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Call it a learning experence :D

Or something.
I don't think he's very happy to learn defeat. And he should better not "learn a lot" :rolleyes:

But there is truth still that this teaches him something.

Geez. Telemark has his number. I'm surprised he's had so many struggles, given his martial advantage over his enemy and the flanking bonus. The terrain bonus is really that strong?

Maybe Alfrid will have a boy, and that will at least make things a little safer if things go further south.

The terrain bonus is not that strong. The main issue, both in this battle, and in the previous one, has been morale, as depicted in the story and shown by the screenshots. During the first parts of the battles, the losses suffered in men were not greater for the Nidaros side, in proportion they were significantly lower, but both time morale broke very soon for my center, and Roald could then outnumber my flank in the melee phase.

Sigurd has a great martial value, but without commander traits, it didn't have a significant influence, and at the time, I failed to grasp how extremely important this can be. In contrast, while having a rather average martial value, Roald of Telemark has both "Inspiring Leader", which (with 12 of martial) not only yields +24% morale defence, but also +24% morale damage, and "direct leader", which gives him a flat +32% to casualties and morale damage inflicted. Add to this that he also has the brave trait, which gives him a further +16% morale defense... All this combined make for an extremely capable leader, able, with the further help of terrain advantage, to have a clear victory despite being flanked and outnumbered 3 to 2.

As hinted, it was an error of mine (and in the story, of Sigurd), to not have fielded Hrolfr as a commander. Not only do he have a martial value comparable to Sigurd, but he also has the Inspiring Leader and brave traits, which would have counterbalanced Roald's traits and guaranteed victory.

Otherwise, you correctly understood my hint, the next chapter will feature Alfrid giving birth. For the details, stay tuned, it is written already and will follow in a few minutes.
 
First Arc - Chapter 31 - March 872
Chapter XXXI

March 872 – Nidaros, Norway

Sigurd was back in his capital.

After the initial defeat, insisting to attack again immediately would have been foolish. Even though the losses suffered were lesser than he feared at first, the morale of his troops was too low. Instead, he retreated towards Agder.

There, he took a ship to return to Nidaros, letting the army under the command of Thorolfr in the meantime.

He suspected that the rumour of his defeat would have travelled quickly, but as often with rumours, with dangerous inaccuracies. A small defeat in a battle could soon become a crushing defeat in minds, with rumours of him being captured again, and plotters like this Thorsten Dagson could be emboldened to act against his interests.

He wanted to extinguish any such rumours.

But there was another reason he was back. A more important one.

His daughter Ingfrid, now four years-old, was on his lap. The fear her mother had felt had trickled to the little girl, who was overjoyed when she saw her father again. Now, she played with his moustache, she told him the fabulous adventures of her doll, and he didn’t mind, fondling his first child.

Her mother laid on her back, preparing herself to soon give birth again. She was more confident than the first time, as was her husband, but birthing was still not an easy task.

When the contractions began to shook Alfrid, in the middle of the afternoon, Grima took the young Ingfrid from her father and led her outside to play : it was not time yet for her to witness birth.

As for Ingfrid’s birth, a midwife was present, assisting Alfrid in this painful, but ultimately joyful, moment. It went smoother this time, and by the evening, the sparse blond hairs of the baby became visible. Soon after, it was announced to be a boy.

Finally, thought Sigurd.

The infant’s first cry was rather weak, and he was lighter than expected. While Alfrid looked in amazement to the baby put on her belly, the midwife informed Sigurd of it.

It was customary among Norse to reject babies which were too weak after birth, for devoting scarce resources to an infant unlikely to live made them unavailable to the other family members and generated more suffering.

However, as a chief, Sigurd had more than enough to feed and raise the newborn.

“Does this mean he will also be weak if he grows to be a man ?”, he whispered to the midwife.

“It is hard to tell, my lord. Some babies appear weak and remain so their whole life, but in others, this corrects itself with time and they make fine adults”, she answered. "Only Frigg could tell."

Sigurd thought of Alfrid’s great worry about his war expedition. In truth, he had no idea if it had anything to do with the newborn’s weakness, but he convinced himself that it was this worry which led to the baby’s weakness. Isn’t a baby in his mother’s belly strongly affected by all she does and feel ?

