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Chapter 1.1
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Solomon Barbarossa

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Gules Moon Rising

Chapter 1.1

September 15, 1066

A chill autumnal breeze blew in from the Bay of Biscay and crept into the chamber of Castle Kemper, signalling the near end of harvest. Though it’s subtle presence ignored by the room’s sole occupant, Hoël mab Alan, Count of Kernev and Naoned, head of House Cornouaille, drummed his fingers on the heavy wooden table, rough grains chafing his fingertips, as he awaited the answers to his summons, eyes continuously darting from the documents in front of him to the unmoving door.

He had ruled over these lands for 8 years now, largely keeping his head down doing the duty expected of him by God as a noble of these lands. Yet as always a deep unease stirred in Hoël’s soul, that it wasn’t enough, that he could and should be doing more. Not just paying his taxes east, while Normans and Vikings… Norsemen gathered and spread like a storm over western Europe. The yoke of anonymous duty sat uneasy on his being, and perhaps tonight would be the first step in shrugging it off. “Once everyone arrives that is” came his common grumble.
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After a century of waiting, the door opened for the first time.

“I assume the servant with my invitation to this meeting on the future of our lands and family simply is lost somewhere in the castle? They shall have to face some form of discipline I suppose.” A husky voice greeted the noble, as a heavy-set moved into the room with surprising grace before settling into an ornate chair next to the pacing Hoël with an amused sigh. “Relax my husband, your face will freeze that way." Hawizof Rennes had a face that was round and kind, but it hid a rather sharp, and at times vicious mind.
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Hoël shook his head at his wife’s often mercurial wit. But any retort he may of had was interrupted as the door once again opened, with more force this time, two figures shadows entering the room via flickering torchlight before their bodies did. The first stretched as me moved towards the councilroom table, a tall and dark figure with a bushy coarse goatee, this was Guérech, one of Hoël’s younger brothers, who was responsible for the diplomatic affairs of the domain of House Cornouaille.

“Brother! What are we doing inside on such a fine evening? I do hope there’ll at least be some proper refreshments served to cut the tedium.” Hoël found his teeth clenching at the lackadaisical attitude on display by his brother as the chancellor lounged down in a chair. After so many years why am I surprised? The two were merely separated by little more than a year after all. Meanwhile Hawiz shifted eagerly in her chair at the mention of possible subsistence being provided during the meeting.

The other who entered the chamber was slower and more careful with his strides, as the youngest of the male members of the Cornouaille line made his way to his seat quietly. A whole decade younger than Hoël, Bernez gave a small nod to the Count and Countess, before settling down furrowing away at the inside of one of his cheeks, a habit since he was a young child.
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For the third time, the heavy yet simple door fulfilled its duty and opened, admitting a lowborn man with short cropped hair and trimmed goatee, Denis commander of the Count’s forces. Which one will we deal with today? The tacturn one or the one who won’t shut up. Hoël mused to himself. The answer seemingly given as Denis just bowed before his liege without a word.
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Next in was the Mayor of Rais, Clemen. Hoël relied on his knowledge of the many merchants, and nobles who engaged in trade through out Brittany and beyond, which had lead to his appointment as Spymaster for the count.

Hoël and the five members of his lord’s council sat largely in silence as they awaited the final member of their assembly. Wine and mead were sipped, and a pastry was brought in by servants for each person, which Hawiz fell upon with a particular gusto.

“Peace be upon you all, I hope you can forgive my tardiness my lord, several of the flock needed guidance on the path here.” Lord-Bishop Arthueu announced as he made his presence known, the final remaining member of the Lord’s Council striding through the door.
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“It does me glad to see you all here for the this session, Though I would remind the honorable councilmen that promptness is a virtue.” The breton lord leveled a heavy glance around at the assembled. They all nodded at the chastisement, though it had been said before, and would be said at many council meetings yet to come. “Perhaps our Lord Suffragan would care to begin?”

