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Not to sound nitpicky or anything, but some screenshots of the characters would be nice.

The more screenshots the better!

Well, since it's my birthday (23, woo!) and I think it's a splendid idea, why not? I won't integrate them into the narrative, but some 'behind the scenes' screenshots to support the story might be nice. Good suggestion. :)

I didn't really know what kind of screenshots people would want, so I just took a few.


The Corbrays
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I've decided to exclude all of Stafford's sisters. They aren't really that interesting. A couple of them are widows, some are dead and they generally live somewhere else in the Vale. It might be nice to know that one of my houserules is to not use the "bride page" in the ledger. As long as my dynasty are mere bannermen, I'll look for brides within the kingdom of the East or just outside its borders. Also excluded are Parmen and Rollam, because I don't want to spoiler anything. ;)

As for this "family photo", notice how Stafford did not look anything like his father OR mother. It's a shame Stafford died in the 'pay a ransom or your commander might die escaping'-event, considering some of the actual kings of Westeros, he wasn't that bad.

Talking about kings...


Seven kings of The Seven Kingdoms
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The ruling kings of Westeros, ten years after the events of 'Fields of Feasting'! Poor Ned does not only suffer from being a horrible judge of character, he's also a poor diplomat! On the other hand, he's the most mighty warrior among the kings.

Rhaegar's kingdom of the Iron Throne is dwindling, and I suspect we'll eventually have only six kingdoms, with one of them sitting on that pimpin' chair. He's even lost King's Landing to Harbert Tully of the Riverlands, and that kingdom isn't all that strong.

The seventh king's name 'fell off', but he's Florian Arryn. :)

Tywin is still going strong, although his realm is plagued by civil war. As you can see from his possessions however, Tywin has enoughs strength to subdue them. Still, it has prevented him from expanding his realm.

Talking about expanding...

We're all doomed! Doooooooooooooooooooomed!
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I could have sworn that kingdom was only one province a decade earlier... :eek:


Oh, and talking about teasers, although we weren't...

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woot :D a fellow Westeros AAR :D

good luck i'll be following this!

w00t, another follower!

I'll try to have another update before Saturday. I'm probably very, very busy with university until friday, and I'll have a family reunion this weekend, but Friday I should have enough time to write a new update. I can already reveal that the next three posts will deal with the "adventures" of the youngest Corbrays, or otherwise the actual storyline will not make much sense.

As an added bonus for my readers, I need a character to fill the 'master at arms' spot. So I'm holding a challenge. You can post a character sheet with the name, age, appearance and personality of the character, and I will give the best suggestion a prominent place within the story! The only 'demand' is that I decide when said character kicks the bucket and how he responds to ingame events. :)

So, you know what to do! :D
 
Master at Arms huh? :D

name: Maggo son of great khal Jommo.
age: 27
culture: Dothraki
appearance: Tanned. Short dark hair. almond eyes. beardless. muscular yet slim body. average height. handsome.
traits:
- Chaste (unlike his fellow Dothraki, Maggo is not lustful but Chaste. Some Dothraki even suspected he liked boys more than girls)
- Coward (Disgraced back at home he had to shave his head and he was exiled from the lands by his own father. He traveled all the way to Westeros in search of work and new life)
- Knowledged Tactician (despite being disgraced, Maggo is still an able warrior and a brilliant strategist)

how do you like it? :)
 
I don't think a Dothraki as a master of arms of a bannerman of the Vale could work, but I do like the idea of a Dothraki being exiled in the Vale, not belonging to his old word nor his new one.

I'll see how I write poor Maggo into the narrative, I have a couple of ideas! :)
 
CHAPTER II.
'LITTLE LORDS'



Lynn Corbray




“Come on! At least try to hit me back! Otherwise 'tis no fun!” young Rollam said to his older brother as he waved his wooden sword around. Parmen was holding his arm and, behind the tears of pain that welled up in his eyes, trying to look at his younger brother with as much disdain as a boy of nine could muster.

“No,” he replied. “Septon Gaelyc said that violence never solves anything, and that it is towards the Gods we turn. Not against our fellow brothers, like beasts.”

And with that moral lesson thrown at his younger brother, Parmen turned around, still biting his lip, fighting back the tears; trying to keep his dignity.

Young Rollam watched him as he left the courtyard, feeling terribly lonely.

