a story about a court. a Flanders court. Don't tell them, but someone is watching them.
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Baldwin looked out to the horizon from his castle. His land was not what he was thinking about. The cold day could not phase him neither could the wind.
The gentle swaying of the tower did not even stop his train of thought for once. He saw what his wife was doing. Destroyer of nations they called her. Not for her beauty oh no, not for that he was certain. She was the only daughter of the King of England. With short blond hair and a belly the size of a castle with a mole the size of a mole she was the ugliest woman he had seen since that court jester took his wife onto the stage with him. [That still gave him nightmares.]
She was getting ready to leave. Just then he saw it. The bird he just couldn’t resist the urge to touch it. He remembered the days when he was a boy. He would just chase birds and squirrels all day in the sunny and grassy meadows. But he learned out far too much far enough for the archer to shoot and arrow and Baldwin was no more.
[ in the low levels of the castle] “Head watcher Baldwin has died” said the lowly watcher. No No that shouldn’t have happened No, Danger Will Robinson.”
The gentle swaying of the tower did not even stop his train of thought for once. He saw what his wife was doing. Destroyer of nations they called her. Not for her beauty oh no, not for that he was certain. She was the only daughter of the King of England. With short blond hair and a belly the size of a castle with a mole the size of a mole she was the ugliest woman he had seen since that court jester took his wife onto the stage with him. [That still gave him nightmares.]
She was getting ready to leave. Just then he saw it. The bird he just couldn’t resist the urge to touch it. He remembered the days when he was a boy. He would just chase birds and squirrels all day in the sunny and grassy meadows. But he learned out far too much far enough for the archer to shoot and arrow and Baldwin was no more.
[ in the low levels of the castle] “Head watcher Baldwin has died” said the lowly watcher. No No that shouldn’t have happened No, Danger Will Robinson.”
Well, there's not that much to comment on really. Maybe a longer update - at the moment it's not really clear what's going on.
However, I have one specific bit of feedback about one part of your AAR:
It's best if you spellcheck your AARs before you post them. I had to reread this a couple of times before I worked out what had happened (I'm assuming he was shot by a hidden archer somewhere?).
Continuation sometime soon? I think your updates need to be a bit longer if you and I agree with Iain Wilson, it's best to write your updates on word (that's what I do) before posting.
Please do continue this AAR, I think it could be very interesting to read!
Please do continue this AAR, I think it could be very interesting to read!
It had been the perfect plan. A watcher as a baron seemed like a foolproof plan. Someone must have found out about what had gone on the night before. But that was not important. The important thing was to make sure no one found this cold room. It was hidden well underneath the field of flowers next to the castle. Only a watcher would know how to get into here he fumed to himself. While he paced along the cobbled stony ground he remembered what he promised the baron years ago. He had to get the Baron’s son out of there quick before his wife took control of the son, Byron. Baldwin’s wife was not a member of the watchers. For all the head watcher knew Baldwin’s wife was a member of the Others. He then continued onto the main room and told the plan to the other watchers. He had no comprehension of what was going on above his head
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Baroness, please come quickly your husband is dead, said a maid. She now knew the plan had to go into action early. It was time to go commando.
Sorry about the short update it was just to show this AAr is still around.
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Baroness, please come quickly your husband is dead, said a maid. She now knew the plan had to go into action early. It was time to go commando.
Sorry about the short update it was just to show this AAr is still around.