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Or maybe the odd Recap at the beginning of updates, covering the past two updates?
I can see it happening on TV now...

Previously, on In the Footsteps of Charlemagne...
<Scene of William forcing Godwinson to hand over the English crown on the battlefield>
<Scene of Adalbert being killed in the ambush of Auxerre, multiple arrows piercing his chest>
<Scene of Simon slapping the messenger who told him that Herbert still lives>
<Scene of French armies moving into Nevers with someone dramatically lowering the Burgundian standard and raising the King's>
<Scene of Duke Robert screaming "WHAT!", possibly with food and/or spittle flying from his mouth>
<Scene of an older, more weary looking Herbert riding with the King's armies to Clamecy>
 
Part Four, Chapter Thirty-Six, War and Gentlemen

Chapter Thirty-Six

The prisoner lurched awake as he felt boots on the staircase, resonating through the grey, cold stone that clouded vision, his shackles rattling as he jolted upright. He craned his neck towards the thud, recoiling as a stiff pain shot through him, sore from the lack of movement. He shuffled backwards slightly as the boots came closer. The shadow was all he saw at first, growing and contorting to fill the cell floor, skewered by the rusted bars. The prisoner looked up. A grey face hung over him, crowned with a disheveled mess of grey hair, thinned slightly by years of stress. The man's body was well set. He was strong once, the prisoner could tell that much, eyeing the weakened muscles on his arms and legs. He imagined that the man would more than likely still get the better of the him in a fight, at any time, never mind now, the prisoner's muscles similarly weakened by months of no movement and little food.

"It seems I'm finally graced with your company, your highness." The man laughed to himself, no sincerity in his voice. "Don't think about trying to appeal to my better nature. You won't be finding yourself in a tower suite too soon. All you can do now is pray that this war is over soon so you don have to rot here much longer." A rat scurried along the damp cell floor, sending small pattering noises through the air. "I see you've already been introduced to your cellmates. I'd watch out for them. They can be dirty little buggers when they get hungry. And I won't be feeding them any time soon." The man spat through the bars as he turned to leave, his boots resonating ad they hit the stone once again. "I bid you adieu, your highness."

What is a man when he is at the mercy of a being who has none? Is he nothing? The prisoner had time for little else than these thoughts. Is he nothing?

Thoughts of home and the past faded with everyday. Past friends and loves. And sadness. All gone now. He gave a meek laugh as he came to the conclusion that he'd rather be sad and free than stuck here. And it wasn't as if he hadn't experienced depression. Is he nothing?

All that he had was nothing. For he was nothing.

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The royal force, three thousand strong, line the field in dulled silver rows, almost as the crops that once swayed in the calm breezes did. From the other side of the field, deep amidst the host force, looking back on the royal army one would see the assortment of arms and shields, bore by the peasantry as denotation of their liege lords. Most arms bore escutcheon of fleur-de-lys, or, showing an ultimate allegiance to the king. Aside from the shields, most of the peasantry wore little armour, some with the odd antique breastplate or helmet. Those in the first few rows were armed largely with pikes. Those further back had swords.

Behind the peasantry was a relatively small band of cavalry, maybe only one hundred strong. They were well-equipped, bearing long swords and full armour. The cavalry was the first instance of nobility amongst the ranks, each with their arms emblazoned on shields, and, in some cases, on the tabards of squires and heralds. It was in the cavalry that Herbert was positioned, atop Turpin, and from his position he could see the host force of Burgundy, stood stoic against the green backdrop, their dull silver armour mirroring in the royal force. In mockery of the royal peasantry, Robert had instructed all the arms in the force to be escutcheoned with the fleurs-de-lys, or - a bold statement of his claim of the throne.

The air continued to be still, waiting for the first move. The tension was broken as Philippe, now nearing his twentieth year, rode out to the middle of the field. The men positioned either side of the field looked on, no one making a move aside from the subdued muttering coming from those not sure what was happening.

"If a man amongst you be a gentleman, let him come forth and speak with me." The challenge bellowed across the field, carried by the still, tension-thick air. Despite his new authority, Philippe was weary. Having been forced to grow by battle, watching his realm torn asunder whilst still a young boy, had taken a toll on him. He was tall, but his face had grown long early, his beard ragged and unkempt from years of living outside city walls in camp sites. Similarly weary were the armies themselves. From five years of war springs many an opportunity for desertion. Most of the original armies - those who hadn't been killed - had left for adventure elsewhere, disillusioned by what had become a decidedly un-romantic war, lacking any of the chivalric ideas that attract so many young men looking for adventure. Most had quit for England, after news of land and titles under the new Norman regime had leaked over the channel. Even then, losing Normandy was a catastrophic blow for the crown - taking nearly three thousand men across the sea.

