Certainly not the nearest of bows that I've seen, but definitely one that keeps the players warm!
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It was quite the shock to the system. Those two seconds of flight were definitely the longest two seconds I've experienced in my lifetime. There is the dread of the inevitable pain that's coming, and a strange inner peace that comes from the knowledge that there is nothing you can do about it, except to brace for impact. It wasn't my first traffic accident, I've had a few scrapes here and there over the years, but this one was definitely an entirely new experience. A career in acrobatics or stunts wouldn't be a very good fit with my desire to keep playing music for a long time to come. I feel like the speedskating I do every winter is already a bit on the limit. Long story short, I'd like to keep all my fingers, which is also why I never considered a woodworking or construction career, because I'm definitely clumsy enough to slice off at least one of my fingers if I were to make a job out of using table saws and angle grinders.Oh heavens above! That must have been very traumatic, though I’m glad the physical injuries were not too severe. Best of luck with the insurance process and hope that doesn’t drag on. In terms of the landing you described, it sounds like a second career in acrobatics, as a stuntman or paratrooper seems in order!
I had already planned out much of this instalment in 'Odinatsat's saga before the accident, at least all the main events and what their impact would be, but the detailed write-up was much delayed. Now that I've (mostly) resolved the cliffhangers from last episode, I think I'm going to take a break from the AAR for the next month or two to catch up on RL, further deal with Insurance, and further recharge that precious nervous energy.Looking forward to where RL and nervous energy levels allow you to get Odin, 11 et al going again, but till then I’ll try sending positive energy your way.
It got messy there in the end, and with such a complex web of motivations, loyalties, questionable actions on all sides, and significant amounts of targeted violence, it was clear that no one would get out of it squeaky clean. There is a method to the madness, at least to some of it, but I won't spoil where things go next, and the war's progression will likely also have at least some influence on the narrative. This whole murder case / spy thriller is definitely my most ambitious and complex narrative effort yet, and these episodes do take longer to write than some earlier ones where there were fewer moving pieces. Bringing together all those different characters in a way that makes sense, and moves the story forward in a useful direction can be tricky, but it's a fun challenge that's for sure.Certainly not the nearest of bows that I've seen, but definitely one that keeps the players warm!
Oh dear, such praise would be a very dangerous thing, especially for some suspect non-Russian copper. His veins should turn to ice!The US Minister Plenipotentiary has also been publicly praising the detective, and he hinted that he should be getting some kind of award or decoration for solving this tricky case so quickly. In British and American newspapers he is celebrated as the genius detective
A very elaborate bit of tradecraft. Such precautions can only mean …The extraction had happened without a hitch, in just a few minutes. To the casual observer, the lorry had simply passed behind the stationary train at a leisurely pace.
… yes, Eleven at least I expected. Lyadov is either very lucky or unlucky to be included. Probably the former, or he would have met Mr Makarov’s anti-traitor tool by now.Peeking through the window, we could see Major Goleniewsky and Lt. Lyadov hop out of the back of the lorry.
A very fine distinction!We’re not being held captive, we are guests, at the pleasure of Soviet state.
When was doing the right thing ever of itself a defence in the USSR? Poor Lyadov is a rather idealistic NKVD officer. Or at least, giving a good impression of being so.“So, what you’re saying is that, by doing the right thing, I’ve become a threat to state security? Does that mean, …”
I was thinking just that!He was a bit apprehensive, which is only natural, as Siberia does qualify as far away, after all.
A very comprehensive set of negations.“Of course, in the interest of state security: This meeting never happened, you were never here, I don’t exist, if I ever were to exist, we never met, this place doesn’t exist, and the relocation to Krasnodar was entirely on your own initiative. Understood?”
Wrong answer. Should have been “Did I hear a voice just then? No, it must have been my imagination.”“Yes sir.”
Was that a game event or narrative fun?“We made a deal with the Norwegians. Their government in exile gets to return to running Norway, well the part not in German hands, but Norway becomes a Federal Socialist Republic, severs ties with the Allies and joins the Comintern.
