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“Yet, as William of Normandy was being crowned as King of England, another monumental event in European history was occuring. The beginning of the ascendancy of the Atholl family, it is believed by most historians, can be traced back to Boxing Day 1066, with the Council of the Atholls held in Galloway in Scotland. The Council was of course the meeting of several noblemen of the Atholl family, prominently among them Maldred, Duke of Galloway, and Gospatrick, Count of Berwick.

“To this day, we do not know the exact details of several agreements came to; sections were never recorded, possibly out of a fear of retribution from their liege and cousin, King Malcolm III, a man of great paranoia. The main result of the Council was a document, signed on behalf of all Atholl nobility by Gospatrick and Maldred, agreeing to protect and promote the Atholl dynasty for every generation to come; this document, known as the Galloway Charter, became part of the family lore, signed by every known descendant of Gospatrick for hundreds of years as part of their coming of age. Also agreed upon was the granting of the lands of Cumberland to Gospatrick of Dunbar, a Saxon noble who had fled upon the victory of William at Battle.

“Outside of this treatise, it is generally accepted by historians that at the council Duke Maldred agreed never to marry or give birth to any child who could constitute a possible inheritor to his title; succession laws ensured that this would mean the county of Berwick and the counties of Galloway and Carrick would be consolidated under a single ruler hence after his death, assisting the quest for sufficient power to protect the Atholl dynasty against the Dunkelds.

“With this simple convening of a mere handful of minor nobles, although they knew it not at the time, the history of Europe was to be changed.”

--"The British Isles After Godwinson", Professor Cedric Rowson, 1978

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Well, then, let's begin. This is my first AAR quite obviously (if the post count didn't tip you off, there truly is no hope for you :p), although I've been lurking reading AARs for a while. I'm mostly writing this one because honestly I just need something to do :)P), and if it turns out someone reads it, well, all the better.

I'll try and update this regularly, and eventually play this all the way through to 1453 - maybe even into a megacampaign. But let's not contemplate now, because knowing the typical beginner AAR writer's reliability this won't get past four or so posts.

Well, now the formalities are dealt with, let's get on with this probably-not-very-good-all-things-considered.

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“The history of the Atholl dynasty can be traced back to Donald of Atholl, the lay abbot of Atholl in the late tenth century. At his death in 998, his position was inhereited by his only son, Crinan. A favourite of the house of Alpin, Crinan was given the hand of Bethoc, the eldest daughter of Malcolm of Alpin, who would go on to become King Malcolm II, who after his ascension to the throne rewarded Crinan with the Duchy of Albany and County of Atholl.

“Crinan and Bethoc would have two sons. The elder son was Duncan, who took the family name of MacDuff, while the younger was Maldred of Atholl. Duncan would achieve the greater status of the two; due to King Malcolm II's lack of a son, his titles hence passed down to his eldest daughter's son - that was to be Duncan, son of Bethoc. Hence, upon Malcolm's death in 1034, Duncan was crowned as King Duncan I.

“His reign was to be short-lived. His unsuccessful campaign into Durham in 1039 was followed by another into Moray in 1040, where he was murdered by his own men, led by Macbeth, one of his own Dukes. Following Macbeth's ascendancy to the throne, many relatives of the late King were forced into exile, and most of those who remained were forced to flee or killed by the 1045 uprising against Macbeth's rule, among them Crinan himself.

“Macbeth would go on to rule for many years, until he was finally killed by 1057, by Malcolm Dunkeld, son of Donald I. The stepson of Macbeth, by name of Lulach, was crowned King, but was too killed by Malcolm the following years, who hence inherited the throne of King of the Scots.

“Upon Malcolm's ascendancy to the throne, it was not his uncle Maldred who would be returned to the title held by his grandfather, but instead his bastard brother, Maelmuir. The Atholl dynasty were by way of compensation given the lowlands of the counties of Carrick, Galloway, Berwick and Cumberland, and to Maldred the title of Duke of Galloway was given.

"Maldred took the hand in marriage Ealdgyth, a Saxon of a noble Northumberland family who would give unto him two children - Maldred the Younger and Gospatrick. Upon Maldred's death in 1060, his title as Duke was awarded to Maldred the Younger, alongside the counties of Galloway, Carrick and Cumberland. To his younger son, Gospatrick, was given the county of Berwick.”

--"The Ascent of the Atholls", Elric O'Brein, 1956

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The Kings of Scotland since 1005, as of Boxing Day 1066.

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The leading members of the Atholls and allies as of Boxing Day 1066.

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The situation in the British Isles on Boxing Day 1066, with Kingdoms and independent/Norwegian Duchies indicated.

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The dynastic makeup of Scotland, Boxing Day 1066
 
The Affairs of the Atholls, 1067-1072
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“It was a policy of the Atholl family to keep a small circle of trusted advisors drawn from the noblemen and noblewomen of their court around them, who were to be given special status and position in order to deal with certain affairs of governance; in this way, the ruler could be free to give his assistance wherever needed and partake in other activity.