The head priest nodded, his miter gently sliding with the motion, adjusting his fine robes, standing just mere moments after he had taken his seat. “As my liege wishes, though first our traditional prayer.” Though Arthueu led the words, there was a distinct lack of true fervor in the repetition from the various council members. The court of Hoël had often shown little real passion towards the whims of the divine, or his representatives on earth, only doing what was expected of them.

“I have monks searching for connections to Penthièvre, as my Lord Kernev commanded, but it is still the early days. As such I must regretfully ask for my liege’s patience and forgiveness.” The young holy man finished with a flourishing bow which he held for a minute at the count.

Hoël’s mouth turned into a deep frown but he gave a short sharp nod at his bishop, in recognition of what was said. He absently waved his hand at Clemen, signalling he wanted to hear from the Spymaster next.
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Clemen slowly got his feet, and gave a deep bow to the assembled council. “My friends, trade is currently bustling as I’m sure our Lord Steward will attest to soon. A tribute to the industrial and diligent work of our people.” The Mayor of Rais turned his hands to the youngest Cornouaille, who nodded. Here the elected official moved his head side to side before continuing “Little news out of Rennes. Save our Lord Duke continues his search for a wife, which my lord knows very well I believe.” Clasping his hands together, the Spymaster gave one final bow to Hoël before retaking his seat.

The following man to get up was Bernez, who stood even slower than Clemen had, as Hoël’s jaw clenched in preparation. While he was the more competent of the Count’s two younger brothers, the steward often got on the eldest’s nerves, due to some of their differences in behavior.

“According to our collectors the Harvesht is proceeding well, ahead of schedule and should be completed shoon. We should have more than enough food and funds for the winter and beyond.” A piercing whistle accompanied Bernez’ moist speech. “ In fact due to the efforts of some freeholders, some farming techniques have been discovered that should lead to greater yields in years to come.”

Hawiz lay her hand upon her husband’s, which still had a tendency to tremble at his brother’s slow and ponderous manner of speech, even after all these years. The Countess turned a smile towards the steward.

“Good-Brother, we both wish to convey our deep thanks for your tireless management of our land. My Lord and I sleep soundly knowing that our vault is in capable hands.” Bernez blushed at the praise, and lowered his head as Hoël gave him a deep stare and slow solitary nod in agreement with his wife’s statement. The youngest sibling settled down in his chair, not as small as he had been before. Hoël gave a slight squeeze to his wife’s hand before standing up and commanding the attention of his council.
Clemen slowly got his feet, and gave a deep bow to the assembled council. “My friends, trade is currently bustling as I’m sure our Lord Steward will attest to soon. A tribute to the industrial and diligent work of our people.” The Mayor of Rais turned his hands to the youngest Cornouaille, who nodded. Here the elected official moved his head side to side before continuing “Little news out of Rennes. Save our Lord Duke continues his search for a wife, which my lord knows very well I believe.” Clasping his hands together, the Spymaster gave one final bow to Hoël before retaking his seat.

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“As my lady wife speaks, I do wish to acknowledge all your efforts to ensure the safety and prosperity of the people of Brittany. But now for the true reason I have called this gathering this eve.”

Hoël knew he had them, as all five of the others in the room straightened up, or began peering forward. Goblets, the third the case of Hawiz, were promptly forgotten, at the tease of the night’s true meal. Even his wife had been left in the dark as to the reason of this council summons, a fact of which she was less than pleased with, as conveyed by the less-than-ideal glint in her eye that told him that he would likely have a less than pleasant way to his own bedchamber tonight. Still what he did was best for them, the family, and Kernev.

He cut through straight to the chase, ending the suspense. “I have been in contact with the court of Perfeddwlad in northern Wales. They and I have been in negotiation for a betrothal between young Count Maredudd’s younger sister Nest, and my eldest son, and heir to Kernev, Alan
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“You negotiate? Without me.” Came the flat statement from Guérech, shoulders tensed with frustration of the slight to his authority in the role of chancellor. Hoël met his brothers infuriated gaze with a steely one of his own, subtly settling his stance. But then cocking his head, the younger let out the tension before the count could do or say anything the diplomat shrugged, looking away with his arms crossed. “Fine, no damage done to me. It’s your family I suppose.”

