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Failure​


Bátor was in a cheerful mood, he had met with Éva just 2 days ago. He was off to the village of Szada, to talk to the local elder. He was by right the head of the village and knew much about the region. Bátor was taking his task seriously and knew that the elder was not in good relations with the Lampert, the count. If he could convince him that their future invasion is just, he might get his support. If he doesn’t, well it will be a close call, he might be caught. He was doing this for over a year now and it was pretty much public secret, but they couldn’t catch him. They were pretty close to it - not once - but he had been lucky.

The ride was fine, it was a beautiful autumn, the golden leaves of the trees creating a carpet beneath his feet. As the village was just 3 days walk he decided to go on foot rather than take his horse. A horseman is always more recognisable than a mere peasant. People tend to remember horsemen riding by.

He was enjoying this task immensily, it was just yesterday when a soldier stopped him enquiring about a stranger agitating against the count, basically asking him if he’d seen himself. He had acted surprised and said he never saw him, but could hardly keep himself from laughing out loud. They were morons.

The village lay in the valley right before him, he stopped for a second. It was bigger than he imagined it would be, perhaps there is even a guard outpost here. No matter, he’d come this far he won’t turn back now.

He was whistling to himself as he entered the village. He headed to the pub. He always found it amazing that no matter how small a village was, there was always a pub and people to man it. Booze was always something he never understood, as he himself never drank. It blunted his senses. Yet he made his way to the pub, no better place to get some good gossip.

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The Pub​

Naturally people were always interested were he came from, they seldom had outsiders arrive. He had called himself a pilgrim or a sell sword, depending on his mood.
The pub in Szada was relatively large, in line with the whole size of the village itself. As he entered the pub went silent.

He didn’t care much, he was used to it. He walked to the counter.


“A jug of water please”

“Water?” – the barkeeper was surprised

“Yes, water. I’m a pilgrim to the city of Székesfehérvár to see the bones of St István” – he was lying fluently. He’s done it for too long now – “I shall not let wine touch my lips until I have kissed the feet of our saint”

“Ah, I see dear sir” – the man was not surprised, these pilgrims are always strange – “here you are”

“Thank you” – Bátor replied – “Do you happen to know where I can find the village elder? I would like to ask for his good wishes”

“Good wishes?” – the man was surprised – “well he is down by the old church at this time of the day I would think”

“Thank you again good sir”

He drank his water and was just about to step outside from the pub when it caught his ear. 2 men were drinking just by the door and he thought he heard one of them say – “...Katalin will not live long, the county is in ruins...”

He couldn’t stop his curiosity getting the better of him, he decided to involve himself. He needed to know why they were talking about his mother.

“Apologies dear sirs, but did I hear you talk about our beloved Katalin, the wife of the count of Vas?” – he interrupted

“Yes, who are you? Why do you care?” – one of the men grunted, he had a long scar on his face.

“I am a pilgrim and came through the county of Vas, she was good to me and I was wondering her fate as I overheard your talk. Apologies dear sirs, it is none of my business”

“No problem young man. The countess has been arrested for treason, she will be executed” – the man said dryly – “Come to think of it, how could you have met her recently? She’s been in prison for several months now”

Bátor couldn’t really remember what he replied, he felt dizzy and his legs were shacking. He quickly got out of the pub and leaned against a tree. His mother? Executed? For months now and nobody told him? What about his father? Does he know about this? What is happening here? He had so many questions running through his mind he just couldn’t think.

He had no idea how long he had stayed leaning against that tree, but finally he decided, if he had come this far, he’ll talk to the elder. Once he is over it, he’ll make his way straight home and get to the end of this.

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Portrait of Bátor​


His thoughts were elsewhere so he couldn’t see the signs as he walked down the road. He didn’t notice the boots of the scarred faced man in the pub. They were the boots of the count Lamperts soldiers. He also didn’t notice the man leaving the pub while he was still deep in his thoughts.

He reached the old temple and saw the elder sitting there with two of his advisors. Or so he thought at that time. He would never have thought to walk straight up to him under other circumstances without first checking the surroundings.

But this time he did. It was mistake.

As soon as he stepped in front of the elder, the 2 advisors drew swords. He was about to turn and run but there were another 4 men who rushed out of the temple, led by the man with the scar face. He was trapped, nowhere to run. He wished he could spit in his own face for being such a fool but it was too late now, he was still grabbing his sword.

“Drop it” – the scarred man yelled – “Or we’ll cut you to pieces”

Bátor looked at the four men and the two beside the elder. He was a good sword man, but he knew he wouldn’t have a chance. He dropped his sword.

‘Father, I failed you’ were his thoughts as he was thrown in chains and taken away.
 
Mayor


Márton will be back in about a week, at least that’s what he was told. He might be back much sooner than he’d anticipated, which was a good thing.

Kristóf could hardly wait for the moment when Kupán would be put to trial. He’d visited Katalin each day since then and held his promise as well. He looked for Qasad and asked him to take care of Bátor, he even left a huge sum for him for anything he might need. He was not about to let anything happen to Bátor, not only because he promised it to Katalin, but because Márton was his friend.

