minister.” Viktor improved the display of the various papers in
front of the Intelligence Minister. "The French army may have marched on
its stomach, but the Russian army marches on its tea, and that means
samovars."

"So you're sure about an armored division?" Moruzov inquired, attempting to read the various documents.

"And another division, probably enhanced by a brigade, recently arrived." Either that, or an extremely caffeinated battalion, Viktor thought.

Moruzov gathered up the materials. "I will study these myself, and present my conclusions to the General Staff." His shuffling and aligning the stack crisply on the desk sufficed as a dismissal, so Viktor went back to his desk. He hoped the estimates on Russian tea consumption that he pulled out of thin air weren't too far off. Or that the scrap about samovar orders gleaned from the newspaper wasn't some commissar of tea implement's attempt at inflated production statistics for the glory of the motherland. Viktor smiled, shrugged his shoulders, and went back to work. A month later, he was called into Moruzov's office. Two army staff officers, both Colonels, flanked Moruzov's desk. He wasn't nervous until Moruzov asked him to take a seat.

"They've heard about the staff Christmas party," he thought, and gripped his knees to steel himself.

"So this is Major 'Samovar' " said the Colonel on the left.

"-you're stealing my thunder!" shot Moruzov, albeit amiably. Major Codrescu, these Gentlemen are from the Army General Staff. "We wanted to take this occasion to congratulate your on your penetrating analysis of the Vinnytsa sector!" Viktor tried not to look stunned.

"Well..thank you sir " he got out. "But, how exactly are you so sure of its accuracy? And, if I may be so bold, why is it you are so pleased?" Dammit, I shouldn't have asked that, he thought. Too late to take it back now.

"It's accuracy has been confirmed by other means" stated the other Colonel matter of factly.

"And you know better than to ask!" Moruzov playfully added. "Suffice it to say it has been of some use at the highest levels of government."

"Oh, shit" Viktor thought, and started worrying again.

"The rest are details, some of which we are willing to share with you, considering your new security clearance," the first Colonel said, and tossed a folder onto the minister's desk directly in front of Codrescu, "and based on whether you accept the new position offered you."

"New position?"
 
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Keep it up and please update ASAP :)
Nuke
 
Darn I thought this going to be entirely in flash :mad:
 
May 31st, 1936

Viktor liked the official sanction to be sneaky. His latest assignment as "Special Representative of the Ministry of Intelligence at Large" was to do a little internal snooping on army units. Of course the army would alternate between bragging about it's ability to defeat any nation we bordered and begging for newer tanks, supplies, and another 10 divisions to do it. Someone more or less outside the army would have to provide a more objective and detailed assesment. So, once again on instructions from "the highest level of government", 'Major Samovar' was sent out to right wrongs--or wrong rights for all he knew--by way of some judicious snooping. At any rate, it was a real gas to walk into a division headquarters, produce a paper signed by the Minister of Intelligence giving him carte blanche. Whenever anyone gave him trouble about it, like General Popescu's staff did this morning, he simply pointed out who had countersigned the document: Octavian Goga, Prime Minister. Being a former poet, he had a great signature, it got attention. Being head of the current government didn't hurt, either. It earned Viktor some belated respect, and a map to the maneuver deployments of the division.

An hour later, he was in a little clearing a few kilometers from the Danube not far from Giurgiu. In that clearing was most of a company from the 2nd battallion, 3rd infantry Division, sitting in the shade of a tree near a truck, smoking cigarettes and laughing. Viktor followed his first impulse and nochalantly walked up to the group. Most took no notice of him, other than to stop the conversation. One Sergent at least spoke to him.

"Are you here about the truck?"

"Yes, actually"

"So where are the jerrycans?"

"I didn't bring them"

"Well that's obvious" the Sergent replied with a smirk. "How are you supposed to bring it back without fuel?"

"Good point" Viktor replied, and offered the man a cigarette. He accepted, which then brought out a murmer of requests for more cigarettes to be spread around. Viktor complied with a few laughs and exchanges of greetings. Playing along with the mood, he sat on the bumper next to one of the soldats, lit up a smoke and tipped his cap down on his head a bit as if to relax. Some of the crowd began laughing and talking again.

"Been out here long?" Viktor asked.

"Ah, about two weeks" the sergent replied, idly rolling his free smoke back and forth in his fingertips.

"Some manuevers" Viktor floated. The sergent laughed.

"Major, the only movement we get out here is when the food's bad." At least he noticed I'm an officer, Viktor thought. The sergent continued after a long drag. "So will we ever get any ammo, if there's no fuel to be had?"

"Can't say. That's not my department." Viktor found it easy to pick up the mood of this group. Maybe because it so closely mirrored his own on occasion.

"Well, whatever. No difference to me. At least we get paid; they know better than to cut that off."

"Say," Viktor asked pointing over his shoulder with his thumb, "how long has this thing sat here, anyway?"

