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Norgesvenn

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Introduction:

This piece is based on a game with Norway from 1936 and onwards. Settings? Hard. Normal aggression.

Now, I won't conquer the world. That's for sure. What I will do, however, is to write a hopefully engaging story.

Unlike many other AARs, I'll utilise a third-person retrospective point of view. The genre is obvious. It's a crime novel/short story.

Enjoy! :)
 
Chapter I: The death of a patient

Oslo, January 1961.

Snow. Gentle snow. Snow falling to the ground, covering up the traces of yesterday, until the sun yet again will shine and life once again will return. The frozen streets of Oslo weren’t exactly bustling with activity.

”How is he?”, a man asked the nurse. It was the end of her shift, and she was getting increasingly tired. Ullevål hospital was an old one. The corridors were dimly lit, and the grey linoleum floor’s dour quality was matched only by the flaky yellow paint on the walls.
“He is getting worse. Are you family?”. He didn’t look like family. His grey overcoat wasn’t of any quality. The old man seemed to be from a rich family.
“Uhm. Not family. More… well, you know”
The nurse merely nodded and shrugged. The patient could use a little company anyway.
She turned and left the room. The man in the bed was breathing heavily, and let out a wheezing sound. His lungs were probably goners a long time ago.
The visiting man went over to the bed. He picked up the pillow from under the old man’s head. The patient didn’t stir as he was smothered to his death.

“The atrocity is avenged…”. The mutter was barely audible, yet clear enough.

The man turned around and left. His gloved hands left no fingerprints.

*****


Inspector Jon Mold of the Homicide Division was just browsing through the sports section of Aftenposten when somebody knocked on his door. It was his immediate superior, Marcussen. It was a much welcome break in reading about the downfall of his ice hockey heroes, anyway. Marcussen entered without bothering to wait for Mold to say ‘come in’. The tall, grey-haired man had an aura of bustling activity around him.

“Are you busy?”
“Not really, no. The husband finally caved in today and confessed to knocking his wife’s head flat with the iron earlier today”, Mold said.
“What? Oh, yeah. The old couple…”
“Well, there’s just one left now. But, the old ones, yes…”
“Never mind. Seems to be something iffy about some oldie who’s croaked up at Ullevål…”
“Iffy? He didn’t die of ‘natural causes’?”
“Probably not…”. Marcussen had already drifted out of the conversation mentally, and would soon drift out of the room physically as well.
“Right. I’ll get going!”

The Volvo police car pulled up at the main entrance of Ullevål, and Mold got out. Along with him was his younger colleague Arvid Gjertsen.
“So, what are we looking for?”
“Anything, really. First, we need to establish that the man actually died of un-natural causes. The fact that we are at a hospital, places that are usually filled with doctors, should help us in that respect. Come on. Let’s go…”

The doctor quickly assured them that the patient had died from being smothered by a pillow, and not from a vicious bout of lung cancer that was tormenting his body.
“What’s his name?”
“Mathiesen. Niels Mathiesen. Born the 4th of May, 1904“, the doctor said.
Mold nodded, and wrote the name down on his notepad. Somehow the name rang a bell, far, far back in his memory.
“Anyone here seen anything out of the ordinary, then?”, Mold asked. The doctor shrugged.
“I just went on my shift, and the day nurse has left… perhaps the reception has records of any visitors. You could check with them”. Mold gave Gjertsen a look, and the younger man shuffled off towards the reception.
“Anything else you can tell me? I need to get forensics in here to check for fingerprints and other traces… they’ll arrive shortly”, Mold said, checking his pocket watch.
“Not really. As far as I know, Mathiesen never received any visitors, but I might be wrong…”
“Why was he here?”
“He was here to die. He suffered from terminal lung cancer”

Odd, thought Mold. Why would anyone kill a man who was about to die anyway?
 
PS!

I encourage comments and suggestions in this thread, as I feel that such things increase the overall quality of an AAR.

Feel free to visit the bAAR as well. :)
 
Chapter II: The key to understanding?

