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How fares the king? Ticking war score gone, war more manageable. A new bairn, hopefully Prince Jaekar will not battle the demons that his father wrestles daily. Thank you for updating.
Luckily Vaemond is all right, for now at least, it was only a matter of time since his ''lead from the front'' strategy came back to bit him and it could have been a much worse, Jaekar will have some of his father in him, theres no doubt about that, but i will leave it a secret as to whether or not thats in personality or strength of mind, he will play a key role in the future of the Targaryen family however.

The succession is secure...

Vaemond is wounded, which could prove problematic.
The Targaryen family was very small at this point in the story so it was good to get another member of the family, the succession looks safe in terms of numbers and overall continuing of the family, but succession does get complicated when a family grows bigger, the first and second generation of Targaryens have very united and close, but the third generation will see a rift start to grow (as a result of an unfortunate mistake/decision) and the future of the family will have some small parallels to a certain ''dance'' in the canon universe.
 
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It seems like even the kings guards are dying...

It was nice to hear of them, though. A reminder that the the Lords Paramount and the Targaryens aren't the only relevant people in the Seven Kingdoms.
The next crop of Kingsguard will be relatively uneventful unfortunately however, the Kingsguard will have some interesting roles to play in distant chapters from this point, and it will be considered almost ''bad luck'' to be assigned to guard a certain Targaryen as they will personally witness the deaths of 2 Kingsguard assigned to guard them in 2 seperate incidents (thousands of miles apart)
 
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The changing of the guard goes beyond the family. Thank you for providing requiems for the kingsguards.
This changing of the guard will continue.
 
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Does anybody have any idea on how to watch house of dragons from anywhere? I mean if you are living outside US?
Im fairly certain the only way to watch it (legally) is with an HBO Max subscription, I would check and see if its available in your region.
 
Still slowly catching up. On the last chapter but one:
The Westerlanders sword took him in his good eye through the slit in his greathelm. Orys bellowed a roar of pain as his sight filled first with bright red crimson then nothing.

He tumbled from his horse onto the hard ground with a thud. He raised his arms into the darkness, but he never saw the Boldrooster dismount and thrust downwards his sword into his neck, sending his mind to darkness as well as his eyes.
A tense skirmish well written up. Wasn’t sure how it was going to end. And how bitter a blow for the king’s cause this was only became fully apparent later.
His aunt Rhaenys had died of the cancer that had afflicted her for the past few years.
Things sink towards their nadir.
to make matters worse, her dragon Meraxes had fled the castle in a grief filled rage, burning a stableboy and two horses before flying across the Narrow Sea.
And further.
Orys had brought over 25,000 swords and spears to Vaemonds cause, however Vaemond had helplessly watched that number dwindle down to about 8000 at days end
And furthest. Alas for a new and untried Lord, unable to command the same devotion from his vassals as his formidable father. Though the new Stormlord shows great military promise. And will be hard to kill in personal combat!
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This is real jaws of defeat stuff! :eek:
‘’Call the banners…..we ride to war.’’ He commanded.

‘’For whose cause?’’ The maester asked with surprise.

‘’The Targaryens.’’ Theo said curly.
Huzzah! Charge at dawn, with the sun behind you - remember, the Orcs hate sunlight! Oh, wait … ;)
 
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Still slowly catching up. On the last chapter but one:

A tense skirmish well written up. Wasn’t sure how it was going to end. And how bitter a blow for the king’s cause this was only became fully apparent later.

Things sink towards their nadir.

And further.

And furthest. Alas for a new and untried Lord, unable to command the same devotion from his vassals as his formidable father. Though the new Stormlord shows great military promise. And will be hard to kill in personal combat!

This is real jaws of defeat stuff! :eek:

Huzzah! Charge at dawn, with the sun behind you - remember, the Orcs hate sunlight! Oh, wait … ;)
Things sink towards their nadir.
Learned a new word today.

This is real jaws of defeat stuff!
It was definately too close for comfort and the situation was the result of a big blunder I made. I was aware of the rapidly rising warscore for the rebels but assumed taking holdings in Duskendale would rectify this, however I was unaware that the only way to reverse it was to take holdings of the ''main'' rebels (Lannisters) Luckily I was just able to get one of their castles in time but it was a close thing.

The entrance of the Reach into the war was much needed, especially after losing the better part of the Stormlanders and Tullys, I was just looking at potential betrothals to ally with the Hightowers and bring their 15k men into the fold when the Tyrells saved me the trouble and joined of their own accord.

