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Part 1
  • January 30, 2096


    A cold wind whistled across the landscape. Trees rustled and grass swayed gently. Up above, the night sky was clear as crystal. The whole Galaxy was laid out for a viewer to observe. Even though it was the middle of the night, the ground was illuminated by the heavenly bodies above. A stellar formation called the Shining Hinterlands emitted dim light, causing everything on the planet's surface to cast a shadow.

    In the valley below, a city was nestled between two hills. It shone brightly with white and gold lights while starships came and went in an orderly manner. The scene was as tranquil as it possibly could be. On top of the west hill, two people were able to enjoy this tranquility.

    Standing atop the hill, a pair of young lovers were so caught up in one another that neither noticed the cold breeze.

    Both of these people were Humanoid, standing on two legs and holding each other with two arms as they kissed. Because of the chilly weather, they were both bundled up in very heavy winter clothes. It was difficult to tell at first what species the lovers belonged to. When they paused to breathe and pulled apart, a glance at their faces revealed that they belonged to different species.

    The young man had brown skin, short silver hair, and vivid purple eyes. His face was incredibly Human-like and covered in an extensive tattoo. The image on his face contained patterns and images reminiscent of ocean waves. This man was clearly a descendant of the Maori people of Earth, yet he also had the look of someone who had never set foot on a Human planet. He was in fact, from the world of Aoraki. This man was a member of the Partogan race, a group of people descended from the Maori; abducted from Earth and transplanted to a new Homeworld across the Galaxy. The emblem of the Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth was stitched onto his winter jacket.

    The young woman was also Human-like, but her body diverged from the so-called “Human template” in two certain ways. First: the upper half of her ears curved upward and tapered into a point. Second, she was shorter than her lover by a head. She needed to stand on the tips of her toes to reach his lips. Any Human looking at this woman would have (mistakenly) called her an “elf,” a name reserved for mythical pointy-eared people. Just like her lover, she had a tattoo on her face. Her left eyebrow was completely shaved off, and in its place, there was a small emblem. The narrow symbol was the emblem of Kiith Manaan, a clan of people known for seeking thrills and adventure. She was, as her tattoo implied, a native of the planet Hiigara.

    The Partogan was called Kiri Ranginui.

    The Hiigaran was named Mina Soban-Re.

    They came to this planet separately because of their occupations. They met during a work-related event and soon fell in love, and this hilltop tryst was only the second time Kiri and Mina found the time to be alone together.

    The wind howled and blew some leaves out of a tree, causing Mina to huddle up in Kiri’s arms.

    “This view really is beautiful.” Mina said. “But it’s still winter. Next time, let’s try to get a hotel in the city, alright?”

    “Are you willing to risk getting caught?” Kiri replied. “I thought your handler was really strict.”

    He rubbed his hands across Mina’s back, trying to warm her up.

    “Yeah, my handler would freak out.” Mina confessed. “I’m sorry, but… I can’t help it. I’ve never been as happy as when I’m with you.”

    They looked at one another.

    “I am too.” Kiri replied. “You’ve become the brightest Lightstone in my life.”

    “You know,” Mina confessed. “I always thought Partogan Lightstones were the most beautiful things in the Galaxy. Means a lot that you’d compare me to one.”

    Kiri and Mina kissed again, holding the embrace against the noisy wind. They locked lips for another few moments before a vibration caught their attention. Mina groaned and pressed one hand to her breast pocket.

    “That’s probably my handler.” Mina grumbled.

    “Ugh… same.” Kiri replied, reaching into his own pocket and withdrawing a smartphone.

    Kiri and Mina stepped apart, making sure to put almost a hundred feet between each other before answering the calls from their respective bosses. Kiri and Mina listened to their respective employers for a few moments, and them simultaneously waved goodbye to one another, their faces downcast and forlorn.



    About two hours later, in the seedy red-light district of the city, a nondescript storefront was the site of a very interesting scene:

    Ten Partogans, dressed in construction worker outfits, patrolled around the building. They looked like ordinary workers, but the bulges in their clothes told otherwise. Each Partogan was carrying a concealed weapon under his or her clothes: pistols and submachineguns.

    Kiri was among their number. Dressed up as a foreman, he was hiding a plasma pistol under his safety vest and a needle grenade in his cargo pocket. Kiri watched the building from across the street, pretending to talk about the local prostitutes with another disguised Partogan. There were so many people in the street, he could not do much else. Kiri nodded at a group of Voor as they passed by.

    Inside the shop, six Hiigarans frantically moved from room to room. They destroyed all of their computers by shooting them with laser pistols. The Hiigarans also shredded papers and smashed their data drives. Finally, once the structure was purged of anything that could carry data, the Hiigarans moved into the basement. Underneath the building, a bookcase was moved from one of the walls, revealing a tunnel entrance.

    Mina was standing inside of the tunnel, waiting for the bookcase to be moved. She carried a laser submachine gun in one hand and a portable scanner in the other. She verified the identities of all six Hiigarans before allowing them to enter the tunnel. Once they were through, Mina shifted the bookcase into its original position, hiding the tunnel entrance once more.

    Finally, about an hour before sunrise, the red-light district was clear of civilians. The multispecies city of Rotorua was still and silent.

    Moving swiftly and silently, the disguised Partogans started their raid. No weapons were drawn until one of the doors was forced and they gained entry. Kiri and his compatriots kicked open doors, expecting to find their Hiigaran enemies at any moment. Instead, the shop was deserted.

    That night, clandestine operatives from the Hiigaran Empire and Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth narrowly avoided a gunfight that would have caused the Galactic Cold War to go hot. Kiri and Mina both breathed a sigh of relief in their separate hiding places, grateful to know that conflict was averted.

    After all, they would not be able to see one another if there was a war on.
     
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    Part 2
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    The Hiigaran Military Counterintelligence Service, or MCS for short, is an intelligence agency that serves the Hiigaran Empire. Their duty is to hunt down spies from alien empires. Their work takes them across the Galaxy. The agency employs over a thousand clandestine operatives, many of whom are hidden in plain sight, watching and waiting for enemy agents to make their move. The MCS seeks to pre-emptively neutralize threats to Hiigaran security before they arise.

    The Commonwealth Defence Intelligence Agency (DIA) is based in the Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth and is an extension of the Royal Military. Their duty is to secretly prepare for the next war. The DIA accomplishes this by spying on all spacefaring nations, observing their military capabilities, and then taking action to ensure the Commonwealth can never fall victim to surprise attack. The Commonwealth has good reasons for doing this. Ten years ago, the Royal Space Fleet was crippled in a surprise attack perpetrated by the United Nations of Earth. This must never happen again.

    Over the past ten years, relations between the Commonwealth and Hiigaran Empire have soured. Tensions were high, and the specter of war loomed in the background. Both interstellar nations were spying on each other intensely. And their clandestine intelligence services took an interest in a small urban planet that could be found between them…

    Hokianga was settled by Partogans and Levakians from the Commonwealth about two hundred years ago, and for very good reason.


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    The planet Hokianga is what is known as a “Gaia-class” world. The terrain and weather conditions on the surface are perfect for all known forms of life. Any and all sentient lifeforms in the Galaxy can live on the planet comfortably, with access to near-unlimited natural resources.

    There are only two Gaia Worlds in the Galaxy.

    Hiigara is one.

    Hokianga is the other.

    Over a century ago, Partogans and Hiigarans came to an agreement to transform Hokianga into a “Condominium Territory.” This means the planet would be shared between the Empire and the Commonwealth, with both governments sharing power over it. One planet ruled by two interstellar empires, located at the very point where their borders touched. Eventually, Rotorua was opened up to all spacefaring peoples.

    Now, in the present day, every civilization capable of Hyperspace technology has a permanent presence in the city of Rotorua. Even the Humans are here, less than a decade after the War of the Paradox, a conflict that shifted interstellar boundaries once again.

    Hokianga’s location is of crucial importance as well. The planet is found in a region of space called the Talas Crossroads. Previously, it was the only point in the Galaxy where the borders of the Hiigaran Empire and the Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth touched. Now, in the aftermath of the Second Hyperspace War, three interstellar empires had a permanent presence in the region: the United Nations of Earth was here as well. During the War of the Paradox just ten years ago, the Humans established themselves as the Galaxy’s third major superpower.

    Hiigara, Aoraki, Earth. They are the most powerful planets in the Galaxy, and their borders touch in this one system. All three civilizations have a permanent presence on the planet and a claim to its surface. This is the only such political boundary in the Galaxy.


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    For half a century, this situation was the status quo. During the time when it was shared by three empires, Hokianga knew the same kind of peace and tranquility as when it was shared by two.

    And then the War of the Paradox happened.

    In just two short years of conflict, the longtime friendship between Hiigara, Earth, and Aoraki collapsed. All three of the former allies traded blows, doing battle with one another before a peace agreement was signed.

    This brings us to the present, and to the two protagonists of our little story.

    Outwardly, Kiri Ririnui is employed as a shipbreaker at Rotorua’s main wrecking yard. In reality, he is a covert operative for the Commonwealth DIA. The Agency keeps its local headquarters at the nearby Smuggler’s Port, an unauthorized spaceport that remains off-record thanks to bribery and blackmail.

    Mina Soban-Re is an employee at “The Cosmic Garden.” During the daylight hours, Cosmic Garden operates as a fancy, high-end restaurant for the wealthiest people in the Galaxy. At night, the Cosmic Garden plays host to an underground club that caters to every imaginable vice. In reality, the whole building is a base of operations for the MCS, and Mina herself is an MCS field agent.

    Operating out of their secret bases, Mina and Kiri live their “daylight lives” until called for by their respective spymasters. Even so, they must keep their relationship the closest of secrets…

    Because in Rotorua, spies are everywhere.
     
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    Part 3
  • Around midday, a group of patrons entered the Cosmic Garden. The restaurant’s ornate decorations hinted at just how expensive this outing was going to be. The dining party paid no mind to the opulence around them; they only had eyes for the two people at the center of the group: a pair of elderly Levakians.

    Levakians are feline mammalians, lionlike in their size, shape, and detriment.

    The two old lions snarled at a young Partogan following them. He was carrying a black briefcase. At their command, he drew closer and received instructions from one of them. He gave the briefcase to the other Levakian and departed. At the same time, one of the employees guided the Levakian entourage to their table.