Now that really is bizarre. On more than one level.Upon his death, the Norwegian Politburo will vote his successor amongst his siblings, his children, and the children of his siblings.
Quite.Seems like a bit of a mess. A ceremonial king in all but name in a Federal Socialist Republic.
You mean, like us reading Odin’s account? Hope he keeps his journals secure, and doesn’t post them on publicly available chat forums!more likely that someone, somewhere, who was following the case, might have figured out that something like the Secret Committee exists
I suspect being guilty of “treason, incompetence, and negligence” would cause replacement of a large amount of their brain with nothin via a 9mm round.the latter would end in the replacement of most of the Leningrad NKVD state security directorate brass for treason, incompetence, and negligence
Oh, either very ruthless, or they were informed beforehand, made their escape by other means, and the ‘bodies‘ will conveniently never be found.I built the explosive device that took out that boat with materials Sergei sourced from his job, and had some naval infantry divers place it on the bottom of the hull last night. On board of that boat were eight Americans. The skipper, and the seven OSS commandos who took part in the operation in Metallostroy.
Bet he wasn’t on it. Markkur is indestructible.Oh, and the aeroplane crash that you were called about about ten minutes ago. That was General Markkur’s aeroplane, and yes, I was responsible for that too, even though the initial investigation will find a mechanical failure in the starboard engine’s fuel pump to be the cause of the accident.
My question too.I’m curious, ‘Shest’. Was General Markkur actually on board his plane when it crashed?
Ah ha! Markkur lives on (as does our old friend in our heartsWe haven’t identified all of the victims yet, but none of them was wearing a General’s uniform or fits his general build.
Art imitates RL.I need a break to take care of myself and to spend time with Sergei. My leg is rapidly getting better, with some targeted training, I think I can be back to at least 80% in a few weeks.
Salute, Comrade General.General Markkur remains untouchable (short of another freak accident).
A lucky escape, but fair enough.Inspector Rozïtis will be sent back to Riga, promoted out of the way, where he can go back to solving everyday homicides.
“Replaced”. How ominous.Captain Bekhterev, Major Borisov, and Commissioner Kubatin won’t be so lucky. One by one, they will be replaced over the coming months
Ouch.Borisov will have never existed.
За здоровье! [za zda-ró-vye]!I hope you'll raise your glasses with us and savour the moment
Enjoy the break - glad you didn’t injure anything musical in the accident!I'm going to take a break from the AAR for the next month or two to catch up on RL
Had I structured XI's narrative, this was the second part of a longer season finale, with the previous more action-packed narrative as the first part. 'Odinatsat' will return in the next season of 'The Committee'.Ah, thanks for the ‘season ending episode and epilogue’!
A very elaborate bit of tradecraft. Such precautions can only mean …
I could have just have written an XI interrogation, but putting Lyadov in the mix just added a bit of extra spice to the whole thing, not to mention the contrast between their personalities. They did have very little 'screentime' where they were actually interacting up to this latest episode. I'm glad that wasn't too predictable as some had already suggested bringing those too together to 'resolve' the case.… yes, Eleven at least I expected. Lyadov is either very lucky or unlucky to be included. Probably the former, or he would have met Mr Makarov’s anti-traitor tool by now.
Probably a bit of both. If you are believed to be at your core a naive idealist you avoid a certain amount of suspicion, and many people are more likely to underestimate you when it really counts. I'm not in his head, but I would assume he's less idealistic and naive than he lets on, but still more so than all of the other characters.When was doing the right thing ever of itself a defence in the USSR? Poor Lyadov is a rather idealistic NKVD officer. Or at least, giving a good impression of being so.![]()
In these circumstances you have be sure that nothing was left not unsaid.A very comprehensive set of negations.
