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Introduction

Welcome to my second "first" attempt at AAR writing! :)
After a somewhat promising start, my last attempt crashed and burned after the first chapter due to lost saves and screenshots, a general lack of motivation and planning, and the desire to start over with everything I have learned in mind. A few things to note before we start:

  • This is a narrative- and roleplaying-focused AAR, which will be told from multiple POVs
  • This time around I have already finished the campaign at a suitable point and have a rough outline for the whole story, which should hopefully speed up the writing process (I actually don't know which way most people do it; I guess some write after every play session and others, like me, after the whole campaign?)
  • That being said, I don't think I can quite match the pace of some of the other writers around here and currently plan to release one chapter a week (no promises, though. Hopefully I will have gotten into some kind of rythm after chapters 2 and 3)
  • Oh, and of course I can't forget the usual "English-is-not-my-native-language" disclaimer. I'm always happy to learn, so feel free to point out any and all mistakes, if that's your kinda thing! ;)
  • I started this campaign in 867 as High Chief Voitto of Pohjanmaa:
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And that is all, see you on the other side!
 
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Chapter 1: Manala

Chapter 1

Manala


Tommo

As the edge of the forest drew closer, Tommo turned around for the third time this night to lay eyes upon his village. He looked past the trail of cloaked and torch-bearing villagers behind him, and since the land was so flat, he could still easily make out the walls of Pohjanmaa in the distance.

“Homesick already?” sneered his brother Erkki, a few feet ahead of him. Although one would not guess it from simply looking at or listening to him, Erkki was in fact Tommo’s younger brother; but he was taller, stronger and—as Tommo had to begrudgingly admit—more handsome, too. For some reason, his father had even decided to let Erkki carry the torch during this expedition into the forest—a responsibility that Tommo had always believed to be the oldest son’s.

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“Of course I’m not homesick,” said Tommo while catching up to his brother. “I know we’ll be back in the morning. But do you think the feast will really take that long?”

Erkki rolled his eyes. “I already told you that it’s not a normal feast. It’s—wait, is that Loviisa?”

Tommo turned around and saw his sister running towards them. “I thought you were going with mother?” he said and looked past her to see if she was alone. Their mother was a bit further back, avidly talking to some of the villagers.

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“I was, but all she does is talk, talk, talk—but only with the villagers, never with me. And”—Loviisa pointed excitedly towards the forest— “I wanna play with you in the forest!”

Tommo smiled, but Erkki shook his head and said, “We’re not here to play, Loviisa. I told father that you were too young for this, but he wouldn’t listen and wanted all three of us to come.”

“She’s only a year younger than you,” said Tommo defensively. “And I’m older than both of you.”

“And yet I know more about the gods and our rituals than both of you combined,” said Erkki and began walking towards the forest again. “Let’s go already. I want to be one of the first at the offering stone.”

Loviisa grimaced at Erkki, then she and Tommo followed their brother past the tree line. Silently they stood there for a moment, marveling at the enormous trees and the soft, moss-covered ground, as the cold and fresh scents of pine and damp earth engulfed them. They rarely got to see the forest from the inside, since it was so far away from their village on the coast, and they were not allowed to go by themselves because of all the bears, bandits and witches that roamed the woods.

“Um… why are we having a feast in the forest?” asked Loviisa after they had begun walking again.

“I’ve told you—both of you—again and again,” said Erkki. “It’s not a normal feast. Father is visiting the offering stone to talk to our forefathers in Manala.”

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“What’s Manala?”

Tommo had to laugh at his sister’s innocent question, while Erkki sighed and said, “Do you remember anything from our lessons with Pyry? Manala is the realm of the dead.”

“Whoa! Father can go there?”

“Of course not,” said Erkki, but then he reconsidered for a moment. “I think some people have gone there in the past—without dying first, I mean—but usually shamans are the only ones who can trick the ferryman into taking them across the river to Manala. That’s why Pyry will be at the offering stone as well. I heard he’s been preparing the ritual all day long.”

