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Welcome back and well done. The various styles really complimented the narrative
Thank you, much appreciated.
Why was the sailor attacking Léon? Is that an indication of a more general dislike of his reign?

Why couldn't Léon leave managing the kingdom to his wife? I feel like such an arrangement would help fix their relationship... for that matter, who was running the kingdom when Léon was on crusade?

RIP the Ayyubids. What will Jerusalem's ultimate fate be?

Also, the Mongols are here. How large a mark have they made on the world?
  • He's the straight-man in the comedic situation depicted in he play. [EDIT: Actually, yea.]
  • Cause he didn't like her, would you give control of your realm to someone you didn't like?
  • Ck3 doesn't use regencies for when the ruler is at war, so technically hes the one running the realm.
  • Dunno, i write after only a few in game years, so i can't tell yet, so far they only expanded a little bit in southern syria
  • They have almost all of the steppe, all of persia, tibet and southern Rus including Kyiv.
I also liked the style here.
^⁠_⁠^
 
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Finally caught up on this latest chapter. Great to see the mix of styles that @High Speed Flying Gladius deploys to tell this tale. Quite adventurous really and they mesh nicely.

Now that I am finally back to read what I have missed during the past quarter, I hope that this AAR returns on a more regular basis.
 
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Finally caught up on this latest chapter. Great to see the mix of styles that @High Speed Flying Gladius deploys to tell this tale. Quite adventurous really and they mesh nicely.

Now that I am finally back to read what I have missed during the past quarter, I hope that this AAR returns on a more regular basis.
Thank you!

You're in luck, the next release(s) are 90% done and should release today, tomorrow or maybe the day after.

University exams and technical problems (PC is showing it's age and keeps shutting down, i take regular backups of saves and mods in case something bad happens) kept me away from working on this as consistently as i would have liked.

After the next part i will start working on smaller chapters that better mesh with my increasingly busy irl schedule.
 
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After the next part i will start working on smaller chapters that better mesh with my increasingly busy irl schedule.
Yes. I have found that shorter chapters are the solution to busy IRL (isn't the forum real too?) schedules. However, I also appreciate a well-written long chapter. I like to write those when time allows. I think there's a whole discourse on the idea of short vs. long chapters, but that's for another time and place. Looking forward to your next chapters but no pressure please. This reader is patient.
 
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Chapter 8: Legendary Léon’s Legacy: Part 2: 1238-1245
Chapter 8
Legendary Léon’s Legacy: Part 2
Léon Lamentoso
Excerpt from "Léon the Lamented (Italian: Léon Lamentoso)
By Luigi Auristo, poet, Published 1514.
1238


finding paintings and illustrations for this chapters was pretty difficult i hope you guys like them

Canto I: The March of Fire
Beneath the sky, where Germany lay green,
A storm did rise, a force of wrath unseen.
King Léon rode, a god with bloodied hands,
And fire leapt where once stood fertile lands.
His banners blackened skies with smothered smoke,
The earth did quake with every word he spoke.
He was no man, but rage in human frame,
His heart a furnace, burning with his shame.
With every step, the Rhine did quake in fear,
And southern Germany shed many a tear.
The towns of Swabia, cradled by the hills,
Were bathed in flame, their rivers red with kills.
No prayer could halt him, none could change his path,
For Léon’s heart was chained to endless wrath.
Not for conquest, nor the spoils of war,
But vengeance, burning from his very core.
The people whispered, "’Tis no mortal king,
But death itself, and grief’s unholy sting."
As walls did crumble, fires reaching high,
The heavens wept but could not soothe the sky.
Léon, the bringer of calamity,
No blade could match his sheer ferocity.



added the trait via command because i didnt get enough stress but the narrative demanded it. see, something i use commands to nerf myself, actually.

Canto II: The War of Vengeance
No crown could sway him, no words cool his fire,
No plea for peace could quench his fierce desire.
He rode through lands not seeking fame or pride,
For vengeance was the wind by which he’d ride.
Léon’s war was born of grief’s cruel sting,
Not spoils, not conquest, nor the rule of kings.
No kingdom’s wealth, nor ancient family name,
Could bring him joy, nor ease his burning shame.
He sought no courtly praise, nor lasting fame,
But punishment, and retribution’s claim.
The empire groaned beneath his bloody hand,
And Léon razed each city where they’d stand.
For none could soothe the fire within his breast,
Save blood and war to bring his spirit rest.
The empire’s lords could only fear his gaze,
As Léon’s wrath turned lands to smokeless haze.
In vain they fought; their banners broke in two,
For Léon’s march brought death where'er he flew.
Not conquest—no, for grief had made him blind,
To all but vengeance, raging in his mind.
For in his soul, a hollow did remain,
Where once had lived a son, now claimed by pain.
The king who’d once been hailed as Magnificent,
Was now but Léon, the Wrathful, heaven-sent.



*Plays the hunting accident sound effect in your mind* Or not if you dont play EU4 and dont know what im talking about.

Canto III: The Death of the Son
In shadows deep, before the fire burned bright,
There once was Léon, bathed in holy light.
The king of kings, the noble father proud,
Who stood before his son, so strong, unbowed.
But death did come, from lands of foreign kin,
A plague from Swabia’s borders creeping in.
It swept through Burgundy on silent feet,
And left no house untouched, no heart complete.
The child fell, a flower gripped by frost,
And with him, Léon’s better half was lost.
The fever took him, pale and frail as ash,
No royal hand could halt the sickness’ lash.
The king who’d borne the cross to Holy Land,
Could only watch, his power turned to sand.
The boy did lie, his breath no longer warm,
And Léon’s heart was torn in raging storm.
Upon the bed, where once the boy had slept,
The king, in armor still, knelt down and wept.
His tears did fall, but none could soothe the flame,
That kindled wrath, that kindled endless blame.
For Swabia’s plague had stolen what he loved,
And from his grief, a vow to God above:
“To make them pay, in blood, for what was done,
To drown their land in grief for my lost son.”
O Léon, king once bathed in glory bright,
Who ruled with splendor, and with heaven’s light,
What grief hath turned thee now to wrath’s grim shade?
What love was lost, and fury made, unswayed?


