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"Aut vincere aut mori"

(Either conquer or die)


Dynasty - Van Heemskerk

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After 2 or maybe even more AARs that ended becuase of my lack of attention I tried to write short AAR's. First a FM09 World Cup AAR with Poland and than my latest a Grand Prix Manager 2 with Paradox GP.
Both with decent success :p :). So I decided to try again my luck at CK DV.

This AAR will in the beginning follow 3 characters, all from the "Van Heemskerk" family. More about the family will come in the actual updates.
The story will start in the first part of the 12th Century. I started the game in the standard Hastings scenario. I use many mods. Most importantly DVIP. With extra graphics and Bopack. And some things I probably forgot I added.
AI is at Coward.

I'll try to do this AAR in a style similar to a TV series.
First season will have 12 episodes. After that I'll see if the series gets renewed. :p
English is the 3rd language I learned and I rarely use it in real life.
(Besides on internet and vacation) so don't be too harsh on my writing. :p

I'll try to update atleast 2 times a week. Max 3 with maybe some extra updates with maps etc.
First update will come tomorrow. :)
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Updates:


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Looks interesting, I'm guessing you're playing Holland then? Don't worry about your English, things like these are excellent exercises and you could always ask some native speakers to give you some pointers.
 
I will be following. I know how hard and frustrating it sometimes can be when writing in different languange than your native, so good luck!
 
Looks interesting, I'm guessing you're playing Holland then? Don't worry about your English, things like these are excellent exercises and you could always ask some native speakers to give you some pointers.

At the moment of the start of this AAR I'm Playing as Duchy of Holland :)
But I didn't start as it ;) And Thank you... Hope you'll like it. :)

I will be following. I know how hard and frustrating it sometimes can be when writing in different languange than your native, so good luck!

Welcome and thanks :)


1st update will be up soon
 
Season One - Either conquer or die

“All men can see these tactics whereby I conquer, but what none can see is the strategy out of which victory is evolved.”
- Sun Tzu


Chapter One - Before The Worst

“There is no avoiding war; it can only be postponed to the advantage of others.”
- Niccolo Machiavelli


Part One


Gerrit-centric

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Somewhere in the year 1118.


'Aah'...
Gerrit opened his eyes. There ware birds flying in the sky and there was much noise around him.
He probably fell asleep again while reading outside. But there was something off.
And than it struck him, the pain was drastic. He was wide awake now.
'Why on earth am I wearing my helmet?'
With all the strength he still had in him Gerrit managed to get up a bit to see what was going on. There ware bodies everywhere, men and horse. The pain struck him again.....He looked down at his wound. Right at that moment a soldier showed up right beside him.
'My Lord...Are you alright? My Lord...You got blood on your hands.'

Gerrit looked at his hands in shock..no it was more than that. It was terror.
'I think it's mine. Just give me a second to clear my head, just give me a second.'

Another soldier showed up at the scene, he was much older and had a concerned look on his face.
'Kristof, quickly help him up and get him out of here. They will be coming back soon'
Gerrit finally woke up and saw his surroundings more clearly. It was a view to kill. Or rather a view where many ware killed. It was a battle, hundreds ..no thousands of people ware fighting.
'I need more time, just give me a moment'

The old knight got down from his horse. 'Quickly get him out of here. Ride him back to the camp Kristof.'
It took them a while but they both managed to drag Gerrit on Kristof's horse.
'Tell Reinoud our charge was successful despite our numbers. Also tell him that we ware betrayed. Tell him that...'
Something flashed just beside Gerrit....took him a few seconds to realize it was an arrow and it missed him only by an inch. He looked up to see that the old knight didn't have the same luck. An arrow struck him down. Right trough his Adam's apple.

Kristof was already on his horse in panic. He quickly took off with Gerrit, back to the camp.


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Intriguing start. It seems Gerrit isn't in very good shape :).
 
I'll try to update atleast 2 times a week. Max 3 with maybe some extra updates with maps etc.

Incidentally, I wouldn't over-commit at this stage. Just update when you can - we'll be here to read when you do :)
 
Intriguing start. It seems Gerrit isn't in very good shape :).

No he isn't :p still part 2 will be next ;)

Nice start. And don't worry about your English; it's excellent (better than my grasp of Dutch ;)).

Thank you I'll do my best!

Run!!!!! :D

Me likes!!:D

thanks and welcome !

