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Mina's handler seems to have a very "shoot first, then shoot again" approach to his job. Not very surprising, since he's military intelligence tasked with fighting the 'enemies' of his nation. However I can't imagine his methods evoke much personal loyalty or appreciation amongst his agents.
Shoot first, then shoot again. This reminds me very strongly of Chapter 13 of this very story... but we're not there yet. ;)

Mina's insistence in a more lawful trial for those working at Canaveral is both inspiring and surprising.
Mina isn't a monster. Considering her background, it's starting to seem like she was never cut out for the spy life and was simply forced into the occupation by MCS. Her lack of aptitude for espionage could explain Dasra's need to keep her on a short leash.

I can't imagine what Freya must've done to make the Partogans act in such a rash and un-diplomatic manner.
Well, let's assume I am still using the 1961 Berlin Crisis as the inspiration for this setting. ;) In that situation, it's likely Freya may have gotten into trouble while attempting to cross the border into a portion of the city not controlled by the United Nations of Earth. (The UN's share of the city is the smallest. Most of Rotorua is still split between Hiigarans and Partogans)

Something similar happened to a US Diplomat named Allan Lightner in 1961. He wanted to see an opera in East Berlin and refused to show his passport to the East German border guards. One thing led to another, and after a few days there were a dozen American tanks sitting on the border, staring down an equal number of Soviet tanks.
 
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Now we're entering the final act. This is where things get interesting.

The rules of this self-imposed writing challenge say the story must end at Chapter 14 and that individual chapters cannot be longer than 1200 words. Time management has become a real issue now. I spent so much time on worldbuilding that the climax and finale are now going to be pretty seriously compressed. I'm worried this'll make the ending seem rushed, but we'll see how it shakes out.



It was the first time Mina and Kiri ever got into a fight. And even then, they had to disguise it under the veil of some other activity to avoid getting spotted.

At the time, the whole city of Rotorua was in an uproar over the arrest of the Human Ambassador, Freya Kinsella. In the Partogan part of the city, the Kealoha Detention Center was the scene of incredible tension. Hundreds of Humans gathered outside of the prison, demanding the release of their Ambassador. Perhaps realizing the potential for violence, the Condominium government dispatched uniformed officers wearing riot gear formed to the scene. They formed a line in front of the prison, all while brandishing non-lethal weapons.

Unfortunately, a small number of agitators were mixed into the crowd of angry Humans. Covering their clan tattoos and wearing their hair down to conceal their pointy ears, Hiigaran MCS agents seized the opportunity to drive a wedge between the Humans and their former allies. Mina was embedded in the crowd, pretending to be a Human like her fellow agents.

“The Half-Breed betrayed us!” Mina screamed at the top of her voice. She used a Human Supremacist slur to refer to the Commonwealth Queen.

To her disgust, she spotted Kiri nearby. He, along with several DIA agents, was pretending to be a bystander, watching the scene play out from behind a wall of police officers.

At that moment, Mina felt a hand on her shoulder. It was her handler, Dasra Naabal-Sa.

“That woman over there with the blond hair.” He said, pointing with one hand. “Intel says she was at Canaveral. Grab her and take her to Ambush Alley.”

Mina glanced over at a middle-aged Human woman, who was too busy protesting to notice someone looking at her. Mina recognized her right away.

“No. Absolutely not.” Mina replied. “I remember her. She worked in sanitation. Hear me? She was a janitor. Leave her alone.”

There was a moment’s pause, and then, out of the corner of her eye, Mina spotted Dasra’s fist. He punched Mina in the face, knocking her to the pavement! The atmosphere around the protest changed at once. People panicked and screamed at the sudden violence. Mina tried to scramble to her feet, and that was when it happened.

Dozens of protesters were so busy helping Mina to her feet that they did not notice Dasra. He walked across the road and tapped the Human woman on the shoulder.

“Excuse me,” Dasra said. “You look familiar. Were you at Cape Canaveral?”

The Human replied nonchalantly:

“Yeah, I was a janitor. Laid down as soon as the shooting started and just waited for someone to capture me. I regret everything now. I wish I never got wrapped up in the Paradox’s plot.”

The woman looked like she was going to say something else, but she never got the chance. Dasra drew a laser pistol, grabbed the woman, and started to drag her toward a crowd of Hiigarans.

Chaos erupted instantly. People ran in all directions, screaming. Condominium police swarmed into the protest, detaining any person they could reach. The mass protest descended into a chaotic street brawl.

The violence spilled into other parts of the city. Civilians began to riot. Storefronts were smashed and looting was widespread. Order would have broken down entirely if not for the timely arrival of soldiers from all three Galactic Superpowers. Fortunately, the soldiers concentrated their efforts on the out-of-control riot and not each other.

In the middle of the city-wide riot, Kiri somehow managed to find Mina. Or rather, he tracked her down. He caught Mina while she was trying to return to the Cosmic Garden. She was forced to take a shortcut through Ambush Alley, and was about halfway through the treacherous lane when she heard Kiri coming. Mina whirled around, drew her laser pistol, and fired a warning shot into the air.

