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Glad I was able to finish book One just in time for the Book Two.
We have an ambitious Doge and what looks to be a sci-fi, semi-dystopian story going on as well. Certainly interesting.
Welcome, and hopefully the story will meet the expectations - or better, it will continue to flow through the unexpected; cheers mate!



Filcat, I've finally got around to getting a start on this AAR. I've only finished the first chapter, but I have to say now: You certainly have an incredible way with words. Those first few opening paragraphs are pure poetry
Sincerely grateful for the kind words, glad that the story gives a joy in reading!

in a lot of ways they sum up my own personal experiences and evolving feelings with Paradox and its flagship series -- the initial spark of joy; the highs and lows of new releases, patches and DLCs; the exhaustion; the frustration; the occasional rage and exasperation; and, over and through it all, the siren song that always calls you back for just one more minute... just one more hour... just one more game.
Great summary for the prologue and the question of the Book I; though it escalates from there quickly into... yeah, anyway, bon appétit!

Bravo, sir. I'll definitely be looking forward to the Ottomans' unfolding ahistory, and your unique narration of it, with considerable interest :)
Welcome to the emporium of the pandemonium in the filcatic delirium; cheers mate!
 
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[**] Spanish Flea, from the album Going Places by Herb Alpert & The Tijuana Brass (1966)
 
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Book II - Chapter I - Part I
Alarm. All personnel should seek the designated safe-zones.
“Clear!”

Alarm. All personnel should seek the designated safe-zones.
“Clear! Move!”

Alarm. All personnel should seek the designated safe-zones.
“Clear! Ninth floor, clear!”

He is still holding the weapon, in position, locked and aimed at the exit, waiting for the tap.

Alarm. All personnel should seek the designated safe-zones.
“Clear!”

She taps his shoulder, and he kneels before the exit, waiting for her to move. She passes along, with pacing steps but adamant at each one, reaching the other side, turning, holding the weapon to the exit from her corner.

Alarm. All personnel should seek the designated safe-zones.
“Clear!”

The rest of the team enter through the door. Their steps are rhythmic, careful, fast. The moments elongate for the two waiting for the parade to end, then the nervous moment arrives, with increasing heartbeats, until they hear the word. The moment ticks, the seconds accumulate, the minute is not far yet still away.

Alarm. All personnel should seek the designated safe-zones.
“Clear!”

They wait for the brief in the release of their breath, then the reddened hallways emitting the upsetting sound of the alarm are realised, pulsating with every time the same tone, incredibly aggravating after the relaxation of the operatives.

Alarm. All personnel should seek the designated safe-zones.
“I said clear! Ninth floor, exit-door, clear!”

The alarm seizes. The hallways remain under the dim red-glow.

“Must be a malfunction.”
“You think?”

He grins behind his mask, seeing that she is still not relieving the weapon she is holding, and knowing the swearings she must be thinking of.

“Relax.”
“Sod off. Those cheap bastards have not even installed a proper alarm-sys, I bet.”

The team-leader emerges from the exit-door, holding his port-comm. “The ninth is clear. No sign of the assailant. Halt all search. Position at the sentry-points.” The port-comm replies with static. “Lieutenant, do you read me. Unit 93, reporting. The ninth is clear. Do you read me, over.” The port-comm continues in static, but the Sergeant turns his head, looking at the end of the hallway. “Bring me your port-comm. Yes, you, knucklehead. Move! And send someone to contact the fucking sec-sys. Turn this alarm-glow of shit colour off! Now!”

One operative runs towards the Sergeant, bringing his gear, whereas another one sprints further deep into the other end, until he is seen no more. The team gathers, filling the hallway to the last exit-door. All the rooms are emptied, secured, cleared, without any contacts. Another one is over.

“Sergeant? Now what?” growing impatient she asks.

Taking off his mask, clearing the sweat from his hair off his eyes, the reply comes in the amiable sound yet with each word adding to the frustration on top of the one before: “How the fuck can I know, there is no port-comm since the mid of the floor. What a wonderful shit show.”

He tries the new port-comm: “Lieutenant, do you read me. The ninth is clear, awaiting commands, over.” The static resumes, the Sergeant closes his eyes in the aggravating moment as if to gouge them out, then opens the lids, waiting for the unknown time. “The ninth is clear, acknowledged. Stand by,” the reply finally arrives.

“You heard it. Stand the fuck by.”

The two are waiting ready, hearing the order. They exchange their looks at each other, then she notices the darkened corner in the room through the exit-door.

“Sergeant. There is a door by the corner.”

“An elevator. Probably for the personnel to quick-evac,” the reply of the Sergeant encumbers with the exhaustion of the situation. Only in the brief moment of the silence afterwards, he turns and looks at her, then turns to the room, checking out once again, now without the mask sees it. “Shit. Is that light-glow active?” He points the gate-sys next to the elevator, but only now realising the light-glows of its signal in the same colour of the dim red they are in. “You, take the shithead, check it out. You two, position by the exit-door.”

She takes the lead, while hearing the murmuring complaints of her partner behind. Entering the small room, the windows conceal the slight out-glows under the dim red of the alarm-glow. Approaching the elevator, she positions herself beside the gate-sys, waiting. He taps her shoulder behind once, and she pushes the button. The elevator doors open, showing the large and empty interior. She enters, in the slowest steps, wielding her weapon at every corner of the wide elevator. “Clear!” Relieving from their positions, she turns back, then he enters. The two see the gate-sys inside at the same time, numbered from zero to ten, and they both realise the stain over the button zero, as well as the fifth.

“Which floor was it? The assault?”

“Seventh,” he replies, slowly, hesitating, trying to understand what she plans to do, then knowing what she is willing to do, shouts: “Wait – don’t!” She pushes the button zero. The elevator stands still.

“Sigh. At least wait for confirming with the Sergeant, eh? Sergeant, all clear here. The elevator does not work either,” and as the words pour, he sees the stain on the ground, then looks at her. Seeing the same stain, she pushes the fifth button, before he can jump to stop her.

The doors hurl towards each other, and the elevator starts with an unexpected speed, making the two lose their balance. It stops on the fifth floor with a slam. “I swear, you will be the end of my –”

The doors suddenly open, the two immediately ready their weapons, looking at the room.

“Fuck.”
“Shhh.”

She nods, then he nods to concur. She steps forward fast, wielding the weapon to both sides, reaching the wall in front of them. The right side ends with the giant windows; they continue to the wall she has reached, the left side leads to the doorway. After adjusting, her eyes grasp the difference in the colour: The alarm-sys in the room beyond does not function. She nods, then he exits, checking both sides again, reaching behind her, taking the position, then taps her shoulder. She taps back on the side, then he activates his mask-screen, initiating the inner-comm. “Fifth floor, at the elevator room. Awaiting commands.” The inner-comm provides the reply immediately, echoing in his ears, stimulating his neurons: “What the bloody hell are you two doing?”

“Sergeant, the fifth was not cleared at this end. Awaiting commands.” The reply waits for the moments, then pours under the static: “Hold on. The elevator does not work. We will arrive in the next ten minutes.”



They hear the blast of the glass, coming from the room beyond the doorway they are looking at, ready on their weapons. “Loud blast was heard. Requesting commands.” The inner-comm does not reply. She notices it, yet proceeds with the assault position.

“Wait! I did not receive any replies!”
“If the assailant is there, they will be ambushed. Follow me, now!”
“Fuck!”

She enters the room through the door, hardly seeing the possible blind-corners through the dark, only able to see the out-glows through the numerous windows. The winds of the outside roars through the broken sides, the noise of the surroundings filling the room blocks her ears. Positioning behind what seems to be a desk, she waits for him to follow. Activating her mask-screen, she orders a scan-surround. He reaches her, taps her shoulder, checks the sides one more time. The scan-surround prompts the room size, the possible exits, the function of the room, the Admissions Office, unused since the last year; the indicators show the broken glass, and the shut-down systems, the number of speak-terminals, the ceiling-glows, all non-functional, but no biological signals. The scan-surround starts again, then she notices the glitch. She takes her mask off. “What are you doing?!” she hears his yelling in whisper.

She stands up, aims the weapon at the point next to the window side with the broken part that allows all the sounds and the winds and the out-glows to enter the darkened room.

“Freeze!”


She looks at the figure, without any flinch, with the weapon aimed at, and ready to fire. The figure stands up, turns back. Unable to see clearly due to the out-glows, she squints her eyes of deep brown on the target: “Do not move!”


For the faintest moment stretched between the seconds in the rotation of the world around itself, she sees the eyes of the target. They are locked at her, the eyes of jade.


The figure turns to the broken side of the windows, runs towards it, and before she could react, before she could blink, before she could scream once again, before she could even breathe out, the figure reaches the sill at once, and jumps over.






CHAPTER I - Part I


“…and the Patriarch; see, the one that is laughing; the name is Teodoro. I do not know where His Excellency is from; actually no one knows. I even suspect that Blazio does not exist at all; of all the places I have seen in the Latin lands, no one has ever heard of such village, let alone a town.”

“Yes but –”

“Listen, the rumours are numerous and wild. That the Patriarch normally dresses up in tunics of the simple folk, he eats simple food and drinks cheap wine, and he even sits beside the Doge for his council. The Council, I mean, that I was told of. As if a lay councillor.”


The two are whispering as the ceremony is ongoing, when the noise of the masses overwhelms the sounds of the day. The bright of the sun shines ever-more on the faces of participants for the new life ushering the age of wonders for the ones in the grandiose gathering, what otherwise would be unthinkable, unprecedented, unbelievable. Already accommodated and prepared for it, yet still in the amazement of the moment, the celebrations are raging in their pompous loudness, as the two are embroiled in the violent crash of the event on their lives, on the lives of the others, on the lives of all.

