• We have updated our Community Code of Conduct. Please read through the new rules for the forum that are an integral part of Paradox Interactive’s User Agreement.
Chapter 1.4: On the Hyperlane
Author's Notes: The Partogan language and culture is based on that of the real-world Maori people from New Zealand. Whenever you see a character with the letters "wh" in their name, such as "Whetu Karawana" remember that their names are pronounced in the Maori way with the "vuh" sound.

So Whetu is pronounced "Veh-too."



Chapter 1.4:

On the Hyperlane


[Personal log: Mission Specialist Mira Mihaka, HMS Midak, Inner Vinjim Star System, 4 Hui-tanguru, 685]


Mira Mihaka: It’s been just over a month now since we left home, everyone has settled into the routine of life on a spaceship for the most part. The crew is broken up into three groups, and we all work in ten-hour shifts. I’m on duty with Kaia in the Engineering Lab from midnight until ten-hundred hours. Then we get the next ten hours off. We usually spend the time doing general maintenance and housekeeping around the Midak, keeping everything shipshape and operational.

Once we run out of stuff to do, we just relax in the crew lounge. Fleet Command knew this mission was going to take over half a decade, so they went all out with the lounge. It’s like a mix of the most luxurious café you can imagine, and a small amphitheater with a huge glass window that backlights the stage with a star field. Big squishy couches all around the walls, and on the other side of the room from the amphitheater is a walled off area with only one door that faces into the lounge. Though that door is a gymnasium we can use to keep our bones and muscles in good shape over the next six years. The gym’s walls are even soundproofed so the people working out don’t disturb anyone in the rest of the lounge.

At the end of our ten hour maintenance shift, Kaia and I head up to Crew Bay Three. There are four crew bays total, and each one can hold fifteen people; but you’ll never find all sixty bunks being used. At a bare minimum, twenty crew members are always awake and working. There are forty if the previous shift is doing maintenance work. The other twenty are sleeping.

Food around here is treated with nervous apprehension. When we left Daxia, there was enough food on board for exactly nine years, four months, and fifteen days. Most of it is pre-prepared meals in vacuum-sealed packages. It should be more that we need, if all goes well. We still have a plan for the day we run out, though:

See, the Midak has a Phased Disassembler Array on board. The tech was pilfered from an alien empire that fell to the Invaders early in the Second Hyperspace War. I forgot what they were called, High-kirians? Higgy-arians? Something like that. The Phased Disassembler Array takes solid matter (preferably in the form of a small asteroid) and breaks it down into its composite particles. Basically, we can grind an asteroid down into a fine powder and then sort that dust by what it’s made of. Once the Midak runs out of food, we’ll turn the PDA on any organic matter we come across. The ship’s computer has a recipe for a life-sustaining nutrient paste that’ll keep us alive past the nine-year mark. If the PDA breaks… well… we won’t let that happen.

In the meantime, Kaia and I have started our first scientific investigation of the mission:

Last night, Hinauri Keiha and Hapaikiterangi Herekotutuku barged into a command staff meeting, yelling that the Hyperspace Module was on fire. Turns out they were kind of right. Random points of the device itself were spontaneously combusting. The fire itself was harmless, and we put it out quickly. The Hyperspace Module’s inner shell is made of a material that isn’t known for being flammable, so the Captain ordered me to “wake up the science team.” I was so excited to be useful that I woke up the people on Third Shift, even though they went to bed about 45 minutes before.

And just to be clear, no. Hyperspace Modules do not spontaneously catch fire. Something had to interact with the shell to cause a spark. All fires need fuel, oxygen, and heat. The Module generates its own heat, and we breathe a mixture of Oxygen and Nitrogen, but where’s the fuel? And what’s starting the chain reaction in the first place?

My shift is almost done, but I’m going to stay on for a few hours and help out the next shift. Maybe together we can figure something out.


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: 5 Hui-tanguru, 685, Inner Vinjim Star System]



Mira Mihaka: I just had a really, really boring afternoon followed by five seconds of pure terror.

Remember yesterday, when the Hyperspace Module decided it would look better if it was on fire? My team and I spent about twenty-six hours in the labs trying to figure out why that was happening. We tested the material the casing was made out of, took samples of the air and analyzed everything about it, we even took skin samples of the men and women who worked in the module to see if there was a reaction between skin and the module.

So about five hours ago, we got our first lead. Biologist Moe Kaa figured out that the titanium alloy the Hyperspace Module is made from was reacting to cosmic rays. Something coming off the nearby star is reacting with the Hyperspace Module and causing its exterior to combust. I got the whole Engineering Team together and we designed an experiment to test the “cosmic rays” theory. Kaia, Nikau and Tangaroa went to the foundry and built a one-by-two Bio piece of armor plating built from the same alloy as the Hyperspace Module. Then we secured it in the Engineering Lab and began to bombard it with different types of radiation using a particle accelerator I borrowed from the Physics Team.

Before we started, Kaia and I ran up to the bridge to tell Captain Rangi that we were about to start experimenting with radioactivity and open flames. He cleared all of the rooms around the Engineering Lab and gave notice over the loudspeaker that the military crew wasn’t allowed near the lab for the time being. Then we got started. It was tedious work, but we made progress. We tried almost every possible form of radiation a B-class star could put out before we found a really narrow microwave that caused our slab to spontaneously combust. After that, we just had to find a way to stop that from happening naturally.

Tangaroa came up with an idea to remove some atmosphere from the chamber containing the Hyperspace Module. Not enough that the crew would need to wear space suits in the room, but just enough that they might need to carry a bottle of breathing air if they spent a long time inside. Less air, less chance of a fire. So we partially decompressed the Engineering Lab, set up the particle accelerator, and started blasting our test slab again. That’s when Chief Petty Officer Whetu Karawana unsealed the main door and yelled:

“Hey, Mihaka! You in here?”

Karawana didn’t knock. She just opened the door. And I know she didn’t read the sign on the door because I wrote it! The big red letters said: KEEP OUT. SENSITIVE EXPERIMENT IN PROGRESS.

But nooosigns mean nothing to the CPO, apparently. I guess being almost-barely-but-not-quite-an-officer makes you immune to the rules. It also gives you a free pass to cause explosions inside a cramped spaceship, too. When Karawana opened the lab door, she introduced a couple dozen cubic Bios of oxygen, nitrogen, carbon dioxide, and ozone into the room. Our tiny fire exploded like the Unnamed Mountain did six hundred years ago. (Praise the Mountain, lest it happen again) The lab was wrecked. The particle accelerator burnt to a crisp, and all of our testing materiel was turned into charcoal. Tipi from the Physics Team ran over to see what the noise was about, and he threw every curse word in the language at poor Karawana when he saw what the blast had done to his particle accelerator. Karawana looked like she was going to cry. Oh, and you know why she was looking for me in the first place? She wanted to ask why all of the fire alarms in the lab were disabled!

The medics ended up treating five of us (including myself) for ruptured eardrums. Tamaho said it could be a month before my hearing is back to normal levels. My bunkmate Kaia got the worst of it. She’s still in the infirmary now, getting ready for surgery. Second-degree burns on her left arm AND her left eardrum is burst. Damn, she got messed up. So I promised Kaia I’d go see her as soon as my duty shift ended today, which means Tangaroa and Nikau have taken over the investigation for a few hours. Once the shift changes, Eru and Manawa will wake up and take charge. In the meantime, spontaneous fires are still breaking out in the Hyperspace Module every few hours or so. We still have a week and a half before we reach the Hyperlane leading out of the system though, so we need to come up with something before then.


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: 6 Hui-tanguru 685, Inner Vinjim Star System]



Mira Mihaka: Faster-than-light systems restored! For once, everything went our way today. While I was walking Kaia back to the crew bay, the whole ship went on Hyperspace Alert. I didn’t know what was going on, so I just kinda threw Kaia into the first Radiation Shelter I found and then ran straight to the shelter underneath the Bridge, which is where the Captain goes during Hyperspace Jumps. I hadn’t gone more than two Bios though when the Hyperspace Alert was cancelled.

So I doubled back to Kaia and we went up to the Bridge together. I found Tangaroa up there with Captain Rangi, and they explained what had happened:

Tangaroa had told the Captain about our “decompress the Hyperspace Module” theory, and Rangi decided to carry out his own test. Tangaroa tried to tell him to wait until the Engineering Team was finished, but the Captain got impatient. Rangi ordered the Hyperspace technicians to don space suits, depressurize the Hyperspace Module and just fire it up. Just like that. He could have blown up the whole ship! Luckily, that didn’t happen. It turned out that the system works perfectly fine in a low-atmosphere environment. Tangaroa, Kaia and I all gave the Captain an earful for risking all of our lives on an untested hunch. He just shrugged and said we could tinker with the Hyperspace Module whenever we wanted so long as we didn’t turn it off.

By the Mountain, does Rangi treat all civilians like children or something?

But, for the time being, we’re going to keep the Hyperspace Module depressurized until we leave the system. The next star in our path is K-class, so it’ll put out different types of radiation than whatever Vinjim is throwing at us, which means we won’t have to worry about this problem much longer. Hopefully.


[Personal log closed.]



Sys/ Hyperspace jump initiated.

Sys/ Post-Hyperspace system self-check underway.

Sys/ Self-check complete. All systems operational.


[Personal log addendum: 17 Hui-tanguru 685, Outer Nithascal Star System]



Well, we’ve made it. And it was just like we thought. As soon as we jumped out of the Vinjim system, the Hyperspace Module started behaving itself again. No fires to be seen anywhere, and we repressurized the module. In future, whenever the ship gets saturated with that particular microwave, we’ll evacuate the Hyperspace Module and then depressurize it. It’s not the best solution, but it’ll keep us moving until we figure out something better.

In the meantime, we’ve entered the Nithascal Star system. Before the Second Hyperspace War, our people had a colony on the second planet here. Ninety million people used to live there, until the Invaders blasted the whole planet into small pieces.

The Nithascal System marked Partoga’s southern border before the war. Once we jump out of here, we’ll have well and truly left home. Between here and Earth is a large swath of space that once belonged to the Micore Empire, followed by a narrow panhandle of Amadii space, and then a big empty region of space no one owned before the war. On the other side of that empty region should be the place where Sol used to be. Then we can start searching.