The red light from her weapon illuminated the alley and gave away Kiri’s position.

“Stay back!” Mina shouted. “I told you to leave me alone!”

“I thought you were in trouble.” Kiri responded. “I wanted to help!”

Mina leveled her pistol and fired another blast. This time the beam sailed about twenty feet above Kiri’s head, cutting a clothesline strung between two buildings.

“Do I look like I need help!?” Mina shrieked. “You did you even see my message!? I needed some space! You broke my trust! Screw you!”

Mina fired a third warning shot, this one just ten feet above Kiri’s head. He kept his hands raised and did not move.

“Why’d you come to the Garden!?” Mina’s voice wavered. “You could have been spotted, you could have been killed! And it would have been my fault!”

“Absolutely not.” Kiri replied. “The fault would have been mine. From what I’ve seen, what I’ve learned about you, you haven’t done anything wrong. Not now or back then.”

Slowly, Kiri reached over and tapped his right forearm.

“This was not your fault, neither was anything that happened because of it.”

Mina’s eyes went wide and she lowered her weapon.

“How do you know?” She breathed.

“The same way you learned how my family abandoned me.” Kiri said, shrugging. “It’s part of the espionage business to find other people’s secrets. My DIA comrades were expecting your tattoo to have some complicated and profound meaning, but I guessed the simple answer might be the correct one.”

Kiri took a step forward.

“I did a recon mission to your base to get more info. Then I solved the puzzle. So tell me if I’m wrong: Your real name is Mina Manaan. You were born right here on Hokianga, in the Hiigaran part of the city. Twelve years ago, you were kidnapped by the Human military and taken to Earth. You were a captive for two years, only known as Subject Two-One-Four. You were tested for Psionic Sensitivity and then transferred to Cape Canaveral. You were there on the day of the big rescue. You saw everything. The Hiigaran MCS scooped you up after the rescue by having two agents pose as your parents. They tricked the Stormbreakers into handing you over. Now MCS is using you to positively I.D. Humans marked for extrajudicial killing. You’re not comfortable or happy with that assignment, but you don’t weren’t given a choice in the matter. Am I wrong?”

Mina dropped her gun; she was shaking.

“No.” She breathed. “That’s all true. You must hate me now… My life’s a wreck, I get people killed, and I’m like three different types of damaged goods. No one could love me knowing all that.”

“I do.” Kiri replied. “I did. I still do, and I will love you, Mina.”

“Really?” Mina asked. “You’re not just saying that? You know how often people say they like me just because they wanna get something from me? I hate that!”

Mina and Kiri finally came together and embraced.

“I’m sorry.” They both said at the same time.

And then a third voice spoke:

“Yeah… We’re sorry too.”

Ayaan Soban and Tuterangi Patariki stared at one another, dumbfounded. Each agent lowered their weapons and addressed their love-struck comrade:

“It’s over. Time to go.”
 
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Dasra would greatly benefit from both tact and a conscience. In what way does killing a former janitor advance Hiigarian national interests?

I'm happy Kira and Mina found common ground. Maybe their relationship (now busted to their respective comrades) can inspire the agents to shift their attitudes away from all the warmongering.
 
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Dasra would greatly benefit from both tact and a conscience. In what way does killing a former janitor advance Hiigarian national interests?
In the eyes of the Kiith Council, the Kennedy Space Center Janitor and Akira Robinson are equally guilty of "Crimes Against Sentient Life" and must receive similar punishments.

I'm happy Kira and Mina found common ground. Maybe their relationship (now busted to their respective comrades) can inspire the agents to shift their attitudes away from all the warmongering.
Kiri and Mina are not Romeo and Juliet, but Kiri is aware of the story. He would strongly prefer to be alive for the whole "rival families reconcile" part.
 
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Kiri and Mina were terrified they were going to be shot and killed at any moment. Yet death did not come.

The foursome departed Ambush Alley and Tuterangi led the way. The city was being locked down by Condominium law enforcement, and the number of looters on the streets was declining.

Tuterangi opened a doorway that led into a used furniture shop. Kiri knew it was a front, and that down in the basement was the entrance to a DIA tunnel network that spanned most of the city. Tuterangi, Ayaan, Mina, and Kiri entered the Partogan tunnel network. Kiri felt his blood run cold. If he and Mina were killed down here, the sound would go nowhere. No one would ever know what happened.

Tuterangi and Ayaan put their weapons on the ground and sat down, heads in hands. Mina and Kiri held each other, frightened they were still going to be killed at any moment.

“You’re in deep shit too, huh?” Ayaan said.

“You’ve no idea.” Tuterangi replied. “I should have killed all three of you as soon as I saw you.”

“Same here.” Ayaan replied. “MCS leadership is going to explode when they find out what’s going on here.”

He looked up at the couple.

“Mina… I’m so sorry. Kiith Soban is probably going to order your death, assuming MCS or the Kiith Council doesn’t do it first. There’s nothing I can do.” Ayaan said

“Kiri… you’re in bed with an enemy spy.” Tuterangi added. “You’re looking at a really long prison sentence. You could get nineteen days in Whakaari Prison for this. Maybe a full three weeks if the Queen really wants you to suffer.”