“Perhaps a Franciscan?”
“Doubtful. I must inquire my friends in Rome.”

“And yet their representatives are here, too.”
“Yes.”

“Disturbing. The Papacy is getting too close with these merchants. They are all common folk, dear Jörg.”

“My friend, please do not tell this aloud, and never to anyone around. I have invested great amount of time and ducats to sway the Doge’s Palace. Our interests lie in the hands of them.”


The dark haired one with the frowning eyes of the blue looks at his friend, raising his lips in the smirk of disbelief. The blond haired one with the bewildered eyes of the brown is still looking at the crowd, astonished, yet searching for the key figures to continue on his report.

“You take this too seriously. The Emperor has other ventures.”

“That may be true, yet they hold the riches far beyond than ours. And now this city of all troubles.”

Now the widened surprise sits on the looks of the eyes of the blue, whereas the eyes of the brown are focusing farther away in the crowd for greater clarity.

“Careful, Jörg.”

The search ends for the eyes of the brown, realising the change in the voice, then turns to the eyes of the blue, and they lock on each other in the clash.

“Maximillian, you do know why we are here.”

“Yes, and that does not change who we are. We are envoys in the service of the Emperor of the Romans.”

“You are insulting my skills, dear friend. I am merely pointing out what the fact is, that stands still but beside our wishes. The fact is, this Foscari, is not the Doge I have met during the War of the League. The Venetians bled themselves out fighting against the Visconti, only for that castle in Brescia. Now it was told to me that he does not even mention Filippo Maria of the Visconti any more, but declared an obscure condottieri as his archenemy – Sforza. He thinks that petty soldier is the nemesis of the Serene Republic, he says they won the war against the Duke of Milan but lost to that one mercenary captain, and he urges everyone he meets to take a stand against him. This is far from what I perceived about him when we first met.”

“Our wishes?”

“That to make these people – make them understand and acknowledge and abide with the authority of Vienna.”


The two get involved in their looks, as the moments fill the uneasy silence despite the unyielding noise surrounding them.

“I understand what you point out, yet what you are referring as the facts for these… Venetians, are mere wishes, but only of yours.”

The eyes of the brown are now cracking in sparks under the knitted brows, while the eyes of the blue are comfortable with the higher position they achieved in the argument of the two, and the hesitation in the moment of the words finds the former in the surprise.

“But I am – ”

“Yes, you are working for that purpose, but the Emperor is not looking for such petty support from such… ordinary people.”

“Your endeavours in Iberia may have been fruitful, but we must invest in the Serene Republic if we ever want to benefit from the trade through the Adriatic.”

“We?”


The silence becomes the norm when the eyes of the brown relinquish a breath of defeat in the face of the last question after the unending series, but making his last stand with tired looks against the eyes of the blue.

“I meant the Emperor. The Royal Palace shall benefit.”
“Beside your own trade fleet?”
“Just as your estates in Barcelona are thriving under the protection of Joan of Aragon.”


The sudden charge of the words widens the eyes of the blue in the face of the insinuated meaning of the counter argument by the eyes of the brown. The silence sits in between the two, whereas the noise of the celebrations rises to the point of deafening the ears. In the last moment, the blue admits the defeat, and looks away for a distraction to avoid further clash with the brown. The brown accepts this retreat, concurring with the blue, and does not push the tension to the point of break, but turns to the crowds in the hall to continue on his search.

“And the general?”

“The one boasting with the highest-pitch, that one is the Commander of the Army of Venice, Achille Barbiano Belgioioso. The general is standing to the right of him, Alvise Casanova; the silent one; see how subtle his gestures are – as if interrogating everyone he looks at.”

“And they are…?”

“Both from the Great Council, very recently given the positions they hold now. Even the Admiral, but I have not met, nor seen him. All are rumoured to be of The Council, but only exclusive to the Doge.”

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“Strange, most strange. The commander fashions himself as if a lord? Red and purple cape – does that bare any meaning in your knowledge?”

“Apart from being stylishly expensive, no, it does not. They are truly commoners.”


The eyes of the blue emit the surprising frown to the eyes of the brown; left in questions, but both relieve in their smile realising the truce between them.

“My friend, I value these people greatly, yet I never contested your view on them. They are petty merchants, and their supposed nobility does not rank as in the Imperial lands, however they may have such claims as patricians.”

“And you remained among these… bankers and oarsmen for years, while keeping your calm? I truly admire you. Remind me never to be your enemy.”


The eyes of the brown squint between the forehead and the cheeks while smiling back, as the peace between the two is reaffirmed despite their different paths, yet for the same ambition.

“Are you able to find –”

“Wait. I have seen him. Apparently he has been observing us afar from a corner.”

“Then he has the upper hand; might have seen us arguing. We shall wait him to come to us. That will dissolve his current advantage.”

“He has noticed me. Yes, you are entirely right.”



The dark but with penchants of the grey haired one with the eyes of the amber takes confident steps towards the two, looking them both in the eyes, starts to smile while approaching, and makes a subtle bow when finally arriving. The bow does not confer the respect the two normally accustomed to, but retains the image of a powerful host welcoming the guests. All three know what every gesture means, and they all accept the situation they are in, however the customs would have dictated otherwise, in another time, in another place, in another circumstance.

“Lord Jörg Seyssel, I have been looking for you. Have you arrived today or…?”

“Lord Sebastiano Rovereto, may your days shine under the sun in the glorious victory of the Serene Republic. I arrived yesterday just in time for the consecration of the new Patriarch of Constantinopoli. I would like to introduce you to Lord Maximillian of the Quadt, a dear friend to me and to my family. He has arrived by the morning, sadly missed the events of yesterday.”


The eyes of the amber look at the eyes of the brown, whereas the questions are visible over the smiling they provide.

“My lord, no noble has been addressed as, else given the rank of a lord in the Serene Republic since the times of Ducatum Venetiae, and I would sincerely doubt if it had been as such even during those times.”

“Lord Jörg has great familiarity to your customs, Noble Sebastiano. I am certain there is no other underlying agenda beyond his words.”

“That is why I humbly appreciate, Lord Maximillian, but I know what he exactly tries to achieve with that form of addressing.”


The eyes of the blue return to the state of frowning, realising the flow of the words not conforming to the plans of his friend, and the eyes of the brown are silently wavering while trying to find the way to save the moment. As the silence of theirs within the thunderous noises around grows ever to reach to break the unseen truce, the eyes of the blue lean forward.

“Perhaps we should speak in a different venue of the palace.”

“From here to the Hippodrome to the Walls, thousands are cheering and dancing and drinking. More so after the remaining rebels of the… fallen empire were defeated. If you are looking for privacy, have no concerns, as my men have been active since your arrival, my lords. We will maintain our conversation only to be exclusive to us, yet among plain crowds, hiding not in the shadows, but under the sun.”


The eyes of the brown look at the eyes of the blue, and both agree on the insufficient position they are in. The eyes of the amber glare at them, and then the walk starts through the passages, along the hundreds in the halls, out of the palace into the streets filled with legions of people. The two, involuntarily but obligated, follow the lead. The eyes of the brown come to the sense of the moment, focusing at the plan that has been in the working for several years. The words follow according to every point of every letter at every stop they have been studied, until the day would come; this day.

“The Serene Republic is a valuable friend of the Empire, Noble Sebastiano. We have been exchanging cordial letters and agreements between the Doge’s Palace and the Royal Palace, more than since the disaster of Varna. His Majesty is dearly considering greater relations with His Serene Doge Francesco Foscari.”


The eyes of the amber keep the silence in the steps that cannot be heard through the crowds, yet the eyes of the blue are crushed under the ever-angered frown in response, as the words coming from the eyes of the brown meet no other gesture from their addressee. In a pleasant surprise, the three manage to find a relatively empty spot under one of the arches on the streets they have been marching through, despite the overwhelming crowds they are surrounded with.

“His Majesty, you said, Lord Jörg.”

Baffled, surprised, knitted the brows, the eyes of the brown reply, “Yes. His Majesty Frederick the Third of the Habsburgs, Emperor of the Romans, King in Germany, King of Italy, Duke of Styria, Carinthia, and Carniola, would like to extend his most generous friendship to His Most Serene Doge.”


The eyes of the amber patiently follow the brown eyes of the one providing the explanation, while remaining dormant one can ever be. Yet, the words of him hit the two with an incredible impact.

“King of the Romans. The Pope has not formalised the coronation of His Majesty yet, is it not true?”

The anger is visible from the eyes of the brown and the blue, yet the former pair is more skilful to regain the senses to continue the words.

“It is true His Excellency Pope Urbanus has not sent his words so far, but that is also a formality upon the sovereignty of His Majesty, which is already accepted by the princely-electors. His Excellency Pope Eugenus was very sympathetic, if it matters. Besides the current situation, it will be also beneficial for the reputation of His Serene Doge, if this process is accelerated by these conversations, since it is known that the Papacy is in His Serenity’s circle of friends. The Circle.”


With those words, the eyes of the brown remain confident showing what is known to only a handful people among all those considered, is in possession of those, too.

“Good. I would not trust you at all if you were not such resourceful, Lord Jörg. We can speak on common grounds, as equals, then.”

“This is enough. You need the support of the Royal Palace, if you want to survive against the Turks,” the eyes of the blue grow impatient, making the move, in contrary to the eyes of the brown.


