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I'm currently reading a book which argues, among other things, that the line between the three Abrahamitic was far from absolute during the middle ages and even the early modern time, and the sternness of Zuhayra's faith serves as a nice contrast to that.
An excellent update as ever, but may I ask why you had Symeon killed? Is it purely for the story's benefit or what?
 
Bohemond, like his father, want to see a Hauntville on the trone of Byzantine. so marring into the Byzantine nobles and go on a killing spree, then sonner or later there are a Hauntville as emprore candidate :rolleyes: .

Again a super update and I cant wait to get back from 2 weeks of holiday to read again.
 
Scavenius, I sincerely hope that you weren't responding to my question, because it that's the case then you've managed to neither comprehend nor answer it.
And Bohemond is unpleasant enough even without marring his wife ;)
Have a nice holiday.
 
Splendid. I am glad Bohemond did not have his heart melted. . . and I am curious at Serlo's thoughts while the chancellor questioned him - surely any hint of disobedience to Bohemond would make Serlo react negatively, at least enough for an astute diplomat to see. Curious.

I am also curious to see how this assassination plays out.

And is that lion doing something unmentionable to that camel?
 
Hello folks! First of all another heartfelt and sweeping “thank you” for your continued (or new) readership and for your comments. I’m gonna tell you once more how much I appreciate them.

Before going on to the individual replies a question to the lot of you. For the turn of the century I plan a sweeping look at the world beyond the Norman kingdom, and to this end I would like to present you screenies from the Dynastic Glory utility. Trouble is, Fraps, the utility I use to take screenies from the game itself, doesn’t seem to take shots of Dynastic Glory. Can some kind soul tell me what, if anything, I am doing wrong or point me to some other way of taking these screenies? Thanks.

phargle: The example with the 20-shooter is most excellent; I have indeed estimated the chance of Bohemond dying in the duel as 1 in 20. Small, but still none I would take without most dire need. But I’m not Bohemond. Bohemond knew that there was a chance that he could die in that duel, but he’s the kinda guy who’d rather be dead than allow himself to fear a “lesser man” like Berenguer Ramon.

And can you really see Bohemond having that heart of his melted? :rolleyes:

And the lion sure is, sir! The lion represents Bohemond and the Normans, and the camel represents Africa, bending over and taking it.
Well, actually it is the real coronation mantle of the Hautevilles, made in about 1130 for Roger II. After the Germans inherited Sicily, the mantle became the coronation mantle for the German Emperors. Nowadays, it is on display in Vienna, Austria.

General_BT: All historians are to some extent biased, I’m afraid. Some just fight harder no to let their bias enter their work. And than there are guys like FitzRoy… :rolleyes:

nette001: Your CEO parallel rings true with me. The way Bohemond sees it, it’s a dog eat dog world. And he’d rather eat than be eaten, or have his Normans eaten. That he is not at all picky about his means is another matter, though. He plays to win, no matter what he has to do to win.

democratickid: Wow, some great praise here. I like it, gimme some more! :D

No, seriously, I am content with the story, how I managed to order the gameplay events into a logical narrative, but not so much with the writing. Anyway, good to have you reading and commenting; welcome!

Lord Durham: Thanks for the kind words, coming from you they are high praise indeed.

As I said to democratickid above, I’m not so happy with the writing myself. I mainly feel that the narrative would need a lot more “show” and much less “tell”; but then I want to move the timeline along at a reasonable pace and stay close to the game events and try to showcase as many of them as I can in the story. So I always have these constraints to fall back upon in excusing my sloppy writing. :D

Anyway, glad that you liked it and dropped by to comment. See you soon in that other place we’ve been talking of.

CatKnight: I suppose you mean a view of Serlo through another person’s eyes, right? As Zuhayra has of course been along as a second PoV character for the past twenty chapters or so. But affording us all a peek at how Serlo is perceived by a contemporary was of course one of the reasons for doing the past chapter in the way I did it.

And if you think Bohemond is becoming villainous, you ain’t seen nothing yet. :D

Eams: I really couldn’t say about the three Abrahamitic. Jews certainly seem to cling to their faith with quite some tenacity, and the same could be said of Christians retaining their faith for centuries in Islamic Spain, or Muslims failing to convert to Christendom in Outremer. But this may be as it may, I think one could always rationalize that if somebody is, like Zuhayra, surrounded by members of another, contradicting faith, she has to become ever more strict in her religious observences if she wants to avoid having her believes softened up. And then I have of course used strict religiosity as an explanation why a married Muslim woman and mother of several children leaves her family to take service elsewhere – because she is disgusted by the conversion of her husband. And the piety was also suggested by the character’s second name, “Sharif”, which at that time was the name of anybody who was thaught to be descended from Ali, and thus from Fatima and the Prophet himself.

And Symeon has been killed because I wanted to roleplay the influence of Yolanda as Energetic, Valorous and Cruel Elusive Shadow. She convinced her father that the Normans could get themselves Dyrrachion if all heirs of Prince Alexios were killed. I chose Symeon to go first because he was sixteen at the time – he would soon have married and potentially produced sons who would have come before any sons of Sophia. He had to go before he had a chance to procreate.

