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....so this AAR is now classified as a mind altering substance.

Also, if you ever spot me over at the BAAR, I am nearly always in-character as Blake "Macavity116" Robinson in that thread. I messed with it's fourth wall a few years back. A background character from My Father's War (one of my older stories) is currently employed at the BAAR as waitstaff.
Who knew you had infiltrated the bAAR just like Avitus infiltrated the Enclave? Perhaps there is a Stormbreakers infiltration underway to seize control of AARland?!
Yeah, I've gotten up to some really trippy stuff in the past. In one of my previous stories, I created a full-on PDX forums account for one of my characters after she smashed through the fourth wall to chew me out in the real world.
After reading all of this I am starting to doubt my own reality. How do I know I am not a construct of your multiverse?
 
Who knew you had infiltrated the bAAR just like Avitus infiltrated the Enclave?
Filcat and coz1 are the most in-the-know, mostly because of my nearly-consistent appearances at the virtual hangouts. I am always out of character during those events.

Perhaps there is a Stormbreakers infiltration underway to seize control of AARland?!
Oh, you're gonna have fun when The Broken Gates comes out. Keep your eyes on the CKIII forums once this story is done. ;)

The Stormbreakers are not the ones infiltrating, and I don't think he wants to seize control.

After reading all of this I am starting to doubt my own reality. How do I know I am not a construct of your multiverse?
It's perfectly normal to feel that way. HistoryDude is a character in The Last Heroes and a few previous readers/commenters received a mention by name in The Great Lie. I've been dipping my toes into the concept of Metafiction for a while, and I've really enjoyed the results so far.
 
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Filcat and coz1 are the most in-the-know, mostly because of my nearly-consistent appearances at the virtual hangouts. I am always out of character during those events.
Apologies for being so off-topic here, but folks are expected to attend in-character?!
 
Apologies for being so off-topic here, but folks are expected to attend in-character?!
Absolutely not.

But I am frequently "in character" when operating outside of my own threads, so I occasionally need to verbally remind folks that I've dropped character.
 
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That makes so much of sense, but it still raises the question of how psionics got fully renewed. Akira started the process, but I didn't think that they were fully restored after Jericho destroyed them when she died. Who restored psionics, how did they do it, and why?

My forum account is also a character in The Great Lie @Chac1 ;) .

Speaking of psionics, how did the Shroud-Beings get resurrected (or maybe reborn)? You confirmed that Jericho destroying psionics in the Stormbreakers killed them. Also, if they got killed and renewed once, how do we know that this hasn't happened before (especially given how many universes passed since Paradox was first born)?

If it did, that gives me more ideas for fics set in this multiverse.
 
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That makes so much of sense, but it still raises the question of how psionics got fully renewed.
It was a very slow process that played out over thousands of years. Take note: During the kidnapping of Tenna, Avitus used blue Soulfire, which has not been seen in the Stormbreaker Universe since The War in Heaven, (The Stormbreakers - Chapter 45) moments before Jericho attempted to destroy all Psionic energy. This is a sign that the Universe has returned to its pre-Jericho level of Psionic energy.

Who restored psionics, how did they do it, and why?
Psionic energy is generated inside the minds of all sentient beings. The population of the Galaxy unwittingly contributed to the restoration of the shroud over the course of several hundred generations.

Speaking of psionics, how did the Shroud-Beings get resurrected (or maybe reborn)?
The five Shroud-Beings you remember from the Stormbreaker Universe are dead and have been so ever since the War in Heaven. They've been replaced outright by:

End of the Cycle
> She of the Void
Whisperers in the Void​
> Augury of Revelation
Eater of Worlds​
> Specter of Oblivion
Composer of Strands​
> Virtuoso of Conception
Instrument of Desire​
> Implement of Ecstasy
 
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Well, @Macavity116 , you have totally obliterated the Fourth Wall. I hope you are happy with yourself!