Incidentally, I wouldn't over-commit at this stage. Just update when you can - we'll be here to read when you do :)

YEah well I started this just before an exam week and before I got the flu. :p
I hoped I could post at least 2 more updates in due time but that was not doable. So you are right. From next week on there will be more regular updates. :D
 
Part Two


Gerrit-centric

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Nearly 2 years ago.....


December 1116


'Aah'...
Gerrit opend his eyes. 'Come on don't stop...!' Gerrit had to look down at her...'What is it this time?'.
She met his eyes 'I think I heard someone coming...maybe it's your wife! What if..'
Gerrit stopped her by putting his finger on her mouth, like they do with small children. He was now annoyed with her, not only is she less than average looking but also a talker.
Ohh well she was the best around. 'My wife? She's pregnant and far away..I doubt...'

Someone knocked at the door...

'What...but.... quickly....quickly get out of the bed..no wait..quickly...no no time for that just lay down next to me and don't move...'

Another knock...
'Gerrit, I know that you're in there...can I come in?...you're not "busy"...?'

'Phew...thats only Kristof.' Gerrit had to shout 'Come on in my friend...no need for shyness!'

Krisof has been Gerrit's best friend since they both started training at arms under Kristof's father Falco and later his brother Guglielmo. Kristof's bad luck just like Gerrit's was they ware both not the heirs
to their fathers and that was probably what brought them together in the first place.

'Gerrit, your father has sent me for you...he wants you to attend the court meeting today..he said it's important!'
First this wench now his best friend? Is the world against me?
'As you may see I'm already in a meeting.' Gerrit couldn't stop himself from grinning.
'Come on Gerrit, you know how your father can get when he doesn't get his way?'
Gerrit had to think about it for a second, but his friend was right. It was best to get to the meeting, listen to the old man for a while and organize a better party tonight.....with better attendance.
'Fine I'll be there...'


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So let's see what the old man has to say today. It's probably again about that Count of Jülich. Or maybe the Italians? Gerrit entered the hall. Everyone was already there.
The old Marshal and just newly appointed Spy Master Falco, Kristof's father sat at his father right. Next to him his second son Guglielomo the new Marshal and probably the only person who could match Gerrit
in a fight one-on-one. Kristof was sitting next to his brother. Always smiling. Like he knew something.
The Swedish steward Magnus was sitting on Duke Engelbrecht's left. Next to him the Bishop Bavo who never said a word. Everyone was here, so something is up.

'Ahh Gerrit, you managed to find some time I see?' His father wasn't pleased. He never was. Not since he lost his ability to walk normally two years ago.
'Father...' and with that Gerrit took his seat next to his best friend.

'Now that we are here we can finally start the last preparations.'
Preparations? Ahh so the old man wants war. Hmm maybe the German King wants to conquer Holland back?

'As you may know we are in a bad position. To the west there is the damn French King and his rotten Duke of Flanders. We do have a truce with them...but for how long? The old bastard is nearly dead.
To the south the Italian King is getting stronger with the day. And to the east the German and Burgundian Kings are still at war but not for long. Falco just reported that in a few months the Germans shall win
and where will they look next? They still have a claim on these lands since Dirk!
Last week a relative from Aragon...or whats left of that...came to me with a proposition.'

Gerrit interrupted..'Wait..... we have relatives in Aragon?'
Engelbrecht took a long sigh and continued 'Yes, you may know him.He's your father-in-law?'
The court laughed...but Gerrit wasn't amused...
'Well than he's not really a relative...since...'
His father now interrupted him 'Yes Gerrit but what I was saying is that he gave me an idea. He claimed that the old Emir of Zaragoza died a few weeks ago and the new one is his 9-year old son.
I had Falco investigate this matter and it seems our Spanish relative was telling the truth. We shall not make the same mistake we took two years ago....this time we shall go to war!'

'Now to the tasks...by now you most of you should have figured out that I won't lead this campaign.
So the campaign will be lead by...'
Gerrit was smiling, this was it, this was his moment. He will have his glory!!!!

'Reinoud, my oldest son and count of Gerle.'
Gerrit couldn't be more angry. Ohh well what did he expect? War? Glory? He will probably have to stay here and care for the old man.

'Kristof your task is to go south to Count Alberico and Count Adelfo and raise their armies and meet us back here in Heemskerk. Gerrit you will...Gerrit are you listening?'
Gerrit looked up at his father with disapointment.
'I have a big task for you young man, you will travel to Utrecht to meet your uncle the Bishop and tell him everything.
Let him raise the army of Sticht and Count of Jülich. Than go to the north and tell your brother to raise the armies of my bastard brothers. Ohh and I nearly forgot. You will be accompanied by your nephew Bartolameus,
the second son of Count of Frisia.'