“The first known details of this circle are written by a court scribe on the first of April, 1067. From an unknown time – this may have been as early as the initiation of Maldred the Younger's rule in 1060, or as late as shortly after the Council of the Atholls - Angus MacInnes was trusted with the “diplomatic affairs” of the realm, Gilchrist Douglas with “the management of the assets and monies of the realm”, Logan Johnson to “inspire and lead the armies against villains and foes” and Malcolm Douglas was ordered “to protect his liege and those of the court from the dangers of subterfuge”. In addition, Gillacomgail Douglas was noted to be the Diocese Bishop; he would appear to be no relation to Gilchrist

“We can gather many details of changes throughout the history of the realm, and the first change is in the same piece; with the “sudden and abrupt deceasement [sic] of Logan, marshal of the realm”, it is decreed that “Gilchrist Douglas shall take on his responsibilities as marshal of our armies”, and that “Donada Douglas shall be awarded the responsibility of the stewardship of the realm with the consent of the Duke” (again, no relation to Gilchrist or Gillacomgail). Other records suggest that Donada was female, making her the first woman to achieve high rank under the rule of the Atholls – but by no means the last.”

--“The Atholl Dynasty: A Modern Perspective”, Professor Robert Rennes, 1997

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“Relations between Maldred and Gospatrick were unusually strong, particularly considering the time period; we must not forget that the Middle Ages were a time of great intrigue, the shadows containing more secrets, more plots, more activity than we could ever invision today, so to see even these kinsmen working together so closely was unusual.

“Gospatrick would be of course the only one of the pair to bear children, under the apparent terms of the unwritten agreement between the pair. Yet, Gospatrick had a great trust for his brother and the prowess of his court, and hence when they reached the age of 5 sent each one of his children to Maldred's court to be brought up and educated. This was a bold step, considering the potentially vulnerable position it could have put the heirs to the county in if Maldred chose the path of deceit; yet, we can find no record at all to suggest such a thing was even contemplated at any stage.”

--“The Ascent of the Atholls”, Elric O'Brein, 1956

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“Meanwhile, Maldred, the suspicious Duke of Galloway with dominion over the lands of Carrick, plotted in his castle; and it is said through the month of May, various villains, rogues of the highest order, came to his lair; yet Maldred did not turn them away but dined and talked with them. No man can be sure of what they talked; but it is said that their words were of plotting and disloyalty; could it be that this man could have had the thought in his mind to challenge his cousin, King Malcolm, the third of that name? Could such plans of lurid deceit have been spoken of?”
--“The Chronicles of Gwynedd”, Owain Llywelyn, 1091

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“Through the years of 1070 and 1071, misfortune struck the lands of Carrick of the Duchy of Galloway, ruled by the deceitful Maldred,; the land was plagued by villains of the highest sort, who stole and disobeyed the laws of the realm without care; surely this was divine punishment towards this Duke most treacherous for his consorting with these very same villains in years past.”

--“The Chronicles of Gwynedd”, Owain Llywelyn, 1091

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“Yet, for the King's work, all was not well in the Kingdom of Scotland; for the hostile Maldoven, who claimed dominion over the lands of Angus, sowed seeds of discontent; and this ignoble man, of no great noble birth or influence, made his mission one without virtue; and while the King ran the Kingdom, he scuttled around like a disgusting insect, brooding and fighting; and in this time he made enemies of Maelmuir, the bastard brother of the King, who ruled over Albany; and of the brothers of Atholl, who held sway over the lowlands; and all was not well as this men's bickering rang across the mountains of Scotland.”

--“The Chronicles of Gwynedd”, Owain Llywelyn, 1091

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Lol, in some picture there was a portrait of a man 3 years old and he had grey hair. :rofl:
But anyways, looks great.
I shall be following, for that is my duty.
 
The Affairs of the Isles, 1067-1072
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“By no means was King William I's rule over England established easily; although he quickly ensured the control over the south by awarding any title outside of his personal demense to loyal Norman nobles, the north was not subdued so easily. It would be barely a month after his conquest before the Saxon-led Duchies of Northumberland and Lancaster openly revolt against William, declaring they wanted no part in a Norman England and vowing to crush the new King.

“The Dukes faced overwhelming odds; their armies were vastly outnumbered by the combined force of the South and Normandy, and it was with no great ease that they held off those overwhelming forces. Yet, for at least two years, the Norman armies were held south of York by a relatively small yet determined Saxon force. The successes even prompted the defection of the Duke of Oxford in early 1069, although those lands were quickly reconquered with the capture of Northampton in June.