“But… why does father want to talk to our fathers?” asked Loviisa.

“Our forefathers,” said Erkki. “Pyry said we ask them for fortunes, like good harvest and strength in battle. He said we make a sacrifice every five winters to—there it is!”

Erkki ran ahead without looking back, and since he still had the torch, it quickly began to grow darker around Tommo and his sister.

“Wait!” shrieked Loviisa. “The witches come out in the dark!”

Tommo grabbed her hand and followed Erkki as best he could. The trees ahead of them seemed to grow further and further apart, until finally they revealed a clearing with a big, moon-lit stone at the center. Erkki seemed to have caught up to their father and his guards and councilors, who had been leading the expedition. They, too, had just arrived at the grove and now approached Diviner Pyry and his disciples, who were in the process of placing wooden carvings of bears, elks and birds around the offering stone.

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More guards arrived and put their torches in the sconces that were affixed to the trees, while servants placed food and drink on the ground and on rocks and stumps, around which the villagers now began to gather. Then a pit was dug, a fire built, and soon big chunks of meat were roasting over the flames.

Tommo noticed that his sister had started crying and was glad to see his mother arrive at the grove. They sat down together around one of the nearby stumps.

“There was a w—a witch in—in the—the forest,” said Loviisa, trying to contain her tears.

“Is that so?” said Tommo’s mother amused and comforted his sister. “And did you see the witch as well, Tommo?”

Tommo ignored her and watched his brother; Erkki helped place some of the wood carvings around the offering stone until his father handed him something and gestured him to join his mother and siblings.

“Look what father gave me!” he said after sitting down next to his mother. Tommo watched curiously as his brother put a wooden bear carving on the stump, in between the cups and plates. Even Tommo knew that the bear was a sacred animal for his people; every time hunters of his village had managed to kill one—which had only happened a few times, as far as Tommo could remember—the whole village had held a ceremony so that the bear would be reborn in the forest. Or something like that—Tommo had never quite understood what it was about and how it worked.

“Praise Tapio!” said Erkki and marveled at his new possession. He spent the next few minutes telling them everything he knew about the god of the forest and all the sacred animals, until Pyry raised his arms, and the grove fell silent at once.

He cleared his throat and took a deep breath. “We have come here to honor our forefathers under the eyes of the gods! High Chief Voitto, what will you be offering?”

“I shall be offering our juiciest venison and our sweetest mead!” said Tommo’s father and motioned to some servants, who promptly came forward and placed food and drink on the offering stone. “And we”—he gestured at all the villagers gathered around him—“shall feast and sing our greatest chants all night long to honor the gods and our forefathers!” All around, cups were loudly clinked in approval.

Pyry nodded. “And our forefathers shall feast with us in Manala. What, then, do you ask of them in return for this offering?”

Everyone looked expectantly at their High Chief, as he stared into the fire. After a few moments of silence, he said, “I know the last summer has not been easy on us; our harvest has been cursed and our neighbors grow bolder every day; in the last few moons alone, we have been tormented by raiders from Savo and Sortavala, and Karelian aggression has forced many of our people in Kainuu to flee westward.”

Tommo saw some people nod in silent agreement. Others began to whisper. His father’s voice grew louder. “And what of the tales that have reached us, of our neighbor’s utter disregard for the gods and all that is sacred? Some of them have even begun accepting the false god of the south! Burning down places of worship, looting graves, praying for personal gain only—their lips may speak our god’s names, but their hearts don’t beat for them!”

Tommo flinched at the sudden angry shouts of approval. His father waited for them to dissipate and turned to Pyry. “You want to know what I ask of our forefathers? I ask them to guide my sword in battle. I ask them to give us strength and watch over us as our weapons clash with those of our enemies.” He turned back to the villagers and began to shout. “The gods deserve to be worshipped! And the people deserve to be protected and respected! All peoples, from the shores of the eastern sea to the shores of the western sea and the lakes of Ladoga and Onega, shall be united under one kingdom of the gods! And the gods have decided that we shall make it so! Ukko is with us, my friends! May our enemies shiver in fear when they hear his thunder!”

