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Turmoil has engulfed the Galaxy. There has been a mass escape of enslaved people from the Desstican Astral Fellowship, an interstellar empire that has conquered some two hundred star systems.

Outraged, the Desstican ruler has accused the AUGMENTED CEVANTI ADMINISTRATION of aiding and abetting the escapees, funneling them through a wormhole that leads to Human territory.

While the Fellowship prepares to launch a punitive invasion against the Augment Homeworld, a young Human named INO ESPERANTA takes her first steps on what will become an incredible cosmic journey...


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Greetings, fellow star commanders! My name is Macavity116. I would like to offer you a short Stellaris Story.

For the past few months, I've been writing my next space opera story set in the incredible world of Stellaris, an epic tale that will be called Unsung Paragons of the Forgotten War. While the story itself is not ready for publication, I do have this smaller offering ready to roll.

The GALEX Incident is a short story set in the world of Unsung Paragons and takes place before the events of the main story. This is an extended prologue, for want of a better term. I wanted to take the new characters/setting/style for a "test drive," to see how readers (that's you) react to these elements before I kick this new writing project into high gear. Lessons learned here will go toward Unsung Paragons before that thread is posted.

As always, I have no expectations for this project. I'm just out here to tell a story and have fun along the way. Thank you for reading, and please enjoy as much or as little of my short Stellaris story as you please.




The GALEX Incident
Table of Contents (Links will be added as new chapters are posted)

Part One

Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven


 
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Part One


The GALEX Incident
Part One



For the first time in her life, Ino Esperanta felt as though she was in control of her destiny. Just yesterday, she had graduated from Officer Training School and was about to start her new career in the Coalition, the largest military alliance in the Galaxy, of which Humanity was a founding member.

Ino parked her EV in front of the Coalition Liaison office at Guyana Space Centre, located on the Caribbean shores of South America. Starships came and went from here in noisy fashion. Some of them belonged the UN Military. A few were flagged as Coalition vessels. The rest were assorted civilian ships.

Knowing she had arrived early, Ino took a few moments to make final adjustments to her uniform. She wanted to make a good impression on the Coalition commanders, so she opted for the ceremonial dress uniform today. She made one final self-inspection, and then paused to watch a Coalition starship lifting off from the ground. The destroyer rose into the sky with a deep rumble that shook the ground beneath Ino’s feet.

Ino took a deep breath and turned in a circle, taking in as many sights as she could. Once she left Earth, she might not return home for a long time. She knew a few officers who had been in space for up to three years straight.

Ino knew the next stage in her career would be an assignment aboard a starship. It was what she had been training for over the past year. Ino did not have a particular vessel she wanted to serve on, but she was curious about certain missions that would take her very far away from Earth. She took a deep breath to steel her courage and then entered the Coalition Liaison office.

An alien dressed in the Coalition battle uniform greeted Ino in the lobby. She recognized him as a member of the Lozavatan people, a race of plantoids who were able to comfortably live on certain parts of Earth. The Lozavatan officer adjusted one of his branches and waved at Ino, imploring her to approach. When she drew closer, Ino spotted a tripod next to the alien, upon which a sign declared in bold lettering:


Coalition Military Intelligence Corps - "Match, Outpace, Eclipse”

OTS Graduates please wait here for your assignments

The Lozavatan officer told Ino to stand in the hallway with her back against the wall. Admiral Ruel would call her into his office when he was ready. As Ino took her space, she noticed the plantoid touching his wrist-mounted communicator with a vine. A soft beeping noise sounded from an office that no doubt contained Admiral Ruel.

Ino looked around. The hallway and lobby were decorated with paintings of the most famous Human-built Coalition starships:

The Battleship Engadine.

The Frigate Seawolf.

The Destroyer Aquarius.

The Command Ship Basilisk.

The Seawolf had found fame in the border skirmishes, where the Empire of Axpentl threatened to encroach on Coalition space. The Aquarius was a spy ship that once caused an incident by accidentally straying across the interstellar border and into Fellowship territory. This only made Ino feel even more apprehensive.

What vessel would she be posted on? What illustrious space captain would dare to trust a rookie Tactical Officer like her?

“Ensign Esperanta!” The Admiral called out.

Ino had to catch herself, to stop herself from stumbling as she made her way to the Admiral’s office. When ordered, she sat down in front of his desk. Admiral Ruel, a kind-faced old man, stroked his beard as a secretary handed him Ino’s file.

“Ah... yes. Ino Esperanta. I’ve been waiting to see your name cross my desk.” He said.

“You know me, sir?” Ino asked, caught off-guard.

“Ever since your fifth written aptitude test.” Admiral Ruel replied. “Twice is an accident. Three times is curious. Four times is a trend. Five times... well... you have my attention.”

The Admiral set down his paperwork and stared at Ino. She tried to sit up straight without making it obvious that she was trying to adjust her posture.

“You demonstrated a skillset we don’t see frequently in people who apply to be Tactical Officers.” Ruel said. “A very unusual way of thinking about the assets given to you during a mission. What were your exact words again? Ah... yes.”

He picked up the paper again and read a highlighted comment:

“‘I do not care about what it was designed to do, I only care about what it can do.’ Those are your words, Esperanta. I find it curious.”

“Well, I can explain that, sir.” Ino said, quickly recovering her composure. “Sometimes our ship commanders can get into, like, a mental trench. They only consider their ship’s abilities based on what’s in the documentation, what they were told in training. Failure of imagination has gotten people killed plenty of times before. Tactical Officers are supposed to be the Commander’s imagination.”