I fear that Lyadov, in such a stressful and very serious (tohim) situation, would not have come-upwithsuch a witty response, that's more 'Odinatsat's style.Wrong answer. Should have been “Did I hear a voice just then? No, it must have been my imagination.”![]()
This happened in-game. Basically at some point there was a US-funded uprising in a coastal province just south of Narvik. I sent in the paratroopers to contain it by grabbing the surrounding provinces, and that was that. Except that when I reloaded my save at the next play session I got the game message: "Norway is now a puppet of the Comintern. We have installed a loyal Federal Sosialist Repubilc government in Oslo." I did not trigger the creation of a Norwegian Puppet, so either soemthing happened with the save file, or the USAI triggered the liberation of Norway but because the Soviet Union controls all of the VPs, it ended up forming a Communist state with non-communist leadership. The weirdest part is that Communist Norway's government is the same government that was in exile, king Haakon included. I'll share screenshots in the next 10-day report.Was that a game event or narrative fun?
Haha. I did explain in the beginning that this account would only be revealed once Communism achieved world victory, or at least when 'Odin' was dead. That was the intent by 'Odin' but I haven't actually decided whether the journals will end up being leaked before their time or not.You mean, like us reading Odin’s account? Hope he keeps his journals secure, and doesn’t post them on publicly available chat forums!![]()
I'm not sure whether that is better or worse than freezing your testicles off for the rest of your career in some permanently frozen outpost in Northern Kamchatka.I suspect being guilty of “treason, incompetence, and negligence” would cause replacement of a large amount of their brain with nothin via a 9mm round.![]()
If this were to be the case, 'Odinatsat' will be brought back in immediately and kept in captivity until she can conclusively prove that they didn't get the information from her, even tangentially. I'm pretty sure she knows that. So, would she go so far as to confidently walk into one of our compounds to clear her name when one phone-call from 'Shest's contacts in Leningrad could see her thrown into a hole indefinitely? Maybe. There willbe no spoilers.Oh, either very ruthless, or they were informed beforehand, made their escape by other means, and the ‘bodies‘ will conveniently never be found.
Bet he wasn’t on it. Markkur is indestructible.
Of course there is the implication here that XI might have strongly suspected, or even known, that he wasn't going to be on his plane. Maybe she even told him to take his car? Who's to say? The relationship between 'Odinatsat' and the General remains unclear, it's in both their interests to not elaborate, but there has to be some mutual respect and admiration by this point even though they are often adversaries.Ah ha! Markkur lives on (as does our old friend in our hearts)
Funny how that happens. I guess we both went through a traumatic experience... even if my accident doesn't compare to some murderer targeting people around you whilst slowly unravelling your secrets.Art imitates RL.
The Inspector was a tricky one. It would have been easier to just use the Makarov solution, but he is a very good detective after all, and his skills remain very useful. As long as he behaves himself... I might also have some plans for him later in the narrative, I hope his so-called 'escape' wasn't too out of character.A lucky escape, but fair enough.
Likewise.За здоровье! [za zda-ró-vye]!
A good 40-odd people are also glad about that one as I played three concerts last month. Two of them were of a symphonic orchestra project we had been working on since the beginning of the schoolyear, and I was 1st chair so the entire cello and bass sections relied on me quite q bit. I even played a concert one week after the accident. Considering I was hopped up on pain-killers and anti-inflammatory drugs, I did rather well. Barely anyone knew I'd had the accident, and no-one noticed anything substantially different about my playing. Some noticed I was limping slightly when going off the stage, and that was about it. Had I broken even one finger, I wouldn't have been able to play.Enjoy the break - glad you didn’t injure anything musical in the accident!
This is one of the least accurate sentences ever spoken.Everyone gets their due in the Soviet Union, exactly what that is is not something you need to know.”
As is this. Innocence is no defence in the Soviet Union.“There is no need to worry Lieutenant. You did nothing wrong,
Ah Paradox, you do love taunting us with these ridiculous configurations. I think you have made the best of a bad job with this solution.“Seems like a bit of a mess. A ceremonial king in all but name in a Federal Socialist Republic.
No just execute her for treason, that is the Soviet way.“Maybe we can at least hear her out before we decide to execute her for treason?”