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The grove erupted in cheers and war cries, but Tommo thought that some of the villager's faces looked more concerned or even disgruntled than eager for battle. Pyry raised his arms once more to silence the crowd. “So be it,” he said, closed his eyes, turned around and sat down in front of the offering stone. At once, people began chattering, eating and drinking; the feast had apparently begun, and Tommo could not help but wonder if Pyry was going to have trouble entering Manala with all this noise around him.

“Great speech!” said Tommo’s mother and gave her husband a kiss, as he approached his family. “Word of it will surely reach as far as Käkisalmi and Olonets.”

“I shall hope so,” said his father and looked at his children, smiling. “And what did you think of your old man’s performance?”

“A bit scary,” said Loviisa.

“Incredible,” said Erkki.

Tommo nodded.

His father sat down and suddenly looked very serious. “You have to understand that everything might be a bit harder and more complicated for a little while. But no matter what happens in the next few moons, always remember: I am doing all of this for you and the gods.” Erkki nodded eagerly and his father smiled again and tousled his hair. “Our tribes have been fighting for far too long. A kingdom united under the eyes of the gods will be a safer place for all of us.”

Tommo wondered why his father needed their forefather’s guidance and strength in battle, if the new kingdom was going to be such a safe and peaceful place, but he did not feel like asking. As the feast continued, Tommo noticed that his father nervously looked around at the villagers every so often, which his mother seemed to have noticed as well, since she said, “Do not worry about them. Your speech was excellent, and I am sure you have touched everyone’s hearts tonight.” But Tommo could still see many concerned, solemn and disgruntled faces; for every group of people jovially and fearlessly discussing the wars to come, there seemed to be at least one other of concerned villagers whispering to each other and glaring at Tommo and his family.

After what must have been hours of eating, drinking and singing, Tommo got up and wandered a bit deeper into the forest to relieve himself. He could hear two voices arguing further ahead, but did not think much of it and was about to return to the grove, when he heard his father’s name and the words “big mistake“ and “doomed to fail”. Tommo decided to get closer. Two men were leaning against trees, holding cups in their hands, and somewhat drunkenly gesticulating at each other. Tommo recognized the red beard of Marshal Mohkku, one of his father’s councilors, and he was sure he had seen the other man before, as well, though he did not remember his name or position.

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“This is just not like him at all,” said the man whose name Tommo did not know. “And you know how much influence she has over him. She has always been a bit too ambitious for him. It would not surprise me if all of this was her idea.”

“Oh please!” said Marshal Mohkku. “Do you really think he is that naïve?”

“Yes. And quite frankly, so are you. She knows exactly how to get him to do her bidding. That bit about our neighbors ‘accepting the false god of the south’—you know as well as I do that those are only rumors.”

“Rumors that warrant investigating—”

“—with drawn swords and bows? Come one, Mohkku. I know your love for the gods is endless, but even you must recognize an unjustified cause if it stares you right in the face.”

“Do I need to remind you that they attacked us first?”

“Their raiders looted our villages, just as our raiders have looted their villages in the past. And our answer to that is a full-scale conquest of the flatlands in order to create some sort of holy kingdom?”

“It seems you are forgetting our old ways.”

“Our adherence to the old ways is exactly what has created this mess of rival tribes and factions in the first place! I know deep down Voitto and I share the same ideas about our people’s future, but it seems he has been persuaded to follow a different, bloody path to reach it. And what of his children?”

“What of them? Erkki is as strong and sharp as they come. Give it a few more years and he will be the brightest commander Pohjanmaa has ever known!”