A silence that stretched out over the field, accented only by the nervous shuffling from the less experienced soldiers on either side. Suddenly, the Burgundian host kicked into action, the sound of the clash of metal on metal rushing through the scene as people struggled to get out of the way. Soon, a man stood proudly at the head of his ranks - Robert. He took hard, exaggerated steps towards his nephew, drawing out the tension. Giving himself the appearance of being in control. Stoking the flames of his ego. As he squared himself up to the king, it seemed a contest of strength. Robert was grizzled and hardened from years of fighing - not just for lieges, but against minor Burgundian barons who had the audacity to oppose his rule. Even in his advancing age, his muscles showed no sign of significantly weakening, with the mess of grey hair crowning his head adding to his hardened appearance. His eyes were dark brown, thigh not warm. They were old, but still burned with a disarming wolffish ferocity.

Philippe, a good forty-five years his uncle's junior, was nearly as tall, his stature well-built as a result of an adolescence of fighting. He had a thick beard and broad shoulders, and had grown into a king adept in the arts of war, having grown up alongside the finest military minds in the realm. Even so, you wouldn't be too quick to bet on either if them in a fight.

"You are a jumped up git, aren't you, my nephew? You can flatter yourself with being the gentlemen all you like, but let me tell you this," he paused, looking back to his ranks, eyeing the king intently, spitting at him in his mind, "war makes no allowances for gentlemen."

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Philippe and Robert in parlay.

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To be continued...
 
I remain intrigued by the side plot in the prison. Is it now or is it later? And just who is the unnamed prisoner?
I hope Herbert has had some sort of break during the years of campaigning otherwise who knows what problems have cropped up in his family or his realm during his absence.
 
I remain intrigued by the side plot in the prison. Is it now or is it later? And just who is the unnamed prisoner?

Well, I could tell you, but then I fear you'd be rat food... ;)

I hope Herbert has had some sort of break during the years of campaigning otherwise who knows what problems have cropped up in his family or his realm during his absence.

Five years fighting a rebel duke can do a lot of things, though I fear the worst is yet to come.

As many a scientist friend of mine liked to say, "IT'S ALIVE!!!"
Great to see this back, I for one am intrigued by this mysterious prisoner's identity!

Ha! Thanks a lot.

Also, could I take the liberty of asking for your thoughts on this?:

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Something about Charlemagne being superimposed over the title text doesn't look right to me, but apart from that nice image.
 
That picture is EPIC!!! Use it, by all means do!
EDIT: I see you've added it to the OP, good job!

Thanks!

Intrigued by the man in the cell to be honest :)

I'm hoping that I'll be able to reveal all soon - story wise, that is, which will probably mean a few weeks :)

And I really like that picture, very movie like ;)

Thanks a lot!

Something about Charlemagne being superimposed over the title text doesn't look right to me, but apart from that nice image.

I know what you mean. I noticed how the text was still visible underneath and it bugged me a bit, but it seemed a bit too much work to replace the image. Thanks.

I'm now off for the week, so I should have some time to do a bit of writing - though I fear I've been spending more time in Viennese coffee houses that I ought to [here ;)]

Thanks for all your feedback.
 
Part Four, Chapter Thirty-Seven, When Fate Reveals Its Guile

Chapter Thirty-Seven​

The duke turned back towards his gathered force, letting out a primal roar. Before the king had half a chance to react, two thousand Burgundian soldiers charged, rushing to meet the king in the middle of the field. Not waiting for any instruction from their leaders, the Royal force reacted fast, men-at-arms running over the verdant ground to meet the rebels, cavalry charging just behind, churning ugly splatteirngs of mud from the soft ground.

The first few men clashed, the main bodies of the armies behind jarring as the walls of peasantry met, stopping the carnal advance of both sides. Herbert was positioned behind the mêlée, able to see past the fighting atop Turpin. Around him, he could hear men falling with groans and screams. As the first few members of the cavalry reached the front line, spooked neighs and whinnies shot through the air as horses joined their human comrades amidst the mud. With the pile up of dead around the front line, the mêlée soon began to shift, the Burgundians pressing the Royal forces back slightly, the lines arcing, ready to snap, as they pressed harder.

Herbert looked around. To his right, he heard the shout of a fellow cavalry member, barking at him to move. Looking up, he watched as the cavalry turned and made for the side of the mêlée ready to cut the Burgundians off. Herbert hurriedly spurred Turpin on and joined the back of the cavalry. As he rode, he could see the fight more clearly, men being cut down on both sides. He caught one Royalist's gaze as he passed. He couldnt have been older than twenty-five, yet his eyes betrayed that, hardened by five years of fighting. Herbert turned away, for a second wondering if the man was Valoisian. Focusing, he jarred in fright. The cavalry! He had lost them, now alone behind the Burgundian lines. Remembering where they were headed, he spurred Turpin on forwards. Through the mud and gore flying across the field, Herbert could make out the shapes of horses. He looked to the shields. Fleurs-de-lys adorned them, shining through blood and dirt as a symbol of defiance. The count rode up to them.

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The cavalry charge, imagined in modern times.​

"Gentlemen, what of the charge?" Herbert watched as the horsemen turned towards him, his voice barely audible above the din of the mêlée.