That's definitely true, but if you actually said that to Lyadov, if you planned on letting him live, you might make him question his loyalty to the Soviet Union, which you definitely want to avoid.Innocence is no defence in the Soviet Union.
I did what I could. I'm glad the king of writing up Paradox's ridiculous configurations approves.Ah Paradox, you do love taunting us with these ridiculous configurations. I think you have made the best of a bad job with this solution.
You are right. Where 'Odinatsat' is concerned, 'Shest' and 'Odin' have gone a bit soft. 'Odin' sees in her the daughter he never had, and 'Shest' still has romantic feelings for her, which is why he can get so emotional where she is concerned, while he's otherwise quite the cool cucumber. They both went into that interview looking for a reason not to execute her. They are definitely skating on thin ice, and if this decision comes back to bite them, the Committee members already don't exist, so making them disappear would be a piece of cake.No just execute her for treason, that is the Soviet way.
I must respectfully disagree with Odin and Shest, it was a terrible mistake letting Odinstatr go free as she is absolutely was guilty of treason even if she did her best to make up for it, which she botched as Markkur got away. Even if you believe her story, and frankly I am less than convinced, it is too risky to leave her alive as you can't ever really trust her again.
Overall I worry they are going a bit soft. I mean I assumed that when Lyadov climbed into the lorry he'd get a shot in the back of the head, but no he is actually being put on a train. And not even a train to a Siberian gulag but to the sunny shores of the Black Sea. For a group that claims to be Stalin's Secret Committee they aren't being very Stalin-esque in their behaviour, I doubt 'The Boss' would approve.
Thanks for the compliment, it means a lot. You are, of course, free to disagree with any of the characters, I see it as a good thing that they don't always act the way the readAAR, or even I myself would in the same situation. Of course, the danger is to have characters act entirely out of character, with no reasonable explanation for this exception, in order to drive the plot. It's a delicate balance to strike. Your feedback, and that of the other readAARs is valuable in that regard as it does shine a different light on them. My narrative is very character driven. Varied views on their personalities, their strengths, their weaknesses, all feed into my own understanding of them, my own mental models of them.Just realised I should also say, a fine conclusion to a gripping and complex plot. Just because I disagree with the actions of some of the characters should not be taken as any criticism of the excellent of the writing.![]()
It was indeed a shameful display of laxism for a totalitarian Soviet State.All I see is a lot of treason, and no one getting shot! This is no way to run a Soviet state.
Is it really a Soviet negotiation if vodka isn't consumed in large amounts? I would have expected nothing less.The Norwegians must have consumed rather large amounts of vodka during the negotiations, and the same applies to our negotiators. I'm not sure Stalin will be too pleased to hear the King is now running a state that is socialist in name only!
Typical lack of invasion follow up. At least a corps strength lodgement plus reinforcement was needed.It doesn't look like the British have brought in any additional reinforcements beyond the Motorised Division spotted some time ago which is now being pushed back on the Peloponesse.
Hope nothing has happened to him. Unless it was the episode with 11.stand in for 'Shest' who has not been in touch for the last two days.
Having done this once upon a time (ie commanded a tank) you really can’t efficiently do both at once. Even more so if you are a platoon leader. But they should have been able to do all of it with four people (not sure of the internal T34 layout as to why you couldn’t have a loader/operator). No wonder they were getting so many destroyed!made for a better division of labour as the tank commander could now concentrate on commanding the tank instead of having to also moonlight as a gunner.
Better 58 that have a chance of doing something than 77 that only irritate your opponent! They’d be lucky to ever fire off 58 without getting brewed up anyway.The T-34/85 presents a larger target. Only 58 85mm rounds can be carried compared to the 77 72,6mm rounds of the regular T-34.
It will do so rather slowly for the next month or two, but it will continue. I don't know what my schedule will look like starting in September but it's likely to be rather busy, so don't expect weekly updates anytime soon... I've started working (a little) on the graphics for the new GPW reporting format. That will probably be the next update or three. I can't really put a date on that right now, but progress is being made.Good update! Glad to see that the AAR continues!