Scavenius: Well, the Hautevilles (love your Hauntville typo, btw) are still dreaming their dream of ruling in Constantinople, and Bohemond’s got several irons in the fire to this end. There’s his own marriage to the Prince of Dyrrachion’s sister and his daughter’s marriage to a claimant to the Principality of Peloponessos and a presumed claimant to the imperial purple. And then there’s his other daughter’s marriage to the Prince of Serbia - excellent groundwork for a future alliance against Byzantion.

Have a nice holiday! There are going to be a few chapters waiting for you when you return. :)

Enewald: From a merely pragmatic point of view internecine Christian warfare is sure preferable to Zuhayra. But then she has these … feelings for Bohemond. She doesn’t want “her” Bohemond to stoop to such low and disgracing means like mass infant murder. That woman’s clearly got issues… :wacko:
 
Hmm, you might need to hit the Print Screen key on your keyboard and the paste the results into GIMP or Photoshop to take pictures of Dynastic Glory.

Your writing is fine, sir. I like the seamlessness of your dialogue - I'm jealous of the lack of choppiness. The battle scenes are intense, and the duel between Bohemond and Ramon was particularly vivid. The descriptions of the various settings are also evocative. Something I like is your occasional shift in tone. . . it's like you're narratively hitting the fast-forward button and panning out to a wider scope, and it works well in terms of moving the story without losing any value. Your basic tone and methods, including many I've mentioned, are an inspiration to me. I'd say you have very few concerns there. You're also very good at the suspense/cliffhanger/payoff mode of storytelling that works in the serial format suitable to these forums.
 
This is rather interesting especially since I'm currently playing as game as the Hautevilles. Naturally it's turned out different but it's good to compare and contrast. I had both Abelard and Serlo die without sons, the narrow royal line descending through Roger Borsa and nearly fell into Capetian hands, whilst Guillaume and Roger's descendants were most numerous.

By the way, are you ever going back to putting in a Table of Contents, it could do with one.
 
Chapter Twenty: In Which A Duke Learns The Ways Of Byzantium​

„How large is their host? And who’s in command?”, Serlo’s question rang sharply in the hall of the fortified towerhouse.

“Your pardon, my Lord, but it is not known”, was the messenger’s stammered reply in mangled Norman French. By his looks, he must have been the bastard of some Christian and an Arab woman, judging from his two dozen years probably the result of the pillaging of some conquered Sicilian town. His dusky mongrel face was was tired and drawn like malnourished old dog’s from riding hard for many score leagues. “I was dispatched immediately, before anyone but the first outriders had penetrated Senoussi, but from their number alone, the enemy might easily number five thousand or more.”

“And they have the help of the nomads, it seems”, growled Count Charles of Djerba, Duke Serlo’s principal vassal and current host at the tiny coastal town of Djarjis. “I’m a monk if the resurgence of their raids and the slaying of Charles of Senoussi is a mere coincidence.”

Duke Serlo reflected for an instant. After his cousin’s coronation he had put down the insurrection in Cyrenaika and had then wintered at the old royal city of Tunis where he had stockpiled supplies and asembled the hosts from the western African counties. Almost four thousand of them he had had at the ready when the King had in early spring crossed over from Sicily with a similiar number. Less than seven thousand men seemed scant for attacking the Hammadids, but Serlo’s cousin had confidence in his own generalship and did believe in waging war economically. And then the Hammadids were of course much weakened from losing their wealthy and populous Tunisian core territories. In all likelihood, they would not be able to field much more than eight thousand men themselves – and Bohemond had no intention of facing them all at once anyhow. His plan was to strike into the territory of Qawurd Najjar, Sheik of Medjerda and Bejaija and one of King Hashmaddin’s most powerful vassals, and annihilate his army before having to meet the Hammadid main force.


While the King and his bastard son Silvester were leading the offensive into Hammadid lands, Serlo had been ordered to return east to his duchy to keep peace and order in his cousin’s back. Travelling along the coast, the Duke of Leptis Magna had learned of a certain restlessness among the bedouins beyond the southern border which was only now erupting into full-fledged raids all along the Libyan desert, striking into his own lands, those of Count Zarides to the west and those of late Count Charles to the east. His death by the hands of a band of desert nomads two months ago had been no more than the first act of a concerted attack upon Norman lands in Africa. And now this day’s news of a Fatimid army advancing through Senoussi upon Leptis Magna!


Serlo grunted in reply to Charles’ assessment: “Aye. The Fatimids have won the support of the bedouins, it seems. And they have stricken off the head of Senoussi, throwing the county into dissaray and exposing our eastern flank.”

“I wonder at the Fatimids’ audacity. They are allied to Hashmaddin, sure, but they have more than enough troubles on their hands with the defections of Medina and Jerusalem, one should think”, Charles said, shaking his head in disbelief.

Silently cursing his own blindness most bitterly, Serlo pressed his lips into a thin line: “We have all made the mistake of thinking that the Fatimids would be rational and reasonable. What we have overlooked is that they are ruled by a child, a boy who is now coming of an age old enough to bend the regency council to his royal will. This folly of picking yet another war can only be a child’s play. Anyhow, the attack is a disaster for us no matter wether reasonable or not.”

The Duke rose from his low-backed Arab chair, forcing his vassal to stand up as well. “Griping’s no use”, Serlo said with grim determination, “there’s not a moment to be lost. Call the war council immediately.”