“I was not talking about Erkki and you just proved my point. Tommo is still the heir, in case you had forgotten, even if his father would love nothing more than to change that fact. Thankfully, it seems like the council—most members of the council, anyway—still prefer the oldest son and were able to dissuade Voitto. But the wars to come will do Tommo no favors. The poor lad, always in his brother’s shadow. He even—”

Tommo did not want listen to the rest on the conversation. He returned to the stump around which his family had been sitting, but there was no one there now. His Mother was surrounded by Loviisa and a dozen other girls, who were listening closely to one of her stories, while father and some of his guards were sitting around the fire and roaring with laughter as Erkki attempted to arm-wrestle a man twice his size.

Tommo sat down alone and watched the festivities. After a while, he began to scoop away some of the soft earth near the stump. He took the wooden bear carving his father had given Erkki, placed it in the small hole and covered it with earth and leaves. Then he got up and joined his brother by the fire.
 
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Everything has to start somewhere, and that final paragraph does feel like the start of something.
 
Excellent and interesting start for AAR.
 
Definitely a solid start.
 
Good luck this time round, you have got things off to a great start. I’d venture to say that your written English here is better than most native speakers (wouldn’t have guessed if you hadn’t mentioned it) and the story has been nicely set up from a less usual perspective. Neatly done. :)
 
Chapter 2: The Followers of Otso

Chapter 2

The Followers of Otso


Voitto

“The gods have forsaken me! The gods have forsaken me! The gods—"

“Voitto!”

Darkness. Then his eyes began to adjust and focus; the ceiling. A candle. Then his wife’s concerned face. It took Voitto a few seconds to recognize his bedroom. He propped himself up against the headrest, breathed in deeply, and said, “Lempi, what—uh, why are you awake?”

“Why am I awake?” said Lempi, got up from the bed and started to pace around the room. “I will tell you as soon as you tell me why you think the gods have forsaken you.”

Voitto sighed and closed his eyes. For the third night in a row, Lempi had awakened him because he had been talking or yelling in his sleep. Ever since the feast in the sacred grove, Voitto had been plagued by nightmares of gigantic, grotesque creatures chasing, catching and mauling him.

“It is those nightmares again, is it not?” said Lempi and Voitto simply nodded. “I told you the gods have nothing to do with them. They—”

“They are signs, Lempi! The gods have always sent our people signs through dreams!”

“Yes, they are signs—signs of your deteriorating health! For days you have been pondering over maps, wandering through the forest until after sunset, skipping meals, barely sleeping.” She sat down next to him and leaned on his shoulder. “Word from Mohkku will arrive soon enough, my love. We must be patient. Yes, if anything, the gods are testing your patience.”

Voitto hoped she was right. Mohkku had insisted on leaving the village the day after the feast, so that he could prepare the warriors in Oulu and Kainuu and scout out the first potential target for Voitto’s conquest. But six days had passed now and there was still no word from him. Voitto grabbed the map he had been keeping next to the bed and began to study it, as he did so often these days.

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There were the chiefs of Savo, Karelia, Sortavala and Häme; paranoid, stubborn and envious, they were always at each other’s throats, though none of them had yet managed to completely defeat the others. According to Mohkku, chief Ahma of Sortavala was the most competent and—if left alone for too long—most dangerous among them, while chief Mielus of Häme posed the least threat to Pohjanmaa. Mohkku had estimated that all of them could field a similar number of warriors under ideal conditions, but with last summer’s poor harvest and the constant raiding between the tribes, someone was bound to be off worse than the others.

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And then there was High Chief Ihala II of Suomi, far and wide known and feared as an outstanding commander and fighter. He wore the fur of a bear he had allegedly slain all by himself, a feat which had earned him the position of leader in the warrior’s lodge of the Followers of Otso. The Followers were a group of likeminded warriors who revered Otso, the great bear and king of the forest, above all other gods and spirits. As far as Voitto knew, they spent most of their time hunting and dueling, but he was sure that many of them would come to their leader’s aid if any of his villages were to be attacked. Combined with his incredible fighting prowess, having the Followers at his fingertips gave Ihala a clear edge over all the other chiefs, but—to their great relief—he had never shown any real interest in expanding his tribe’s territory.