“Why do I have to learn from the septon?” he sulked, “When he is the one who likes all the religion and gods and stuff? 'tis not fair...” Rollam was also fighting back the tears. He missed his father and brother. They would never have send him to learn with septon Gaelyc, they would have taken him out hunting, out executing bad people, out fighting grumkins, snarks and dragons. It would have been great! Rollam tried to remember how his father had looked, or his brother. The images remained vague, he had already forgotten their voices.

He threw away the wooden sword. It hit the ground only a few meters away, landing with a soft thud. Rollam turned around and hurried away from the courtyard.

Both were unaware that they had been watched from high above, from out of the tower of the barracks that were adjacent to the main keep. From a window Lyn Corbray and Ser Patrek Ermethon had observed Rollam's attempt at sword practice with Parmen.

“The young'un should be the heir,” Ser Patrek said. A lean and towering man, clean shaven with short brown hair, sharp features and dark eyes that lay deep within the sockets, always watching. He moved away from the window, walking over to a cupboard out of which he took two chalices and a bottle of wine.

“Agreed,” Lyn Corbray replied. Lynn had been a cousin of Lyonnel, but looked nothing like the Corbrays. Long, blonde curly hair and green eyes. It was said that there ran a drop of Lannister blood through his veins. He was plump, but muscular.

“Parmen is under Arryn domination through his cowardly mother and that septon and his cronies, what's his name again?”

“Gaelyc,” Patrek replied, handing Lynn a chalice with the wine he had just poured. “He's in the Arryn pockets, as by agreement...”

Lyn spat out of the window to illustrate his opinion on the treaty. It had been a harsh treaty. Parmen Corbray had been allowed to remain lord of Heart's Home under severe agreements. First of, since Lyonnel and Stafford were considered traitors to the realm, their bodies had not been allowed to be interned in the family crypt. In stead what had remained of the desecrated bodies had been buried in a mass grave. Second, Parmen was not to receive training at arms and had to receive tutoring by men appointed by the crown. Third, Rollam was to become a septon. Fourth, the Corbrays should not support more men then necessary for the protection of their seat.

The blonde Corbray took a jug of the wine. He had returned to Heart's Home on the invitation of Elyanna, who had considered it important that the boys grew up with at least one male Corbray in the household. The Arryn-paid tutors however had kept him as far away from the boys as possible.

Ser Patrek Ermethon's story was not entirely different. One of the few survivors on the Corbray side after the war, he had taken up Robin Alryc's place as captain of the guard. However, under clause four of the treaty he was the only member of the guard as well, and he was forbidden from being near the little lords whenever they were within the castle's walls. Which was virtually always.

“The young'un isn't under the influence of the king's cronies,” Patrek said, nipping from the wine. “If Parmen was to die...”

Lyn threw him a menacing glance. He was no saint, unlike his cousin's oldest surviving son, but he did not kill family.

“No. We don't spill the blood of a fellow raven,” he said, his voice making clear that the matter had been decided. Patrek simply shrugged.

“Just saying... But I'm telling you, that boy is going to turn this place into one giant sept dedicated to the noble king Florian Arryn, destroying the statues of your family and replacing them with representations of the Seven, all the while hoping he'll be taken from this earthly valley of remorse and sin, leaving the rest of your family in the dust.”

And there, Lyn knew, his friend had a point.
 
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Very cool and awesome AAR, Zwolsche! :D I'm liking this mod more and more; I might just have to get CK so I can play ASoIF all day!

As for a possible master-at-arms:

Name: Ser Artyr (pronounced: Ar-tear) Daviros
Age: 37
Appearance: Artyr is 5'8" and weighs around 157 pounds. He has very short black hair and green eyes so faded and dull they are almost gray. His beard is kept well trimmed and is streaked with gray. A semi-permanent scowl is on his face.
Personality: Despite his rather stern face and scowl, he is actually a very cheerful fellow and is rather boisterous. He loves nothing more than wine, women, and war: the 3 W's as he puts it. He also loves telling highly exaggerated stories of his exploits in the many wars he has fought in, including Robert's Rebellion. His personality most closely follows the Sanguine humour.
Traits:
Lustful
Brave (Something similar if there is no specific trait called this.)
Any others you think would be good. :)

Thanks for looking at my character and keep up your excellent work!
 