When the marshalls Renaud of Djerba and Serlo’s own Henri d’Acerenza finally came hastening, the Duke had already had the map brought from his baggage and found time to study it. While the messenger was giving his report a second time and answering the marshalls’ questions to the best of his meager knowledge, Serlo sketched in his mind the first outlines of a plan. When the messenger had satidfied the lords’ curiosity to the best of his ability, Serlo seized the initiative: “I don’t need to tell you how grave these news are, milords. The Fatimid host outnumbers the fighting men of Leptis by maybe a dozen times. The forces from the western African counties are with the King, waging war upon the Hammadids, and the forces of the eastern provinces are busy keeping their own people in line. If I pull them out to aid us, the entire east will flare up in rebellion. Leptis Magna and Gabes are on their own.”

Sullen stares from grim faces met the Duke’s assessment. Serlo’s Marshall, the level-headed Henri, spoke up: “But surely the King will send aid?”

“Of course”, Serlo replied, “but for the time being we’re on our own. It’ll take time for the bad news to reach him, and I doubt he’s gonna march his own host to our aid. He’ll probably send to Sicily and Calabria, and it will be months until these troops are assembled and shipped to Africa. I don’t expect any help before the end of summer.”

“Then we have to delay them”, Charles of Djerba said, smashing his fist into his palm.

“My thoughts exactly”, Serlo said. “With the count murdered, Senoussi’s leaderless, and it will be months ere this Philippe will have arrived from Europe to assume the office. The lords of Senoussi will not be able to put up any kind of concerted resistance, and the Fatimids should be able to quickly penetrate Senoussi. We must see to it that they advance no further.”


Military operations in North Africa in the first half of 1100

Serlo’s finger stabbed down on the crude map, on the small coastal fortress town of Burayqah, or Biraga as the Normans used to call it: “We’ll assemble or forces here, at Biraga, where we can shield at least Leptis Magna from the enemy. And we’ll send word to Count Demetrios of Gabes that he is to bring up his own host to join us here. Senoussi’s as good as lost anyway and rebellions are the least of its concerns, so I’ll order its lords to pull out if they still can and to also assemble at Biraga.”

“They won’t like abandoning their holdings one bit”, said Henri d’Acerenza.

“That may well be, but we can’t reach Senoussi in time to make a stand there, and I won’t allow the Fatimids to defeat us peacemeal”, Serlo said. “All we can do is assemble a host so large they can at least not ignore it, bog them down, and hope that reinforcements arrive before we are overwhelmed.”

Charles’ Marshall Renaud looked at the map doubtfully. “Biraga is a stand very much forward”, he said. “Misurata might be a better choice. We’d expose much of Leptis Magna, ‘tis true, but we would have more time to prepare, and the enemy less to assault our positions before relief arrives. At Biraga, we’d face the Muhammadan much earlier, and it’s doubtful wether we could hold out long enough.”

“Yes”, Serlo said gravely. “I know.”

* * *

The last glow of the setting sun had already faded from the western sky when Serlo rode through the fortified gates of Biraga. He was stiff from a long day in the saddle, having ridden out with a sizeable force to see with his own two eyes the devastation the Fatimid troops were visiting upon Norman lands. It seemed the enemy didn’t wish to waste time with a possibly drawn-out siege, and so they tried to lure Serlo from his fortified position by razing villages, burning the crop, cutting down orchards and slaughtering the King’s subjects. The Muhammadan soldiers with whom the countryside was swarming had no compunction massacring their own people. War was business, Serlo knew, waged best with a cool head and an even colder heart, and that was no les than the enemy did. The Duke himself was therefore not infuriated with the lasting damage done to Norman lands and the suffering inflicting on Norman subjects, merely saddened and slightly upset. This was the face of war, and he had been familiar with its features for almost forty years.

A week ago, Serlo had received word of his royal cousin. He had to hold out, Bohemond had told him; help from Europe was forthcoming, but it would still be months before it would arrive. As if Serlo hadn’t known.

Well, at least the King’s campaign in the west was going well while the open country in the east had been virtually overrun by Fatimids. The sovereign had advanced into the mountainous interior province of Medjerda and lured the local Hammadid governor Sheik Qawurd into a battle that continued to add to Bohemond’s legend of invincibility in the field. Qawurd had fled to his holdings at Bejaija farther west to raise new troops, and Bohemond had moved upon the town of Tebessa. Sheik Qawurd had sent envoys to buy the Normans off with a kingly sum, but Bohemond had of course refused and taken the town. His intention was now to advance north, towards the coastal town of Bizerta, where King Hashmaddin was said to be assembling a host to aid his servant Qawurd.


Biraga was a very strongly fortified town, even though a small one, home to less than three thousand souls, but right now the narrow alleys through which Serlo was riding towards the castle were those of a ghost town. When the Duke and his host had arrived at Biraga, it had already been swelling with refugees fleeing from the approaching Fatimids, but Serlo had had them turned out, together with all the inhabitants of the town itself. It had been a harsh measure, but with a Muhammadan army advancing upon them Serlo hadn’t felt like taking the risk of a traitor in the town conspiring with his Fatimid brothers in faith.