Really cool image i found


finding images a reunion of scheming nobles is harder than one expects

Canto IV: The Gathering of the Nobles
Now crushed beneath his endless, fiery march,
The empire’s lords did gather in the arch.
Their eyes were heavy, full of darkened dread,
For Léon’s wrath had left their people dead.
They knew no blade could turn his heart to peace,
No sword nor siege could make his fury cease.
And so they schemed, in shadowed halls of stone,
To offer up a gift of bitter tone.
Not gold, nor land, nor chains of prisoners made,
But something darker in its power laid.
For power comes not free from mortal cost,
And those who wield it find their souls are lost.
They met him with their hands outstretched and bare,
A boon that glistened with a royal glare.
Its promise spoke of riches and of might,
But whispered curses hidden from the light.
The weight of kingship, and an empire vast,
Would make a tyrant of the man who grasped.
Léon, still blazing from his endless war,
Did pause before the lords, his heart unsure.
They offered him a path that promised more,
But wrapped in shadow lay what was in store.
What boon they gave, a gift of poisoned grace,
Did stay his hand, but doom him to his fate.
The power that could still his wrathful reign,
Would be the chain that bound his heart to pain.



Mongol Massacre
Excerpt from "The Art of Imperial Warfare: Treatises on Strategy and Command",
by General Auguste Montclar
(First published in 1647, Militär Universitéit vu Bourgogne)
1240-1243



In the annals of ancient armies, few campaigns offer as much material for military minds as the Mongol War of 1240-1243, led by Léon d’Ardres, Emperor of the Holy Roman Empire. This war, waged against the warriors of the Great Mongol Khanate, not only marked a monumental moment in the defense of Europe but also demonstrated the skills of Léon’s leadership. His strategic sense, terrain tactics, and coalition-crafting capabilities stand as examples of how a commander can completely crush even the cruelest of adversaries.

Context of the Campaign
One Thick ass boy
When Léon d’Ardres was offered the crown of the Holy Roman Empire to halt his campaign of devastation, he inherited an realm still reeling from internal injury due to his own terrific trashing of the empire, which had scarred much of the southern states of Germany. Yet while internal issues consumed the very early part of his reign, external enemies soon became much more pressing as the threat of the Mongol Horde hovered over the empire's eastern edges.

The Mongols had been a source of worry in Europe for some time; their march through the Kievan kingdoms in the 1230s had shocked Christendom. The invaders reduced realms to ruins and crushed the Catholic chieftains of the Rus. Their influence spread swiftly across the east, and by the time of Léon’s coronation, the Khan’s cavalry had made Poland a permanent post for raids into Saxony from Silesia. These invasions increased in intensity in the late 1230s, and by 1240, it became clear that without a unified and rapid response, the Mongols could soon engulf the entirety of the empire.


The Crafting of the Coalition
Me and the boys planning to overthrow the government
Used up all my renown on this


Recognizing that no single sovereign state could withstand the Mongol might alone, Léon labored to construct a coalition of European realms and rulers. He leveraged the vast web of alliances and allegiances woven by the d’Ardres dynasty over the centuries, calling upon Hungary, Bohemia, Britan, Andalusia, and many other lords and leaders. From Fes to Denmark, from Eire to Constantinople, Léon managed to marshal a force that, much to the Pope’s chagrin, was even larger than the legions he led during the Jerusalem Crusade.
Here, Léon’s diplomatic deftness shone. While many commanders might have focused solely on the immediate military menace, Léon understood that defeating an enemy as terrible as the Mongols would require an mixture of armies beyond his usual armored infantry. In fact, the crucial crossbowmen he later deployed came completely from allied and mercenary forces.




Initial Failures: the Plains of Poland
The battle images dont have hover text, dont waste your time

The war began in earnest in 1240, when the coalition clashed with the enemy on the open plains of Poland. Several glory-hungry generals, particularly those from lesser lords, pushed for a premature confrontation, hoping to rapidly reclaim the region. These early engagements ended in disastrous defeats. The Mongol forces, under the keen command of the Khan, unleashed their unmatched hit-and-run tactics, using their mounted marksmen to maul the heavily armored hosts in the wide, open plains.

Léon rapidly realized the ruinous risk of continuing to engage the enemy in such terrain. The plains provided no protection against the Mongol mobility and archery advantage. These early failures showed Léon that he would need a sharp strategic shift to stand a chance at victory.



The Withdrawal and the Battle of Lubsko

Here, Léon’s military savvynes shone. Rather than falling for further fighting in the flat fields, he fell back to the Polabian-Polish border, where the terrain turned forested, treacherous and thick. This decision, once derided as defeat by his detractors, was in fact a calculated campaign to draw the Mongol menace into unfamiliar and unfavorable ground. By positioning his forces in the forests and hills, Léon nullified the nomads' natural agility advantage.

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The Battle of Lubsko, fought in late 1251 near Dresden, was the hinge upon which history turned. Léon had carefully scouted the forested frontier, setting secret ambushes and crammed crossbowmen in camouflaged clearings. He allowed the Mongols to believe they were pursuing a fleeing foe, only to lead them into the treacherous thickets, where their cavalry became trapped by the tangled terrain.

Léon’s use of crossbowmen to cripple the cavalry, combined with heavily armed infantry positioned for a devastating direct strike, demonstrated his ability to use the landscape to leverage a lethal advantage. The Khan himself commanded the opposing army, but while his tactics had been effective in the open plains, they proved useless in the cramped cover of the forest. By the end of the day, the Mongol army had been butchered, battered, and broken, its ranks ravaged by ambushes and crossbow bolts.

This victory was not only a military milestone but also shifted the material and mental momentum of the war. The Mongol commanders, long accustomed to swift victories, were placed in a position unfamiliar and, to them, humiliating.


The Prolonged Pursuit and the Battle of Schwiebus

Following the famed fight at Lubsko, Léon waged a war of attrition, fighting across the forests and foothills of Silesia, aided by local Polish partisans who hailed him as a savior and liberator. The Mongol forces, furious and vengeful, seeked direct confrontations even in the most terrible terrain, where Léon’s relentless pressure slowly sapped their strength. Over the next two years, Léon battled in Silesia and in Bohemia, where he bested a large Mongol military force threatening his brother realm.

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This will be relevant later
Yet, as the campaign continued, cracks began to creep into his command. His determination to dominate and secure success spurred him to seek nothing less than complete compliance from his captains and soldiers.
There are accounts that speak of Léon’s severe sentences for insubordination, swift strictures in the face of perceived incompetence, and a growing impatience with any who failed to meet his exact expectations.
Though effective in enforcing order on the battlefield, such ruthless rigor began to strain the loyalty of those under his command.
This shift in demeanor is perhaps unsurprising, given the immense weight of the campaign and the pressures that come with leading such a vast coalition.