"Since we got here " the soldat next to him intejected. The sergent under the tree crushed out his cigarette and added, "We drove it until it ran out of petrol, then set up our positions. Great fields of fire, no?" Viktor had to laugh at the wide arm gestures the sergent was using to make his point, then relaxed on the bumper for a few minutes, letting the last of the May sunshine hit him as the wind lazed through the tree branches. Finally, he got up and stretched a little noisily.

"Well," he said, arms reaching for the sky, hands curling, "duty calls." He straightened his cap and started marching back the way he came. Not three steps away from the tree, the sergent called after him.

"Hey, so are you coming back with the petrol?" Viktor smiled.

"Does it matter?" The sergent smiled broadly and gave him a salute that looked more like a wave, then went back to his idyll as Viktor pushed through the long grass along the path he came.
 
June 17th, 1936

Viktor looked over the line of French Renault tanks, parked in parade formation on the training grounds. Behind them the ground undulated and turned up and up, snaking towards past Lugoj and into the Carpathian mountains beyond.

"Crews, MOUNT!" the plutonier commanded, and 20 men snapped into motion, whipping open hatches and diving in before just as quickly buttoning them up.

"See? Look at that-12 seconds!" the plutonier said proudly, showing Viktor the stopwatch in case there was any doubt.

"Impressive" Viktor conceded. The tanks were small, two man models but loooked impressive enough to him, especially when the engines rumbled to life, nearly simultaneously. 5 had cannons, and 5 had machine guns. The fact that they were considered light tanks would be of little comfort to someone like himself wandering around unprotected on the battlefield. The group executed a wheeling turn and headed off to the firing range.

"Of course, there is little ammunition for practice" the plutonier spat with obvious contempt. If he was any more disgusted, Viktor thought, I'd have to wipe my face with a handkerchief. "And the fuel restrictions keep us somewhat limited,"

"-But better to have 10 tanks running all the time than 20 running half the time or less" bellowed a voice from behind Viktor. He'd only heard the voice once before, but remembered it well enough to smartly pivot in an about-face and present a crisp military salute. The plutonier reacted just as quickly and did the same.

"Good morning, sir!" Viktor found himself face to face with Field Marshal Antonescu, trailed by two of his staff officers. Their beflagged staff car wasn't more than 10 meters away. Apparently, he'd missed the sound of it's approach, and that of it's occupants, as the tanks exited the parade ground and rumbled off toward their simulated fire exercise.

Antonescu returned the salute, then chided, "trying to sneak around my command, eh Codrescu?" Viktor was taken aback. Luckily Antonescu steamed right ahead and filled his own conversational void before it became noticeable. "Don't worry, Major, I have nothing to hide. I'm on my own inspection as a matter of fact. Would you care to join me?"

"Of course, sir" Viktor didn't exactly feel comfortable refusing. Maybe Antonescu was trying to show Viktor the things he wanted him to see, but going against a field marshal was often a bad idea. Especially when they're not only an army commander, but simultaneously the chief of staff. Viktor joined the group and walked with them towards the clutch of barracks about 100 meters away. They paused long enough to let a company on morning physical training run by, receiving and returning the salute of the leader, before continuing on their way.

Besides, Viktor thought, I've already seen enough to know that 1st Army's formations look the best and train the hardest of any those I've seen.

A quick tour of the nearly empty barracks found made bunks, dusted shelves, clean toilets, and one very excited duty officer. The pleasantness of this orderly display lost it's charm after the 3rd building and the 3rd very excited duty officer, who actually had the temerity to ask the Field Marshal for his autograph. Antonescu absently obliged, while addressing the little group. "I think we've seen enough barracks," he said, much to Viktor's relief as the newly autographed notebook found it's way out of Antonescu's hands, through those of his two staff officers, and into the duty officer's, who clutched it with a little glee before returning to military decorum.

"Soldier, where is your company now?" Antonescu bellowed, doing his best Napoleon.

"North side of the base, near the north gate" he answered, and went ramrod straight when it was apparent the marshall and his entourage were leaving with this nugget of information. Once clear of the building, Antonescu spoke: "That's too far to walk. We'll take the car."
 
Mr.G 24 said:
Nice updates nice trailer. I like all aars with trailers. :)

I concur! Great opening and great updates McHeinrich. What model of tanks are these? Don't tell me they're FT-17's, or Viktor may end up out running them on a bicycle!
 
June 17, 1936 (cont.)

cooking.bmp


"Sir, when you invited me to lunch, I didn't know this was what you had in mind" Viktor said, attempting levity in his tone, but telling the honest, disappointed truth.

"Nonsense, major," Antonescu replied, "field kitchens have to practice deployment, same as other units. Besides, the food needs inspection, too. I won't have my men going hungry or eating substandard food." One of his staff officers handed him a spoon from the trays of silverware on a nearby table, then stood respectfully behind the marshal as he spooned stew from the offered ladle.

