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Intro:
I have been reading AARs and playing CK2, especially CK2 AGOT for a long time and wanted to try my hand at a narrative based AAR of my own. This scenario takes place at a custom start date, shortly after the death of Dowager Queen Visenya Targaryen (wife of Aegon I) in 44 AC and diverts from the canon timeline. The main point of view character for now is Prince Viserys, son of Aenys I, but other members of the Targaryen family or court may have short chapters as well and some of the story may be told in letters or writings. This shouldn't have any spoilers for the books or show since it takes place over 200 years before the events of A Game of Thrones. I will mostly include art and portraits to help with the story and occasionally screenshots from CK2 as well. Thanks for reading and I appreciate any and all comments and suggestions!




Chapter 1: Escape to Dragonstone
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Prince Viserys at age 16, a squire and captive of King Maegor the Cruel before his escape. He has shoulder-length white-gold hair and deep violet eyes, a shining example of the beauty of old Valyria.

Viserys' arms burned with exhaustion as he pulled the oars through the water for the thousandth time, his eyes fixating on the outline of King's Landing in the distance which was getting harder and harder to see as their boat moved into Blackwater Bay. He glanced over his shoulder at his sworn shield, friend, and mentor during his confinement in the Red Keep, Ser Jon Tollett, his white kingsguard armor shrouded in a rough homespun fisherman's cloak and his face sweaty with exertion.

Getting tired already old man?, Viserys teased good-naturedly, knowing the young Kingsguard knight was but a half a decade older than him.

You're breathing a bit hard yourself, my prince, why don't you take a break for a while? Else your cursed uncle will hear your panting all the way from Harrenhal and feed us both to Balerion, Jon replied, cracking a smile despite the grim nature of their situation. Viserys, who had slouched down and closed his eyes momentarily, shot up at the mention of his reviled uncle resumed rowing with determination.

Both men were fit and strong, with Jon being a capable warrior and Viserys doing little else in his captivity but take lessons from the Grand Maester and train in the yard of the Red Keep with Jon and occasionally Maegor himself when he was in the mood to beat Visery into a pulp with training swords. But even warriors tire, and they had been rowing for hours with still a large distance to cover before they reached safe harbour at his maternal uncle Daemon Velaryon's island of Driftmark.

The two men lapsed into a companionable silence as they both rowed feverishly for Driftmark. His body focused on the task at hand, Viserys led his mind wander to the monumental events of the last few months.

Viserys had once thought that he would remain a hostage of Maegor forever, seperated from the rest of his family who were under Dowager Queen Visenya's watchful eye on Dragonstone. He had even given up hope that the sons of Aenys would reclaim the Iron Throne from their usurping uncle, especially after Maegor and Balerion tore his elder brother Aegon the Uncrowned and his dragon to pieces at the Battle Beneath the God's Eye. This had all changed a few moons ago when Maegor, frustrated with his lack of an heir, had summoned his sister Rhaena from hiding in Fair Isle to forcibly wed himself to her. Maegor had forced Viserys to be present at the wedding and ensured Rhaena's loyalty by holding her and Aegon's daughter, Aerea hostage, while her twin sister Rhaella was sent to Oldtown to be trained as a septa.

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Queen Rhaena Targeryen, fourth wife of King Maegor the Cruel, with her twin daughters Aerea and Rhaella.

Maegor's rule had made the royal court a violent, dangerous, and sparsely populated place, so Viserys was usually alone for his morning lessons with Grand Maester Desmond. Rhaena could contrive some reason or another to escape Maegor and his other queens' supervision meet and speak discreetly with Viserys. Even Queen Tyanna of the Tower, Maegor's Pentoshi paramour turned wife, who had eyes and ears everywhere, had not discovered their ruse. Viserys loved seeing his sister and her presence made life at court seem less hopeless, but he hated watching her suffer at Maegor's hands. One day, when Viserys had arrived to train in the yard with Ser Jon Tollett, he informed him that Tyanna had presented evidence of her fellow Queen Alys Harroway's infidelity to the King and Maegor had predictably killed her and every last Harroway in King's Landing. Interestingly, Maegor ridden out with a large force of men to exterminate every last Harroway from Harrenhal and the surrounding lands, a despicable act that would nevertheless give Viserys and Rhaena a window to plan an escape.

But to where? Visenya held their family at Dragonstone and would swiftly turn them over to Maegor if caught. They could flee to their mother's family, the Velaryons, but Viserys would not see Driftmark burned by Maegor's wrath when he returned from Harrenhal. The high lords at Storm's End, Casterly Rock, Highgarden, Oldtown, and the Eyrie may give them shelter but they could just as well hand them to Maegor on a silver platter.