His behaviour towards Kupán was icy at best, he couldn’t help conceal it as much as he tried. He still wasn’t sure if Kupán was aware that he knew. He didn’t act as such anyway, surely if Kupán knew that he’d been discovered he would make a run for it before Márton got back. But he didn’t, so Kristóf felt safe.

Bishop Salamon was useless, he never took part in anything, he hardly even left the bishopric since Márton left, which was 9 months now. All the day-to-day activities and running the county were left on the shoulders of Kristóf and Kupán. Even now he was dealing with the ever so small problems of the peasants.

“Next” – Kristóf called

An old man in ragged clothes came forward, he was grabbing his hat in his hand. A guard was standing next to him – “Your majesty” – the old man started

“I’m not a royal my good man” – he tried not to laugh out loud – “what is it?”

“Well your highness” – the man felt awkward, he was more used standing in the field than in a room – “two months ago...”

“He shot a deer in the counts forrest” – the guard interrupted

“Is that so?” – Kristóf looked at the old man. It was common, people always took the risk, despite them knowing that hunting and fishing in the counts forest or river was a privilege of the count alone. By royal prerogative forest law was widely applied. The law was designed to protect the venison and the vert—i.e. the "noble" animals of the chase— notably red and fallow deer the roe and the wild boar— and the greenery that sustained them. Forests were designed as hunting areas reserved for the monarch or (by invitation) the aristocracy.

“Mercy you Grace” – the man pleaded – “It was my only daughters wedding, we did not have enough meat. Bozsi our only cow died last summer. It was but a deer, I have never ever hunted and never will again. I beg you your majesty”

Kristóf was tired of this, he had poor beggars dragged in front of him each day – “Fine” – he was feeling lenient – “Cut off his left thumb and take him away”

“Thank you your highness, thank you!!!”

He was taken away. The next was a young girl, barely the age of 15.

“My Lord. I have come to you seeking justice, Lord Aaron from the house Goth...” – she stopped for a moment, tears ran down her cheek – “... took my virginity. I shall never find a husband”

He hated this, what was he to do? He couldn’t punish a noble, after all she was just a servant. It was his right to do so. Kristóf never understood why they bodered, why they still came seeking justice when they knew they would have none.

“My young girl” – Kristóf sympathised – “You shall find a husband, don’t you worry about that”

“I want justice” – the girl had fire in her eyes

“Let me explain this to you. Aaron is a noble of this land, he shall do with you as he pleases, you need to understand that and be thankful you are alive” – Kristóf explained as a father does to his child – “guards, take this poor girl away and give her three gold coins for her troubles”

A young man stepped forward.

“My Lord, I have come...”

“Enough!” – Kristóf interrupted – “I’ve had enough for today. Come back tomorrow. You all are dismissed” – he said to the crowd still patiently waiting for their turn. He was in no mood for this.

He stood up, stretched his legs and left the hall. He walked up to the tower, it was one of the few things he liked to do. Just stand on the tower and watch people doing their daily duties as the sun set.

Bah, I’m getting old, he thought to himself while panting half way up the stairs. I really need to go hunting or something, I’ll be as fat as Salamon.

The view was magnificent, as always. He could see the autumn leaves now golden yellow, the winter was coming. Suddenly he saw dust in the distance, it was from several horsemen. He could also make out the colours, albeit barely. It was Márton! He was home early. What joy! He leaned further out to make sure his sight wasn’t cheating him, when he felt two hands by his ankle.

The next moment he was shoved over the edge of the tower.

‘I didn’t tell anyone the treachery. Márton will execute Katalin!’ – These were the last thoughts that ran through his head, before he landed in the yard head on and fell into a coma.

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The Ambush​


Bátor was held in Szada for 3 days, under the watchful eye of the guards. He was chained on his hand and feet, even taking a leak was something annoyingly difficult for him. They would take him to the keep in front of Lampert, the count. He was unsure of his fate, if he is lucky he’ll be executed. If not, he’ll be ransomed, probably asking Márton to officially abandon any claim he might have on the duchy. That would break his father’s hearth and Bátor wasn’t sure he could live with the shame. But he had no say in this and as his father’s only son, he knew Márton didn’t have a choice either. After all, what was a duchy worth without a heir.

On the third day 6 horsemen arrived and he was handed over to them. They brought a spare horse on which he was placed. His hand and feet tied under the animals belly, like some bloody saddle. They headed towards the keep and he was carried through the village while doing so. Bátor closed his eye in attempt to lessen the humiliation, he couldn’t stand to look into people’s eye.

They travelled all day briefly stopping by a small river were they refreshed themselves. Márton was given a jug of water but was not cut loose. The night fell, they made camp by the forest, after much hesitation they left Bátor on the horse.

By morning Bátor couldn’t feel his limbs, he was feeling dizzy. If he had to spend another day and night on the horse, he’ll surely faint. Didn’t they want him alive? He was confused, he was a valuable captive after all.

The day went by very slowly, despite them making haste. They only stopped once, but this time they cut him loose and gave him a slice of bread to eat. He couldn’t stand on his feet and fell to the ground, his limbs were sore. He quickly ate the bread – as he hadn’t eaten for 2 days – and watched as the soldiers finished off the rest of the meal.