The humans never fell to the invaders. Partogans who survived the War in Heaven told us as much. Wherever their star ended up, I hope they’re alive and well. Otherwise, this journey might not be worth it.


[Personal log closed]


 
Last edited:
  • 1Love
  • 1Like
Reactions:
All caught up for now.

It's an interesting culture and setting, and having a narrative setting on a particular ship with such an excitable protagonist makes the world feel a sense of wonder and nostalgia...

I must confess, it is something I miss now, neither of my two narratives have much opportunity for wonder like this.
 
It's an interesting culture and setting, and having a narrative setting on a particular ship with such an excitable protagonist makes the world feel a sense of wonder and nostalgia...

I must confess, it is something I miss now, neither of my two narratives have much opportunity for wonder like this.
I'm quite happy to revisit this story because of the same sense of wonder. It simply is not present in any of the sequels. Just another way After Everything is the odd one out in the series.
 
Likewise, all caught up. It's quite fun so far!
 
I'm quite happy to revisit this story because of the same sense of wonder. It simply is not present in any of the sequels. Just another way After Everything is the odd one out in the series.
It's a nice thing to have, discovery.
 
Chapter 2.1: A Close Call
Author's note: The opening series of events of this chapter were influenced by the Star Trek: Enterprise episode "Minefield."




Chapter 2.1:

A Close Call

[Personal log: Mission Specialist Mira Mihaka, HMS Midak, Inner Landeen Star System, 2 Mahuru 685]


Mira Mihaka:
Eight months, two days, nine hours. That’s how long it took me to get sick of the treadmill. Look, I know I’m supposed to be doing cardio exercises every day, but bobbing up and down on that thing was getting old. So last week, I started jogging throughout the ship with some of the military crew. There are five soldiers in our group: Tungia Taipua and Taka Rangihau from the Comms Tower, Nia Tawhiti, who works in Engine Room, and power plant techs Rawiri Kopu and Maia Maaka. They’ve been running every morning since we left home, and they were more than happy to let me join in.

Each morning, we start out in the workshop on deck two, just above the engine room. We run the length of Deck Two; from stern to bow. Then we go through the trapdoor hatch in Radiation Shelter 5 and end up in the crew quarters of deck three, which is right up against the bow of the ship. Then we jog the length of deck three until we get to the engine room, which is in the stern. After that, we drop down to deck four and sprint as hard as we can past the Hyperspace Module to the Crew Lounge in the bow. It’s a good workout.

Honestly, I’m kind of upset the military and civilian crews don’t mingle more. Some of these soldiers make good company. Except Moana Ranginui. She’s the Petty Officer who locked me out of the Hyperspace Module and refuses to speak with me. Every time our group runs past the place, she stands in the main hatchway leading to the Module and gives me a really dirty look. You’d think I kicked her pet Hapaka or something. On top of giving me all kinds of evil eyes and cold shoulders, Moana seems a little antisocial to me. Ever since we left Partogan space, she really hasn’t fallen in with any of the little cliques that have formed amongst the crew. None of the non-commissioned officers hang out with her, and I don’t see her sitting with the other Hyperspace techs during mealtimes either. What the heck did she do to offend everyone? Or perhaps they-

Hold on...

Wait...

Something just happened. Hey Kaia, I’m going to the bridge, watch my stuff.

Kaia Patariki: Hell with that, I’m going with you!


[Log paused]

[Log resumed]



Mira Mihaka: Alright, I’m back. Commander Aranui told me we’ve changed course and are heading for a nearby anomaly. She didn’t tell me why, though. Just said I needed to tell the Physics Team to “clear their schedules” whatever that means. Anyway, we’re going to reach the anomaly in about a day, so I need to make sure the labs are ready.


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: Kadiir Nebula, 3 Mahuru, 685]



Mira Mihaka: There was a massacre here.

There’s battle wreckage everywhere. Just like the wrecks we found back home, these hulks date back to the Second Hyperspace War. We’ve found Amadii, Levakian, Vanian, and Micore ships here. Not a single Invader though. It looks like the enemy got the jump on our old allies, and they didn’t have enough time to respond. In the middle of it all is an old Micore starbase. Of course, there wouldn’t have been any people on board that day. The Micore never actually left their homeworld. Instead, they had a vast army of sentient Droids and automated ships to maintain and defend their empire. Eru counted the number of ships each species had in the fight here, and he says it looks like the defending fleet was mostly Micore ships. Perhaps this is where they made their last stand.

Once we found the battlefield, Captain Rangi finally briefed the science team on the anomaly we’re searching for: a weak radio transmission coming from somewhere deeper in the debris field. It’s consistent with a war-era Levakian distress call.

The Levakians may be extinct now, but that doesn’t erase the fact that they came from the same Homeworld as us. We were their biggest ally during the war, and the Levakians were ours, so we’re obviously going to follow up on this. The Midak is moving slowly through the debris field now, and the whole crew is on general quarters, which means everyone is awake and at their stations. All six of our communication specialists are in the Comms Tower right now, guiding the ship towards the source of the signal. The rest of us are waiting... just waiting...

[Personal log closed]

[BRIDGE VOICE RECORDING: 3 MAHURU 685, 29:54 HOURS]


Toa Rangi: Helm, set engines ahead two-thirds.

Arapata Kirikiri: One hundred-five Bios per second, yes sir.

Anika Aranui: Sir, the signal is growing more frequent. I estimate we’re less than a thousand Kios away from the source.

Toa Rangi: Good. Maintain course and speed.

Arapata Kirikiri: Uh, Captain... I think something just hit the ship.

Mira Mihaka: What? You mean like a meteorite?

Toa Rangi: Helm, stop all engines. Corporal Wiki, call the boys in the Sensor Suite and ask them-WHAT WAS THAT!?

Anika Aranui: WE’VE BEEN HIT!!

Toa Rangi: REPORT!

Niko Pongia: An explosion on the outer hull, starboard side, near the bow! Hull breach on deck two!

Tai Tunui: Bridge calling infirmary: medical emergency! Civilian Mihaka is down with a head injury!

Meto Kapua: Acknowledged. We’re sending a man up there. Infirmary out.

Toa Rangi: Corporal Hei, drop the emergency bulkheads on deck two!

Kori Hei: Already down and locked, sir. The forward Galley and one of the radiation shelters have decompressed.

Toa Rangi: Was anyone in there?

Arapeta Kirikiri: Too early to tell, sir.

Toa Rangi: Aranui!

Anika Aranui: I’d give you an answer if I could, sir! Corporal Wiki, take anyone you need for the damage control team and head for deck two!

Kauri Wiki: Yes, ma’am!

Toa Rangi: Bridge calling engine room!

Kahumanu Ngakaukawa: Captain, what in Miranda’s name just happened?!

Toa Rangi: I was hoping you could tell us.

Kahumanu Ngakaukawa: No idea! Both of the sub-lights are stuck hardover, so our center of thrust is way off to port. Weapons fire? An asteroid maybe?

Toa Rangi: Couldn’t tell you. Any injuries back there?

Kahumanu Ngakaukawa: Rangihau, the male one, took a hit on the head. Private Makura’s taking him to the infirmary now. Including me, there’s four of us in here now.

Toa Rangi: Understood. Shutdown the sub-light engines and disconnect them from the Power Plant until I say otherwise. Bridge out. Bridge calling Hyperspace Module!

Moana Ranginui: What the hell is going on up there?!

Toa Rangi: We’re trying to figure that out. Did anything happen to the Module?

Moana Ranginui: Negative! The Hyperspace Module is fine, although the people took a beating down here. Look, I can’t talk. Gotta take the Lieutenant to the infirmary. Hyperspace Module out.

Toa Rangi: Bridge calling Power Plant!

Maia Maaka: Uhh, um, Power Plant here.

Toa Rangi: Who is this?! Where’s Petty Officer Taipua?

Maia Maaka: Both the Lieutenant and the Petty Officer are injured, aaannnnd... uuhhh... I don’t know where Corporal Ruru is. My name is Maaka, Sir.

Toa Rangi: Okay, Private Maaka. Listen closely. How many people are in the Power Plant right now?

Maia Maaka: Um, uuhh, oh, it’s just me in here. Kopu and Paikea are, uh, taking everyone else to the infirmary. We got banged up really bad down here, sir.

Toa Rangi: Understood, Private. Stay where you are; DO NOT move away from your station. I’m sending a team to you now.

Maia Maaka: Right sir. I’m waiting here. Power plant... um, uh... Power plant... out.

Toa Rangi: Okay everyone, listen up! I’m certain we just flew into some kind of ordinance. A warhead, a mine, a dud bomb, or something else like that. Corporal Kirikiri, keep us at a dead stop. Tukino, call up the Comms Tower and tell them to go silent. Wihongi, go up to the Sensors Suite and tell them to start looking for a minefield. Aranui, go get the damage control team and redirect them to the Power Plant. Ata?

Ahu Ata: Sir?

Toa Rangi: Do you have a casualty count?

Ahu Ata: Numbers are still coming in, but I see eleven civilians and nineteen military injured, mostly head and whiplash injuries. No fatalities.

Toa Rangi: Get up, and go do a headcount. I want to know the exact location of every person on the ship; I want to know which section each casualty came from, and how badly understrength those sections are now. We can’t take any serious actions until we know our own capabilities. Tunui?

Commander Tai Tunui: Yes, Sir?

Toa Rangi: Get down to the infirmary and make sure Mihaka’s okay. We need the Science team back on their feet quickly. Pongia, pull the tapes.

Niko Pongia: Right away Sir.


[FLIGHT DATA RECORDING SYSTEM DISABLED, BRIDGE VOICE RECORDER OFFLINE.]

[TIME OF SYSTEM FAILURE: 4 MAHURU 685, 00:04 HOURS]



[Personal log addendum: Kadiir Nebula, 4 Mahuru, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
I’m out of the infirmary. Holy Miranda, my head hurts. Tamaho said I got thrown halfway across the bridge when the explosion happened, and I hit my head on the ceiling. He says I’ve got a concussion; I feel fine, but I was just too dizzy to argue with him. No, I went straight back to the bridge. Captain Rangi was there with all of the other officers and two of the Petty Officers: Moana and Whetu. Of course, as soon as I showed up, Moana said “oh, Mihaka’s here, we can blow up the ship now.”

