If you get approval and do run a vote, then you had better offers us a full ballot sheet.
In particular you still have to explain about the "Ban Offshore Oil and Gas Drilling and Vaping in Enclosed Indoor Workplaces Amendment". Are you trying to ban offshore oil and gas drilling in enclosed indoor workplaces? If so can you carry on offshore oil and gas drilling inside enclosed indoor workplaces, provided you don't vape at the same time? Inquiring minds need to know.
Not just for Parliament either. Local elections (could potentially be in an alternative world) important too!
Now readers may be wondering why El Pip is being pedantic here. Whilst it is true that anyone with a firm grasp of the English language can understand that the bill in practice appears to be about the banning of offshore oil and gas drilling, and the banning of vaping in enclosed indoor workplaces, this is not in fact relevant. It doesn't even matter that most computers would read it as such.
No, it needs to be absolutely crystal clear because lawyers and politicians will either not approve it or abuse the heck out of it as it stands. And if you don't think that happens, look up the Factory Acts on Wikipedia. Thirty one years and three attempts to pass the same bill, and until the end of the century to get it to apply to everyone.