Serlo would have loved nothing better than ridding himself of the dirt and grit clinging to his sweaty skin after a day spent in the arid countryside, but first he would hear the news of Count Demetrios’ approach. The Count of Djerba had used a small but fast courier galley to speed a messenger ahead of his host, and the man had arrived while Serlo had been out reconnoitering. The Duke strode into the hall of Biraga Castle where the envoy was awaiting his pleasure. It was a man of about Serlo’s own advanced years, and like many men in Count Demetrios’ service he was aGreek as belied bothhis features and the elaborate tunic after Byzantine he was wearing. Serlo thought that the man would have fitted many of the lavish Muhammadan residences well, but Biraga Castle was a place as stark and primitive as most Norman fortresses, and in the surroundings of the spartan hall it was mail-clad and dirty Serlo who looked utterly at home and the Greek like a man from another world.

The Duke had ridden all day and had little patience for his guest’s polite courtesy, cutting him of gruffly: “You’ll excuse me if I have no time for banter. What I want to know is when your master will arrive, and how many men he will bring.”

The Greek bowed slightly, the pleated folds of his voluminous robes rustling softly. “Count Demetrios bids you his warmest greetings, most noble Lord Duke, and assures you what support he can give”, he said with an obliging smile. “As an immediate relief in your plight he sends you supplies, a hold brimming with dates and grain and salted mutton, awaiting your command in the galley that brought me. My Lord Demetrios wishes to inform you that he is facing most dangerous nomad incursions into his lands, and unrest all over Gabes. He is most distressed that his own troops’ presence in Gabes is most essential to prevent the county from falling into Muhammadan hands. He feels it is his pressing duty to prevent Gabes from defecting to the enemy, which would split the African lands into two isolated halves, and that he is therefore unfortunately unable to spare the troops you request, as much as this might sadden him.”

Serlo’s features had set while listening to the Greek’s glib words and his brow furrowed. “I did request nothing”, he said, “I ordered by my authority as regent of Africa.”

Again, the Greek bowed and smiled, this time contritely: “Begging your indulgence, most noble Lord Duke, but it seems that unfortunately some legal doubt has arisen concerning your authority. You are invested as his Majesty the King’s regent, true, but surely this does only apply for as long as his Majesty is not bodily in Africa, something he currently is, as you will surely have noticed. It would seem that under these circumstances your regency powers are temporarily void and suspended. This is most clearly validated by two different cases to be found in the Digests of Emperor Justinian, concerning the power of the praefectus praetorio Africae, an office which must without a doubt be correlated to your own. Count Demetrios is afraid that the legal ramfications…”

“You are dismissed”, Serlo’s icy words cut through the glibness of the messenger. After the man had left under a flurry of graceful bows, Serlo let himself drop into a chair and rested his head on a fist slipped from the mail mitten. The Duke of Leptis Magna wasn’t new to courtly machinations, but he had dealt almost exclusively with Normans and Franks, not with scheming Byzantines. Damn them! So instead of help, all that was forthcoming from Demetrios were lies and excuses, excuses and lies.

Serlo chuckled a bitter laugh, thinking of the words his cousin had spoken to him some years ago, after the fall of Tunis, when Serlo had come to plead with the King because of his involvement in Sancha’s conspiracy. ‘I’m lied to a hundred times each day, Serlo’, Bohemond had said. ‘Do you think I could have lasted without having learned long ago to read a man’s heart in his face? Yours is true, that much I know.’ Bohemond had not wished to hear any more of the affair, and it was all he had ever said about it. Serlo had often thought of his cousin’s words, but never before this day had they rung so true. I’m lied to a hundred times each day.

With a determined grunt, Serlo pushed himself from his seat to stand bolt upright. If Leptis Magna was to face the storm alone, then so be it.

* * *

“What’s your reckoning – how long until they assault?”, Hoel asked.

Serlo thoughtfully chewed the meat from the date before spitting its stone in an arc over the parapet and down to the alleys of Biraga below. It had been only this morning that the Fatimids had gained the town wall and he had ordered a retreat into the castle. “The enemy will have to allow his men some respite, time to celebrate, and to rest”, he said. “Should be two or three days before they attack. No more, though – those bastards are keen to finally get done with us.”

For half a month Serlo had sat tight in Biraga, gritting his teeth while the Fatimids ranged through the surrounding countryside, killing and looting and burning where they went. By day thick plumes of smoke could be seen rising beyond the horizon, and by night the heavens had been aglow with the fires of villages, orchards and water wheels, but in spite of the ravages being visited upon the land Serlo had refused the angry demands of many of his knights and stayed in the safety of Biraga. The enemy commander had finally realized that he could not bait the Normans to throw themselves at his vastly superior army and had led his forces to Biraga. The Fatimids had already lost much time, and so they didn’t bother with a long siege but threw their vast numbers against the walls, day after day and wave after wave. The seven hundred Norman defenders had been terribly outnumbered, by possibly as much as ten to one, but they had put the strong fortifications of Biraga to good use. Serlo had finally been forced to abandon the town and withdraw into the castle guarding the small harbour, but not before he had bled the Fatimids. Some two hundred Norman fighting men lay dead, but they had killed at least five times their own number.


Duke Serlo looking out from the parapet of Biraga Castle

“We won’t be able to hold them for longer than a week”, Hoel said matter-of-factly. “You know that.”

Serlo sucked at a bit of date stuck between his teeth and replied in even, almost unconcerned tones: “Aye. But the castle’s strong. I intend to hold it for the full week, and to take as many of those sons of bitches with us as we can. They can take Biraga, but they will bleed themselves dry in doing so. Biraga’s gonna be the end of their campaign.”

