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I must say it’s good to see John screwing up again. :D Just when you think he’s beginning to show some intelligence he manages to completely misunderstand the situation, which I’m sure will have drastic consequences for everyone involved. I’m still not sure I understand why all this effort by the British to get their hands on Tom. But then that’s what you want isn’t it? ;)

Joe
 
I couldn't say it any better than Passepartout.

The one thing that can be said for Preston is that he didn't have time to hear more details. Of course, that has more to do with his ham-fisted approach to Mrs. Whiting (nice to see that he treats her much as he treats Cassie. Apparently, he is just that clueless with women) than with anything else...

Black's gonna have a merry little time pulling Preston's strings when he gets back to Carolina... Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear. The boy just kicked himself all the way back to square one.

Idiot.
 
Damn that Rutledge catches all the breaks. Preston comes to help just in time to miss Heyward and assume the worst.

Now, is Anne being "held hostage" as well? What do they plan to do with her, I wonder.
 
Sigh. He's thinking with the part of his anatomy better suited for sitting upon again...

That poor captain. Caught between Foster and Heyward and an experimenting cook...

The nation of Peperna? Why does this make shivers run up and down my back?

heh

DW
 
Draco Rexus: Hey, you should be happy. You always get somewhat wary when John acts sensibly.

Vann the Red: Well, John has a serious grudge against the British. It tends to cloud his mind frequently.

jwolf: Desperate times? In this AAR? C'mon now... :)

Storey: I'll see if I can give more insight into just what the British (aka Mrs. Foster) is up to. As for John, he does seem to misunderstand a lot.

J. Passepartout: Hey, John could probably save you quite nicely. He just would wait til he was sure which side you were on first. :rofl:

Stuyvesant: Yes, if John had been a little more patient Whiting might have told him everything. As it stands, things are worse.

coz1: Good question, we'll have to check up on Anne Whiting after she recovers from her shock.

Fiftypence: Ah, another member of the John fan club. :D

Askar: Thanks and welcome! Pull up a seat, we have a ways to go yet but we're getting there.

Dead William: Yes, Bristol needs to have a 'chat' with his steward about meals. He's in a very bad situation. Speaking of which, let's look in on him...

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Question:

Over the past few days I've been considering whether to add 'character sheets' for the crew, similar to what you'd see for Crusader Kings. (Check one of their AARs if you don't know what that means.) It'd list general details like age, personality traits, skills and motivations. Do you think that would help, or detract from the AAR?
 
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May 1784
HMS Reliance


"I don't quite follow you, Captain." For once, Anne Foster spoke the truth as she looked up. Captain Bristol had stormed in - stormed in to the cabin and stood, veins visible along his temples, cheeks flushed.

"I believe you do, ma'am," Bristol replied curtly. "Whatever game you are at with General Heyward must end."

The only game Foster was playing was being nice to him. "What is amiss?"

"He has been on my deck since dawn, ma'am, either so far removed as to be nigh on catatonic, or spouting prophecies. He is making the crew uneasy ma'am, and frankly me as well."

"And you think I have something to do with this?" she demanded. This wasn't good. If her prize snapped before she could get anything out of him... "Have you talked to the surgeon? Perhaps it is a fever."

"I did. He insists the general's wounds are mostly healed, no sign of infection whatsoever. Indeed, he congratulates himself on the man's quick recovery. He was fine until this morning."

Foster regarded him through narrowed eyes. She couldn't doubt the surgeon, though a bad wound could explain much. Stress? He certainly had reason to be stressed. That could work to her advantage... after all, once she had her information, who gave a damn what happened to him?

"I will talk to General Heyward," she said. "I cannot imagine what may have upset him, but if I may be of service..."

"Thank you," Bristol looked pathetically grateful and she smiled. "I will send him below."

"Good," she watched him leave. "And Captain? Knock next time, if you please."
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"Poor gent's run mad," whispered a sailor to his mate.

