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Heyward's going for it! Let's hope whatever plan he has works out perfectly, but I think we all know something's going to go wrong--no plan survives contact with the enemy and all that. ;)


And congratulations for getting to 3000, you lucky cat. :)
 
Talk about a cliffhanger...man!!! OK, how long do we have to wait for more of the good stuff. This is one of the most interesting and captivating AARs I have read...ever.
 
CatKnight: ...Adams shouted something in Jefferson's ear. His face darkened but he nodded, stood and banged on his desk. No one could hear him.

at least Jefferson tried ! ! :)

CatKnight:
...Then, with no warning, the fight stopped..A nervous soldier stood next to a stern, proud general in the full dress uniform of the United States Army..He walked forward.

but General Heyward did ! ! ;)

it is interesting that the presence of Heyward calmed everyone down instantly ! ! :D

CatKnight: ..."I understand." He pushed his way onto the Congressional floor. "It is time to stop fearing the dark."

and that is why ! ! :)

if i understand correctly, Black is in serious trouble. the very presence of Heyward will banish him from Governor Moultrie's body...

if not that, then a touch (as in a handshake)... :D

and, Governor Moultrie will know that as well ! ! :eek:

magnificent, marvelous ! ! :cool:



congratulations CatKnight on 3000 posts ! !
:)
 
Who do you think gave it to him in the first place?
You're touching on one of the oldest philosophical questions ever. I’m sure you’ll do it justice.
 
In Black's last public harrangue he referred several times to 'Thomas'. Since everyone else is referenced by their last names, have I missed a character or was he referring to Heyward?

With that small itch aside, I would say that Adams has 'Perry Mason'ed the prosecution. Unfortunately he may find the delegates cling to what they want to believe even in the face of facts.

Fights - even fistfights - were not unheard of in the old Pre-Civil War Congress and were more common in the Confederate Congress. Commentators have remarked that the spectacle of elderly men thumping each other was more comical than anything else.

So Heyward has arrived... somehow. His statement is not completely accurate. I would edit his choice of words thus: 'It is time to stop fearing the Blackness.' :D

Great posts! And congrats on 3000.
 
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Fights - even fistfights - were not unheard of in the old Pre-Civil War Congress and were more common in the Confederate Congress. Commentators have remarked that the spectacle of elderly men thumping each other was more comical than anything else.

Not to mention beatings with canes.
 
Congrats on the 3000+ posts, Cat.

It's good to see Tom coming to peace with himself. That peace, I feel, will be a very powerful force that can and will have an impact on others. Take for instance the calming (for lack of a better term) that took place in Congress when he simply walked in to the middle of bedlam?

I do believe that we are about to embark upon some very interesting events. (The end of the chapter headline kind of helped, I'm smart like that. :D )

As usual, Cat, outstanding work!
 
Nice set of updates. About the Congress/Courtroom scenes, it appears to me that Pinckley ripping up Jones' letter is about the best thing that could have happened to Adams. If Pinckley had angrily, but in a controlled fashion, denied the allegations, it would have been his reasoned word against Jones' reasoned word. As it stands, Pinckley made himself look like a fool with something to hide, while Adams can still have Jones give his testimony orally. 1-0 to Adams.

As to Heyward, he seems to be much more in control of things. Also, I believe you intimated his latest intra-cranial conversation in his cell was with a 'new' personality. I'm interested in finding out how you picture this: are there several distinct angelic personalities that have a conduit into his head to egg him along, or are they merely different manifestations of the same angel, some more reasoned, some more forceful? Or is all this just an internal dialogue, are these different aspects of Tom's own mind/conscience that come to the fore?

Congrats on making it to (and past) 3,000 posts. So when can we expect your customized Paperna avatar? :)
 
Chief Ragusa: As Ghostwriter notes, Heyward didn't just still Congress. He stopped a near riot. Now does this mean he's 'won' his battle? Perhaps.

Judas Maccabeus: Heyward's indeed going for it. You're right about plans though :)

LewsTherin: Hopefully not long. There will be a small delay though I'll talk about in a bit. :)

GhostWriter: Hm, I dunno if Black's in serious trouble, but I'd say Tom just upped the ante. :)

Fulcrumvale: That question's actually been answered - for this AAR at least. :) Hop back to page 57 and read Tom's "dream sequence." He's out cold at the time after finding out what he's really facing.