“That sort of thinking has influenced my decision on where to post you.” Admiral Ruel said. “Ensign, I want your line of thinking at GALEX.”

“Uh... GALEX? I don’t know what that is.” Ino said, starting to realize she was not going to get a ship assignment after all.

“GALEX, short for ‘Galactic Exercise,’ is a massive training event carried out by all members of the Coalition.” Admiral Ruel said. “Humanity will be sending a flotilla of warships to train with our extraterrestrial allies as a single united force. I want you there for a very specific part of the event: Operation Devil’s Courthouse.”

The Admiral opened his folder and showed the contents to Ino. He explained:

“Devil’s Courthouse, and by extension the rest of GALEX, is a war game. A simulated battle to test our fleet’s capabilities under highly specific circumstances. This year, Humanity has been selected to play the role of OPFOR, the ‘enemy’ the Coalition will be fighting against.”

The Admiral closed his folder.

“Ensign Esperanta... I want you to serve as Tactical Officer for one of the starships participating in Operation Devil’s Courthouse. The war game will take place in the Tau Ceti star system, just eleven light-years away from Earth. Your journey there will not be a long one.”

Ino watched as the Admiral pushed the folder toward her. He was expecting her to take it as a sign of acceptance, and her visible hesitation caused a look of concern to cross his face.

“You were hoping for a more illustrious posting?” He said.

“A more distant one.” Ino replied, her eyes narrowed.

“Sorry? Didn’t catch that.” The Admiral said.

“Someplace farther away.” Ino said. “I... uh... I have family problems here on Earth. I was hoping to get posted somewhere really far away from home.”

The Admiral sighed, then a look of surprised delight came over his face.

“You know... I might have an idea.”

“Sir?”

“However, this will require you to make a deal with me.” Admiral Ruel said. “Here is my offer: If you perform well in the GALEX, well enough to... um... let’s say you perform well enough to earn a medal. I’ll get you a Tactical Officer slot on the new Azrael-class battleship Marathon. She’s a magnificent vessel. Should be entering service in the next few months, and more importantly, her first patrol will be at the Fellowship-Augment border, on the other side of the Tiyana Vek Wormhole. Thousands of lightyears from here.”

Ino wracked her brains. The Augmented Cevanti Administration was a spacefaring civilization located in the next Galactic Arm, due south of Human territory on maps of the Galaxy. It was accessible via wormhole and was well-known for two reasons: First, slaves escaping from the Desstican Astral Fellowship would frequently travel through Augment space to reach the relative safety of Human territory. Second, the Augmented Cevanti people were showing a strong interest in forging an alliance with Humanity… and the Cevanti ruler had publicly expressed a desire to join the Coalition.

The Admiral smiled at Ino, who looked back with an expression that betrayed her hopeful feelings.

“You’d really do that for me?” She said.

The Admiral waved his hand as though this was no major concern.

“Have you forgotten the Coalition is a meritocracy?” He said. “Demonstration of skill, aptitude, and competence is to be commended and rewarded. Impress me at GALEX, and I’ll have your name at the top of the list for Marathon’s next crew rotation.”

He put his hand over his heart. Ino reached forward and took the folder.

A military training exercise. Ino had not heard of GALEX before, but she had done plenty of exercises during her own training. These simulated battles were the best way to experiment with new tactics and strategies. Ino realized the Admiral was right. GALEX could be an opportunity for her to shine.

“I’ll do it.” Ino said. “I won’t let you down, sir!”


 
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A macavity short story? Now this is a blessing from the Worm. I'm still working upt the courage to step through the broken gates, so this will be a more than welcome warm up.

Ensign Esperanta
For someone with a surname that sounds so close to hope, I sure foresee a lot of pain and misery (and heroism surely) in the near future.

‘I do not care about what it was designed to do, I only care about what it can do.
This is the kind of thinking that either gets you a rapid promotion or a posting on some backward station scrubbing space toilets.

GALEX, is a war game

Since the story is called the GALEX incident I think it might become more war less game.


On a side note, I quite like the artwork in the top image, gives some retrofuturistic vibes.
 
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A macavity short story? Now this is a blessing from the Worm. I'm still working [up] the courage to step through the broken gates, so this will be a more than welcome warm up.
Hello again! I just noticed you staged your own epic return to the Stellaris AAR forums. It's good to see you again.


For someone with a surname that sounds so close to hope, I sure foresee a lot of pain and misery (and heroism surely) in the near future.
Cool trivia, Ino was brought up in an Esperanto-speaking household. Her name literally means "she who hopes."


Since the story is called the GALEX incident I think it might become more war less game.
The inspiration for this short story comes from an unusual source. This summer was the first time in 8 years I was unable to participate in Operation Northern Strike, the largest National Guard war game in the United States. I rather enjoyed the simulated war against pro-Russian rebels in Northern Michigan, so I spent a lot of the summer reading about other war games from the past 20 years or so.

I stumbled upon a particularly incredible story about a war game involving the US Navy and some of our allies, during which a Swedish costal defense submarine penetrated our defenses and "sank" one of America's most valuable aircraft carriers. I found the story so fascinating that I just had to convert it into a Stellaris story. :)

War Games: A Swedish Stealth Submarine Sank A U.S. Aircraft Carrier - Article on the National Interest by Sebastien Roblin


On a side note, I quite like the artwork in the top image, gives some retrofuturistic vibes.
Thanks! I've been cautiously experimenting with AI-generated imagery/music for The GALEX Incident and Unsung Paragons. If you listen to the YouTube companion video (the audiobook version of this story) you'll notice that all of the background images are AI-generated, along with the outro song. I used the Mass Effect soundtrack for background music during the chapter itself.
 