Arthueu rubbed at his dark facial hair thoughtfully, eyes flickering repeatedly over Hoël’s form as he slowly started to relax. “The Seisylls are a good old Welsh family, I believe. One who have ruled in their own right. Though one that has fallen on hard times and made some poor decisions. But I do believe a union of your houses would be beneficial.”

Denis was quiet and seemingly disinterested in the trade of noble blood as he had been everything else thus far during the evening, merely gave a nod to show his acquiescence to whatever was decided.

The sound of a chair scraping filled the room as Countess Hawiz stood, her dark green dress trembling. “Our son. The one who has barely started his numbers. Yet you already wish to have him bonded to some northern girl near twice his years? Have you lost your wits Hoël?”

The Count just barely managed to bite his tongue at the insult, face growing red as he turned to his wife, who was proving to be just as much of an obstacle as he thought she would. Still he would try and appease her, for now at least.

“His tutors tell me he shows an early aptitude. I believe I will be permitting him to come to court with me to observe in a year or two. ”

Eyes widened, before a breathless dry chuckle escaped Hawiz “ A year or two he says. Alan has but six mere winters, Six! He should be out playing with sticks chasing dragons, not chained to some bleeding sow, or hearing the droning of bees about corn!” An irritated huff escaped most of the council members at the small slight, shaking their heads. Hawiz' hands trembled next to her, as she took a few steps towards her husband, whose mouth twisted as she continued her tirade. “What of Mazhe? Is there some southern lady waiting to swoop down upon him?”
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“Mazhe is too young of course. But a day will come where he will be Lord of Naoned, just as Alan will be of Kernev. And before that day comes they will need to step from behind their mother’s dress to do their duty! Or So help all that's left.”

Arthueu spoke up, cutting through the tension that built between the Lord and Lady “ My Lady, you’re concern comes from a Mother’s love and such should be forgiven without question. However such things are the nature of the world, and life God has granted us.” Here he stood up and approached the couple and placed a gentle hand on Hawiz’ shoulder, drawing her stare away from that of her husband. The bishop continued “Treasure your remaining years with your sons, and know that when the time comes they will have found a partner at aid and protect them, and the realm, as you have. Much as what has happened between our lord and yourself, these many years.”

Hawiz turned her head down, her hair blocking her face from the rest of the council, though all could see her heavy-set form heaving for a moment. As she raised her head, five of the others avoided her eyes to give the lady dignity. “Very well Husband. I trust you are doing what is right, and give my assent.”

Giving his wife a slow nod, Hoël let out his own breath before speaking to the council “ Very well, now that is decided, I don’t believe there is anything else for this night. I wish you all well.”

Dismissed, all six of those the council members shifted out on their own time, gradually leaving just Count Hoël in the room, who began drafting a letter to send north, there was no time like the present after all.

The first seeds had been planted, all that was left was to await the harvest, and Hoël would be ready and eager to reap his due. Never Greedy, Always Vigilant after all; the words of House Cornouaille.
 
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Ladies and Gentlemen of AAR-Land.

Allow me to introduce you to Gules Moon Rising. I've been a bit of a lurker of After-Actions Reports since I started playing CK2 a couple years ago and the launch of CK3. Now I've finally convinced myself to take the plunge and join you all wonder writers in publishing something of my own.

After a great deal of waffling, I landed on 1066 Brittany as you can see. As to why this, rather than some of my other choices I considered. Well to be honest, I've always been at least somewhat motivated by Coat of Arms when choosing my starts in Crusader Kings, and I liked the Cornouaille one, as you can probably gather from the title. Now I'm not Breton, and while I have been interested in them for a while, I am far far from an expert, and I apologize to anyone for any errors I may make out of ignorance, or story-telling.