Having established that no-one had come to visit mr. Mathiesen for the two weeks that he’d been hospitalised, Gjertsen walked back to the hospital room. He hated hospitals. His wife was eight months pregnant, expecting their first child, and shuddered at the idea of spending hours, perhaps days, at the hospital during labour.
Forensics had arrived. Inspector Mold was busy talking to the forensics man, a certain Møller. After a couple of minutes, Mold nodded at Gjertsen.
“Let’s go. We need to find out more about this Mathiesen. I’ve got his address. You’ll drive. I hate icy roads. And we’ll be going all the way to Drøbak”
Gjertsen sighed. He wasn’t all that keen on driving himself, but an order was an order.

They spent the hour driving in silence. Mold was looking out of the side view window, smoking his unfiltered Teddy cigarettes. Gjertsen kept thinking about Teddy Roosevelt, of whom the cigarettes were named.

Mathiesen’s house was small. It was painted red, and a small picket fence was covered with snow. The fence was, however, white. Mold felt sure that the place was very idyllic in the summer time. Now it was just empty and cold.

“Do you have keys?”, Gjertsen asked while huffing and puffing in the freezing cold. Near the open sea, the draft was extremely cold.
“Don’t be stupid, Arvid. Of course I don’t. I did, however, learn how to open a door with a little wire by some low-down small time petty thief when I was patrolling in the 40s…”

The door opened. The lock was old. Not one of those fancy Yale locks. The two men entered. The place smelled old and musty. An old man’s home. The entry hall was small and cramped. Mold didn’t bother to remove his shoes in order to go in. They came into the kitchen. The sink was empty, implying that the deceased was neat. The kitchen was cramped as well. A stove, a few cupboards and a table with two chairs. The living room was unimpressive. A bookshelf contained a few ‘classics’. There was a radio, and three photographs. One showing mr. Mathiesen in uniform, undated. Another showing Mathiesen out hunting with two other men, and a third showing a German Shepherd dog.

“Seems as if his life’s been rather ordinary. Even boring”, Mold muttered.
“Three photographs in fifty-seven years. Not a lot?”
“No. I’m going to look in the bedroom. That’s probably upstairs. Try to find a journal or anything remotely personal. I feel like we don’t know this person at all”, Mold said, and walked out of the living room and through the kitchen. He ascended a creaky staircase, and noticed there also was a bathroom there. A WC, a mirror, a wash basin and a razor. That was all. Unexciting.
The bedroom consisted of one bed, a chest of drawers and a closet. In the closet was an old army uniform, probably from the thirties along with a service rifle and several rounds of ammunition. Some old suits, a few shirts. The chest of drawers concealed little else than underwear. And a small key. The key looked like it might belong to a deposit box in a bank or something.
 
A detective AAR??? Nice :)
Great writing and murder in the first chapter.

PS! The butler did it.
 
Everybody knows that it must be the cook in the yellow chamber with the knife, it always is ! :D


Nice start Norg, I wonder how you’re gonna do an AAR from that, even if I think the pictures might be a clue (in what uniform was he ?…)
 
Ah, Sam... one can make an AAR from practically anything, you know... ;)

Thanks for the kind words, hjarg. :)

Rocky and Stroph... Himmler didn't do it. I don't think he did, at least. Despite him being an efficient sociopath. :D
 
Chapter III: Of what that used to be

“It’s six o’clock already”, Mold said. “We’d better get back to Oslo soon. Before that, however, let’s have quick drive into town here and see if there’s a bank there…”
Gjertsen drove the Volvo carefully. A quick tour of the town of Drøbak determined that there was in fact a bank there.

“Right. Back to Oslo. I’m starving. How’s the wife, Arvid?”
“Pregnant”
“Yes. I know that. I was just wondering how she was. If her pregnancy in some way was related to your sullen and sulky behaviour. Denying your troops military access these days, is she?”, Mold said with a sly smile.
“It’s nothing like that. It’s just… well, it’s huge to become a father”
“I know. I know. I have a daughter who’s seventeen now. It’ll work out fine, Arvid. Trust me. Just don’t buy the young one a record player. I’ve got that Cliff Richard up my throat these days”

They drove in silence for a while. It was dark, and it had begun to snow slightly.
“What did you make out of the living room?”, Mold asked, while absent-mindedly lighting another cigarette. Gjertsen coughed demonstratively, but his superior was very adept at overlooking such things.
“Hardly any furniture. No personal items, except for the photographs. No pencils or paper, which would indicate that he wasn’t one of those frequent letter-writers. Anything interesting upstairs?”
“Well, the key. Apart from that, a service uniform, standard thirties issue with lieutenant’s insignia and a service rifle. No handgun. It doesn’t say a lot. I mean, we were all soldiers in the thirties after the ‘Re-armament’…”