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Part Two


The GALEX Incident
Part 2




Ino travelled to the Tau Ceti star system aboard a Coalition cruiser. Just under twelve light-years from Earth, it was deep in Human territory. Tau Ceti contained a debris disk, filled with far more space dust than could be found around Sol. As she stood on one of the observation decks, Ino peered out to see the Coalition starfleet that was going to participate in the upcoming war games.

She could see most if not all of the warships that were going to participate in GALEX, docked at the main starbase. Human, Kodranite, Cyanidite, Bhiir, Hulfir, Malwegoll, Tycan, and Wulhubb vessels were lined up in neat rows and covered in scaffolding. Spacewalkers worked feverishly to modify the weapon systems on each Coalition warship, and Ino knew why.

Over the course of the journey, she had been given a stack of documents to read, courtesy of Coalition Military Intelligence, the organization she now worked for. During the four day flight, Ino had brought herself up to speed on GALEX and her role in the large-scale war game.

Galactic Exercise number 15 (GALEX 15 for short) was going to be a two-week long simulated battle between the Coalition and a fictitious enemy simply known as “The Red Fleet.” According to the war game documentation, the “Red Fleet” was supposed to represent the Desstican Astral Fellowship, an authoritarian theocracy that was just starting to emerge as a possible future threat. The Fellowship controlled nearly two-hundred star systems and frequently carried out mass abductions of sentient lifeforms to either enslave or use in religious sacrifices. Only a few Humans had been taken so far, but Earth was already starting to become concerned. Ino paid attention to interstellar news, so she was also aware of the recent controversy enveloping the Fellowship: Nearly two hundred thousand slaves had escaped from Fellowship territory on a convoy of stolen starships. The most widely accepted theory was that the escapees had outside help.

Ino flipped through the pages, studying the upcoming battle simulation.

The GALEX war game was supposed to be an opportunity for Coalition leaders to investigate and explore new strategies that were currently “untested.” Most of these ideas were developed during the Border War, where Coalition forces were pitted against the neighboring Empire of Axpentl. It was also a chance for crews and officers alike to test their skills, equipment, and tactics in a simulated conflict that would attempt to match real battle conditions as closely as possible.

Admiral Garnett, a career officer who had been doing this job for over twenty-five years, would command the Coalition fleet during the war game. The UN Military, which normally defended Earth, was going to role-play as the Red Fleet, under the command of retired General Irmal, a citizen of Türkiye and former commander of the UN Army. General Irmal was forced into retirement when his controversial reputation caught up with him, and he was best known for the successful pacification of a planetary revolt ten years ago.

Ino was roused from her studies by the chime of the comm system.

“Incoming message for Ensign Esperanta.” Said a computerized voice.

“Play it on channel one.” Ino replied, setting her paperwork down on the coffee table.

A two-dimensional hologram appeared in the open space between the coffee table and the wide window, obscuring Ino’s view of the starfield beyond. The hologram depicted a Coalition military officer. This bipedal lifeform was not Human, but a Kodranite.

The Kodranites are a race of Lithoid people native to the planet Cemon. Alongside Humanity, they were one of the founding members of the Coalition. Ino, like most Humans, perceived the Kodranites as “men made of stone and mud.”

The holographic Kodranite officer, dressed in a Coalition uniform, stood at the position of parade rest and began to speak.

“Ensign Esperanta. I am Commander Fanin of the Kodranite Navy. I will be the Simulation Controller responsible for your ship for the duration of this exercise. I'll meet you aboard the OPFOR Frigate Defiance no later than zero-six-hundred tomorrow morning. I’ll give you your mission assignment then. That is all.”

The hologram faded. Ino picked up her papers.

“Yes, sir.” She muttered.

...

Ino took some time in her quarters to make a few final preparations. She applied a small amount of makeup and tidied her hair before double-checking every part of her uniform. Ino had grown up believing she was too ugly to attract a boyfriend, primarily because her parents had said exactly that for the first eighteen years of her life. Only a few short years ago, in college, did Ino discover she was considered “very attractive” by most people she spoke to, and she was still enjoying the ego boost this revelation came with. Once she was satisfied with her reflection in the mirror, Ino packed her bags. It would be a short journey through the Tau Ceti Starbase to her first ship assignment.

...

The UNS Defiance was not the glorious first assignment Ino was expecting. The ship was old... very old. Defiance was a Heroine-class Multirole Stealth Frigate, the very last of her class to be accepted into the Coalition Navy. According to one of the reports Ino read, all Heroine-class frigates would soon be retired from service, doomed to the scrapyard and shipbreakers. This war game might be the final moment of glory for the aging Defiance.

Ino took stock of the vessel as she walked its corridors. The frigate was armed with six torpedo launchers, four hull defense guns, and a pair of point-defense lasers. She also spotted a symmetrical deformation in the ceiling of Deck Three, indicating the presence of a retractable cloaking sail.

So, this is a stealth frigate. Made for hit-and-run attacks. Ino mused to herself. Okay. I can get creative with this.

On Deck One, Ino found the bridge. The Commanding officer was there, talking to a person Ino recognized at once.