My forum account is also a character in The Great Lie @Chac1 ;) .
I will have to go and look at that series now for further context. Nothing like having a little fun with the Forums. I definitely want to see what @HistoryDude might be like as part of an AAR rather than guiding one.
The five Shroud-Beings you remember from the Stormbreaker Universe are dead and have been so ever since the War in Heaven. They've been replaced outright by:

End of the Cycle
> She of the Void
Whisperers in the Void​
> Augury of Revelation
Eater of Worlds​
> Specter of Oblivion
Composer of Strands​
> Virtuoso of Conception
Instrument of Desire​
> Implement of Ecstasy
I am getting an Age of Wonders vibe here. As I don't play Stellaris, is this from the game or the mind of the being guiding @Macavity116 ?
 
Well, @Macavity116 , you have totally obliterated the Fourth Wall. I hope you are happy with yourself!
I'm feeling rather jazzed, to be honest.

I definitely want to see what @HistoryDude might be like as part of an AAR rather than guiding one.
May I recommend The Last Heroes - Chapter 15: The Divine Atelier? Not only does @HistoryDude make a guest appearance in the chapter, he gets to have a face-to-face encounter with Akira Robinson. (the primary villain of the old Stormbreaker Universe, who serves the "Thanos"-type of greater scope villain role in my stories)

As I don't play Stellaris, is this from the game or the mind of the being guiding @Macavity116 ?
So, the original Shroud-Beings (End of the Cycle, Eater of Worlds, Whisperers in the Void, Composer of Strands, and Instrument of Desire) are all characters from Stellaris. They can be encountered if the player empire goes down the path of Psionic ascension. They are godlike cosmic creatures who inhabit a realm called the Shroud, and the player empire can make covenants with them, trading away some part of their empire in return for powerful bonuses.

In The Stormbreakers, I killed off all five of these creatures in the final battle scene. Since Song of the Solitaire is set in the same universe, I felt the need to create replacement characters to serve as analogues.
 
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Chapter 40: A Dangerous Ally
I really, really wanted to hammer home the fact that Hannakon is a bad guy.

Also, I realized that it's been a while since I lived up to my reputation of making my characters miserable.

So this chapter is a 2-for-1.




Chapter 40
A Dangerous Ally


Hannakon listened intently as Trig, Ponnico, and Vitruvius took it in turns to explain the situation and the nebulous series of events leading up to it. Over the next couple of hours, several members of the conclave filtered into the chamber and retook their seats. Finally, Hannakon held up a hand.

“You keep saying that Ellex is rebuilding the Horde, but from where I’m watching, it doesn’t look that way. He might be flying our old colors and using the old names, but absolutely none of what you describe sounds like the old ways to me. Wanton murder and destruction was never how we operated.”

“Kidnapping and enslavement.” Caera said in a weak voice. “Favorite weapons of the Khan.”

“Don’t speak out of turn, concubine.” Hannakon said without looking at Caera, who flinched and hid her face in her hands. “The whore is right. Insolent in her old age, but right nonetheless. Selecting one girl out of a crowd is more in line with the Vestem Regime. The Horde claims everyone... so now I must ask... why was Annora targeted? Our former friend must have had a reason to take her. Did she still have the Keystone shard she got from the Lifewater thief?”

“No.” Trig answered quickly. “I’ve got it. All three of the shards we’ve got so far are locked up.”

“Ponnico, go check the Cascade.” Kanter ordered. “No one’s been aboard since all this shit went down.”

With a soft rushing sound, Ponnico revered to his nanobot cloud form, rushing out of the room as though blown away by a strong wind.

“I hate it when he does that.” Hannakon remarked with a shudder. “But he deserved what he got that day. So, then... are we all of the same opinion? Avitus and Camber are working together?”

“The possibility is too strong to ignore.” Rulan replied. “Avitus targeted the Keystone shard and Annora. That implies he had knowledge only Ellex Camber was privy to. The Keystones are still unknown by the interstellar public, Annora herself is simply known on MSI news broadcasts as the girl who robbed Camber. Avitus might believe he is helping Camber.”

One of the conclave members, an Olinbar, interrupted:

“She has not been on one of our news broadcasts in several weeks. Sutharia has taken over the news cycle.”

Hannakon frowned.

“Right, and what about my old ship? You were certain the Caldorix was heading toward Tritonis?”