A week later, fate intervened in their favor. Viserys and Rhaena was playing with Aerea, who had been brought by her mother to the Grand Maester under the pretense of a fever, when the maester recieved a raven from Dragonstone. It was a hastily written note from Viserys and Rhaena's mother, Lady Alyssa Velaryon, intended for her children that read: Dark Sister had been sheathed. The Dragon has both his wives now. Fly, you fools.

That night, Rhaena insisted on staying with her "sick" daughter Aerea in the Grand Maester's chambers, while Viserys stated his desire to consult the maester on a book about the fall of Sarnor. Using the secret passages beneath the Red Keep, Viserys and Jon had changed into garb of the smallfolk who lived in the hovels along the bay and taken a small fishing boat out to sea. Rhaena had taken her sleeping daughter and snuck into the half-finished dragonpit where her dragon Dreamfyre has kept. Their plan was to meet briefly at Driftmark to gain Lord Daemon's support in their plan to secure Dragonstone.

Jon's fit of coughing tore him out of his reminiscing and he watched as Jon spit a glob of phlegm into the water before resuming rowing. Viserys' eyes scanned the night sky worriedly, looking for any sign of Rhaena and Dreamfyre. Another hour of tense rowing passed and slowly the salt-stained walls of Castle Driftmark came into view. The beating of wings from above stole his attention as he saw a pale blue shape pass over the clouds. Dreamfyre!

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Dreamfyre, the mount of Rhaena Targeryen.



Ser Jon followed his eyes upward and smiled with relief. Lets see if we can't beat them to Driftmark, Ser, Viserys said, grinning widely. We need to get you a dragon boy, so I don't have to carry you around anymore, Jon said, slapping his back affectionately.

Don't worry Ser, I have one waiting for me in Dragonstone, Viserys said, his eyes looking past the great Velaryon castle and into the dark beyond, where he knew his mother, siblings, and Vhagar awaited. He kept his eyes there as they rowed into a small inlet. One step closer to Dragonstone. One step closer to freedom. And one step closer to claiming the throne of his father.
 

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Another AGOT AAR, huh? There are so many of these now... but this seems very intriguing.

Is Maegor still king? If so, Viserys might have a situation. How subtle could he afford to be? I can't imagine that Maegor the Cruel has many friends among the Great Houses right now.

I did like the Tolkien reference.
 
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Another AGOT AAR, huh? There are so many of these now... but this seems very intriguing.

Is Maegor still king? If so, Viserys might have a situation. How subtle could he afford to be? I can't imagine that Maegor the Cruel has many friends among the Great Houses right now.

I did like the Tolkien reference.
Yeah, I had to hop on the AGOT AAR bandwagon :D Tried to make it in a completely different time period in Westeros than most of the other AARs.

Yeah Maegor is still king and I just used console commands to grant Viserys the lordship of Dragonstone to create my starting scenario. Nearly everybody in the realm hates Maegor so I'm hoping that by the time Viserys launches his rebellion a lot of the major Houses will join him.
 
Super interesting premise and very creative choice choosing Viserys as who I assume is going to be the main (?) character, multiple POVs can be fun when writing an AAR, good luck and will be following this!
 
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Chapter 2: Duel of the Fates

Thanks to everyone for your comments and support. This is the last "intro"/story chapter before the ck2-guided narrative begins.
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You're a weakling just like your father, Maegor sneered, brandishing his blunted longsword upwards, Get up boy! Viserys stumbled to his feet, dripping with sweat, his weary arms aching for respite after the hours of battering he had taken from his uncle. He feinted a blow to Maegor's right shoulder, where gap in his armor left a weak spot, before lunging for his lower left torso. His uncle parried his blade lazily and smiled coldly, raising his blade high and bringing it down in an overhead blow, Even your pathetic excuse for an older brother didn't fight this badly when I killed him.

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The feared King Maegor 'the Cruel" Targaryen, son of Aegon the Conqueror and his sister-wife Visenya, enforcing his will from the Iron Throne.

The sound of steel kissing steel echoed across the yard, as Viserys strained to block Maegor's sword, the strength of the blow forcing him onto his knees. The mention of his dead brother filled him with newfound strength and with a grunt, he let his sword drop as he rolled to the side and planted a swift kick to Maegor's lightly armored groin. As his uncle staggered back, Viserys barreled into him, knocking him tonto the ground and causing him to drop his sword. Viserys bent down to pick up the sword and take advantage of his uncle's plight when a mailed fist collided with his face and once again he tasted the dirt of the Red Keep's training yard and the warm blood filling his mouth and nose.