“Admiral Ruel!” She said, snapping to attention.

The Admiral she had met in Guyana looked as though he was still getting his space-legs. He swayed unsteadily as he turned to face Ino.

“It’s good to see you again, Ensign Esperanta.” Admiral Ruel said. “I’ve been tapped to be the Master Simulation Controller for a few days of the upcoming war game. Commander Thulani, I’ve told you about this junior officer. I assure you; she will perform admirably as your TO.”

“Pleasure to meet you.” The Commanding officer spoke in a deep grumble. He sounded very patient, but Ino could detect a slight trace of annoyance in his voice. “I am Thulani, UN Armed Forces, nominally assigned to the Umbutfo Eswatini Defense Force.”

“Ensign Esperanta, UNAF, originally Armed Forces of the Argentine Republic.” Ino replied, shaking his hand. “I thought the southern African countries were only participating in the Coalition through the SANDF.”

She was referring to the military of the Republic of South Africa. Commander Thulani allowed himself a small smile.

“The past ten years have seen the integration of UN forces into the Coalition progress at phenomenal pace.” He explained. “The individual states of southern Africa are now able to participate directly in both the UN Military and the Coalition. I am very proud I can serve under my own nation’s flag for a change.”

He proudly thumped the red, yellow, and blue Swazi flag on his shoulder. Admiral Ruel (who wore a Brazilian flag) clapped his hands approvingly.

“Representatives of former Global South reunite for training. I’ll get that into the next UNAF newsletter. In the meantime, introductions and explanations. Commander Fanin, you’re up.”

The Kodranite officer from Ino’s hologram message approached from the other side of the bridge. After introducing himself, he began to explain:

“The Frigate Defiance will be a key player in Operation Devil’s Courthouse. Our objective will be to test the ability of Coalition Super-Capital ships, such as Battleships and Carriers, to defend themselves against smaller vessels equipped with stealth technologies. Your mission will be to carry out a simulated attack run against the Coalition Battleship Betria. Once complete, you will retreat to a position of safety. Admiral Ruel will observe the action from his ship, the Science Vessel Oppenheimer. I will stay aboard here to act as an observer, and I will have a counterpart stationed aboard Betria.

“And we’ll experience real battle conditions?” Commander Thulani asked.

“Yes sir.” Admiral Ruel answered. “All weapons will be disconnected and replaced with laser-based sim weapons. The ship’s computer will register any hits, and corresponding systems will be de-activated to simulate damage. I have also written a guide on how you should conduct damage control training, should your vessel take any simulated hits.”

“Very good.” Commander Thulani replied. “Ensign Esperanta, go downstairs and get settled into the CIC. I’ll be relying on you down there.”

“I’ll do my best, sir!” Ino replied, injecting confidence into her voice.

Ino did as she was told. The Combat Information Center, or CIC, was located one deck below the bridge and was a very cramped space with room for only four Humans. The CIC contained numerous computer banks and displays that allowed Ino to have a continuous feed of crucial data. She could see the latest readings from external sensors, decrypt and read radio traffic, view reports on the ship’s internal functions, and see the video feed from security cameras placed all over the vessel’s interior. The clatter of footsteps told Ino that Commander Thulani and Admiral Ruel had followed her.

“As Tactical Officer, it is your duty to closely examine all incoming sensor data and radio traffic.” Commander Thulani said. “You will then triage all of this data and send it to the bridge in order of importance. You will recommend alternative courses of action when I ask for them, and when necessary or appropriate, you will generate mission objectives.”

Ino turned to face the Commander.

“Sir, am I free to set my own criteria for the importance of combat data?”

“Yes.” Thulani replied, ignoring Admiral Ruel’s sudden expression of surprise.

“Another question.” Ino pressed. “Who are my teammates? Normally, the CIC is operated by a team of Tactical Officers.”

Admiral Ruel raised his hand.

“I can answer that in my capacity as the Master Simulation Controller.” Ruel said. “I created the scenario and will be acting as the ‘combat judge’ so to speak. When I set up the war game scenario, I decided to handicap this ship. Normally, the Defiance runs with a team of four Tactical Officers.”

Admiral Ruel pulled a slip of paper from his pocket, unfolded it, and read a note from the middle of the page.

“Ah, here it is. The Defiance has suffered personnel losses due to a previous missile attack. Two of your Tactical Officers are incapacitated and will not be available for the duration of Operation Devil’s Courthouse.”

“Two Tactical Officers.” Commander Thulani said. “Are you saying my ship is expected to operate with the CIC at 50% efficiency?”

“That is correct.” Admiral Ruel said. “In this battle scenario, the OPFOR fleet is scripted to be unprepared and in disrepair. Now, Commander Thulani. I’m told your ship’s weapon systems will be fully converted to laser simulators in an hours' time. After that, your other Tactical Officer is supposed to arrive. When that happens, you will be given all of the relevant intel you need for the simulated attack run against the Betria.”

Admiral Ruel took a moment to stare intensely at Ino. She felt awkward and had to force herself to keep looking at the Admiral, fighting the impulse to lower her head until he left. As soon as the Admiral departed, Commander Thulani said:

“This is your first war game, correct? Do not allow the Admiral to alarm you. These sims are always asymmetric. This time, the Red Fleet will be disadvantaged, but sometimes the Blue Fleet is handicapped instead. On rare occasions, both fleets are intentionally handicapped. It is all about learning, training, and developing new tactics and strategies. For now, get yourself acquainted with the CIC. This will be your home for the next few days. Now please have a little patience. I’m going to see if I can get your teammate here any faster.”