"And what charge would that be?" Herbert flushed as he recognised their Burgundian dialects. But the shields- then he remembered. The bastard duke had scornfully emblazoned the king's shield on his. And now he was trapped deep in the Rebel ranks. Herbert spurred Turpin, cursing himself for being such a fool. He turned, horrified to see the Burgundians behind him, having caught wind of the fact that he was a Royalist. He stopped jarringly. Herbert spurred Turpin on hurriedly, but the horse refused to move. The count looked down. In front of them lay a body, draped in a dirt-caked Royal tabard. For a second, Herbert thought he recognised the corpse as the man with whom he had made eye contact earlier, but soon dismissed the idea.

Herbert looked round, suddenly realising there was an absence of horse hooves beating after him. Maybe he had managed to shake his pursuers off? Surely not. They had been right behind him. Either way, the count cared little, wanting only to escape the immediate danger. He motioned Turpin to go around the body. The horse reluctantly obliged. Now free to make his way back to the main ranks, Herbert looked up.

And there was his answer. Charging towards him was a small band of Burgundian cavalry. As Herbert looked back down at Turpin, readying himself to flee quickly, he felt his horse tense. All the count could remember after that was falling, his helmeted head meeting the soft ground beside Turpin, who had been caught in the chest by an arrow. Herbert closed his eyes, resigning himself to fate.

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To be continued...

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Sorry for the length of this. I wanted to get something out so I didn't feel too guilty, and I thought the cliff-hanger was a nice way to leave it.​
 
No, not Turpin. I hope that Herbert is merely unconscious on the battlefield and that when he comes to there'll be a royalist looking over him.
 
Oh no!!! Herbert!!! We can't have a Karling die in such a way!!! LOL...then again the one I saved in my game was killed by an angry old woman soooo I guess dying in battle is more fitting.
 
Uh Herbert meeting a premature end, fighting for the Capet usurpers?

It is all rather unfortunate - especially when you put it like that.

No, not Turpin. I hope that Herbert is merely unconscious on the battlefield and that when he comes to there'll be a royalist looking over him.

Ha! I'm afraid Turpin is a goner. As for Herbert- well, I'm afraid I have very little time for writing, so you'll have to wait.

Oh no!!! Herbert!!! We can't have a Karling die in such a way!!! LOL...then again the one I saved in my game was killed by an angry old woman soooo I guess dying in battle is more fitting.

Killed by an angry old woman? That is quite a way to go. I fear we won't have anything as interesting :)
 
It is all rather unfortunate - especially when you put it like that.
Killed by an angry old woman? That is quite a way to go. I fear we won't have anything as interesting :)

yeah King Welf I's daughter Walpurga killed the baby Karling in his crib...no idea why one of those mysteries in my game that I will never understand!

Great update though Densley as always, definitely a great and epic AAR you have here!!! Can't wait to find out what fate Herbert has waiting for him.
 
Just to inform any of you who are still with me after so long, I've began work on the next update, and have reached a total word count of 33,333. Hopefully I'll have something out for you within the next few days, if not later or tomorrow.

Thank you all immensely for bearing with me, and, again, I can only offer my most profuse apologies.

Thanks,
Densley
 
Nice cliffhanger. Good way to end a post. It took me a while to get through this, but it was worth it. I like the mixed narrative style, and the use of pictures to support the story. Waiting on the next update...
 
Nice cliffhanger. Good way to end a post. It took me a while to get through this, but it was worth it. I like the mixed narrative style, and the use of pictures to support the story. Waiting on the next update...

Hi LD - great to see you here.

It's really nice to know that you've ploughed through this - I think anyone who achieves such a feat is worthy of at least a medal. I like to think that the fact that people can read it in such a fashion is some sort of reflection of my writing :)

Thanks also for your praise - having a little bit of knowledge of your background, you obviously know a thing or two about the whole narrative thing. I'm hoping that you shan't have to wait too long.
 
I started reading your AAR and I'll take the time to catch up to the last chapter once I wrap up the story of my 1st protagonist. This is a period that greatly interests me and being of French descent from Normandy myself (family from my mother's side traveled to New France in the 17th century), Medieval France always strikes a sensible cord. You know, once the new DLC is out, 867 will be even more interesting for Francia! Will you consider doing another Karling AAR?
 
I started reading your AAR and I'll take the time to catch up to the last chapter once I wrap up the story of my 1st protagonist. This is a period that greatly interests me and being of French descent from Normandy myself (family from my mother's side traveled to New France in the 17th century), Medieval France always strikes a sensible cord. You know, once the new DLC is out, 867 will be even more interesting for Francia! Will you consider doing another Karling AAR?

Hi mithfir, nice to see you here.

Thanks for taking th time to read this (or, at least some of it) - I can appreciate that it must be quite an investment time-wise by now ;)

As for your question, some sort of prequel within the AAR might be interesting, though I don't think I'm in a position to start anything new right now, what with three AARs on the go already. It's always something that could be explored in the future, though.

Thanks for your comment - I appreciate it.