“Absolutely!” Trig replied. “We saw it enter Hyperspace.”

“There are several star systems between Tritonis and Chor’s Compass.” Hannakon said. “And I have heard nothing of the Caldorix appearing over the Olinbar Homeworld. You must understand, young man, that if such an infamous vessel were to appear at Tritonis, it would be top-of-the-hour news. The whole of the Luminous Frontier would be talking about it. Caldorix never went to Tritonis... furthermore, there was simply no need for Camber to take it there. Think on it for a moment.”

Trig stoped to think. So did the mercenaries. After a few moments, Trig’s eyes went wide and he swore loudly.

“Oh no.... the Conduit Network!”

“Exactly!” Hannakon responded. “At some point, a long time ago, Camber traveled to Tritonis via the Conduits, found Avitus and recruited him to his own side... then used the network to place infiltrators on this very station and lay a trap. He must have been plotting to seize the Keystones for some time.”

Trig clenched his fists.

“And there’s a Conduit on the Caldorix. It doesn’t matter where in the Galaxy that ship is, he can just walk through a doorway and go anywhere!” Trig seethed.

“Not anywhere.” Vitruvius said. “Just wherever the Horde placed infiltrators during the war fifteen years ago.”

Tactical Officer Rulan suddenly sprang to his feet with an exclamation of surprise. Several of the nearby telepaths became excited as well, (Rulan’s emotions had spilled into them.)

“So let’s reverse the connection!” Rulan said. “Why don’t we use the Conduit here on the station to invade Caldorix?”

“Yeah!” Trig said, “Let’s go through and get Tenna back!”

“We can get those two Keystones from Ellex while we’re there.” Kanter added.

Hannakon let out an evil cackle.

“Ah... so this is why you called me here!?” Hannakon said to Vitruvius. “A juvenile raid. The young man recovers his stolen toy while Ponnico gets Camber’s keystone. Brother, you’ve grown soft in your old age.”

“And you have not.” Vitruvius replied, staring at him through his bandages. “You have access to weapons and a lust for violence. I thought you would enjoy the opportunity for an outing.”

“Manipulative bastard.” Hannakon grumbled. Then he spoke to Trig and the mercenaries. “Why should I help you, anyway? A strange group of Sutharians who let females carry weapons and give three of the Khan’s Keystone fragments to a mere boy?”

Selborne’s weapon hand twitched, but Kanter made her freeze with a look, then he addressed Hannakon.

“That boy,” Kanter said, pointing at Trig, “Is Malum’s only son, the flesh-and-blood progeny of the Great Khan himself. We are racing Camber to Malum’s old Sanctum on the Necropolis. I would rather see the Great Khan’s secret legacy in Trig’s hands, and not Camber’s. I’m sure you would agree.”

Hannakon folded his arms, scowling in deep thought. Trig could see Vitruvius and all of the other members of the conclave trying to read his mind. After a moment, several of the nearby telepaths smiled and flashed positive hand gestures at Trig. Then, Hannakon said:

“You’re right. I do agree. I can spare some men and guns for this little raid of yours. I can even get you a ship from my dockyards in Beyu... but of course, this is going cost you. No one ever goes to war for free.”

“Shit.” Selborne grumbled. “There goes all of our money from the Eadleton job. You sure we can’t just keep using the Cascade?

Rulan held up a hand.

“Hold on, we’re not spending a single Rupi until we have a real plan of attack. I need to gather intelligence about the enemy and then present the Captain with options.”

Anfel chuckled and said:

“That’s why he’s the tactical officer. Only he thinks of this stuff.”

The mercenaries began to leave the Conclave chamber, telling Vitruvius that they needed to return to their ship and plan out the rescue raid. Vitruvius wished Trig and his companions well, staying behind with his fellow telepaths. Trig, who was getting better at listening to other people’s minds, was able to catch this exchange just before he entered the tunnel:

“Well, Vitruvius. Consider me impressed.” Said Hannakon. “Malum’s favorite toy actually gave him a child. The boy’s got potential, but the mother has forgotten her manners. I think I’ll beat her face in again for old time’s sake… and to make sure she doesn’t pass off her insolence to him.”