    Mina Soban-Re glided around the Cosmic Garden with a special kind of grace. She felt very comfortable in her waitress uniform, a sleek blue dress with fancy elbow-length gloves, and she felt at ease despite the presence of a dozen massive lions. She knew there were Hiigaran Marines in the building, dressed up as wait staff. If a problem arose, she was completely safe.

    The young Partogan dismissed by the Levakians walked past Mina on his way to the front entrance before turning around and standing by the door. Mina kept moving, but made sure to continue observing him as she waited on other tables. She could tell he was waiting for a signal from the Levakian patrons. Walking around a pillar, Mina made eye contact with one of the busboys. His uniform just barely covered the bright-red colors of Kiith Soban tattooed on his arms. The gauss pistol in his vest was even more poorly concealed.

    “Tighten yourself up.” Mina whispered as she walked by. “We’ve got a situation.”

    After a few minutes, the signal came. One of the Levakian patrons vigorously shook his mane.

    Moving swiftly, the Partogan approached the table and took the briefcase away. He was heading for the exit. By then, Mina and the other Hiigarans had already acted. In a matter of moments, someone found the car used by the Levakians. Inside, the Hiigarans found a second identical briefcase and rifled through its contents. A frantic, last-second decision was made, and less than a minute after the whole thing started, Mina was moving quickly into the kitchen, stuffing a single piece of paper down the front of her dress.

    The Partogan opened the car, switched briefcases, and then returned to the dining table, never knowing the second case had been pilfered.



    “These are construction schematics.”

    Mina and her handler huddled together in the far corner of the kitchen, looking over the single piece of paper recovered from the Levakian’s briefcase. Mina’s handler was a big Hiigaran man covered from head to foot in tattoos, nearly all of which were variations of the Kiith Naabal emblem.


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    His name was Dasra Naabal-Sa. He tapped the paper and continued:

    “It looks like the Partogans and Levakians are planning to construct an Emporium at Tripoint Park.”

    Mina knew what Tripoint Park was. It was a landmark in the heart of the city, where the embassies of Earth, Aoraki, and Hiigara were constructed close together in a triangular formation. In the open space between the three embassies, there was a municipal garden, divided into three sections. This garden, divided three ways with each slice facing an embassy, symbolically represented the tripoint border between the Hiigaran Empire, Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth, and United Nations of Earth.

    Mina looked at the schematics again and realized her handler was right. The Commonwealth was planning to expand their own embassy, adding a shopping center to the structure, where Rotorua residents would be able to get a genuine taste of life on the planet Aoraki.

    “This is some kind of propaganda push by the Commonwealth. I’m sure of it.” Dasra said. “Mina, I want you to take this to the public Hyperwave terminal down the street and give it to our pointman. He’ll take it from there.”

    Mina put on a coat and departed the Cosmic Garden. Behind her, the Levakians were getting angry and raising their voices at one another. Just before the door closed behind her, Mina heard someone roar:

    “And you call yourself a professional? There are pages missing! What kind of cut-rate operation is this!?”



    Mina walked briskly out of the red light district, but did not take a direct route to the public Hyperwave terminal. Instead, she skirted the perimeter of the Smuggler’s Port, walking around the illegal structure. Several shipbreakers saw her from their perches on top of dismantled starships. Mina smiled to herself as she started to receive catcalls from Assurians, Kelt, Amadii, Vanians, Scyldari, Voor, Blorg, Morbuzakh, Taiidani, Vaygr, Hiigarans, Partogans, and Humans.

    One voice caught Mina’s attention:

    “Don’t let me catch you walkin’ this way again!” A Partogan shouted. “I won’t be responsible for what I do!”

    At the same moment he spoke, someone aimed a green laser pointer into a nearby alleyway.



    Mina dropped off the stolen schematic at the Hyperwave terminal. The Hiigaran man waiting for her was another member of the Military Counterintelligence Service, and the handoff occurred wordlessly. Then she turned around and walked back the way she came.

    This time, instead of walking by the Smuggler’s Port, Mina ducked into the narrow alley adjacent to it. As she walked, Mina kept one hand in her coat pocket, clenched around a laser pistol. She strained her ears, listening to the echo of the city around her. A Blorg shuffled around the corner and onto the next road. A shuttle flew overhead. A Vanian unfurled his wings and took flight from a rooftop. Someone stepped in a puddle behind her.


    Mina whirled around, drawing her laser pistol. There was a Partogan behind her, halfway through drawing his own weapon, a plasma submachine gun.

    Mina recognized Kiri and Kiri recognized Mina. They both returned their weapons to their hiding places, and then looked around to make sure they were alone. Once she was sure the alley was deserted, Mina said:

    “I… uh… I can’t believe nobody’s ever told you this, but there are no women anywhere in the Galaxy who think Ambush Alley is a good place for a date. The atmosphere’s just not romantic, you know?”

    “It’s sentimental for me.” Kiri replied. “This is the place where we first met.”
     
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    Part 4
  • I didn't mention this before, but this story has no defined release schedule. New chapters are posted once they're good and ready.

    I'm making progress on the writing challenge so far. This will be the last worldbuilding chapter. In part 5, I'll start to introduce the mystery/conflict. I think it's a simple mystery for a short story, but I'm sure I found a way to make it interesting. I'm really curious to see if I can resolve it before the end of Part 14. I've got a general plan, but no plot outline survives contact with the first draft.

    Oh! Almost forgot! If any of you have read my other Stellaris stories, you may notice that I re-used a character from The Last Heroes in this chapter.




    Six months ago…

    It was Kiri’s first week on his new assignment. DIA leadership assigned him to the Rotorua spy network and dispatched him to the city with very little fanfare. To make matters worse, he had to keep the reason for his move a secret. Naturally, his family asked why Kiri was moving to Rotorua. He was not allowed to tell them he worked for a spy agency, so the DIA gave him a cover story: Kiri had found a lucrative job as a shipbreaker in the city.

    This was a bad idea.

    Kiri’s parents and grandparents vocally disapproved of his new line of work. Being a shipbreaker was unbecoming for a member of the illustrious Ranginui family.

    “Your great Aunt was Queen of the Commonwealth! You must hold up the family reputation!” His father had said.

    Kiri wanted to remind his family that Queen Marka was killed ten years ago, but he held his tongue and stuck to the story. In the end, Kiri was disowned by not just his immediate family, but the entirety of the Ranginui clan… the single most powerful family on the planet Aoraki.

    So Kiri spent his first week in Rotorua in absolute misery. DIA leadership told him to refrain from espionage activities for his first month. Instead, he should establish himself as a normal resident of the megacity, living and working an ordinary life. Kiri threw himself into his work at the wreckyard, to distract himself from the loss of his family. This went on for six days.

    Shipbreaking was a rough job that kept him busy. Kiri used advanced tools to cut starships to pieces, salvaging any technology that could be sold or reused. About one quarter of the men and women who worked at the wreckyard were also DIA agents. The wreckyard and nearby Smuggler’s Port were fully under the DIA’s control. Partogan and Levakian spies were embedded among the dockworkers, so Kiri was not alone… yet… he felt very lonely.

    At the end of his seventh day, Kiri tried to break up the monotony by spending the evening sitting atop a Human warship. Kiri settled down on what used to be the conning tower of an Antwerp-class frigate and absentmindedly snacked on some Ruki fish. He looked around, memorizing the layout of Rotorua city around him. The nearest landmark was a narrow gap between buildings called “Ambush Alley.”

    Spies avoided this place. And not just the Hiigarans and Partogans. Kiri knew that Humans, Taiidan, Assurian, Kelt, and Levakian operatives all avoided this dangerous roadway.

    So imagine Kiri’s surprise when he spotted four Hiigarans stepping out of a truck and into Ambush Alley.

    Three of them were armed.

    The fourth was handcuffed.

    Kiri knew something was off. He grabbed his pistol, concealed it in his jacket, and slipped out of the wreckyard. In moments, he was swallowed up by the shadows of Ambush Alley.

    Kiri found an incredible scene waiting for him.

    In the dark heart of Ambush Alley, the trio of Hiigarans forced their prisoner to kneel in front of three Humans. The trio were all dressed in business attire, with weapons concealed beneath their clothes. The prisoner was a Hiigaran woman. Her hands were shackled, and she was gagged. She was on her knees in between the two groups. The Humans were looking at the prisoner with confused expressions on their faces.

    The other three Hiigarans were all pointing their weapons at the prisoner. One of the armed Hiigarans was wearing a tattered blue cape. From his hiding spot behind a dumpster, Kiri eavesdropped on the conversation, holding a pistol in one hand and an audio recorder in the other. The Hiigaran wearing a cape spoke in a voice Kiri recognized:

    “This is the ISO spy I found in my drydock, skulking around the Ashoka. If you want her back, you’re going to pay me fifteen million Human Credits. If not, I’ll blow her brains out.”

    Oh… these guys are ISO agents. Kiri thought to himself.

    The Internal Security Office, or ISO, was the Human spy agency.

    The trio of ISO agents turned to speak with one another. Kiri, meanwhile, had to hold back a gasp. The caped Hiigaran was none other than Ruunhan Somtaaw! She was the commander of the notorious pirate ship Ashoka and leader of the Hiigaran Syndicate, a criminal organization.

    Ruunhan was getting impatient:

    “Give me the money!” Ruunhan snapped. “Or I’ll kill your spy!”

    Finally, one of the ISO agents replied. He said:

    “Well, go ahead and kill her. She’s not one of ours.”

    Ruunhan charged her laser pistol and pressed the barrel into the prisoner’s head. The bound woman let out a muffled scream, her eyes wide and wet with tears.

    “If she’s not with the Syndicate, and she’s not with the ISO, then who is she with?” Mused one of Ruunhan’s pirates.

    Before anyone could answer, the situation took a sudden turn. Against all odds, an ambush occurred in Ambush Alley!

    Red and green lights flickered in the darkness as both the pirates and ISO found themselves being attacked by a third party. In the midst of the chaotic melee, Kiri saw Ruunhan raise her weapon and prepare to shoot the prisoner. The young woman was lying on her side, immobilized.

    Kiri lunged out of cover. He did not know why. All he knew was that in a matter of seconds, he had sprung into the open, raised his pistol, shot Ruunhan in the arm, grabbed the prisoner, and carried her away into the darkness.



    Kiri and the Hiigaran prisoner burst out of Ambush Alley and into the open street next to his workplace. Kiri guided her into the wreckyard, then the pair took shelter inside the remains of a Taiidani Corvette. Kiri tried to ask the Hiigaran if she was okay, while simultaneously undoing her gag and cutting her handcuffs. In that short moment, he was only able to memorize two details about her appearance:

    First, she had the emblem of Kiith Manaan tattooed on the spot where her left eyebrow should have been.