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“You are doing it again—losing yourself in maps and ignoring me.” said Lempi, took the map from Voitto and gave him a kiss. “Believe me, it will be all right.”

“My own people do not believe in me, Lempi.”

“Have you already forgotten all the cheers and war cries following your speech in the sacred grove?”

“Stop it!” said Voitto and got up. “You are either lying to yourself or to me. Maybe both. Yes, people got swept up in the excitement after my speech. But now? Have you not noticed their bleak faces? Have you ever tried to imagine what their lifes are like? The thoughts that are going through their minds? While I am planing to play war, these people are left wondering if their families will live to see the next summer!”

“Voitto, the gods—”

“Do not bring the gods into this argument, Lempi! You only ever invoke their names when it is convenient for you.” Voitto loved his wife with all his heart, but her skeptical and pragmatic of the gods had always been the greatest rift between them and the cause of many heated arguments. Lempi did not respond for a while, but then she also got up again, grabbed her husband by the shoulders and looked him deep into the eyes.

“You are right,” she said, “my love for the gods is not as endless as yours. But I do love you. And our children. And I know this family can do better, Voitto. This family deserves better. We are meant to rule over a kingdom, not a handful of villages.”

“We? Or you?”

“Just what are you implying? I swear to the gods—no, do not shake your head, I really mean it—I swear to the gods that all I ever did and will do has been, and will be, for the good of this family. Do you believe me? Look at me and tell me you believe me!”

She began to cry and Voitto knew he had gone to far. He embraced her and said, “I believe you.” And he truly did.

“Good,” said Lempi, trying to regain her composure. “Now, get back to bed. The moon is still high, and you need the sleep.”

The morning came, and with it the realization that last night’s argument had been caused by stress and a lack of sleep. Voitto apologized to his wife, assuring her that he would never doubt her commitment to their family and their people again. Then he made his way into the great hall, on the off-chance that a messenger from Mohkku was already waiting there.

The hall was empty aside from a few guards, a handful of servants and—much to Voitto’s surprise—Erkki and Loviisa. They were sitting in front of the big bear skull that had been hanging on the wall ever since the ritual last year; according to Pyry, the bear’s soul had refused to return to the forest after the ritual and was going to haunt the village, unless Voitto were to honor the dead animal by decorating the great hall with its skull.

“You two are up early. What are you doing?”

“Praying,” said Erkki and Loviisa nodded. They both sat cross-legged and with their eyes closed.

“Praying?” said Voitto, crossed his arms and leaned against the wall. “Really?”

There was a moment of silence. Then Erkki opened one eye, and when he saw that his father was still there, he sighed and said, “All right, let’s take a break, Loviisa.” They opened their eyes and turned to face Voitto. “Father, do you remember that bear carving you gave me on the night of the feast?” said Erkki. “The one that disappeared.”

“Of course,” said Voitto. He remembered all too well how upset Erkki had been that night. “What of it? Did you find it?”

“No,” said Erkki, but he did not sound disappointed. He was smiling, in fact. “But I have realized something. The way it simply disappeared like that—I believe it was a sign from the gods!”

Voitto smiled and shook his head. Like father, like son, he thought. “Not everything is a sign from the gods, Erkki.”

“But it really was, father! I believe the gods were telling me that I’m not ready for such a gift, that I must earn it by worshipping the great bear itself, Otso!”

“And do you also believe it was a sign from the gods, Loviisa? Is that why you are praying, as well?”

Loviisa looked at her brother, who nodded encouragingly, and said, “Um, yes, I think so. Because of my dreams. I’ve been dreaming about bears. Oh, and Tommo doesn’t talk to me anymore. So I was a bit bored, also.”