This is what STAVKA is hoping for actually. As preparations continue for the liberation of the Balkans and Greece, we would rather avoid the complications of ending the war with a Communist Northern Greece and a Capitalist Imperialist Southern Greece. The port & Air Base in Athens will also help to ship in sufficient supplies and reinforcements and to provide air support to the new front.Typical lack of invasion follow up. At least a corps strength lodgement plus reinforcement was needed.
It's definitely unlike him to vanish in such an unannounced way.Hope nothing has happened to him. Unless it was the episode with 11.
Thanks for sharing your real life experience to emphasise how important this change to the crew is. The internal layout of the T-34 has the driver and the front MG gunner/radio operator sitting in the hull in front of the turret with the commander, gunner (or both) and loader in the turret. The driver sits on the left and he has a hatch right in front of him which is opened when not in combat. The MG gunner on the right has a forward-facing hull mounted MG in front of him, as you can see on this frontal cutaway of a T-34 model 1942 (not the -85):Having done this once upon a time (ie commanded a tank) you really can’t efficiently do both at once. Even more so if you are a platoon leader. But they should have been able to do all of it with four people (not sure of the internal T34 layout as to why you couldn’t have a loader/operator). No wonder they were getting so many destroyed!
Makes sense to me, especially when the aim is to fight other armoured vehicles.Better 58 that have a chance of doing something than 77 that only irritate your opponent! They’d be lucky to ever fire off 58 without getting brewed up anyway.
Slightly ominous from Shest there. I wonder if this may be explored further in any future narrative chapters?It's definitely unlike him to vanish in such an unannounced way.
That last part is the crux of it. As I understand it the original T-34 was supposed to do a range of jobs, it was the replacement for the BT-series fast tanks and the T-26 and T-28 infantry tanks. So it's theoretical doctrinal job was supporting the infantry as well as fighting other tanks, indeed the former was seen as more important from what I can see. From a quick search it looks like the typical load was supposed to be 55 HE shells and only 20 Armour Piercing ones, so at least in theory the main aim was lobbing HE at enemy machine gun nests, strong points and any other non-tank target the infantry was struggling with. And of course shooting up enemy AT-guns and similar before they could shoot back.Makes sense to me, especially when the aim is to fight other armoured vehicles.
Interesting info. My own view is having to provide an extra crewman to every tank in the inventory is hardly justified by having a hull mounted MG. A coax MG should be sufficient and one mounted on a turret ring if necessary, it’s really all about servicing the main armament. If you’re worried about infantry, give the extra man and MG saved to the panzer grenadiers who should be accompanying the tanks.It will do so rather slowly for the next month or two, but it will continue. I don't know what my schedule will look like starting in September but it's likely to be rather busy, so don't expect weekly updates anytime soon... I've started working (a little) on the graphics for the new GPW reporting format. That will probably be the next update or three. I can't really put a date on that right now, but progress is being made.
This is what STAVKA is hoping for actually. As preparations continue for the liberation of the Balkans and Greece, we would rather avoid the complications of ending the war with a Communist Northern Greece and a Capitalist Imperialist Southern Greece. The port & Air Base in Athens will also help to ship in sufficient supplies and reinforcements and to provide air support to the new front.
It's definitely unlike him to vanish in such an unannounced way.
Thanks for sharing your real life experience to emphasise how important this change to the crew is. The internal layout of the T-34 has the driver and the front MG gunner/radio operator sitting in the hull in front of the turret with the commander, gunner (or both) and loader in the turret. The driver sits on the left and he has a hatch right in front of him which is opened when not in combat. The MG gunner on the right has a forward-facing hull mounted MG in front of him, as you can see on this frontal cutaway of a T-34 model 1942 (not the -85):
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In the -85 variant there is a radio in the turret so they could have a loader/operator, but then they still need someone to man the front MG (DP-27). They did often have a coaxial LMG (Usually a 7,62mm DP-27) mounted on top of the turret though I have seen pictures of T-34s in action without an MG on top and some even had a 12,7mm DShK. Post-war Chinese variants had both a DShK and a DP-27 on top of the turret as standard, but they did not do away with the hull-mounted MG.