Director: I'm a little inconsistent there. Black likes to refer to people by their first name. However I think he wouldn't intentionally put people off in an era where people go by title/surname, so he flips back and forth. He is indeed talking about Heyward.

J. Passepartout: I hope so!

Draco Rexus: Interesting events...yes. Read on :)

Stuyvesant: Right. Pinckney erred, it really didn't matter one way or the other. We'll see why he erred soon enough.

I'll hold off explaining the 'intra-cranial' chat for now. I'm not sure if it'll come up or not. If it doesn't, feel free to ask again :) For now it's sufficent to say he's got one voice/instinct wanting him to go sociopathic, while the other's trying to actively give him control.

As for Peperna...maybe. I read somewhere they like historical-like flags. A cow might be hard to swallow. Doesn't mean I won't try though :)

(Perhaps a Cow over the Papal banner will satisfy them. She IS a holy cow :))
 
Would that not make Peperna a sacred cow?

You have Heyward now in acceptance of the power and that he has a choice to make. You have not said how Heyward will use his power.

We have no indication that Jones' testimony will match what he wrote. We don't know how long someone has to be in a room with Black to open themselves to possession nor what effective range Black has. Heyward is there and that should give him advantage over a remote Black some distance away, if he can work out the rules. He won't be told what the rules are, but his questions will be answered.
 
Comments: 189 chapters.

Approximately 180-200,000 words. Wow.

If someone told me in May of 2004 I'd still be working on this nearly three years later, I would have laughed in their face. Either that or run away in terror.

As some of you know from our PMs, there's days I've wanted to just abandon this. There are times it's just been too much, and I looked at it and wondered how I was going to get this finished in any of our lifetimes.

You kept me coming back though. Your encouragement, advice and speculation (some of which I've used) answered in those times where 'Resurrection' was .... quite intimidating.

Your encouragement's also given me what I need to get off my butt and try to get something published. If it works out you'll be the first to know. :)

We're now entering the last lap. Of course, Resurrection's "laps" tend to be quite long so that means anywhere from 40-50ish posts to go... but I think that's a light at the end of the tunnel.

There'll be a short delay. If nothing else, Capt Janszoon decided he didn't want his EU3 and gave it to me(!), so if I find a computer that can run it I plan to find out what's going on. But we'll be moving again shortly.

I wanted to take a moment to thank you for your support. I can only hope I've entertained you in the bargain. This AAR is hereby dedicated to the best fans in AARland.

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COMING SOON!​


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Resurrection: Rebirth of the United States
PART V: ONE TIN SOLDIER

Music

Listen, children, to a story that was written long ago,
'Bout a kingdom on a mountain and the valley folk below.
On the mountain was a treasure buried deep beneath the stone,
And the valley people swore they'd have it for their very own.

Go ahead and hate your neighbor, go ahead and cheat a friend.
Do it in the name of Heaven, you can justify it in the end.
There won't be any trumpets blowing come the Judgement Day,
On the bloody morning after.... One tin soldier rides away.

So the people of the valley sent a message up the hill,
Asking for the buried treasure, tons of gold for which they'd kill.
Came an answer from the kingdom, "With our brothers we will share
All the secrets of our mountain, all the riches buried there."

Go ahead and hate your neighbor, go ahead and cheat a friend.
Do it in the name of Heaven, you can justify it in the end.
There won't be any trumpets blowing come the Judgement Day,
On the bloody morning after.... One tin soldier rides away.

Now the valley cried with anger, "Mount your horses! Draw your swords!"
And they killed the mountain people, so they won their just reward.
Now they stood beside the treasure on the mountain, dark and red.
Turned the stone and looked beneath it, "Peace on Earth" was all it said.

Go ahead and hate your neighbor, go ahead and cheat a friend.
Do it in the name of Heaven, you can justify it in the end.
There won't be any trumpets blowing come the Judgement Day,
On the bloody morning after.... One tin soldier rides away.
- One Tin Soldier (The Legend of Billy Jack)
 
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CatKnight said:
Fulcrumvale: That question's actually been answered - for this AAR at least. :) Hop back to page 57 and read Tom's "dream sequence." He's out cold at the time after finding out what he's really facing.
That was over a year ago ( :eek: ), which probably explains my forgetfulness.
 