The break didn’t last long though, he was placed back on the horse and tied, perhaps even stronger than before. He couldn’t really tell anymore, as he could hardly feel with his hands and feet.

It was dusk, they were heading through the woods. The forest was dark and the trees were packed closely together as if forming a wall. The chat between the soldiers seized, they felt danger ahead. Even Bátor could tell, although he felt half dead already.

Huuuush!!! Ding!

An arrow had whizzed pass him and hit the shield of the soldier to the right. Suddenly a dozen – maybe more, maybe less – more arrows were fired. One of the soldiers got an arrow in his neck, another in his belly. They fell of the horse, bleeding to death. Another guard, formerly an adventurer got an arrow to the knee, but he could still make a stand. The remaining four guards quickly formed a circle around Bátor.

About ten maybe eleven rag-tag band of people rushed out of the forrest and attacked the guards. Although the guards were trained soldiers and had better weapons, the four of them – including one injured – could not hold back the bandits. They did manage to cut down about eight of them, before falling to the sword.

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The rag-tag band of ambushers


The remaining three bandits stood still as if waiting for someone. Bátor felt like he was dreaming, he couldn’t make out the face of the people in front of him. Then a man stepped out of the forest, probably their leader. He gave a sack of coin to the three men that were waiting, who immediately made haste.

The man was wearing a dark hood and slowly walked over to Bátor.

“Who are you?” – Bátor heard himself ask

“It is not important” – the man said – “but you can call me Qasad if you must”

He cut loose the ropes and ensured Bátor did not hit the ground hard.

“Come my boy” – the man said – “we have a long road ahead of us”
 
Sorrow


It was a gloomy day. Black clouds floated through the sky blocking the sun, essentially turning the day into night. The weather in November was cold, the ground was frozen beneath them. It seemed as if it had been a year since Márton arrived back to court, despite it being only two weeks ago. The merriness and cheering that was heard all around had all but died out. No one approved of what was about to happen. Everyone had pleaded, begged for Márton to change his mind, but to no avail.

Even Otto appeared before him, he fell to his knees in front of Márton weeping like a child. He had promised gold, his troops, he also promised to swear fealty to Márton if he only spares Katalins life. Márton had sent him away, his face cold as ice. Even as Otto left and cursed him he made no sign.

Ever since the judge declared Katalin guilty he became cold as stone. People were avoiding him like the plague, he never spoke to anyone. He barked orders only if he had to, since Kristóf was basically dead and Bátor was gone, there was essentially no one brave enough to question him.

Although everyone felt sorry for Katalin, everyone wanted to be present. A big crowd was gathered around the little wooden ramp in the middle of the yard. There was hardly any space to move, with the only exception of Márton, who was standing in the first row without anyone daring to enter a 5 meter radius around him. It was as if he had an impenetrable aura, an aura of fear.
Suddenly there were murmurs and the crowd made way. Katalin was walking up front, her hands in chains, she was accompanied by four guards on all ends. Her clothes were thorn and her eyes were red from crying, but she wasn’t crying anymore, she stood strong. Just as strong as she was when the judge declared her guilty of treason.

She wasn’t willing to beg for her life, she was better than that.

As she walked past the crowd and unto the stand she didn’t look at anyone, her lips were held tight. She slowly reached the stand and walked up step by step. The crowd was silent, some were crying silently. They really loved her, she was always good to them, they did not care about politics they just saw a good woman being killed for nothing.

“Katalin” – Salamon the bishop started, they were never friends, but even he felt pity for Katalin – “Do you denounce your sins before returning to our Lord?”

“I do” – her voice was clear and loud.

She knelt down and put her head on the log. The executioner slowly pulled out his axe. The log was dark red from the soaked blood of previous executions, but even this did not scare Katalin. Many were weeping at this point, even more people were screaming and struggling, with guards having to hold them down, fighting for their lives.

“Do you forgive me?” – the executioner asked

“I forgive you” – she said. Before the bard hit her neck she looked directly in the eye of Márton and a whisper - ‘I love you’ - left her lips. The bard hit and her head went rolling on the floor.

Márton watched and heard the whisper, he saw her lips moving. He stood motionless for a few seconds, a single drop of tear rolling down his cheek. Then he turned and walked back into the keep, followed by the gaze of the people.

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At the moment Katalins head hit the ground, Kristóf let out a big sigh and went to rest. Kristóf was dead!
 
In a way it was. 1 more update until the end of the first chapter (basically the first 7 years). After that I changed chancellors to someone with a higher Diplomacy, so I needed a way to get Bator out of Fejér.
I still haven't got my claim (at the time of the story) and it was really getting frustrating. The plan was once I get the claim and can press it, I can then claim the duchy, giving me 2 'free county claims'. However getting that first claim is really painful...

I wonder how other writAARs do it (in case of story driven), do they reply a certain period until they get the desired outcome or the make the story around what happens. If I had waited with Bátor, that would have been a veeeery looong 1 county game which would get boring very fast.


After the next update I planned to do a 'mini update' on what actually happened in the game during the time period, without the story arch.
 
Good read...