Kiri’s legs shook and he fell to his knees. Three weeks in Whakaari Prison was a fate worse than death. Just three days in that hellhole was enough to reduce a person to a shadow of their former self. Mina grabbed his shoulders and held him steady.

“Why don’t you just kill us both then?” Mina spat.

“Nah.” Ayaan waved his hand. “I saw you at the Tree of Life Sapling. Honestly, I was cheering for you. I just thought this guy was a civilian, though. Wasn’t expecting you to be DIA, honestly.”

“Also, if we just waste you here and now, it’ll cause more problems than it’ll solve.” Tuterangi chimed in. “DIA will launch a full investigation. Everything will come to light.”

The group sat in silence for a few minutes. Quite simply, no one knew what to do. Finally, Ayaan spoke.

“MCS is really strict, and the handlers keep us all on short leashes.” He said. “It’s only a matter of time before Mina gets found out. Not to mention, Dasra Naabal-Sa is already really angry with her because she’s refusing to ID criminals from Canaveral.”

“That’s because you’re killing them indiscriminately!” Mina snapped.

Ayaan rolled his eyes.

“Anyone loyal to the Paradox is marked for death. That’s the law.” Ayaan said. “Honestly Mina, if MCS doesn’t execute you, then the Kiith Council is going to put you on trial for treason. No matter how this plays out, your life in the Hiigaran Empire is over…”

Ayaan trailed off. He looked at Kiri, then at Tuterangi.

“Hold on.” Ayaan said. “I’ve heard some really awful things about that Partogan prison. Kiri, what kind of future will you have if you do time there?”

“None at all.” Kiri and Tuterangi said together.

“I’ll be a vegetable.” Kiri said. “It only takes a few days for a Whakaari inmate to become a drooling moron, incapable of thinking or understanding the world around them. Three weeks… there won’t be much left.”

Mina got down on her knees and hugged Kiri.

“I don’t wanna live without you.” Kiri breathed.

“You’re the only person in the Galaxy who cares about me.” Mina replied. “Even the Canaveral rescuers forgot about me. I don’t wanna die alone.”

For a few more minutes, the group sat in silence. Mina and Kiri were despairing. Tuterangi and Ayaan were lost for words. Finally, Kiri spoke.

“What’ll happen to you two?”

“I can try to cover my tracks.” Tuterangi said. “Make it look like I never ran across the three of you. I have a lot of resources in my safehouse and DIA doesn’t ask questions about stuff like this. What about you?”

“I’m cutting it really close.” Ayaan explained. “I’m under orders to drag Mina back to our base. So I need to bring you to the Cosmic Garden tonight or else have a really, really good explanation for why I can’t do that.”

Ayaan looked at Mina.

“At this point, the initiative is with you.” He concluded. “My counterpart and I over here, I think we’ve got an unspoken agreement to give you both a head start at this point.”

Mina and Kiri looked up.

“Head start for what?” Mina asked.

“To run.” Kiri finished. “Run somewhere MCS and DIA can’t touch us.”

The tunnel was silent.

Finally, after nearly five painful minutes, Ayaan picked up his pistol and said:

“I’m not going to help you. But I’m also not going to stop you. If you get killed in the attempt, I’ll tell MCS I pulled the trigger. If you get away, I’ll say you outsmarted me. Either way, your secret is safe.”

Ayaan Soban nodded once to everyone and then left the tunnel, going up into the shop and back out onto the street. It was Tuterangi’s turn.

“Come to my safehouse in the Industrial District.” He said. “I can’t give you much, but I can give you money, a car, and some gear. Do not, under any circumstances, tell me where you’re going.”

Mina and Kiri were left alone in the tunnel to gather their thoughts. Once they found their resolve, they started listing off interstellar nations who had an embassy in Rotorua City:

Kelta. Assuria. Scyldaria. Taiidan. Tonaris. Micanawn. Kel-Azak. Amadiio. Blorg. Earth.

All Kiri and Mina had to do was get inside the grounds of an embassy and request asylum. Then they would be safe.

Getting there, however, would be more than half the battle.
 
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There was no going back.

When Kiri and Mina arrived at Tuterangi’s safehouse, he was already preparing to vacate the space.

“This is the only way I can help you without getting burned in return.” Tuterangi said. “After this, I’m going to disavow you both completely. We never met. We don’t know anything about each other and if you try to say otherwise, I’ll make you out to be liars.”

Tuterangi handed over a map of the city, updated with the locations of Commonwealth and Hiigaran military checkpoints. He also gave the couple an electric car with a spare battery, a plasma pistol with the serial number filed off, and the left arm of a Wraith Suit.

“What the hell?” Mina said, looking at the arm. “Why just one arm?”

The Wraith Suit is a type of lightweight power armor used by the Human military. As the name implies, it was supposed to cover the entire body, and not just one extremity. Tuterangi tapped a bulge on one side of the armored gauntlet.

“The UN Army Wraith Suit has a grappling hook launcher built into the left arm.” Tuterangi said. “I can’t give you the whole suit, but I can give you the grappling hook. It might help.”