By the Mountain, I hate her.

Once we finished giving each other angry looks, Lieutenant Commander Tunui gave the full damage report. The Midak struck a mine. The explosion ruptured our bow plating along deck two and decompressed one of the galleys and a radiation shelter. Because the mine was on our starboard side, the entire ship lurched to port, causing about twenty-five people (including me) to lose our footing, fall over, and hit our heads. To make matters worse, both of the sub-light engines were still firing when we got hit, so they gimballed hard and got jammed in the hardover position. Now every time we fire up the engines, the whole ship spins counter-clockwise instead of moving forward.

In short, the Midak is broken.

Captain Rangi and Commander Aranui agreed that we can’t effect repairs in the middle of what might turn out to be a minefield. The plan going forward is threefold:

First, Hori Rangihau and Enoka Makura are going to spacewalk out to the stern and manually return both of the sub-light engines to the amidships position, so the Midak can fly straight again. After that, we’ll move on the slowest possible speed to a safe location and then do serious repairs.

Second, Kaia and I are gonna fire up the Phased Disassembler Array and start disintegrating some of the old battle wreckage around us. We’ll use the material to fabricate new hull plating so the Engineering Team patch that big hole in deck two.

And third, all six of the soldiers who work in the Comms Tower were ordered into the “Special Chamber.” I still don’t know what’s in that room. It’s accessible only via a doorway on the far end of the bridge, underneath the staircase that takes you to the Captain’s Quarters. The Captain told me to leave the bridge after that, so I don’t know what he told those troops to do in there.

The engine techs have already suited up, so Kaia and I going to take the next few hours to grind some hundred-sixty year old shipwrecks into a fine powder. It’s gonna be a long day ahead.


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: Kadiir Nebula, 6 Mahuru, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
Phew! What a day! And a night! I don’t think I’ve slept in fifty-five hours... so here’s how it all went down:

It took Enoka and Hori about an hour to realign the sub-light engines. Both of the Midak’s sub-light engines can gimbal, or swivel in their mounts. So once Enoka and Hori were in position, the crew in the engine room shut down the servomotors controlling the gimbal system, and then the spacewalkers just put their shoulders to the engine bells and pushed them back into place.

While Enoka and Hori were dealing with the sub-lights, Kaia and I started gathering raw materials for the reconstruction of deck two. We took over the PDA and broke down a Micore cruiser. Kaia picked-

Kaia Patariki: Hey, I’m right here, don’t speak for me! Hey, hey, people in the future, listen here: During the war Micore ships, particularly the cruisers, were crewed mostly if not entirely by Droids. That means these ships were filled to bursting with spare parts for the automated crew to maintain themselves. We just needed to patch our hull. So I ground up the cruiser with the Phased Disassembler Array and poured it into a small drum. Then the powder was superheated, liquefied, and reshaped into the hull sections we needed. After that, Eru and Manawa, the two big guys on the Engineering Team, they spacewalked out to the bow and sealed the breach in deck two. The Midak looks like it has an eyepatch now. It’s actually really cool to look at.

Mira Mihaka: Yes, yes it is. And it’s all thanks to us, Kaia. Tell everyone at home about the other thing.

Kaia Patariki: Oh, right! There’s A LOT of noise coming from the secret chamber behind the bridge. It sounds like a turbine engine running at high speed. Oh! And a really bright yellow light is radiating through the floor and into the ceiling of the Foundry one deck down. It’s like that light you see during dance parties at the Royal Academy. Except there’s no pulsing electronic music, synthetic drugs, secret revolutionary slogans-

Mira Mihaka: Secret what?

Kaia Patariki: Secrets hidden in that damn room!

Mira Mihaka: That damn room, yeah. The really strange part is that all six of the comm specialists are still in there. They’ve been in that room since we hit the mine two days ago. They haven’t left for anything. Food... Sleep...

Kaia Patariki: Not even to go to the lavatory?

Mira Mihaka: Not even to go to the lavatory. They haven’t left. It’s really, really weird.

Kaia Patariki: Gross. Gross! So...so....gross!

Mira Mihaka: Well at this point, I think I’d rather deal with something really gross than have another mine hit the ship, or get another concussion. Neither of those were fun.

Kaia Patariki: Get some sleep, Mira. You’re going to start running in circles if you stay up any longer.

Mira Mihaka: Sleep, good idea. Let’s take a day... or two.

[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: 8 Mahuru 685, Kadiir Nebula]

Mira Mihaka:
Things are finally starting to get back to normal around here. The comms crew came out of their secret chamber behind the bridge late last night. By the Mountain, they looked and smelled awful! I don’t think any of them have slept since they day we hit the mine. Two of them: Tai and Kahurangi, went straight to the infirmary and I’m pretty sure they’re still there right now. Tungia Taipua didn’t even make it to her bunk. She sat down in a corridor just off the bridge and fell asleep. She wouldn’t wake up even when I talked into her ear. Private Rangihau and I carried Taipua back to her bunk and wrapped her in heavy blankets.

Meanwhile, the forward galley is serving meals again. Whenever someone goes in there for food, they give the patch in the wall a nervous look. I’m sure that by now, most of the crew knows that only a paper thin layer of century-old Plasteel is all that separates the galley from the vacuum of space. It’s worse in Radiation Shelter Five. Normally, each shelter holds twelve people during Hyperspace Jumps. Shelter Five is inside the nose of the ship, so when we struck the mine, it crumpled up like an automobile does when it hits a wall. Even though we patched the hull, we can’t fit more than five people inside the shelter.

Keeping that in mind, Captain Rangi redrew the shelter assignments this morning. During our next Hyperspace Jump, I get to share Shelter Two with fifteen other people. It’s going to get really, really uncomfortable; but at least I won’t be killed by the Hyperspace Module.

Maybe the humans have developed a means of Faster-Than-Light travel that isn’t lethal to the user. That would make this trip worth the price.



[Personal log closed]


 
Last edited:
  • 1Love
  • 1Like
Reactions:
Chapter 2.2: Rotorua

Chapter 2.2:

Rotorua


[Personal log: Mission Specialist Mira Mihaka, HMS Midak, On the Surface of Hokianga, Caspadence Star System, 28 Oketopa, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
We’ve made some significant headway towards the Sol Star, putting almost four hundred light years behind us. By my guess, we’ll arrive in the search area about ten or eleven months from now. I really think we’re going to find Earth before the end of next year. In the meantime, we’ve stumbled upon one hell of a find:

Hokianga! Or... what’s left of it anyway. Hokianga was an experimental colony set up around fifty years before the war. There were people from fifteen different species living together a mega-city called Rotorua. My history book at school described it as a “multinational attempt to create utopia, housing two billion people from countless worlds.” It sounds like it was going to be a success until the Invaders showed up.

They absolutely wrecked the place. When we found it this afternoon all that remained of Rotorua was a massive impact crater spanning eighty-five Kios in all directions. On top of that, the planet’s atmosphere is gone. Not changed. Not reduced. GONE. We dropped sensors and scanned for any remains, but didn’t find anything. The city is completely flattened. They just nuked Rotorua from orbit.

Once we got over the shock of seeing what’s left of Hokianga, Captain Rangi kicked us into gear. All of the Comms Specialists went into the secret chamber again, and the Midak started doing lower and lower flybys above the crater; until we finally came down to a landing in the crater. Lieutenant Commander Tunui used a century-old map of the city to figure out where the Partogan district used to be, and he figured out a safe spot for us. In the end, we set down about half a Kio away from the spot where the Partogan convention hall used to be, in the western end of the city. Once the Midak touched down, we got to work. Captain Rangi told me that while the military crew carried out serious repairs to the Midak, the Science Team and I would have fifteen hours to carry out whatever investigations we wanted. So I’ve issued EVA suits to all seventeen members of the science team and given everyone jobs. There’s a few questions that I need to figure out here:

  • Did anyone survive and if so, where are they?
  • What happened to the planet’s atmosphere?
  • Also, the military crew wants to know: If the Invaders really did this, what weapon did they use? Can we defend against it?
I don’t think I’ll be able to answer that third one, but I’ll give it my best shot.


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: On the Surface of Hokianga, 29 Oketopa, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
Spacewalk’s over! We’re all back aboard the Midak now, and wow, we had a great day! First things first: I was wrong about the atmosphere. It’s just barely still there. On planets like Earth or Partoga, the atmosphere is dense and stretches up for over a hundred Kios. Hokianga’s atmosphere stops about fifty Bios up. If all sixty members of the Midak’s crew made a Partogan ladder, standing on each other’s shoulders, the person at the top could put their hand into empty space while the person on the bottom had their feet planted on the ground. That wasn’t the only interesting thing though.

Anahera Mita (our microbiologist) found a species of bacteria living just below ground level, feeding on whatever organic material was left over from Rotorua. She’s wagered everything she owns on a hypothesis that Hokianga’s tentative atmosphere is the result of subterranean microbes living all over the planet. She’s already gone up to the bridge to ask the Captain to keep Midak on the ground for another day so she can do some tests.

Of course, I missed that part. Kaia told me afterwards. See, I’m stuck here in decon right now. I had to quit the spacewalk about ten minutes before everyone else because my suit was leaking air. When I got back inside the Midak, Taka Rangihau found a small hole in my left boot. Of course, because we found microbial life on the planet, I have to go through decontamination, so we’re using the Emergency Containment Cell in the cargo bay as a decon chamber. I wasn’t sure how long I’m gonna be stuck in here, so I asked Kaia to grab my tablet and bring it back to me, which is how I’m talking to all of you now.

And here I am; stuck in a pressurized cylinder, patiently waiting to see if I come down with Space Madness or something stupid like that.

I wonder if the Humans ever had to decontaminate themselves after spacewalks...