This explanation was convenient, as it implied there was otherwise nothing wrong with the baby. He didn’t ask the midwife if it could be true, because he didn’t want her to be aware of Alfrid’s worries, but even more because he didn’t want to be told it may be wrong. He strongly wished for an heir.

In the following days, he received numerous congratulations, but there was someone less happy about this.

“Remember that our ancestral customs dictate that my demesne shall be divided equally between all my sons”, said Sigurd to Ingibjörg.

His first wife had not overtly voiced any discontent, but she had been more distant lately, and he decided to confront the issue head on.

“You did not marry her properly as you did me. My sons should come before.”, protested Ingibjörg.

“You know very well my union with her is recognized as legitimate ; and anyway order doesn’t matter when the sons get an equal part. Besides, you should worry about producing sons before worrying about what they may or may not inherit.”

While Sigurd didn’t intend to offend Ingibjörg, these last words stung, and she left the room, furious. He sighed.

Ten days after birth, the baby was still alive. He decided it was time to officially accept him as his son, and to give him a name.

For this ceremony, numerous witnesses had been invited, as with Ingfrid, ranging from Alfrid’s family to some of the most important men of Nidaros. In a time where records were non-existent, witnesses took an important role in certifying everything which needed to be.

The baby was sprinkled with water as Sigurd did the holy sign of Thor, before giving him his name : Hysing.

This name meant “warrior”, or rather “one who has the qualities of a warrior”. Sigurd had suggested it, and Alfrid had nodded her approbation. It had felt appropriate to the chief in the middle of a war, and reflected the path he wished his son to take.

“You’re now a member of the tribe of Nidaros, my son, and my heir”, said Sigurd.

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Minor quibble: the word "congenital" has the capacity to be quite immersion breaking.

Otherwise a reminder that war is only part of the business of rulership. Progeny is what determines one's legacy in so many ways, and yet so outwith one's control.
 
Why do you find that word immersion breaking ? I meant to say an inborn defect, contrasted with something temporary. I don't take issue with quibbling over my word choice, which can certainly be improved here and there, but it's more helpful for me if you can provide a convincing explanation and an alternative suggestion.
 
And so we have a boy. And discord. Ultimately, both sides have a point - Ingibjörg is right to be concerned of her children's (and her own) place. And Sigurd is fair to say it's not a concern yet, even if he could have used better phrasing for it. But that's not the man's strong point. :)

Minor quibble: the word "congenital" has the capacity to be quite immersion breaking.

I'll let @stnylan answer for himself, but it felt like a very modern phrasing for it. Which perhaps is a personal hang up because definition-wise it suits and we all tend to use modern phrasing in some way in these stories, regardless of how we try to disguise it.
 
Why do you find that word immersion breaking ? I meant to say an inborn defect, contrasted with something temporary. I don't take issue with quibbling over my word choice, which can certainly be improved here and there, but it's more helpful for me if you can provide a convincing explanation and an alternative suggestion.
It is a matter of remembering the time and place. "Congenital" is a very educated and learned word. In a Byzantine or Arabic setting it might work, due to the greater intellectual culture of those societies. A better way might just be to simplify the wording, to describe the result. So

Sometimes new bairns seem sickly for a time, and then grow out of it. Hard business being born. It is with [insert name of appropriate god here] now.

When writing historical fiction there are various anachronistic pitfalls that we all fall into one time or other. @JabberJock14 might relate how hard it was for him to write Foulques behaving towards women with a violence that would be absolutely typical in his era. But it can also be I language - I remember one post some time ago where I suddenly realised for a story written in the 1100s I had written the word "cannonned". That, at least, was an easy substitution to "catapulted".

Now, generally you can get away with a few anachronisms. Your readers are operating from the same 21st century perspective as yourself, but sometimes they can still jar.

What made "congenital" have a greater impact, I feel, is however not only was its use anachronistic, it conveyed a sort of language that I seroiusly doubt was ever heard inside a Norse hall. Clever intelligent folk the Norse may be, but in medical care .... not so much. Now, if you were to have two Norse shipwrights talking shop, that might be a different matter.
 