I like that one as well! Both characters will be added to the cast, although Maggo will be a wildling/clansmen (seeing as there are no Dothraki in my game), and Ser Artyr will be somewhat older, as I doubt he fought in Robert's Rebellion as a toddler. ;)

I'll probably not find the time to update this weekend, so next week it'll be. :)
 
Oh, and I can definately recommend this mod. It's utter fun!

Reserved for an update. :)
 
I wanted to just drop in and say I just started reading this... Song of Ice and Fire is perhaps my favorite series of all time, I'm eager to see what you do with this! :)
 
I like that one as well! Both characters will be added to the cast, although Maggo will be a wildling/clansmen (seeing as there are no Dothraki in my game), and Ser Artyr will be somewhat older, as I doubt he fought in Robert's Rebellion as a toddler.
Cheers! :D Thank you very much for including him in your story! And thanks for fixing his age too. ;) I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.

I have to agree with General_BT, A Song of Ice and Fire is my favorite fiction series of all time.
 
Good to have you on board, General_BT! :) SOIAF is indeed a magnificent series, definately one of the best. I'm currently devouring the books, haha!

Oh, and Knight Errant, your man will make his first appearance... ;) It's not the best thing I've ever written, but I'm having a bit of a fever and I this update will bridge the gap to better and more interesting scheming, plotting and assassinations!

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Rollam



Rollam ran through the halls, his hurried footsteps echoing down the hall. He had managed to sneak out of septa Woodshed's class. Talk of the Seven and of all the old fogies that had been High Septon through the ages bored him. He wanted to explore, to ride his horse through the valleys and fields of Heart's Home, to play and to fight.

Outside he could hear the clanking sound of wood against wood, the scraping sound of iron against iron. No doubt Patrek was drilling the guard. Normally Rollam loved to watch how Patrek and Artyr drilled the guard, and he loved it even more whenever they taught him swordplay in secret. Now there was no time. Septa Woodshed was an old toothless crone, with barely a pluck of hair on her scalp and with barely any sense inside of it. She was slow of wit, but she would notice him gone and send for him. Down the stairs, through the hallway and around the corner he ran, away from the stupid septa and her boring lessons.

“Where do you think you're going?”

Rollam turned around, and saw the guards. Three of them, all wearing mail with a blue cloak draped on their shoulders. Rollam knew the sigil embroidered on the cloak; the moon-and-falcon of House Arryn.

“How in the Seven Hells is it your business where he is going?”

Rollam turned around once more. Lyn Corbray and Artyr Daviros came walking gently down the hall. His uncle wore a white silk doublet with black ravens and red hearts embroidered on it; the Corbray colours. Ser Daviros wore leather.

“He is the heir to Heart's Home, which means he outranks you load of pissers,” Lyn Corbray continued.

The guards placed their swordhands on the swords, Corbray and Daviros did the same. Rollam's green eyes looked from the Arryn guards to his uncle and Daviros and back again. He could feel the tension.

“Us load of pissers are here to make sure that the traitors grow up correctly. Traitor's blood creeps through their veins and the realm doesn't need another rebellion.”

“If your job is to guard the flesh and blood of traitors, you might want to return to the Eyrie. Last time I checked our good king's father himself betrayed the rightful king of all of Westeros...” Artyr quipped, although his face did not betray the humour. The Arryn guards did not see it either, drawing the swords from their sheaths. Lyn and Artyr did the same.

“ENOUGH.” The voice was high and shivered, but it carried enough weight to break the deadly tension. All suddenly noticed Parmen, who had come from the same direction as Rollam had come. The young lord of Heart's Home wore the simple robes of a lowly septon, even though he was not in training to become a godsworn. All the men sheathed their swords.

“If my beloved brother wants to run through the castle, I command you to let him,” he said; his eyes fixed at the guards from the Eyrie.

“And if he wants to serve the Warrior through the pursuit of the martial arts, than it is his choice to do so,” Parmen turned his attention to his younger brother, a faint smile on his lips. Although the hallway was poorly lit, Rollam could see the emptiness in his brother's eyes. What he was saying pained him deeply.

“I hoped you would be a man of the Faith,” he continued. “But now I know that each man has a role to play and yours is not to be played in a sept. You have my permission, as lord of Heart's Home, to follow training with uncle Lyn and Sers Daviros and Ermethon.”

Rollam looked up at his brother, dumbstruck. Parmen had never done him a kindness, and now he suddenly gave him permission to do the only thing he had ever truly wanted.