CatKnight: ...There'll be a short delay. If nothing else, Capt Janszoon decided he didn't want his EU3 and gave it to me(!), so if I find a computer that can run it I plan to find out what's going on. But we'll be moving again shortly.

now that you have had a week to poke around EU3 CatKnight, how long do you estimate that "short delay" to be ? ? :)
 
Chief Ragusa: Peperna is a sacred cow, yes. And you're right, no one's really sitting down with Tom and going over the rules...but he's finally putting the pieces together.

Fulcrumvale: Over a year ago. God. :shakes head: :)

J. Passepartout: LOL! No, not quite that bad.

Ghostwriter: Well...EU3 was a bust. My friend's computer can't handle it either, so it's sitting waiting until I have the money for a general upgrade. I'm not happy.

I'm well entrenched in a baseball general manager type simulator though. I was thinking of doing an AAR in the OT area, but no one replied and I don't think the Euros would get it. :X Too bad, with a few tweaks I think it's well suited. :)

I was writing my post just as you posted. :)
 
PART V: ONE TIN SOLDIER

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Pennsylvania
September 1784



"Mister President," Heyward bowed to the court in the surprised silence that marked his passing. "I apologize for being late."

Jefferson searched his face, confused. "Quite all right, General. Do you feel well enough to continue?"

"Quite." He stood, composed but reserved, even stern.

"General Heyward," John Jay of New York rose. "The officer in charge of your person led us to believe you had fallen ill last night. A fit of nerves."

"A fit of conscience!" Spaight agreed.

Tom turned and regarded the North Carolina delegate. "My conscience is clear." To Jay: "A fit of nerves? No, sir. It's true I didn't sleep well." He smiled then. "I suspect it was the food."

A loud guffaw from the crowd. His guard, a young soldier, grinned.

"Very well," Jefferson said. "Mister Adams, are you through with Captain Jones?"

"I haven't had a chance to question him since Mister Pinckney tore his evidence." Adams waved the papers as a reminder.

"Then if General Heyward will have a seat we can continue."

Heyward nodded at the captain and sat next to Philip Waymouth, folding his arms.

The Massachusetts delegate leaned close. "You sure you're up to this, son?"

"We need to win if we're to deal with South Carolina," Tom replied quietly.

"That's true, but..."

"Why wait?"
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Virginia


"James," Patrick Henry, Governor of Virginia shook his hand. "Welcome home. How did you find Charleston?"

"Hot," James Madison was a small man, with slightly inset eyes as if he didn't eat quite enough and a stern expression. "Whatever possessed them to build a city in the midst of a mosquito infested swamp I cannot fathom. The sea provides no relief, and the people, these 'Carolinans'...they've looked over their shoulders ever since the incident with General Allen."

Henry poured them both a drink. "Have a seat. You look quite fagged out. Don't stand on ceremony, man. We've known each other far too long."

Madison smiled tiredly and accepted the drink. Henry sat across from him in his lush office.

"You spoke with Moultrie?"

"I did." Madison closed his eyes, composing his thoughts. Henry straightened. That couldn't be good.

"And what did he say?"

"He spoke very strongly concerning General Heyward's trial. He didn't come out and say it, but I believe if Congress votes against him..."

"They can't," Henry interrupted. "The Articles are perfectly clear."

"He thinks they might on this or that technicality. If they do, I think he plans to part company."

"Well, he certainly has the right. I think it would be disadvantageous to do so."

"Further he strongly implied North Carolina would follow." Madison finished his drink and held his glass in both hands. "He asked me to represent that if the northern states plan to dominate Congress and cannot be counted to keep their word, we would be well to follow as well."

"And join their Federation?"

"Quite."

Henry nodded. "This isn't the first time South Carolina's meddled in our affairs. Wasn't it Ed Rutledge who thought we should divide the state in two for an extra vote?"

"Yes. Their concerns seem much alike."

Henry grinned. "Maybe it's the swamp air."

Madison considered. "Perhaps, though it must be represented that the people of Norfolk, or..."

"I jest, James." Henry drank. "General Steving visited me two days ago. He learned of your mission and wanted to speak."

Madison vaguely recollected the artillery general that first led, then was superseded by Thomas Heyward. "How is he?"