“Tommo does not talk to you anymore?”

“He doesn’t talk to me, either,” said Erkki dismissively, closed his eyes and turned towards the bear skull again. “He also hasn’t been to Pyry’s lessons for some time. Anyway, can you leave us alone for a bit, so we can concentrate? I’m sure this will help in your conquest as well, father. Otso is on our side!”

Voitto left the hall and wondered how he could have missed Tommo’s change of behavior. His children had admittedly not been on his mind much these last couple of days.

“Tommo, are you awake?” Voitto peeked into the room that his three children shared.

There was no response. Tommo was laying in his bed, back towards the door and face buried in his blanket. Voitto was about to close the door and leave, when he heard a faint, muffled “What?” from across the room.

“Is there anything you would like to talk about, Tommo?”

“No. Why do you ask?”

“Erkki and Loviisa have told me that you have stopped talking to them. Is there a reason for this?”

“No.”

“Then why do you not talk to them anymore?”

“I don’t know.”

“They told me you have not been attending Pyry’s lessons recently. Is that true?”

“Mm-hmm.”

“Tommo, it is important for a ruler to know a lot about the gods. You have to—”

“What if I don’t want to be a ruler?” Tommo had turned around now. His eyes were glistening with tears.

Voitto was taken aback and felt a sudden sense of shame as he realized that he had always hoped for this moment to happen. He had always thought Erkki would make the better ruler, but many of his councilors stuck to the old ways of favoring the first born son, and Voitto had never found it in himself to talk to Tommo about this issue directly. And yet he truly believed that it was only to Tommo’s benefit to renounce his claim as heir.

He has inherited my kindness,
Voitto thought, but he lacks his mother’s ambition. Or his brother’s devotion to the gods. A ruler must have some kind of drive or conviction, lest he be surpassed by those of his neighbors or in his own ranks who do.

“My son, listen to me,” said Voitto, closed the door, sat down on Tommo’s bed and took his hand. “Listen closely: You do not have to be a ruler. There is no shame in stepping aside and letting someone else take this burden from you.”

He had meant the words in a supportive way, but when Voitto looked into his son’s teary eyes, he was not sure what he saw. Relief? Disappointment? Despair?

“Tommo, I—”

“Chief Voitto,” said one of the servants from outside the room and knocked on the door. “A messenger from Marshal Mohkku has arrived!”

Tommo turned back to the wall again, while Voitto gave him a kiss on the head and said, “We will talk later.” He hurried to the great hall, where the messenger and a young man and woman were already waiting for him.

“Every morning I have been hoping for your arrival,” said Voitto “Please tell me you bear good news.”

The messenger bowed and said, “I believe I do. Marshal Mohkku sends me to inform you that he was able to raise the number of warriors in Oulu and Kainuu that he had promised you before his departure, and that morale is high among your troops. Furthermore, after scouting out the neighboring villages, he has come to a confident decision on what the first target of your conquest should be. Mohkku did not tell me any specifics, lest the information falls into the wrong hands, but he urges you to join him in Kainuu as soon as possible.”

“That is indeed good news!”

“But that is not all,” continued the messenger. “Mohkku also asked me to inform you that many adventurers, warriors and villagers from other tribes, currently numbering close to one hundred in total, are gathering in Oulu and Kanuu to join your cause.

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Among them were also—well, I believe it best to let them introduce themselves.” The messenger motioned to the young man and woman behind him.

“High Chief Voitto, it is an honor to meet you”, said the young man and stepped forward. “My name is Shyrpuzh, and this is my sister Chindyapa. We are both proud warriors of the Followers of Otso. I assume you have heard of our group?”

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“I have. What brings you to Pohjanmaa?”