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: On the Surface of Hokianga, 29 Oketopa, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
I just dodged a bullet! A Moana Ranginui shaped bullet! The medics let me out of decon just a few minutes ago, and right as I was leaving the cargo bay three people came in. Turns out, Captain Rangi, Petty Officer Ranginui, and Corporal Rangihau all tore their spacesuits while they were repairing the ship and needed to be decontaminated. I gave the Captain and the Corporal an encouraging smile as I left. It takes a different kind of courage to spend time cooped up in a small tube with an insensitive, antisocial Brakas like Moana.

I got out of there as quick as I could and went back to the science labs. Anahera is still investigating the bacteria she found on the planet surface. I think I’ll drop by the Biology lab and see if she needs any help.


[Personal log paused]


[Personal log resumed]


Oh no. This is bad. This is really bad.

Anahera’s bacteria (we really need a better name for this stuff) is loose. I found it running in my own bloodstream. And Anahera’s. And the whole Biology team for that matter. I ran full-tilt over to the decon chamber and drew the Captain’s blood. (I told him I needed it for a test) He’s got the bacteria too. Our decontamination procedures aren’t killing it; nor our standard antibiotic treatments.

Okay. Don’t panic. We need to avoid an epidemic here...

Kaia Patariki: WHAT EPIDEMIC!?

Mira Mihaka: KAIA! Holy Miranda, you made me jump! Look, I need you to get the Biology team together and tell them to meet me in the lab.


[Personal log paused]

[Personal log resumed]


Mira Mihaka:
This on? Good. This is Misson Specialist Mira Mihaka, and I’m here in the Biology lab with Kaia and the whole Biology team. Say hello everyone!

Kaia Patariki: This is Kaia Patariki saying “hi” to everyone at the Royal Science Academy! Rongo, if you’re still dating Ataahua when I get back, I’m going to smack some sense into you.

Tamaho Wihongi: My name is Tamaho Wihongi, and I just wanna say good morning to all of my friends and family in the Sitcala Principality!

Meto Kapua: I’m Meto Kapua. To my son, if the Her Majesty the Queen chose you to become the new Prince of Magdayon, as I heard might happen, then let me congratulate you. If she chose another, I remind you to keep your chin up. Good things come to those who wait.

Moe Kaa: Uh, is it my turn? Hi, I’m Moe Kaa. I dunno what to say... Hi mom!

Ria Areaiiti: Ria Areaiiti. And if my daughter is listening, I know about the boy in Candon. I knew the whole time.

Hoana Awika: Wow. What a mother you are! I’m Hoana Awika, and I thank the Mountain for not giving me any kids. If my little brother Maui is listening, don’t worry about me. I’ll be home in time to help you climb the Mountain, so keep my gear clean, okay?

Anahera Mita: And I’m Anahera Mita. Let the record show I didn’t agree to name my discovery the “Anaplague.”

Tamaho Wihongi: Oh, give it some time. It’ll grow on you.

Moe Kaa: I think it’s perfect!

Kaia Patariki: Hey! Let’s focus on actually figuring this out!

Mira Mihaka: Look, Anahera. You found this stuff. Tell us more about it.

Anahera Mita: Right. So this bacteria, which I’m going to call “Ora Huakita” or O-H is an extremophile, which means it can survive and thrive in environments that would kill organisms like you or me. In the case of O-H and the planet Hokianga, we’re dealing with the abrupt loss of ninety-nine percent of the atmosphere, and the subsequent desiccation of the planet.

Kaia Patariki: Desiccation?

Meto Kapua: All of the water dried up. Probably when the Invaders burned away the atmosphere.

Anahera Mita: When I found the O-H outside the ship, I noticed that it was releasing small amounts of Carbon Dioxide as a waste product. Furthermore, the bacterial colony I found was growing in a cool, dark pit where a building used to be. I only had to dig a little way into the ground before I found trace organic compounds that could have easily been a corpse one hundred and sixty years ago. O-H lives below the ground, where radiation from the sun is less of a danger, and feeds of the remains of the people who used to live here. It converts food into energy to sustain itself, and the waste is converted into a gas.

Tamaho Wihongi: So if we land the Midak outside of the city?

Anahera Mita: There won’t be any atmosphere. I suspect this thin layer of carbon dioxide is a bubble, covering the crater where Rotorua used to be.

Mira Mihaka: Hold on. None of this explains why a third of the crew has Anaplague in their blood right now!

Anahera Mita: I’m getting there. Look, because the atmosphere is so small and tenuous, the local air pressure changes depending on the Anaplague in the ground – oh, holy Miranda, now I’m saying it. Ugh. Anyway, the bacteria is only just below the surface. The Midak landing and our feet tramping around kicked up dust, which blew around in those tiny puffs of wind that we caused. The Anaplague just got caught in the wind and landed on our spacesuits. Mira, you and a bunch of others all breached their spacesuits while they were outside right?

Ria Areaiiti: Yeah, but only microfractures. The hole in Tuterangi’s suit could only be seen through a microscope, remember?

Anahera Mita: Bacteria are microscopic, Ria. Heck, they’re smaller the hole Tuterangi punched in his glove, so that point of entry was big enough.

Moe Kaa: But why didn’t the Anaplague die in the decon chamber?

Tamaho Wihongi: Actually, I think the Anaplague survived because our decontamination chamber was jury-rigged at the last second. That cylinder was designed to serve as a brig, not a quarantine. I’m sure we could find a dozen points of failure in that system if we looked close enough.

Kaia Patariki: And now the for the one million Diram question: Is Anaplague dangerous to us? And if so, how do we get rid of it?

Ria Areaiiti: I can answer that. Everyone in this room is infected right? So, does anyone feel sick? Cause I don’t. I don’t have a fever, my heart rate is normal, there’s just nothing wrong with me. Or any of you, or the Captain, or anyone else who went outside for that matter. The bacteria is adapted to the environment, but not us. It’s completely harmless to us and I don’t think it can’t survive anywhere else.

Meto Kapua: You might be right. Perhaps we should just let some time pass. The bacteria may die off on its own. The chances of it dying off will be greater if we leave this environment, too.

Moe Kaa: I agree. Let’s just leave.

Mira Mihaka: All those in favor of leaving? .... Yeah, that’s everyone. I’ll pass the word to the Captain. Anahera, how much time should we give the bacteria to die off?

Anahera Mita: Not more than sixty hours, I think. That way we can be sure.

Mira Mihaka: Sounds good to me. I’ll talk to Captain Rangi about getting us out of here. While I’m gone, Kaia is in charge. Organize a ship-wide health assessment in sixty hours. Every member of the crew gets checked. No exceptions.

Kaia Patariki: I’ve got this covered, don’t worry. Oh, and don’t forget your tablet.


[Personal log closed]

[Personal Log Addendum: Outer Caspadence Star System, 30 Oketopa, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
It’s been a dozen hours or so since we left Hokianga behind us. The military crew reinforced the outer hull of Deck Two around the spot where we hit a mine a few months back. Meanwhile, the Engineering Team pulled so many soil samples and pieces of city wreckage into the cargo bay that I can’t take one step down there without treading on something.

Once our duty shift ended, Kaia and I went up to our Crew Bay and slept for nearly sixteen hours. In that time, the Midak cleared the System and is right on top of the next Hyperlane. We’re maneuvering into position for the jump to our next destination now. Before heading to my Radiation Shelter, I’m going to collect a sample of the Anaplague from my own blood, and leave the container out under a camera during the Hyperspace Jump. Obviously, I know the radiation coming from the Hyperspace Module will kill the bacteria instantly, but I want to document the event anyway. For science.



[Personal log closed]

Sys/ Hyperspace jump initiated.

Sys/ WARNING! Safety interrupt engaged. Multiple living organisms detected in unshielded location. Hyperspace jump aborted.

Sys/ Safety interrupt disabled. Authorization: Captain Toa Rangi-Partogan Royal Navy.

Sys/ Hyperspace jump initiated.

Sys/ Post-Hyperspace system self-check underway.

Sys/ Self-check complete. All systems operational.

[Personal log addendum: Outer Beyu Star System: 30 Oketopa, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
I...I don’t even know where to start. It defies all logic, all laws of the universe. This shouldn’t happen!

That sample of Anaplague is STILL ALIVE!! I went into the Biology lab where I left it under the camera and it’s perfectly fine. I watched back the video and it was like watching the Mountain sleep. Absolutely nothing happened. I put the sample under a microscope and watched the little bacterium eat and reproduce like nothing had happened. It’s like, like... I don’t have the words. Nothing like this has ever happened before in the history of... anything.

What the hell is this?! Organic life does not survive Hyperspace jumps! Has the universe gone mad?!


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: Outer Beyu Star System: 1 Noema, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
Okay, I’m calm. I’m cool. After the jump, the Biology team worked around the clock on this but we still don’t have an explanation for why a small culture of extremophile bacteria was able to survive the intense ionizing radiation generated by the Hyperspace Module. Look, six hundred and eighty-five years of scientific knowledge says that gamma rays released by a Hyperspace Module should instantly kill anything bigger than a water molecule for about fifty Kios in all directions. The dose is just too high and too quick for anything to overcome. And yet here we are. The Anaplague Colony absorbed tens of thousands of Rads in a split second and doesn’t seem to have blinked the metaphorical eye.

But that’s not the only surprise we had to deal with today. Once I saw that this bacteria could survive outside of a Hyperspace Module, I ordered the team to start taking blood samples from the rest of the crew immediately. Everyone who was infected on Hokianga still has Anaplague in their blood, including Kaia and I. It’s still alive and is clearly not going to die anytime soon. All told, exactly twenty-three of us are infected. That’s just over one quarter of the crew.

Curiously, this stuff still hasn’t done anything to hurt us. No one’s sick, and as far as I can tell, the Anaplague isn’t contagious. So we’re not in any immediate danger, and have an indefinite amount of time to study the Midak’s new microbial passengers. I guess that means my work schedule for the next few weeks has written itself. First priority: Study the Anaplague and find a way to remove it from our bodies. Second priority: find out how the Anaplague survived an unshielded Hyperspace jump.

Sounds like a plan. Ready? Break!

Who the hell am I talking to?