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    Second, she was extremely pretty. She stared at Kiri intensely, her eyes locked on his.

    As soon as her hands were cut loose, the Hiigaran woman said:

    “Thank you! Thanks so much, I owe you one, seriously. I promise I won’t cause trouble for you, alright?”

    And before Kiri could ask what she meant by that, or say anything else for that matter, the Hiigaran woman scrambled to her feet and ran away. She ran out of the wreckyard at high speed before turning a corner and making her way toward the red light district. Kiri was left puzzled and confused.



    The next morning, when Kiri showed up for his shift at the wreckyard, he saw Galactic Police agents swarming around Ambush Alley, doing some kind of investigation. He also found a paper bag inside the Taiidan Corvette. It contained a travel mug full of hot Thornax Stew, along with a note that said:

    "To the DIA agent who pulled me out of a nightmare: I owe you one, so your secret is safe with me. Let’s talk. Tomorrow at sunrise, Tree of Life Sapling in the Plantoid District."
     
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    Part 5
  • Happy Thursday, everyone!

    The writing challenge continues but has hit its first substantial roadblock. The text below is Part 5 of the story. I have re-written Part 9 half-a-dozen times now. And I mean completely throw it out and start over re-write. By my own rules, I have just over a month remaining to complete this challenge, so I think we're on a good track. Also, today's chapter contains 1,199 words, just one short of the self-imposed ceiling. I get the feeling this will happen a lot.

    Anyway, we're moving into the second act. This chapter will contain the start of the "Mina Mystery" as I'm calling it. Like I said, it's a simple puzzle. I'll bet that you, dear readers, can solve this before Kiri does. ;)



    Kiri and Mina enjoyed only short moments with each other. Longer encounters typically happened about once a month, and were always worth the wait. Since they had to keep their relationship a secret, Mina and Kiri put their espionage skills to use.

    Romantic gifts and trinkets found their way to pre-arranged drop points. One morning, Mina dazzled her handler by wearing a set of jeweled earrings to her shift at the Cosmic Garden. A few days later, Kiri checked a mailbox down the street from his apartment and found a receipt for a nearby hotel. According to the slip of paper, there was a room reserved under one of his pseudonyms name just over three weeks from today.

    Kiri and Mina have been secretly dating for just over seven months, but this would be the first time they spent the night together.

    Mina spent the past two weeks working on her handler. Dasra Naabal-Sa preferred to keep Mina on a short leash, and it took a lot of time and patience to convince him Mina needed some time to rest.

    “You don’t want me to get burnout, do you?” Mina told him. “If I work the nightclub every day and every night for months on end without some time off, I might slip up in front of a guest or a contact or maybe even a target, Sajuuk forbid. I need a break just like any other worker.”

    Finally, Dasra relented and agreed to give Mina some time off work.



    Kiri had a much easier time getting some time off. The Commonwealth DIA permits their agents a great deal of autonomy, provided they respect the chain of command and report when ordered to do so. Kiri simply had to tell his superiors “I need to go off-grid for a few days” and the DIA provided him with a safehouse, money, and a private Hyperwave network so he could communicate in secret. Kiri assumed the safehouse and private network were being monitored, he used them cautiously. Kiri also got in touch with a member of the Hiigaran Syndicate and they laundered his money for him, making it impossible for the DIA to trace.

    With his tracks covered, Kiri prepared for his first night alone with Mina. As it turned out, the hotel she got was clear across the other side of Rotorua, deep in the Human Quarter.

    Kiri walked from the wreckyard to the Human Quarter, passing through the Plantoid District along the way. He found Mina leaning against the Tree of Life Sapling in the center of the District. They did not embrace here, that would come later. Mina gave a small signal with her hands. She and Kiri rehearsed this before and he knew what it meant: Mina was being followed. The couple started walking in the same direction. Kiri looked out of the corner of his eye and spotted a single Hiigaran marine, dressed up in ordinary clothing. He had a plasma pistol concealed in his jacket and was staying about two hundred feet behind Mina.

    Kiri and Mina made a beeline for the Organic Sanctuary, a portion of the city where Servitor Droids from the Micore Empire had free reign. In this place, the Droids were allowed to fully embrace their “Mandatory Pampering Protocol” and act on it. As soon as Mina and Kiri crossed the border, a dozen M1 Droids closed in on both the couple and the pursuing marine. Mina was quick on the draw.

    “My co-worker and I are trying to go here.” She said, pointing out a location on a map of the Megacity. “Can you help us?”

    The Droids practically fell over one another to offer their assistance, while a few broke off to accost the marine. In a matter of moments, Kiri and Mina were spirited away. They lost track of the marine.

    Sometime before the sun went down, Mina and Kiri entered the Human Quarter and started looking for their hotel. They marveled at the utterly massive number of languages Humans could speak and just how similar some of these people were to both Partogans and Hiigarans.

    “It’s hard to believe we were ever enemies.” Mina said. “We all look so much alike.”

    “The Progenitors must have had a sense of humor.” Kiri replied. “You ever hear about how the Partogans and Humans are genetically identical? It’s gotta be some kind of cosmic joke.”

    Mina could see the resemblance. Kiri could pass for a Human if he changed his eye and hair color. She forced herself to remember how the Partogans and Human Maori used to be the same people a thousand years ago. Kiri, meanwhile, embarrassed himself by trying to speak French to a passing group of Humans. They laughed at him and replied in Arabic.

    “That’s the hotel.” Mina said, pointing to a structure up ahead.

    Kiri could not read the sign above the door. He knew it was an Asian language, and after a moment, guessed that it was probably Chinese.

    An android greeted the pair at the entrance.

    “Kon'nichiwa!” The android said. “Please present your receipt.”

    Kiri handed over the document, and after a brief scan, the android guided the two of them inside. Along the way, it promised to show “complete discretion” and to respect their privacy. Kiri almost asked why, but as soon as he saw the interior of their room, he understood.

    “You... uh… you should have said this was a lover’s hotel.” Kiri said, looking around. “I feel underdressed. I heard Humans had this sort of thing on Earth… never thought I’d find one on Hokianga though.”

    Mina giggled, then checked the door to make sure it was locked.

    “Blew my mind when I heard about it.” Mina confessed. “But as soon as I found out these were a thing, I knew we had to try it. You ready? I'm hitting the lights...”



    Two days later, Kiri was back at work. He and a fellow Partogan spy were holed up in an apartment complex, using the scope of a high-powered sniper rifle to spy on another building down the street. Kiri’s face was pressed into the scope, and he could see the face of a Human diplomat as plainly as though he was in the same room.

    Kiri was distracted. The long night with Mina replayed in his mind repeatedly. It was a wonderful memory, but something was lurking in the back of his mind. A thought was bothering him over and over again…

    “Hey Tuterangi, I’ve got a question.” Kiri said.

    “Shoot.” Tuterangi replied. Then he quickly added: “Wait, don’t shoot Ambassador Kinsella! Just tell me what’s up with you.”

    Kiri let out a deep sigh before speaking:

    “When you spent the night with your wife for the first time… did she refuse to take off her shirt? Did she insist on keeping the lights off for the whole… you know… the whole time?”

    Tuterangi spat out his drink and fell to the floor, convulsing with silent laughter. When he recovered, Tuterangi sat up, looked at Kiri and said:

    “Oh, Holy Jericho… Are you being serious? Did you hook up with a local girl?”

    “You could say that.”
     
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  • Part 6 of 14. The story is now solidly in the Second Act. I now have the entire plot outlined all the way to the ending. Now I just need to figure out how to compress all of this story into such a short format. This is where we really start digging into the little mystery of Mina Soban-Re.




    Mina felt as though she was going to be cooked alive.

    She, plus two of her fellow Hiigarans, were standing in the outskirts of Toka Wahi, a Rotorua district populated entirely by Lithoids. At first glance, Mina thought this place was a quarry, or a field of boulders and cairns. Huge slabs of rock were piled up all around Mina, and the ground underfoot was like a desert. The climate controls in this district were radically different from the rest of the city.

    Out here, it was hot… very hot. The heat was so intense that a shimmering mirage rose up from the ground only feet away, and Mira was sweating so badly that her sweater stuck to her frame as though it were glued in place. It really did not help that Mina was wearing a heavy backpack over her sweater. It looked like the sort of thing a hiker would carry, but contained inside of it was a miniature electronic warfare suite made up of recording devices, scanners, and sensors. The sweater and backpack combined made the oppressive heat so much worse for Mina.

    Standing next to her were two more Hiigarans, both members of Kiith Soban, a warrior clan. The trio stood together as three aliens approached. One of them was Ayaan Soban; he was the same soldier Mina and Kiri shook off during their hotel date.

    The aliens belonged to a species called the Praku. They were Lithoids, sapient formations of rock and stone that stood nearly ten feet tall. Each Praku was so heavy that the ground shook with each footfall.

    Three Hiigarans and three Praku came together in the dusty empty ground outside of the Lithoid district and introduced themselves: Mina Soban-Re and her companions, Roodra Soban-Sa and Ayaan Soban. Roodra stepped forward and began to speak.

    “Thank you for agreeing to meet us all the way out here in the middle of nowhere.” Roodra began. “It’s a sign that you respect the traditions my people must adhere to.”

    The Lithoids nodded and signaled their willingness to proceed.

    Mina groaned internally. She knew what this meant and started to prepare for it. She opened her backpack and produced a canteen, drinking almost half of her water supply. Roodra unfurled a slip of paper and started to read aloud:

    “Your application to join Kiith Soban has been heard. You are hereby granted the probationary title of Soban-Re. As you know the Soban Kiith-sa does not grant full rank to anyone who asks. You must earn it. First by forsaking your origins and renouncing your family. Second, by achieving victory in battle. To do that you must participate in a combat exercise set in a neutral environment. Those who defeat their foes will be strongly considered for full rank and status as a new member of the Sobanni. May your elders past guide you well.”

    Mina put her backpack on the ground. Nearby, Ayaan Soban took off his top and flexed his muscles. He had the emblem of Kiith Soban tattooed over his chest in blood-red ink, making him look quite terrifying.

    “You gonna downgrade?” Ayaan said, pointing at Mina’s outfit. She was wearing a sweater and long cargo pants despite the overwhelming heat.