Impudent wretch! You don't stand a chance against me! His uncle roared. He grabbed Viserys by his hair and pulled his face up to meet his, his eyes blazing in fury. I will knock your arse into the ground every time. And one day, when your cunt of a sister gives me an heir, I will kill you. No one will save you then. Not your white knight Jon or your Velaryon bitch mother or your dead spineless father.

With one last hateful look, he dropped Viserys back into the muck and strode off with his kingsguard. The last thing Viserys saw before blacking out was the pale face of his sister Rhaena among the throng of onlookers, her eyes red and puffy with tears.

VIserys woke up in a cold sweat. He was safe. He was safe in the halls of his kin in Driftmark and Maegor was thousands of miles away at Harrenhal. But not for long. Lord Daemon Velaryon, Lord of the Tides, was the Master of the Ships on the small council at the Red Keep and could lose his head if Maegor found out he was harboring and aiding Viserys. Viserys and Rhanea has arrived at Driftmark last night, the former on a fishing skiff with Ser Jon, his sworn shield, and the latter with her daughter Aerea on dragonback. They were to leave for Dragonstone as soon as possible, ideally with more than a few knights and men-at-arms to ensure their family's safety.

Shaking off the bad dream, he dressed quickly, putting on the elegant black doublet laid out for him by the servants before going into the hallway to loudly pound on Ser Jon's door. The door opened, but instead of Jon, a comely young servant girl came out, blushing hard and hurriedly adjusting her dress, before bowing and scurrying down the hall. Viserys stepped back to let her go and entered Jon's chambers with a chuckle.

Couldn't keep it in your pants till Dragonstone Jon? Viserys said, wagging his eyebrows, while Jon nonchalantly put his boots and draped his white kingsguard cloak over his shoulders. Aye, it was a lapse in my judgement my prince, but not all of us can have such highborn tastes like you, Jon said jokingly, I'm sure the lady Jeyne Harroway is missing you back in King's Landing, before stopping abruptly and turning beet red.

It was true, the younger sister of Queen Alys Harroway, Jeyne, had made him a man and warmed his bed during the lonely nights in the Red Keep, but Maegor had slaughtered all the Harroways in King's Landing for his Queen's alleged infidelity and was now doing the same thing at Harrenhal. Viserys felt a wave of emotion threatening to wash over him and quickly waved off Jon's apologies, setting off down the corridors of Castle Driftmark to break his fast.

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Viserys absentmindedly sipped at a glass of arbor red as he listened to the words of his cousin, Corwyn Velaryon, eldest son of Lord Daemon Velaryon.

My Prince, my lord father supports you wholeheartedly but he cannot risk Maegor's suspicion or ire. The word of your escape has no doubt reached him by now and it must not be known that you stayed here at Driftmark. We are watching every ship and raven that takes flight from here but Maegor's Pentoshi witch has eyes and ears everywhere. The last raven we recieved from your mother said that the Dragonstone garrison had tried to imprison her after Visenya's death and she had barricaded herself in Sea Dragon Tower with your brother, sister and a few leal knights. You must go to Dragonstone and quickly, Corwyn said, avoiding his eyes.

Rhaena chimed in, her tone civil but increasingly impatient, We need men to free our family, cousin. Give us some fighting men and we can root the enemy out of Dragonstone and leave this salt-stained island.

Give me your leave nephew and I'll take a hundred of our best lads to escort our guests safely to Dragonstone. We'll only use trading cogs and wear merchants garb as to avoid suspicion, though I don't know how we can disguise a dragon,
said Ser Corlys Velaryon, Lord Daemon's younger brother. Dreamfyre was currently hidden in a remote cove on Driftmark and flying to Dragonstone in the middle of the day would draw many prying eyes and treasonous accusations.


Aye, I'll go too if you allow it Corwyn, said young Ser Jorgen Velaryon, I couldn't leave all the glory to our dear uncle.

Corwyn looked timidly between Viserys, Rhaena, his uncle, and younger brother, not wanting to deny their request or put his family in danger.

Woe be to House Velaryon on the day Corwyn inherits his father's lands. He is a coward, but atleast he is surrounded by men of honor and bravery, Viserys thought.