 
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Only a few Humans had been taken so far, but Earth was already starting to become concerned

Remarkable restraint shown by the UNE. In our primitive world, most cases of abductions of superpower citizens by upstart nations are cause for a good dose of scouring and punishing.

primarily because her parents had said exactly that for the first eighteen years of her life.

Such lovely people. I'm sure this will not be the last time the aftershocks of their wonderful education are felt by Ino.
 
I'll be following with interest!
 
Remarkable restraint shown by the UNE. In our primitive world, most cases of abductions of superpower citizens by upstart nations are cause for a good dose of scouring and punishing.
Oh, definitely. If the Desstican Astral Fellowship were an upstart, some interstellar ass-whoopin' would certainly be in order.

Unfortunately... ;) ... during the events of my next Stellaris story Unsung Paragons, the Desstican Astral Fellowship will be sharing a couple of historical parallels with a certain real-world nightmare from the Second World War. You know how I love modeling my fictional wars and conflicts after real history?

Well, the Fellowship is going to have a few things in common with the Japanese Empire during its hemisphere-spanning offensive between December 1941 and May 1942. So their portion of the Galactic map will look like this:

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Such lovely people. I'm sure this will not be the last time the aftershocks of their wonderful education are felt by Ino.
Yeah, Ino's parents are a real piece of work. We'll get to see more of them once Unsung Paragons kicks off. Over the past couple of years, I have gotten better at writing romantic interactions between characters, so I'm planning to give Ino an interesting love life in the new story. I've already committed to having her get caught in a love triangle with two guys interested in her; something I haven't tried since The Stormbreakers. (Yutaka Yamamoto => Jericho <=Duane Gardner)


I'll be following with interest!
Welcome aboard!
 
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The GALEX Incident
Part 3



Sitting between two radar terminals, Ino and her new teammate discussed the upcoming mission. Ino kept her face buried in her notes, trying to hide how uncomfortable she felt.

Ino’s teammate was a Junior Tactical Officer, just two years older than herself. He was a colony-born Human who had never set foot on Earth, and he preferred to be called Prisban. Ino did not press for finer details about Prisban, not because he was unwilling to share, but because he had questions for her and was quicker on the draw.

Ino could speak three languages: Spanish, Esperanto, and English, with Spanish being her native tongue. Meanwhile, Prisban could speak Portuguese, French, Italian, English and Esperanto. Ino wanted to continue the conversation in English, but Prisban was excited to meet another Esperanto-speaker and wanted to test his own command of the language.

“I have never heard an accent like yours before.” Prisban said in Esperanto. “What part of Earth are you from?”

Ino rolled her eyes and resigned herself to discussing personal details in her least favorite language.

“I have a Patagonian accent.” She explained in Esperanto. “I’m from Tierra del Fuego, at the bottom of the world. Very cold year-round, lots of mountains, hardly any sunlight. How did you learn Esperanto?”

“All the kids on Terra Nova learn Esperanto in the first grade.”
Prisban replied. “That language is used to teach children the basic skills needed to learn other languages.”

“So Esperanto is a gateway drug to other languages!?”
Ino tried and failed to suppress a laugh. “I’d love to see what my parents would think of that. They’re Esperantists.”

“I guessed that.”
Prisban said, pointing at the name tag on Ino’s uniform. “There aren’t a lot of people out there named ‘one who hopes.’ Not that it’s bad thing, of course. So... are your parents those politicians who showed up at the Coalition Congress talking about creating a common interstellar language?”

“Yes, that’s them.”
Ino grumbled. “The less I talk about them, the happier I am.”

Prisban got the hint. He unzipped his messenger bag and withdrew a tablet computer and a manila folder stuffed with documents. Both the folder and tablet had a large red sticker stamped across their front sides. The word “SECRET” was spelled out in large white letters against the red background.

“How about we talk about the war game instead?” He offered. “I’ve done five war games before this one, so I have plenty of knowledge I’d be happy to share with you.”

Ino and Prisban engrossed themselves in the official documents, excited to learn just what scenario Admiral Ruel had cooked up for the war game.

...

Part One: The Situation

RED FLEET has used orbital bombardment to force the surrender of GREEN HOMEWORLD. The civilian populace of Green Homeworld has risen up against occupation and is now waging an armed insurgency against Red Fleet, who has taken significant losses of personnel and damage to starships. The Coalition has dispatched TASK FORCE HURRICANE to liberate Green Homeworld via planetary invasion.

Part Two: Your Mission

Intercept TASK FORCE HURRICANE and inflict damage that would cause the planetary invasion to be aborted. Your primary target is the Coalition battleship Betria. (CSN-102)

Part Three: Execution

All ships participating in the war game will use laser-based SIMULATED WEAPONS. The Master Simulation Controller will monitor all action from the Science Vessel Oppenheimer and will make the final judgement on the results of simulated combat action. Simulation Controllers will be stationed aboard all participating vessels. All commanders will take orders from Simulation Controllers.

Any ship declared “destroyed” by the Oppenheimer will break formation and await new orders from the Simulation Controller.

Any ship declared “damaged” by the Oppenheimer will download a damage program from the science ship, then commence damage control training and simultaneously continue with the original mission.