There was a tense pause, made worse by a knot of fear in Trig’s chest. Then Vitruvius replied:

“Get the hell out of my monastery, Hannakon. And if you control yourself around Shepminter and his allies, I’ll convince the conclave to give our next security contract to your ‘business.’ I doubt we’re going to hire MSI for security again.”

...

Trig walked almost a Kilometer back to the dockyards, clambered aboard the Resonance Cascade, and found the mercenaries in the CIC. Hannakon and his two retainers joined them as well. Tactical Officer Rulan was gathering all of the data he could, and he ordered everyone else to help out.

“Download all space traffic data from the nearest MSI starbase. I need to know exactly where Caldorix went after we saw it in Chor’s Compass. Anfel, see if you can pull up any records of FTL communications in that area. We need to confirm whether our young lady friend is aboard the vessel.”

Trig raised his hand.

“I could do it. Check to see if Tenna’s on Caldorix, I mean.”

Caera’s eyes widened.

“You’re going to use Psionics?” she asked.

Trig nodded. Hannakon waved to get his attention.

“If you’re going to use Psionics to seek out the girl, talk to Ponnico. He used to be a Telepath, he can advise your techniques. He is two decks down. I sensed him when I came aboard.”

Trig was glad to have an excuse to leave the CIC, because as soon as Hannakon was done with him, the old Warlord got into an argument with Tactical Officer Rulan, saying it was inappropriate for Selborne, a woman, to be allowed inside of the CIC. While Rulan defended his comrade, Trig slipped away.

...

Ponnico was in the armory, standing with his back pressed against the safebox and clutching a rifle in his hands.

“Hannakon is on board.” Ponnico said. “Not what I would have preferred. Eventually, we will have to talk to him about his Keystone.”

“He won’t just give it to us?” Trig said.

“He has no reason to give it up.” Ponnico replied. “We’ll deal with that crisis at a better time. Now, what are you looking for down here?”

“I want to try using Psionics to contact Tenna.” Trig explained. “It’s really hard to explain, but sometimes, we can... uh...”

“Share dreams?” Ponnico replied. “I’m not surprised. Spontaneous telepathic links can sometimes happen when two people share a strong mutual affection. Here, you’re going to need these.”

Ponnico turned around and opened the safebox. He withdrew all three of the Keystone shards and gave them to Trig.

“Sleep with these clutched tightly in your hand.” Ponnico explained. “The Keystone is made from Volucite, a natural conductor of Psionic energy. You may have an easier time reaching her. I will stand guard while you sleep, though I think I hear Rulan keeping our unpleasant guest busy.”



 
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Hannakon is definitely not a good person.

What happened to the Hyperspace Cores if this is set in the future of the Stormbreakers? They would prove useful for quick transportation.

Also, is there any reason why the text from the video notification is red? Historically, that color was associated with the End of the Cycle, and She of the Void could've inherited that...

Does this She of the Void have anything to do with a certain other character that once went by that name?

Something just occurred to me. The Stormbreakers Universe is the distant past of this AAR. This AAR has a multiverse that is shared with other Macavity116 AARs. However, the Stormbreakers Universe also contains references (to both characters and factions) to a few other AARs. So... are these other AARs also part of the same multiverse?
 
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Hannakon is definitely not a good person.
Preach. Take note that he said "beat her face in again." I wanted to imply that he and Caera have a history of violent encounters without actually spelling it out, and I hope this one line of dialogue was sufficient.

What happened to the Hyperspace Cores if this is set in the future of the Stormbreakers? They would prove useful for quick transportation.

**Quick explainer for anyone who has not read the Stormbreaker Universe: The Hyperspace Cores are three powerful devices built by the Progenitors, a now-extinct elder race who ruled the Galaxy approximately 1,000,00 years ago. (1,250,000 relative to Song of the Solitaire) Each Hyperspace Core grants the ability to travel anywhere in the Galaxy instantaneously with no spool-up, transit, or cooldown time.**

Simply put, we don't know where they are. However, we do know that before the events of the Stormbreaker Universe, the Core Trinity remained functional after being left derelict in deep space for thousands of years. It is wholly possible that one or two or all three of them still exist, but their very existence is unknown to the people of the Luminous Frontier, so we should not expect the Core Trinity to play a role in this story at all.