“Violence is to be abhorred, but I am well aware that Heart's Home will one day need a marshal to protect the faithful. Hopefully you can be that man, brother.”

Rollam's mind was racing and his heart was too full with enthusiasm to see Lyn and Artyr exchange meaningful glances.
 
Just stopping in to say... This AAR is awesome!
 
@von Sachsen and @Knight Errant: Thank you both, too kind! :D

Here's the latest update. Hope you all like it! Also, I hope both @the_hdk as @Knight Errant like how I portrayed their suggestions. Both will get more "screen time" as 'Little Lords' progresses. :)

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Rollam



Where he had once watched and listened to boys practising swords in the yard, Rollam could now participate himself. In the months since his older brother Parmen had given him permission to cease his religious education Rollam had immersed himself in the martial arts with a feverish dedication. Maggo, the exiled Dothraki from across the Narrow Sea and Robert Roundbelly were teaching him how to ride a horse, Ser Patrek Ermethon gave him instructions in military strategy and tactics, Ser Artyr Daviros tought him how to use the sword and lance while uncle Lyn gave him extracurricular education on the noble houses and family history.

The past months had given him a grim realisation of something he had always known. Ever since the death of father and Stafford, a great divide had come to be in Heart's Keep. On the one hand were the men of king Florian Arryn, with their moon-and-falcon emblems who kept the heir to Heart's Home close by. On the other were the 'loyalists', the men who had served with Lyonnel and Stafford. Both controlled a son of the traitorous Lyonnel, both were playing a game that had control of Heart's Home as the ultimate price.

However, if being the pawn of a dynastic struggle was the price he had to pay to live his dreams, than Rollam did not mind paying the price. Today Ser Artyr had organised a small scale tourney for his more experienced recruits. Among them were Ser Artyr's own squire Jon Snowpeak of Moonsgrey, Ser Patrek's son Vance and a couple of sons of some local sworn swords. There were only eight recruits under Artyr's care, so the tournament would only consist of three rounds. Hardly a real tournament, but still quite exciting.

“Here,” Ser Artyr had said when he had brought Rollam a set of plate armour. “You're almost a man grown, so it should fit you fine enough.”

Rollam's jaw had dropped when he had seen the suit of armour. White enamelled steel, with a motif of ravens engraved into it; all polished to a shine. He had never seen such a suit of armour and it made such an impression that he barely saw the dents.

“Used to be your brother's,” Ser Artyr had said. “Never got around to fixing those dents. You'll get your own in due time.”

Now he was wearing it with pride, dents and all, as he rode his horse down the yard. Rollam saw his niece Vivyen standing at the side, waiting for the event to begin. A frown took hold of Rollam's face. His niece was only two years younger than he was, yet she was Stafford's only surviving child. He had lost his father and brother, but she was already without grandfather, father, mother and siblings. Her white hair was very much unlike the Corbray auburn, but she took after her mother. She smiled and waved happily when she saw him watching his. Rollam waved back.

It was time to begin. Rollam's horse stepped slowly to his end of the lists. One of the guards, who now functioned as a squire for the participants, handed him his lance and shield. The tip had been blunted and the lance had been weakened as to shatter on impact while still delivering enough force to dismount.

Rollam's first opponent was the sixteen year old son of one of Heart's Home's sworn swords called Brett. A fat, thick boy with puffy cheeks, pouty lips and a permanent blush on his cheeks. Rollam and the others usually called him by his nickname Ser Seconds, for Brett's habit of always asking for seconds at every meal.

Ser Artyr gave the sign.

Rollam spurred his horse into a canter as he steadied his lance and shield. He had been riding since his early youth, but only recently had Maggo the Dothraki and Robert Roundbelly taught him how to control and ride a horse for war. It all came down to pacing, to knowing what your horse was doing. The rhythm of its steps, the anxiety in its eyes, its familiarity with its rider; everything. 'Know horse as princeling knows legs,' Rollam thought; echoing Maggo the Dothraki's own mantra, thick accent and all.

Ser Seconds came closer and closer and Rollam gazed at his opponent. Ser Patrek and Ser Artyr had both taught him that victory is hidden in the details and Rollam noticed that Ser Seconds was riding too fast, having trouble to stay balanced in the saddle.

Rollam steadied his lance as he shifted his weight forward. Brett either didn't notice or was too slow to react. Rollam's lance hit Ser Seconds straight on the chance; tipping the already unbalanced rider off. Splinters of wood flew through the air as Brett the not quite a knight fell into the sand with a loud crash.