[Personal log closed]



[Infected_crew_list file uploaded]

***Midak Crew Infected by O-H “Anaplague” Bacteria***

  • Captain Toa Rangi
  • Lieutenant Commander Tai Tunui
  • Corporal Hika Tukino
  • Petty Officer Matiu Rata
  • Corporal Tamati Haare
  • Corporal Hinemoa Maioha
  • Corporal Olo Tuterangi
  • Lieutenant Himi Poata
  • Medic Tamaho Wihongi
  • Medic Meto Kapua
  • Medic Ria Areaiiti
  • Specialist Moe Kaa
  • Specialist Hoana Awika
  • Specialist Anahera Mita
  • Specialist Kaia Patariki
  • Mission Specialist Mira Mihaka
  • Corporal Ariki Ruru
  • Lieutenant Ari Kopunui
  • Petty Officer Moana Ranginui
  • Private Enoka Makura
  • Petty Officer Whawhakiterangi Tirikatene
  • Private Nia Tawhiti
  • Corporal Hori Rangihau



Pentwa took a step back from the telescope, falling into her husband’s arms.

“It’s still there.” Pentwa breathed. “It’s really still there… and there’s MSI ships all over it.”

Pentwa looked up at Ely. She dared to hope.

“Is he really?” She breathed.

Ely nodded.

The Great Khan is dead.” He said. “You have nothing to fear any more. None of us do.”

Finally, Pentwa believed it. She let out a whoop and hugged Ely so tightly he gasped for air. Then she stood on the tips of her toes and planted a kiss on Ely’s face, his beard tickling her nose.

“Oh, I’m so happy!” Pentwa declared. “I… I think we should go back into the city and join that big party.”


“Could not agree more.” Ely said.
 
Last edited:
  • 1Love
  • 1Like
Reactions:
Poor Hiigarans! Even their name is forgotten in this cycle. I wonder if any of them would be comforted to know that they did better in the next cycle...

Is all of these mysterious issues with the ship the result of intentional sabotage? I wouldn't put it past... certain members of the Ranginui clan.

I can't tell how honest Kaia is being about the Academy. I could totally believe that it had secret revolutionary slogans. It's a bunch of young people forced to spend large amounts of time with each other! And it's not like anti-government sentiment didn't begin in schools sometimes in real life.

This Anaplague is a piece of the Beast, right? That much I think I do remember.

Why is Mira having memory problems? Oh, right. Has the Shroud subplot started yet?

And that sneak peek looks fun! A Great Khan and MSI? Although I am kind of curious as to why MSI tales are all the rage these days in the Stellaris AAR forums.
 
Is all of these mysterious issues with the ship the result of intentional sabotage?
I imagined the Midak to be something like the space version of a badly outdated rustbucket. Although never stated in the text, Midak is much older than she lets on. The Midak was mothballed after the Second Hyperspace War, along with the Royal Flagship, which appears in a later chapter. While her exact age is unknown, the Midak is possibly over two hundred years old, pulled out of storage and rapidly refit for a new mission. (slightly cheaper than building a new science vessel from scratch)

In short, some (not all ;) ) of the Midak's internal problems can be attributed to her extreme age. She needs to be retired to a graveyard orbit, not sent halfway across the Galaxy.

I can't tell how honest Kaia is being about the Academy. I could totally believe that it had secret revolutionary slogans. It's a bunch of young people forced to spend large amounts of time with each other! And it's not like anti-government sentiment didn't begin in schools sometimes in real life.
Oh yes, there was definitely a little real-world inspiration in that line.

Oh, right. Has the Shroud subplot started yet?
Not quite yet. In fact, the Shroud's introduction will be a little late because I'm planning to restore a previously-deleted chapter before that point.

And that sneak peek looks fun! A Great Khan and MSI? Although I am kind of curious as to why MSI tales are all the rage these days in the Stellaris AAR forums.
Thanks! You can thank @CBR JGWRR for the unusual setup for my next story. Life 2.0 is actually responsible for some of the inspiration for the new unnamed story I've started writing.

I was planning to write a story in which the main character is born and raised in a "failed state." So I asked myself, what does a failed state look like in Stellaris? Then I read Life 2.0 and found the answer: A Payback-origin empire that tries to fight MSI and suffers a near-total defeat.

Right now, I am deeply enamored with this currently-unnamed story and the words are hitting the page very quickly. You may find sneak peeks like the one below scattered throughout the Remaster. ;)


Trig suffered in history class. It was boring and tedious, trying to learn about people and events from another world.

90% of all Sutharians lived on the Homeworld, therefore, 90% all history happened there. Why bother? Trig had never set foot on the Homeworld and likely never would. As far as Trig was concerned, there was no point in learning about this subject.

Mr. Honslett disagreed. He slammed his palm onto Trig’s desk, waking him up from a trance.

“You have got to be kidding me, Shepminter!” Mr. Honslett barked. “We’re talking about recent events, things that happened when you were a kid! Surely you remember something!? What happens if your classmates suddenly have to depend on you? Will you let them down so easily? Now tell me, who ordered the Expulsion!?”

Trig shrugged his left shoulder. A girl named Lhanda raised her hand. Ignoring her, Mr. Honslett focused on Trig.

“How did our current ruler come to power?”

No answer.

“What is the new official language of the Sutharian Empire? Come on, kid! It was changed last year!”

Lhanda could not resist the temptation anymore. She spoke up:

“Sir! The Expulsion of the Telepaths was ordered ten years ago by our new Emperor, Canto the First. Back then he was just President-for-Life. He got the job fifteen years ago when he overthrew his older brother, and then he crowned himself Emperor last year. That was when our country’s official language was switched back to Olinbar.”

Mr. Honslett gazed at Lhanda, his gaze softening.

“Well done.” He said. “I’m glad to see that someone cares enough to try and help Mister Shepminter.”

Lhanda looked at Trig, then back at her books. She did not acknowledge him for the rest of class.
 
Chapter 2.3: Left Behind
Author's Notes: There are two different versions of the Xolton Debris Field seen in this chapter. In-game, I flew the Midak through the system once when it contained only destroyed planets and took 10 screenshots. Then I reloaded the game and staged a battle between the UNE and Levakian Confederation in the system while running the Stellar Graveyards mod. Out of the 20 screenshots I took, only three made it into this chapter.


Chapter 2.3:

Left Behind

[Personal log: Mission Specialist Mira Mihaka, HMS Midak, Outer Castor Star System, 30 Hakihea, 685]


Mira Mihaka:
It’s New Year’s Eve! Here’s to finding Earth before the end of Six-Eighty-Six! I was just thinking about what I would do if I was back home on Partoga. I’d be heading out to Archer’s Canyon with my family. We always walk the length of the canyon, following the Rakinui River all the way back to its headwaters at the base of The Mountain just like we do every year. As the sun went down, we would come to the Silver Lake and feast with all of the other Pilgrims who made the trip. I’d thank the Mountain for giving us another year and I’d ask for one more.

Actually, now that I say that out loud, it reminds me... two years ago, my niece Maki (she was five then) asked me why we couldn’t ask the Mountain for more than one year at a time. She said “I wanna ask the Mountain for infinity years!” So I told her about how the Mountain saw powerful people hoarding food and less fortunate fighting over what little remained in the fields. Little Maki was so scared when I explained how the Mountain lost its temper and exploded, killing almost everyone on the Partogan Continent, and throwing the Levakian one into a decade-long winter, and how everyone began to starve.

Of course, Maki already knew about the Wars of the Famine. It’s the first thing they teach children at both school and church. She actually finished the story for me at this point. Maki told me about how the first Queen, Miranda the Great, appeased the Mountain by sharing her massive stockpiles of bread and fruit with the common people. Now, on the last day of the year, the Mountain looks over both the Partogan and Levakian continents to see if everyone has enough to eat. If the Mountain sees someone hoarding food, or using violence to take it from someone else, the Mountain will explode a second time. “And do we want that?” I asked Maki, and she always answers: “No Aunt Mira. That’s why we remind the Mountain every year that we’re still sharing food.”

Exactly. Happy New Year Maki, wherever you are. And to the Mountain: I know I’m about nine hundred light-years away, but I just know you can still hear us praying to you out here. No one is hungry aboard the HMS Midak tonight.


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: Outer Castor Star System, 1 Hanuere, 686]


Mira Mihaka:
Happy New Year! I hope everyone at home is having a safe night. I just know my brother and his daughter are painting Candon red today. I would. Besides, today isn’t just a holiday at home, it’s also the one-year anniversary of our departure from Fort Daxia.

Damn. One whole year in space. Time just flew.

Lieutenant Commander Tunui is setting up a New Year’s party in the forward galley, and the whole crew is going to be there. But since the party doesn’t start for a few more hours, I’m going to take a few minutes to look back on everything we’ve done over the past year:

So, Hanuere first, Six-Eighty-Five. We left Fort Daxia, salvaged a Levakian shipwreck, and got out of the Home System without any bumps or bruises. We jumped to Tediss, and the Science team got settled in. We set up six long-term experiments that’ll run the length of our mission: Irradiated bacteria, cosmic radiation vs cell walls, muscle atrophy tests, a ship-board AI, prototype defensive shields for the hull, and faster-than-light sensors. We’ve also set up a long term investigation into the hyperspace module, which is still catching fire whenever we pass too close to B-class stars.

Heading into the middle of the year, we made great progress, leaving Partoga’s old southern border behind and entering what’s left of the Micore Empire. By the middle of Pipiri, our irradiated bacteria cultures had doubled at least once. It was the only experiment showing any real results. For everything else, the experimental groups and control groups remained identical. We decided to let more time pass.

Then, ho boy, “that” happened. On Mahuru second, we flew into an old battlefield chasing an automated distress signal and plowed headlong into a war-era space mine. It’s a miracle no one actually died. But the Midak is a tough ship. We shrugged off our near death-experience and just moved on.

Then, two months ago, right around the end of Oketopa, we found Hokianga and saw the ruins of Rotorua. The Midak landed on the surface to take a closer look, and we picked up a microscopic passenger while we were down there: an extremophile bacteria we call “Anaplague.” It’s named for Anahera, one of the scientists on the team. The Anaplague has somehow found a way to survive in the bloodstream of twenty-three of us, including myself. Since it isn’t hurting anyone or triggering an immune response, the Biology team isn’t in any hurry to purge the Anaplague. Besides, the microbe is somehow able to survive outside of a radiation shelter during Hyperspace Jumps, we really need to study the Anaplague learn more about this ability.