It is a matter of remembering the time and place. "Congenital" is a very educated and learned word. In a Byzantine or Arabic setting it might work, due to the greater intellectual culture of those societies. A better way might just be to simplify the wording, to describe the result. So

Sometimes new bairns seem sickly for a time, and then grow out of it. Hard business being born. It is with [insert name of appropriate god here] now.

When writing historical fiction there are various anachronistic pitfalls that we all fall into one time or other. @JabberJock14 might relate how hard it was for him to write Foulques behaving towards women with a violence that would be absolutely typical in his era. But it can also be I language - I remember one post some time ago where I suddenly realised for a story written in the 1100s I had written the word "cannonned". That, at least, was an easy substitution to "catapulted".

Now, generally you can get away with a few anachronisms. Your readers are operating from the same 21st century perspective as yourself, but sometimes they can still jar.

What made "congenital" have a greater impact, I feel, is however not only was its use anachronistic, it conveyed a sort of language that I seroiusly doubt was ever heard inside a Norse hall. Clever intelligent folk the Norse may be, but in medical care .... not so much. Now, if you were to have two Norse shipwrights talking shop, that might be a different matter.

Thank you for the more detailed post, I appreciate it. :)

There are a lot of trade-offs in writing fiction, and especially "historical" fiction. When writing dialogues, it is downright impossible to be accurate. The most obvious issue here is that the characters are not supposed to speak in modern english, but in old norse. It's better to have language-specific tricks matter as little as possible to the exchange between the characters, as say having a confusion between two words which sound close in english, but not in the speakers tongue, would be downright silly. While this story is fantasy, and you could just take it as a sort of "everybody in the world speak english except when they can't understand a stranger", I'd say that what matter most is meaning. Did Sigurd or Ingibjörg employ this word rather than this equivalent one ? Who know ? Who care ? It's written in dialogue form because it's nicer than writting these exchanges in descriptive form, that's all.

I'd be happy to be able to get the meanings right already ; trying to properly emulate the thoughts and feelings of characters which are unlike yourself is hard.

Still, point taken. I agree that I made the midwife express herself in a way which didn't match well the expected way of thinking and speaking of such a character at that time and place (it was too much "scientifical") ; and I've updated the section in question. Hope you'll find it more convincing.

Otherwise, sure, Norse were not medical experts, but I think your assessment make some strong assumptions. There is no need to know about genetics (which deals with how parents transmit what they are to children, and was poorly understood) to know that there are innately weak and strong individuals. This is something obvious, and which was even more when life was much harder than today. Those ancient societies abandonned/killed some babies which seemed too weak or were misshapen precisely because they thought it a good indicator of how they would become growing. On the other hand, the midwife would only need to have known of a few cases of weak babies growing to become normal if not strong adults to be able to reassure Sigurd that this is not a certainty.
 
First Arc - Chapter 32 - June 872
Chapter XXXII

June 872 – Telemark, Norway

Sigurd had decided to not rush a new attack.

His enemy had a clear advantage in confidence with two battles won despite inferior numbers, but to even resist, he had to muster all the forces from his tribe. By contrast, the southern provinces, still unruly, had not contributed that much to Sigurd’s first push. A hundred more warriors refilled the ranks of his army, and guaranteed an at least as good numerical advantage in the renewed campaign as in the first one.

He and Thorolfr had also taken care of the disobedience shown by the warriors of Nidaros. The chief, trusting and thinking himself a just leader, had been particularly offended, but the impropriety of the cowardly refusal to attack was much worse than only offending the chief.

While prudence was valued, cowardice carried a huge social stigma, because it was the worse form of egoism : letting comrades fight alone, sacrificing those lives and the tribe’s interest in exchange for personal safety. The apparent harshness with which society punished it acted as a deterrent to a greater evil.

Still, while individual acts of cowardice were easy to punish, as happened in Emund’s infamous case, a mass refusal to move forward and attack the enemy in melee was much harder to handle.

Sigurd’s first action after the defeat and the retreat had been covering up the details of what happened for the outside world : for it, the army had retreated against a foe too well positioned. The only ones who could tell otherwise were the very warriors whose best interest was for this shame to remain hidden. A lot of these men had fought in previous wars, and Sigurd was hopeful they could redeem themselves

Then, discipline was tightened. While the army stayed in Agder, the soldiers had to accomplish an unusual amount of chores, under Thorolfr’s supervision. Little time was given to slacken, and disobedience was severely punished. For good measure, a few men who tried to desert were executed, as were some men who encouraged discontent among the ranks – this last method proved particularly effective, as most of the trouble came from a tiny minority.