“Victory!” Rollam yelled a primeval roar.

As his horse stepped out of the lists, Rollam finally noticed how many people had been watching him. He saw Vivyen clap and cheer, he saw uncle Lyn and Ser Patrek clapping for him while they whispered with one another. The bronze skinned Maggo the Dothraki, shirtless and with bells in his short hair stood fair and proud, his almond eyes not betraying a single thought. Ser Artyr was fingering his black-and-grey stubble, his usual scowl a mangled smile.

And he saw her. A young girl with hair as black as a raven's feathers. The lines of her face sharp like a mountain's peak. She looked at him intently, smiling a smile that was both seductive and sly. It made Rollam feel strange in his stomach. He threw her a smile of his own, but she gave no visible response. He had seen her before, talking with Roundbelly or with some of the servants. She had come one day asking for the Lord's protection, as had Maggo and many others. Parmen gave protection and shelter to everyone who asked. They had given her a job in the kitchen, or something similar. Rollam did not know exactly.

Drunk with victory, he could not wait for his next round.



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Lyn



“He knows what he's doing. His balance is good, the horse has a steady pace, a good grip on the lance...”

Lyn nodded in reply to Patrek's observation, he saw it too. In the past few months they had give his nephew a crash course in all things related to war. Rollam had absorbed the knowledge with a fanatical devotion that rivalled his brother's devotion to the Seven.

“He's already better than Stafford this age,” he replied.

“No. Stafford was better, but less dedicated. If the boy keeps this up, he will be.” Patrek replied.

They watched as Rollam forcefully dismounted Brett Darcy. Both men clapped for the boy who rode the lists as if he had just personally won the nine kingdoms. Patrek leaned closer to the blonde Corbray and whispered.

“The older'un will soon be of age. I'm sure you know the story of the parliament of rooks, where they pick one of their own in a civilized discussion before slaughtering him in the most uncivilized of manners? Just saying...”

Lyn scowled as he clapped, he knew exactly what Patrek was 'just saying'.
 
Here's the latest update. Hope you all like it! Also, I hope both @the_hdk as @Knight Errant like how I portrayed their suggestions. Both will get more "screen time" as 'Little Lords' progresses. :)
I like how mine was portrayed very much, Zwolsche. :)
Another excellent part, as usual. I really like how the tournament is full of intrigue that is all interconnected to the drama and intrigues in the actual castle/hall. I can't wait till the next installment! :D
 
Thanks Knight! I hope that the next installment will live up to expectations. :) I've decided to "stretch out" 'Little Lords', as it's gonna be quite important regarding later events.

Oh, I've decided to have some fun by loading up my save game -in this little piece of software- see what happens. 'Dynastic Glory' is not completely succesful in representing the dynastic glory of Westeros. Some fun observations:


  • The Others (or better said: the king that rules the Kingdom of Always Winter) are the most glorious dynasty.
  • The Freys, of all people, are the second most glorious dynasty. The gigantic number of Frey progeny probably helped a lot. Of 130 family members traced, 75 are still alive.
  • At the time of this particular save game (which is, right after the end of 'Little Lords'), the Corbrays are just within the top 100 of most glorious dynasties, coming in at place 96. The total 'Glory score' is a mighty 2810. For comparative purposes: the Freys have a glory score of 46771.
  • The rest of the top ten dynasties, in descending order: Targaryen, Tyrell, Greyjoy (!!!), Lannister, Baratheon, Vance, Stark and Tully. The Kingsguard was actually in ninth place, but they don't count. I imagine that, after another two or three hundred years of gameplay, the top ten will be very different!
  • Eddard Stark is by far the most glorious character (alive or dead). Robert Baratheon is the most glorious dead person. Lyonnel has achieved mid to subtop level status. Leyla Terrick is, for some reason, the most glorious woman to have ever lived (since the beginning of the game).
  • The Freys have the most inbred characters: three in total.

Alright, whenever I decide to end this game/AAR, the Corbrays should be in the top ten. :) Alright, scratch that. :D Upon closer observation (by loading an alternative save) it appears that, unless Dynastic Glory is changed as to reflect the proper traits from Grell's mod, some traits cause horrible screw ups in the calculations. :D

For example, having the Emperor trait gives you a big, juicy bonus to glory (as it should in vanilla CK). However, in the War of the Usurper mod, the emperor trait has been changed into the minstrel trait. And although nothing is as glorious as a hard rocking rockstar and his fantasy-medieval counterpart, it doesn't correctly translate the +500 glory it gives. :D

Still, very amusing!
 