"He's gonna bring us trouble," agreed his partner.

On the quarterdeck, staring behind the ship at the foam wake on blue-green water, as straight as an arrow, Tom stood with hands clasped behind his back. He'd been silent this last half-hour.

Long may it remain so, Lieutenant Marshall thought, studying him covertly. He'd kept promising the end of the world and Armageddon like some fire and brimstone preacher. A bad day, Marshall judged. He was just melancholy with being away from home and having a bad day.

Tom's gaze flickered away as a midshipman approached, offered the captain's compliments, and Mrs. Foster sought him in the cabin. For a second he frowned at the boy, as if not quite understanding, then he nodded and walked away, but not before taking a last glance at the ship's wake as if looking for something.

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South Carolina

"They're coming!" Corporal Castor pulled sharply on his reins. The horse whinnied, turned its head, then stood there shaking. Around him the two privates sighed and got to their feet. Craig remained seated on a rock, sharpening his knife with renewed vigor.

John also sat on a rock and looked up. "How far?" The British had chased them out of Savannah, which he half expected. They'd chased him well into South Carolina, which was new. Their horses couldn't take much more of this.

"Half a mile, maybe a mile."

"God's blood." Obstinate bastards. John stood slowly. "Alright, we run for Beaufort."

"Respect, colonel, but I'm tired of running." Craig stood and sheathed his knife. "It's only 5 on 6. I say we kill the ______. They're in our turf now."

Preston nodded. He didn't like running either. "Anyone else?"

Castor didn't say anything, but it was clear he was scared. One of the privates, Halstein, half drew his pistol. "Let's finish this," he growled. His partner nodded.

"Alright. Castor, tie the horses nearby in case we have to leave. Everyone else, find cover." He did just this, crouching behind a shrub as Craig and Halstein shared a tree. The last private lay prone in some underbrush and they waited. After just a few minutes they heard horses trotting on the packed earth. John peeked out and saw crimson shapes moving through the trees. They rounded a sycamore.

"FIRE!" Preston roared. Five pistols fired into the British. No, four. Where in hell was Castor? John swiveled around. The son of a bitch had run! He could see the coward's back as he galloped away and drew his second pistol. No, he couldn't waste the shot. Not with...

One of the Redcoats was down, or more correctly his horse was and he lay trapped beneath the dead beast. One dismounted and ran for cover. His companions stayed on horseback. One, an officer perhaps, pointed and they fired. Private Halstein fell from his tree, quite dead.

5 on 3, and Craig pinned. The British reloaded. Craig realized his danger, threw his pistol at the officer and leapt from his tree as the second volley thundered. He landed hard and rolled onto his side, grabbing his ankle. 5 on 2.

"God damn, we're going to lose," John said to himself. They'd kill Craig, then it'd only be a matter of time before he found their last man. He had to protect them. How?

How else? Who else would they be after?

"Hallo, you maggot-faced puppies! Over here!" Preston stood and fired. One of the horses reared, throwing his rider. John dropped his pistol, drew his sword and freed his horse as he leapt on its back. The steed whinnied and bucked at the unexpected impact. "Move, God damn you!"

"That is the Colonel," an Englishman barked. "Ride him down!"

John's horse surged into life. He glanced behind him: One rider stayed behind to help his fallen friends. That left three. As he turned he heard a report, something hard slammed into his left shoulder. No pain. "Run!" Preston snarled at his horse, who seemed to understand for it did just that and miles of forest swept by.

How long this kept up he couldn't say. Presently he thought to look behind him, only two left. He must have lost one while jumping the ridge a mile or so back. The last Brits had drawn their swords though, and were certainly gaining. John's horse was tiring fast, he could feel it stumble and lurch with every gallop. Their horses couldn't be much better, but apparently good enough.