-To all, have been out of town for the past few days but new chapters coming soon.
 
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I just finished reading and your story is brilliant! Recreating Aegon's Conquest is always fun. Also, the characters are so believable that I couldn't help but feel sorry for Ronnel in this last chapter.

One question: do you intend to stray from the common Targaryen names? I think this is the first time I've seen a Targaryen named Nyel.
 
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I just finished reading and your story is brilliant! Recreating Aegon's Conquest is always fun. Also, the characters are so believable that I couldn't help but feel sorry for Ronnel in this last chapter.

One question: do you intend to stray from the common Targaryen names? I think this is the first time I've seen a Targaryen named Nyel.
Thank you! Ronnels situation is definitely unfortunate, but he does have some things working in his favor.

Ive added a few new Targaryen names to the namelists so there will be a few new ones, but Nyel was a special case as Visenya was pregnant with her while on a tour of the free cities and agve birth shortly after visiting Norvos so I wanted Nyels name to be unique as she was born in essos, and settled on naming her after one of Norvov's three bells, in time other Targaryens will venture into essos for longer periods of time than her brief time there.


I came across a blog by one of the VPN service providers call Ivacy VPN, and the hack they mentioned worked for me.
glad to hear, I enjoyed the first episode.
 
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Chapter 31: A Fallen Sun (Deria Martell, Lewyn Martell)
9th Moon, 8025
Siege Camp Outside Casterly Rock


Deria Martell sat upon her horse as she made her daily rounds of the siege camps. All around her were the banners of Dorne, the white crossed swords on purple of house Dayne, the white green and orange of house Shells, the golden hand of house Allyrion, and countless others were represented amongst the some 10,000 Dornishmen that had answered the Targaryens call.

There was a new banner visible as well, a cluster of purple grapes on blue, levies of house Redwyne of the Arbor,....reachmen, though luckily for all parties involved they kept their own separate camp.

They had arrived one month prior, some 4000 men, led by Lord Rowan of Goldengrove and their arrival had not been one that the Dornish welcomed. For centuries, the Dornish and the Reachmen had been rivals and enemies, with countless wars, skirmishes and massacres being exchanged between the two kingdoms before both were brought under the authority of the Iron Throne, there had been peace in the decades since, but the enmity remained.

To make matters worse, despite having less than half the men the Dornish had committed to the siege, the Reachmen had all but taken over the siege, Lord Rowan had been polite, yet made it clear that King Vaemond had given the Knights of the Reach the role of leading the siege of Casterly Rock, showing her a letter from the King, who remained in Greenfield recovering with his wound with some 10,000 men.

Deria had grudgingly admitted to herself that she could hardly fault the King for giving the overall command to the Reachmen, whose entry into the war had well and truly shifted the momentum. It seemed that every week's war council, Lord Rowan shared a new victory that his countrymen had won in the undefended southern Westerlands. The Reachmen had stormed the castles of Payne Hall, Redramble and Fieldsview. Lord Hightower had captured 5 villages and towns, setting Kimpton, Fivehead and Cedric Town aflame after forcing the local civilians to flee in retaliation for resisting their host.

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In addition to capturing much of the southern border, the Knights of the Reach had defeated a small force of Westerlanders at Peckledon decisively, sending them into a rout.

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While Deria recognized the King's decision to reward the Knights of the Reach, her countrymen were far less understanding. They were outraged that, despite sieging Casterly Rock for months, they would be forced to serve under a much smaller force who had only just arrived, and would no doubt take credit for their months of hard work.

None were more upset than her son Lewyn, who had declared that the Reachmen were free to serve as commanders of the siege, just as they were free to return back to Dorne in light of the current insult.

Deria had not put too much stock into his outburst, she intended to do her duty, in truth the glory of taking Casterly Rock under a Dornish banner did not interest her, it would be enough for her to have a quiet word with the King at the war's end and secure some suitable reward for her family, he would see the worth of the Dornish surely.

They had proved invaluable in the opening months of the siege, and if she had followed her son's advice to abandon the war the Reachmen at Casterly Rock would have been slaughtered.

Two weeks prior, some thirty thousand Westerlanders had been sighted marching west towards Casterly Rock, with Deria and Lord Rowan readying their combined force, which at the time included 7000 Ironborn for battle. Inexplicably however, the Westerlanders had changed their mind and retreated east, passing up the chance for an advantageous battle.