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I tried playing the mod but the map is just baaargh...

Unlike your AAR which I shall follow with interest. ;)

Yeah, the map is far from perfect. I'm not usually a mapicionado, but I'm not a modder either. Still, I do like the mod quite a lot. I see you brought your AAR back as well. Good job, I've been reading bits and pieces and I like it!
 
Not really an update, but an intermezzo. :) I was just writing random things and ideas (the literary equivalent of doodling; drawdling?) and listening to music when this popped up. There's not an inch of original thought in it, but the hopefully original interpretation of all these familiar motifs and stories. Inspiration includes lyrics by the band Monster Magnet ('All Friends and Kingdom Come'), Neil Gaiman, A Song of Ice and Fire, myths, this AAR and quite a lot more.

I almost wonder which character could dream such a dream. :) I hope you enjoy!



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That night, he was dreaming.

He was a knight in shining armour, literally. His golden plates were as bright as the sun, and burned as fiery. He was the sun, the light in the darkness, wielding a sword of molten gold, its drippings lightening the dark as they died smouldering.

He rode on a spirited destrier as red as a setting sun through a desert covered in darkness. Before him the burning knight could see a mountain, knifing the flat horizon. At the tip of the mountain was visible a small fire. There was no path through the desert, no set course but to go straight for it.

Time and distance are meaningless in dreams. The only thing real in dreams is realisation and understanding. Everything makes sense in dreams, everything is understood in the most primeval way. Within no time and no distance did he arrive at the mountain.

The climb was harder. What had once been a mountain in the desert had always been a tower carved out of bone and stone, standing proud at the centre of a never ending city, sprawling in all directions fair beneath. The wind swept, stung and roared violent threats with a barely intelligible whisper. Crows, ravens and rooks accompanied him during his climb, circling the tower and quorking and cawing sweet lies and hard truths.

You will slip and you will fall. Your bones will be crushed, your entrails will cover the city. Nothing shall be left, for me to devour,” said a shy, reasonable rook.

What if I would pick out your eye just now? If you raise your arm to shoo me away, you will fall and you will die. If you give me your eye, just one eye, I will leave you alone and protect you from my carrion kin. Just your flesh for your life...” said a mean, cunning crow.

“I will protect you from my carrion kin, give you water and food and help you reach the top of the tower, if we get something in return... For all these things and more we don't want flesh. We want you. Without help you will not make it, and we offer certainty for only the ultimate price,” said a cold, realistic raven.

In dreams you deal with the cards dealt to you, and thus he took to the raven's word. All in an instance the burning knight stood on the top of the tower, which had had been a great, never ending king's for the entirety of the dream. Before him stood a throne that was a beating heart. On it sat a sexless figure of many colours with a face that was seven faces at once. A young man, if not still a boy; a middle-aged man with grey streaks lining his hair, and a wizened blind old man. Three faces were female and represented the same stages of life. The seventh face was distinctly familiar, yet unrecognisable.

Enter now, it's long past due that we begin,” said the figure in a most familiar voice. “Come to me, here before him who is many..”

There was no time for the burning knight to respond, nor was he supposed to.

In my hands I hold a cradle and a grave, and in my head a place for you. Better take to the throne today.

The knight did as he was told and stepped forward, wielding his sword of molten gold with intent to strike. The figure laughed as the burning knight's strike pierced his stomach, his flesh ripping asunder and burning away. Where the flesh disappeared only nothingness appeared. The burning knight stumbled and fell into the abyss that now engulfed him.

Existing in the absolute absence of everything he began to lose himself. Dreams and memories that he had once dreamt had never been.

Moments before oblivion took him, the brightly burning knight felt something. His back was pressed, his fingertips felt soft feathers, a familiar caw rung in his ears. A giant raven had taken him on its back, its mighty wings clapping to take them ever higher.

A smouldering lump coal fell from the burning knight's body, landing inbetween the raven's dark feathers. A tiny tongue of hungry fire leapt up and licked the feathers eagerly. The tongue licked the raven whole, and both raven and knight shone so bright as to send a ripple that lit the nothing.

And only dust.

Before waking only the soothing understanding that all could arise from the ashes remained.