Now I do have a few goals, most of which are probably guessable but I thought I'd lay them out.
-Short Term: Follow History and have House Cornouaille becomes Dukes of Brittany, (Though hopefully lasting longer than their real conterparts)
-Medium term: Keep Brittany Independant from France and England and Breton Culture going strong.
-Long Term: Why Settle as King of Bretons when you can become Emperor of Brittania?

Hope you all enjoy, and I'll see you along the journey.
 
Chapter 1.2
Chapter 1.2

April 26 1067

The ride from Kemper to Gwened seems longer each time
. Hoël mused has he swung the legs off of his horse, absentmindedly giving a rub on the kneck before handing the reigns over to a local stable-boy. The count had long preferred riding on his own to taking a carriage, the freedom and speed appealing to him much more than the comfort. Though perhaps this time, it is the thoughts of home, that makes it seem further and longer. Perhaps unconsciously he turned his head back to the west, imagining his own fields, and the news of what awaited him after his return, rather than deep forests of the area.

Hoël turned back and, passed through crowds of busily scurrying servants, and gossiping courtiers as he entered the fort of wood and slight stone that served as the home of the Duke of Brittany: Gwened, or Vannes, as it is known among the Franks, had been a centre of power in the peninsula, along with Hoël’s own Kemper, and the lands of Dumnonia to the North, though since the time of King Erispoë, Raozhon, and Naoned, which had been past to Hoël by his mother had been rising in importance. The current holder of these lands was Duke Konan the Second, Hoël’s own brother through marriage.
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It was the Duke who had called Hoël here east for a meeting of the duchy council, which caused the count’s mouth to turn down as he was led down the familiar hallways by a servant. The Lord Kernev had little respect for his fellow lords of Brittany. Fools and cowards the lot of them. Still it was his duty, and an important one as little as Hoël may like it, so he would suffer through it. Finally he was brought to the large room that Konan usually used for such meetings. As per usual,it was empty with Hoël being the first to arrive. We have so little time on this world, why do so many insist on wasting theirs?

Still Hoël couldn’t help but wonder what the reason for this meeting was, there seemed to be much activity around Gwened for it to be anything simple.

After a while the first of Hoël’s fellow council members made his appearance.

“Ah, Well Met Lord Kernev! Your dedication to timeliness shames us all.” In came Morvan of Leon, who served the duke as Marshall. His contemporary grasped Hoël’s forearm tightly before giving him a hearty slap on the back. The western most lord of Brittany, was likely the only one Hoël respected, save perhaps his liege on a good day. While the viscounty of Leon had once been subject to rule from Cornouaille it had risen in the past decades.The two counts were of an age with each and and as such and often been pushed together and just come across each other during their court appearances. While Hoël couldn’t say that he and Morvan had formed a lasting friendship, as their parents had hoped they certainly had a strong relationship between Leon and Kernev, one which he hoped would last far in to the future.
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“My Thanks for the complaint, Lord Leon.It does me good to see you well.”

“You are too kind. I must ask: do you have any idea why our liege called us here? It seemed different from the usual spring summons.”

Hoël’s lipped bowed downwards, as he gave a frustrated shake of his head “No I can’t say that I do. Much required my attention back home as well.”

Giving a small chuckled Morvan shrugged as he sat down in his assigned seat at the table. A servant hurried in with goblets of wine, which the count of Leon took with a flourish and a quick acknowledgement. “Ah yes, yes I know it well. Strange, as the Lord Duke is usually not one for secrets.”

The conversation was cut short as the councilroom doors opened again, and a stooped older man stepped in. Dressed in finery, he slowly reached up and rubbed a smudge of something from the corner of his white beard, Hoël swore he saw a speck of red. The elder noble slowly entered the room stepping gingerly as though he was uncertain what may lay beneath his boots, slowly he turned his head to take in Morvan and Hoël , eyes widening.