“I have killed cowardice at its root”, commented Thorolfr when informing his chief of this action.

Now, the army marched again in enemy’s territory.

The previous defeat had revealed another weakness : insufficient scouting gave the enemy the initiative.

This time, the location of Roald’s army was known. To be able to answer quickly to an attack from the north-west, as two years before, and from the coast, Telemark’s warriors camped on the western shore of the Norsjö.

Sigurd could have chosen to travel along the Nizir lake to the North, before going east ; however the terrain was more rugged there. Instead, he chose to advance in the cleared and low terrain along the coast.

The good organization of its supplies, and the decision to not lose time pillaging settlements that day, allowed the army from Nidaros to advance quickly, starting well into Agder’s territory in the morning to finish in view of the Grenmar – the richest fjord of the county, stretching to the north – by the evening.

Roald reacted swiftly, marching south to defend the most important settlements of Telemark, but the delay his spies needed to alert him made it impossible to outpace the invading army.

Instead, he had no better choice than to occupy a small hill west of the Grenmar, denying to the army of Nidaros the possibility to advance further.

On the morning, under a grey sky and forest cover, Sigurd’s men advanced north. After two hours of prudent advance, scouts reported that Telemark’s force was on the other side of a ravine, close yet invisible.

Should we not better wait here ? thought Sigurd. This position is as strong as theirs, they would lose assuredly. As soon as the thought was completed, he realized the futility of such a plan : Roald of Telemark had proved he was no fool, and he would never commit his troops to a suicidal assault. And if we stay here, he’ll stall us successfully and we’ll run out of supplies.

“Ready for the attack ?”, asked Thorolfr, who observed with curiosity his chief deep in his thoughts.

“Yes, I am. Are the troops organized as decided ?”

“They are.”

“Good. Go in position, I will lead.”

This time, there would be no flanking attempt. The disastrous results of this tactic in the previous battles against Roald had convinced him to not try it again. His warriors were disposed in a much more primitive formation : they would all be in the center and advance forward together, towards the enemy. The expected result was that being part of a larger group would increase the confidence of his men. The troops who had refused to attack in the previous battle were in front, with the others behind them. This was intended to push them forward. Thorolfr himself was to lead from the middle to ensure this.

Soon afterwards, the archers from the two armies began firing arrows at each other.

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“Warriors ! The men of Telemark have taunted us for too long. Do you hear their weak insults and their loathsome arrogance ?”, shouted Sigurd.

He remained silent a few seconds, so his men could hear the indistinct sound of the curses emanating from their foes across the ravine.

“It is time to shut their mouths ! Let’s remind them the might which has united under one banner the lands from Nidaros to Agder ! Let’s see if they’ll keep the desire to taunt us once enthralled ! Forward men ! Forward ! Victory or Valhalla !”

And upon those words, Sigurd began advancing down the ravine.

This time, he didn’t look back to see if his men followed. He didn’t need to, as the sound from their steps was the clearer answer possible.

The volleys from the enemy’s archers became more deadly as the army of Nidaros progressed along the ravine, but even on light-armoured warriors whose wooden round shields couldn't cover everything they were too weak to do much damage.

After two minutes of steep hill climbing, Sigurd saw the men from Telemark. Around him, warriors were running to the enemy.

He stopped a few seconds to breath. Then, fighting his body's plea for a longer rest, he pushed forward. He repulsed a few attacks with the help of his shield, and proceeded to strike the legs of an enemy with his sword. Weakly protected, they made an ideal target.

Under Roald’s orders, men from Telemark began to push forward. With their collective strength, they hoped to drive back Sigurd’s men. With the slope, it could prove decisive.

Sigurd shouted to his men to push back and keep striking, while the rest of his army was finishing climbing the hill.

After having initially lost ground, the army of Nidaros managed to push harder than its foe.

The confidence of Telemark’s warriors began shaking, and as this weakness became apparent, Sigurd’s men ceased doubting.