    Mina unzipped her pant legs, converting them into shorts. She tossed the pant legs aside but refused to remove her sweater. Ayaan shrugged. Mina put her right arm behind her back and shook her head.

    “Who’s going first?” Ayaan said.



    About a thousand yards away, Two Partogans and a Levakian were occupying the uppermost story of an open-top building. These structures without rooftops were designed for members of the Vanian species, who were Avians. A tarp was stretched over them, protecting the trio from the harsh sunlight. A high-powered sniper rifle was protruding through a niche in the wall, and it was aimed toward the spot where the Hiigarans and Praku were meeting. Kiri Ranginui was currently staring down the rifle scope while his companions were tapping away at tablet computers. The Partogan was Tuterangi Patariki, a Green Guard soldier who specialized in military reconnaissance. The Levakian was called Sabelo, and he was a drone operator from the Triple Alliance, a military bloc led by the Commonwealth.

    “Our drone has reached its new position.” Sabelo reported. “There’s a lot of movement down there. I think someone is fighting. Can you see anything out there, Kiri?”

    Kiri peered through the scope of his rifle.

    “I see it.” Kiri said. “Looks like you were right, Tuterangi. They’re engaged in ritualistic combat. Those Lithoids are being inducted into Kiith Soban.”

    “How does the combat work?” Sabelo asked. “Do they need to kill their enemy to get in?”

    “No, they just need to survive.” Kiri said. “And when you’re fighting a Sobanni, that’s a tall order.”

    Kiri tried to hide his smile by adjusting his grip on the rifle. Through the scope, he watched with deep satisfaction as Mina raised her fists and started fighting one of the Praku. Her opponent was nearly three times her size, yet the Hiigaran was able to nimbly dodge and evade each strike. After a few moments, the colossal Lithoid ran out of stamina and collapsed, having failed to strike her even once.

    Kiri felt a private sense of elation. He knew he would have to find a way to congratulate Mina on her victory during their next secret meeting. His heart swelling with love, Kiri moved his finger away from the trigger, then relaxed his grip on the sniper rifle.

    That was when it happened.

    The heat of the day got to Mina. She swayed and then collapsed into the dirt.

    “She’s down!” Kiri gasped. “She just fell!”

    Sabelo and Tuterangi tapped frantically at their tablets, trying to maneuver the drone into a better positon. Kiri pressed his eye into the scope, desperately trying to see Mina. One of the Hiigarans was opening a bottle of water for Mina to drink. The other Hiigaran drew a pocketknife and began cutting at the large sweater Mina was wearing.

    Kiri felt a pang of guilt. He was not expecting this to be the first time he ever saw Mina topless, but a moment later, his guilt was replaced by a mixture of curiosity and alarm.

    Just like her companions, Mina had the symbol of Kiith Soban tattooed on her chest. The red emblem, shaped like a dagger, was visible on her skin. However, the tattoo was incomplete and only partially colored in, representing the fact that she was not a full-fledged member of Kiith Soban. But more importantly…

    There was a second tattoo.

    As Mina’s sweater was cut away from her body, both of her arms were laid bare. Kiri, Tuterangi, and Sabelo could plainly see that Mina had another tattoo on her right forearm. Four symbols spelled out a message in an alien language. The tattoo ran along the inside of Mina’s right forearm in a single line, written in blocky lettering.

    “What language is that?” Sabelo asked. “I can see the mark her arm, and I guarantee you, that writing is not Hiigaran.”

    “I have no idea.” Kiri confessed. “What’s going on?”
     
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  • Halfway there!

    Just like in the Stormbreaker Universe, I used real-life history to build the plot. Can you spot the thinly-veiled references to Cold War events? (Berlin Crisis, USS Kitty Hawk incident)



    There was an incident.

    Due to some mistake by parties unknown, a Hiigaran warship collided with a Partogan military vessel in high orbit above the planet Hokianga. Both vessels were using cloaking fields to hide from one another and lost contact just long enough for the crash to occur. Several Partogans, Levakians, and Hiigarans were injured, but luckily, no one was killed. Accusations were thrown about. Both sides called for reinforcements.

    The space above Hokianga was suddenly full of warships. Hiigaran, Partogan, and Human vessels jockeyed for good firing positions in orbit, aiming their weapons threateningly. Starfighters did flybys of mining stations. Thankfully, no shots were fired, but the situation was quickly descending into a standoff.

    At Tripoint Park, the ceremonial border between empires was suddenly militarized. Hiigaran Marines took up defensive positions along the border, staring across the line at Partogan Green Guards and Levakian Hunters. Soon after, Human Space Rangers were posted on their own side of the border, keeping watch over the divided city.

    In the Mammalian Quarter, Kiri and several DIA spies were holed up in a safehouse, discussing recent developments and issuing new assignments.

    “Everyone needs to be mindful of their surroundings.” Tuterangi was saying. "The Hiigarans have started placing automated sentry guns on rooftops, and the Humans are flying drones over the city. A lot more drones than we’re flying. Also, we’re starting to see armed Hiigaran soldiers patrolling their portion of the city. Hey! Kiri! Are you paying attention?”

    Kiri’s head snapped up. He was sitting in a corner of the room with five large books open on the floor around him. Six Partogans and Levakians turned to stare at him.

    “My apologies.” Kiri said, wiping sweat off his brow. “I was familiarizing myself with Human languages.”

    Kiri looked down in shame; he knew he was going to get in trouble for not paying attention. But he was in for a surprise: Tuterangi rescued him.

    “That’s a good idea.” Tuterangi said. “Our intel reports say the UN military is taking advantage of the hundreds of languages spoken on Earth. They are using multi-language training to stop us from understanding their communications."

    “The official languages of the UN government are English, French, and the ADVENT Conlang.” Kiri said, absentmindedly pushing one of the books toward the group. “Chinese and Arabic are also widespread. All of these languages are used frequently in the UN military.”

    Kiri went back to the textbook he was reading, making a note to thank Tuterangi later.

    Tuterangi knew that Kiri was trying to solve the mystery of the tattoo they spotted on a Hiigaran spy a few days ago, and was willing to grant Kiri some leeway. However, Tuterangi did not know that Kiri was having relations with the Hiigaran in question. He just assumed Kiri was running a parallel investigation and allowed Kiri to continue. If the situation called for it, Tuterangi would order Kiri to drop his project and help with this new operation, but that moment just had not arrived yet…



    Kiri was immersed in the textbook. On his tablet computer, he displayed a photograph of Mina. It was taken by Sabelo’s drone moments after she collapsed from heat exhaustion in the Lithoid District. He zoomed in on Mina’s tattoo and meticulously copied the symbols onto a sheet of paper. Kiri compared the symbols to his textbook, and after coming up with nothing, he tossed the book aside and opened another. Then, he finally made a breakthrough.

    “Arabic numerals!” Kiri gasped out loud.

    The other six spies once again turned to look at him. This time, however, they looked interested. Sabelo and Tuterangi sounded excited as they asked what Kiri had discovered.

    “Four of the symbols on this tattoo are Arabic numerals!” Kiri said. “She has a four-digit number on her arm!”

    At once, all six agents converged on Kiri, offering to help him solve this mystery. Everyone took a textbook or a tablet computer and set to work. A few offered theories. One of the agents, a Partogan woman who specialized in social engineering, offered her thoughts:

    “Perhaps she’s a double agent. Maybe she secretly works for the Internal Security Office, the Human spy agency.”

    “I don’t think the ISO tattoos their agents.” Kiri replied. “What about the UN military? Doesn’t the Muton Corps use ritualistic tattoos?”

    “Yeah, they do.” Replied Sabelo, “But this girl is Hiigaran, not a Muton.”

    This only added to the confusion. Wild theories were thrown about while everyone tried to make sense of the mark on Mina’s arm. The trouble was this: a simple four-digit number without context was not much to go on.

    After a few moments, the Arabic numerals tattooed on Mina’s arm were translated. This was the number inked onto Mina’s body:

    0214

    For a few moments, everyone was silent and confused.

    “What the hell does that mean?” Someone asked.

    “Could it be a year?” Sabelo suggested. “Two-fourteen sounds like a calendar date. What’s the current year on the Human calendar?”

    “2096.” Kiri replied. “Right now, the Galactic year is 9683. I highly doubt 0214 is supposed to be a year.”

    Kiri’s mouth went dry. If a room full of spies could not solve this mystery, then the tattoo on Mina’s arm had some kind of personal significance to her. She had never told him about a tattoo. In fact, Mina had gone out of her way to hide it from him, refusing to wear short-sleeved shirts, refusing to take off her top in an intimate moment. There was only one possible explanation:

    Mina was hiding something.
     
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    Part 8
  • 1200 words exactly! I hit the ceiling so hard my head hurts. So many details got cut out or moved to another chapter to make this one come in under the limit.

    I think I found my groove. On average, it takes about five hours to write one of these 3-page chapters, plus an extra four or five for editing and continuity checks. I'm not sure if I'll ever use this short-form style again, but I think I've got a handle on it now.



    It was a very busy night at the Cosmic Garden.

    The threat of war was driving people into the nightclub, desperate to escape from their troubles. Colored lights flashed while patrons took in all manner of intoxicating food and drink. Nightclub staff made extra money by selling drugs in dark corners. A local band of musicians provided entertainment.

    A Vanian was passed out in a far corner, their nostrils caked with powdered Zro. Partogans and Assurians danced the night away. Everyone was smoking cigarettes, the little paper rolls stuffed with either Earth-grown tobacco or Aoraki-grown harakeke.

    In the midst of it all, a group of Humans entered the nightclub. One of them, a Russian man, was wearing a baseball cap that had the following words stamped on it in gold lettering:

    Combat Veteran – UN Space Rangers
    Cape Canaveral – December 25, 2086

    The war veteran and his friends immersed themselves in the nightclub scene. They danced, drank, did drugs, and partied some more. One of them paid the band to play a song by Enutanga, a Partogan rock star who lived over 150 years ago and was known for her exceptionally loud music.

    One of the Humans split from the group and came back with the manager. He had to speak loudly to make himself heard over the music, but he managed to get his point across. A wad of cash exchanged hands. Then the manager put his arm around the war veteran, speaking in a jovial, friendly voice. After a moment, the manager escorted the war veteran up a flight of stairs to the second floor. Up here, it was much quieter, almost as though the rooms on either side of the hall were soundproofed.

    “These private rooms are reserved for our most valuable clients.” The manager said.

    The manager was a very big Hiigaran man, covered from head to foot in tattoos, each one a variation of the Kiith Naabal emblem.