"He does well. I think he enjoys retirement. He seems most concerned with our relations with Carolina, however. He represented any entangling alliances with them would harm Virginia's sovereignty. Certainly North Carolina has all but submitted."

"Yet," Madison replied, "even if they appear to be in bed on political matters, North Carolina retains her autonomy. It must also be said I've spoken to many that feel, now that England has been bested twice, there's no further purpose of a union. Let us come together against European threats, certainly, but otherwise go our seperate ways."

"I've argued similar," Henry nodded. "I believe the union has a purpose. It gives us a permanent means of resolving disputes between each other without resorting to war. It allows joint action when dealing with the Indians. It allows free trade, and provides a common defense against tyranny. Still, it must be remembered that Virginia is sovereign. Our word is law, not Philadelphia's. Their secrecy appalls me, and Mister Jefferson's letters are opaque."

Madison straightened. "So we will add our voice to Governor Moultrie's if he breaks?"

"I believe we must consult the House. As you say, opinion is divided and it would be ill to exclude them. I admit Philadelphia causes me uneasiness, but I am very much concerned that if we were to join this Federation we would only exchange one tyranny for another."
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Pennsylvania


"Thank you, Captain Jones." Jefferson waved his gavel. "You may sit down." He glanced at Charles Pinckney. "Yes, sir?"

He stood, pale except for red knuckles that gripped his desk. "I move Captain Jones's testimony be stricken!"

"Seconded," Spaight growled.

"Yet again, Mister Pinckney seeks to block the truth!" Adams called.

"That's enough," Jefferson warned, pointing his gavel at the lawyer. He turned to South Carolina: "Why?"

"His testimony is entirely speculative. He did not see Carolinans in Georgia, and so..."

"We have the Savannah paper, Mister President."

"British lies," Pinckney sniffed. "Nor did he see this alleged Indian abuse. Rumor, and even if that rumor proved true I will again state that South Carolina is not to be tried. This concerns General Heyward's conduct."

"Mister President!"

"Mister Adams," Jefferson frowned. "What is it?"

"South Carolina's conduct is involved whether Mister Pinckney wishes it or no. It goes to the heart of our explanation for what occured. I also note he has not explained how General Heyward could be supporting the British cause when they threw him on a ship and tried to transport him to Halifax!"

"Speculation," Pinckney replied. "Captain Jones is merely repeating what General Heyward told him. If Britain did do that it would be kidnapping, and arguably an act of war."

"So what is your answer?" Adams retorted. "He agreed to go then decided he'd rather swim?"

"He agreed to go, then fearing capture by Captain Jones he turned coat...again." Pinckney faced Jay. "Have you forgotten, sir, the treaty ending our War of Independence back in '73? The one giving the majority of New York to Canada? General Heyward negotiated that as I recall!"

Waymouth stood. "As I recall in the second war when the Southern Army completely collapsed and fled across the Savannah with General Exeter chasing them, it was General Heyward who led the counterattack."

"Oh please. You were a cornet at the time. What does a soldier know of war?"

"This from a man hiding behind the forts of Charleston Harbor!" The crowd rumbled.

"Hiding?" Pinckney snarled.

"Order!" Jefferson shouted, then glanced over. "Yes, General?"

"I would like to be heard," Tom said quietly.

"Objection!" Adams hurried over. "What are you doing?" he hissed.

Heyward rested his hand on the man's shoulder. "Thank you, but I can take it from here."

"General Heyward, I am your lawyer," he replied firmly, "and I cannot recommend..."

"I'll be all right."

Adams snarled softly but waved his hand at the witness desk and stood aside.

The crowd rumbled again. Someone shouted 'Traitor!' The constables closed ranks again.

"Please remember you're under oath, sir." Jefferson said.

Tom touched the witness desk, but instead stood in front of the president's chair and faced the delegates. "Everything Captain Jones said was true."

"So you say!" Pinckney snapped.

"That's enough," Jefferson retorted, slamming his gavel on the desk. "I want to hear what he has to say."

Tom closed his eyes, focusing his thoughts then smiled.

"You are here to find out if I left the Cherokee campaign prematurely, and whether I planned to betray this country. The answer to the first is 'yes.' The second I deny."

Pinckney muttered, but a warning look from the president silenced him.