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Her son Lewyn had loudly declared the Westerlanders had turned tail at facing the prospect of fighting 10,000 dornishmen, with old Vickon Greyjoy claiming the same for his Ironborn. Deria and Lord Rowan had both agreed that Loren Lannister likely did not want to get caught in a pitched battle with the 10,000 man army of King Vaemond at his rear, who despite being wounded, had ordered a sizeable calvary force to make their way west from Greenfield to join a potential battle. Some of Lorens men had been among the dead at Westborder, but the majority of his men were unaccounted for, their positions unknown, which perturbed Deria more than a little.

Following this unexpected retreat, Vickon Greyjoy had taken his men south, muttering something about Lannisport, in truth Deria was not sad to see him leave, she still remembered it had been Vickon Greyjoy who had plundered Spottswood and the village of Olivegrove, and had ordered the Ironborn assault on Sunspear all those years ago.

Her dornishmen gave their respects as she passed, bowing their heads and offering courtesies, while a few passing Reachmen paid her little mind at all, though Deria had grown used to their arrogance.

She felt the fatigue of the day setting in and nodded to her escort that it was time to return to her tent. In truth the siege was wearing Deria thin, her people were as hot as the sands of their homeland and it was a tiring business to keep the peace in the siege camps between Stone, Salt and Sand Dornish, made especially difficult by the fact Deria was a woman who devoted herself to overseeing every aspect of the siege, from latrine pits to rations.

She dismounted her horse, tied it to a post next to her tent and entered the small orange silk tent, sitting down on a small chair and pouring herself a cup of Dornish Red.

She did not even get a full minute of reprieve until her second son Lewyn barged into the tent, dressed magnificently for war in a chainmail byrnie of copper links, wearing a cloak of orange silk clasped with a silver sun.

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‘’You are dressed for battle Lewyn, and yet I have not heard our scouts sound the alarm.’’ Deria said with a tired smile.

Lewyn ignored that and began to pace the tent, his hand on the golden sun pommel of his scimitar.

‘’The Reachmen bastards mean to take the credit when Casterly Rock falls, and yet it was us that have sat outside this damnable rock for months…..and do not try to deny it mother, you surely cannot be so blind as to see the insult in the King's appointment of Lord Rowan.’’ Lewyn said hotly.

Deria said nothing at that, folding her hands in her lap, she knew it was pointless to try and talk sense into her son when he fell into one of his wrathful rants.

‘’Nothing to say about that…..well I do….I wont be made to sit around, subservient and watch these smug reachmen command us when they don't even have half our men….I won't stand for it any longer mother.’’ Lewyn continued, pacing.

‘’I can arrange an escort to take you back to Sunspear if you truly cannot bear it.’’ Deria said coolly.

‘’To hell with that.’’ Lewyn snapped before gentling his tone and kneeling before his mother, taking her hand.

‘’I have a plan mother…..a good plan which will make sure the glory of the capture of Casterly Rock will belong to the Dornish and us alone…..we can avenge this slight’’ Lewyn said, the anger having left his face.

Deria raised her eyebrows.

Lewyn returned to his feet and straightened himself ‘’As you are no doubt aware of, beneath Casterly Rock there is a network of tunnels and mines, a labyrinth of interconnected tunnel shafts and walkways.’’

Deria let him continue, though she already had heard enough of the plan in truth.

‘’I found a man that swears he worked as a miner within the bowels of the rock, he swears there is an entrance two miles west of here, long forgotten and abandoned, I mean to take a force of men into those tunnels, take the gatehouse while the castle sleeps and open a postern gate and send men to open the sewer grates…..we will storm the castle while our Reachmen friends sleep through the battle.’’ Lewyn said, crossing his arms proudly when he had finished.

Deria frowned ‘’A bold plan…but the Lannisters declined the chance for battle against us, they've all but conceded Casterly Rock, within half a year, perhaps a bit more the castle will fall to us, I see no reason to risk this plan, we have the time.’’

‘’There is no glory in starving a castle into submission.’’ Lewyn responded.

‘’The purpose of war is not to win glory…it is to defeat one's enemies, and we are doing that….and we are poised to take the Rock with almost no loss of life….surely you do not want to risk your men's lives for nothing.’’ Deria asked, hoping to play on the fact that, despite all of her son's bluster, he had a good heart.