The formalities cease in the words, the eyes of the amber shine with the smile, but not giving up in defence: “Finally, we are speaking in true forms of ourselves. Yes, that is what I fear the most. Yet the Empire needs the roads of our Mainland Domains, the Empire needs our ships and ports, if it ever wants to reach Italy. The Shadow Kingdom is not a rumour whispered in the dark corners of the palaces, but words on the streets, in the villages and the towns and the cities, of the people. You are in need of us more than we would be of you.”

“Careful, Sebastiano. I arrived in this city, only to be insulted by this attitude. We are not even greeted as we deserve as Imperial Envoys, nor given a place for the celebrations, but put away on a far spot in the palace. Whatever your plans are, it does not seem to bring fortune for the Serene Republic.” The eyes of the blue are in furious sparks, and the eyes of the brown are in the calm of moment, yet also agitated.

“The words of Maximillian hold truth, this would be unacceptable. Sebastiano, what is the meaning of this? All conversations we have had so far, only to face such a petty end; did you truly aspire for this?”

“No, Jörg, not at all. I do know what you wish, and I concur with you.”


The amazement is once again exploding in the eyes of the brown and the blue, but this time makes them compelled to await what may follow those words. Establishing the supremacy, the eyes of the amber vigorously focuses on the subject, what seems to be already in plan just as the other two have.

“Yes, I see the interests of our Serene Republic are aligned with the Royal Palace, if we want to hold off the Turks. Despite what happened in Varna, and particularly so after that battle. I consider it is equally beneficial for the Imperial interests, since the return of the Jageillon to the thrones of Poland and Lithuania, and since the Bohemians elected that Hussite Podebrad for theirs. I should not need to remind you that every palace from the Frankish lands to the Balkans has also heard about the flatulent claims that Bourgogne duke bursts out. I also see that His Majesty considers our mutual agreement of utter importance, so has he sent not one, but two envoys for the celebrations here.”


The eyes of the blue retreat to the reserved corners for the unexpected consensus they have just received, while the eyes of the brown are eager in the words, yet hesitant for the meanings behind.

“I am truly delighted to hear this consent finally but by the words of you. You have been excessively careful in evading our many conversations, Sebastiano. But is this the decision of the Great Council, else a wish of yours? His Serene Doge has been avoiding my petitions so far.”

“The decision belongs to the Council of Ten, and it is approved by the Forty. Once the Senate approves, the College of Signoria will abide, so will the Great Council. The Doge is another matter, a more urgent one, but with the confidence of my case presented, the Senate will proceed with the elections.”



The sound is forsaken from the arch they have been discussing under, for the shortest moment, yet the longest of their lives. The eyes of the blue frantically look around for any intrusion they may have, however needless it is. The eyes of the brown are lost in the widened opening they are in.

The conquest of the city of Konstantin was able to shake the world for all. At that moment for the two, the shaken world is trembling under their feet, with no end until it shatters now it seems.

“Are – are you considering…?”

“With all the power he possesses…?”

The eyes of the amber are shining in the flash, contradicting the smile they retain underneath. The words ponder as lightnings.

“Yes. The Doge is not only ever-powerful, yet more popular than ever. He has brought the riches of the east by effectively monopolising the Adriatic, hired more venture captains than ever before to consolidate his own interests. He even has extended the finances of the Serene Republic for those mercenaries served during the War for Constantinopoli, promising them lands in the new Mainland Domains. The Arsenal has been expanded, the docks have been busy building galleys. You have been travelling, Lord Maximillian, but while on the road, our messengers were faster than your entourage. I was informed that Ludovico of the Cornaro family has managed to receive the blessing of King Joan; the Serene Republic is now considered as an ally of the Aragon.”

The round of erupting in dismay of the surprise is now on the eyes of the blue, whereas the eyes of the brown frown in thunders against them. Both exchange their sudden dissolution by what they hear, yet both agree upon that their acquaintance is a seriously dangerous opponent contrary to their underestimating expectations, managing to cause chaos among the two while discussing the shared goals of the three, only within moments apart. The eyes of the amber know exactly what they are looking at, how they are gazing upon, why they are glaring at them, with each word meticulously considered long before, even longer than what the two ever had planned for.

“But do not feel threatened, my lords. Besides in the knowing that none was approved, not even discussed in the Senate, but decided only by him and The Circle of his councillors, I do have the power of the Council of Ten. His corrupt dealings will take greater precedence when it comes to deal with the Doge, and hear my words: The time is nigh for the Doge.”

“We need… We need assurances, Noble Sebastiano.”

“Do no worries for the inner-workings of our Serene Republic, my lords. In your words, we are just common folks, is that not true?”


The eyes of the blue are now in the utter defeat as shaking under the frowning brows, and the eyes of the brown are blinking while a stern breathing is heard. The stillness of the eyes of the amber becomes a terrifying focus.


“I secured a reliable source from the so-called, unlawfully established, illegally operated Circle of the Doge. His skills have provided all the evidence I need for the case against him,” conclude the eyes of the amber, relaxing them over the cordial smile. “I consider that I have two great friends in the service of the Royal Palace of Vienna, and I never forget who my friends are. And my foes; I never rest until they are… no more.”


“Noble Sebastiano,” the eyes of the brown regain all the power in their focus, “What you are planning is – ambitious, to speak blunt. He is a war hero. Your Republic’s war hero.”


The eyes of the amber turn and look at the street, as the steps depart from the shaded part under the arch. The words follow just before they are lost in the crowds.



“Yes. And the war is over.”




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[*] They All Fall of the album Goliath by Zack Hemsey (2018)

Edit 27.01.2024: Corrected formatting, grammatical, factual, semantic mistakes; removed redundant parts.
 
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It looks like Venice is doing well...

These Austrians are very elitist... I wonder if that will cost them. Sforza was mighty in OTL, especially...

Are they technically there for the crowning of the Latin Patriarch of Constantinople or the Greek (Eastern Orthodox) one?

Are we going to be following the Venetians now?
 
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It looks like Venice is doing well...
Are we going to be following the Venetians now?
Once constantinople is conquered before anyone else, venice sets its course to become a turbo-tag, when controlled by the player.
More so if the run starts without any major rivals - which the code sometimes does with absurd pairings: Either of the usual band can start as a rival of the venice-tag; austria, or castile, or france, or england, or poland, or aragon, etc. If not, the venice-tag has the advantage of being friendly with every large or turbo-tag at the beginning (due to relatively large army).
With one condition: If the run starts also without the papal states as a rival. A papal rivalry is hyper-dangerous for the venice-tag, since the code starts by excommunicating each of its rivals right away; excommunication makes it impossible to establish initial-alliances, and even annihilates any chances of starting a trade league.
This run started without such troubles, thus one only needs an alliance with the pope. The rest depends on the city: If conquered by the venice-tag (or any tag), it shatters the game-world.

Even if this greatly weakens them, such a move does not matter for the code-ottos. They are ottos, and they have always more troops than any other tag, and they are deadly. They can annihilate anyone in the vicinity.


Bad news for the code-ottos is that the player is in the vicinity, as the venice-tag.


These Austrians are very elitist... I wonder if that will cost them.
One wonders.

Sforza was mighty in OTL, especially...
True. In the game, he is prompted as a chad-general first, then becomes the ruler of milan as a turbo-15-monarch, through scripted-events. But the code is not capable of harnessing his powers, and botches its own chances. Besides, the player is the venice-tag, fully knowing what sforza is capable of, which makes the situation... unfortunate, for milan.


Are they technically there for the crowning of the Latin Patriarch of Constantinople or the Greek (Eastern Orthodox) one?
Latin.
Traditionally, among all those of the college of cardinals, the venetian one is unique with the title of patriarch of venice, while being only an ordinary bishop of the archdiocese (along with patriarchs of lisbon, jerusalem, and one in india).
Originally it was separate as the patriarchate of grado (near friuli), and the bishop of venice (olivolo-castello) was subordinate but independent. In 1451, pope nicholaus the fifth enacted the golden bull to suppress them into patriarchate of venice; the senate of venice was responsible for the election of the patriarch-cardinal.


In the run, though, after Pope Eugenius the fourth, another one emerged as Urbanus the seventh (April 1449). By the Papal alliance, Pope Eugenius had decreed establishing the Patriarchate of Venice with Teodoro chosen by the Doge as the patriarch. After the conquest (1 August 1449), Pope Urbanus approved the merging of the Patriarchates of Venice and Constantinopoli (so; converted the province from orthodox to catholic, by 1452).
 
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I'm interested in both the modern and Venice storylines. I wonder if/how they relate to each other?
 
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I'm interested in both the modern and Venice storylines.
Cheers mate; hopefully it will continue to be of interest.

I wonder if/how they relate to each other?
Unfortunately not fond of giving any spoilers, other than what may have been unveiled so far, else not.
 
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Book II - Chapter I - Part II
“…and the people have to hear about these atrocities that are occurring daily. This is not a simple problem as Worchester shamelessly claim here as we speak – ”
“Excuse me, but I earned my title as doctorate of philosophy. It is Dr. Worchester.”

“– as we speak in this limited – ”
“Dr. Worchester. I demand my title to be – ”
“– if I could be allowed to finish my part – ”
“Mr. Elenga, if you could give the courtesy of addressing your opponent as he desires, it would elevate the level of the convers – ”

“No sir; I will not credit his pseudo-title that he has procured from one of his pseudo-edu complexes. A fake diploma and a work that is comprised of plagiarism and insignificant garbage does not entitle him a doctorate, nor would he deserve such should he made an actual academic study in whatever field he would choose to poison.”

