I highlight the things in the story that refers to what I'm saying. It should be pretty straightforward to understand why things need to be changed at similar places to get trough with the story if changing only one specific location. I would very much get feedback on scenario 3b and 3c as scenario 1 is pretty much been set for some time. However, there is always room for improvements, but not revamping whole story sections as it far too much work and that none is actively working on grammatically improving the story section.
I would very much like to utilize the draft documents for this purpose at dropbox: work/AoW3-Shadow-Realm-expansion/drafts
It should straighten out most questions and overlook the whole campaign.
From story pages on the scenario 1:
(3) Overwhelming Power
The battle was over before we arrived. One of Melenis’ own protégées, a frostling necromancer more loyal to his queen than to his teacher, had turned against her, forming an alliance with both Shadowborn and Torchbearer forces to defeat Melenis before she could usher in the age of death that she sought. The price, however, was that while the end of life as we know it at the hands of waves of undead was prevented, Werlac was able to open the Shadow Gate beneath the ruins of Sunbirth Citadel without interference from the Torchbearers.
But while we could not stop the Gate from being opened, we could stand fast against whatever came through. With Melenis’ remaining Necromancers on the run, the armies of the world converged on Sunbirth Citadel. Elven Court hosts camped alongside Commonwealth regiments. Halfling militias made merry in the fragile peace as dour Frostling eyes looked on. Generals and monarchs formed councils, laying battle plans to contain anything that might emerge from the caverns beneath… or to push an offensive into the depths to close the portal. Our leaders were ready to negotiate if whatever came through was willing to talk, but more importantly, we were all ready to lay down our lives in defence of our world.
"We were not ready when a series of magical explosions destroyed every known portal and cavern entrance into the tunnel system in which the Gate was located. Werlac had sealed himself in, and there was nothing we could do to forestall whatever he had planned. Saridas and Leonus reached a swift agreement – it was imperative that some means be found to regain access to the caverns.
However, this was more easily said than done. The Commonwealth’s engineer and prospector corps estimated that it would take weeks to clear the former entrance or to dig a new one, and efforts to reactivate the portals only met with failure. After a few days of clearing, Princess Sundren suggested that there might be an alternative. Torchbearer reports began to come in of concealed Shadowborn outposts where large quantities of soldiers and supplies were being moved in, but were not seen to leave, even though there were no apparent signs that the garrisons of those outposts had been increased. Perhaps those movements of men and material were going to the Shadow Gate, through teleporters which remained active and which might grant access to the caverns if they were to be seized by a bold attack?"
Referring to her memories of the wars against the Shadow Demons, Julia added a suggestion to the battle plans – that each of the assault forces should include a contingent of Draconian troops. As my people were resistant to the sickness that strikes most of the people of Athla when entering the Shadow Realm, this could allow an expedition to be dispatched through the Shadow Gate, if it was deemed necessary when we reached it. "As my first independent command, I have been dispatched to lead one of these forces to a suspected Shadowborn outpost in the mountains east of Bisancon."
However, I will not be acting alone. Esnodil the Vile, a former Dark Elf who has retained the name she bore before the Mending, will act as my local contact with Sundren’s intelligence network. I will also need to liaise with the commander of the local Commonwealth forces to gather the strength required for an assault, who Esnodil informs me is likely to be Colm the Lucky.
This news does not fill me with confidence. The warlord has been stationed in Bisancon before, and rumour had it that his so-called ‘luck’ is born from years of looking out only for his own interests and a knack for picking the winning side. I will need to keep a close eye on him before relying on him too closely.