    “Is that real?” The manager said, pointing at the veteran’s hat. “I’ve got a girl here who loves Space Rangers, and your buddy paid enough to buy a few hours with her. Maybe I could send her up to you? Save you the trouble of having to pick.”

    Da spasibo.” Said the veteran, speaking in Russian before switching to the Galactic Common. “Thank you, friend.”

    The war veteran entered one of the soundproofed rooms and was pleasantly surprised to see it was furnished like a high class hotel room. The manager told the veteran to drink some alcohol while he waited, and then closed the door.



    Out in the hallway, Mina and her handler stood together, looking at a holographic copy of the man now waiting inside the room. Mina took one look at the veteran and recoiled in horror. She looked at Dasra with an expression of hatred and disgust.

    “Right then.” He said. “You know the policy. Go in there and get it done.”

    “No.” Mina protested. “I don’t… I can’t.”

    “You’ve done it before. I’ve seen it.” Dasra replied. “I’ll wait out here and help you clean up afterward.”

    Ignoring Mina’s vehement protests, Dasra opened the door and pushed Mina inside. She yelped in fright, lost her footing, and fell face-first into the room.

    “You sir, are in for an incredible hour with one of my finest girls.” Dasra said. “Do enjoy.”

    “No! Please!” Mina pleaded. “I can’t do this again! I can’t do it anymore!”

    “You’re wrong.” Dasra said. “And you’re about to prove it.”

    The door closed, leaving Mina alone with the veteran. The man grabbed Mina by the arm and lifted her to her feet. That was when he saw the tattoo on her right arm. Even though he was quite drunk, the veteran’s eyes widened in recognition as he saw the mark stamped onto Mina’s arm. He leered at her, and Mina’s face filled with fear.

    The veteran leaned in close to Mina.

    “Wow!” He breathed. “Is it really you? Subject two-one-four? You were what, eleven back then? You’ve grown into quite a woman!”

    “Don’t touch me again.” Mina snapped at him.

    The veteran ignored her, greedily pulling at her dress.

    ...

    Outside, in the hallway, Dasra could not hear any voices because the walls were soundproofed. The only noise he could pick up on was intermittent thumps and thuds. Whenever a patron came walking down the hall, Dasra intercepted them and used a made-up excuse to send them away. Not a soul traversed the corridor while Mina and the veteran were alone in the private suite.

    Finally, after almost twenty-five minutes, the door opened and Mina emerged from the suite. The front of her dress was covered in blood. Mina did not acknowledge Dasra; her eyes stared off into empty space, unblinking. As she stepped away from the scene of horror, Mina pressed a piece of paper into Dasra’s open palm. He read the veteran’s deathbed confession, folded the paper, and put it in his pocket, then he allowed Mina to shuffle away.

    As she departed, Mina absentmindedly wiped Human blood of the barrel of her pistol…



    Much later that night, about an hour or so before sunrise, Kiri found a handwritten note at one of the drop points he arranged with Mina. It said:

    “Kiri. I’m going through some really difficult personal stuff right now. I’m not in trouble or anything, but I really cannot focus on you right now. I promise I’ll contact you again when I’m in a better place. For now, just for now… please leave me alone. Mina.



    In his safehouse, Kiri read the note dozens of times, thinking it over. He was fighting a powerful instinct. Kiri wanted to storm into the Cosmic Garden with guns ablaze. He wanted to be the same heroic savior Mina fell for a few months back. However a voice in the back of his mind reminded Kiri of two important things:

    First: Mina was an MCS agent and was surrounded by more of the same. A loud and bombastic entry would have a short and bloody ending.

    Second: Mina was hiding something from Kiri.

    He wanted to help his girlfriend and make her feel better, but this nagging feeling hovered in the back of Kiri’s mind. It ate away at his ability to trust Mina’s word. Something was afoot, something Mina wanted to keep Kiri far away from.

    Finally, Kiri made a decision. He would help Mina, but he was also going to get answers. Kiri crossed the safehouse and picked up his encrypted radio.

    “Tuterangi, it’s Ranginui.” Kiri said. “I need a second body for a high-risk investigation. You available?”

    “Ranginui, Tuterangi here.” Replied Kiri’s compatriot. “What have you got in mind?”

    “I’m running my own investigation.” Kiri explained. “The situation is sensitive, you cannot tell DIA leadership what I’m up to, understood? I need you to follow me and observe the people I talk to for a few hours.”

    “We’re brothers-in-arms, Ranginui. You have my trust and silence.” Tuterangi replied. “Does this have something to do with that Hiigaran girl? Where are you going?”

    “Yes it does. She’s in deep.” Kiri replied. “So I’m going right into the enemy’s lair: the Cosmic Garden.”
     
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    Part 9
  • You know, when you're done watching me torture myself with this writing challenge, you could cast your vote in the 2022 Yearly AARland Year-End AwAARds. All of your favorite writers from all corners of AARland will love you for it. Especially writers from the Victoria III and Crusader Kings III AARlands.

    Background trivia: "Freya Kinsella" is an unused element from The Last Heroes. She was supposed to be a minor supporting character during the third act of the story, but I was worried the readers may not react well to her, so Freya was deleted from the story and all of her scenes and dialogue were given to other characters. Saw a chance to reuse the character here and seized it.



    “Can you hear me, Ranginui? I need to make sure you can hear each and every repetition of the phrase ‘you are an idiot.’ How copy?”

    Kiri nodded his head slowly, then adjusted his hair so the tiny device attached to his head was hidden from view.

    “I see the Hiigaran girl you’re investigating.” Tuterangi spoke into Kiri’s ear. “Mina Soban-Re is her name, right? She’s waiting tables on the far side. Wait a few more seconds before you enter. On my mark… go!”

    Moving briskly and with confidence, Kiri entered the Cosmic Garden.

    “Here for lunch?” Asked a Hiigaran waiter. “We’ve got a table overlooking the Aquatic District.”

    “That’s in Mina’s zone. Take it!” Tuterangi instructed.

    Kiri allowed the host to take his coat. (the pockets were empty) Then he took the window seat. Within moments, Mina swept over to his table. She looked enchanting in a slim dress with matching elbow length gloves.

    When Mina saw Kiri, she froze up for half a second, her face flashed an expression that said: “What the hell are you doing here!?

    Kiri ordered a drink. When she stepped away, Mina turned on a television for Kiri to watch. Kiri looked around and saw that all of the patrons were watching the same news story:

    Freya Kinsella was attempting to mediate the ongoing tensions between Aoraki and Hiigara. Kiri had seen this name a few times before. Freya was a Human diplomat who recently took a promotion. Just a few short weeks from now, Freya would become Deputy Secretary-General and be one heartbeat away from ruling the United Nations of Earth.

    While the red-haired diplomat continued talking on the screens, Kiri gazed around. He aimed his face to a target while Tuterangi talked into his head through the concealed transceiver.

    “Okay, I can see you from here and I’ve got a good view inside the building.” Tuterangi said. “MCS agents at your front and right. There are fifteen employees in the restaurant now. Thirteen of them are confirmed hostiles; two are locals, allegiance unknown. Concealed weapons, mostly pistols. There’s a rotary plasma cannon behind the bar and a fully automated sentry gun concealed behind the wall panel just to the left of the musician’s stage. I detect a Hyperwave beacon on the second floor above you. Your girl is talking to someone in the kitchen.”

    “Can you tell me anything about him?” Kiri asked.

    “Not much.” Tuterangi said. “Behind too many walls, the signal is being scattered. All I can say is that she’s talking to a Humanoid. Most likely another Hiigaran. She’s coming back out now.”

    Mina emerged from the kitchen, carrying a platter of food with her. It was Kiri’s lunch order. She was smiling a little, but Kiri could tell the emotion was fake. Mina was upset.

    “Act normal. You’re being scanned.” Tuterangi said. “The girl is wired for audio. Keep conversation light. Two hostiles are watching you.”

    “I’ve never seen a Human with red hair.” Kiri remarked as Mina set his food down. “Red anything on a Humanoid body seems real strange, doesn’t it?”

    “Oh, you’ve never met a Sobanni then.” Mina replied. “If you ever visit the Bridge of Sighs or the Shining Hinterlands, look out for the people with big red tattoos. Of course, you might get to see a Sobanni warrior when my people go to Aoraki to get our stolen Hyperspace Core.”

    Mina finished her sentence with the vague threat. Her show of animosity toward a Partogan caught the attention of several other Hiigarans. Kiri heard a few sniggers around the room from the rest of the staff. Mina gave him a very mischievous look as she walked away. Kiri settled in to eat his lunch and watch the news. About six minutes later, Tuterangi spoke up again.

    “Oh, this’ll be interesting.” Tuterangi said. “The big guy just called your girl into the back room. Get the sticky bug out now and put it on your plate. Let the girl take it.”

    Kiri reached into his pocket and produced what appeared to be a block of chewing gum. He stuffed it in his mouth and mashed it with his teeth, carefully making sure not to crush the tiny cluster of nanomachines inside. Then he placed the gum on his plate, wedged between two bits of food. On her way back to the kitchen, Mina collected Kiri’s plates and took them with her. From his hiding spot across the street, Tuterangi used his computer to activate the nanobots. Now he and Kiri could eavesdrop on Mina’s conversation with her handler. Kiri pretended to be transfixed by the news broadcast, listening to the feed from the eavesdropper bots:

    “Hold up.” Said the handler. “I need you to look at these photographs.”

    Mina closed the kitchen door.

    “That’s a Human.” Mina replied.

    “Look closer.” The Handler grunted. “Intel says this man was at Cape Canaveral on the day everything happened.”

    “Sure… but I don’t recognize him.” Mina replied.

    “Don’t do this again.” The Handler replied. “I really, truly don’t get what’s wrong with you. Don’t you remember what these men did? You were there; you saw everything! Don’t deny it!”

    “I know.” Mina said weakly. “I do remember, but…”

    “Then you know what we need to do.” The Handler replied. “Now tell me, did you see this man at Canaveral!?”

    “So what if I did!?” Mina snapped. “That doesn’t instantly mean he was in on it! He’s not guilty of anything just because he was there!”

    And then there was a loud smacking sound. It was so sudden that Kiri jumped from surprise and had to pass it off as a very bad hiccup, drinking copious amounts of water. Mina let out a soft cry, as though she was in pain.