That’s everything interesting that’s happened so far. We’ve travelled about seventy-five and a half light-years, which is about one-quarter of the way to the search area where Sol might be.

You know, why couldn’t the Queen fund a whole fleet of ships to do this mission? Did she really have so much faith in my math that she felt comfortable sending only one ship to find Sol?


[Personal log closed]


embed



[Personal log addendum: Outer Xolton Star System, 20 Hanuere 686]


Mira Mihaka:
So... we’re at Xolton.

The Xolton system is... it.... Uhg. I’m not the best person to talk about history. No. You know what? Let me get an actual historian. Hey! Nia! You’re the history buff. You tell’em about the Battle of Xolton.

Nia Tawhiti: Okay, hold on. Do I talk into this? Ahem. This thing on? Right. I’m Private Nia Tawhiti. Comms Tower, first shift. So, for those of you who never took the Second Hyperspace War history class in school (don’t lie, I know that’s all of you) the Battle of Xolton was fought on Akuhata second, 520 and was one of the last battles of the Third Stage of the war, which lasted between the years 514 and 520. This is where the stalemate broke in the Invader’s favor, the Galactic Front Line collapsed, and the Invaders began driving towards the Sol Star. Before the situation got out of control, the second and third planets of the Xolton system were colonized by the Vanians and developed into industrial centers. Both planets manufactured warships for the Micore Empire and the Vanian Government right up to the last second.

Once the Galactic Front Line collapsed, the Triple Alliance fleet (Partogans, Levakians, and Humans) plus a few of our allies (Vanians, Micore, and Amadii) fell back to Xolton and set up a new defensive line. The Second Stormbreaker, a human called “Trojan” flew all the way out from Sol to take command of the combined fleets. Above the second planet in the system, “Trojan” (no one knows if they were a man or a woman) put together a multilayered defense of Xolton that was geared towards destroying as many Invader ships as possible.

They got massacred. The Invaders cut through the Six Nation Armada like a hot knife through butter and suffered no casualties in return. The Invader fleet eviscerated our allies and when the Levakians tried to retreat, the enemy gave chase. Every moon the Levakians hid behind was blown to rubble, so they tried to hide in the thick atmosphere of the third planet. The Invaders just vaporized the whole thing. Once they were finished with our fleets, the enemy destroyed everything in-system before continuing on towards Earth. Most of the surviving Partogan ships fled to the Sol system since the enemy was between them and Trecta. “Trojan” barely got out with his or her life, and the Invader fleet pressed on towards Sol. In the end, all the defenders of Xolton managed to do was buy a little more time for Jericho and the other fourteen Stormbreakers to prepare the defense of Earth. Considering the state the galaxy is in now, this was clearly the best possible outcome.

All told, the Battle of Xolton was a complete and total defeat for Partoga and her allies, but also a strategic coup d’état. That’s a human expression referring to a successful ploy on a large scale. Need any more stories, Mira?

Mira Mihaka: One more thing: you mentioned that some Partogans survived this battle. What happened to them?

Nia Tawhiti: They flew to Sol and linked up with Queen Miranda’s flagship. In the year 521, some fifty thousand Partogans and about one hundred-fifteen thousand Levakians fought in the War in Heaven. Only forty-five Partogans survived, and thirty of them died on the return trip to Partoga, which took half a decade because the Hyperspace Network was knocked out. And at five years, two months, this is also the longest period of time our nation went without a Queen.

Mira Mihaka: Damn. I feel sorry for the poor girl who became Queen Miranda the Fourth. Can you imagine being in charge of the First Reconstruction? It must have been a terrible time. Knowing that there were billions of Partogans and Levakians living off-world but having no way to reach them. I think I’d just cry all day.

Nia Tawhiti: She did her best given the circumstances. So did your mom, Mira.

Mira Mihaka: What? There’s no way you’re old enough to remember my mother being Queen! You’re younger than me!

Nia Tawhiti: Not by much. It’s fuzzy, but I do remember. Speaking of the Throne, can I ask you a question about that?

Mira Mihaka: Let’s hear it.

Nia Tawhiti: After your mom... er... Her Majesty Kendra, passed away, why didn’t you enter the Election? You were the right age, you probably could have won the Throne for yourself.

Mira Mihaka: Uh... Nia... you do know that the Royal Election hasn’t worked that way in almost three hundred years, right? The Church of the Mountain never would have put my name on the list of Candidates, let alone give me votes.

Nia Tawhiti: But you should have tried! Even if you lost, you would have been set for life! Queen Candidates don’t have to go on seven-year voyages to provide for their families, you know.

Mira Mihaka: Hey, I appreciate the concern, but seriously. The Royal Election hasn’t been democratic since Queen Emily. If the Church doesn’t approve of a girl, then she get doesn’t the Throne. It’s as simple as that. I rubbed too many clergymen the wrong way when I was a kid. I just had the attitude most girls get when their mothers die, and the Church officials didn’t take too kindly to it. It’ll be five hundred years before another Mihaka sits on the Throne, mark my words.

Nia Tawhiti: So... bear with me here... if the Church of the Mountain didn’t have a say-

Mira Mihaka: Stop, just...stop. I don’t wanna go down that hole.

Nia Tawhiti: I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to upset you. Uh, you can have this back now...

embed


[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: Inner Xolton Star System, 22 Hanuere 686]


Mira Mihaka:
I know I should have been making log entries the past couple of days, but I was so off my game after talking to Nia that I just had to take some time for myself. I don’t know if this came across in any of my previous entries, but I don’t talk about politics if I can help it. My mother was the seventeenth Queen of Partoga. Yay. Let’s move on to something actually important:

About an hour ago, the Midak was sifting through a huge cloud of battle debris in orbit above the second planet, when we found something...really...really weird. We found a Levakian fighter craft docked in the hangar bay of a Micore Battleship.

That’s just not possible. Levakian starships were completely incompatible with Micore technology. Different sized docking clamps, fuel pipes have different configurations, oh, and don’t get me started on the fact that there’s no air on a Micore ship for a Levakian to breathe. Whoever accomplished this clearly did it in the middle of the battle. It’s such an impressive feat of engineering that Captain Rangi has stopped the Midak so my team can do a full investigation.



[Investigation Report 1.1 – 10:35 hours – 22 Hanuere 686]

Mira Mihaka:
It took all of fifteen minutes for Nikau and Tangaroa to spacewalk over to the Micore Battleship. They went over every inch of the suspicious strike craft. It’s a Silvestris-Class Heavy Fighter. Our records indicate these ships were used to hunt enemy bombers and protect allied capital ships. The Silvestris can hold a crew of two: the pilot and the tail gunner. We figured all of that out pretty quickly. So the next questions are: How did the pilot connect this thing to an incompatible alien ship? Why did they do it?


[Investigation Report 1.2 – 16:09 hours – 22 Hanuere 686]

Mira Mihaka:
The Levakian fighter is now in the Midak’s cargo bay. It just barely fits. Fortunately, because Partogans and Levakians shared a homeworld, their programming language is almost identical to ours. In a few hours, we’ll download the ships computer and figure out what happened here. Meanwhile, I’ve got Eru, Manawa, Tipi, and Watahui stripping the vessel down for anything useful.


[Investigation Report 1.3 – 20:57 hours – 22 Hanuere 686]

Mira Mihaka:
Download complete! Next, all of the data in the ship’s computer has to be translated from Levakian into Partogan. Given that the Levakians went extinct during the war, we’ll just have to work off the Levakian database in the Midak’s computer. It should only take a few minutes...

...And we’re getting something! This fighter, callsign “Puma Five” was stationed aboard the Pardus-Class Battleship “Growltiger.” The Growltiger engaged the Invaders alongside the rest of the Triple Alliance fleet during the Battle of Xolton. Puma Five flew at least three sorties before being hit by flak and forced to land aboard the Partogan Battleship “Krakua.” Right after Puma Five landed in the hangar bay, the Krakua was bisected by an enemy beam weapon.

That’s where the record stops. Now I have to wait for the computer to finish translating the rest.


[Investigation Report 1.4 – 29:10 hours – 22 Hanuere 686]

Mira Mihaka:
I don’t... I don’t have words. There’s nothing I can say about this. Here, you just listen to these:


[DISTRESS CALL: 2 Akuhata, 520 from the HMS Krakua]
Kahu Tamanui:
Mayday! Mayday! Mayday! This is Tech Sergeant Kahu Tamanui calling all Triple Alliance ships in range. I’m trapped aboard the HMS Krakua and everyone else is dead. Please turn around and come back for me! I’m still here! I’m still on the Krakua!

[DISTRESS CALL: 2 Akuhata, 520 from the HMS Krakua]
Kahu Tamanui:
Mayday! Mayday! Mayday! This is Kahu Tamanui of the Partogan Royal Navy calling the unidentified vessel. I’m trapped aboard the HMS Krakua. Drives disabled. Multiple hull breaches. Hyperspace Module destroyed. Request immediate extraction!

[DISTRESS CALL: 2 Akuhata, 520 from the HMS Krakua]
Kahu Tamanui:
DAMN IT! I CAN SEE YOU! YOUR SHIP IS FIVE THOUSAND KIOS OFF MY PORT BOW! RESPOND! FOR THE LOVE OF MIRANDA! ANSWER ME!

[DISTRESS CALL: 3 Akuhata, 520 from the HMS Krakua]
Kahu Tamanui:
COME BACK! DAMN IT! Come...back....

[DISTRESS CALL: Sent: 15 Akuhata, 520 from the HMS Krakua]
Kahu Tamanui:
Mayday, Mayday, Mayday. My name is Kahu Tamanui, and I’m calling from the Partogan Battleship Krakua. I’ve been trapped aboard this ship for about two weeks and need rescue immediately. Any friendly ships in the area, please respond!