The fight carried on for the better part of an hour with light casualties, before finally Roald of Telemark's line broke in two. The chief ordered an immediate retreat. In the ensuing chaos, the army of Nidaros captured dozen of enemies.

Sigurd could breathe.

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A feeling of jubilation filled him, and he closed his fist while having a shout of satisfaction. Revenge was very sweet indeed.

Afterwards, Thorolfr joined him on the top of the conquered hill. Something immediately struck his chief’s eyes.

“You’ve been hurt !”

“Yes, my lord. An axe which my helmet failed to entirely stop.”

His cheek was bleeding.

“Thankfully, I have a strong head. As you, if I may add.”

Sigurd chuckled and patted his commander on his left shoulder.

“This must not be too serious if you can still joke.”

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Hooray! A much needed victory
 
First Arc - Chapter 33 - October 872
Chapter XXXIII

October 872 – Nidaros, Norway

After his decisive victory against Roald’s army, Sigurd had advanced with his men along the Grenmar. The settlements had been looted and put under the authority of friendly supervisors. In his retreat, Roald didn’t stop in his territory, but went deep in the neighbouring county of Vestfold, ruled by Fairhair himself.

As Roald was unable to counter-attack effectively ; Sigurd returned to his capital to manage non-military matters, letting once again the command of his troops to Thorolfr, He was tasked with finishing to take control of the coastal settlements, and holding them. Venturing deep inside Telemark was judged too risky, considering it was very sparsely populated but would overextend the army.

The only unknown was when Roald or the local Things would admit the futility of further resistance and surrender.

The approach of winter proved to be their breaking-point. After months, Roald had still not dared to counter-attack, and even his most ardent supporters had lost faith in his cause. Their prayers to Thor and Tyr failed to produce some favourable sign, and Sigurd was recognized as Telemark’s chief.

Roald’s army abandoned him soon afterwards, and he went in a forced-exile.

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The chief was in his bed alongside Alfrid. She gave her bare breast to their infant son, who sucked it with enthusiasm, drinking her milk. The baby had survived his first months, and Sigurd had good hope his health would get stronger.

“His first teeths have begun to come out”, said the mother.

“Great.”

“It hurts a lot, I had to comfort him all day long today.”

Sigurd grimaced, the thought of the white incisive piercing through the gum giving him some idea of the baby’s pain and distress, especially as he was still too small to understand what happened to him. It will pass, everybody goes through it.

“Maybe I’ll give him Telemark”, he laughed. “It will help him to learn to chew.”

The chief had expected the new of the tribe’s surrender when it arrived, as he was informed of the ongoing negotiations. He had learned it that very morning, and while it wasn’t as satisfying as winning on the battlefield, it still was very much.

“You won’t stop there, will you ?”, asked Alfrid.

He kissed her.

“You know well I won’t. And I can’t. Fairhair has come back to Akershus with his army after submitting Orkney, and he looks at our lands with appetite. I heard he’s currently suffering from a bad wound, but if and when he recover, there well be war. He swore to submit the whole of Norway, and I’m the only one who can deny him this.”

“Each time you go to war, I’m afraid of losing you.”

“This is in the hands of the Norns. Until now, the thread of destiny has favoured us, despite taking unexpected paths. I like to think that it will keep favouring us.”

In truth, Sigurd was more worried that he let see, but he didn’t want to reinforce Alfrid’s anxiety. As a condition to surrender and of recognition of Sigurd as chief, the Thing of Telemark had requested the warriors of Telemark to be exempted from any war in the two next years. They argued that with all the battles against Sigurd’s forces, they had suffered heavy losses and needed time to recover.

While the chief would have much preferred to have more available warriors, his hand had been forced. Refusing this request would not only have stalled negotiations for longer, but it would have induced dangerous rebellious sentiments. The last thing he needed in a decisive war was forces supposedly loyal to him revolting, or worse, rallying the enemy.

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Well Telemark would be a grand chew-toy, even if meant in jest (I think)
 
how far are you of becoming the King of Norway?
 
Well Telemark would be a grand chew-toy, even if meant in jest (I think)
Meant in jest, yes.

how far are you of becoming the King of Norway?