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“Yet, the rebels were not destined for success. A particularly harsh winter in 1069 saw the decimation of their forces. By February 1070, Lancaster fell, and in October Duke Morcar of Northumbria was forced to flee his last stronghold in Westmorland and go into exile, thus ending hopes of a quick conclusion to Norman England.

“With the end what has been labelled 'The Trifecta Uprising', after the three Dukes of Northumberland, Lancaster and Oxford, the Saxons were reduced to their lowest ever influence, with just five counties across Europe under the rule of a Saxon: Eadric Aelfricson ruled over the Duchy of March, covering the counties of Chester and Shrewsbury, on the Gywnedd-English border (with the tacit consent of William, who had allowed the area its independence for its assistance against the Trifecta Uprising), Estmond Leofricson remained Count of Derby (having pledged allegiance to William in order to ensure his survival after the capture of Lancaster), Gospatrick of Atholl (a surprising inclusion; the Atholls were of course a Scottish noble family, with family ties to the ruling Dunkelds) ruled the border county of Berwick, and Gospatrick of Dunbar (granted land by Maldred of Atholl following his escape from England) presided over Cumberland.

“The future of the Saxons was bleak; we must not forget that by 1072, there was not a Saxon ruler who did not rule simply by the mercy of King William.”

--“The British Isles After Godwinson”, Professor Cedric Rowson, 1978

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“Through the eleventh century, a basic idea apparently was catapulted into the collective mind of Irish noblemen everywhere; that there was strength in numbers. The island had been fragmented for many years, particularly in the north and east, with feuding families competing for land and rank.

“Yet, by the pen or by the sword, different families set aside their differences and were united as one. Three Duchies – Munster, Connacht and Leinster – already by 1066 were in positions of increasing power and influence. Despite this, there was still disunion in the north, as the three counties competed and squabbled.

“It was only war that would unite these lands, and Cú Uladh of the County of Ulaid believed he could do so, declaring war against his neighbour of Ulaid in September 1069. Yet, as the harsh winter blighted Saxons in northern England, it too blighted his armies, who barely made it across the border between the two counties before being forced back. Successive counter-attacks by Donald O'Neill, count of Ulaid, saw his enemies forced back further and further before being encircled and massacred near Armagh.

“On June 15th, Donald declared himself Count of Ulaid, and on June 20th, he proclaimed the Duchy of Ulster, thus establishing himself one of the four most powerful men in Ireland. Soon after, the nearby County of Tir Connail swore allegiance to the Duchy, thus establishing his position as the unchallenged ruler of northern Ireland.”

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--”Ireland Through The Ages”, Pat O'Donaghue, 1989

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Iamwhoa: Thanks. Damn things take long enough to process, I can assure you (and they're still relatively ugly. Maybe I just have too high standards.)

kalenderee: Well, the pace of updates will be relatively slow (mainly because I have a way-too-damn-short attention span) so you should have time. :p

Enewald: Hope to not disappoint you. The 3 thing is because the man has such an obscenely long name, I suppose he just ran out of space on his business card or something. :p
 
Evil normans... always conquering those poor saxons... who just have finished fighting over Danelaw... and those poor saxons who genocided the british romans...
 
An excellent start, especially for your first go. Keep up the great work with those crazy Scotts!

(And a side note to Enewald: the King of Scotland is not three years old at the start of the story...he is actually in his thirties. The second digit of his age is cut off due to his obscenely long name. Of course...this still does not explain his gray hair. :rofl: )
 
Ah, boy. This is awkward.

Events have decided to conspire against this AAR getting anywhere. First, I was hit with a bout of summer lethargy for a couple of weeks. Then, when I finally get ready to start writing again (I played up to 1077, and had some nice big events like a war with England in that time), parents get the idea to move me to a different room. Another week gone. Then, when I finally get ready to start writing again...

...in the move something's gone wrong with my PC and I'm forced to wipe the hard drive. The same hard drive that has my save-file on. :mad:

So, yes, unfortunately, the AAR is dead, I'm afraid. Shame, since it was going fairly well too. Maybe I'll be back at some point when I gather up enthusiasm to work on one again, but for now, this one is dead and I'm not ready to start on another yet.

Just thought I'd let you know.
 
Ah, and just when I had read up on it! :mad: Bastard computers, and they are supposed to make our lives easier! :p

But on a serious note, I hope you start another one soon, this one sure showed a lot of promise. And seriously, who doesn't like Scotland? :D
 
Snugglie said:
Ah, and just when I had read up on it! :mad: Bastard computers, and they are supposed to make our lives easier! :p

But on a serious note, I hope you start another one soon, this one sure showed a lot of promise. And seriously, who doesn't like Scotland? :D
Hehe, thanks for the encouragement. I'll probably give it another shot in the summer - probably as old Maldred again, since there are a damned lot of possibilities in the game as Galloway and the Atholls. But for now, I must take my leave. ;)