At minimum, we can take an educated guess as to one of them: At the end of The Last Heroes, everyone who knew the location of the Third Core was killed during the Rescue at Cape Canaveral. So there is a non-zero chance that Core #3 is still sitting at the bottom of the English Channel. (assuming the English Channel still exists 250,000 years into the future)


Also, is there any reason why the text from the video notification is red?
The color was meant to draw attention. I intentionally picked light red instead of blood red to avoid connotations to the End of the Cycle. (I've been using the same color for it since 2018.

Does this She of the Void have anything to do with a certain other character that once went by that name?
That's a tragic behind-the-scenes story.

In the original draft of Song of the Solitaire, I was planning for Ariha, She of the Void, to be the "Eternal Spirit of Jericho." (a powerful Psionic who played a major role in several of my older stories) I even had some expository dialogue set up that would have drawn a direct connection to the "Eternal Flame" Jericho left behind at the end of The Last Heroes.

Unfortunately, when Song of the Solitaire underwent its gigantic re-write in November last year, this plotline was abandoned completely in favor of a new plotline centered around Malum Ralpakin's plot to conquer the Shroud. In the current version of the story, Ariha does have the title "She of the Void" but she is no longer the disembodied spirit of the Girl Who Became a God. Now Ariha is a separate, unrelated character.
 
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That's very useful.

I don't suppose any of the characters involved in the story will learn about the potential for a Hyperspace Core in Sol? Who controls Sol right now, anyway?

Also, I accidentally edited my above post after your response, so I'm moving my theory here.

By the way, what wiped out the peoples of the Shining Hinterlands? Was it the Contingency, given that there were hints that the Ghost Signal was active way back in the Lost Heroes? If so, what happened to that group?
 
Who controls Sol right now, anyway?
So you must have noticed Sol's position on my updated map of the Luminous Frontier.

The Sol star system is no longer known by that name, owing to its original inhabitants being long gone. I am planning for our characters to pay a visit to the planet formerly known as Earth, but I'll only be dropping a few hints to suggest the world's true identity. You're going to want to keep a lookout for Geographic Clues. Basically, my description of the world will line up (roughly) with certain locations from both The Stormbreakers and The Last Heroes.

It won't be apparent at first glance, but anyone who has read the Stormbreaker Universe should be able to spot the hidden Easter Eggs if they look very closely.

Here's your hint: At some point during Song of the Solitaire, Trig and friends will visit a battlefield from The Stormbreakers, and the location of a major story event from The Last Heroes.

What happened to [the original inhabitants of the Luminous Frontier/Shining Hinterlands]?
For the moment, we don't know.

I mean, I do know... but this detail is a serious spoiler best left for the moment of dramatic reveal. ;)
 
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Chapter 41: Beyond the Veil
Good evening dear readers! I have some housekeeping announcements before we start today's chapter.

Up first: After a lot of thinking and cautious re-writes, I've decided that the next chapter (Chapter 42: Tenna's Prophecy) should be considered the "End of Act Three" as far as this story is concerned. This means Song of the Solitaire will be taking a short hiatus while I do final edits and rewrites on the next batch of chapters. This AAR will be silent for about a week. Expect new chapters to resume sometime around February 9.

This development does come with a tradeoff, though. When Song of the Solitaire comes back from hiatus, Act Four will be the final installment. The end of this story is rapidly approaching and may reach you before the first day of spring.

Second: I want to humbly remind you to cast your vote in both

These community awards are your perfect opportunity to support and show some love for your favorite AAR writers, and you'll also discover new stories and authors that are guaranteed to catch and hold your attention. Cast your vote before this weekend, as the deadlines are fast approaching!


As always, thank you all for reading! I know this story is now almost exactly the same length as All Our Sins Remembered and will probably equal My Father's War when all is said and done, so I do appreciate those of you who have made it this far.