"Enough!" he cried, pulling on his bridle. Now his shoulder awakened, screaming at the sudden tug. Preston grit his teeth as his horse executed a smooth turn. The British responded by fanning out to flank him. Perfect. John continued turning, cutting his momentum as one of the horsemen came at him.

"Now!" He charged, and as his horse lurched forward once more his shoulder again shot red hot spears through his body. For a split second his mind wandered, wondering if this what what his horse felt like, then the two horsemen came together. The Brit slashed. John ducked under it and lunged.

A cavalry sabre is not built for thrusting or lunging, but in this event it served. He thrust into the Redcoat's vest and through. With a gurgling sigh he fell from his saddle. The horse fled.

One. Where was he? There, doubling back to find his companion. Preston's horse chose this moment to let him know it was done and sank to its knees, trembling and heaving violently. John leapt aside and into the brush, watching the last Redcoat. Where was he now? He crouched, instinct crying for him to attack this last Brit, shoulder telling him now was not the time.

The last soldier appeared, stared at his man and John's horse, glared around furiously. He looked tired, as did his horse. After a moment he slowly paced in the other direction, and Preston crept away.
 
Looking for submarines? Oh dear. Tom is going bonkers. This is not good. Not good at all. Small brains PReston has lost his capacity for reasonable thought once more and Tom is going mad. Can we make captain Bristol the new hero?

Interesting update. I do wonder what exactly mrs Fosterwants of poor, deranged Tom...

DW
 
While I don't know that character sheets would add anything to the AAR, CatKnight, please feel free if you think it'd be fun.

Vann
 
A nice comparison between Tom's seeming calm life aboard the boat with Preston's rather active one fighting the Brits. But so much more going on underneath. Preston certainly still has his bravery going for him. While Tom...well, yes, if he is looking for subs at this point, I think he might be losing it. However, I have a feeling he might have a little something else up his sleeve. Not sure what, but something.

As for character sheets, they would probably be of more use to you than us. A list of characters might be helpful in the first post, but I'd rather you spent time writing more updates that going back and listing those who have already come along. ;) Up to you. We'll certainly enjoy regardless. :)
 
Heyward's not thinking too clearly, or else he wouldn't scare the sailors so off-handedly. If he were thinking, he'd be brooding in silence. So I feel he's not in the best of shape, mentally. Course, there're lots of reasons for him to be messed up. But I don't believe he's searching for subs, so he's not quite as far gone as some of the other readers are fearing. Still, the question is: is his mental unhinging working in his favor, by distracting and confusing the evil Foster, or will it damage Heyward, by giving the evil Foster a lever to work on?

Preston's showing himself to be foremost a man of action (or even more precisely, a man of violence). Not really one for rationalizing and other activities requiring deliberate thought, but very good at acts of brutal violence at the drop of a hat. He's a tool needing someone to use him, unfortunately his current user is Black. If only one of the 'good guys' could get that kind of control over him...

Now why are the British chasing after him in South Carolina? That could be a very costly mistake... (Question from a game point of view: has the five-year truce about expired and is it time again to attack the Brits? ;))

Finally, though I appreciate all your writings, I do believe that adding character sheets is not necessary. Especially if it means diverting your precious time from actually writing this story! :)
 
Dead William: :) No submarines. Though I'll point out the US did have a 'sub' in the Revolution. Regarding Captain Bristol being the hero: That'd be an interesting twist! 150-odd posts just leading up to the real hero coming on scene!

J. Passepartout: He probably should, but it'd be a long swim to land. ;)

Vann the Red: Given yours, Coz's and Stuyvesant's comments I've decided against character sheets. We'll just keep going.

coz1: We're about to see more of what Tom's up to. John's busy getting shot at of course. :)

Stuyvesant: As you say, Tom's had better days. As for Preston, he's definitely better at fighting Brits than he was in say the beginning. In that respect he's come a long way, though hatred is one of his primary motivations there.

Regarding the Brits chasing him into South Carolina: Simply put, they're tired of John wandering into their country and decided to see how HE likes it. Whether there are consequences remains to be seen.
 