‘’I take my men's lives seriously, mother….I won't force any to accompany me, only those that volunteer, one decisive attack and we could have the castle by the morning….we are taking a risk sieging the castle as well, just yesterday one of their trebuchets killed three Vaith spearman and a horse, tomorrow it could be your tent…and Loren Lannister declined battle yesterday, but what is to say he will not return in a weeks time, how many men will die in a battle of that magnitude.’’ Lewyn said.

‘’You make good points my son….and perhaps your plan will work….but I know that mine will work….I won't risk your life on a gamble.’’ Deria said.

The Princes face darkened at that ‘’Your answer is no then?’’

Deria nodded and her son stormed out of the tent without another word.

He will get over it Deria thought tiredly.


Two Hours Before Midnight

‘’This is the place?’’ Lewyn Martell asked his Westerlander guide.

The man, small of stature and clean shaven nodded ‘’Yes my prince, it is as I thought, they have forgotten about this mine entrance, it is not even sealed.’’

Lewyn nodded and dismounted, his men doing the same.

They numbered some 40 men, well armed and armored with scimitars, two handed axes and silver maces. Lewyn himself wore his copper scale byrnie, orange cloak and a silver helm with the nasal carved into a rounded sun, a heavy brass shield slung around his back.
‘’If any man would turn back do so now….and I don't think any less of you….our task will be dangerous.’’ Lewyn cautioned, but none turned back, just as he expected, he had hand picked his men carefully, and these 40 were some of the bravest and most skilled men from his small company.

While he had been counting on his mothers support for his plan, the prince was not a man that was dissuaded easily and he did not mean to meekly spend months sitting in a tent waiting for the garrison to go hungry while other men covered themselves in glory, he would make his name tonight.

Without his mothers support he could not go directly to the other noble lords and commanders, but as a prince of Dorne, second son or not, he had no small amount of influence with the lesser captains and had informed the most trustworthy ones about his plan. When he and his men took the gatehouse and opened one of the postern gates, he could count on a few hundred men joining the assault.

Warrior willing, the rest of the Dornish host would see what was going on and join the assault, even if they were hesitant at first, seeing the assault underway, his mothers hand would be forced and she would have no choice but to order the assault.

‘’They will sing songs of our raid tonight….every one of your names will be retained throughout eternity.’’ He said in a loud whisper and his men nodded grimly, they had been well explained the importance of remaining quiet once they entered the tunnel.

Lewyn led the way, walking into the mine, one hand on his scimitar, the other holding an oil lit torch.

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The air instantly went cold as they descended down into the earth, and cobwebs filled the tunnel, they had to step over large pools of water and uneven holes in the dirt.


‘’How long until we reach this ladder to the courtyard?’’ Lewyn asked his Westerlander guide.

‘’At this pace, an hour or two, we will descend for a time but then we will need to ascend, that will be the hardest part, some areas we must crawl on our bellies but it will open up for a time.’’ The man explained.

For what seemed like several hours they walked in complete silence, and true to their guides word, at two separate points they had to wriggle through on their bellies like snakes where the passage had collapsed, pushing their shields and weapons ahead of them, a process which took almost an hour in and of itself.

After emerging from the second such obstruction the passageway opened up, there were several torches upon the walls, illuminating dusty tiled steps.

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Their guide turned to him ‘’Here is the most dangerous part…..they occasionally send sentries down in this area, we are near the prisons….we must be absolutely silent.’’

Lewyn took his shoulder ‘’If you are playing us false….’’

‘’I've gotten you this far.’’ The man said with a smile and Lewyn grunted and ordered his men to continue on.

They came across one such guard, wandering boredly, leaning on a spear and nibbling a bit of cheese. Lewyn raised a hand and his men silently came to a halt.

He nodded to one of his men, Dantis who silently unclipped a bronze knife from his belt and hurled it at the man with the expertise of an experienced warrior. The knife took him just under the eye, and he collapsed in a heap slumping against the wall, the spear clattering to the ground.

Lewyn cursed quietly, waiting for footfalls of approaching guards but none came.

Satisfied they had remained undiscovered, Lewyn had his men drag the man into a nearby cell, while another of his men, Fat Fahir, grabbed what remained of the man's cheese dinner with a grin, leaning on his two handed ax.

‘’Good thing were not leaving the way we came.’’ Lewyn said with a quiet smile, it had taken 3 men to pull Fahir through the collapsed section and he had very nearly gotten stuck completely.