Some chroniclers suggest that the war left a deep mark on Léon’s mind as he grew increasingly stressed and more prone to sudden surges of severe rage.
These traits, while not fully realized at the time, would later become more prominent during his reign as Holy Roman Emperor.

The campaign culminated in 1253 at the Battle of Schwiebus. Here, Léon’s forces, bolstered by Bohemian battalions, Hungarian horsemen, and Anglo archers, faced the Mongols in a final, fierce face-off. The turning point came when one of Léon’s allied kings captured the Khan’s kin, forcing the enemy into negotiations.

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With the Borjigin boy as bait, Léon secured a settlement in which the invaders agreed to withdraw from Poland, ceding control of the territory to the Holy Roman Empire, finalized by an exchange of noble hostages for mutual promises of peace, non-interfearance in internal matters, and good treatment of the Christian communities in the nomadic empire.

Finding images of a pleace deal with mongols is hard, this was the next best thing
First time using hostages.


The Aftermath and Legacy of the Mongol War
This is what every WW2 map looks like to me
By 1244, Poland had been fully freed and folded into the Holy Roman Empire. Léon’s victory over the Mongol marauders remains one of the most monumental moments in medieval military history. The campaign not only halted the Mongol march into the West but surpasses even the Battle of Negev in cementing Léon’s legacy as the greatest general of his generation.

In the broader battlefield of history, Léon’s tactical turn from the fields to the forests serves as a classic example of how terrain can be used to trap, turn, and triumph over an enemy’s superior strengths. His decision to retreat and regroup in the Polabian woods, often misunderstood by critics, was a masterstroke of military maneuvering.

However, the aftermath of this war laid the foundation for future feuds within the empire. The cost of the massive mobilization, combined with the heavy toll the war exacted, sowed seeds of resentment among the nobility. Yet at that moment, Léon stood as a hero of the Holy Empire, proclaimed by the Pope as Protector of the People, known across Europe as a Champion of Christ.



Rage and Ruin
Monograph Excerpt from “The Reign of Léon the Wrathful: The Rise and Fall of an Emperor”
by Alluis Bernard von Chanteloup, (First published in 1854, Dijon University Press)

1243-1245

Chapter XII: Chained to Pain
From theHoly Roman Thriump mod. No gameplay significant i just thought it was a good header
Surprisingly little border gore
When Léon d’Ardres returned from his victorious venture against the Mongols, many believed he would lead the empire he had so gloriously expanded to even greater heights. He had, after all, been hailed as the savior of Christendom, a brilliant battlefield commander who had triumphed over seemingly invincible invaders, and a heroic figure whose name was celebrated across the continent.

Léon, who had governed Burgundy as a centralized kingdom, approached his new empire with the same expectations of efficiency and empery that had characterized his earlier rule. He believed that, after defending the empire and expanding its borders, he was entitled to the same obedience and order he had enjoyed in his previous domain. However, the Holy Roman Empire was nothing of the sort. Its vast vassalage, stretching from Denmark to southern Italy, was held together not by a burgeoning bureaucracy akin to Burgundy, but by the precarious power plays among the many nobles of the nation. Each prince ruled their domain as a near-independent monarch, and any attempt by the emperor to centralize control was met with fierce resistance.

Where he had once commanded cohorts that complied without question during the Mongol campaign, he now found himself surrounded by nobles who prized said independence and challenged his every decree. This stark contrast—between the iron control he exercised as a war leader and the disorderly disobedience he encountered as emperor—added to the growing tension within the court.

Léon’s early edicts, which aimed to assert authority and reduce the influence of the nobility, were received with hostility. The emperor’s vision of imperial integration—one comparable to his centralized command at home—quickly encountered the reality of the empire’s entrenched elite, who cherished their ancient rights and autonomy, and harbored resentment over the massive mobilization and costs they had borne during his campaigns. Frustration began to fester within him; where his commands once met servile subservience, they now encountered delays, disputes, and defiance.

His temper grew sharper in these new circumstances, turning each setback into a personal affront.
To the emperor, the nobility’s opposition was not a matter of political disagreement but a personal betrayal.
He could not understand why his vassals refused to follow him and fall in line, and each and each setback further embittered him.

Years of pent-up pressure finally reached a boiling point, and Léon, incensed by such insubordination, and having never been the coolheaded type anyhow, simply snapped.

What follows is every player's fantasy when that annoying vassal forces themseleves into the council

Story goes that when the Duke of Bavaria invoked his ancient right of counsel, a privilege afforded to him by previous emperors, and demanded a seat at the emperor's council, Léon’s reaction was one of immediate violent fury. It is said that Léon beat the bold Bavarian nearly to death with the pommel of his sword in the middle of his court, while his courtiers watched in hushed horror.

The emperor’s increasing irascibility began to color every aspect of his rule. The qualities that had made Léon a successful king in Burgundy—his steadfastness, his drive for power, and his fierce sense of justice—became, within the empire’s fractious framework, sources of alienation and anger. Any political disagreement or perceived slight quickly morphed into personal vendettas, with Léon interpreting any opposition as treasonous defiance of his authority. His court slowly descended into a palace of fear, where ministers and nobles alike dreaded provoking the emperor’s wrath.


First time plague starts in burgundy proper
It was during this time of mounting tension that plagues began to spread across the empire. The diseases, originating in western Germany, quickly ravaged the same territories that Léon had devastated during his earlier campaign of vengeance. The still-recovering towns were depopulated, and trade ground to a halt as quarantines and blockades were erected in a futile attempt to stop the relentless advance of disease.

Seizing on this opportunity, the nobility, especially in western Germany, launched a coordinated campaign of calumny. They blamed Léon directly for the plague, spreading the idea that his earlier campaign of vengeance had brought divine retribution upon the empire. Simmering discontent in the region, long hidden beneath the surface due to the praise he received for his heroic deeds against the Mongols, now burst forth. The people of western Germany, who had never forgiven Léon for the devastation he inflicted on their lands, were quick to accept the rumors.

A notable narrative regarding these accusations is a peculiar persistence on the part of the scandalmongers in spreading stories of sodomy, for reasons still shrouded in secrecy. In the years following Léon’s death, these accusations would become a matter of myth and mystery, dividing documenters and driving debate. However, by our time, most serious scholars regard these claims as little more than baseless bluster, concocted by his critics to corrupt his credibility and lambaste his legacy. Today, they are entertained only by the very gullible and those on the fringes intellectual circles.