This couldn't get any worse...'Ohh come on that little brat? What is he eleven?'
'Your nephew just finished his studies under our Marshal and will travel back to Frisia to his father, besides if I let the matter only up to you, you'll end up in one of Utrecht's biggest brothels by the end of the month
and we won't leave for war until I'm dead.....so off you go.....and Gerrit.....write to your wife. She is pregnant you know? and this may finally be a son....I know you're still bitter about...'
Gerrit didn't let his father finish..."I know father, I shall write before I leave.'


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Where is honour hidden in this family?
Early german realpolitik? :p

The family is forged on war, intrigue and murder.
They are all bastards, either by virtue or birth. :)

A smart, pragmatic ruler will look for a future for his Dynasty. Duke Engelbrecht is just like that. He is old and sees this as a way out in a difficult situation. ;)

Only one comment. :( I hope more people will comment in the future :)

Next update soon. Today
 
Chapter Two - The Crusade

“In the ancient recipe, the three antidotes for dullness or boredom are sleep, drink, and travel. It is rather feeble. From sleep you wake up, from drink you become sober, and from travel you come home again. And then where are you? No, the two sovereign remedies for dullness are love or a crusade.”
- D. H. Lawrence





Claes-centric

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December 1116


Claes was in his study room, when one of his servants came in to tell him there ware messengers from his brother the liege. What was it this time? Didn't the French teach him a lesson two years ago?
It's all about war, war, war. Did he find another easy target? Another war for yet more land or a vassal? How many men will die this time so my brother will have little bit more money each month?
Ohh well let's get it over with.


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The messengers ware already there when Claes entered the room. It took him a good few minutes to get there. He was out of shape and extremely tired and therefore not ready to receive them like this.

One can hope for good things to happen but God has other plans with us. Let's see. Ahh my brother sent his second son. The arrogant little prick. Well not so little anymore. He was already bigger than me and they say he is a great swordsman. Maybe even the best in the whole duchy. I guess times change. It wouldn't hurt to be nice to him. Hmm I don't know the younger lad doh. Maybe a bastard my brother didn't tell about?

Claes walked into the room and sat in his chair next to Niclaes, his right hand. Niclaes was everything he was not. He was handsome, charismatic, a womanizer and a great soldier. A true knight. Nearly too good to be true.

'Nephew, what brings you here?'
'My Grace. I come here with a message from my father.'

Claes wasn't good with things like this. His brother always bullied him into doing things he didn't want. He made him the Bishop of Utrecht. He made him persuade the Pope to end the conflict with the French.
He was tired of saying No to his brother but what could he do? He was a bastard after all. Without his brother Claes was nothing. A fat ill man, nothing else. Niclaes stepped in to talk for Claes instead. He has been doing that the past few months when he saw his employer wasn't at ease.

'And what might be the message? War? Ain't I right? Yet again? We haven't yet recovered form the last. I won't fight in another war for more land.'

Niclaes always knew what to say. But the little bastard Gerrit got a grin on his face. Something was not right. He looked at his companion and said;
'But Uncle. This cause is a righteous one. This one is for our God.'

A Crusade? We will go to the holy land? That would be splendid!

'As you might know Spain has been overrun by moslems. Our liege and my humble father has taken the task upon himself to retake the Christian lands.'

Spain? Hmm. 'And what does our liege what from me?'

The grin on his face grew even wider. 'Well your armies of course. But also he wants you to write a letter to the Pope asking for his...well guidance and well to put it plainly help.'

Niclaes rose up from his chair and stared at Gerrit, whose grin finally started to disappear.
'And what will the Bishop of Utrecht get from this?'

It was the small lad who spoke instead of Gerrit. He had a confident voice, yet not a very manly one.
'Well our liege, the Duke of Holland will remember today. And we all know the Duke is very generous.'

'Generous? generous how exactly?' Niclaes sat down while saying that rather slowly.

There was a silence for a good few seconds and Claes was really getting impatient.
Finally, Gerrit broke the silence. 'Jülich.'
 
The Van Heemskerkjes are going to Spain :D

Though the picture that was painted, was of enemies on all sides. Is it wise to leave the homeland undefended?