"If I regret anything, it's that I didn't come here sooner. I've heard arguments that, rather than leaving, I should have sought a leave of absence or asked for help. Yes, I should have. I didn't because..because a friend died in the last battle. He died after trying to warn me of the danger we faced. I should have listened, but I didn't. Afterwards in my grief I rushed home to confront Edward Rutledge concerning the claims laid before me without considering protocol rather than telling General Allen to take over."

"On the way home I visited Branchville, the Indian prison Captain Jones mentioned. A thousand men in a space the size of these chambers. Not enough food nor clothing nor water. Flies and maggots feasting on the dead left to rot before their fellow man. The scent of death and waste. No chamber pots of course. The stink of despair. You would not think that had a smell, but it does. Hell on Earth. Say what you want of the Indian menace: Our worst enemies do not warrant such treatment. This made me more determined to seek out Rutledge."

"To destroy him?" Thomas Stone of Maryland asked.

Heyward shook his head. "No. To confront, and if necessary expose him. I'd learned from my own men in Cherokee Country of the food shortages caused by preventing the slaves from working and keeping men occupied with a militia that was far too large for the city to support and completely unnecessary. I didn't know he'd provoked Britain as well until just now." He paused. "I arrived in Charleston and we argued. He threatend to denounce me. I told him he'd gone mad. He..." Tom paused and rubbed his forehead, reliving their fight.

"General Heyward?" Jefferson asked. "Do you need to sit?"

"I don't remember much after that. I saw a flash of light. Heat. Then I woke up in Savannah. Anne Whiting apparently found me and thought I'd have trouble if I remained, so she drove me across the border. Doctor Lyman Hall rehabilitated me."

Some nodded at the name of their former colleague. Others frowned, remembering his angry last words.

"Yet you met with General Burgoyne," Stone pressed.

"Not quite. I met with a..." He shook his head. "I met with Burgoyne's assistant. They found out who I was and thought to get information out of me." Tom met Pinckney's glare. "I did not oblige them. They weren't satisfied and put me on a ship for Halifax."

"General Heyward," Adams said, "South Carolina alleges you caused the explosion that nearly killed Mister Rutledge. What do you say?"

Tom smirked. "If I set the explosion and ended up burned half to death, I'm a very poor assassin."

More delegates nodded. The crowd rumbled in agreement.

"If you were burned as you say," Spaight challenged, "then where are your burns?"

"They healed."

"Suspiciously well! Not a mark on your face and hands, dear sir."

"What can I say? I'd recommend Doctor Hall to anyone. Perhaps he can even cure your black humour!" Laughter. Tom smiled coldly. He'd lost North Carolina anyway, he might as well sway the crowd. He lifted his hand and waited for the noise to die down.

"That is the extent of my testimony. I cannot sway your reasoning much more than I have, so I will ask you to examine your heart. I've sat with some of you. I've served with others. You've asked after my conduct and I've answered. Now you need to decide whether my answers satisfy. You must decide whether, given what you know of me, I conspired to betray this country... or if, for whatever reason, Mister Pinckney is grasping at shadows."

The South Carolinan folded his arms.

"Shadows," Tom said. "In '73 the shadows..we..feared came from across the sea. We dealt with those and found more terror from the Indians. We bested them and turned on each other, questioning and doubting, forming secret plans to look after ourselves and our friends, and in so doing we become the very danger we swore to fight when we signed the Declaration." He glanced at Jefferson. "Your declaration."

He continued in quite another voice, almost monotone. "We have lived in fear for so long that pain has become normal. Evil has become acceptable." He looked at Adams, leaning forward and frowning intently. "It will be hard. It will take the rest of our lives, but one day we will realize there's nothing left to fear. We will stop doubting each other." To Waymouth, who paled: "We will forgive ourselves." Lastly, to Stone: "And serve as an example to the world."

Tom turned to face Jefferson. "That is why I am not a traitor. Because I believe in our country, and with time, patience and faith, we can do anything."
 
Nice beginning to Part V. :)
 
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I assume that slavery was abolished in the Great Britain in which Thomas Heyward grew up. Any Constitution he has a hand in writing will not countenance slave ownership. After he is acquitted on charges of treason against the United States a re-write of the Consritution will be needed.

Hasm't Moultrie/Black worked out that seceding from the US will awaken British territorial ambitions?