The nobles’ efforts turned whispers into wails of discontent and mutters into open accusations. Word spread like wildfire that the emperor’s actions had cursed the land, and that the plague was punishment for his past crimes. Soon, Léon became known throughout the empire as the cause of their suffering, with many referring to the plagues as “the Emperor’s Epidemic.”

Never used this before, heard its better and more flavorful in CK2
As fear of the plague and popular unrest mounted, Léon isolated his court and his capital at large, retreating to the palace of Dijon. Inside this gilded prison, his mental state deteriorated further. Cut off from the rest of the world, Léon became more withdrawn, and his isolation—both physical and emotional—deepened.

The emperor’s attempts to centralize control crumbled completely. His reforms and the bud of bureaucracy he had planted perished pitifully. The landed lords, left unchecked, began to reassert their ancient privileges and autonomy. The empire once again returned to the familiar fragmented form that defined it for centuries.


The funny this is that it starts a duel, which means that no matter who you use it on. Old man, woman, child, your wife etc you give them a full set of armor and weapons first.

The isolation’s biggest victims were Léon’s personal relationships. His marriage to Margerita, already strained, devolved into a bitter confrontation. The kaiserin, long subject to Léon’s erratic temper, withdrew from court life entirely. However, this did little to protect her from Léon’s outbursts. His increasingly unstable behavior found its most terrifying outlet in her presence. Attempts by the empress to reason with him often ended in explosive arguments, with several accounts suggesting their clashes turned physical. By now, it was clear to the court that Léon’s temper had spiraled out of control, and those closest to him lived in constant fear of his frenzied fits.

It was well known within the emperor’s court that the empress had begun to fear for her life. Many in Léon’s inner circle shared her concerns, watching as the emperor had become a threat to those closest to him. In the final months of his reign, the emperor’s erratic temper worsened, and conspiracies began to take shape. The empress confided her growing terror to several of Léon’s advisors, who agreed that the emperor’s increasing instability posed a lethal threat.


I needed to look and ask around how to make a character start a scheme agaisnt another via commands. I needed the man dead for his ark to finish but everyone was too scared.

According to the most widely accepted accounts, Léon’s reign came to a violent and bloody end.

One night after a particularly heated argument with Margerita, just as the emperor was about to strike her in one of his now usual fits of rage, the doors to his chamber burst open.
A group of armed and masked men, co-conspirators of the empress, stormed into the room and fell ferociously upon Léon with swords and daggers. Though the emperor likely fought back, he was soon overwhelmed. Bleeding from his wounds, Léon collapsed to the floor, dying in a pool of his own blood, slain by the people who once swore loyalty to him.

Thus ended the life of Léon the Wrathful, not in the glory of battle or splendor of rule, shadows of shameless slaughter and betrayal.

Léon the Wrathful—as he came to be known—had sought to bring order to a chaotic empire, but in the end, it was his own inner chaos that consumed him. His hubris, his inability to temper his rage, and his unchecked drive for control led him to his own destruction.

And yet, for all his flaws, Léon’s story is also one of unrealized potential—the emperor who had once shown such brilliance on the battlefield, who had expanded Christendom’s borders and defeated Europe’s greatest enemies, could have also been so much more. His legacy, what could have been a most inspiring tale of the heights of humanity, became instead a cautionary tale—a reminder of the fine line between greatness and grief, between glory and ruin.


Thoughts and notes
  • well, this took much longer than i had wanted.
  • This is going to be kind of disordered to bear me with me.
  1. I ran out of style ideas after the poem, which is why the last two sections had a less unique format compared to the other two.
  2. Said poem was written by AI. I provided all of the material and a lot of direction and inspiration but it was a machine that ultimately assembled the words. Im sorry. I was compelled to write a epic poem because i wanted the part to feel mythical and heroic but i cant write a poem so i used the easy way out...
  3. I miss the Humour. I liked writing that biting sardonic humour and many of you told me you enjoyed reading it. As this experiment in intellectualism ends, i promise that the next chapter will be in the style of those fun previous chapters.
Now, for chapter specifics.
  1. Completing the Gautr decent legend gave a claim to the Holy Roman Empire, i wanted to use it as i had always planned for burgundy to eventually join the HRE, but needed an excuse.
    A convenient plague originating in the empire and killing Léon's firstborn was a decent excuse. In game it was a war of conquest mechanically speaking, but in-universe Léon just grieves via war and wants to punish the empire for causing his son's death, culminating in the electors just offering him the crown to make him stop. The ending has a lot of foreshadowing if you didnt notice.
  2. The war with the mongols was a lot of fun, actually took me a few tries.
  3. Accurate rappresentation of the experience of having to deal with HRE border gore. I hope you guys enoyed the beating up of that annoying vassal that demands a council position. Anyway yea tragic flawed character, descent into madness, fall caused by hubris and obsession, classic HSFG stuff.
Smaller trivia and thoughts will be in the images hover text.

I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter, next one should be up in a couple minutes.
 

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Legendary Léon’s Legacy: A most modern medieval man

Foreword
This chapter isnt really connected to the rest of the narrative, and wont be until/unless this AAR reaches into the rest of Paradox's games. It is as of now a worldbuilding experiment, a thought exercise, part of the RHOE extended universe if you will. If this does not interest you, the index button is on the upper right corner.

[EDIT] Due to forum bug, its not.

Grouss Gotenland
Excerpt from a recording of a Speech at a Political Rally
by Antoine Leclair,
Leader of the BVNIP (Burgundesch Volleksnational Iwwerhand Partei), Held in front of the Legendary Palace of Dijon, 1926


We Live in a period

Leclair (pointing proudly toward the Palace of Dijon):

"Behold! Here, in the heart of our hallowed and historic city, stands the sanctified monument to the strength and supremacy of our state! The Palace of Dijon—an immortal icon of the indomitable Burgundian soul—built stone by stone through the vision and valor of Keeser Léon the Magnificent, the Father of Fearless Burgundy! No, the Father of Europe itself!
Its the image of the legenday castle you can build after completinga high tier legend


(The crowd explodes with exultant cheers, waving flags in a sea of red and white.)

More than a palace, this is living, luminous testimony to the greatness of our nation! Monument of might, monument of mastery, monument—eternal!—to our people's pride and power! Not merely an edifice of stone, but a fortress for our identity, forged in the blood, bravery, and blade of our ancestors!

(Leclair pauses, gazing out at the sea of supportive faces.)

"Was Léon idle when he returned as victor from the Holy Land? Did he not smash the gutless Germans, make their lands his own, and seize the sacred crown of the Empire? The Germans, the Franks—all who fought him were laid low by Burgundian bravery. Léon conquered, and we shall conquer!