[DISTRESS CALL: 19 Oketopa, 520 from the HMS Lesovikk]
Kahu Tamanui:
I have no idea if this is getting out, but it’s worth a shot. This is Partogan Tech Sergeant Kahu Tamanui transmitting in the blind. I believe I am the lone survivor of the Triple Alliance Fifteenth Fleet. I’m currently in the debris field orbiting Xolton. I can’t tell you which ship I’m on because I keep moving around. I know I’m on a Partogan ship though. I’m using a Levakian fighter to keep on the move. My hope is to find a working Hyperspace Module and jury-rig it onto this fighter. I’ve fully restored life support on one of these ships and built some solar panels to keep it running. Hopefully, I won’t be stuck out here for too long. Either someone will find me, or I’ll run out of food, water, air, or some combination of all three.

[DISTRESS CALL: 18 Noema, 520 from the HMS Tuyet]
Kahu Tamanui:
Sergeant Tamanui transmitting in the blind from the Xolton system. I’ve set up a permanent base of operations aboard the Partogan Cruiser Tuyet. There’s years’ worth of food and water here and the ship is mostly intact, aside from the sublight engines and hyperspace module being missing. So if any rescuers are on the way, you’re looking for a cruiser named “Tuyet.” If I’m not here, wait a day or so before leaving, because I might come back if I still haven’t found a working Hyperspace Module. I have a plan to boost my signal. Pray to the Mountain for me that it works and someone hears me.

[DISTRESS CALL: 1 Hanuere, 521 from the HMS Jovan]
Kahu Tamanui:
This is the HMS Jovan of the Partogan Royal Navy transmitting in the blind. My engines are disabled and my Hyperspace Module is destroyed. I’m adrift in the Xolton system. Request immediate extraction.

[DISTRESS CALL: 2 Hanuere, 521 from the HMS Nikila]
Kahu Tamanui:
This is the HMS Nikila of the Partogan Royal Navy transmitting in the blind. My engines are disabled and my Hyperspace Module is destroyed. I’m adrift in the Xolton system. Request immediate extraction.

[DISTRESS CALL: 3 Hanuere, 521 from the MCC SCC-355]
Kahu Tamanui:
This is the SCC-355 of the Micore Defensive Formation transmitting in the blind. My engines are disabled and my Hyperspace Module is destroyed. I’m adrift in the Xolton system. Request immediate extraction.

[DISTRESS CALL: 4 Hanuere, 521 from the LVK Growltiger]
Kahu Tamanui:
This is the Growltiger of the Partogan Royal Navy-Levakian Contingent transmitting in the blind. My engines are disabled and my Hyperspace Module is destroyed. I’m adrift in the Xolton system. Request immediate extraction.

[DISTRESS CALL: 5 Hanuere, 521 from the JSDF Hyuuga]
Kahu Tamanui:
This is the JSDF Hyuuga of the Human Nations transmitting in the blind. My engines are disabled and my Hyperspace Module is destroyed. I’m adrift in the Xolton system. Request immediate extraction.

[DISTRESS CALL: 7 Hanuere, 521 from the ADD Ilamaha Iloobey]
Kahu Tamanui:
Damn, I’m proud of this. For the past two weeks, I flew that Levakian piece of junk all over the debris field and fired up distress signals on any ship that’s mostly in one piece. There’s no way all of them are actually transmitting. Some of them were too pulverized. I’m certain that at least two or three of those ships are transmitting though. Now I sit back on the Tuyet with my massive supply of food, water, and air. And I wait.

[DISTRESS CALL: 7 Maehe, 521 from the HMS Tuyet]
Kahu Tamahui:
It’s been half a year since the Battle of Xolton. I haven’t seen nor heard from the rest of the galaxy since then. Is the war over? Did Agamemnon reach Earth? Heck. Is Jericho even alive?

[DISTRESS CALL: 30 Pipiri, 521 from the HMS Tuyet]
Kahu Tamahui:
Hello? Is anyone out there?

[DISTRESS CALL: 29 Hoongongoi, 521 from the HMS Tuyet]
Kahu Tamahui:
Almost one year. I haven’t seen another living thing for that long. Haven’t spoken to another person. No news.

[DISTRESS CALL: 17 Akuhata, 521 from the HMS Tuyet]
Kahu Tamahui:
Am I the only one left?

[DISTRESS CALL: 2 Mahuru, 521 from the HMS Tuyet]
Kahu Tamahui:
I FOUND ONE! There’s a working Hyperspace Module on a Micore Battleship! I’ve already started moving all of my stuff over there. It’ll take weeks to attach the module to my fighter, but I’m absolutely certain that I can use it to escape this dump! Yes! YES!

[DISTRESS CALL: 10 Mahuru, 521 from the TCC-001]
Kahu Tamanui:
I’ve done it! I just finished attaching the Hyperspace Module to my fighter! I’m planning to do a simple flight test tomorrow morning. If everything goes well, then I’ll fly out to the Hyperlane and start heading towards Partoga on the day after tomorrow. This is Tech Sergeant Kahu Tamanui, saying goodbye to this dump!

[DISTRESS CALL: 11 Mahuru, 521 from the TCC-001]
Kahu Tamanui:
WHAT THE F---- WHAT IS THAT!?!? Something is coming this way really fast! It’s-I can’t even- HOLY MOTHER OF MIRANDA!!


[Personal log: Mission Specialist Mira Mihaka, HMS Midak, Outer Castor Star System, 23 Hanuere 686]

Mira Mihaka:
Sergeant Tamanui didn’t make it. Best I can tell, he must have witnessed the last few seconds of Jericho’s battle with Agamemnon. He would have died of radiation poisoning in less than a minute. Just enough time to know he was dying.

This is just one soldier, on a single battlefield. The Second Hyperspace War lasted for twenty-one years and spanned half of the galaxy. How many more scenes like this will we have to look at before we find Earth? How many on the way home?

Oh, Miranda. What is Earth going to be like? More of this? Or something worse? For the first time, the path ahead seems...darker.


[Personal log closed]

embed



 
Last edited:
  • 1Love
Reactions:
The sheer sense of panic there... chilling.

I also liked this chapter (both when it first came out and now) because of the cultural tale at the beginning. Made Partoga feel more... real... like an actual society. However, I do have a question. What does "paint Candon red" mean? I get that Candon's probably a city, but what does red symbolize here?

Nia's casual condescension about how none of her listeners cared about the 2HW enough to take a class was amusing. Also raises questions about Partogan society and exactly how traumatized it got. And what's up with this mention of offworld Partogans?

Also, the conclusion that this was the best outcome was either sarcasm (possible) or irony, given what we know from the other cycles. How was Akira involved there? Did she sabotage the Triple Alliance at this battle? Also, just thinking about other cycles and aliens makes me wonder what happened to planets besides Earth during the First Cycle. Was that closer to this cycle or the more optimistic 116th?
 
I also liked this chapter (both when it first came out and now) because of the cultural tale at the beginning. Made Partoga feel more... real... like an actual society. However, I do have a question. What does "paint Candon red" mean? I get that Candon's probably a city, but what does red symbolize here?
When Mira said "Paint Candon red" she was co-opting an old Human saying. To "paint the town red" means "to enjoy oneself flamboyantly."

Nia's casual condescension about how none of her listeners cared about the 2HW enough to take a class was amusing. Also raises questions about Partogan society and exactly how traumatized it got. And what's up with this mention of offworld Partogans?
The mention of offworld Partogans invokes the unknown millions of Partogans who were trapped on distant colonies in Partogan territory, unable to survive without support from the Homeworld during the aftermath of the Second Hyperspace War. By the time Mira lived, all of these colonies had died out.

How was Akira involved there? Did she sabotage the Triple Alliance at this battle? Also, just thinking about other cycles and aliens makes me wonder what happened to planets besides Earth during the First Cycle. Was that closer to this cycle or the more optimistic 116th?
During the 115th Cycle, Akira suffered two major setbacks that forced her to give up on the timeline early and move onto the next one:
  1. She narrowly failed to destroy the planet Asalele during the Levakian Uprising in 1928.
  2. The Stombreakers received a warning about her and instantly became hostile toward Akira in 2035.
Most of Akira's direct interference during the 2HW in this Cycle was detected and occasionally undone because people were onto her.

Without Akira's actions to prop up or guarantee the fall of certain worlds, the 2HW in this Cycle played out differently than what is seen in The Stormbreakers. Most noticeably is the fact that Earth was liberated at some point in the mid 2020's instead of 2035, this meant Humanity spent several years participating in the war before the War in Heaven happened.

In the First Cycle, all the way back at the beginning, Earth was the only planet known to have survived the War in Heaven due to Jericho's pyrrhic victory over the Beast. A depiction of this world can be seen in All Our Sins Remembered. Considering what we see in After Everything, it is logical to assume that worlds on the opposite side of the Galaxy from the extragalactic invasion also survived, such as:
  • Asalele (Levakian)
  • Aoraki (Partogan)
  • Kelta (Kelt)
  • Assuria (Assuirans)
  • Hiigara and the Angel Moon (Hiigarans)
 
  • 1
Reactions:
Chapter 2.4: A Global Prison
Author's notes: Back in the very early days when I was first putting the Stormbreaker Universe into writing, I used the Hawaiian language as a placeholder for the Levakian language. This practice was phased out around the time of The Stormbreakers. You may notice a few Hawaiian words in this chapter.

Also, this chapter contains two total replacements for images that appeared in the original version of the story. I think these previously unused images do a better job than the ones they displaced.

Finally, the narration in this chapter mentions a 'planet-killing' weapon the invaders tried to use. While not revealed in this story, the weapon in question can actually be seen in two of the sequels! It was a Riri Nui-class Planet Killer. The Partogans built and deployed seven of these things during the events of Faith in Chaos and The Stormbreakers.

Chapter 2.4:

A Global Prison

[Personal log: Mission Specialist Mira Mihaka, HMS Midak, Inner Cuunbar Star System, 30 Maehe, 686]

embed


Mira Mihaka: Have you ever known that you would have to confront something unpleasant, so you delayed and procrastinated as much as you could? Did you stretch out every day, hour, and minute as long as possible? I was in those boots this week. Ever since I plotted the Midak’s flightpath towards the Primary Search Area where Sol might be, I knew we’d have to fly through the Cuunbar System. I talked with Astronavigators about trying to find a way around this place, argued with the Captain about taking a detour that might add three years to our journey. But there was nothing for it. We had to pass through this system eventually.