Author's note: Special thanks to CBR JGWRR, Chac1, CupOfOwls, and Chosenpai for their recent critiques. Act Four will be the best part of the whole story thanks to you!



Chapter 41
Beyond the Veil


Trig threw himself into the dreamworld, but this time Tenna was not waiting for him. The river, clouds, and breeze all carried on their ways. A nearby stone arch looked as though no one had visited in years.

Trig looked around and cursed. He could have sworn Tenna was unconscious when Avitus carried her through the Conduit, but perhaps she was awake now. Trig wondered if Tenna was somehow being prevented from sleeping. It was the middle of the afternoon at the Enclave, so it was likely.

“Now what do I do?” Trig said to himself.

He decided to sit down underneath the tree where he and Tenna had spoken during several of their previous shared dreams. Sitting cross-legged on the ground, Trig folded his arms and held his chin in one hand, wracking his brains. After thinking to himself for a few moments, Trig could not help but laugh at himself.

For the duration of this journey, ever since leaving Eadleton, Trig had relied on other people to think and make decisions for him. Ponnico had guided the way to Suth-Kasa and now it looked as though the Arfor mercenaries and Hannakon were going to take the lead on the mission to rescue Tenna.

“Alright, first thing’s first.” Trig said to himself. “I am going to rescue Tenna, and get the Keystone back from Avitus. The god said I can’t be a passenger in my own story… I gotta start taking charge.”

Trig stood up, his fist clenched.

“Right… how do I do that?” He said to himself. “Where do I even start?”

As if in answer to his question, something happened. Trig’s new Telepathic senses picked up on something… an aura of positive emotions. Trig looked around to see where it came from.

To his left, the cracked stone archway appeared to be physically unchanged… but Trig could tell there was something very different about it. He could see through it to the trees and meadow on the others side, yet Trig also got the feeling that there was something more beneath the broken gate. A translucent shape hung in midair, suspended between the carved pillars on either side. Trig felt that it looked similar to the Astral Scar he saw above the Shroudwalker Enclave.

Trig remembered what Vitruvius said about the scars being gateways to other universes, and there was something else in his memory too…

Now that he got a good look at this thing, Trig realized that the dreamworld’s gate was perfectly identical to the Conduit gate Avitus had vanished through, aside from visible damage to the exterior.

A damaged Conduit in the dreamworld? Trig said to himself. With a tiny Astral Scar inside of it?”

A question came into Trig’s mind. As soon as he thought about it, Trig dismissed the question as being completely ridiculous. This was his question:

Did my father build a Conduit gate in the dreamworld?

Cautiously, Trig took a step forward. He and Tenna had once used this thing to escape from the dreamworld and wake up. Could this thing be used to go anywhere else?

Something Ponnico said almost a month ago came back into Trig’s mind:

Any psionic person could walk into a doorway and travel instantly to another doorway… so long as you knew where you wanted to go before you stepped through.


Trig focused his eyes on the strange shape inside the broken gate, the swirling mass that resembled an Astral Scar.

“Take me to the land of the gods!” Trig said aloud. “Take me to… to… uh…”

Instinctively, Trig had wanted to visit Rey, Implement of Ecstasy. Then he changed his mind. No… if he was right in this guess, he could come back and find pleasure later. Right now, Trig needed answers. He spoke to the broken gate again.

“The land of the gods! Take me to Phiom, Augury of Revelation!”

The Conduit did not react. The miniature Astral Scar flickered and became a little more opaque. Trig took a deep breath and stepped through the Broken Gate.



It took Trig a few moments to get his bearings. He had arrived in a place that was both foreign and strangely familiar. Trig stood on the precipice at the edge of this strange new realm for a moment, overlooking a vast ocean of swirling color and shadow. Then Trig remembered: I made it! I’ve found the Shroud.


Trig turned on the spot to walk away from the ledge he materialized next to. Instead of taking a couple of steps forward, as he intended, Trig’s pace carried him a vast distance. The terrain raced away beneath his feet as though he had just crossed a continent in a single bound. The clouds and stars above moved so quickly they became nothing but a nondescript blur. Disoriented, Trig slowed to a stop and turned around.