If they could hold the Fatimids for long enough and whittle their host sufficiently down, chances were they would have to withdraw. Ten days ago they had had word from the King. Eager to retain even his western lands, Sheik Qawurd had pleaded with Bohemond and offered to recognize the Norman possession of Medjerda, pay indemnities and deny King Hashmaddin the use of his troops if Bohemond would only assure him his possession of Bejaija. As Serlo’s cousin had never been interested at all in distant Bejaija, he had not hesitated to accept Qawurd’s offer. Chances were good for another victory over Hashmaddin, but much depended on how fast it could be achieved. If Bohemond could bring the war with the Hammadids to an early conclusion, he could bring his host east to deal with the Fatimids.


“And then it might just be possible that we bleed the infidels so much that they have to acknowledge the futility of bringing their campaign to a successful end and are forced to withdraw”, Serlo added almost as an afterthought.

Hoel snorted and shot his master a doubtful glance. How old and grey his squire had become, Serlo thought; they should both leave playing at war to younger lads. “Not bloody likely”, the half-Breton veteran said.

Serlo had to nod his assent: “If we had but twice our number I’d have those bastards bleed themselves dry against the walls. But as it is we’re five hundred against five thousand…”

Hoel remained silent for a long time, staring out sullenly over the town where an occasional Fatimid fighting man could be seen flitting through the twilight of a shadowy alleyway. Finally he said: “There’s of course also the harbour. The two ships could easily take all the knights and squires.”

“You’re not meaning this, are you?”

The shaggy grey giant shrugged: “Just thinkin’. Live to fight another day and all that. But I knew that you’d not listen to reason.”

Hoel grinned at his master and friend from underneath his drooping moustache and Serlo chuckled: “Right. If I’d been reasonable I’d stayed home in Normandy.”

The Duke turned around to overlook Biraga’s harbour. It was small and primitive, but it was protected by the castle and a wall seperating it from the rest of the town, and Serlo had not yet given it up. They had two small ships berthed there, after all, and it was their only means of staying in touch with the world outside the fortress. He did once more weigh his options. It would probably be for the best to burn the ships and abandon the harbour right away instead of wasting manpower protecting it.

“I’ll be damned!”, exclaimed Hoel. “Teats of the blessed virgin, look at that!”

Serlo looked hard in the direction indicated by Hoel’s pointing arm, squinting into the sun hanging already low above the western horizon. And then he saw it. Right underneath the sun’s searing ball, maybe a mile off shore, there was a number of sails, at least half a dozen. Relief? Could it be? There was no way the King could already have won his own war, and Serlo couldn’t see his cousin abandoning his campaign prematurely. And forces from Europe were not due for at least month. But if it wasn’t Normans it could only be Hammadids. Should Hashmaddin have followed predecessor’s strategy of attacking the enemy on his own ground to force him to abandon his offensive? Serlo’s thoughts were racing.

The sun set, the ships drew nearer, and in drawing nearer revealed themselves ever more to the hundreds of eager watchers at Biraga. It was no less than ten ships, a motley fleet of various types, and they were flying crosses and Norman colours. Many in Biraga were overcome with joy, but more prudent heads were still cautious and reserved – all too easily it might be Muhammadans trying to deceive the garrison.

They were not, as it turned out. It was a Norman fleet, commanded by the King’s bastard Silvester. The fleet brought supplies, but even more welcome were the nigh two thousand fighting men pouring from the ships. Serlo was soon to learn that raising these men had been young Silvester’s initiative and that they were largely volunteers from among the sizable Christian minority of Tunis and Kairwan.


“I had word sent round the towns that able-bodied men would not only get the opportunity to prevent renewed Muhammadan oppression”, Silvester grinned at Serlo, “but that they could also expect to be rewarded from the booty of the current campaign. One farmstead each, either to keep or to sell. They came in droves.”

“And the weapons?”, the Duke asked, watching hundreds and hundreds of decently equipped men file from the ships. “Where did you get those?”

Silvester smiled once more, strong teeth shining white in the dusky half-light: “King Hashmaddin was so obliging. I convinced the King to disallow looting of the enemy fallen. The King paid his men an indemnity from the war chest, and the arms of Hashmaddin’s troops went to equip my men. No sooner then everybody had his kit we borded the ships and hurried back east.”

“So there’s been another big battle?”

“Two days before we embarked. We met Hashmaddin near the town of Bizerta. I’ll tell you everything you want to know about it, my Lord Duke, but for now this: We came at Hashmaddin, our seven and a half thousand against the enemy’s five thousand, and we broke them completely. Almost a third of the heathen remained dead on the field, while we lost less than two hundred. The Hammadids scattered and fled, and the King has moved to besiege Bizerta. Might be he’s already taken the town.”


Looking at the droves of men marching past him, Serlo felt elated. The small castle would burst its seams with all these men, and they would have to be billetted in every corridor and even in the courtyard and on the roofs, but their presence meant deliverance for Biraga. With over two thousand men defending its walls, the scant five thousand Fatimids hadn’t the shadow of a chance to take the fortress. The Normans could now simply sit and wait for further reinforcemts to strengthen them to the point where they could overcome the enemy in battle and drive him from Christian lands.
 
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Holy dates, that's a kick-ass scene. The cavalry literally arriving in the nick of time, and an underdog outcast being the one to save them? You can't make this kind of stuff up. Terrific, simply terrific.