This was Edouarzh, Count of Penthievre. He was the Grandson of a Duke of Brittany, and brother to one, he had been Konan’s regent and was loath to give it up once the duke had come of age, leading to an armed conflict. Yet, he had been permitted to keep his holdings in the north, a mistake in Hoël’s mind. The older count had been married to one of Hoël’s elder sisters, the much older Oanez, before her passing. Edouarzh had not been much more faithful to her marriage than he had his duty. Between his refusal to accept his duty and the insult to his sister, Hoël had no patience for the northern count, even less than he did most others. As such he only gave the newcomer a slow nod, just as much as required by etiquette, while Morvan gave the more hearty greeting.
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“Ah, I am in the right place, I had worried I was going to the wrong type of chamber Ha.”

“Indeed my lord.” While Morvan chuckled at the tawdry remark, Hoël merely gave a grumbled assent.

After not too much longer the other two members of Konan’s council arrived; The Mayor Salomon of Combourg, and the Arch-Bishop of Brittany, Gurlouen. The holy man and marshall promptly started a conversation, with Edouzarh and Salomon on the outside, listening in and occasionally managing to get a word in edgewise around the two other men. One hand drummed on the heavy wooden table while Hoël glanced through his sheefs of parchments, showing the recent taxation situation across Brittany, back molars lightly grinding.
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Finally the doors swung open with a gusto admitting a man wearing an outfit that quite clearly showed he had just come in from a hunt. This slightly younger man was Hoël’s brother-in-law, and the sovereign Duke of Brittany Konan. In his more generous moments the count could admit, the other man was quite tolerable as liege lords,and family, went, generally leaving the lesser lords to their own devices, and generally enjoyable to be around.
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Eventually things settled down and everyone gathered around the table, expectant, curious eyes on the Duke, who cleared his throat.

“Thank you my lords for coming here. First I want to congratulate my Brother Hoël who will soon be blessed by another child.” Konan revealed the news that his sister Hawiz had announced just a few weeks before her husband’s departure from Kernev.
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A clamor arose at the table, causing a blush to appear under the count’s stubble, but he couldn’t say he was displeased at the attention, receiving back slaps and well-wishes from his fellow council members. Hoël lowered his head in nods at each, a slight flush underneath his stubble, and mentioned his gratitude.

“Heh good to see someone who knows how to treat a woman, not I can blame him! Though you still have a ways to go to catch up with me my boy. Now, my dear Viscount I’m sure you would do the same for my Elina, yes? She may be natural born but she is a good girl.” The northern count rubbed his hands together swiftly as he peered towards Morvan. Hoël cocked his eyebrow at the attempt at marriage brokering, trying to recall this for the future, but first there was an insult to deal with.

Hoël turned an eye on Edouarzh, and let out a heavy breath with his hackles raised at the casual tone he took. “Might I remind you, my lord, That this is our Duke’s sister you speak of so casually?”

“Peace my friends. Hoël I’m sure the Lord Penthievre meant no offense towards your lady wife. And he and I will discuss his proposal at a more appropriate time. But let us not disgrace ourselves before our lord, yes?”

Edouarzh merely shook his head, leaning back slightly with his hands up high. “Lower your horns brother, I meant no offense. My congratulations again,and and yes my friend Morvan, I will happily continue our talks later.”

“If you all are quite finished?” Konan dryly drawled out, resting his head against a fist with a a bored look played out on his face. Hoël and Edouarzh both bowed to the central figure in apology.

“But I suppose the topic of Marriage does bring us to the reason for this meeting. My Uncle and I have been in communication with the House of Normandy regarding a betrothal contract for myself, and the young Lady Judith de Boulogne.”
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Silence followed this announcement, as well the Duke’s desire for a wife and heir was of course well known, no one would’ve expected where it would end up coming from. The Bretons and Normans had long had a contentious relationship, dating back to the laters roots as Viking raiders. Indeed a recent conflict between Konan and the Bastard, William had only ended earlier the previous year. The girl in question was actually a Frank, or French as they called themselves no, but still such a deal would invite William’s influence back into the peninsula.