Once they had seen to cleaning up, they continued on.

‘’Lannister bastards.’’ Lewyn muttered as they passed the cells, filled with skeletons shackled to the walls being eaten by rats, some fresher than others.

They continued on for another thirty minutes through winding tunnels, Lewyn sending Dantis ahead to scout the way but there were no further guards.

After a time, they came to a large pool of water and their guide raised a hand.

‘’Here.’’ He said pointing upwards to a rusty iron grate, red and brown with age.

‘’Where does it lead?’’ Lewyn asked.

‘’It will take us to a well near one of the sidewalls, once we climb up the Gatehouse is close, we will need to move fast.’’ The man said.

‘’You're no warrior friend, stay back during the melee, I mean to keep you alive….you will be well rewarded.’’ Lewyn said gratefully.

Their guide nodded ‘’I will hang back as you say my prince.’’

Fahir hoisted Dantis on his shoulders as easily as most men would grab a babe and Dantis made short work of the Iron grate.

Dantis went first and after a moment gestured the others to follow, Lewyn went next, emerging from the well underneath the shadow of a side wall, he saw a few guards walking the walls but the castle seemed to be largely silent as the garrison slept.

He spotted their target, one of the smaller gatehouses. Even Lewyn was not so bold as to attempt an assault on the main gatehouse which opened the gate of the Lions Mouth, a massive gate made in the shape of a lion, the main entrance to Casterly Rock

Instead they would assault one of the smaller gatehouses which controlled a postern gate on the sidewall.

Cloaked in shadow they waited until all of his men had ascended up the well.

‘’We move fast and cut a way for Fahir to open the gate, we only need to hold for a few minutes before hundreds of angry Dornishmen come to clean up these lion pups.’’ Lewyn said, trying to give his men some last minute confidence and even some to himself. Despite being one of the smaller gatehouses, everything inside Casterly Rock looked bigger in person.

He nodded to his men and they began to skulk through the shadows in the courtyard towards the stairs to the stone gatehouse until the unthinkable happened.

The loud shrill sounding of a horn cut through the night air, turning Lewyns blood to ice.

He turned and saw their guide, standing near the well, lowering a hunting horn before scuttling off into the darkness.

Lewyn heard his men cry out and with dread turned away from the well to see what awaited them.

Lannister soldiers were everywhere, emerging from the walls like rats, wearing their distinctive red and gold boiled leather, carrying spears and shields, with a fair share of crossbowmen and archers on the wall, torches illuminating the courtyard. They had walked into a trap.

‘’TO THE GATEHOUSE….FOR HOUSE MARTELL…FOR DORNE.’’ Lewyn shouted, drawing his scimitar and charging like a madman like an ant into a wasp's nest.

His men followed him, one of his men collapsing into a heap at the prince's side, a quarrel in his eye.

The Lannisters closed in from all angles, another one of Lewyns men taking a spear through the neck from the men on the gatehouse steps when he turned to face an enemy behind him.

Faris was at his side, dodging the spears which darted forward with speed that one would scarcely believe came from a man of his side, sidestepping a thrust, he took a Lannister in the chin with his silver two handed ax, cutting through chin, tooth and neck and sending the man crashing down the stairs.

As those in the front rank desperately fought their way up the steps to the Gatehouse, those in the back attempted to form a shield wall but they were quickly being overwhelmed by a sea of Lannister spearman, one of his men falling backwards holding his gut, trying in vain to hold in the flow of his entrails.

Lewyn sidestepped a pike thrust from the top of the stairs before hacking his scimitar in a brutal sideways arc towards the man's breastplate, splitting the boil metal and digging into his neck, sending him falling back towards his comrades.

I will not die with a clean sword at least He thought grimly as he slashed another spearman's throat, sending bright red blood into the night air.

He saw Dantis against the back wall of the gatehouse, pinning a Lannister spearman by the neck to the wall with one hand while he struggled to free his bronze dagger from the mans heavy breastplate with another.

‘’Dantis!’’ Lewyn shouted but he could do nothing as another Lannister spearman stuck a spear through the back of Dantis’s head, protruding out of his nose as Lewyns best scout fell to the ground.

The back rank had fallen at this point and the slaughter had begun, Lewyn formed back to back with Faris, each watching the opposite steps of the gatehouse.

