Good to see your return!
One way or another, a tent with a door you can knock on sounds a whole lot more like a hut and or something not so temporary as a tent. Well, I suppose there are 20th Century versions of tents that had doors, but....
Thus, he must be dreaming.
Glad you said that. The tone of this one brings us back a bit to your overt comedy section.Also, this might be more amusing than I initially intended.
Now, I am thinking this is actually Herbert dreaming. The entry can't be from his journal because it is in the third person, right?Finally, he heard a knock upon the door of his tent.
One way or another, a tent with a door you can knock on sounds a whole lot more like a hut and or something not so temporary as a tent. Well, I suppose there are 20th Century versions of tents that had doors, but....
Thus, he must be dreaming.
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