“The what?”
“’The Re-armament’. You know, when Labour found out that pacifism would be a very bad idea, considering that Germany was re-arming and that the Soviet Union was moving out of isolation. And, of course, it was a good way of battling unemployment. People were put into the industry, the obligatory service became two years for all males. They even allowed the communists to serve. Thirty years of neglect was to be made up for…”

“How do you know all this?”
“Didn’t I ever tell you about my father? He was an officer. He still is, I suppose. He’s at one of those retirement homes now. He was a colonel in the Chief of Staff’s entourage in the thirties. He always wanted me to be in the army as well. I, however, chose to become a policeman. We didn’t speak for three years. The fact that I also openly voted Labour helped…”
Gjertsen chuckled.
“I see. So nothing exciting with the uniform?”
“Hardly”

They were approaching Oslo, passing by the huge oil supply harbour. Thousands of lights lit up the grey January night.

Gjertsen drove Inspector Mold back to Majorstua, where they both lived. It was a semi-fashionable part of the city, west of the physical and mental division between working class and middle class, the Akerselva river.

Mold spent the evening undisturbed, with his daughter at the movies and his wife playing bridge with her friends. He helped himself to a large whisky and started making notes on a piece of paper. This Mathiesen. He was still just a shadow. Not a real person. His life seemed to have been… non-existent. Evasive. His train of thought grinded to a halt as the telephone rang.
“Mold”
“It’s Marcussen here. I’ve been trying to get hold of you all goddamn afternoon. Where the heck have you two been?”
”Drøbak. Checking out mr. Mathiesen’s, the deceased, house”
“What? I’ve got the file on him here. Says he lived down in Bjørvika in some shoddy apartment, Mold. You’ve gotten this mixed up!”
“The hospital file said he lived in Drøbak…”
“Well, the address here says Scwheigaards gate, so haul yourself down there right now”

Mold put on his overcoat and hat, and resisted the temptation of taking his car. Instead, he started walking, hoping to catch a taxi a few blocks down. He did.


The building was among those who were to be torn down in the not-too-distant future. The tenants had already been offered new apartments in the high houses being erected in the outskirts of Oslo. The staircase reeked of urine and garbage, and Mold covered his nose while ascending the stairs to the third floor. The door quickly gave in. The apartment was sparsely furnished. A bed, a table and a chest of drawers. Nothing else. The light bulbs were all broken, so Mold used his lighter. No papers. No photographs. Nothing. He checked the mattress in the bed. Nothing. The chest of drawers were empty.

Outside, he cursed Marcussen for sending him on a wild goose chase at nine in the evening. He started walking. He’d catch a tram back home.
 
Ok, this time i saw some vague hints about HoI. :)

Though i must say that Niels Mathiesen has a very boring life... anyone who killed him did him a favour.

Not even a single magazine with poor girls who can't afford their clothers under his bed? :)
 
Damn! I knew I should've included a few strip-tease joints and some females of the opposite sex... ;)

Still setting the scene, really. This might be a looooong AAR. Then again, it might not. :D
 
Originally posted by Norgesvenn
Damn! I knew I should've included a few strip-tease joints and some females of the opposite sex... ;)

You're right... no AAR wouldn't be complete without them!!! :)
Well, there was the nurse, right? At least something...

till setting the scene, really. This might be a looooong AAR. Then again, it might not. :D [/B]

Well, make it a loooooooooong one then. I can see a lot of good reading right ahead. :)
 
Nice start Norg!

Interesting with the retrospective perspective, somehow reminds me of Staalesen (and I like him, so that's a compliment).

Will follow this closely.

So Nygårdsvold (under NO outside influence whatsoever :p) went for re-armament... there is a twist.
 
I'd certainly read such a paper. I think most such relationships start at mIRC with the three letters: asl?
 
Fear not, Valdemar! The Danish AAR is in its closing stages. Just need to fix the screenies and so on. :)

Thanks! :) I sort of enjoy writing mysteries as well.
 
Very well written in deed!

The styles of AAR's are improving quite a bit with this one - it's not a report from a computer-game but a well written novel. I think i would enjoy it even if it wasn't about HoI at all! /M