Could you perhaps mail me the file then you need me to look at? I'll PM you my e-mail, and have a look at it as soon as I can.
Edit; Alright, sent you a big list of things to fix about the file. For the curious, Ireland was approached as if Gaelic monarchies were feudal. Which they weren't. Gaelic law is far more similar to a kind of modern republic in many ways. Feudal monarchs and feudal laws were forbidden under 'Tyranny Law'; that meant that establishing primogeniture, land ownership, tenancy, the king changing laws alone, etc., were all illegal. Gaelic law had 'equivalency' in a sense; everyone was punished by the law. However, it wasn't totally equal, but in a way most don't expect. The higher one's station, the more harsh the punishment; one was fined or banished depending on the charges. The fines were higher if your station was higher; if you couldn't afford the fine, you were removed from power. While the names people use in reference to the Irish aristocracy evoke imagery of a feudal society, they're of little genuine consequence, the society isn't very feudal at all, except the paying of tribute, but even that went to a treasurey, and wasn't a noble's private money to spend; he had to be able to make his own money or freely given donations. If he had to ever rely on the treasurey, he would be removed from power. The treasurey existed only, except in special case, to fund: the army (part of it), building roads, asylums, and hospitals. They paid for their own palaces and the like out of their own pocket, not out of the treasurey, which was administered by a few brehon (judges/arbiters/lawyers) acting as treasurers. A lot of the file seems more reminiscent of post-Norman Ireland, when feudalism was instated. A Gaelic Ireland though is a whole different thing.
Edit; Alright, sent you a big list of things to fix about the file. For the curious, Ireland was approached as if Gaelic monarchies were feudal. Which they weren't. Gaelic law is far more similar to a kind of modern republic in many ways. Feudal monarchs and feudal laws were forbidden under 'Tyranny Law'; that meant that establishing primogeniture, land ownership, tenancy, the king changing laws alone, etc., were all illegal. Gaelic law had 'equivalency' in a sense; everyone was punished by the law. However, it wasn't totally equal, but in a way most don't expect. The higher one's station, the more harsh the punishment; one was fined or banished depending on the charges. The fines were higher if your station was higher; if you couldn't afford the fine, you were removed from power. While the names people use in reference to the Irish aristocracy evoke imagery of a feudal society, they're of little genuine consequence, the society isn't very feudal at all, except the paying of tribute, but even that went to a treasurey, and wasn't a noble's private money to spend; he had to be able to make his own money or freely given donations. If he had to ever rely on the treasurey, he would be removed from power. The treasurey existed only, except in special case, to fund: the army (part of it), building roads, asylums, and hospitals. They paid for their own palaces and the like out of their own pocket, not out of the treasurey, which was administered by a few brehon (judges/arbiters/lawyers) acting as treasurers. A lot of the file seems more reminiscent of post-Norman Ireland, when feudalism was instated. A Gaelic Ireland though is a whole different thing.
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