Sigurd holds 7 of the 19 county of Norway (faroe and east iceland count towards the total). One is independent (Jämtland), another one is controlled by Uppland (which is in position to form Sweden), while the 10 others counties are controlled by Haraldr Fairhair. His recent conquest of Orkney granted him the tenth one. You read it correctly, Fairhair already has over half of the kingdom's counties ; so enough to be able to form it. The only thing he misses at this point in the story is enough gold.
 
First Arc - Chapter 34 - November 872
Chapter XXXIV

November 872 – Nidaros, Norway

Sigurd had called the more capable men in money handling to come to Nidaros.

Some days after the celebrations of the victory against Roald of Telemark, an unexpected new reached him : his steward, Hrodulfr, had died. This was a huge surprise : the man was around Sigurd’s age, and would have been expected to live at least two or three decades more, barring an illness.

In his case, it wasn’t even this : no sign of illness, nor any sign of murder, had been found.

The man had no wife, but according to some of his friends, he overworked himself, insistent on checking everything himself. The resulting exhaustion was anyone’s best guess to explain this death.

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Hrodulfr had been Sigurd’s steward during more than five years, and the chief had never been impressed by his abilities. Faced with his disappearance, however, he could better appreciate the reliability he had shown along the years.

Several traders proposed themselves to replace the steward, but they were all rejected. Sigurd had a harmful tendency to trust people who didn’t deserve it, but his wife Ingibjörg had persuaded him that these candidates sought to enrich themselves using this position.

“A corrupt man stands to gain a lot if he can use your name to take gold for himself from half of Norway”, she said when trying to persuade him the first time. “I’ve talked with Rangvald, and I found him false.”

However, these rejections didn’t give him a new steward.

Nearly a month had passed when a man asked to see Sigurd, explaining he wished to become Sigurd’s steward. Eskild, the chancellor, checked that the man seemed to have some abilities, and forwarded him to his chief.

They met at the trading village, in the room Hrodulfr used to occupy when he worked on the realm’s tax revenue.

“Good… good morning, my lord”, said the stranger.

“Good morning”, answered Sigurd. “You can sit down”, he said, with his hand showing an empty chair.

The stranger hesitated, and looked around himself.

Is that the promising candidate Eskild told me about ?, thought the chief.

It took the man half-a-minute to sit down.

“I’ve been told that you wish to serve me as a steward ?”

“I… I… That’s true, my lord.”

The man looked down, not daring to face Sigurd’s stare.

“Who are you ?”

“I… My name is Hrodulfr.”

“Is this a bad joke ?”, asked the chief, annoyed.

The man stared at his shoes.

“No, my lord. I… I wouldn’t dare. I… I swear, this… this is my name.”

Sigurd began searching for details to justify even more his negative feelings towards the man. His moustache is awful.

“Why do you think I should take any more time to hear you ?”

“I… I’m sorry, my lord, I’m bad at talking to people I don’t know and… I… Please, I’ve done a long travel to offer my services.”

Sigurd rose his eyebrows, but said nothing. The candidate visibly felt ill-at-ease, not daring to speak.

“Where did you come from ?”, finally asked the chief.

“I… I was a guest of Olafr of Oppland, but I… we disliked each other. Be… Prior to this, I was Telemark’s steward.”

“Telemark’s steward, you say ?”

Sigurd’s curiosity awakened.

“I… Yes, your lordship. I served Roald. When he… When you beat him, I accompanied him until he lost his title of chief of Telemark.”

“Why did you go to Oppland ?”

“Because I… people like me who had been close to Roald didn’t know what to expect of you.”

Sigurd rethought of the time he swore to enthral the villagers of Roald’s capital. He had already ordered that his warriors who had been previously been captured and enthralled be liberated, but he hadn’t taken care of following through the enthralling of villagers. I will have to speak of it to Hrolfr.

“Now, prove me your abilities.”

“I… How ?”

“Tell me what you would do if I decided to choose you as my steward.”

More at ease, the man began explaining how he envisioned a steward’s task. Sigurd, who had a good grasp of the fundamentals involved, asked several involved questions, and the answers that the man gave him were satisfying.

“Good. You can go away, now. I’ll let you know my decision later.”