“You hear what we are dealing with. Fortunately the people will not listen to someone who despises the voice of theirs by default – ”
“You are not the voice of the people. You are the voice of your company, one of the many that is just selling a different product.”
“And what product that might be?”
“War. You are buying lives and selling death. You are a shameless agitator to incite hatred among the people to instigate a mass-war against – ”
“I cannot accept such accusation, but it is true that we are against those unnatural beings crawling among us. They do not deserve such rights that you ridiculously defend – ”

“Those are humans, too. Whether born in natural conditions else produced, we are all humans.”
“Unbelievable. After hours of discussion you regress back to this pedestrian view that we are all equal supposedly. Mimetics are not our equals, sir. They are artificial products, created by our minds, made by our hands, bound to our will. We do not need them, yet thousands are made every year. They are used by the thousands. They are destroying our way of life in thousand ways. Their production should be regulated further to minimum and their current numbers have to be – ”

“I know what you claim, everybody knows what you are. The mass eradication of populations – ”
“They are not humans. We are.”
“– of populations, showing what kind of human you are.”
“I am exactly the kind that people want. The Defenders of the Humanity Group is a company with the sole purpose – ”
“– of selling misery, war, death. You do not need to cut into my time to brag about your corporation. It is common knowledge you are the shell-comp of the Sword paramilitaries – ”
“I beg your pardon, sir? We are not a shell-comp. We are a legitimate business, registered in the West Index, operating in the Greater York Stock-Ex, representing two-percent of the constituents in the Board-Gov. We have high-ed programmes and we have no affairs with such – ”

“– and you are unable to wait for and listen to your opponents in a discussion. You are just a petty board-exec of a lowly scam-firm that operates by the legal esc-clau to brainwash the people and to sell arms for more profit. You are only a cacophony-machine.”

“How dare you! I am a human!”
“Gentlemen, I think we are diverging from the topic. There is no need to reduce the discussion into pers-attacks. Mr. Elenga, please conclude the point you were making.”
“I am a human! I demand an apology!”
“I am not giving any apology for what your quality is, but yes, you are a human of naturally-born kind.”
“Dr. Worchester, please allow your opponent to speak.”
“I protest, Mr. Covarrubias. Mr. Elenga is making baseless accusations and – ”
“Please, Dr. Worchester. Mr. Elenga, please continue.”

“I was about to conclude with the atrocities made against the humans of artificially-born kind. Since eight years we have been able to make significant gains in improving their livelihoods and advocating for their rights, yet at the same time the crimes against them have multiplied by seventeen times more than before. This figure we were able to gather from the public-arch, but I am afraid it covers only the registered incidents, and only limited to LA Charter of the Board-Gov. After the dissolution of the Nightspec – ”

“A dark decision that was. We need those heroes of the humanity back.”
“Dr. Worchester, please do not cut in. Do continue, Mr. Selenga.”
“It is very interesting to see the board-exec of the Defenders Group to speak highly of a pseudo-legal unit that had been in conflict again with them when it was full-func.”
“We had our differences for the method of fighting against the mimetics, but those units were still doing the righteous job – ”

“– which was hunting down human beings.”
“No. Mimetics were not, are not, and can never be considered humans.”
“Dr. Worchester, please do not interrupt. Mr. Elenga, please continue on your point without engaging tertiary comments on your opponent, sir.”

“They were nothing but murderers with the legal protection provided by the Board-Gov of the republic. The people of LA were jubilant when that unit was shut-down, on the contrary what Worchester claims. But the firms, corporations, companies, groups, associations, enterprises, conglomerates of global indexes still find other ways to exert control on them, since they see them as their merchandise. The problem starts from this basis, then goes on with minor incidents but over global scale. The result is that the tragedies continue happening, whether caused by legally accepted death-squads else unlawfully by individuals. I have not even started to discuss the figures from the other charters. We need to push for structural changes in the legislation, and we need to establish counter-exec branches in order to protect humans of all kinds, and we definitely have to halt the functions of the paramilitary companies just as those of Worchester here. They are all illegal, unlawful, and dangerous. They are selling arms in mass proportions and they are indoctrinating a deadly cause to hundreds, which will lead to another collapse of our society.”

“Your accusations are baseless and petty – ”

“On the contrary, ours are based on the facts gathered from the reports of innumerable atrocious incidents. Any prosecution against these criminal acts is buried under the bureaucracy of the Board-Gov, and the ongoing procedures are effectively silenced by its exec-firms. In West Index, the ter-org Sword is the prime example. Any small- to mid-scale attack by these groups, which causes numerous deaths of humans of all kinds, is prosecuted by law, yes, yet only a couple of them can be processed conclusively and the justice is not served. Almost all are defended and protected and supported by the firms like the group of Worchester here. The Defenders Group provides massive holo-media support, as well as legal protection.”

“It is our civic duty to provide those concerned citizens in their legal cases. Every individual is entitled a lawful procedure in the court. I expect Mr. Elenga would have known this.”
“Please, Dr. Worch – ”
“No. Mr. Elenga, you are a hypocrite. You accuse the people fighting for humanity, but you are blind to actual ter-orgs of those – ”
“Your simplistic arguments do not change the grim situation we are – ”



“Mute.”

The shower of the dark is ending, and as the water droplets tapping on the windscreen are slowing down, the rain is losing its strength with the growing midnight. In a couple of moments, the clouds of the ash will make their last stand over the skies, and the silence of the bright will glimmer through the dispersing cumuli.

He takes a small, square, light blue paper out of his left pocket. The smell of the coat brings the wet from the hours before, the sound of the seat fights against the raindrops beating the window, the night of the alley still hides the sky-ride parked in the narrow corner. He should have been patrolling the blocks of the upper-north districts as per his directives, yet he is waiting in the alley, in the sky-ride, in the night, looking at the boulevard shining with holo-neons, light-boards, headlights, lum-screens, sky-plays, hover-blazes, ground-flashes. Looking at all, but focusing on one door, flaring with a lambent blue.

He folds the paper into two, then its corner, and then the other. Further folding the corners into a wedge shape. The edges down, then unfolding and pulling over. He opens the half into a diamond shape, folds the tail, then unfolds all back to the first folding. New tail down, then pushing back into the half, now three tails. Pushing the first edge down again, and then his eyes of grey-brown roll towards the silent neon-rad on the ride-terminal. The disc-prog still continues with the two debaters now moving their hands against each other to back-up their words, while the presenter is trying to calm them down. The eyes of grey-brown jump to his own hands holding and folding and pushing and pulling the paper, then to the windscreen. The drops glide down, the shining of the electric bright bounces through the tiny rivers on the window, and the focus is back on the door on the boulevard again.

The door opens. The hands stop, the brows are down, the eyes of grey-brown are locked on.

It has been twelve days since the report of the complaint. It was registered as a domestic disturbance, by only an insufficiently short tel-seq, then it was archived with no further process. It was decided no investigation was required, since it was made by a mimetic.

For the first four days, he had been to the place for short periods. A sleazy establishment, lower ends of high-class, operated by a small ltd-comp, the boss is the head of a local clique, one of the many in the district. He had been able to analyse the source of the complaint. Diagnosis showed the routine abuse by the customers on the workers, buying the time for pleasure on their bodies, accompanied by the dance and the music and the food and the drinks. The mimetics showed little sympathy for his search-quests, except one with the eyes of grass green. The mimetic-male was too hesitant to talk to him, despite not noticing what he actually is, and the info-flow was scarce due to customers keeping their dismissive attitudes. Yet the source of the complaint was obvious, showing greater amount of damage with injury marks on her face but concealed by the make-up. She has the eyes of pink lace.

He sees four people exit from the door, while three others enter.

No more notable activities around the place visible from the corner he has stationed at since the night shift, apart from the glimmering, bouncing, beaming lights of the boulevard filled with people. The hands return to play on the paper, the brows relax back to the normal, the eyes of grey-brown are becoming dull in the emptiness of the idle flow of time. It has already been past the midnight. Day thirteen.

The two figures in the disc-prog continue in their heated discussion, with the third one trying to moderate them, but he is losing the control now it seems in the neon-rad. His eyes of grey-brown move over the ride-terminal to the stream-screen.

“End stream-news. Scan for incidents. Midnight shift.”
Scanning.

Going over the first edge again, forming the nose. Folding both the lower ends, then pushing the other sides inside. He folds the nose backwards, and then pushes the nose downwards. One tail, two wings, neck, nose, ready. Last touch; folding the down-ends for a flat bottom. He puts the swan on the ride-terminal.

Scanning complete. Hundred sixty-four registered incidents.
“Array ongoing incidents.”
Ninety-three ongoing incidents.
“Narrow down to north and west zones.”
Twenty-one ongoing incidents in north and west zones.
“Search for incidents requesting field officers.”
No results.
“Abort.”

He gives a mild breath out in the form of a sigh, while watching the leftover rivers on the windscreen, now dwindling in the dying midnight rain. His left knee starts to ache again, it has been hours sitting. Rubbing the patella, reaching the femur, down to the tibia, his eyes of grey-brown jump from the window of the sky-ride onto the stream-screen of the terminal, reset to showing the incidents over the entire map of LA with dazzling green, blue, yellow indicators.

There is only one with the red.

“Display the critical incident.”
Warning. Out of the assigned patrol-mission zone.

His brows move down slowly in the frowning of the moment.