Since I’m trying to avoid Private Tawhiti right now, I researched all of the history you need to know in advance. So, take a few moments off and let me tell you the story of why the third planet in the Cuunbar system is encased in an impenetrable shield.

The third planet in system is Amadiio. This planet was a client-state of the Micore Empire and was one of the smallest states in the galaxy; their sphere of influence stretching one light-year in any direction. The Amadii themselves were avian creatures: flightless birds with big, heavy bodies and really long, powerful legs. Nothing in the galaxy could run the hundred-Bio dash faster than an Amadii.

Their first contact with extraterrestrial life was with the Vanians in the year 410. By pure luck, the Vanians were also avians. Unlike the big, muscular Amadii, Vanians had some of the most beautiful and extravagant plumage of any bird in the galaxy. Hang on, I’ll upload a picture of an Amadii and a Vanian so you can tell the difference:

[Amadiio_diplomacy file uploaded]


embed


Okay, now here’s a Vanian:

[Vania_diplomacy file uploaded]

embed


So the Amadii started sending exploration missions into space, to see what else there was in the galaxy. They met the Micore Empire, which was quite friendly towards them. Then their ship flew into our space. The Amadii science ship didn’t respond to hails, so it was blown to bits by a Levakian destroyer. Partoga and Amadiio never really got along with each other until the war started.

The Amadii didn’t really have a space fleet when the Invaders showed up, so they threw themselves into the Micore sphere of influence in exchange for protection. While Micore fleets defended Amadiio, the Empire started sending weapons and technology to Amadiio so that it could defend itself. One of the weapons Amadiio received from the Micore Empire was a “Colossus,” which is basically a moon-sized weapons platform designed for planetary bombardment.

The Amadii Colossus was armed with a Global Pacifier: It envelopes an entire planet inside an energy shield which is completely impenetrable. Nothing can get through except for a few waveforms of light. The planet is permanently cut off from the rest of the universe. Once the Colossus was transferred to Amadii control, a huge political crisis went up in their government. No one could decide what to do with it. Some wanted to go on the offensive and dent the Invader’s lines as badly as possible. Others wanted to use the Colossus defensively.

But there was one person, a member of the Amadii Navy, who had another idea. On the fifteenth of Akuhata, year 514, this individual (we’ve lost his name since then) staged a hostile takeover of the Colossus’ command center while the politicians were still arguing with each other. Then he turned the Global Pacifier on Amadiio itself.

The rouge Amadii navy officer was arrested by the Partogan Royal Navy. Sadly, we don’t know why he Pacified his own home because the ship carrying him was destroyed by the Invaders when they swept through the system a few days later.

As for the planet; everyone survived. The Invaders took their own planet-killing weapon to Amadiio but it didn’t have any effect on the shield. The entire world is now a prison for all four billion people down there. And their dependents, and theirs too... and so on for the rest of time.

I’m telling this story because of something we noticed three days ago: Amadiio is trying to talk to us.

The Midak has been in orbit ever since we first noticed. Every time we cross the terminator and fly over the planet’s night side, the whole surface starts blinking and flickering in sequence. Entire cities are lighting up in patterns, and we can see massive, well-lit structures in the countryside built for the sole purpose of sending light signals to anyone in orbit.

Since our sensors can’t penetrate the shield, Captain Rangi has ordered everyone to find a planet-facing window and to write down everything they see about the surface of Amadiio. I’m going to copy down my sightings here for my own research. They might be useful later.

[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum: 1 Paenga-whāwhā, 686, Inner Cuunbar Star System]

  • 24:40 hours: Saw a massive floating structure in the southern ocean on the day side. It’s sprawling outward like a spider web.
  • 24:58: There’s a small town on coast of the bigger continent which has millions of rocks and flowers arranged to form a picture of Queen Miranda the Third. I guess they haven’t forgotten us.
  • 25:30: As we crossed into the daylight side again, I spotted the population of a whole city. I’m serious, all of the people living there had gathered in the countryside to watch the Midak fly past.
  • 26:20: It happened again. A crowd of tens of thousands of people.
  • 29:35: The words “Ua palekana mākou” are carved into the ground. Each letter is a Kio and a half tall. The words have clearly been there for a century or more because the first five letters in “palekana” are filled with water. They’re obviously meant for anyone flying above.
Lieutenant Anaru recognized the words carved on the ground. He told me that it’s a very old dialect that was only spoken by Levakians who were born somewhere other than Partoga. So there’s a very decent possibility that Levakians may not be extinct after all. There could be a few living on Amadiio. Their species might never fly in space again, but at least they’re alive. It’s better than the alternative.

[Personal log closed]

[Personal log addendum 4
Paenga-whāwhā, 686, Inner Cuunbar Star System]

Mira Mihaka:
I’m losing my voice right now, so I’m gonna record this quickly... Ahem, early this morning, we did a low pass over a big desert on the smaller continent. We got as low as possible without hitting the shield and flashed our floodlights repeatedly, just to say hello to a small village in the middle of that desert. About forty minutes later, we flew past the same spot again and saw a few thousand Amadii people swarming around the village in the desert. *cough* they were digging a big network of trenches all around the town, and they were still digging when we flew past again.

Five passes later, we finally saw what was going on: The Amadii had dug a colossal star map into the ground. The desert village represented the Cuunbar System itself and there were hundreds of lines around it; standing for the now-defunct Hyperspace Network. The Amadii people placed powerful spotlights down on the desert to show star systems, and connected them based on the “Hyperlanes” that used to exist there. But here’s the important part:

The Amadii drew arrows in the desert floor, and used a red spotlight to highlight one particular star system: Atlas. We counted no fewer than fifteen arrows pointing directly at the system. *cough* Also, it’s the only star on the “Map” labelled with a name. *cough* ... The Levakian words “E hele i kēia” are carved into the dirt with a bright red arrow pointing directly at the Atlas system. Captain Rangi gathered the whole bridge crew, myself, and all of the officers together for a meeting.

I told them that the Atlas system is off my prescribed flightpath. It’s almost a full month out of our way, and that investigating whatever anomaly might be there could put us between three and five months behind schedule. Remember, we’ve been in space for a year already, this mission is scheduled to take seven years, and we only have enough food for eight. We can’t afford a major delay like this. *cough*

I argued against investigating Atlas for nearly three hours, and I had to *cough* debate Commander Aranui the whole time. She really, REALLY, wants to know what’s going on over there.

I tried my best, but Rangi is the Captain, and he overruled me. The Midak is leaving Amadiio orbit sometime tonight and we’re heading toward the Atlas system. *cough* my throat is sore, I’m tired, and I think my leg muscles are starting to atrophy from the ship’s microgravity. I feel beaten. I’m going to have a lie-down.

embed


[Personal log closed]


 
Last edited:
  • 1Love
Reactions:
Why is Mira avoiding Nia? What happened between them offscreen?

Amadiio's fate sucks in every cycle that we know of. Why do you like torturing them so much? Weren't they also the planet subject to being mind-controlled into willing slaves to humanity through psionics by Akira in the 116th Cycle? Speaking of which, did Akira have anything to do with this mysterious man's pacification of his homeworld? This sounds like her.
 
It would be interesting to know exactly what can and can't get through a shielded world.
Aside from that one infamous event chain, Stellaris doesn't really go into detail about how shielded worlds work. I also want more information on the topic from the game too, but I have not played as a fanatic Pacifist in a while, meaning I have not deployed the Global Pacifier since After Everything in 2018.

Didn't [the Midak crew] consider the option to have aeroponics on board?
Aeroponics are possible with Partoga's reduced tech level in this story, but the Midak's interior doesn't permit large-scale use of the tech, not without re-working the vessel's insides anyway. (See the diagram below, it is from the original version of Chapter 4.1, which is much later in After Everything, so beware of spoilers)

embed

Why is Mira avoiding Nia?
During the events of Chapter 2.3: Left Behind, Nia upset Mira by prying into her personal affairs. Specifically, Nia asked some sensitive questions about what Mira did after her mother (Queen Kendra the Second) passed away. Mira's not up for another round at this point, so she is avoiding Nia.

Amadiio's fate sucks in every cycle that we know of. Why do you like torturing them so much?
That goes way back to the old stories my sister and I made up about our ramshackle universe when we were kids. (We're talking 2007-2009 here) Amadiio was a kind of "crossroads" between some of the other nations we created. (Originally, it was directly between Partoga and Micanawn) Whenever war broke out between any of these nations, someone would invade Amadiio and use it as a springboard to attack someone else. Before the Stormbreaker Universe was written, Amadiio was a perpetual ruin, with most of the populace migrating away.

Typically, Partoga and the Micore Empire would fight over this place more frequently than anyone else, as the Micore were constantly trying to stop Amadiio from joining the Triple Alliance, a military alliance dominated by the Partogans.

The "Perpetual Ruin" idea was taken away from Amadiio when I started writing the series. Instead, I gave the concept to the Assurian people, since I've been putting their nation through near-continuous civil wars since I created them in 2010.

Weren't they also the planet subject to being mind-controlled into willing slaves to humanity through psionics by Akira in the 116th Cycle?
Yup! Quite correct, Amadiio got blasted by a miniaturized Divine Enforcer in The Last Heroes. It happened in Chapter 27: Faith Enforced.

Speaking of which, did Akira have anything to do with this mysterious man's pacification of his homeworld? This sounds like her.
This situation absolutely looks like something the Paradox would have been involved in. The Paradox's influence is too strong to ignore here. ;)
 
Even if they can't leave, they can communicate. My engineer brain is already devising installations for when the galaxy is more high tech. Gotta hook them into the interstellar internet.
 
Even if they can't leave, they can communicate. My engineer brain is already devising installations for when the galaxy is more high tech. Gotta hook them into the interstellar internet.
When I first created the Midak, I really liked the concept of the "Comms Tower" and had ideas for chapters that would be set there. Unfortunately, none of those panned out. A shame. Never letting Mira visit the Comms Tower was a missed opportunity.