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May 1784
HMS Reliance



"General Heyward, come in," Anne Foster purred. She rose and curtseyed. Tom looked around vacantly as if not quite sure where he was.

Since his recovery, Tom had felt increasingly...strange. There was no other word for the occasional bouts of confusion, not quite a hallucination nor a presence but a sense of something he couldn't see. He knew, for example, with certainty when and why the British soldiers came for him in the hospital. This morning he felt even more aware of his surroundings, as well as time slowly running away from him. He had to stop Black before...

"General? Would you like some tea?" Foster poured the cups herself. "Please sit." She pulled her chair next to his and smiled up at him.

Tom sat slowly and studied her, a not unattractive young woman but for her cold eyes. "What can I do for you?" he asked finally.

"Captain Bristol tells me you are unwell. How do you feel?"

Heyward considered this at length. He wasn't sure. "Tired. I've been at this a long time."

"At what?" Foster sipped her tea, grimaced, pulled over the sugar bowl.

"Protecting..." Tom paused.

"America?"

He visibly shook his head. "What do you want, Mrs. Foster? Why am I here?"

"As I said, Captain Bristol is concerned for your..."

"I meant on this ship."

"Oh." She smiled. Tired, dazed and confused men she could handle. She put down her cup and touched his knee as if an old friend. "You have to agree we've a right to be curious how you ended up in Georgia."

"I explained that. I..." He studied her intently. She averted her eyes: She found something about his gaze disturbing. Heyward continued: "You're a spy."

"No, sir!" she answered sharply. "No, but you may say I look after His Majesty's interests, and you are naturally of great interest." She relaxed and leaned closer. "An American general appears in our colony? Of course we're going to take the...opportunity to know you better."

"To know what I know."

"Well, yes." She smiled.

"You want to turn me."

"I want you to think about your own welfare." Her fingertips slid gently along his thigh and she watched closely as his eyes widened. "You came to us for help and we gave it freely." She nuzzled his jaw and continued softly. "If you couldn't go home, then they are not your friends. Why protect them? If they want to hurt you, you owe them nothing."

"Mrs. Foster!" he protested, then stopped. An interesting argument. What did he owe to anyone here? Not much.

Anne Foster could almost hear his mind working and smiled genuinely, her grip on his thigh tightening. Victory! "I'm prepared to make your stay in Halifax very sweet. What do you think?"

Think. Loss of North America or no, the British Empire was still one of the strongest countries on the planet. If anyone could bring Black down they could. She was right, he owed these Americans nothing. On the other hand, they'd beaten the Brits soundly last round. If he helped the Brits defeat them - what else could Foster want - wouldn't they be back to the beginning and the last eleven years wasted? How he wished Anne Whiting was here. Anne! She was an American too. And she was still in Georgia! Plus, this Foster woman changed tactics more often than...

Foster took his silence for acquiescence and whispered in his ear. "Come with me." She took his arm.

"I think your insane." Tom replied quietly, with little emotion. He detached his arm and stared at her.

She rose slowly, glaring with disbelief and not a little frustrated. "Insane?" she demanded softly. Foster's eyes blazed. "Insane!?"

Heyward continued to study her. "Yes."

She slapped him, hard. His head whipped to one side, a bright red imprint on his cheek.

"You've lost," he replied in the same tone.

Foster snarled and slapped him again. She grabbed his vest and leaned close. "Oh no, General. I haven't even begun. Enjoy your freedom, because once we reach Halifax it is ended. You will tell me what I want to know, or you will suffer and then you will die, as will your lady in Georgia! Think well on this. It is your last chance." She stormed from the room.

Tom did think on this, and on Anne. What was she doing now? Sometimes he almost thought he knew.