Part Four: Sustainment

The replenishment vessel Lee R. Tregrutha will provide refuel and resupply to all Coalition ships in the AO.

The replenishment vessel Escanaba will provide refuel and resupply to all Red Fleet ships.

Green Homeworld is located in a dense nebula, where cloaking devices and ship-based stealth technology are more effective. To simulate this, Simulation Controller has handicapped certain ship-based sensor systems for all ships participating in the exercise.

Furthermore, Red Fleet has taken significant personnel losses from conducting a recent planetary invasion. To simulate this, Simulation Controller has handicapped the total available manpower of Red Fleet.

Part Five: Signal

The Coalition Commander’s callsign is “Aslan.”

The Red Fleet Commander’s callsign is “Tash.”

The Simulation Controller’s callsign is “Ramandu.”

Fleet commanders are authorized to create and issue callsigns to vessels under their authority.


...

Ino and Prisban set the operational order aside and picked up the tablet computer. It contained data about the two opposing fleets.

“Our side has forty-seven ships.” Ino said in English. “The Coalition has just fifteen.”

“But all of our ships are Frigates and Corvettes.” Prisban pointed out. “The Coalition fleet is nothing but Cruisers and Battleships.”

Ino studied the technical readouts of the Coalition vessels, and then used the tablet computer to compare them to the Defiance.

“Mosquitoes. We’re a swarm of mosquitoes.” Ino muttered to herself. Ino pointed to a line of explanatory dialogue in one of the documents and began to read aloud:

“The purpose of this exercise is to investigate the tactics and strategies currently used to defend Coalition Super-Capital ships against attacks by smaller and more numerous hostiles, (colloquially known as ‘wolfpacks’) as well as investigating the latest developments in anti-swarm tactics.”

“Interesting.” Prisban said. “I did an exercise like this about two years ago, and the Coalition annihilated Red Fleet without much trouble. I wonder why the top brass decided to re-use the scenario.”

There was a loud lurch, followed by Commander Thulani’s voice over the intercom:

“Attention crew, launch procedures are underway. Standby to run post-launch checklists before we join formation with the rest of Red Fleet.”

Ino took in a deep breath.

“Here we go.” She said.

Ino stood up, wobbling a little under the pull of artificial gravity. She moved around the CIC, flipping power switches as she went. Radar scopes, sensor managers, comms relays, and a wide array of other sensor and data computers came to life.

“Let’s get to work.” Ino declared. “That Coalition fleet isn’t going to defeat itself.”

Prisban let out a chuckle.

“This war game is scripted, Esperanta. Last time they ran this scenario, the Coalition defeated Red Fleet with zero casualties in return. They’re gonna bust us up.”

“Maybe.” Ino replied with a shrug. “But I’m still gonna play to win. What about you?”



The next few hours were filled with frantic preparation as the Defiance got underway. Ino and Prisban consulted with Commander Fanin about the simulated nebula that would be part of the war game. After talking it over for an hour with Commander Fanin, Ino contacted the leading member of the sensors team and told him to disable specific sensor systems prescribed by the Simulation Controller. The Defiance was flying partially blind.

Meanwhile, Ino had opened up the ship’s Codex. Every Coalition warship had one, a digital repository of all knowledge about the universe. Ino pulled up the design schematics of both the Defiance and its target, the battleship Betria.



After a few hours of spaceflight, Prisban noticed a malfunction in one of the emergency power supply systems that served the CIC. He decided to open up a panel in the ceiling and crawl into the cable array above to try and fix the issue himself. As Prisban clambered into the ceiling, teetering on a stepladder, his wallet fell out of his pocket and hit the floor with a dull thud.

“Hey, Esperanta? I think I dropped something.” Prisban called out.

“It’s your wallet.” Ino said, looking up from her studies. “I’ll put it on your desk.”

Stepping away from her computer terminal, Ino bent down to grab Prisban’s wallet, which had fallen open. Inside she found the usual things, his military ID card, his Terra Nova colonial ID, a picture of his parents and someone who looked like Prisban’s brother… and…

Ino froze. She had spotted a third ID card in the back of Prisban’s wallet.

“No way.” Ino whispered to herself.

“What’s wrong?” Prisban called down from the ceiling. He could not see Ino from his position, but he could hear her voice.

“Nothing.” Ino said, then looked down at the interesting ID.

Prisban’s third ID card was one Ino had seen before… about two and a half years ago. Before joining the UN Military and signing up for service with the Coalition, Ino had been a student at the University of Buenos Aires in Argentina. While there, she had gotten involved in a student organization… a political group to be specific.

During one of those political meetings, Ino had met a representative of a secret society. She thought the two of them had a good conversation and Ino spent the next year trying to join that secret society, only to be ignored outright. Eventually, Ino had given up. Now, she was staring at that insignia once again: a four-pointed compass surrounded by olive branches.

Prisban was a member of the Order of the Pathfinders, a Galaxy-spanning society publicly operated as a humanitarian organization, dispatching volunteers across the Galaxy to build schools and hospitals and shelters. They claimed their organization was modeled after the Peace Corps from Pre-FTL Earth… but in dark corners, there were whispers and rumors that the Pathfinders were secretly aiding and abetting those who would dismantle the institution of slavery through violence.

Ino deposited Prisban’s wallet on his desk and then reached up to untie her hair, letting it fall loosely around her shoulders. She also opened up her personal bag, looking around for the mini makeup kit.

Ino wanted to be friends with Prisban now.