“Override. Ramirez Hữu Liêm, Captain, Bureau de l’Est 14, Xin Valley. Midnight shift, patrol support, Ningaabii'an District. North and west zones.”
Overriding the protocol.

One second has been enough, but the silence continues for more than five, reaches ten, then enters the period of no response forcing him to change his position on the seat. His right hand reaches the terminal, pushes the buttons to enter the spec-search parameters.

Error. Unable to recognise the commands.

He leans towards the terminal, starts to write the commands to retrieve the situation, now with both hands. The text-stream flows up the screen, while the map is reduced to the corner and zooming in over the centre of the red indicator.

LA Off-port, incident registered at 17:38, local units in operation at 17:43, additional units arrived at 18:01, reinforcements arrived at 18:56.
“List unit roster.”
Searching. All district-units including tactical teams are at the area of the incident.
“Check port-comm summaries of the incident.”
Error. No port-comm exchange has been registered.
“Check local dispatch summaries.”

Again one second, continues to five, reaches ten, but this time, an abrupt response is delivered.

Access denied.

One second, five seconds, and ten, but for processing in his own mind. His hands are over the terminal, ready to push the buttons. From unresponsive to unrecognised commands ending in denied access; the incident is meant to be suppressed as he tries. Soon it will be restricted for public scrutiny following the pattern, he knows.

He enters the commands to access the arch-terminal. He provides the priv-cred, secures the connection, inputs the available information, finds the records. Starting the search-eng for the available summaries of the incident, and those of field-comm, port-comm, inner-comm are displayed. After initiating the retrieve-proc, he selects to play the inner-comms, the ones dispatched in an unusually frequent amount.

“She jumped! The assailant jumped out of the window!”
“Report the number of casualties! Report the numbe – ”
“No casualties! Request for immediate back-up! The assailant jumped off the fifth floor!”

No suspects, but the perpetrator has been already identified, yet too many units. The midnight has exited the border of interesting and is approaching the realm of strange. While the voices of the inner-comm-rec are blasting inside the sky-ride, he straightens himself on the seat, begins the routine of the buttons, knobs, levers for fuselage-purge, eng-clean, windscreen-disp, master-headlight, vtol-eng, thruster-eng.

He stops, pauses the inner-comm-rec, then replays the last one.

“Report the status of the assailant!”
“Scan-far inconclusive! That was not a – ”
“Repeat the last comm!”
“She was not a human!”


The engines roar in the alley, the headlights boom through the dark, the sky-ride levitates between the monstrous buildings, then bolts into the midnight.






CHAPTER I - Part II


"Your Majesty?”

He inadvertently looks upon down, his eyes of the wine brown fall from the heavens of hope to the desolate deeps of desperation, his fists are clenched on the arms of the seat.

It takes only a moment, then his eyes of the wine brown regain their strength and lock on the eyes of the light brown and gaze on them until his servant understands to silence himself before him. His Majesty. His excellency. His emperor. The emperor without a throne.

His gaze seizes, resolves in dull, is drown in the memories. He remembers the day when the city fell, and it was not by the Turks as they feared, but before the Latin invaders. The Venetians brought thousands of infantry, by land and from sea, and with their poleaxes and their swords and their spears and their daggers and their maces and their armours and their shields, to fight against them, the last allagions of the empire. The empire of a single city. The city, the queen of cities, and now only a frontier in the Domains of the Sea for the Venetians.

Georgios, Loukas, Isidoros; all made valiant efforts in their fight during the siege. Loukas fell by an arrow, Isidoros was slain by the sword of a mercenary from Frankish lands, and Georgios has been recovering from the wounds he got ever since the fight on the walls of the Golden Gate. The Patriarchate fled to unknown lands to the north, whereas a synod of bishops from lesser episkopie was convoked in the Morea immediately after the fall, coronating him for the imperial throne. He remembers how he laughed in tears by hearing this, then succumbing to silence until he could get up from the bed he was laid on for his own wounds. His coronation had only one meaning: Ioannes was no more.

Andronikos had passed away decades ago. Poor boy never received any fortune from the God All-Mighty, and he could not hold Thessalonica, and he could not fight against the leprosy he contracted. Demetrios, whom he could never forgive for all the troubles he caused, was lying in blood on the battleground of the siege last time he was able to see before his eyes of the wine brown were covered in dark after the wounds he sustained. The city defences surrendered after the siege lasting more than a year, but months before that day they received the heralds from the Morea, informing that the castle of the peninsula had fallen, and that Thomas was captured as hostage of the Duke of Nasso, and that Theodoros died of the plague.

The last effort of them was to ram through the blockade on sea for Ioannes, to flee him to the court of the Komnenos, should the city fall. He did not even bother to ask what fate his brother met when he opened his eyes of the wine brown and was presented the crown. It was already impossible to defend the city on land, and it was unthinkable to defeat the Venetians on sea, yet his brother boarded that ship, with the last smile he gave to him.

Doge Francesco Foscari sent envoys, and they told him that they were of his personal council, and that he and his brother would be left to rule over the Morea, and that the Patriarchate would be left free in their jurisdiction. Now only a vassal of the frontier in the Domains of the Venetians, the seat he is sitting on is no more different than that of their cousins in Montferrat as vassals for the dukes of Savoy.

“Your… Majesty?”

He tries to brush off the memories of pain. A year passed since then, and now his servant is looking at him eagerly to learn about his decision on the matter at hand. Your Majesty. He is still addressed as such, as he still holds the title. The emperor without a throne, the emperor without an empire, the emperor of a simple, single, insignificant seat.

“I have been reduced to a mere patrician of the Republic, Ioulianos. There is no more need to address myself as you do.”

The servant looks at him with his eyes of the light brown open wide and flickering and shaken. He gulps loudly and breathes heavily and moves his neck tensely.

“Your Majesty. You are still the Emperor of the Romans, no matter what doge, what pretender, what bishop might say otherwise. You will always be our emperor, and I shall serve Your Majesty until the last of my days.”

It is not wise to speak in despair aloud, he reminds himself the words of his friend Georgios. Even though he knows there is no gain in further bothering for his advice on the matter, for his friend has to rest, the eyes of the wine brown are moving up and down, looking for him in any way, to no avail. He himself has to decide.

The Doge is seen as the conqueror of the empire, and the bishop in Rome supported him, and the Habsburgs praised him. The attempts for a union of church are no more to be uttered in their presence, and the palace in Vienna is recognised as the only crown ruling over the Romans.

The Albanian king cannot be of help, as he was taken hostage by the Serbs after the war for the city. The Wallachian voivode cannot be of help, as he himself has been looking for allies to defend against the Hungarians. The Serbian despot cannot be of help, as he was also defeated in the war for the city, and now they have their own fight for survival.

Thomas has been stubborn in planning for a rebellion, but his brother is unable to see that is futile. By Thomas’ pleas, he even managed to send envoys to Mehmed, to gain his support against the Venetians, but the court of the Turks responded by invading the Serbian kingdom, to seek revenge against Skanderbeg held hostage by Lazar of the Brankovic. Georgios has been cautious in advising him, but his friend is still hopeful for the days to come. By Georgios’ encouragement, he was presented with daughters of the nobles in the Morea to choose from as a wife. We have lost our city, but the people will follow you, should you lead them, he hears his words as if they are said now, but you need an heir. Devastated after the death of Theodora, and shattered completely after the death of Caterina, it was hard to marry again, and now it seems impossible for him to choose yet another bride, more so after losing most of his family, his empire, and the city of his namesake.

He breathes sternly, closes then opens his eyes of the wine brown quickly, then repositions himself on the seat briefly. The matter at hand.

Two factions approached to his court in the Morea, asking for his support in their own causes. The Doge is feared as the conqueror, but he is not without enemies, and the Venetians are getting closer to a fight between themselves it seems. The one from the Council of Ten was smiling while presenting his cause, yet those eyes of the amber were screaming in desperate fury, Konstantinos remembers. The other one from the Circle of the Doge was weak in figure, yet each word of him was said in absolute confidence, Konstantinos recalls. And those eyes; he can never forget them. And the matter at hand; the Doge has many enemies, even those he is unaware of. It is certain. The Doge will fall.

“Very well, Ioulianos.”

“As you wish, Your Majesty. I shall send the word of yours to our friend in the Circle,” the day is shining in the eyes of the light brown of the servant.

“No need. Tell the men to release the son of the Doge. That is enough of an answer.”


*​


“May the night shine upon you with many stars, Lord Jörg.”

It was a long day of walking, meeting, talking, writing, whispering, waiting, eating, listening, speaking, and finally he is able to return to his chambers. The guards are in the hall downstairs, he reminds himself, the heralds are sent, he reminds himself, the night of sleep awaits, he reminds himself.

But he is looking at the eyes of the amber now. The door is shut, the window is open, and Sebastiano is in his chambers, looking at him back.

“What is the meaning of this?”

He shudders, quickly moves his right hand inside his robe, feeling the hilt of the dagger. He shudders, immediately realising who those assigned to protect him are. He shudders, I should have brought my own houseguards.

The eyes of the amber open wide, the lips fall down, the brows raise in dismissing the question: “You would not be able to awake this morning, had I wanted so, Jörg. There is no need for that.”

The eyes of the brown remain vigilant, the lips are tightened, the brows are down in the danger of the words: “This is highly unpleasant. I thought we were friends, you gave your word.”