“And what does the Duke of Normandy ask as a bride price? Riwallon’s son established as Duke?” Hoël grumbled, while he’s lands had largely been spared from the war, Naoned and it’s surrounding county did bare some scars, but more than that, he begrudged the ambitious lord’s attempted interference in the affairs of Brittany.

Though Konan chuckled, his lips tightened downwards, in reminiscences perhaps, or at the implications. “No, nothing so foolish of course. But as you might have guessed Lord Kernev, the Duke does wish for our support in claiming what was promised to him by Eadward, primarily in knights and horses.”

Nods were seen around the tables, as indeed this is what many expected, The Bastard having moved his forces across the channel in the fall, hoping to rise with a crown upon his natural-born head.

“The Duke of Normandy;s cause is just, as declared by his Holiness the Pope. Aiding such an endeavor is the least a true people such as ourselves can do.” Boasted Bishop Gurlouen, heavy robes of offices shuffling with his gestures.

“I hear tell the Bastard has raised a force of near seven thousand men. I say we let the Saxons deal with it, and if we can help keep his attention north rather than west, the better. We have the resources, and lives, to spare.” Mayor Salomon shrugged, casting a wary glance towards a still somewhat tense Hoël, who’s jaw worked.

The Steward gae a sharp nod at the implied question. “The Duchy’s stores are reasonablelly well stocked and should be able to supply a little less than two thousand men and horses for the voyage.”

“The duke of Normandy is said to be a fierce warrior, as well as a grand strategist, I would like to see him from the same side of the blade” Morvan spoke up, offering the marshall’s approval of such a union.

Hoël was a bit surprised that Edouarzh hadn’t spoken up more, but as Chancellor he must have been aware of all the particulars already. And this way he lets any fall back be on our Duke. The count of Kernev’s mouth turned at the sour thought, he wouldn’t put it past the old rat at all.

“Very well my friends. I thank you all for your words of wisdom and your assent.” Konan nodded happily, not that he truly needed the latter, though had there been much push back of his marriage and alliance there would likely have been trouble. Yet he hadn’t seemed to set or worry at all during the conversation, letting everything play out. “Now, we still have some details to design out, before we move on to the next matters.”

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Naoned, June 5 1067

Green tinted sunlight bounced from the River Loire, through the window into Hoël’s chambers in Naoned. The Count had travelled to his eastern territories following the council meeting to check on the lands, and ensure their preparation in providing for Konan’s force’s as they moved towards England. As the sounds of the rushing water filled the space, even Hoël had to stopped and take in the sights and sounds, which brought him back to a childhood running through his Mother’s halls. More than a small part of the man preferred this court, to the more traditional one at Kernev.

A sharp quick knock at the door, interrupted the memories, all of Hoël’s servants had adapted to their lord’s desire for promptness and efficiency, and general ways of things being done. After a moment the Seneschal of Naoned stepped over the threshold of the chamber.

“Forgive me my Lord, but a message came from your Brother the chancellor. It seemed to be urgent.”

Wordlessly he deposited the scroll into Hoël’s hands and then left with a bow. Curious as to what Guérech would have to report, Perhaps something about the War. As his eyes shifted over the page of parchment, the count began to tremble in fury. Such a foolish betrayal… Hoël crumpled the notice in his hands as he gazed east into the lands of France on the horizon, where this new threat to his lands lay.
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Good opening for the rise of the house of red crescent. Good tracking of the counterparts of the figures in the run. Characters blended into the story fairly good. Enjoyable to read, respectable effort on the details. Kudos.


This was Edouarzh, Count of Penthievre.
Hello Odo. Missed this one by the eyes; nice catch, kudos.
 
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Good opening for the rise of the house of red crescent. Good tracking of the counterparts of the figures in the run. Characters blended into the story fairly good. Enjoyable to read, respectable effort on the details. Kudos.



Hello Odo. Missed this one by the eyes; nice catch, kudos.
Thanks!
Been a while since I've written much, so glad it's going at least sort-of well.
 
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