I wonder if the chapters are getting too long. I'd like some longer updates in the future that cover more events, but I'm worried they'll get tedious.
Personally, I did not find them too long.I wonder if the chapters are getting too long. I'd like some longer updates in the future that cover more events, but I'm worried they'll get tedious.
Personally, I did not find them too long.
I'm glad to hear it, and I'm also glad that Eudokia has an audience. She started out as just a character to introduce the world.Thanks for the new chapter. Compelling. Eudokia is quite the character. She seems quite good at navigating the currents of power.
I agree with the others. The chapters are fine at the current length. For me, there is no problem with chapter length if the narrative or characters propel me forward.
But then again, I like writing long chapters....
Welcome!! kyiv will be around, but not in the near future, I must say. The original plan was to go there, but in the end, I settled on Constantinople.Eudokia has a commanding voice and tone when she needs it.
So Kiev is turning into something more organised as well. Will be interesting to see how the two threads interweave
And the chapter length is fine![]()
Not at all, as long as you don’t update too often.Well, I've expanded more in this chapter. I hope it's not tedious. Your comments are always welcome and appreciated!
People certainly fall along the way, hahahaAll these schemes, how long until someone ends up murdered?
—You could’ve picked a guard from the palace if you wanted protection.
—Half the palace guards tried to kill me in the very place where the pavilions for tonight’s banquet are now being raised. I know Bo won’t try to kill me… at least not until he learns the language and can understand when someone’s offering him a bribe.
I would say his parents did also not enjoy very much long talks ... or names...His name was Bo. He was a man of few words...
It's a very Swedish name. Say no more.I would say his parents did also not enjoy very much long talks ... or names...