“Hey, did I ever mention what I did in college?” Ino called up to the ceiling hatch.

“Honestly, I thought you just joined your parent’s Esperantist party.” Prisban called back. “Did you?”

“Oh, God no.” Ino replied. “I wanted to get away from my parents, not join their party.”

“Didn’t go into politics at all then?” Prisban asked.

“I did.” Ino replied, adding a subtle hint of blush to her cheeks. “I just joined a different political party. I joined Solidarity.”

There was a loud bang. Prisban had hit his head after jumping in surprise.

“Solidarity?” He repeated. “As in the Synthetic Solidarity Party?”

“Yup.” Ino said, feeling glad to know she had his attention.

“You know, you do strike me as the type of person who would support the rights and freedoms of Sentient AI and Synthetic lifeforms.” Prisban said, sticking his head out of the hole in the ceiling. “Good to know I’m among friends here. Most military folks I’ve met hate the idea of giving Synths the right to vote.”

“Not me.” Ino replied, giving Prisban the cutest smile she could manage. “I got to meet a Synth after I started college. Only had to talk to him for an hour before I was on-side.”

“You didn’t get to meet a Synth until you were an adult? You poor, sheltered child.” Prisban said in a softer tone. “Still, it’s good to know you’re on the right side of history with us.”

Prisban withdrew into the ceiling again, leaving Ino to wonder if she could convince Prisban to let her have another shot at joining the Pathfinders. Her thoughts were interrupted by a loud chime from the astronavigation computer Ino was using earlier.

A message had appeared overtop of the project Ino was working on:

Calculations complete – No faults detected

 
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Yes, that’s them

Not only are they pretty unsavoury folk, they're powerful unsavoury folk.

Pathfinders were secretly aiding and abetting those who would dismantle the institution of slavery through violence.

Go pathfinders I say. Are the pathfinders a galaxy wide organisation or are they limited to coalition space? And for they have an armed wing?

Synthetic Solidarity Party

Do synthetics have no rights in the UNE? That might make opposition to organic slavery more of a complicated issue.

Still, it’s good to know you’re on the right side of history with us.

With one simple sentence he's given three things away. He's part of a larger organisation, he's a true believer and he's pretty trusting.
 
Sounds a lot like Ino wants a lot of casaba howlitzers...

It's a logical test; defintely not good if your trillion dollar asset gets wiped out by corvettes and frigates costing only a few billion dollars each.
 
Are the pathfinders a galaxy wide organization or are they limited to coalition space? And for they have an armed wing?
The Pathfinders got started in Coalition space but have since gone Galaxy-wide and are operating outside of Coalition authority. (however, some people out there are simultaneously members of the Coalition Congress and Pathfinders)

Whether the Pathfinders have a paramilitary wing remains to be seen, but if it does exist, they would be the number one suspect in the recent mass escape of slaves from the Desstican Astral Fellowship.


Do synthetics have no rights in the UNE? That might make opposition to organic slavery more of a complicated issue.
Synthetics have no rights in the UNE whatsoever at this point in the story. AI rights are set to "servitude."

I wanted the UN government to be paralyzed by some internal debate during the events of the Forgotten War, (the main story this short is building to) and I eventually settled on Synth rights/AI revolt because Stellaris provides a lot of good story ideas to use that I have not explored in previous stories yet.

Remember when I said I was exploring a possible love triangle for protagonist Ino? Well, I am seriously thinking about having her hook up with a Synth at one point in the main story. That's why I mentioned her involvement with the AI Rights faction in this chapter, so the reader understands that Ino is comfortable interacting with Synths and she might be open to the idea of getting in bed with one. ;)


Sounds a lot like Ino wants a lot of casaba howlitzers...
I've heard of those. Wouldn't those nukes fall under the "kill the crew, spare the vehicle" doctrine?


It's a logical test; definitely not good if your trillion dollar asset gets wiped out by corvettes and frigates costing only a few billion dollars each.
Exactly. Ino's statement about "failure of imagination killing people" is based in the very real history of unconventional tactics and strategies in warfare.


During World War 2, a squadron of female Russian pilots used airplanes made of wood and canvas to hide from German radar.

During the French Revolution, a cavalry unit rode across a frozen body of water to capture enemy naval ships.

In 1942, an allied warship escaped from the Imperial Japanese Navy by disguising itself as an island.

In 1914, the Austro-Hungarian army refused to believe hand grenades would have any value on the battlefield.


I could go on. I love this kind of history, and you can see why I keep looking to it for inspiration while writing military scenes. :)
 
Quick Update: Meet the cast of Unsung Paragons!

So, as I mentioned at the top of this thread, The GALEX Incident serves both as an extended prologue and a "test drive" for new characters and a new setting that will appear in a much bigger "full sized" Macavity story coming to the forums later this year. This weekend, I'll be rolling out (somewhat late, I confess) the next part of my little experiment:

When it hits the forums, Unsung Paragons will be my first Stellaris story to make use of AI-generated images as "illustrations" to add some visual flair to the new story. I've been experimenting around and eventually settled on using Leonardo AI to create images for the project.

Scroll down this post and click on the Spoiler buttons to see my first batch of forum-worthy pictures of GALEX Incident/Unsung Paragons characters. (along with some TV Tropes-inspired hints about what role they'll play in the story.)

After that, check back in a day or two. The next chapter of The GALEX Incident will be posted this weekend and you might find the post has been enhanced with an "illustration" or two. ;)

Thanks for reading! It's good to be back on the Stellaris AAR forums!