Makes sense to me, especially when the aim is to fight other armoured vehicles.
PerhapsSlightly ominous from Shest there. I wonder if this may be explored further in any future narrative chapters?
You're not going to run into enemy tanks every day, but when you do you need to be able to do something about it, and fast...That last part is the crux of it. As I understand it the original T-34 was supposed to do a range of jobs, it was the replacement for the BT-series fast tanks and the T-26 and T-28 infantry tanks. So it's theoretical doctrinal job was supporting the infantry as well as fighting other tanks, indeed the former was seen as more important from what I can see. From a quick search it looks like the typical load was supposed to be 55 HE shells and only 20 Armour Piercing ones, so at least in theory the main aim was lobbing HE at enemy machine gun nests, strong points and any other non-tank target the infantry was struggling with. And of course shooting up enemy AT-guns and similar before they could shoot back.
Of course killing tanks was still an important part of their role, so the 85mm upgrade had to happen to deal with up-armoured Germans. But I believe the loads out remained mostly HE even after the change as that was mostly what was needed and, as Bullfilter says, in reality in a tank-vs-tank battle you are not going to have the time to fire off that many AP rounds before you've either won or lost!
Interesting info. My own view is having to provide an extra crewman to every tank in the inventory is hardly justified by having a hull mounted MG. A coax MG should be sufficient and one mounted on a turret ring if necessary, it’s really all about servicing the main armament. If you’re worried about infantry, give the extra man and MG saved to the panzer grenadiers who should be accompanying the tanks.
To be fair the T-34-85 did allow for the Commander to have his own radio in the turret, potentially rendering the 'radio operator' into a humble Machine-Gunner. While the T-34 is sub-optimal in it's number of crew, it still is a marked improvement over what came before it:I always wondered why a dedicated radioman in a tank was necessary: the person who needs to be on the platoon/company net is the commander, whereas that position is otherwise unnecessary, as Bullfilter points out. Heck, eliminate that position in four tanks, and you can have a whole extra tank in the platoon!
You are misunderstanding Soviet technology comrade. The mighty Soviet Union does not use the pitiful small radios of the decadent West, the radio of the T-34 is a large, strong bulky item that requires massive training and both hands to use, only a true Stakhanovite New Soviet Man can use such an item!I always wondered why a dedicated radioman in a tank was necessary: the person who needs to be on the platoon/company net is the commander, whereas that position is otherwise unnecessary, as Bullfilter points out. Heck, eliminate that position in four tanks, and you can have a whole extra tank in the platoon!
No British radios in TTL because those Limeys don't want to give us Lend-Lease aid.Though on the wider point, by mid 1943 the People's Commissar of Tank Production is complaining only 50% of tanks have radios and has a 'plan' to fix it - which is fitting British No.19 radios as the Soviets just can't build enough themselves. There are also a lot of sources that state many units just had radios for the platoon and company commanders at the start of the war, with the rest 'fitted for but not with' radios.
This does raise the question what a radio operator does when his tank has no radio? The answer of course is "He operates the semaphore flags", which the tank was fitted with and instructions for which remained in the Red Army field manual until late 1944.
Imagine getting recruited to serve as a radio operator and the majority of your three weeks of training is about waving flags around... and then you get sent to the front in a cramped T-34 with no radio. A true 'guess I'll just die' moment.Semaphore flags on the then-modern battlefield: hang on, we need to stop the tank so Ivan can jump out and wave his arms a bit... Suuuuuure no problem, don't mind becoming a target for literally every infantryman on the field...
Probably. There is the issue that the US is providing Lend-Lease to the British as well, and one wonders how they decide who gets how much aid.The Americans keep reducing the LL allocation. I wonder if that has anything to do with any exploding aircraft and boats or the mysteriously disappearing spy of theirs.... nah, probably just a coincidence.
Wait and see...I do hope there is an innocent explanation to Shest disappearing in the midst of all this excitement and treason...