The eyes of the amber are silent, the lips stretch for the smile, the brows relax. The guest of the night turns to the side, walks towards the table, reaches the carafe, takes it, and smells its content. “Genoese wine? Of Caffa, I suppose,” smirking at the host of the chambers, “You should take care of your taste, Jörg. This is only slightly better than dog’s piss.” Grabbing two cups, “Well at least the carafe is Venetian. A fine Murano. They are getting even better, thanks to the arrival of glassmakers from Constantinopoli, too.” Pouring the wine into the cups carefully, then leaving the carafe on the table after smelling the liquid inside one more time, “Oof, it definitely has a quality,” grabbing the cups again but now full of wine, “…of sewer.”

The eyes of the brown focus on every step, the lips are carrying the burden of the clenched jaws, the brows are knitted. The eyes of the amber approach slowly, cups of wine in both hands, and when they arrive one step beyond, the eyes of the brown freeze, holding the breath. The cup in right hand is brought forward.

“Wine?” the smile follows the question. The hilt is slowly released, the hand is raised to take the offering, the eyes are locked on each pair. The empty right hand moves back, now the cups are held by the two. The cup recently taken is slowly raised one moment towards the lips, but immediately stops.

The eyes of the amber are squeezed under the frowning brows and the pursed lips: “Here, let me calm you down.” The cup is taken back readily, the other hand jerks instantly in the flash of the move, yet retains the position. Drinking from the cup that was offered a moment ago then taken back, the nose and the lips under the eyes of the amber grimace: “Aah. The only harm it has is its disgusting taste. You should really have Amarone instead,” then the cup is handed back. Reluctantly grasping the cup once again, the eyes of the brown open wide in astonishing alert of the night.

Turning his back to the nervous host of the chambers, the unexpected guest walks towards the window, while taking another sip of wine, now from his own cup.

“What do you want?”

“To talk,” replies the guest, without turning his face. The host regains his confidence in the situation: “Then it would be better if we meet in the morning, Sebastiano.”

“On the contrary, we have to talk now,” the words follow hastily, “I need knowledge… of reliable sources, and you have it.”

Frowning in questions, but feeling the exhaustion of the guest, “It is your misfortune that the Doge is still in power after your efforts.” The words end with the utmost certainty, relieving the responsibility: “I answer only to the Emperor, and only to him. It was already decided, and it was you approving the agreement. I cannot be accused of having better relations with the Doge nowadays.”

“Yes,” the reply cuts in but with tired voice. Immediately it is pulled back to the intimidating seriousness: “I am not accusing you for any of it, Jörg. I was the one accelerating the process, hoping the Doge would hesitate in return. He was the one wanting to keep the Royal Palace as a friend, instead of a foe, yet stalling in replies for an alliance,” the words are flowing as if they are said in a confession. “After the conquest, I actually expected him to oppose the coronation of Frederick. That would have increased the pressure on him before the trial, but he accepted and supported and congratulated your emperor readily.” The host is amazed by what he is hearing. The guest is still looking through the window, watching the night of the island, with his back still turned to him.

“He is growing in power.”

The guest shakes his head, “Growing? You mean the arrival of the bürgermeister of Regensburg? That is not that much of importance.”

“But your case against him –
“His son is dead. Executed in Crete.”

The host opens his eyes of the brown wildly, shaking uncontrollably, focusing on the guest impulsively.

“Yes, every plan undergoes certain pitfalls on its course, but I did not become a member of the Council of Ten by failing in my plans at such unseen occurrences. I was hoping to hold his son as an exiled convict in the Morea for leverage awaiting the trial, but Konstantinos surprised me. Yet this led to newer opportunities. I had to give that order. The Doge can gather as much ally as he wants in his so-called league, or circle, or council, or what else he wants to name it. He can fool everyone by arranging festivities and bringing artists from all Latin lands to enjoy. He can boast about that puny treaty he made as much as he wants. Now a broken man, the Doge is. A new trial awaits him.”

“For what?”

“Conspiring to start unlawful wars, on top of bribery and corruption.” The words stop in the dead of the night, silently disperse through the stars, gently dancing over the candle lights. Turning back, drinking from the cup, the guest looks at the host, but with a smile under his eyes of the amber narrowed down violently.

Suddenly realising the meaning, the eyes of the brown frantically shake, then move from one side to the other, then stop in hopeless focus.

“Calm down, Jörg. You are not part of the trial,” the eyes of the amber approach.

“Then why are you here? Why do you speak of your plans to me? I am not part of the Circle. You should talk to your confidant – is it Mestre?”
“That merchant? Huh. Giving enough ducats, he can talk to anyone, as he does to you, but he cannot keep any secrets, as he does with you.”
“Then… The Patriarch?” the eyes of the brown ask further to gain more time.
“The Patriarch? No, Jörg. That man is terrifying, I agree, and he cannot be trusted.”
“And it cannot be Achille?” the eyes of the brown struggle to understand, yet feeling the panic.
“Aah. Again, he is also careless about whom he speaks with, provided he is given a title and a piece of land. Those you have been talking to in your own affairs; none is important. All I need is you, Jörg; your help. Despite not being part of it at all, yet crucial you are, for now, for my plan, for the Serene Republic.”

“I… I do not understand,” the eyes of the brown stretch anxiously.
“Just as you are, I am also in need of knowledge. A simple question, at first: To whom did you send the heralds this day?”

The eyes of the amber are now staring at him. The eyes of the brown are still in the turmoil of the moment, unable to follow the routes laid behind the question they are directed with, the host silently breathes, yet fast.

“I answer only to the Emperor, and only to him. You do know this.”
“Excellent. Exactly.”

The generous smile sits on the lips under the eyes of the amber, and in return, but after longer than a brief moment, the eyes of the brown relieve from their worried position.

“And you wrote every word you had heard, whether at the docks, else in the villas, otherwise on the streets of dark. Yes?”
“I serve His Majesty as much I can muster in my capacity, as he expects from me.”
“Excellent. So I suppose.”

Now the smile spreads into the room, weakly shared also by the lips under the eyes of the brown. The air in the chambers becomes thinner, the light from the candles floats from the walls, the songs of the night chant through the island, heard through the window, flowing through their ears.

The cup is raised and brought forward before the eyes of the amber: “Then a toast. In honour of the falling Doge. The rumours of conspiring to expand the Domains unlawfully beyond the Adriatic coast are surfaced for so long, they have been in whispers among the many for so long. This already gives ample reason for a new trial. A conclusive one, this will be.”

The other cup hesitantly follows before the already raised one. The eyes of the brown are still in the mist of all the words of the night, yet the last exchange brings the attention to the focus: “So you will make your case based on this, I see. His Majesty will be also pleased, and he will never forget those who help his cause,” and the cups reach the same level in celebration of the moment, and the smiles are shared in joy of the agreement, and the wine is drunk in comfort of the announcement. The lips under the eyes of the amber smile broadly after enduring the dreadful wine, “Do you feel it too, Jörg, when one nears so close to what is desired, when the plans match the vision one may have, when the days to come reach the border of horizon; that border?”

After the sips of the toast, the eyes of the brown are softened, “I would like to help further as I can, Sebastiano. The words of this night will reach the Royal Palace, I assure you,” but the response arrives in return immediately: “No.”

“Then what do you need?”

“A scandal.”

The eyes of the amber are half-opened, not for enjoying the wine, but by the confidence of knowing what must be done, and the smile beneath is retained.

The brows over the eyes of the brown frown, accompanied with the questioning smile of the lips.




Unable to realise it before the dagger cuts through the air from below, entering through the throat, piercing through the mouth until the edge reaches the back of the head, the eyes of the brown remain open in savage bewilderment against the eyes of the amber, then they are lost in the darkening of nothingness.




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[*] The Border of the soundtrack album for Sicario (d. Denis Villeneuve) by Jóhann Jóhannsson (2015)

Edit 27.01.2024: Corrected formatting, semantic, punctuation, grammar mistakes.
 
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Nice to see this back!

I liked the section at the beginning. It was amusing, even if it was filled with ad-hominem attacks... and it was about robots, correct?

There seems to be rebellion brewing in Byzantium... and I'm all for it. Hopefully they can avenge the Fourth Crusade somehow...
 
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I'm really liking the setting of the dystopian future world. It is very intriguing.

Looks like the Doge will pay for his war with trouble at home.
“– as we speak in this limited – ”
“Dr. Worchester. I demand my title to be – ”
“– if I could be allowed to finish my part – ”
“Mr. Elenga, if you could give the courtesy of addressing your opponent as he desires, it would elevate the level of the convers – ”
I liked this exchange. Reminded me of Charles I's trial and him demanding to speak.
 
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Nice to see this back!
Cheers mate, glad to be back.
and it was about robots, correct?
:)
The history of the word robot is a fascinating tale of etymology, including its previous and subsequent variants. The design of a substitute for that in This is where it ends took a while (a very long while), but extremely satisfied with the outcome, an unusual situation for self.
There seems to be rebellion brewing in Byzantium... and I'm all for it. Hopefully they can avenge the Fourth Crusade somehow...
If the dream is a return of the empire, then prepare for disappointment, for one should always remember that it is eu4. Once a vassal for the player, there is no turning back for any tag.


I'm really liking the setting of the dystopian future world. It is very intriguing.
Cheers mate, glad it gives pleasure.
Looks like the Doge will pay for his war with trouble at home.
Oh yes, one does not get away with conquering an empire while already having a notorious reputation.
Different from other dux Venetiae that were overthrown or assassinated or exiled by conviction, Francesco Foscari was an oddity in Venetian history, reigning for the longest term, attempting to resign twice, and eventually being abdicated by the Ten.
Conquest of the empire does not help him much in This is where it ends.
I liked this exchange. Reminded me of Charles I's trial and him demanding to speak.
Interesting analogy. The exchanges in that trial are pristine, a situation which is impossible in a post-panel discussions age; no one has time to wait, not even at the court.
 