I also enjoy seeing Serlo frustrated with the needs of rule. It's surprising he didn't have that messenger thrashed. . . and I like him contemplating burning his harbor: a) the enemy can't use it and b) he can't use it either. Perfect.
 
Can I be the first to throw my support behind Silvester to succeed his father? 18 martial and excellent strategic instincts. You could make it a tradition, the bastard kings of Naples. :cool:
 
I think Silvester would make a pretty bad king. Note the low, loow diplomacy and intrigue ratings - he'd barely be able to manage his demesne, and would have lots of trouble with keeping his vassals in line. He can do much better as a marshal.
 
Well folks, the last chapter did give some profile to Bohemond’s bastard son Silvester, and this is something I have CK’s game engine to thank for. It provided the chain of events which led up to Silvester rescuing Serlo, all I had to do was find some explanation of where Silvester, who was himself involved in his father’s campaign, did manage to get the 1800 volunteers. Anyway, I thank you all for your readership and friendly comments – now on to them!

phargle: Thanks for praising my writing so highly. The assessment I gave of my own writing was not habitual feigened modesty (a stance required by society but detested by me), but honest and heartfelt. I will choose to believe half of what you said about my skill and consider my writer’s self-esteem sufficiently salved. :)

And about Silvester rescuing Serlo – I had second thoughts that another such resue would seem as if I copied myself and make Serlo seem wimpy, but I had to include it in the narrative as it was what happened in the game, after all. I did at least try to differentiate it from the rescue at Isernia by making it less last minute (Serlo estimated that they had as much as ten days left and reasoned that there was even a chance to inflict enough damage on the Fatimids to force them to make a truce), and also by making it abundantly clear that Serlo wasn’t this time caught with his pants down but allowed himself to be besieged at Biraga as it made sense to him from a strategic viewpoint, even though he knew that it was eminently dangerous.

And thrashing a messenger isn’t something Serlo would do. Not even Bohemond would. But wait till the next chapter to see the originator of the messenge thrashed. :D

Eöl: It stillis the Hautevilles on the throne, and I have no plans to change this; I do generally make no attempt to shape my gameplay in such a way as to make for a good narrative but simply try to make the gameplay events into a decent story. That’s why I consider mine a rather “pure” AAR in the truest sense of the word. If the game resulted in the Hautevilles losing their throne, I’d probably consider this a very good ending for “Furor Normannicus” and be done with it.

The Swert: Interesting to hear about your game. With me, Roger’s line died out immediately (three children, but all female) and Roger Borsa did manage to propagate himself only with a single bastard son, whereas Guillaume manged to get at least a (single) legitimate son. Abelard on the other hand and his son Arsenio, who has “gone native” (culture Italian) had both loads and loads of children, about half a dozen each, most of them sons. Serlo, on the other hand seems as ill-equipped with spermia in my as in your game. :(

And yeah, I should really do an index. Just have to find out how to link a single post as opposed to a page. :eek:o

Enewald: It really is a shame that one cannot chose to keep a province’s raised host in the castle, especially as sieges were much more plentiful and important than open battles back then. But at least I make sieges of fully-manned castles a feature of my narrative.

The_Archduke: I do not myself know yet who the next king’s gonna be. In all honesty, I’m none too happy with Bohemond’s sons. All of them are quite decent, but each of them is also flawed in some way. In settling for a successor it’s mostly a matter of settling for one drawback over the other. I think I will decide based upon what I estimate would be Bohemond’s own preferences.

Morsky: I think you are quite right about Silvester. Where prowess in battle and strategic cunning is concerned, he’s his father’s son, no doubt, and they royally whopped the Hammadids’ backside in that campaign (combined Martial 40!), but he’s no courtier at all. Bohemond’s also first and foremost a warrior, but he has also decent diplomatic instincts allowing him to pull off that rule by sheer force of his. Silvester has the same belligerence than his father, but is less sophisticated; he’d also try to rule by force, and he would go under trying. That’d be bad for the realm, but interesting for the AAR, so I might just do it anyway. :D

By the way, thank you very much for advertising “Furor Normannicus” in your sig.

Jalex: Yes, it really was. But even more awesome was that the game engine did really pull this recue off all by itself. Writing a narrative AAR that sticks close to the game events and doesn’t go much beyond them can at times be a real chore as it is hard to make these random events interesting story-wise, but that makes moments like Silvester reliefing Serlo all the more beautiful.
 
Chapter Twenty-One: In Which A Boar Is Killed​

From a distance, the forest was peaceful, a limitless expanse of lush greens climbing the mountain’s gently sloping flank and spilling over its summit. Scattered billows of not yet dispersed morning mists hung above this green blanket thrown over the landscape, and underneath it bark and leaves were dripping with the previous night’s moisture. It was a beautiful and hauntingly serene vista, but the sounds echoing through the trees told a story very different from placid peace. The forest resounded far and wide with the bellowing of horns, the excited baying of hounds and no less excited shouting of harsh Norman voices. Since the first grey light of the late dawn, the mountainside was swarming with huntig parties.

Demetrios Zarides decided that he had taken part in the King’s hunt for long enough to satisfy the demands of courtesy and turned his roan courser around to head back into the valley. He was closing on fifty and too old and too stiff for chasing a horse over rock and root, the balding Greek decided, and then he had never had much of a taste for the hunt even in younger years, very unlike the Normans among whom he had to live since his failed bid for power over Peloponessos almost ten years ago. From the lowest kennelmaster to Bohemond himself the Norman savages were no less fired up and excited at this primitive pasttime than their shaggy hounds.