Somehow, Trig had covered a great distance. He had gone at least two kilometers up a mountainside. A dense layer of indigo clouds hung above his head, while barren rocky terrain extended outwards in all directions. Trig could see the point where he had entered the Shroud. A stone archway, identical to the dreamworld’s broken gate, stood near the ledge. Trig realized he had materialized underneath of it.

A noise caught Trig’s attention. Looking around, he spotted a narrow tower, built from stone blocks, overlooking a bluff on the mountainside. A single window adorned the upper level, shaped like an oval, with the image of an eye painted onto the glass.

“Phiom.” Trig breathed.

The tower door, a heavy thing made from what Trig assumed to be metal, was unlocked. Just like in the Shroudwalker Enclave, Trig felt some invisible force becoming him to enter.

The interior of the tower looked like a scene from an ancient fantasy novel. Trig spotted a shelf containing hundreds of books. Trig had seen books in the Eadleton museum once: people used them to read in the days before Uplift. A work desk contained many loose papers, while in the fireplace, blue flames rose up from a pile of glowing purple embers.

Trig found Phiom on the roof, at the top of a winding spiral staircase. Here, the tower seemed to touch the roiling purple sky. A Sutharian man used a telescope to watch the movements of a dark shape in the clouds, shaped somewhat like a bird of prey.

“Phiom.” Trig said.

“That is what your people call me.” The man said. “And this is what your people think I look like.”

Phiom gestured to himself, then placed his telescope on a brass tripod and looked at Trig.

“We meet at last, Trig Shepminter, son of the man who sought to conquer myself and my brethren.”

“Oh…” Trig felt a little put out and lowered his head.

“You have nothing to fear.” Phiom said. “You and I are not enemies, although you have mistaken a potential ally for one.”

Trig started to speak, but the god interrupted him.

“You seek answers, while I seek to resume our conversation that was interrupted.”

Trig jumped with surprise as his memory was jogged.

“That’s right!” Trig said excitedly. “Can you answer any of the questions Tenna and I asked?”

“Certainly.” Phiom said, with a kindly gesture. “And do not feel the need to hurry. We are quite safe from your father here.”

Those last few words took all of the energy out of Trig’s body.

“M-My… my father?” Trig repeated. “But… my father’s dead.”

Phiom tented his fingers and shook his head.

“Quite right.” The Augury of Revelation said. “Malum Ralpakin cannot reach us here, as we are shielded from him by death. In this place, we may talk openly and safely.”



 
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Well, this chapter opens the doorway (a Conduit, perhaps) to many questions. Maybe this time Phiom will provide some answers.

Author's note: Special thanks to CBR JGWRR, Chac1, CupOfOwls, and Chosenpai for their recent critiques. Act Four will be the best part of the whole story thanks to you!
Thanks for the shout out. Not sure what inspiration I have provided, but if help was provided then thanks for the acknowledgement. Looks like you have some readers who connect with you offline too, or perhaps from other parts of the Stormbreaker Universe. Looking forward to the next....
 
Well, this chapter opens the doorway (a Conduit, perhaps) to many questions.
Ha! I see what you did there.

Looks like you have some readers who connect with you offline too
Yup. There's a handful of readers who know me in real life (several family members plus a handful of soldiers from my unit) and several readers who do not have accounts on this website, and can only reach out to me through other means. (YouTube and Reddit comment sections, Discord, etc.)

if help was provided then thanks for the acknowledgement
You're most welcome.

Looking forward to the next....
Hope to see you there! Chapter 42 (and therefore the end of Act Three) will be posted on Saturday, Feb 3.
 
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Phiom's references to Malum are suspicious. I suspect that Malum has more influence after death than the Shroud-Being would like to admit...

Trig's newfound resolve for agency is good, but I fear it might make him reckless. Hopefully that doesn't prove to be his undoing...

Wait a minute... Astral Scars are a thing. Avitus wants to ensure that Tenna isn't rescued. Are we sure that he didn't use a Scar to take her to a different universe?