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However, the game is not the reality, and thus naturally it could have been, it should have been a realistic simulation by its great potential with great possibility. This did not happen, that is why the sadness of the disappointment had arrived. It never needed to follow exactly what happened in the history, but it made great and admirable and remarkable effort with some of the events for its plausibility. Yes, that is it, one of the reasons, but of sombre sighs, not for the joyful thrills. Those events remain, always for small group of tags, and they are given as advantages, and they are not available for the most. By 1445, france-tag is attacked by england-tag as an event, following the events of what the records show. The game had undergone significant design-changes, yes, but stay with the current expansion for simplicity. In the game, it is an opportunity, but for those two tags, and perhaps for their neighbours, and definitely the player benefits more, but the code needs it more than the player. Return to the point; butua or malwa-tags do not need to hear about it, nor would they care. But they do not receive such similar events, so no advantages, yet the others that do receive are always the same. The allegedly popular ones. In time, many of the tags have received more events in design, and the game improved over herself. That was still hopeful, yet the patience was already gone forever. There had been, were, and are more problems; inherent to the design.

There is the technology difference, forced due to the institutions of ages. A dying Europa still spawns Printing Press, and every other tag is still doomed to lack it; arguably acceptable, to a certain extent; all right. The technology is not researched at all, instead passively accumulated and reached and achieved; another setback in possible joy; then what does there remain to enjoy after these heavy blows? No, none but the ones to frown upon. The inherent and incomprehensible difference between the tags. This was and still is the most glaring example in the eye, receiving the lightning of agony in the mind. Why do the units of ethiopia-tag have less fighting capability than a castile-tag? A player with ethiopia-tag can easily overcome all other tags, yet still get stuck with mystifying difference for her units in comparison to others, to her disadvantage. This is not even the best example, as ethiopia-tag can be considered still as a powerful one. As sari-yogir, or pawnee, or kongo, the player can bring doom upon the code, and yet they will have statistically lower fighting capability than the group, named as western technology.
Since over a decade I have this pet project in the back of my mind which is to clean all moddable tag, religion or province specific events decisions etc to tag, religion or province agnostic ones. If needed by inventing new mechanics but keeping all mechanics of the game everything-agnostic.

Next step would be somehow dynamising the trade node staticism.

And of course new world must be random.
 
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Since over a decade I have this pet project in the back of my mind which is to clean all moddable tag, religion or province specific events decisions etc to tag, religion or province agnostic ones. If needed by inventing new mechanics but keeping all mechanics of the game everything-agnostic.
Perhaps that may remedy some of the problems due to uneven nature of the advantages, but: despite the involvement by playing it, personally having no interest in improving the game's design. The modders give respectable effort for it, but having no interest how it could be, since the game design belongs to the designer, not the player.

Perhaps; still to indulge a bit, it can be safe to mention the unfortunate side of the problems of the game design, which are inherent; the existing advantages in either form - by events or specific to the tags - are there for the code to actually run. A quick prediction can be given as: poland-lithuania-tag would not form, denmark-tag would be successful every time, iberian tags would struggle without any change, france- and england-tags would not function, timur-tag would almost always exist, ming-tag would always stay at its initial dormant status, etc.
The reason for such predictions is as given: the advantages are additions to the code for it to function, not the player, otherwise the equilibrium point is achieved too quickly.
Next step would be somehow dynamising the trade node staticism.
Now that would be interesting, but even then, there will be other problems, inherent to the design. Unfortunate, as it is.
And of course new world must be random.
That does not change much.


But these are all personal views, comments, statements, experience on the code, and despite many of them coinciding and/or in parallel with and/or similar to it, the narrator of Book I has problems of whole different level.



And no, not going to give any spoilers, other than what has been revealed so far in the story:)
 
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The initial filtering reduces the available ideas to consider by five sets. No colonisation, so no Explo-Expansion. Never Admin-ideas. Espionage and Naval are inherently too expensive by opportunity costs. Tag-specific filtering for the ottos eliminates Quantity. Now down from eighteen (18) to twelve (12) sets to choose from. For the opener first-3, Diplo- and Aristo-ideas were chosen, so ten (10) to choose from; now is the time to discuss the second filtering: The contra-pairs.
So the case against admin was not against the entire group but only admin itself?
 
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So the case against admin was not against the entire group but only admin itself?
That is correct; by admin it is meant to be the Administrative idea set of the administrative group, as mentioned in the chapters and as elaborated in Ch.VIII of Book I;
(...)The name of the hysteria is the Administrative Idea Set of the administrative group.
Under no circumstances, in no situation, for no reason, the Admin-ideas Admin-set can serve any purpose. For no tag. Nought. None. Zero. (...)
Due to two sets sharing the same names of their group, indicated the sets with capital letters (Admin-ideas and Diplo-ideas) through-out; but now thinking after your question, labelling the individual sets as with x-set would have been a simpler choice for clarity.



As a reminder again: the inefficiency of the Admin-ideas is for the version up to emperor; after leviathan and beyond, having no idea what changes it has undergone.

Edit 07.07.2023: Replaced -ideas with -set throughout the text for clarity on the labels of terminology for ideas.
 
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If covered, then it will struggle to find a target, and head on to the farthest castle to siege down.
Is there a reasonable reason as to why this is the case? Seems like too big of a bug to miss.

Once book 2 ends I would like to propose a custom nation and a challenge which I think might be interesting to read in this format :)
 
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Is there a reasonable reason as to why this is the case? Seems like too big of a bug to miss.
Unfortunately that seems not a bug, but WAD.

When the code calculates that the enemy is overwhelmingly more powerful than it is, then it runs away, finds a far corner, begins to lay siege. When the power capacity is similar, then it again finds a far corner, if it has enough units active on the field, as its main force will seek primarily the war target - province for conquest, weak stacks for superiority, total blockade for trade wars, etc. When the code calculates that it is more powerful than its enemy, it directly runs towards the war target, while sending some other units to the distant ones.

Among the siege-targets, the code will prefer those that are out of ZoC of any castles, so it can be occupied and the code can proceed; if the code is powerful, it will seek the castle provinces to lay siege. If the target is efficiently protected by castles and their ZoC, then it will run around, try for castle sieges, else it will make the desperate moves by occupying any province and wait, especially when the code-tag is weak in power significantly.

Therefore there will always be a siege on colonies by england-, france-, castile-spain-, etc. any colonist tag; remnant-khanates will run over Siberia against russia-tag; russia-tag will run through Siberia to reach ming-tag instead of going through Tibet; if a player for example as mong kawng tag declares war against the code for example holland-tag, then for example the player reaches the Low Countries via sea and occupies all, whereas it will be observed that all enemy units will be running through entire continents to reach player-mong kawng via land, and only the colonial subjects will be sending forces via sea, and occasionally those that have enough naval units; so, in this example, holland-tag will try to embark for counter-sieging. Even if its entire realm is under siege in the meantime.

The code is capable of embarking, yet it has a lot of other calculations to make, without any definite focus it seems to be; therefore there will be heavy-stacks of spain-tag, england-tag, france-tag, netherlands-tag, etc. colonist tags, all over the world, embarked and left from a previous war.

Moreover: if ming-tag is able to reach for example transoxiana-tag, and if it declares war for any cb, it will declare that war while all its units are in mainland China; russia-tag has all its army in Siberia, when it declares war against sweden-tag, etc. This affects the code's calculation for all its manoeuvres, which are simply moving on land, even if it will take more than years to reach Manchuria from Lombardy.


Once book 2 ends I would like to propose a custom nation and a challenge which I think might be interesting to read in this format :)
Cool; but the tag of Book III is already reserved and its story is already written - actually remaining eight books are already played, but can happily replace the tag of Book IV.

PM for the details mate, so can make according changes on the story in advance.
 
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Unfortunately that seems not a bug, but WAD.

When the code calculates that the enemy is overwhelmingly more powerful than it is, then it runs away, finds a far corner, begins to lay siege. When the power capacity is similar, then it again finds a far corner, if it has enough units active on the field, as its main force will seek primarily the war target - province for conquest, weak stacks for superiority, total blockade for trade wars, etc. When the code calculates that it is more powerful than its enemy, it directly runs towards the war target, while sending some other units to the distant ones.

Among the siege-targets, the code will prefer those that are out of ZoC of any castles, so it can be occupied and the code can proceed; if the code is powerful, it will seek the castle provinces to lay siege. If the target is efficiently protected by castles and their ZoC, then it will run around, try for castle sieges, else it will make the desperate moves by occupying any province and wait, especially when the code-tag is weak in power significantly.

Therefore there will always be a siege on colonies by england-, france-, castile-spain-, etc. any colonist tag; remnant-khanates will run over Siberia against russia-tag; russia-tag will run through Siberia to reach ming-tag instead of going through Tibet; if a player for example as mong kawng tag declares war against the code for example holland-tag, then for example the player reaches the Low Countries via sea and occupies all, whereas it will be observed that all enemy units will be running through entire continents to reach player-mong kawng via land, and only the colonial subjects will be sending forces via sea, and occasionally those that have enough naval units; so, in this example, holland-tag will try to embark for counter-sieging. Even if its entire realm is under siege in the meantime.

The code is capable of embarking, yet it has a lot of other calculations to make, without any definite focus it seems to be; therefore there will be heavy-stacks of spain-tag, england-tag, france-tag, netherlands-tag, etc. colonist tags, all over the world, embarked and left from a previous war.