By now the encampment down in the valley should be ready. A lively fire would be burning there to fend off the chill of the Apulian winter, and the servants would have already prepared breakfast for the ladies awaiting the hunters’ return. The Queen would be there, too, and Demetrios was looking forward to both a drop of mulled wine and his countrywoman’s pleasant conversation. Let the Normans think me effeminate, he thought, what do I care? They can hardly despise me any more.

Demetrios wasn’t stupid, and he had always known that he Normans hadn’t the mental capabilities to esteem a man of learning and higher culture than themselves. Even after he had become the King’s son-in-law – how he rued that day! – they had still looked down on him, but only lately had they begun despising him. It hadn’t so much been the King’s disappointment and rage at his new wife’s Greek retainers disclosing that none of them did think Demetrios a descendant of Emperor Basileios but rather what they used to think of as mismanagement of his county. Never had Demetrios seen the King in such a cold and smoldering rage as when he had come to Gabes. For a moment, Demetrios had thought that his father-in-law was going to hit him right there in front of all his captains, but the King had merely rebuked him in clipped and searing words - and stripped him of his office.


Half a year had passed since this incident, but Demetrios did still feel his pulse quicken and the blood rush in his temples when he thought about it. He had done nothing wrong, damn the King’s barbarian hide! Was he supposed to madly charge in and leave his own county when it was raided by nomads? If he had rushed to horse-faced Serlo’s aid, Gabes would have defected. His advisors had assured him that Serlo had no authority to command him for as long as the King himself was in Africa, so it had been his own free decision where to deploy – and his decision had been right! His presence in Biraga would not have changed the outcome there, but it would have meant the fall of Gabes. The relief Silvester had brought Duke Serlo had been sufficient to deter the Fatimids from taking Biraga, and as soon as word had reached them of Bohemond taking Bizerte and making a very favourable peace with the Hammadids, they had immediately offered to withdraw. With large provinces in the east of his realm in rebellion, Caliph Sabah had not had the troops to spare to press his mad offensive into Norman lands. Young Sabah had not thought that Bohemond would conclude his war with the Hammadids in less than half a year, that Serlo would be able to delay the Fatimid host and that he, Demetrios, would be able to fend off the nomad attacks.


But had these Norman curs thanked him? No! Himself, the King had named Duke of Tunis, he had embraced Duke Serlo and publicly called him “my brother”, he had recognized that brutish bastard of his by granting him a rich county in the north, and he had even given haughty Prince Herman African lands across from his Sicilian holdings, as if this whelp had ever accomplished anything else but being pressed out by a traitor bitch.


Demetrios jabbed his heels into his gelding’s sides and sent him into a gallop. Later today, his back would thank him for this dashing ride with pain and stiffness, Demetrios knew, but the Queen’s encampment was not far now and he did not wish to return to the women with an obviously well-rested horse untouched by sweat. The roan courser was a clever and sure-footed horse, and so Demetrios did not have to concentrate on steering it over the broken forest floor; instead, he could let his thoughts wander back to how unfairly he had been treated. The reason for being stripped of his county had not been any mistake of his in managing it, Demetrios knew, it was the King’s way of venting his anger at his son-in-law having no claim to the imperial purple after all. The Greek grimaced bitterly. As if his claims would matter the least! There would be no children to inherit them, unless his bitch wife learned holy Mary’s trick of Immaculate Conception. Well, there was at least a modicum, a tiny token of justice, Demetrios thought with grim glee. As soon as his removal from the office of count had been announced, there had been an uprising in Gabes. Let the thrice-damned King deal with that!


More and more light was now filtering down through the high crowns of the pines, plane trees, chestnuts and cork oaks among which Demetrios made his way and none of the dustings of light snow that had endured in scattered hollows under the shadows of the trees in the depth of the forest were to be seen anymore. Soon, the Greek emerged from the woodland onto open meadows. Ahead, he could make out the canopy of the Queen’s encampment past a copse of olive trees. Demetrios slowed his gelding to a trot and basked in the warm light of the morning sun burning the last droplets of dew from the grass. He was a son of the warm south, having grown up in view of the ruins of ancient Sparta, and he had felt right at home in the heat of Africa – if he hadn’t known better, he would almost be inclined to believe that the King had opted to spend Christmas and New Year in freezing Apulia instead of pleasant Palermo just to spite his son-in-law.

Demetrios wove a path through the silvery olive trees with their gnarled and tortutred trunks and headed for the encampment, for the long trestle table set up underneath the canopy and the pleasant bonfire that had been built next to it. A groom hastened to take his roan’s reins and help Demetrios dismount. Leaving his horse in the care of the boy, Demetrios strode over to warm himself by the fire, his back stiff and aching from the ride. He took off his gloves, tucked them into his belt and held out his clammy hands to the flames. With tiny needle-pricks, life and feeling did soon return to his numb hands and face.