Kiri and Mina placed the grappling hook in the backseat of the car, under a blanket. The pistol was tucked into Kiri’s waistband. All three of them vacated the safehouse and parted ways. The couple drove away while Tuterangi walked in the opposite direction without saying goodbye.

Once all three of them were well away from the scene, an explosion destroyed Tuterangi’s safehouse. Firefighters dispatched from the city doused the flames and were alarmed to find the telltale reside of X-4 plastic explosives on the scene. Both Human and Partogan military forces used this type of bomb, so the mystery of who blew up the building would have to go unsolved for now…



Kiri and Mina drove to a library in the Reptilian Quarter. They asked the librarian, a sluggish old Kelt, for a private study room. Inside of it, Kiri and Mina had access to both a television and a public computer. Mina turned on the TV and pulled up a news story.

“The political situation is getting worse.” She said. “My people just announced they’re going to build a wall around their portion of the city. If we’re going to run for an embassy, we need to do it in the next few hours.”

On the screen, Kiri saw Hiigaran soldiers erecting barbed-wire barricades around the perimeter of the Hiigaran District. Military-grade shipping crates were stacked nearby, and a few were already open, revealing all of the components needed to construct a Laser Deterrent Fence. Kiri frowned and turned to the computer. He connected to the city internet and started looking for information.

“Where are we going to go?” Kiri said. “No matter what, as soon as we burst into an Embassy begging for asylum, they’re going to ask questions. They’ll figure out we’re spies on the run.”

Mina reached over to the keyboard and punched in the address of the Galactic Council’s local website. The couple looked over a list of spacefaring nations and started to compare notes.

“The Kel-Azan Republic?” Kiri suggested.

“No.” Mina replied. “MCS intel says they’re Democratic Crusaders. You come from an authoritarian state and Hiigara is an Oligarchy. We won’t be welcome there. Scyldaria?”

“They have an extradition treaty with the Commonwealth.” Kiri countered. “Blorg?”

“Have you ever been in the same room as a Blorg? No way.” Mina said. “Tobari Empire?”

“The Tobari border is closed. No refugees, no asylum.” Kiri said. “What about the Taiidan Republic?”

“They’re basically a Hiigaran satellite state these days.” Mina replied. “Taiidan would hand me over to Assam Kiith’sid if they knew I was there. Could we go to the Micore Empire?”

“No, they’re a member of the Triple Alliance.” Kiri said, referencing a Partogan-led political bloc. “That comes with automatic extradition. At this rate, we may as well ask the Hiigaran Syndicate if they’re recruiting.”

“I don’t think I’d make a good space pirate.” Mina laughed. “And don’t forget, once DIA and MCS finds out we ran away, they’ll send people to find us.”

Mina shuddered.

“And let’s be honest… if the Kiith Council can’t prosecute me, they absolutely will order my death. We’ve got to go somewhere Sobanni assassins can’t reach me.”

Mina’s eyes lingered on the screen; Kiri was reading the same block of text:

United Nations of Earth
Capital City: Berlin, Earth
Government: United Nations General Assembly
Leader: Secretary-General Blake Robinson
Ambassador to your planet: Deputy Secretary-General-elect Freya Kinsella


“The Robinson administration is open to refugees, they won’t extradite to Hiigara or Aoraki, the Truth Commission is still active, and if the Hiigarans do send someone after you, they’ll have to go through the Reclamation Agency first.” Kiri said.

“We have to get to Earth before that.” Mina said. “The Human Embassy is in Tripoint Park. We’ve gotta blow past both my people and yours. How can we do that?”

Mina and Kiri unfolded their map of Rotorua. For a few moments, they were stumped. Then Kiri spotted something. He pointed at Tripoint Park on the map.

“Look!” He said. “The Emporium!”

He pointed out the shopping center being constructed next to the Partogan Embassy. Mina gasped.

“It’s the same height as the Human Embassy!” She said.

“Exactly.” Kiri confirmed. “And the building is right up against the border. If you throw a stone from the window, you could hit the Human Embassy.”

“Or maybe… if you fire a grappling hook…” Mina breathed.

“I remember reading something from Human history.” Kiri said. “Almost two hundred years ago, the Human Capital Berlin was divided in half by a wall. Someone escaped from the city by zip-lining over the wall!”

“You want me to zipline over an international border!?” Mina gasped. “Are you out of your mind!?”

“You have a better idea?”
 
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Kiri and Mina both escaped execution by a hair's breadth! If it were their handlers instead of the two friendly agents...

Whakaari honestly seems worse than assassination by your former colleagues.

Earth receiving political refugees would mark how far it has come from Etienne. From kidnapping alien children and sponsoring anti-alien pogroms to opening it's arms to exiles!

The Berlin Wall was terrifying enough. With future technology it must be a nightmare! Here's hoping our heroes' gamble pays off. Did someone really zip through the Berlin Wall?
 
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Whakaari honestly seems worse than assassination by your former colleagues.
Worst part is, this isn't even the original version of the Prison, last seen in Faith in Chaos. Whakaari was forced to relocate after the Destruction of Partoga. The new version of the prison is reportedly worse than the old one.