(The crowd roars even louder.)

"But that is not his only glorious deed! Under the leadership of Léon, monstrous Mongols—the most menacing threat Europe had ever known—were broken! When Europe shook, it was Léon who stood strong, shielding our lands and saving our people. He is the sword of Europe, the shield of the West, and in his sacred name we strive!"

(The crowd starts chanting, "Léon! Léon! Léon!")

"Léon's triumphs proved not just our might, but our manifest destiny. His triumphs showed that the Burgundians are not just brutish conquerors but a people chosen to command! It was Léon himself who codified the legend of our descent from the Goths, but only now, generations later, do we fully fathom the sacred significance of this lineage! For centuries, the truth of our Gothic blood had been buried beneath lies and laziness—hidden by those who feared our formidable force. But we—we!—have rediscovered it. The Burgundians, proud and peerless, are something other than a mere mixture of Frenchmen and Franks. We are a people apart, a people above!"

Far right extremist group finds old manuscript and uses it as basis to create esoteric race supremacy theory.

(The crowd cheers louder, chanting "Léon! Léon! Léon!")

"Unlike the feeble Franks, whose kings groveled at the feet of the Pope, or the godforsaken Germans, partitioned by petty princes and effete emperors, the Burgundians under Léon were united by the potent blood of the Goths, by the strength of our stalwart ancestors! Our bloodline is ancient, pure, and unbroken—stretching back to when our forebears ruled Europe with fire and fury! Burgundy is the rightful heir to the Gothic glory—the inheritors of their strength, spirit, and splendor!"

(The speaker raises his arms, and his voice rises to a crescendo.)

"And what of Léon's enemies? The cowardly conspirators, the jealous fools who slandered his name with lies and libel? Never able to stomach the superiority of the man, so they whispered wicked falsehoods: stories of perversion and deceit. But we know the truth. Their lies were the desperate cries of those who could never match his might! Léon was no deviant—he was a god among men, chosen by fate to lead us to greatness!"

(The crowd erupts in roars of agreement.)

"Léon's legacy is etched in the very heart of Europe. His victories against the Mongols, domination of the empire, and unyielding spirit continue to guide us to this very day! He was the conqueror, the champion, the creator of Burgundy's golden age."

(The crowd surges forward, fiercer as Leclair continues.)

"Let me tell you this, my fellow Burgundians: It was Léon the Magnificent who showed us that we are destined for dominion! He secured our shores, crushed our enemies, and gave us the knowledge that we are the chosen people, preordained not only for control of Burgundy, but of the whole of Europe!"

(He points toward the Palace again; now his voice is full of fervor.)

"And here we stand, in the shadow of the Palace he built—but we are not meant to live in shadows. We are meant to live in glory! We must reclaim our rightful role and restore Burgundy to the pinnacle of power! Through valor, through vigor, and victory, we will build an empire to endure a thousand years, just as Léon dreamed!"

(The speech reaches its conclusion.)

"So arise, Burgundians! Rise, descendants of the Goths! Let the world witness that the sons and daughters of Léon the Legendary will never be stopped! Our nation will once again lead Europe, as it was always destined to do! To victory! To empire! To Burgundy!"


Divisive Debate
Comment section from a FanFic in “Library of Our Own” (LO3)
by MedievalMindRot, 19 y.o. fujoshi, 2016


Spent a lot of time on AO3 looking at how it works before html editing this image into existance.

Queersader Kings
Chapter 1: Love in the levant

Imagine there are several paragraphs of steamy, smutty medieval man-on-man action here. Or don’t if you’re not into that, I guess.
See comments (12)

X_BurgundeschBlutt_X:
This is DISGUSTING. King Léon was NOT gay. Stop rewriting history just because it fits your stupid agenda. He was a hero of the Burgundian people, not whatever filthy fiction you freetards are fabricating. This is an attack on our history and our culture, and I’m sick of it.

Miku_in_a_Binder:
Wow, calm down. It’s just fanfiction.

And news flash, bigot: queer people have existed throughout history. Just because you don’t want to believe it doesn’t mean it’s not true.

There’s actually a lot of historical evidence that suggests Léon and Guiges had a very close, possibly passionate partnership. They were inseparable during the Crusades, and Guiges literally saved Léon’s life multiple times. People wrote about how much time they spent together—it was way more than what was “normal” for noble allies back then.

So yeah, there’s reason to recognize Léon wasn’t exactly as straight you want him to be. But I guess historical honesty doesn’t matter to you when it conflicts with your fragile sense of masculinity. Get over it.



X_BurgundeschBlutt_X:
What a load of lies. They were FRIENDS. Soldiers fight, forge bonds, and fend for each other all the time. That doesn’t make them gay. You’re just pushing your progressive political propaganda, turning every strong, masculine man in history into something he wasn’t. It’s sick.

Miku_in_a_Binder:
Oh, please... The idea that a man can’t be a warrior AND have a romantic relationship with another man is a modern invention. There are tons of examples in medieval and ancient history where close male relationships were described with deep affection, way more than what we’d consider ‘just friends’ today.

Also, are you seriously gonna pretend that Far-right groups, old and new, haven’t rewritten Léon’s legacy to fit their nationalist narrative? That’s literally what they do. They make him out to be some untouchable, hyper-masculine warrior-king when in reality, there’s a whole history of people talking about Léon’s leaning—even in his own time! People have been debating his desires for centuries!

And guess what? Most scholars today acknowledge that Léon likely had intimate relationships with men. The only people who deny it are fanatical fringe radicals like you, clinging to a fabricated version of history that never existed.

The fact that you’re so threatened by this says more about your fragile sense of identity than anything about history.


X_BurgundeschBlutt_X:
I’m not threatened!!!! I’m just tired of you degenerates making everything about sexuality. He was a KING, a courageous military leader, and an icon of family values! He brought glory to Burgundy, and he didn’t do it prancing around like some gay [Redacted Slur]!

Those claims about his relationships were baseless slander, spread by his political enemies who wanted to tarnish and tear him down. Real historians have already debunked this garbage a hundred times over. Léon was a hero—he saved Europe from the Mongols, built Burgundy into an empire, and you people reduce him to some pathetic character in your perverted fantasies. It’s disgusting.

And for the record, our patriots aren’t “rewriting history”—they’re defending it from people like YOU. Léon was a symbol of Burgundian greatness, and you’re desecrating his memory by forcing your agenda on it. He’d be rolling in his grave if he saw what you’re doing.