The man stood up.

“Thank… thank you, your lordship, for hearing me. I… Good bye.”

While the man’s interpersonal skills were awful, Sigurd had been impressed by his knowledge of stewardship.

This time, Ingibjörg didn’t raise any objection, and the morrow, the man was informed his candidacy had been accepted.

Hrodulfr replaced Hrodulfr as steward.

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So revenge is finally Sigurd's, and Roald should have deposed of him when he had the chance. Meanwhile, pretty good rivalry you've got going on with Fairhair, with even Iceland evenly split.

Also Sigurd is 40! Starting to get up there in age...
 
The more things change, the more Hrodulfrs are retained :D
 
So revenge is finally Sigurd's, and Roald should have deposed of him when he had the chance. Meanwhile, pretty good rivalry you've got going on with Fairhair, with even Iceland evenly split.

Also Sigurd is 40! Starting to get up there in age...
Roald would have been best served in disposing of Sigurd the first time, but he didn't know.

Yes, the rivalry with Fairhair is great. The AI played it well, I didn't expect it when beginning my story but it organically emerged. Needless to say it was scary too, as Fairhair has overall stronger lands.

However, I don't know how you thought Sigurd is around 40. He's only 32-33 at this point in the story. I wrote in the chapter that Hrodulfr (the dead one) was around his age, but he was 31 when he died. That's a huge difference.

We've been along Sigurd for 6 years at this point in the story.

The more things change, the more Hrodulfrs are retained :D

:D
 
First Arc - Chapter 35 - March 873
Chapter XXXV

March 873 – Nidaros, Norway

Winter had passed peacefully, and by the equinox’s feast, snow had melted around the village, close to the fjord.

“I have a surprise for you, husband”, said Ingibjörg.

Sigurd was intrigued. He thought his marriage fine, but neither he nor Ingibjörg had the habit of giving gifts to the other ; such a thing was rare.

“What is it ?”, he asked.

He tried to imagine what it could be, but he was at loss. He most liked women and power, and obviously neither could be the surprise.

She smiled, amused.

“You shall invoke Ullr’s blessing, for it will help you hunting.”

Hunting. I have been longing for it for a long time, thought the chief. Between wars, winter, and general realm management, a proper hunt party had been deferred again and again.

“Is it a bow ?”

Ullr was not only a hunting god, he was also strongly associated with bows.

She smiled.

“Grima ! Bring the gift.”

Grima, Ingibjörg’s servant and Eskild’s wife, entered the room. She held a small puppy. The red-haired woman walked towards the chief and gave him the small animal.

Sigurd took him in his arms.

“Isn’t he cute ?”, asked his wife.

“He is.”

“When he’ll grow up, he’ll be devoted to you and help you in hunting.”

“That’s a great gift. Thank you, wife.”

Sigurd kissed her in the chin, still holding the dog in his arms.

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“How will you name him ?”

“I don’t know.”

Grima went out and came back with a basket for the puppy, and Sigurd put him here.

The chief then ordered the servant to go out. He was grateful for the gift, and he desired to feel once more Ingibjörg’s sweet body against his…

The morrow, he showed the present to his five years-old daughter Ingfrid.

“Ingibjörg has offered me this hunting puppy.”

“He’s so cute !”, she said, as she stroke gently the animal’s head. “Will you let me play with him ?”

“It’s a hunting dog, he will become much less cute when growing. His blood tells him to track down and kill. But sure, you can play with him now if you wish, he shouldn’t harm you.”

Alfrid, her son in her arms, frowned.

The chief let the puppy in his daughter’s hands, and straightened himself. She must already imagine the worse.

“This puppy is too young to bite Ingfrid, don’t worry.”

“What’s his name, daddy ?”, asked Ingfrid.

Imbued with affection for his daughter, he didn’t mind she didn’t use a more formal way to refer to him, such as father.

“I’ve not chosen a name, yet”, he answered.

“Fenrir”, said Alfrid.

Fenrir was the name of a mythical wolf, son of Loki, the trickster god, and a giantess. The name alluded to a monstrous and uncontrollable beast.

Sigurd frowned.

“No, I don’t like this name. Ingfrid, how do you think we should call him ?”

“I don’t know daddy, let me think.”