He stood and genially placed his hands on Corwyn's shoulders, appying some pressure. Worry not cos, Rhaena and Aerea can stay here with Dreamfyre, out of harm's way and out of the King's sight, he said, shooting an apologetic look at Rhaena. I'll go with these brave knights here and set Dragonstone to rights. No dragon and your father stays safe and lives to fight another day, he added, smiling hopefully.

Corwyn, out of options, mumbled his assent and trudged of the room, followed by Rhaena who shot Viserys an angry look. Viserys would be getting an earful from her for making her stay behind. But there were more pressing matters at hand. If all went well he would have a dragon of his own by day's end.


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Counterclockwise starting from top: Lord Daemon II Velaryon, Master of Ships for Maegor, Corwyn Velaryon, eldest son of Daemon and heir to Driftmark, Ser Jorgen Velaryon, youngest son of Daemon, Ser Corwyn Velaryon, younger brother of Daemon, uncle to Corwyn and Jorgen.

The sun was setting and the sky was darkening in hues of crimson, dark gold, and purple as Viserys rowed to the desolate Dragonstone shore alone. The rest of the men would sail on toward the castle to wait for his signal.

Viserys' unease grew as he set off on his own, trekking along the coastline of Dragonstone to find the place that Vhagar had made her lair. A few fishermen on Driftmark had reported a large creature flying around one of the caverns of the Dragonmont so that's where he was looking first. At last he found a rocky path that led into the smoking volcano and began climbing.

Eventually he found himself on a rocky precipice, high above the castle, with the sea to his back and the fiery chasm that made up the heart of the island to his front. The sun had long sunk beneath the horizon and the full moon was his sole source of light. His face flushed red with heat as despite his Targaryen blood he felt scorched standing so close to a volcano. He opened his mouth to call the dragon but a loud, unmistakable roar knocked him to his feet and cracked the precipice he was standing on.

He looked up and saw Vhagar, her bronze body and dark green wings eerily illuminated in the moonlight. He scarcely had any time to react before Vhagar opened her mouth and bathed the rock beneath him in brilliant green flames. Viserys scaled higher and higher, narrowly escaping the molten rock before he stood on the highest point on the mountain, surrounded by flames. Vhagar faced him, her maw opening. Lyriki! he shouted, the high valyrian word for calm. Lyriki! Dohaeris!

Her jaw widened and Viserys could feel the impending blast. Dohaeris! he shouted, jumping toward her and hanging on to one of her horns just as the green flames consumed the rock he had been standing on. Summoning all his strength, he climbed the base of her neck carefully avoiding various spikes and horns, just as he'd seen Rhaena and his father do. Vhagar flailed and beat her wings forcefully in an effort to make him fall off, but Viserys held on, gripping her so tightly that his knuckles turned white and his palms grew slick with blood. Soves! he shouted, fly! Soves Vhagar!

And against all odds, she did. And the world was his.


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A fantastical depiction of Prince Viserys' encounter with Vhagar in the fires of the Dragonmont.

Viserys let out a cheer as he flew Vhagar around the night sky at breakneck speeds. He was finally a true Targaryen, a worthy heir to Aegon the Conqueror. The thought of his dynasty brought him back to the mission at hand and he hastily flew to Dragonstone castle.

Viserys guided Vhagar to land in the empty courtyard and yelled at the top of his lungs, Dracarys! The sky above the castle shined in brilliant green as Vhagar shot dragonfire into the air and Viserys' men sprung into action at the signal.

A few minutes later, almost the entire garrison of Dragonstone was present in the courtyard. The Velaryon men, led by Ser Jon Tollett and Ser Corlys Velaryon stood behind Viserys and Vhagar. They had captured or killed all of the guards and patrols still loyal to Visenya and Maegor to ensure that word of their attack did not spread. In front of him, emerged the rest of the enemy garrison led by a lean, balding man with a thin mustache and a cold look in his eyes. He recognized him as Ser Holtyn Manning, who had once been one of Maegor's household knights.

The eyes of the gathered men fell on him and his dragon. Viserys quickly spoke up, trying to project his voice across the yard in a kingly manner, I am Prince Viserys Targaryen, heir to my slain brother Aegon and my father King Aenys. My blood is the blood of Old Valyria and of Aegon the Dragon. In the name of my father and grandfather, I demand you to end your blockade of Sea Dragon Tower, free my mother, brother, and sister, as well as all the loyal men who remain with them and yield this castle to me. Else you will have my dragon to answer to.