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May 1784
Georgia


"I do apologize, ma'am, for this appalling breach of security." Malcolm Kelleher stood in front of the open window of Whiting's room. "I do not yet know how Colonel Preston was able to penetrate our defenses, but you do have my word it won't happen again. At this moment I have a squad of cavalry after him with orders to discourage further intrusions." Permanently,

"Can you move your wrist? Good. No pain?" Doctor Buckley sat in her simple desk chair as Anne gingerly rotated her hand.

"No, it's just sore." She closed her eyes. The laudanum was having its effect.

"I wish you had just called out when I knocked before," Buckley replied. "I would have dealt with the matter."

Anne smiled. The doctor was in his fifties and thin. Preston would have snapped him like a twig. "That is very kind of you, but at the time I had the matter well in hand."

"Doctor, if Mrs. Whiting is well I would like to speak with her before she retires," Kelleher turned.

"Of course." The doctor rose. "I will just talk to the porter then turn in myself. I will see you in the morning." He bowed. "Sir." He bowed again, then departed.

Anne could feel panic rising from within. She didn't want to...couldn't admit it, but Preston had scared her badly. Here she was, stuck behind enemy lines, Tom heaven knew where. Fortunately the laudanum kept all this down.

"I have considered whether it's wise for you to stay," Kelleher said. "It is obvious your enemies are feeling persistent. I could easily carry you to Bermuda, or the Bahamas, though you would find no comforts in either. England certainly."

"I want to go home," she murmured.

"I cannot recommend that, ma'am." Kelleher shook his head. "Your enemies are..."

"...not invincible," Anne's eyes closed.

Malcolm shook his head. "If America, then I'm sure we can find a neutral trader. Boston perhaps, or Philadelphia. Even Williamsburg may be far enough to guarantee your safety. What do you say to that?"

She had nothing to say. Kelleher realized she was asleep sitting up. Gently he lay her down, then crept out.

No, Whiting clearly wasn't safe here. America was a...slim possibility. It meant losing any hold on General Heyward of course, but he considered this a dirty business anyway, even by his less than pristine standards. He passed Doctor Buckley's open door - he must still be talking to the porter.

He descended the stairs into the darkened common room. Fortunately there was enough light through the open front door to see by. Kelleher picked his way carefully to avoid the furniture, and...

...the open front door?

"Porter!" he called. No reply. "Porter!" He stepped forward, onto something soft.

Kelleher recoiled. He stepped around the mass and opened the door wide. In the grey light he saw, huddled in a mass with a dark liquid flowing about them, Doctor Buckley...and the porter.

He drew his pistol, looking around for an attacker. Then from above he heard a piercing scream.

"Mrs. Whiting!"
 
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Ah, crap. Jasen shows up. Well, when he swims after Tom at least MRs Foster will have something to be scared about. Really scared.


I do wonder what is happening to Tom.

Nice

DW
 
Ah, I was wondering where old Jasen had got to (wonder how you arrived at that name for the supernatural, seeminly unkillable slayer?). I believe Mrs. Foster has truly overplayed her hand this time.

Vann
 
Yikes, I had forgotten all about Jasen Exeter! :eek: The latest attack on Anne does sound like his handiwork. :mad:

I thought Tom handled himself with Foster very well. It seems that the angels he visited have given him a gift of some kind of extra insight that he is just learning, clumsily, how to use. I hope he gets better at it quickly!

Edit: More of Exeter. There was the line about Anne thanking the doctor for his chivalrous concern, but thinking Preston could snap him like a twig -- that's probably exactly what Exeter did! :eek:
 
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Nice work, Cat, I'm once again fully intrigued and bursting with emotions of varying kinds for our characters.

I agree with jwolf, I think that Tom's "strangeness" is a sort of gift from the "angels" that he's gotta lock down and figure out how to use.

I also agree that we've all forgotten 'bout our dear old Exeter. Which is a Very Bad Thing to do, and something Anne is about to pay the price for. Although, maybe like Vann said, having Exeter confronting Mrs. Forster might just put the little tart in her place for a change, eh?