Earth receiving political refugees would mark how far it has come from Etienne. From kidnapping alien children and sponsoring anti-alien pogroms to opening it's arms to exiles!
The Robinson Administration has come a long way in ten years. It's effectively like suddenly deciding to aggressively support the Xenophile faction in Stellaris in the hopes of embracing it later on down the road.

The Berlin Wall was terrifying enough. With future technology it must be a nightmare! Here's hoping our heroes' gamble pays off. Did someone really zip through the Berlin Wall?
I laughed a little when I wrote the words "Lasers and energy shields were used to deter avians from simply flying over the divide."

Yup. German economist Heinz Holzapfel and his family ziplined over the Berlin Wall on July 28, 1965. They had some helpers in the Western part of the city ready to receive the other end of the cable when it was tossed (attached to a rock) from the Eastern side. He and his family were actually spotted by the Soviet soldiers but mistook them for Stazi agents infiltrating the West and let them go.
 
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Can you find the Star Wars reference? ;)



Tripoint Park was alive with activity.

The divided park was no longer a pretty garden. Barbed wire lay stretched across the ground, marking the Hiigaran and Partogan borders. Human Space Rangers patrolled their own side of the line.

All three embassies were fortified. Defense field generators, able to deflect magnetic weapons fire at a moment’s notice, encircled the Partogan Embassy. Two automated sentry guns were positioned on the roof of the Hiigaran structure, while military androids augmented Human patrols.

To make matters worse, the Human side of the border was alive with protestors. Hiigara’s decision to construct a dividing wall through the city was very unpopular with certain segments of the Human population. Germans, Americans, Belorusians, Poles, Mexicans, and Koreans staged an intense anti-wall protest, chanting slogans such as: “Tear down this wall!” and “Hiigara is the new Evil Empire” and “Ich bin ein Berliner.”

Mina and Kiri approached the park from the Partogan side of the border. The Partogan Embassy complex was closed and under guard, but they did not care. The couple wanted the building next door. They parked their car down the street from the Aoraki Emporium and traveled the rest of the way on foot. Kiri wore a backpack. Concealed under a false flap were the plasma pistol and the dismantled grappling hook launcher.

Kiri and Mina were both disguised. They were dressed up as construction workers, complete with safety vests and protective gear. Concealed under Mina’s outfit were the plasma pistol and grappling hook launcher. She was able to get away with this by disguising herself as a man, wearing bulky clothes and a wide-brimmed safety helmet to cover up her pointy ears.

With no time to prepare false ID cards, the infiltration would be carried out by sheer chutzpah.

Carrying themselves as though they had all the power in the world, Mina and Kiri approached the construction site. Luckily for them, it was late in the evening and all of the workers had gone home for the night. A lone security guard was patrolling the perimeter: a young Levakian Huntress. When she saw the couple approaching, the Huntress peered around nervously as though she was unsure what to do. She fumbled at her Slugthrower Rifle before Kiri held up a hand.

“We’re from the Interior Ministry.” He said in a commanding voice. “Don’t even start, kid. This is a surprise safety inspection.”

“Point that thing in a safe direction!” Mina snapped, causing the Levakian to fumble her weapon a second time. “Unlock the Emporium. We’re here to inspect the premises and we’re not in the mood to play games!”

“Yes ma’am.” The Levakian mewed.

In seconds, they were inside. Mina and Kiri took just a few steps inside the barren Emporium when the Huntress suddenly said:

“Please forgive me. I’ll contact my superior right away.”

The two fugitives whipped around, but it was too late! The Huntress was already dashing toward the Embassy, paws thudding loudly on the pavement. Mina and Kiri looked at each other.

“RUN!” Mina yelled.

The two burst into a sprint an alarm sounded. They found a staircase and started to climb. Mina opened her backpack and withdrew the plasma pistol. Down at the landing, a clatter of footsteps and loud yelling could be heard.

“Get inside the embassy, that’s all we have to do.” Mina said to herself.

Up to the second floor. Kiri and Mina were both winded.

Third floor. They were panting.

Fourth floor. The couple was almost totally exhausted. Mina passed the backpack to Kiri as they exited the stairwell. The top floor of the Emporium was barren and unfurnished. The entire south face of the building was made up of massive floor-to-ceiling windows that granted wonderful views of Tripoint Park. Except for a single point to the far right of Mina and Kiri. Here, in one far corner of the building, the façade of the Human Embassy loomed large. There were just twenty feet between the buildings.

Kiri opened the backpack and started preparing the grappling hook launcher. Mina raised her plasma pistol and fired once, shattering the glass window. At once, voices shouted from the stairwell:

“Stop! We will shoot!”

It was now or never.

Kiri aimed the grappling hook launcher out of the window and aimed it up towards. He pressed the trigger, and the device made a noise like a gunshot! The hook, attached to a thick cable, sailed into the air and latched itself onto the roof of the Embassy. A group of Human Space Rangers on the rooftop jumped at the noise, alarmed.