Miku_in_a_Binder:
LOL, you're crazy, stay mad.

Why does Léon’s queerness “desecrate” his memory anyway? Does being gay make someone less of a hero in your eyes? Queer people can be champions, kings, conquerors, whatever. History is more interesting when we accept that people were complex, not the cardboard cutouts you want them to be.

Nice try. Whether or not those charges were slander back then, the fact remains that people were debating Léon’s sexuality even during his lifetime. You can’t just erase queer history because it doesn’t fit your nationalist fantasy. It’s not some made up new thing, and it doesn’t take away from his accomplishments.

Let’s also not pretend that Léon was some perfect paragon. He ravaged his own realm, isolated himself in paranoia, and ruled through ruthless violence. The man was complex, just like every historical figure. You don’t get to pick and choose what parts of him are acceptable just because they make you uncomfortable.


X_BurgundeschBlutt_X:
You degenerates are disgusting. Go write about something else and stop desecrating the memory of our greatest kings. He would be rolling in his grave. Go fuck yourself.

Miku_in_a_Binder:
If it upsets you so much, don’t read it.

But trust me, history is way more interesting when you look past your narrow-minded view of the world. Léon wasn’t a saint—he was a person with flaws, just like everyone else. Acknowledging that Léon was more complex than some idealized idol doesn’t “desecrate” his memory. It makes him more human, and that doesn’t take away from his accomplishments. Maybe that’s what bothers you—that your “hero” was more flawed and real than you want to admit. Too bad for you.

Die mad. History’s moving on with or without you.



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Thoughts and notes
These were originally meant to be placed between the parts of the previous chapter. After finishing those i eventually re-wrote them to be placed at the end.
They are meant to be windows into how Léon's legacy is read, manupulated, debated in the "modern world". This whole "use sources from after the fact as format to tell the story" was as an exploration of Legacy as a concept, after all.

I felt a lot smarter coming up with the idea than in executing it.

Does AO3 actually have moderators? i dont thnk they do...

Yea the contrast between the fascist speech and the rather silly context of the debate is deliberate, its supposed to cause whiplash

Anyway, i hope you guys enjoyed reading it and perhaps, use it as inspiration for your own campaigns. Thinking about what the legacy of your characters can be a roleplaying guide, a fun thought experiment, a worldbuilding exercise or generally interesting way to approach the game.
 
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Scene 2: Legendary Léon’s Legacy: A most modern medieval man [REDIRECT]
Whenever you see some german looking text, its actually Luxemboughish. I have decided that whenever i want to write something in the Burgundian Language it will be analogized to Luxembourgish because both it and Burgundian are languages with strong french and german influence, but in a different way than English.

[EDIT] Due to forum bug i can't add a threadmark to the previous chapter. To make sure it still appears while browsing threadmarks or Reader Mode, i made this link. Click it to be redirected to the chapter.
 
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If Leon died shortly after the war, he'd probably be viewed as one of the greatest Emperors.

They are meant to be windows into how Léon's legacy is read, manupulated, debated in the "modern world".
Anyway, i hope you guys enjoyed reading it and perhaps, use it as inspiration for your own campaigns. Thinking about what the legacy of your characters can be a roleplaying guide, a fun thought experiment, a worldbuilding exercise or generally interesting way to approach the game.
That's exactly how I play video games (not just Paradox ones). I like to think about how my rulers and their decisions affect the modern world (or in Football Manager terms - how my storyline affects the wider world of football) - and I try to bring them into my AARs.
 
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Kudos to you @High Speed Flying Gladius ! These two parts were definitely experimental and a bit mind expanding.

As someone who is experimenting with different forms of poetry in my AARs recently (for a variety of reasons) I applaud your efforts even if you did get some help.

However, the 20th and 21st Century reactions to your ruler were more interesting and successful to me. The online forum commentary nailed much of the current discourse, and the authoritarian speech (unfortunately so common in the Americas and Europe now too) was an effective method. All of these rulers can be reshaped and molded to the communication needs of the moment. Makes me worry we have slipped into a post-factual society. So your methods were frightfully successful.
 
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Kudos to you @High Speed Flying Gladius ! These two parts were definitely experimental and a bit mind expanding.

As someone who is experimenting with different forms of poetry in my AARs recently (for a variety of reasons) I applaud your efforts even if you did get some help.

However, the 20th and 21st Century reactions to your ruler were more interesting and successful to me. The online forum commentary nailed much of the current discourse, and the authoritarian speech (unfortunately so common in the Americas and Europe now too) was an effective method. All of these rulers can be reshaped and molded to the communication needs of the moment. Makes me worry we have slipped into a post-factual society. So your methods were frightfully successful.
The for-fun side project being more successful and well recieved than the main project is something that happens a lot in my life. Im used to it.

Anyhow, im glad you have liked it and found it insightful.
Really liking the format of using a sort of scrapbook of sources in the updates- gives good insight into the historiography
Welcome to the thread @HIMDogson . I appreciate it.
Alas, i do warn that the next chapters will be in the narrated style of the previous ones, although i might bring up sources again in the future, but no guarantees.

If Leon died shortly after the war, he'd probably be viewed as one of the greatest Emperors.
Fun fact: The original plan for Léon's arc was that of a Heraclius-like figure, with him losing to the mongols as the catalist of his fall after other military successes. The chapter would have probably ended with cheekly with a phrase like that.
Eventually, i instead moved towards Ivan "the Terrible" + Fredrick II "Barbarossa" figure with a sprirkle of Richard "The Lionheart", as i thought it gave me more room to explore the character.
 
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I like the poetry at the beginning. I also like the contrast between Leon before and after his son's death.

"He sought no courtly praise, nor lasting fame" - this line is ironic since his rage led to an epic poem about his exploits, which counts as "lasting fame".

Did Leon blame Swabia for his son's death just because the plague originated there?

How did the Rus become Catholic?

Congrats on defeating the Mongols! Has the Horde broken up into smaller khanates yet?

Leon's life would make a nice tragedy. Maybe emphasize his hubris a bit?

RIP Leon the Wrathful. Who rules Burgundy now? Is whoever rules Burgundy also emperor of the HRE?

Where did those rumors of Leon's... homosexuality... come from? Were they just malicious slander, or was he gay in the game?

That speech is kind of worrying for the future. It seems to be setting up Burgundy as the villain (or one of the villains) of an alt-WW2... Also, is it implying that Germany's unified in the present day? What will you do if that doesn't occur in game?
 
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I like the poetry at the beginning. I also like the contrast between Leon before and after his son's death.