    “Are you really that stupid!?” The handler demanded. “Why the hell would you try to protect these people after everything we did to save you from them!? Now tell me, was this scumbag at Canaveral, either on the day of or any day before it?”

    “Yes!” Mina sobbed. “I saw him, okay! He was at Canaveral, yeah. I saw him working on a machine. He was probably an engineer.”

    “Good.” Said the handler. “That’s all I needed to know.”

    “Wait!” Mina cried out. “Don’t kill him! He had nothing to do with it! He probably didn’t even know what was happening until afterward!”

    “He’s just as guilty as the rest.” The Handler said. “Now clean yourself up and get back out there.”

    Mina continued begging, but Kiri did not hear the rest. Tuterangi broke into the feed:

    “Hey, Kiri. Sorry to make you dine and dash, but we’ve got a problem. Get out of there and head for a safehouse as quick as you can.”

    Kiri stood up and flagged down another waiter, attempting to pay his tab. On the TV screen, Kiri could see why Tuterangi was alarmed. The news report was displaying a red banner at the bottom of the screen with the words:

    HUMAN AMBASSADOR DETAINED BY COMMONWEALTH AUTHORITIES.


    The image on the screen now displayed a Human woman with red hair being thrown to the ground by a Partogan soldier.
     
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  • Now we're entering the final act. This is where things get interesting.

    The rules of this self-imposed writing challenge say the story must end at Chapter 14 and that individual chapters cannot be longer than 1200 words. Time management has become a real issue now. I spent so much time on worldbuilding that the climax and finale are now going to be pretty seriously compressed. I'm worried this'll make the ending seem rushed, but we'll see how it shakes out.



    It was the first time Mina and Kiri ever got into a fight. And even then, they had to disguise it under the veil of some other activity to avoid getting spotted.

    At the time, the whole city of Rotorua was in an uproar over the arrest of the Human Ambassador, Freya Kinsella. In the Partogan part of the city, the Kealoha Detention Center was the scene of incredible tension. Hundreds of Humans gathered outside of the prison, demanding the release of their Ambassador. Perhaps realizing the potential for violence, the Condominium government dispatched uniformed officers wearing riot gear formed to the scene. They formed a line in front of the prison, all while brandishing non-lethal weapons.

    Unfortunately, a small number of agitators were mixed into the crowd of angry Humans. Covering their clan tattoos and wearing their hair down to conceal their pointy ears, Hiigaran MCS agents seized the opportunity to drive a wedge between the Humans and their former allies. Mina was embedded in the crowd, pretending to be a Human like her fellow agents.

    “The Half-Breed betrayed us!” Mina screamed at the top of her voice. She used a Human Supremacist slur to refer to the Commonwealth Queen.

    To her disgust, she spotted Kiri nearby. He, along with several DIA agents, was pretending to be a bystander, watching the scene play out from behind a wall of police officers.

    At that moment, Mina felt a hand on her shoulder. It was her handler, Dasra Naabal-Sa.

    “That woman over there with the blond hair.” He said, pointing with one hand. “Intel says she was at Canaveral. Grab her and take her to Ambush Alley.”

    Mina glanced over at a middle-aged Human woman, who was too busy protesting to notice someone looking at her. Mina recognized her right away.

    “No. Absolutely not.” Mina replied. “I remember her. She worked in sanitation. Hear me? She was a janitor. Leave her alone.”

    There was a moment’s pause, and then, out of the corner of her eye, Mina spotted Dasra’s fist. He punched Mina in the face, knocking her to the pavement! The atmosphere around the protest changed at once. People panicked and screamed at the sudden violence. Mina tried to scramble to her feet, and that was when it happened.

    Dozens of protesters were so busy helping Mina to her feet that they did not notice Dasra. He walked across the road and tapped the Human woman on the shoulder.

    “Excuse me,” Dasra said. “You look familiar. Were you at Cape Canaveral?”

    The Human replied nonchalantly:

    “Yeah, I was a janitor. Laid down as soon as the shooting started and just waited for someone to capture me. I regret everything now. I wish I never got wrapped up in the Paradox’s plot.”

    The woman looked like she was going to say something else, but she never got the chance. Dasra drew a laser pistol, grabbed the woman, and started to drag her toward a crowd of Hiigarans.

    Chaos erupted instantly. People ran in all directions, screaming. Condominium police swarmed into the protest, detaining any person they could reach. The mass protest descended into a chaotic street brawl.

    The violence spilled into other parts of the city. Civilians began to riot. Storefronts were smashed and looting was widespread. Order would have broken down entirely if not for the timely arrival of soldiers from all three Galactic Superpowers. Fortunately, the soldiers concentrated their efforts on the out-of-control riot and not each other.

    In the middle of the city-wide riot, Kiri somehow managed to find Mina. Or rather, he tracked her down. He caught Mina while she was trying to return to the Cosmic Garden. She was forced to take a shortcut through Ambush Alley, and was about halfway through the treacherous lane when she heard Kiri coming. Mina whirled around, drew her laser pistol, and fired a warning shot into the air.

    The red light from her weapon illuminated the alley and gave away Kiri’s position.

    “Stay back!” Mina shouted. “I told you to leave me alone!”

    “I thought you were in trouble.” Kiri responded. “I wanted to help!”

    Mina leveled her pistol and fired another blast. This time the beam sailed about twenty feet above Kiri’s head, cutting a clothesline strung between two buildings.

    “Do I look like I need help!?” Mina shrieked. “You did you even see my message!? I needed some space! You broke my trust! Screw you!”

    Mina fired a third warning shot, this one just ten feet above Kiri’s head. He kept his hands raised and did not move.

    “Why’d you come to the Garden!?” Mina’s voice wavered. “You could have been spotted, you could have been killed! And it would have been my fault!”

    “Absolutely not.” Kiri replied. “The fault would have been mine. From what I’ve seen, what I’ve learned about you, you haven’t done anything wrong. Not now or back then.”

    Slowly, Kiri reached over and tapped his right forearm.

    “This was not your fault, neither was anything that happened because of it.”

    Mina’s eyes went wide and she lowered her weapon.

    “How do you know?” She breathed.

    “The same way you learned how my family abandoned me.” Kiri said, shrugging. “It’s part of the espionage business to find other people’s secrets. My DIA comrades were expecting your tattoo to have some complicated and profound meaning, but I guessed the simple answer might be the correct one.”

    Kiri took a step forward.

    “I did a recon mission to your base to get more info. Then I solved the puzzle. So tell me if I’m wrong: Your real name is Mina Manaan. You were born right here on Hokianga, in the Hiigaran part of the city. Twelve years ago, you were kidnapped by the Human military and taken to Earth. You were a captive for two years, only known as Subject Two-One-Four. You were tested for Psionic Sensitivity and then transferred to Cape Canaveral. You were there on the day of the big rescue. You saw everything. The Hiigaran MCS scooped you up after the rescue by having two agents pose as your parents. They tricked the Stormbreakers into handing you over. Now MCS is using you to positively I.D. Humans marked for extrajudicial killing. You’re not comfortable or happy with that assignment, but you don’t weren’t given a choice in the matter. Am I wrong?”

    Mina dropped her gun; she was shaking.

    “No.” She breathed. “That’s all true. You must hate me now… My life’s a wreck, I get people killed, and I’m like three different types of damaged goods. No one could love me knowing all that.”

    “I do.” Kiri replied. “I did. I still do, and I will love you, Mina.”

    “Really?” Mina asked. “You’re not just saying that? You know how often people say they like me just because they wanna get something from me? I hate that!”

    Mina and Kiri finally came together and embraced.

    “I’m sorry.” They both said at the same time.

    And then a third voice spoke:

    “Yeah… We’re sorry too.”

    Ayaan Soban and Tuterangi Patariki stared at one another, dumbfounded. Each agent lowered their weapons and addressed their love-struck comrade:

    “It’s over. Time to go.”
     
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  • Kiri and Mina were terrified they were going to be shot and killed at any moment. Yet death did not come.

    The foursome departed Ambush Alley and Tuterangi led the way. The city was being locked down by Condominium law enforcement, and the number of looters on the streets was declining.

    Tuterangi opened a doorway that led into a used furniture shop. Kiri knew it was a front, and that down in the basement was the entrance to a DIA tunnel network that spanned most of the city. Tuterangi, Ayaan, Mina, and Kiri entered the Partogan tunnel network. Kiri felt his blood run cold. If he and Mina were killed down here, the sound would go nowhere. No one would ever know what happened.

    Tuterangi and Ayaan put their weapons on the ground and sat down, heads in hands. Mina and Kiri held each other, frightened they were still going to be killed at any moment.

    “You’re in deep shit too, huh?” Ayaan said.

    “You’ve no idea.” Tuterangi replied. “I should have killed all three of you as soon as I saw you.”

    “Same here.” Ayaan replied. “MCS leadership is going to explode when they find out what’s going on here.”

    He looked up at the couple.

    “Mina… I’m so sorry. Kiith Soban is probably going to order your death, assuming MCS or the Kiith Council doesn’t do it first. There’s nothing I can do.” Ayaan said

    “Kiri… you’re in bed with an enemy spy.” Tuterangi added. “You’re looking at a really long prison sentence. You could get nineteen days in Whakaari Prison for this. Maybe a full three weeks if the Queen really wants you to suffer.”

    Kiri’s legs shook and he fell to his knees. Three weeks in Whakaari Prison was a fate worse than death. Just three days in that hellhole was enough to reduce a person to a shadow of their former self. Mina grabbed his shoulders and held him steady.

    “Why don’t you just kill us both then?” Mina spat.

    “Nah.” Ayaan waved his hand. “I saw you at the Tree of Life Sapling. Honestly, I was cheering for you. I just thought this guy was a civilian, though. Wasn’t expecting you to be DIA, honestly.”

    “Also, if we just waste you here and now, it’ll cause more problems than it’ll solve.” Tuterangi chimed in. “DIA will launch a full investigation. Everything will come to light.”

    The group sat in silence for a few minutes. Quite simply, no one knew what to do. Finally, Ayaan spoke.

    “MCS is really strict, and the handlers keep us all on short leashes.” He said. “It’s only a matter of time before Mina gets found out. Not to mention, Dasra Naabal-Sa is already really angry with her because she’s refusing to ID criminals from Canaveral.”

    “That’s because you’re killing them indiscriminately!” Mina snapped.

    Ayaan rolled his eyes.