In a hand gesture, Sigurd asked his wife to give him his son to hold.

Hysing had about reached his first birthday. Alfrid bent down and put the toddler on the ground.

“Go to your father”, she whispered.

The toddler walked from his mother towards his father, not entirely assured yet but eager to try.

“I’ve found a name, daddy”, said Ingfrid, as Sigurd took her brother in his arms.

“What is it, darling ?”

“Faithful.”

“Faithful it will be, then.”

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Well that is cute, and no doubt he coild use some faithfulness
 
First Arc - Chapter 36 - April 873
Chapter XXXVI

April 873 – Nidaros, Norway

Everything until now had been but a preparation for this.

As the council was assembled, and his steward finished exposing his assessment’s of the realm’s finances, Sigurd rose his hand to signify his intention of speaking.

“Our coffers have recovered. The season is favourable. Fairhair still suffer from his wound and do not expect us to dare take the initiative. Now is the time to declare war on him”, he said.

Alfrid, Eskild and Hrodulfr expressed surprise. Ingibjörg had not been informed beforehand, but she wasn’t shocked. She knew Sigurd enough to expect this, and had not been blinded by a longing for peace like Alfrid had been. Hrolfr was unstirred.

All remained silent, and the chief continued.

“I kept silence on this until now to reduce the risk of rumours reaching Fairhair too soon. Hrolfr has been involved with me in preparing the coming campaign.”

“Isn’t attacking risky ?”, asked Eskild. “Haraldr will be able to call upon his jarls to join him in the war and they hold more land. Fighting on their lands would help them.”

“Trust me, chancellor, this is not a decision I take lightly. In war, having the initiative is extremely important. Merely reacting to a foe’s actions is the surest way to be defeated. Attacking improves greatly our odds.”

“Aren’t conquests difficult ?”

Sigurd paused for a moment to ponder how to best answer.

“Any war is difficult. It is costly in lives and silver. Some are more than others. When an army is waging war in one side of a realm, ambitious neighbours and rebellious nobles often take this as an opportunity to launch new wars. As the lands united under my banner are between the sea, the mountains and Haraldr’s lands, nobody can backstab us. Then… Then, it is very difficult to submit an entirely different people. What would you do if the Saxons united and attacked our lands in the name of their dead god on a stick ? Would you be happy laying down ? No, you wouldn’t. You wouldn’t want their awful traditions to suppress ours, you wouldn’t want their barbarian seed impregnating your daughter.”

Hrolfr nodded.

“Here, it is a matter between Norse”, went on the chief. “There are differences between our tribes, but we speak the same tongue and venerate the same Gods. When we defeat Fairhair on the battlefield, the tribes will switch their allegiance.”

“We need to make sure this war is sanctioned by the Gods”, said Ingibjörg.

“Yes, we will. Cattle will be sacrificed for Odin and we will consult the signs of fate.”

The signs will have to be favourable.

Alfrid was on the verge of tears. She foresaw the worst. Seeing this, Sigurd was mindful of appearing as strong and calm as possible. He had some doubts, but to reassure and inspire faith, he had to mask them.

“Hrodulfr, I already took some steps towards it, but you will have to make sure that our troops are correctly provisioned for when they will depart in a few days.”

“Yes, my liege.”

Sigurd ordered messengers to be sent across his lands to gather his warriors. All the aura he add accumulated by winning again and again was to be put to use to persuade men to join his cause, along promises of loot and glory. He needed the southern provinces to really give him what they had.

If he went against his rival with only a thousand men, like he had against Roald of Telemark, defeat was a certainty, as Fairhair’s personal demesne alone could muster that much men, those from his vassal tribes notwithstanding.

The general strategy to follow had been agreed upon with Hrolfr. The men would be gathered as quickly as possible, and transported through ships to Telemark. From there, Vestfold and Akhershus, the lands upon which Fairhair ruled directly, would be close. One or a few decisive victories before the northern tribes could come at his help, and the war could be won.

This was risky, as this plan left Sigurd’s own capital in Nidaros undefended – he didn’t have enough men to stall Hakon if he decided to go loot it rather than go to the help of Fairhair. Indeed, most rulers would not have taken such odds.

But there was no better path.

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