"He sought no courtly praise, nor lasting fame" - this line is ironic since his rage led to an epic poem about his exploits, which counts as "lasting fame".

Did Leon blame Swabia for his son's death just because the plague originated there?
Eheh, I guess it's a little bit ironic.
Yes, he blamed Swabia and the HRE as a whole because of it.
How did the Rus become Catholic?
Some of the princes did, some stayed orthodox. Eastern Europe is a place of religious competition between the two faiths.
The text specifies catholic because they're the ones Western Europe cares about, but i could have just used Christian.
Congrats on defeating the Mongols! Has the Horde broken up into smaller khanates yet?
Thank you.
Not at the time of Léon's death. It happens some time after that.
Leon's life would make a nice tragedy. Maybe emphasize his hubris a bit?
Fair point, but with the format and pacing i had in mind i coudn't really think of a way to emphasize it without just stating "he was hubristic," but im always open to input.
RIP Leon the Wrathful. Who rules Burgundy now? Is whoever rules Burgundy also emperor of the HRE?
It will all be revealed in later parts.
Where did those rumors of Leon's... homosexuality... come from? Were they just malicious slander, or was he gay in the game?
He did, in game, have the King of Léon as his lover.
In-universe, he still did, but no proof (letters and such) survives. The whole debate is predicated on how perstistant and confident his rivals were in saying he was and people assuming that either they had proof and it just hasn't survived, or that because it was his enemies that said it it's all bogus.

They're both wrong, because he was the best sexuality, Bisexuality. /s
Although you would be called a centrist(derogatory) if you said it in-universe.
That speech is kind of worrying for the future. It seems to be setting up Burgundy as the villain (or one of the villains) of an alt-WW2... Also, is it implying that Germany's unified in the present day? What will you do if that doesn't occur in game?
I have a outline of a plan of how i want the game to go and what the relationship between Burgundy and Germany will be across the centuries and how it could end up.(more specifically, 2 different possibilites about it)
Even if there is a change of plans and Germany never forms, the speech remains valid, just with a different focus, because Germany, the Nation can exist even without Germany, the State.
(I hope everyone in the thread knows the difference between State and Nation, im a bit of a stickler about it)
Regarding the "Villan" thing, I have some ideas about the unique character of Burgundian far-right extremism that make it significantly less morally reprehensible than the regimes of our own history(still bad tho).
 
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Scene 3: Merciful Mathieu
Scene 3
Merciful Mathieu

The throne room of Dijon Castle had seen its share of coronations, but never one quite like this. Velvet drapes and banners of crimson and gold lined the walls, shimmering in the cold light filtering through stained glass. The nobles stood stiff as statues, resplendent in their finery, faces as rigid as if carved from stone. They clutched their cups and their rosaries, careful not to fidget, not to glance too long at the empty throne—or the bloodstains that had stubbornly resisted every attempt to scrub them clean.

Ah yes, it was a coronation of the purest sort, the kind meant to distract from the awkward fact that the previous king had been murdered by some of the very people in attendance.
Skull Emoji

Not that anyone was going say it outright, of course.

The assembled nobles and courtiers, to a man, made great show of bowing and scraping before the new king, even as they exchanged furtive glances. Each tried to gauge the mind of the young man they had conspired to crown. What would he do with his newfound power? Would he wield wrath like a weapon—or would he be as pliable as fresh dough, waiting to be molded by their hands?

Then, there was Margerita, the empress-widow, standing at the shadows of the scene like a specter that everyone pretended not to see. Her face was a mask of serenity, but her fingers gripped the hem of her gown like a lifeline. After all, the boy they were crowning was her son—and she, his father’s murderer.

And in the center of this charade stood Mathieu, every bit the awkward figure in a borrowed mantle that was far too big for him. He wobbled up the walkway, each step as stumbling as the somber song that echoed through the hall. His eyes darted, dancing from face to face, and he could feel the weight of their gaze like a noose tightening around his neck.
Here's our handsome fellow, read ahead for his traits.
The crown, Léon’s dented crown—accessory of murder, as some wits had taken to calling it—gleamed dully in the torchlight where it rested upon a velvet cushion. Its twisted, bent edges hinted at its rather unique role in the final moments of the previous king’s life. One particularly popular account claimed that, during their assault, a conspirator grabbed the dying man's crown and used it to bash their skull in, as if to force some heavy-handed metaphors upon history.

The d’Ardres dynasty had always prided themselves on their iron will and unwavering ambition, wielding power with the subtlety of a sledgehammer.
Mathieu, however, was more like a finely-crafted lockpick—delicate, hesitant, and not entirely certain he wanted to open the door in the first place.

As Mathieu neared the throne, he accidentally stepped on the foot of a courtier. The man winced and raised his hands reflexively, expecting a strike that would certainly follow. For the merest instant, the specter of Léon loomed between them—a phantom of harsh sentences and violent hands. But instead, Mathieu turned a shade of scarlet that clashed horribly with his ermine-trimmed mantle and mumbled a flurry of apologies, bending slightly as if he might gather the spilled dignity back into place.
The courtier, surely stunned, stayed still and silent, kept his pose, giving the monarch an empty, wide-eyed look. Mathieu straightened, cleared his throat, and tried to continue up the aisle with some semblance of poise, all while cursing himself for being so clumsy.

As Mathieu reached the throne and knelt, and the bishop of Dijon stepped forward, lifting the crown high as he began the sacred rites. The ceremonial words rolled through the room like the droning hum of bees, the bishop’s voice steady and solemn. But if one looked closely, they might see the beads of sweat gathering at the man’s temples.
Mathieu, for his part, wasn’t listening to a word of it. His mind raced with a litany of anxieties: What if the bishop accidentally drops the crown? What if one of the courtiers suddenly accuses Margerita right in front of everyone? What if someone tries to assassinate me right here and now? What if the throne’s legs give out under me and I break my nose on the marble floor? What if...

If one were to gauge the passage of time from Mathieu’s perspective, one could imagine that a painter could easily set himself in front of the scenery and paint it in immaculate detail, such eternally long was the moment.
And if one were to take his fears as fact, it could be presumed the painting would depict a scene of tumbling torches setting clothes alight, wanton murder, servants of Satan snatching courtiers, and a shattered floor sending straight to the latrine.

And yet, through it all, he maintained that same serene expression, the one that all young kings learn to paste onto their faces. He wore it well enough to fool our imaginary painter—but hardly well enough to fool a court full of men who had spent the last years reading the little tells of neurotic rulers.