Kiri grabbed the cable and started to secure it around himself. At the same moment, the clatter of footsteps on the stairwell reached a pitch that could no longer be ignored. Mina turned around and fired her Plasma Pistol into the stairwell. Nobody was there yet; she was trying to stop them from advancing any further.

“I can’t hold these guys forever!” Mina called out. “We’re running out of time!”

“Almost there!” Kiri replied.

He tied the cable around his waist and double-checked his knots. Meanwhile, the UN soldiers on the other side of the border were now aware of what was happening. Alerted to the sounds of gunfire, the troops on the rooftop had spotted Kiri and were aiming their rifles at him.

“Are you out of your mind!?” A Human yelled. “What the hell are you doing!?”

One of the Space Rangers tried to grab the grappling hook and throw it away from the building, but a second Human stopped him. Kiri did not have the time to look and see, but he was certain the person who saved the grappling hook was not wearing a UN military uniform.

“Running out of ammo!” Mina screamed. “They’re coming through!”

She fired her last few rounds and then dropped the pistol. Mina ran to Kiri and wrapped herself around him. Holding onto Kiri tightly, Mina briefly kissed him on the cheek and said:

“Good luck!”

Kiri pulled the rope tight and jumped! Kiri and Mina sailed through the dark night sky. The air around them popped and snapped as a Hiigaran sentry gun took a few potshots at the fugitives. Soldiers and civilians alike saw the fugitives, pointing and screaming! Kiri hit the Embassy wall feet first and held fast, looking as though he was standing upright on the building exterior. Then the Hiigaran sentry gun fired another salvo. Kiri felt a painful thud as a Gauss slug struck him in the leg. The impact caused Kiri to let go of the cable, but the grappling hook was suddenly irrelevant as another Gauss slug severed the cable itself.

Mina and Kiri fell two stories and crashed to the ground, coming to rest about twenty feet away from the Human Embassy’s ceremonial entrance. Several Space Rangers emerged and surrounded the fugitives, pointing their weapons at them.

“Aliens! You are on UN soil!” One of the troops started to say.

“My name is Mina Manaan, Hiigaran MCS!” Mina cried out. “I am requesting political asylum on Earth! And so is my partner! He’s hurt! Please help us!”

“Oh, Mina… I love you.” Kiri gasped before he passed out.
 
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Mina ran to Kiri and wrapped herself around him. Holding onto Kiri tightly, Mina briefly kissed him on the cheek and said:

“Good luck!”
Pity the Partogans have better aim than death star stormtroopers...

They managed it! Barely. There must be a lot of broken bones in there.

And who might our non uniformed saviour be?
 
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who might our non uniformed saviour be?
As you'll see later today, that person is an Easter Egg... one final callback to The Last Heroes.
 
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Aaannd pencils down! I've reached the end of my self-imposed challenge.

On the whole, this was a fun experiment. As I thought, I spent too much time setting the stage in the early chapters, leaving the finale compressed. However, all story beats in the outline made it into the final version. No crucial scenes were omitted.

I think I succeeded in staying within the rules I laid out for myself. No "public declaration of love" ever occurred but I think I managed to hit all other targets.

Keep an eye out for a reference to The Last Heroes, and thank you for reading.



Then next three days went by like a whirlwind.

Mina and Kiri were moved to a hospital in the Human District of Rotorua and treated for their injuries. UN Space Rangers were posted in and around the building to guard it.

The day after Kiri recovered from surgery, the patient in the room next door came to visit the fugitive couple. It was a red-haired Human, who spoke in a thick Gaelic accent.

“I owe you a debt.” Ambassador Freya Kinsella said. “My government bluffed the Commonwealth into releasing me. Sec-Gen Robinson told Queen Asanda you two were spillin’ secrets like there was no tomorrow. I get to walk free, and in return, Earth doesn’t retaliate against Aoraki’s aggression… aggression that’s totally made up, but aggression nonetheless.”

Mina listened to all of this from Kiri’s bedside. She was fine, but he still could not walk.

“So… ma’am. What’ll happen to us now?” Mina asked. “Are you going to repatriate me to Hiigara?”

Ambassador Kinsella put her hands on her hips.

“Oi, didn’t I just say I owed you one?” Kinsella replied. “You asked for asylum, and you’ll get a chance for it. That’s how I’ll pay you back: I’m sending someone to interview you both. If you can convince them you deserve sanctuary, you’ll be on the next starliner to UN territory.”



Kiri and Mina spent the whole day in nervous apprehension, terrified of their upcoming interview with the UN official. They passed the time by watching the news.

To their great surprise, Mina and Kiri’s flight to the Human Embassy was the biggest news in the Galaxy. Xenonian News was calling it the “Swing to Freedom” and Human propaganda networks were already hailing the couple as heroes for their daring escape from oppressive regimes. Meanwhile, Hiigara was pressing forward with their plan to construct a dividing wall through the city of Rotorua. Barbed-wire fences had already been replaced with ten-foot tall concrete barriers.

The Commonwealth government quickly disavowed Kiri and denied his very existence, suggesting he was some kind of rogue or criminal.