    “Anyone loyal to the Paradox is marked for death. That’s the law.” Ayaan said. “Honestly Mina, if MCS doesn’t execute you, then the Kiith Council is going to put you on trial for treason. No matter how this plays out, your life in the Hiigaran Empire is over…”

    Ayaan trailed off. He looked at Kiri, then at Tuterangi.

    “Hold on.” Ayaan said. “I’ve heard some really awful things about that Partogan prison. Kiri, what kind of future will you have if you do time there?”

    “None at all.” Kiri and Tuterangi said together.

    “I’ll be a vegetable.” Kiri said. “It only takes a few days for a Whakaari inmate to become a drooling moron, incapable of thinking or understanding the world around them. Three weeks… there won’t be much left.”

    Mina got down on her knees and hugged Kiri.

    “I don’t wanna live without you.” Kiri breathed.

    “You’re the only person in the Galaxy who cares about me.” Mina replied. “Even the Canaveral rescuers forgot about me. I don’t wanna die alone.”

    For a few more minutes, the group sat in silence. Mina and Kiri were despairing. Tuterangi and Ayaan were lost for words. Finally, Kiri spoke.

    “What’ll happen to you two?”

    “I can try to cover my tracks.” Tuterangi said. “Make it look like I never ran across the three of you. I have a lot of resources in my safehouse and DIA doesn’t ask questions about stuff like this. What about you?”

    “I’m cutting it really close.” Ayaan explained. “I’m under orders to drag Mina back to our base. So I need to bring you to the Cosmic Garden tonight or else have a really, really good explanation for why I can’t do that.”

    Ayaan looked at Mina.

    “At this point, the initiative is with you.” He concluded. “My counterpart and I over here, I think we’ve got an unspoken agreement to give you both a head start at this point.”

    Mina and Kiri looked up.

    “Head start for what?” Mina asked.

    “To run.” Kiri finished. “Run somewhere MCS and DIA can’t touch us.”

    The tunnel was silent.

    Finally, after nearly five painful minutes, Ayaan picked up his pistol and said:

    “I’m not going to help you. But I’m also not going to stop you. If you get killed in the attempt, I’ll tell MCS I pulled the trigger. If you get away, I’ll say you outsmarted me. Either way, your secret is safe.”

    Ayaan Soban nodded once to everyone and then left the tunnel, going up into the shop and back out onto the street. It was Tuterangi’s turn.

    “Come to my safehouse in the Industrial District.” He said. “I can’t give you much, but I can give you money, a car, and some gear. Do not, under any circumstances, tell me where you’re going.”

    Mina and Kiri were left alone in the tunnel to gather their thoughts. Once they found their resolve, they started listing off interstellar nations who had an embassy in Rotorua City:

    Kelta. Assuria. Scyldaria. Taiidan. Tonaris. Micanawn. Kel-Azak. Amadiio. Blorg. Earth.

    All Kiri and Mina had to do was get inside the grounds of an embassy and request asylum. Then they would be safe.

    Getting there, however, would be more than half the battle.
     
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    Part 12
  • There was no going back.

    When Kiri and Mina arrived at Tuterangi’s safehouse, he was already preparing to vacate the space.

    “This is the only way I can help you without getting burned in return.” Tuterangi said. “After this, I’m going to disavow you both completely. We never met. We don’t know anything about each other and if you try to say otherwise, I’ll make you out to be liars.”

    Tuterangi handed over a map of the city, updated with the locations of Commonwealth and Hiigaran military checkpoints. He also gave the couple an electric car with a spare battery, a plasma pistol with the serial number filed off, and the left arm of a Wraith Suit.

    “What the hell?” Mina said, looking at the arm. “Why just one arm?”

    The Wraith Suit is a type of lightweight power armor used by the Human military. As the name implies, it was supposed to cover the entire body, and not just one extremity. Tuterangi tapped a bulge on one side of the armored gauntlet.

    “The UN Army Wraith Suit has a grappling hook launcher built into the left arm.” Tuterangi said. “I can’t give you the whole suit, but I can give you the grappling hook. It might help.”

    Kiri and Mina placed the grappling hook in the backseat of the car, under a blanket. The pistol was tucked into Kiri’s waistband. All three of them vacated the safehouse and parted ways. The couple drove away while Tuterangi walked in the opposite direction without saying goodbye.

    Once all three of them were well away from the scene, an explosion destroyed Tuterangi’s safehouse. Firefighters dispatched from the city doused the flames and were alarmed to find the telltale reside of X-4 plastic explosives on the scene. Both Human and Partogan military forces used this type of bomb, so the mystery of who blew up the building would have to go unsolved for now…



    Kiri and Mina drove to a library in the Reptilian Quarter. They asked the librarian, a sluggish old Kelt, for a private study room. Inside of it, Kiri and Mina had access to both a television and a public computer. Mina turned on the TV and pulled up a news story.

    “The political situation is getting worse.” She said. “My people just announced they’re going to build a wall around their portion of the city. If we’re going to run for an embassy, we need to do it in the next few hours.”

    On the screen, Kiri saw Hiigaran soldiers erecting barbed-wire barricades around the perimeter of the Hiigaran District. Military-grade shipping crates were stacked nearby, and a few were already open, revealing all of the components needed to construct a Laser Deterrent Fence. Kiri frowned and turned to the computer. He connected to the city internet and started looking for information.

    “Where are we going to go?” Kiri said. “No matter what, as soon as we burst into an Embassy begging for asylum, they’re going to ask questions. They’ll figure out we’re spies on the run.”

    Mina reached over to the keyboard and punched in the address of the Galactic Council’s local website. The couple looked over a list of spacefaring nations and started to compare notes.

    “The Kel-Azan Republic?” Kiri suggested.

    “No.” Mina replied. “MCS intel says they’re Democratic Crusaders. You come from an authoritarian state and Hiigara is an Oligarchy. We won’t be welcome there. Scyldaria?”

    “They have an extradition treaty with the Commonwealth.” Kiri countered. “Blorg?”

    “Have you ever been in the same room as a Blorg? No way.” Mina said. “Tobari Empire?”

    “The Tobari border is closed. No refugees, no asylum.” Kiri said. “What about the Taiidan Republic?”

    “They’re basically a Hiigaran satellite state these days.” Mina replied. “Taiidan would hand me over to Assam Kiith’sid if they knew I was there. Could we go to the Micore Empire?”

    “No, they’re a member of the Triple Alliance.” Kiri said, referencing a Partogan-led political bloc. “That comes with automatic extradition. At this rate, we may as well ask the Hiigaran Syndicate if they’re recruiting.”

    “I don’t think I’d make a good space pirate.” Mina laughed. “And don’t forget, once DIA and MCS finds out we ran away, they’ll send people to find us.”

    Mina shuddered.

    “And let’s be honest… if the Kiith Council can’t prosecute me, they absolutely will order my death. We’ve got to go somewhere Sobanni assassins can’t reach me.”

    Mina’s eyes lingered on the screen; Kiri was reading the same block of text:

    United Nations of Earth
    Capital City: Berlin, Earth
    Government: United Nations General Assembly
    Leader: Secretary-General Blake Robinson
    Ambassador to your planet: Deputy Secretary-General-elect Freya Kinsella


    “The Robinson administration is open to refugees, they won’t extradite to Hiigara or Aoraki, the Truth Commission is still active, and if the Hiigarans do send someone after you, they’ll have to go through the Reclamation Agency first.” Kiri said.

    “We have to get to Earth before that.” Mina said. “The Human Embassy is in Tripoint Park. We’ve gotta blow past both my people and yours. How can we do that?”

    Mina and Kiri unfolded their map of Rotorua. For a few moments, they were stumped. Then Kiri spotted something. He pointed at Tripoint Park on the map.

    “Look!” He said. “The Emporium!”

    He pointed out the shopping center being constructed next to the Partogan Embassy. Mina gasped.

    “It’s the same height as the Human Embassy!” She said.

    “Exactly.” Kiri confirmed. “And the building is right up against the border. If you throw a stone from the window, you could hit the Human Embassy.”

    “Or maybe… if you fire a grappling hook…” Mina breathed.

    “I remember reading something from Human history.” Kiri said. “Almost two hundred years ago, the Human Capital Berlin was divided in half by a wall. Someone escaped from the city by zip-lining over the wall!”

    “You want me to zipline over an international border!?” Mina gasped. “Are you out of your mind!?”

    “You have a better idea?”
     
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  • Can you find the Star Wars reference? ;)



    Tripoint Park was alive with activity.

    The divided park was no longer a pretty garden. Barbed wire lay stretched across the ground, marking the Hiigaran and Partogan borders. Human Space Rangers patrolled their own side of the line.

    All three embassies were fortified. Defense field generators, able to deflect magnetic weapons fire at a moment’s notice, encircled the Partogan Embassy. Two automated sentry guns were positioned on the roof of the Hiigaran structure, while military androids augmented Human patrols.

    To make matters worse, the Human side of the border was alive with protestors. Hiigara’s decision to construct a dividing wall through the city was very unpopular with certain segments of the Human population. Germans, Americans, Belorusians, Poles, Mexicans, and Koreans staged an intense anti-wall protest, chanting slogans such as: “Tear down this wall!” and “Hiigara is the new Evil Empire” and “Ich bin ein Berliner.”

    Mina and Kiri approached the park from the Partogan side of the border. The Partogan Embassy complex was closed and under guard, but they did not care. The couple wanted the building next door. They parked their car down the street from the Aoraki Emporium and traveled the rest of the way on foot. Kiri wore a backpack. Concealed under a false flap were the plasma pistol and the dismantled grappling hook launcher.

    Kiri and Mina were both disguised. They were dressed up as construction workers, complete with safety vests and protective gear. Concealed under Mina’s outfit were the plasma pistol and grappling hook launcher. She was able to get away with this by disguising herself as a man, wearing bulky clothes and a wide-brimmed safety helmet to cover up her pointy ears.

    With no time to prepare false ID cards, the infiltration would be carried out by sheer chutzpah.

    Carrying themselves as though they had all the power in the world, Mina and Kiri approached the construction site. Luckily for them, it was late in the evening and all of the workers had gone home for the night. A lone security guard was patrolling the perimeter: a young Levakian Huntress. When she saw the couple approaching, the Huntress peered around nervously as though she was unsure what to do. She fumbled at her Slugthrower Rifle before Kiri held up a hand.

    “We’re from the Interior Ministry.” He said in a commanding voice. “Don’t even start, kid. This is a surprise safety inspection.”