‘’COME AND DIE LANNISTER BASTARDS.’’ Lewyn shouted, laughing like a madman as the realization came to him.

We've taken the gatehouse He thought to himself, with a sort of grim pride, no matter his other failings they had accomplished that at least.

Lewyn had never been the best of warriors but he fought with the knowledge that only one that had accepted their death could.

Hearing the whizzing of a quarrel he raised his brass shield, catching it in the heavy metal.

One of his swordsmen next to him was not so lucky, collapsing to the ground with a groan and a quarrel protruding from his quilted tunic.

He stood with his back to Faris, his few remaining men standing near their prince, desperately trying to push back the approaching shield wall of the spearman with pushes, kicks and whatever else they could think of but they advanced all the same.

Another quarrel slammed against his shield but he scarcely noticed,sidestepping and whirling away from enemy strikes, his orange silk cloak flying through the air like tendrils of a flame.

One of his men, trapped and swarmed below tried to surrender but had his head split open like an overripe melon with a heavy mace.

The maceman advanced and hacked at Lewyn, who jumped backwards avoiding the strike; he stepped forward to launch a counterattack, but underestimated the man's speed.

Oh Was all that he could think as he saw the brain splattered mace whirling at his face, connecting with his throat with a sickening crunch, instantly sending his thoughts to darkness as the Prince of Dorne crumpled to the ground.

‘’MY PRINCE.’’ Faris shouted, the big man turning around to catch his prince in his arms.

The big man cradled Lewyn of Dorne in his arms, unaware of the approaching crossbowmen who put a quarrel in his head and another in his chest, ending the ill-fated attack.

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Ah, the secret entrance to Casterly Rock. Lewyn was right to use it, even if it cost him his life.

I wonder how close the Lannisters are to surrendering?
 
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instantly sending his thoughts to darkness as the Prince of Dorne crumpled to the ground.
It seemed to be pointing that way, but a dramatic interlude to take advantage of one of those events the game offers. was it during the siege, a sortie event? Or just some other skirmish or battle? Just curious, not wanting to ruin the excellent immersion.
 
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Ah, the secret entrance to Casterly Rock. Lewyn was right to use it, even if it cost him his life.

I wonder how close the Lannisters are to surrendering?
The Lannisters still have some fight in them, but things are trending in favor of the throne, the Lannisters will be dealt a costly blow in the next chapter, but the saying ''a wolf is never more dangerous then when it is cornered'' applies to them.

Brave assault with no change in the larger picture. Thank you for the update.
Theres a fine line between bravery and foolishness.

Oh sad. Lewyn died heroically for the realm. I'm sure Matarys will be grateful to House Martell.
He may be remembered that way, but in truth he probably died more in the pursuit of glory than for the realm. King Vaemond will be indebted to house Martell, but no debt can bring a dead son back to life.

It seemed to be pointing that way, but a dramatic interlude to take advantage of one of those events the game offers. was it during the siege, a sortie event? Or just some other skirmish or battle? Just curious, not wanting to ruin the excellent immersion.
In truth I cant really say, I didnt realize he had died until a while after and upon checking the save closest to his death he was still with the main Dornish host sieging Casterly Rock, I would say a small skirmish was most likely where he met his end as the Dornish didnt really participate in any pitched battles, but looking at his traits I thought it could be cool to write of a bold yet foolish assault through the depths of Casterly Rock.


-To all, thank you for all the comments, as many have mentioned the war is now firmly going the way of the crown but the Lannisters have one more trick up their sleeves. I have finally finished writing the war recently and can say there will be 3 more chapters until it meets its conclusion, one way or another, new chapter tommorow.
 
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In truth I cant really say, I didnt realize he had died until a while after and upon checking the save closest to his death he was still with the main Dornish host sieging Casterly Rock, I would say a small skirmish was most likely where he met his end as the Dornish didnt really participate in any pitched battles, but looking at his traits I thought it could be cool to write of a bold yet foolish assault through the depths of Casterly Rock.
Ah, really well done then. It's nice to make a whole chapter out of some little thing one finds in a game when you can guess/create what might have happened in a dramatic way. I thought it was really well done. :)
 
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OTL parallel, in 1772 French General Marquis de Choisy led 270 through the sewers to take Kraków from 1500 Russians. Within three months, 18000 Russians sieged him out and Poland went into the ethos. The Marquis would later lead troops in the American and French revolutions.
 
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