Hiigara had nothing to say on the incident; Mina interpreted The Kiith Council’s silence as the implied dispatch of Sobanni hit squads.



At the start of the third day, Kiri started trying to walk again with help from the doctors. It was during one of these physical therapy sessions when the door swung open and a Human woman entered. As soon as she entered all of the doctors and nurses in the room apologized and departed, leaving the newcomer alone with the couple. Mina and Kiri sized up the Human woman.

The newcomer was a Human woman in her lower twenties with white skin and a small scattering of freckles on her face. She had bright green eyes and long black hair tied up in a braid. She was wearing a form-fitting suit of power armor that seemed to shimmer in the light. Kiri quickly realized that this “power armor” was actually a skintight bodysuit underneath a coating of nanomachines, millions of microscopic robots acting in concert to create a technologically sophisticated outer layer of protection. Whenever the woman moved, her “power armor” wavered around her body as though she was draped in a black cloak. This visage was nothing short of terrifying. Kiri also realized that he had seen this woman very briefly during the escape. She was the out-of-uniform Human standing on the Embassy rooftop.

Kiri and Mina had never heard of this person before, but upon seeing her, they were overwhelmed by a sensation of impending doom. Terrified beyond reason, Mina and Kiri tried to name this frightening Human.

“Sajuuk Cor.” Mina said. In the Hiigaran language, Sajuuk Cor means “Wrath of God.”

Whiro.” Kiri said. In the old times, Partogans believed Whiro to be the God of Evil.

The Demon stepped into the physical therapy room, folded her arms, and spoke:

“I represent the UN Reclamation Agency. You will tell me everything, and I’ll go from there.”

Kiri and Mina took turns, each one speaking for a few minutes before handing off to the other. Mina started at the beginning, recapping her time in Human captivity and going forward from there. Kiri explained the nature of their secret relationship and how they were found out. The Demon listened patiently to the explanation of the couple’s frantic defection. As they spoke, Mina and Kiri felt a strange buzzing sensation in the back of their minds, and could not help but wonder if they were being scanned. Mina wondered if the Demon was a telepath.

Finally, the couple ran out of breath. They held one another tightly while the Demon considered them. Her face was still stony, betraying no emotion. After a moment, she said:

“You were truthful. I was not expecting you to be, but I consider this a pleasant surprise.”

Kiri and Mina both let out sighs of relief.

“Please.” Mina said. “We cannot go back to our Homeworlds. We’ll be prosecuted or worse. Earth is our last chance!”

The Demon raised her right hand. The couple was silent.

“One last request.” The Demon said. “Mina… I’ll show you mine if you show me yours.”

The Demon gestured to Mina’s right arm. Mina rolled up her sleeve to reveal the number 0214 inked on her skin. The Demon moved to her own arm. Hundreds of thousands of nanobots scattered, moving up her elbow to make room. The Demon rolled up her right sleeve and revealed a similar tattoo on her own arm:

0002

“The Reclamation Agency will take you into protective custody.” The Demon said. “Cooperate with us and you’ll be off this planet before you know it. Once you get to Earth, you’ll have to give a sworn statement to the Truth and Reconciliation Commission. After that, you can apply for Residency on Earth, I think Freya’s gonna help you with that.”



Mina and Kiri left Hokianga aboard a civilian starliner bound for Earth. A dozen Reclamation agents were embedded among the passengers, providing security. All of the passengers, including Kiri and Mina, were excited to start a new life on Earth. The United Nations was about to enter a whole new era. Secretary-General Robinson had announced his intentions to leave office just a few months from now, a round of elections were on the horizon, previously uninhabitable worlds were being terraformed, and reports from newly established colonies on distant planets were optimistic. The many hundreds of alien passengers felt similarly optimistic about their new lives.

Leaving their dark and troublesome lives behind, Kiri and Mina dared to feel some hope for the future. Neither of them had any idea what was going to happen next, but they were going to face the next adventure together, and that was all they wanted.


THE END.
 
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Beautiful ending. I'm happy for Kira and Mina, they deserve a nice quiet retirement on earth.

And Cassandra followed Inez's steps into the reclamation agency? The Robinson extended family (obviously excluding you know who) continues it's tradition of fighting for the advancement of human and xenokind! Does she still use her psionic powers?

I think this new format works very well, though obviously making for a very different kind of story from the Stormbreakers. The story went very quickly from the climax to the resolution, though not in a rushed way, it still gave a good feeling of uncertainty on our heroes fates before an (as usual) quite spectacular finale. Overall, an excellent short story!
 
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[Kiri] and Mina... deserve a nice quiet retirement on earth.
Off the top of my head, I imagine they live somewhere in New Zealand now. There's a significant Partogan diaspora there, thanks to the pre-war Reunification efforts. Plus the temperate climate would remind Mina of Hokianga, her Homeworld.