The garrison commander spat on the ground. Don't lecture me about the blood of the dragon princeling. I've been a dragon man all my life. I served the King Aegon, Aenys, and Maegor faithfully until Queen Visenya appointed me as castellan of Dragonstone. I'll not dishonor her memory by surrendering her home to the son of weakling. And you may have a dragon, but Maegor has one too, larger and fiercer. I-

He was interrupted by the beating of wings and the arrival of Rhaena on Dreamfyre, a sleeping Aerea nestled in a sling on her breast. And now I have two dragons, said Viserys, smiling at his sister. He should've been upset at her for defying his orders and coming to Dragonstone but he couldn't feel anything but relief at her appearance.


But I will not bring fire and blood to my ancestral home, Ser, he said carefully sliding off Vhagar. I challenge you to a duel. If I win and prove myself strong enough to claim the mantle of my house, you and your men must surrender and free everyone in Sea Dragon Tower. If you win, you can imprison me, my sister, and her child and offer us to Maegor freely.

Ser Holtyn grunted and said, We will fight, but it will be to the death. This is no tourney.

Viserys nodded and drew his sword. Rhaena protested, saying they could simply roast Ser Holtyn and his men and be done with it while Ser Jon offered to fight in his place, but Viserys was adamant. He commanded his sister and Jon to stay back and advanced.

His brown merchant cloak had long been discarded and he wore the boiled black armor given to him by the Velaryons. Ser Holtyn was tall, around six feet, but Viserys was taller by nearly four inches. The courtyard was dark but the many torches provided enough light for Viserys to see his opponent clearly and block his first strike. Viserys slashed quickly at his opponent, testing his guard. Ser Holtyn suddenly lunged, his sword nearly piercing Viserys' leg until he leaped out of the way. Put on the defensive, Viserys parried and evaded his opponent's strikes but was steadily driven back. Desperate to turn the tide, Viserys slashed vertically but Ser Holtyn blocked the blow and smacked Viserys' head with the pommel of his sword. Viserys' stumbled backward, his head ringing. Maegor's voice flashed in his head, You are weak, just like your father. He opened his eyes and sidestepped another blow, twisting his sword to cut his opponent's shoulder. Ser Holtyn roared in pain and launched a series of vicious blows, but despite the ache in his temples, Viserys found himself easily defending against the attack, the strength and speed of his opponent much worse than Maegor's and the kingsguard he usually trained with. As Ser Holtyn overextended himself in yet another attack, Viserys delivered a riposte, using his opponent's momentum to send him falling to the ground while smacking his sword on the back of his knee, forcing him to kneel. Viserys pulled his sword forward and held it to the castellan's neck.

I am not my father, Ser, and I am not my uncle either. I will obey your terms of the duel and give you a clean death, as a king must uphold his word. Ser Holtyn cursed him bitterly and bid him to finish the job. Viserys obliged, slicing his neck.


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The deceased Ser Holtyn Manning, castellan of Dragonstone during the reign of Maegon I Targaryen. He was slain by Prince Viserys in a duel for the control of Dragonstone.

A red spray of blood splashed on his face and the pounding in his head grew louder. He was aware of Ser Jon catching him as he fell, his white cloak billowing in the wind, Rhaena running to him with Aerea awake and crying, and Ser Corlys Velaryon and Ser Jorgen rushing to open the gate of Sea Dragon Tower. As darkness overtook him, he saw Vhagar and Dreamfyre flying up, almost intertwined, higher and higher toward the pale moon.


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The nearly bloodless Capitulation of Dragonstone would mark the beginning of Viserys' full-fledged rebellion against King Maegor and the start of his short reign as Prince of Dragonstone.
 
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Super interesting premise and very creative choice choosing Viserys as who I assume is going to be the main (?) character, multiple POVs can be fun when writing an AAR, good luck and will be following this!
Thanks! I am a huge fan of your AGOT AAR which was a major inspiration for this one. Yeah, for the first 3-5ish chapters Viserys will be the main POV character but after that some members of his family and court will show up too!
 
Viserys wins Vhagar to his cause, he will need it against Maegor...... good to see him get some combat experience in, lets hope that those doubts dont creep in should he meet his uncle in the field however.

mark the beginning of Viserys' full-fledged rebellion against King Maegor and the start of his short reign as Prince of Dragonstone.
Hopefully this means his time as just the Lord of Dragonstone will be short, the alternative is much worse.

Curious as to how far youve played ahead and if your running any mods?
 
Vhagar will prove useful. I wonder if Viserys desires to burn Maegor alive in revenge for his abuse?

Rhaena appearing was useful here, but her rebelliousness could be problematic if she makes it a habit...