"Good" Antonescu said sternly, then smiled. "My compliments to the cook." As levity, it was a little weak, but it passed muster for a field marshal. Most assembled smiled, his staff officers chuckled. All took it as their cue to line up after the field marshal and await their share. Suitably provisioned, they sat in a group at the end of one of the set-up tables, their sole concession to rank. The rest of the men, when they arrived, would have to sit on the ground to eat. Light conversation passed back and forth between the two aides and the field marshal. Viktor listened much and said little; innocuous stuff. His attention had almost started to wander when Antonescu addressed him directly.

"You're not worried I'm hiding anything from you, are you major?" Antonescu continued eating nonchalantly, but there was a certain..challenge in the question, maybe even a threat. Viktor felt something grip him, like fingers in his back, slowly straightening and pulling him upright. He absently pulled the spoon from his mouth and swallowed.

"Of course not" Viktor said. Antonescu continued eating, not even making eye contact. One of the Colonels followed suit, but the other clearly was sizing him up.

"Nonetheless," Antonescu said, shoveling another mouthful of stew into his mouth. He chewed and swallowed. "-nonetheless, perhaps it is best you finish your inspection without me." Before Viktor could even think of answering, he continued. "I insist." Only now did the marshal put down his spoon and made a point of making eye contact. "I do not wish to be seen as obstructing your unbiased evaluation of army readiness." A second passed, maybe more, as they searched each other for clues. Then, just as easily as he put it down, the marshal picked up his spoon and returned to his meal. Viktor felt himself relax. One of the colonels asked Antonescu about an afternoon appointment. Viktor heard the exchange and missed the details entirely, exhaling through his nose and closing his eyes for just a second. When he opened them, he realised the other Colonel was still looking at him. Antonescu scraped the last bits from his bowl efficiently, drank his water, and stood up. Viktor stood up in return.

"Go ahead, finish your meal, major. Then, go wherever you like. When you're finished, come back round to the north gate about 6 O'clock. I'll have a car pick you up, and we can share a real meal before you go off to wherever else it is that you're going next."

Viktor was a little taken aback. "Thank you sir"

Antonescu smiled as he pulled on his gloves, and gave him a conspiratorial wink. "You don't think I eat like this all the time, do you?" Viktor smiled, and saluted. The marshal returned the salute peremptorily before turning and striding puposefully back towards the staff car.
 
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Aug 3rd, 1936

"If it moves salute it! If it doesn't move, pick it up! If you can't pick it up, paint it!" The soldier bellowing out these orders made Viktor flinch back for sheer volume.

"So..you're kept quite busy, I see, " Viktor told him.

"YES, SIR!" was his emphatic reply. Viktor told the man and his crew they could carry on, and tried not to smile too widely-or flinch- when the young soldier's hand shot up from his side and toward his head in a salute like it was fired from a gun. He returned the salute, and watched the picket of men make their way across the training ground, picking up bits of trash and the like and pitching them into the canvas bags slung around their hips. An military maneuver as old as time, Viktor mused, and laughed as he considered it. Just as he was considering what Roman armies might have picked up instead of cigarette butts, he heard his name called.

"Viktor, there you are! By the Christ, I've been looking all over for you." To his surprise, he saw the long face of his counterpart, Major Vulcanescu. It had stung a little while back to find that he wasn't the only "Special Representative of the Ministry of Intelligence at Large", but it made sense. It was a big army, after all, and he was only one man. They'd actually done an assignment together a week ago, then split up to view inspect seperate divisions in General Ciuperca's Mountain Corp.
"Alin! Where the hell have *you* been?" Viktor asked him. "More importantly, why aren't you there?"

"Major Codrescu, I'm here because I've been ordered to be. Besides, is that any way to address a comrade who's acquired a damn fine bottle of plum brandy and is willing to share?"

Viktor walked up to Vulcanescu, smiled, and clapped him on the shoulder. "That's more like it! And it beats the hell out of watching them unload crates of shiny new 30mm Infantry guns we don't have ammunition for."

"No different from the first of the shiny new crates of 90mm artillery pieces that I saw, which also don't have ammunition. -But I'm not here to discuss the current limits on military supplies. I'm here to get your ass back into Tirgu Jiu and onto the first train for Bucharest."

"Bucharest? But we had at least another 4 weeks of inspections?"

"Not anymore," Vulcanescu replied, "or so it seems."

Viktor raised his eyebrow. "What do you know, Alin?"

"I know nothing! I simply follow orders!" Vulcanescu brusquely retorted. "You might do better to adopt more of the same attitude."

Viktor started to argue, then gave up before he started. In the distance, he heard the trash patrol leader give the command for about face, and the distant line began to march back towards Viktor and their starting point.

"Ah, forget it, Alin. Come on. Let's get moving before we get painted." He put his arm around his confused counterpart, began walking, and turned the conversation towards the brandy.

[to be continued when I leave work & get home :) ]