At last, the bishop lowered the crown onto Mathieu’s head. It wobbled slightly, as if unsure whether to stay there. He couldn’t help but wonder if the crown had been properly cleaned. Could you remove the residue of regicide with just soap and sacred water?

The nobles applauded, as decorum demanded, but the sound was as thin, barely filling the cavernous hall. The very moment the bishop stepped back, the pretense of enthusiasm evaporated.
The courtiers began to scatter like bugs beneath a lifted rock, slipping towards the exits and side doors with all the dignity they could muster. Some still managed to offer stiff bows and strained smiles as they backed away, but most made a beeline for the nearest shadowy corridor, eager to flee this suffocating charade.

Mathieu watched them go, and a thought crept into his mind—a thought that turned his stomach to ice. If I wanted to, I could have them all brought to justice. I could hold the threat of execution against them, a Sword of Damocles wielded to force them to bend to my will, make them pay for what they did to my father...

Its honestly really annoying how difficut it actually is to use this mechanic.

The thought lingered, cold and tempting. But Mathieu shuddered at the very idea, a chill of fear running through his veins. He imagined the whispers, the rumors—Léon’s son is just like him after all.

He swallowed hard and called out, his voice cracking slightly in the cavernous silence. “HALT!”
The word echoed in the hall, and the nobles froze mid-step, turning back with expressions of apprehension and dread.
The next moments were obvious, playing each person’s head at once, he would now order their summary execution for their crimes. The royal guards even began to draw their swords, ready to massacre the traitors at the king's command.
Mathieu took a shaky breath. His tongue felt thick in his mouth, but he forced the words out, his voice wobbling like a poorly-tuned lute.

When's the last time someone actually used this?

“I—I know there are... grievances. And I wish to begin my reign with a gesture of mercy. Therefore, I pardon those involved in... recent events. The past is past, and I seek to move forward.”
The stillness that followed was as solid as the stones of the castle walls. The bishop blinked, his mouth gaping. A few courtiers cast uncertain glances at each other, as if waiting for the punchline of some cosmic joke.

Then, like a cork popping free from a bottle, the nobles burst into jubilant praises, bowing and scraping even more fervently than before.
Mathieu, for his part, took this as a sign that his magnanimity had been well-received. He even managed a small, self-satisfied sigh of relief, a wise and benevolent ruler he certainly was.
I hope the previous paragraphs well demonstrate them even withouth the confirming picture.

As the nobles filed out through the grand, sweeping staircase that led down from the castle’s entrance, one man paused, closing his eyes and adopting the pious pose of a praying priest. “Oh, praise be to God, so kind and merciful, for He gave us such a magnanimous and... forgiving liege,” he intoned. As he finished his theatrics, he opened his eyes and found himself exactly where he wanted to be—just behind his most despised, loathed rival.

Leaning in close to his ear, he whispered with a smirk: “This is for calling my cheese passé at the feast of Saint Remigius, you cur.”
Without a moment’s hesitation, he gave a firm shove.
The poor man tumbled down the stone steps, screams growing fainter with each flip and turn. When he reached the bottom, the final crunch silenced him—forever.

The remaining nobles stepped onward, perhaps not even noticing.
Except for one, who kicked the cooling corpse for daring to bleed all over his new boots.

Thoughts and notes
Here is our new king. Quite the change is it not?
In this scene i wanted to introduce our two main players in this ruler's narrative arc.
  1. First, obviously, himself, compassionate but a bit cowardly.
  2. Second, the nobility, who will be all characterized as scheming bastards. As demonstrated from the last paragraph, depicting their attitude whenever they belive they can get away with it.
Presume the guy died in the family guy death pose.

Anyhow, i hope the return of the previous format and tone is well liked, i spent quite some time rereading old parts to truly grasp what made them so fun.
 
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One particularly popular account claimed that, during their assault, a conspirator grabbed the dying man's crown used it to bash their skull in, as if to force some heavy-handed metaphors upon history.
"Uneasy lies the head that wears the crown" would be an understatement for this coronation and reign. Mathieu has a lot of work to do. His stats are excellent at least.
servants of Satan snatching courtiers
Thankfully the king doesn't have to worry about that. This isn't CK2. ;)
 
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Have to agree with the other comments. Indeed the new king's stats are excellent as @jak7139 notes. However, @StrategyGameEnthusiast also analyzes this perfectly. He starts from weakness and the pardon further strengthens the killers.

What will he be able to work out with his mother moving forward. She is the true force at the moment. But can she keep her allies under control and in check?

Thanks for the update.
 
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This is pure gold!!! Everything is so well together! I definitely have to learn formatting from you lmao. I love how it combines narrative with dialogues and personal reflections.
Just because you don’t want to believe it doesn’t mean it’s not true.
Holy moly this sentence applies to everyone. What I did not expect in an AAR was the heated debate. It is the best part of the AAR in my opinion. People often forget to do their research, or simply dismiss the results because it doesn't fit their agenda, be they left or right. Nowadays people like being confortable over trying to research the truth. I love how the two extremes met, even with their usernames!

We tend to forget kings or great heroes of the past were humans. We also tend to forget that not everything went the way we wanted it to go. We all to often give others reducing labels like "bigot" or "degenerate", forgetting our own flaws in the process.

Mathieu, for his part, took this as a sign that his magnanimity had been well-received. He even managed a small, self-satisfied sigh of relief, a wise and benevolent ruler he certainly was.
Mathieu will certainly be a fun character to read about. For my part, my AARs lack these rulers, so I don't have the faintest idea how they'll be portrayed.

Great story, looking forward for this becoming a RHOE "universe"!
 
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This is pure gold!!! Everything is so well together! I definitely have to learn formatting from you lmao. I love how it combines narrative with dialogues and personal reflections.

Holy moly this sentence applies to everyone. What I did not expect in an AAR was the heated debate. It is the best part of the AAR in my opinion.
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Mathieu will certainly be a fun character to read about. For my part, my AARs lack these rulers, so I don't have the faintest idea how they'll be portrayed.

Great story, looking forward for this becoming a RHOE "universe"!
Omg thank you! I really appreciate your kind words and im really glad that you liked my more experimental works.
I definitely have to learn formatting from you lmao.
Before I started this AAR, I messaged an author I really liked and asked, "Hey, I'm really bad at starting stories. Do you mind if I copy the style and formatting of the introductory chapter of one of your AARs?"

I never imagined that my writing could one day be something people would seek to learn from and be inspired by. You have no idea how joyful and proud your comment makes me feel.
 
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