“A sense of glory and adventure,” said Shyrpuzh, smiling. “We want to fight for you, Chief Voitto—and not just us two. Word of your ambitious plans and your offering for your forefathers has reached our sacred halls and inspired many of our companions. As we speak, two dozen of our lodge’s best fighters have already gathered in Kainuu, waiting for your command.”

Voitto raised his eyebrows and looked at the messenger, who nodded and said, “It is true. Last I saw them they were discussing strategies with Marshal Mohkku. When they heard that I was traveling back to Pohjanmaa to deliver a message, they sent these two along to inform you of their support.”

“I am honored,” said Voitto, “but I had been under the impression that the Followers of Otso only answered to Chief Ihala.”

Before her brother could answer, Chindyapa stepped forward and said, “It is true that Ihala is our leader, but each one of us is a free warrior. Our code encourages us to seek honor and glory in any way, be it with a drawn bow in the forest or a drawn sword on the battlefield.”

Voitto considered for a moment and said, “You have heard about my plans, which means you understand that sooner or later I might even have to face Ihala himself. Which side will you choose, should it come to that?"

“As I said, Chief Voitto, we are free warriors,” said Chindyapa. “I suggest you deal with that situation when it arises, and instead take advantage of our support now, as long as you still have it.”

Voitto nodded. He appreciated the honesty and agreed with her sentiment; he would likely not be fighting Ihala for quite a while, anyway. “Again, I am honored to have you and your companions on my side,” he said and motioned to one of his servants. “I will see to it that you are well taken care of for the rest of the day, but I am afraid one night’s rest will have to suffice, as I will ride for Kainuu in the morning and hope that you will join me.”

After the servants and guards had ushered Shyrpuzh and Chindyapa to their room, Voitto sat down and buried his face in his hands, contemplating the morning’s events. If Mohkku had really managed to rally all the warriors in the three big villages and the surrounding settlements, then that meant 570 in Pohjanmaa, 360 in Oulu and 230 in Kainuu. And now Voitto had learned of an additional one hundred warriors on his side, two dozen of which were outstanding fighters from a famous warrior’s lodge. He almost did not dare to even think about it, but for the first time in days, it felt like the dark clouds in his heart and mind had given way to a faint feeling of hope.

Perhaps Erkki was right after all, Voitto thought. Otso really is on our side.
 
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Thank you all for your kind comments and your patience. Chapter 2 took me much longer to write than I had anticipated, but hey, at least I have already surpassed my previous AAR, which never even made it past chapter 1 :D
The next couple of days are obviously going to be bit busy, but I will try my best to sneak in one more chapter before the end of the year!
 
Some interesting matters theological here. A very impression of how faith certainly rules this particular group of people.
 
Another good and interesting chapter:)
 
Looking forward to finding out the unlucky first target for unification! And how the tension between the sons will play out - I’m assuming there is elective gavelkind in place, so a change of vote by Voitto would be decisive, if it happens. But it could spell trouble later. Anyway, first there is a new realm to be won!
 
Some interesting matters theological here. A very impression of how faith certainly rules this particular group of people.

For sure. Lots of characters with the "zealous" trait in this campaign.

Another good and interesting chapter:)

Thank you! :D

Looking forward to finding out the unlucky first target for unification! And how the tension between the sons will play out - I’m assuming there is elective gavelkind in place, so a change of vote by Voitto would be decisive, if it happens. But it could spell trouble later. Anyway, first there is a new realm to be won!

Voitto certainly does have the final say when it comes to succession, but so far he couldn't bring himself to actually "take it away" from Tommo. Tommo not wanting to be a ruler would obviously make that decision easier, but who knows if he really meant what he said, and what he will make of his father's eager reaction...


By the way, I have included a table of contents in the first post and also decided to tease the name of chapter 3. There was a lot of setup in these first two chapters, but I think it's safe to say that the story will quickly pick up the pace from here on out, and chapter 3 will be quite eventful and action-packed.
That fact combined with next chapter's name—well, I don't want to say too much! ;)