Demetrios turned away from the fire. Time for some mulled and spiced wine, a morsel to eat and a pleasant chat with the Queen, his supposed mother-in-law who wasn’t half his own age. He walked over to Sophia, taking her homely shape filling out her moss green velvet kirtle with the sable trim. She was nowhere near as beautiful as that Spanish woman had been, but at least she was no savage, and her broad hips were perfect for pushing out huge Bohemond’s brats. She had born her husband a daughter while he had been campaigning in Africa, and the King had wasted no time putting another bread up her oven upon his return. Already, the Queen’s belly was bulging visibly underneath the green velvet. Stifling a sigh at the Norman barbarians propagating themselves whil ehe seemed destined to die childless, he went up to Sophia to gallantly kiss her hand.



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Demetrios had left the feast early and retreated to the sorry little chamber he had been assigned for the duration of the court’s stay at Andria. He found the coarse Norman manners distateful at all times, but this evening’s boastfulness had been more than he felt able to stomach for any length of time. So the King had hunted and killed a boar – so what? He had gutted a pig, for Heaven’s sake! Since when was that an accomplishment worthy of praise? Every damned butcher did as much.


For some time, Demetrios sat alone by the light of two torches, pouring himself a few cups from the beaker he had taken along from the feast down in the hall, and listening to the raucuous laughter drifting up through the wooden floorboards. When his bid for power in Peloponessos had failed, he had had little choice but to board the first ship, no matter where it was headed. As it turned out it had been Italy, and even though he Demetrios had heard tales of the savagery and crudeness, he had at first welcomed the ship’s destination. The Normans’ reputation for ferocity in battle was second to none, and he had had little prejudice against these conquereors from the north back then, hoping instead that they might help him to still winhis claim. After almost a decade among these uncouth people, he knew better. Now, he hated and despised them for the primitives that they were.

The door to his tiny chamber swung open, and without having to look he knew that it must be Yolanda who came to retire for the night; nobody else would have head the temerity to enter unbidden. One of the added indignities of having to stay at Andria was that he was forced to share accomodation with his hateful wife, even sleep in the same narrow bed with her, something they had not done for years. Once, in their wedding night, ages ago it seemed, he had bedded her. After that, she had refused him his conjugal rights. He had threatened and made to force her, but she had cowed him. ‘Touch me but once’, she had hissed, ‘and I shall bruise and bloody myself, and then I’ll stick me with your sword and leave you to find out what the King is going to do to a man who beat and murdered his daughter.’ Demetrios had made to hit her, to split her lips and teach her, but then he had seen it in her lizard eyes, in those deceptively innocent large eyes of hers that she had meant every word she had said. He had shrunk back, and with him his manhood had shrunk for good.

“You have retired early”, Demetrios greeted his wife, puzzled to see her clothed all in black. “What’s the mummery?”, he asked.

“I’m in mourning”, Yolanda said in her clear children’s voice. “Relatives of mine have died, and as they were also relatives and even countrymen of yours I thought you would want to learn the news, so I came to tell you of the deaths myself.”

“Who?”, Demetrios asked, rising from his place on the sill of the window slit.

Black velvets rustling softly, Yolanda walked the three paces over to her husband: “Two of the Queen’s closest relatives. Her brother murdered his nephew and then took his own life.”

“What unlikely tale is that?”, Demtrios asked, irritated.

“Not an unlikely tale at all”, Yolanda said, smiling dreamily. “Two retainers of Prince Alexios of Dyrrachion saw the prince’s fifteen year old brother Nikephoros, third in line to inherit the principality, smother the prince’s infant son David, heir to Dyrrachion, with a pillow. They drove off the Nikephoros, who could escape in as they tried to rescue little David. Sadly, they were too late. They raised a hue and cry and the manor was searched for the murderer. They soon found Nikephoros, dangling from the rafters by a rope around his neck. His murderous bid for the principality discovered, he had taken his own life.”


Demetrios thoughts were racing: “That leaves the Prince Alexios with only a single male relative, his young son Manuel. But Manuel is but a few months old and might easily die an infant’s death. In that case, any son of Queen Sophia would stand to inherit the principality.”

Demetrios was no fool, and he knew the Normans. Prince Alexios might be unsuspecting, but these two deaths were just too much to be mere unfortunate coincidence. There was nothing Demetrios could still hope for from his father-in-law; but maybe, just maybe, if he discovered the plot on his principality to Alexios Attaleiates, or could at least make him believe that there was such a plot,…

A swift movement of his wife, a cool and hard sensation against his throat, and Yolanda stepping back quickly, her big eyes fixed on him. Wetness against his chest, and redness spreading on his kirtle. He lifted his fingers against his throat, and they came away red and sticky. Panic rising within him, he looked at Yolanda, waching him with rapture in her eyes, a bloody dagger in her little fist.


Demetrios tried in vain to take a breath, a squelching sound from under his jaw the only result of his attempt. He stretched and hand out towards his wife and took a step towards her, but his legs gave way and he crashed hard to the wooden floor. Fast, ever so fast, a puddle of dark red was spreading around him, soaking the rushes, washing away what had once been Lord Demetrios Zarides. Why was there no pain? Demetrios could think of nothing else, wanted to ask it dumbly of Yolanda, but he accomplished nothing but a gurgling, bubbling sound, emerging not from his lips but from his throat, from underneath the fingers held had clutched around it helplessly.

Not a word was spoken while he died – he could not utter a sound, and Yolanda would not. His wife’s eyes never straying from him, Demetrios Zarides slipped away into the long night.


The last sight of Lord Demetrios Zarides
 
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