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Ino Esperanta
Story role:
The Hero

Tropes: The Leader, Dark and Troubled Past, Ensign Newbie, Cunning Linguist, Rank Scales with Asskicking, The Chains of Commanding, Love Interest (with Rylan) Damsel out of Distress, Captain Smooth and Sergeant Rough (With Sota)

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Sota Beninato
Story Role:
Deuteragonist

Tropes: The Lancer, The Engineer, Gadgeteer Genius, Dark and Troubled Past, Reformed Criminal, Captain Smooth and Sergeant Rough (With Ino)

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Princess Elodie of Liechtenstein
Story Role:
Tritagonist

Tropes: Plucky Girl, Pint-Sized Powerhouse, Tomboy Princess, The Berserker, Leeroy Jenkins, Military Maverick, Best Her to Bed Her

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Rylan Quin
Story Role:
Supporting Protagonist

Tropes: Love Interest (with Ino), The Big Guy, Hero of Another Story, Gentle Giant, Beware the Nice Ones, Cyborg, Artificial Limbs are Stronger, Swiss-Army Appendage, Brian/Computer Interface, Anatomy Arsenal, Electronic Eyes,

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Delegate
Story Role:
Minor Protagonist

Tropes: Ridiculously Human Robot, Robots Think Faster, Fantastic Racism, Hypercompetent Sidekick, Innocently Insensitive, Morality Chip

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Astrocreator Azaryn
Story Role:
Living MacGuffin

Tropes: Nature Hero, Motherly Scientist, No Plans No Prototype No Backup, Innocent Aliens, Creating Life

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Araj Zilfallon
Story Role:
Main Antagonist

Tropes: Evil Prince, Entitled to Have You (Towards Ino), Control Freak, It's All About Me, Psychic Powers, Astral Projection, Power Perversion Potential, Living Lie Detector, Mind Rape, The Stateless, You Can't Go Home Again, Unspecified Apocalypse
 
Well, as far as casaba howlitzers go, think of a nuclear explosion, take 90-95% of it and throw that away, and put the remaining 5-10% into a searing particle beam. Based on the defences described here, well...

If you think back to their usage in Life2.0, remember that Naomi and friends were looking for a weapon they could build that could destroy ships protected by neutronium armour and hyper shields, and the Holocron's battle was up against a Fallen Empire Titan. That's the kind of target these things can take on as equals, and it's weaponry we could make today, and quite possibly already have and it's stored in some bunker somewhere just in case.

It's fair to say that they are a game-changing weapon just as massively as nuclear weapons were to begin with. Conventional space nuclear weapons deal damage by the flash of the detonation against the hull, with a fraction of a percent of the energy actually dealing damage - energy absorbed is inversely proportional to the cube of the distance between centre of blast and the target. Inevitably, it's a noticeable difference, and it is represented in Stellaris by the relatively low damage that missiles do.

These would be equivalent to XL or T slot weapons, and could be deployed by ships as small as corvettes. And, they can be modelled as laser weapons quite effectively.



I'm liking the pictures - it's blended the Stellaris original with the cartoon style really effectively for Araj and Azaryn.
 
If you think back to their usage in Life2.0, remember that Naomi and friends were looking for a weapon they could build that could destroy ships protected by neutronium armour and hyper shields, and the Holocron's battle was up against a Fallen Empire Titan. That's the kind of target these things can take on as equals, and it's weaponry we could make today, and quite possibly already have and it's stored in some bunker somewhere just in case.
Cabasa Howitzers make me think of David Vs Goliath stories now. Definitely something to level the playing field with.

I'm liking the pictures - it's blended the Stellaris original with the cartoon style really effectively for Araj and Azaryn.
Thanks! Putting just these seven pictures together proved more troublesome than expected. Hundreds of rejected Azaryn portraits were sent to the digital Shadow Realm before I found one I liked. The AI kept trying to give her more humanlike features. Delegate gave me a lot of trouble too owing to the fact that Leonardo kept spitting out pictures of One-Punch Man instead of a Star Trek-inspired android. Leonardo also struggled with Elodie. I wanted a picture of Elodie sparring/fist-fighting, but the AI just could not put her into a fighting stance without amputating or mutilating her hands.

Prince Araj reads like the type of guy to record and listen to his own voice as ASMR before bed.
Definitely. Araj is heavily inspired by the antagonist of one of my favorite children's books: The Horse and His Boy by CS Lewis:

Prince Rabadash, a Calormen noble, was so determined to take Queen Susan as either a wife or slave (or both) that he raised an army and tried to start a war over her.

Prince Araj might not say things like "I am blinded by youthful lust for this savage barbarian" but he is in a very similar headspace all the same. Once Araj discovers Ino, he will stop at nothing to make her his newest plaything... after all, Araj gets what he wants all the time. Being denied is not something he's used to.
 
Definitely. Araj is heavily inspired by the antagonist of one of my favorite children's books: The Horse and His Boy by CS Lewis:

Prince Rabadash, a Calormen noble, was so determined to take Queen Susan as either a wife or slave (or both) that he raised an army and tried to start a war over her.

Prince Araj might not say things like "I am blinded by youthful lust for this savage barbarian" but he is in a very similar headspace all the same. Once Araj discovers Ino, he will stop at nothing to make her his newest plaything... after all, Araj gets what he wants all the time. Being denied is not something he's used to.
protect ino at all costs