Cassandra followed Inez's steps into the reclamation agency? The Robinson extended family (obviously excluding you know who) continues it's tradition of fighting for the advancement of human and xenokind! Does she still use her psionic powers?
Yup. Cass did become a Reclamation agent. (She's 21 in this short story and joined about a year-and-a-half ago) Her older sister is still the Agency's Director at this point. Since Reclamation is a peacekeeping organization, Cassandra sees combat on only the rarest of occasions, usually against pirates or the last remaining pro-Akira holdouts. She spends most of her time on-duty helping out with major investigations and hunting down war criminals.

Cass mostly uses her Gift in a non-combat capacity. (The narration in the chapter above strongly implies she was using telepathy to check if Kiri and Mina were telling the truth) She usually relies on her nano-tech power armor in combat, as it grants her the same powers and abilities as a Spectre (robotic soldiers found in the game XCOM2) For Cassandra, using Psionics in battle is a "desperate measures" last resort option.

I think this new format works very well, though obviously making for a very different kind of story from the Stormbreakers. The story went very quickly from the climax to the resolution, though not in a rushed way, it still gave a good feeling of uncertainty on our heroes fates before an (as usual) quite spectacular finale.
Depending on if/when I come across another viable story idea, I might tinker around with this format again. I kept hitting the 1200 word limit, so I may relax and bump it up to 1500 next time. That way I can say what needs to be said without giving @Nikolai some 'nam-style flashbacks of Faith in Chaos. ;)
 
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Haha, you jest, but...:oops: ;)
 
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Wow. I wonder if the UNE will take offense to that. Weren't both sides trying to avoid pissing them off?

Has Tuterangi realized that something's up with Kiri and Mina yet? He did, apparently. Why did he let them go free? Just his friendship with Kiri?

What policies will the new UNE regime have?

Why did Hiigara think building a wall was a good idea? They know about Earth history - they knew how it would be interpreted.
 
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I wonder if the UNE will take offense to that. Weren't both sides trying to avoid pissing them off?
Upsetting the UNE is not as big of a problem as giving them allies. Arresting Ambassador Kinsella was a mistake on the Commonwealth's part and Hiigara will exploit it as much as possible, to prevent any restoration of the former alliance between Earth and Aoraki.

Why did [Tuterangi] let them go free? Just his friendship with Kiri?
Not because of his friendship. Tuterangi let the couple escape because the potential consequences against himself are at a minimum. Attempting to stop the escape, capturing Mina, or intervening in other ways would have brought the DIA's full attention on the affair. Tuterangi could have been prosecuted for allowing the illicit affair to continue or failing to apprehend Mina when given a chance to do so. Tuterangi was saving his own skin.

What policies will the new UNE regime have?
I'm digging into unused plot elements from The Last Heroes to answer this:

Secretary-General Blake Robinson stepped down at the end of his second term (December 31 2096) and was succeeded by Freya Kinsella, a colonist from the Outer Limb.

Kinsella was the first Human born on the planet New Kells, the only extraterrestrial colony established by the Republic of Ireland. Kinsella was a colonist from day one. As soon as she was old enough to carry tools, she was helping construct Athlone, the first Irish city on another planet. She was adventurous and spent her free time exploring the alien wilderness around the town. At age 20, Kinsella was elected to represent the environmentalist faction at town hall meetings. She carried on like this for five years and later survived the War of the Paradox. (the Micore Droid Army briefly occupied Athlone)

After the war, Sec-Gen Robinson allowed colonies on other planets to send representatives to vote in the UN General Assembly. Kinsella was elected to represent New Kells. While she was in Berlin doing her duties, Kinsella recruited other diplomats to her environmentalist faction. Blake noticed this and started grooming Kinsella to be his successor. He appointed her Ambassador to Hokianga in a public display of confidence. She was elected Sec-Gen unanimously about two months before Blake left office, and is the first person to hold the office without being born on Earth.

At age 35, Freya Kinsella is the youngest Secretary-General in history. She leads a newly empowered environmentalist bloc that seeks to bring the UNE into harmony with nature. Kinsella enjoys mild popular support, as most of Blake Robinson's supporters and allies switched over to her with his blessing. The opposition to her administration consists of people who think she is far too young and inexperienced to rule an interstellar nation, regardless of Robinson's tutelage.

Kinsella's government is xenophillic, materialistic, and has a slight pacifist leaning as well. Freya's answer to the Galactic Cold War is to re-integrate Earth into the Galactic Community. Once that's done, she intends to build a series of alliances that could someday bloom into a Federation. Aoraki and Hiigara will likely be excluded from said alliance.

Why did Hiigara think building a wall was a good idea?
The Kiith Council wanted to restrict freedom of movement in the city, in hopes of hampering the activities of both the Human and Commonwealth militaries. Walling off the Hiigaran part of the city also created ready-made defensive works. Assam Kiith'sid is preparing for the day when a military battle is fought for control of Rotorua.
 
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This was delightful. Thanks for the story!
 
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Thanks for another wonderful story. War Crime Tribunals are a tricky spiral. At first, the leaders and truly atrocious are tried. But as time passes, people with more peripheral roles are captured and tried. Like any bureaucracy, the tribunal has constituents who did not want the gravy train to end. Eventually, janitors and delivery drivers must be tried. One fear is that members of the tribunal will undertake personal vendettas. Thank you again for entertaining me.