    “Point that thing in a safe direction!” Mina snapped, causing the Levakian to fumble her weapon a second time. “Unlock the Emporium. We’re here to inspect the premises and we’re not in the mood to play games!”

    “Yes ma’am.” The Levakian mewed.

    In seconds, they were inside. Mina and Kiri took just a few steps inside the barren Emporium when the Huntress suddenly said:

    “Please forgive me. I’ll contact my superior right away.”

    The two fugitives whipped around, but it was too late! The Huntress was already dashing toward the Embassy, paws thudding loudly on the pavement. Mina and Kiri looked at each other.

    “RUN!” Mina yelled.

    The two burst into a sprint an alarm sounded. They found a staircase and started to climb. Mina opened her backpack and withdrew the plasma pistol. Down at the landing, a clatter of footsteps and loud yelling could be heard.

    “Get inside the embassy, that’s all we have to do.” Mina said to herself.

    Up to the second floor. Kiri and Mina were both winded.

    Third floor. They were panting.

    Fourth floor. The couple was almost totally exhausted. Mina passed the backpack to Kiri as they exited the stairwell. The top floor of the Emporium was barren and unfurnished. The entire south face of the building was made up of massive floor-to-ceiling windows that granted wonderful views of Tripoint Park. Except for a single point to the far right of Mina and Kiri. Here, in one far corner of the building, the façade of the Human Embassy loomed large. There were just twenty feet between the buildings.

    Kiri opened the backpack and started preparing the grappling hook launcher. Mina raised her plasma pistol and fired once, shattering the glass window. At once, voices shouted from the stairwell:

    “Stop! We will shoot!”

    It was now or never.

    Kiri aimed the grappling hook launcher out of the window and aimed it up towards. He pressed the trigger, and the device made a noise like a gunshot! The hook, attached to a thick cable, sailed into the air and latched itself onto the roof of the Embassy. A group of Human Space Rangers on the rooftop jumped at the noise, alarmed.

    Kiri grabbed the cable and started to secure it around himself. At the same moment, the clatter of footsteps on the stairwell reached a pitch that could no longer be ignored. Mina turned around and fired her Plasma Pistol into the stairwell. Nobody was there yet; she was trying to stop them from advancing any further.

    “I can’t hold these guys forever!” Mina called out. “We’re running out of time!”

    “Almost there!” Kiri replied.

    He tied the cable around his waist and double-checked his knots. Meanwhile, the UN soldiers on the other side of the border were now aware of what was happening. Alerted to the sounds of gunfire, the troops on the rooftop had spotted Kiri and were aiming their rifles at him.

    “Are you out of your mind!?” A Human yelled. “What the hell are you doing!?”

    One of the Space Rangers tried to grab the grappling hook and throw it away from the building, but a second Human stopped him. Kiri did not have the time to look and see, but he was certain the person who saved the grappling hook was not wearing a UN military uniform.

    “Running out of ammo!” Mina screamed. “They’re coming through!”

    She fired her last few rounds and then dropped the pistol. Mina ran to Kiri and wrapped herself around him. Holding onto Kiri tightly, Mina briefly kissed him on the cheek and said:

    “Good luck!”

    Kiri pulled the rope tight and jumped! Kiri and Mina sailed through the dark night sky. The air around them popped and snapped as a Hiigaran sentry gun took a few potshots at the fugitives. Soldiers and civilians alike saw the fugitives, pointing and screaming! Kiri hit the Embassy wall feet first and held fast, looking as though he was standing upright on the building exterior. Then the Hiigaran sentry gun fired another salvo. Kiri felt a painful thud as a Gauss slug struck him in the leg. The impact caused Kiri to let go of the cable, but the grappling hook was suddenly irrelevant as another Gauss slug severed the cable itself.

    Mina and Kiri fell two stories and crashed to the ground, coming to rest about twenty feet away from the Human Embassy’s ceremonial entrance. Several Space Rangers emerged and surrounded the fugitives, pointing their weapons at them.

    “Aliens! You are on UN soil!” One of the troops started to say.

    “My name is Mina Manaan, Hiigaran MCS!” Mina cried out. “I am requesting political asylum on Earth! And so is my partner! He’s hurt! Please help us!”

    “Oh, Mina… I love you.” Kiri gasped before he passed out.
     
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    Part 14 (Ending)
  • Aaannd pencils down! I've reached the end of my self-imposed challenge.

    On the whole, this was a fun experiment. As I thought, I spent too much time setting the stage in the early chapters, leaving the finale compressed. However, all story beats in the outline made it into the final version. No crucial scenes were omitted.

    I think I succeeded in staying within the rules I laid out for myself. No "public declaration of love" ever occurred but I think I managed to hit all other targets.

    Keep an eye out for a reference to The Last Heroes, and thank you for reading.



    Then next three days went by like a whirlwind.

    Mina and Kiri were moved to a hospital in the Human District of Rotorua and treated for their injuries. UN Space Rangers were posted in and around the building to guard it.

    The day after Kiri recovered from surgery, the patient in the room next door came to visit the fugitive couple. It was a red-haired Human, who spoke in a thick Gaelic accent.

    “I owe you a debt.” Ambassador Freya Kinsella said. “My government bluffed the Commonwealth into releasing me. Sec-Gen Robinson told Queen Asanda you two were spillin’ secrets like there was no tomorrow. I get to walk free, and in return, Earth doesn’t retaliate against Aoraki’s aggression… aggression that’s totally made up, but aggression nonetheless.”

    Mina listened to all of this from Kiri’s bedside. She was fine, but he still could not walk.

    “So… ma’am. What’ll happen to us now?” Mina asked. “Are you going to repatriate me to Hiigara?”

    Ambassador Kinsella put her hands on her hips.

    “Oi, didn’t I just say I owed you one?” Kinsella replied. “You asked for asylum, and you’ll get a chance for it. That’s how I’ll pay you back: I’m sending someone to interview you both. If you can convince them you deserve sanctuary, you’ll be on the next starliner to UN territory.”



    Kiri and Mina spent the whole day in nervous apprehension, terrified of their upcoming interview with the UN official. They passed the time by watching the news.

    To their great surprise, Mina and Kiri’s flight to the Human Embassy was the biggest news in the Galaxy. Xenonian News was calling it the “Swing to Freedom” and Human propaganda networks were already hailing the couple as heroes for their daring escape from oppressive regimes. Meanwhile, Hiigara was pressing forward with their plan to construct a dividing wall through the city of Rotorua. Barbed-wire fences had already been replaced with ten-foot tall concrete barriers.

    The Commonwealth government quickly disavowed Kiri and denied his very existence, suggesting he was some kind of rogue or criminal.

    Hiigara had nothing to say on the incident; Mina interpreted The Kiith Council’s silence as the implied dispatch of Sobanni hit squads.



    At the start of the third day, Kiri started trying to walk again with help from the doctors. It was during one of these physical therapy sessions when the door swung open and a Human woman entered. As soon as she entered all of the doctors and nurses in the room apologized and departed, leaving the newcomer alone with the couple. Mina and Kiri sized up the Human woman.

    The newcomer was a Human woman in her lower twenties with white skin and a small scattering of freckles on her face. She had bright green eyes and long black hair tied up in a braid. She was wearing a form-fitting suit of power armor that seemed to shimmer in the light. Kiri quickly realized that this “power armor” was actually a skintight bodysuit underneath a coating of nanomachines, millions of microscopic robots acting in concert to create a technologically sophisticated outer layer of protection. Whenever the woman moved, her “power armor” wavered around her body as though she was draped in a black cloak. This visage was nothing short of terrifying. Kiri also realized that he had seen this woman very briefly during the escape. She was the out-of-uniform Human standing on the Embassy rooftop.

    Kiri and Mina had never heard of this person before, but upon seeing her, they were overwhelmed by a sensation of impending doom. Terrified beyond reason, Mina and Kiri tried to name this frightening Human.

    “Sajuuk Cor.” Mina said. In the Hiigaran language, Sajuuk Cor means “Wrath of God.”

    Whiro.” Kiri said. In the old times, Partogans believed Whiro to be the God of Evil.

    The Demon stepped into the physical therapy room, folded her arms, and spoke:

    “I represent the UN Reclamation Agency. You will tell me everything, and I’ll go from there.”

    Kiri and Mina took turns, each one speaking for a few minutes before handing off to the other. Mina started at the beginning, recapping her time in Human captivity and going forward from there. Kiri explained the nature of their secret relationship and how they were found out. The Demon listened patiently to the explanation of the couple’s frantic defection. As they spoke, Mina and Kiri felt a strange buzzing sensation in the back of their minds, and could not help but wonder if they were being scanned. Mina wondered if the Demon was a telepath.

    Finally, the couple ran out of breath. They held one another tightly while the Demon considered them. Her face was still stony, betraying no emotion. After a moment, she said:

    “You were truthful. I was not expecting you to be, but I consider this a pleasant surprise.”

    Kiri and Mina both let out sighs of relief.

    “Please.” Mina said. “We cannot go back to our Homeworlds. We’ll be prosecuted or worse. Earth is our last chance!”

    The Demon raised her right hand. The couple was silent.

    “One last request.” The Demon said. “Mina… I’ll show you mine if you show me yours.”

    The Demon gestured to Mina’s right arm. Mina rolled up her sleeve to reveal the number 0214 inked on her skin. The Demon moved to her own arm. Hundreds of thousands of nanobots scattered, moving up her elbow to make room. The Demon rolled up her right sleeve and revealed a similar tattoo on her own arm:

    0002

    “The Reclamation Agency will take you into protective custody.” The Demon said. “Cooperate with us and you’ll be off this planet before you know it. Once you get to Earth, you’ll have to give a sworn statement to the Truth and Reconciliation Commission. After that, you can apply for Residency on Earth, I think Freya’s gonna help you with that.”



    Mina and Kiri left Hokianga aboard a civilian starliner bound for Earth. A dozen Reclamation agents were embedded among the passengers, providing security. All of the passengers, including Kiri and Mina, were excited to start a new life on Earth. The United Nations was about to enter a whole new era. Secretary-General Robinson had announced his intentions to leave office just a few months from now, a round of elections were on the horizon, previously uninhabitable worlds were being terraformed, and reports from newly established colonies on distant planets were optimistic. The many hundreds of alien passengers felt similarly optimistic about their new lives.

    Leaving their dark and troublesome lives behind, Kiri and Mina dared to feel some hope for the future. Neither of them had any idea what was going to happen next, but they were going to face the next adventure together, and that was all they wanted.


    THE END.
     
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