Moreover: if ming-tag is able to reach for example transoxiana-tag, and if it declares war for any cb, it will declare that war while all its units are in mainland China; russia-tag has all its army in Siberia, when it declares war against sweden-tag, etc. This affects the code's calculation for all its manoeuvres, which are simply moving on land, even if it will take more than years to reach Manchuria from Lombardy.



Cool; but the tag of Book III is already reserved and its story is already written - actually remaining eight books are already played, but can happily replace the tag of Book IV.

PM for the details mate, so can make according changes on the story in advance.
Oh if already played and planned no need to replace anything man, but if you want to make it an epilogue I'm all for it.
 
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Book II - Chapter I - Part III
She does not hesitate answering him.

The hectic op-hq on the field was blasting with every noise and voice at once, almost impossible to hear without the inner-comms, yet the broadcast was mixed with the static from the port-comms, then it was buried under the orders hurled sporadically through the field-comms, and all were summed into a roaring discord. The pyramids and the towers and the blocks of the off-port were randomly gleaming under the out-glows projected on them, under the holo-neons reflected by them, under the headlights and the guard-alerts and the ground-flashes shined over them. Beyond and over and inside all, within the medic-bay of the regroup-zone, she was surrounded by the lieutenant and the sergeants and the field-officers, all yelling at her at once, at each other, at inner-comms.

“Why did you go without back-up? Why did you not wait for orders? Tell me exactly every detail of your mission, now!” and every question morphing into another, whereas she was replying them calmly beyond any of their expectations. Standard operation, following up the procedure, applying the protocols. No casualties among the unit, but the mission failed, with the target declared dead after the jump.

Once the initial questioning slowed down into frantic orders through the inner-comms, echoing in the field-comms, the field-lieutenants started to take control of the op-hq, calling for the field-tech to fix the port-comms, dispatching search-units, requesting sentry-units, asking for medic-units to survey the civilians, diffusing into another chaotic harmony. Aaron approached her, “I told you to wait. You never listen to me,” but he was enjoying the moment, her courage was the subject of every raid-unit officer in the field, he was the friend of the one who ended the unnecessarily long search-op. She replied him, “We did it by the book,” and he responded by narrowing down his eyes of hazel in cringe, then she brought the punchline: “but quicker than expected.”

Her eyes of deep brown met his, then they grinned at each other. “They will bury you,” his grin was under the concerned looks realising what would happen, but she was confident: “No they won’t. They’ve much bigger problems now to deal with before anything else.” He looked confused, but did not resume the conversation. She continued watching the mess. This might be useful for the mission.

The lieutenant returned back furious, “You are done, do you hear me? You will be taken into custody, you will be de-briefed at the precinct,” and behind him their sergeant joined: “Him too, sir, that shithead went with her.” Her friend immediately jumped on his feet, with loads of words in futile attempts that she knew would lead to only delaying the order. Her panic ensued, considering the possible consequences, not for the obvious, but for her friend. She did not anticipate this. They had plans for this mission, she became certain by that moment, and they operate fast when those are disrupted.

Then she saw him.

A man in a long coat with a strange hat was approaching them, limping, leaning on his cane at every step, smiling subtly enough to persuade anyone it was of cordial intentions. Just before him a petty-officer caught up, looking as if searching for the words to notify his superiors: “Lieutenant, sir, I was trying the port-comm – But the Off-port officers are telling me – This is – He is asking for – I mean you, sir, and he –”

The lieutenant struggled to listen to what the petty-officer was telling, before losing his patience and silencing him, looked at the strange man: “Yes, I am the officer in charge of this op-hq – and your purpose in this…?”

Before the lieutenant could finish, the man interrupted: “I am here to tell you, lieutenant, that as from now I am the one you will answer to,” and she saw the eyes of grey-brown. The man turned to her, those eyes were eerily hiding behind the smile: “May I ask your name, officer?”

“Excuse me?” the lieutenant was baffled by what the man said, standing beside, ignoring them, looking at her. The sergeant was agitated: “Who the fuck – who let this fucker in the op-hq?!” but the lieutenant raised his hand, making the sergeant step back, then questioned the man: “Sir this is out of the protocol. I will need your rank and dep-unit –” while adjusting the controls over his port-comm; a brief static noise, then the orders flowed into the concert of wild sounds and feral lights, filling his ears, and the words of the lieutenant faded away, fell apart, dissipated into the night.

The petty-officer, already in distress, found the opportunity: “Lieutenant, sir, I was saying – And the dispatch came – The port-comms, they are working now – They relayed just few minutes ago, and I was about to –”

The lieutenant came to his senses, showing the man away to follow him, to take a couple of steps further, and behind them the sergeant, then in regret and worry and fear. Other field-lieutenants seeing them, coming close by, and their voices scrambled altogether: “But we’re not –”, “Sir is this following the –”, “Which unit –”, and a lot more scrutiny joined in the arguments.

Watching them from a couple steps afar, her eyes of deep brown were carrying the full weight of the furrowed brows, and her friend was breathing vigorously: “Do you have any idea what’s going on Sera?” Shaking her head but saying no more, she focused on the group ahead, becoming a sizeable crowd, all arguing with the man, not answering but listening in silence, and she was able to catch only bits but hearing no more.

All were cut at once when the man began answering them, only brief words. The sounds escaped. The lights fled. Then he slowly took the cane under his arm, carefully rolled up his left sleeve, casually produced his holo-id. She and Aaron could not see it, but only observing its effect on the lieutenant and the sergeant and the other field-officers, alarmed, astonished, frozen. Impatience hit her, she approached the group, her friend followed behind.

The lieutenant was battling to speak: “But… Captain? That unit was…?”, yet he could not alleviate his stance, and the captain continued mercilessly, his words flowed without remorse, his eyes of grey-brown shined over the deceitful smile: “Not any more Lieutenant Renning, as from now, all operations here are in my dep-unit’s jurisdiction. You were talking about the warrant on the officer. It is annulled. She is an asset for the investigation, and will join us.”

“Are you saying this is a… hunt? But it has been mere hours?” the sergeant broke in, and the lieutenant concurred: “There is no evidence collected so far to issue a hunt, sir? Not even the usual mission debrief, rep-sum, unit-plan, none has been done yet? And the officer may not be interested in joining your coup?”

“I accept,” she did not hesitate accepting it, “and my partner, sir?”

“Wait – ?” but no more words came from her friend, once she fiercely looked at him, making him silently abide.

“Yes, he will too,” briefly looking at her and her friend, the smile of the captain broadened. The captain turned to the lieutenant: “I already have all the comm-reports. All of them. Thank you for your concern.”

The lieutenant clenched his jaw, but understood it was pointless, yielded: “What are your orders for the op-hq, Captain Ramirez?”

The captain smiled, ever subtle in his terrifying tranquillity: “Isolate the block, establish patrol-shifts for entry-sects, coordinate with the Off-port officers and support their transport operations, and enforce incident-priv, no evi-seek by any dep-units other than ours.”

The lieutenant gazed, then turned his back: “Sergeant, get me the roster. Assign units 52 to 64 for the patrol.”

The field-officers scattered into the field, tired, shaken, adapting to the new situation in frustration, and the captain looked back at her: “Officer, may I have your name now, please?”

“If you have the comm-reports, my name must be in the roster-sum,” but then she stopped, and she knew without looking at her friend, that he was fuming in dread. He would be right, as she was too, seeing the eyes of grey-brown staring at her with the silent smile, but in particular, when the captain gently moved his arm towards them, and they could finally see the holo-id.

“Yes, but I need to hear it from you.”

It was their turn to be bewildered.


She does not hesitate answering him.

*​

“勝株式会社.新しいモデルがあなたを待っています.風に乗って行こう. ”

Reading the digi-ad light emitted while observing the above, the below, the periphery, his position seems unnoticeable, uninteresting, safe. The headlights are beyond the reach, their rays are merging with the clash of the lum-screens and the ground-flashes, yet the immense lateral speed is powerful enough to give the illusion of continuous flow in the sky. The noise is fighting another war on its own waves, the bursting engines are in stalemate against the sounds of the below. One moment passes by, and there is the gap of matching frequencies, and he is able to hear the surroundings better, then it is overcome with another onslaught of the flow. The smoke fills the alley, coming from the buildings, erupting from the drainages, pouring down from the roofs, the towers, the Upper Level, distant yet its edges are in the scene, showing the busy middle-echelons, the wealthy, the richer, but then the Third Plane above it resides, almost out of the sight, far over the sky-lanes, living in their spires, cloudlayers, ziggurats are the managers, the executives, the bosses, the patrons, those who possess the actual wealth beyond any measurable scale. Far in the sky, the ever-abyss stays dormant, now in its darkened-clad of the late hours. It has arrived too early this year, overtaking the season of the glimmering-night lasting until two days ago.

“Getting up early, walking under the grey-abyss, working until late, coming home at night. Golden Port is all I need. The best bourbon of the last two decades. Because I deserve a quality life.”

He turns the page in complete disregard, and the thin synth-paper crackles while giving the sound effect, quickly lost in the orchestra of the alley. The darkness of the night is shattered with the holo-neons reaching from the light-boards on the buildings jumping over the heads ever filling the walk-pave. The stream of people heading towards their destination, endless does it resume, not even for one moment does it pause, seemingly no space to exist does it leave, yet there are the pockets of emptiness left here, there, in that corner, to the building next, nearby this imbiss, close to that diner, below the archway along that way, between those two pubs, behind these street-stands selling the food of the night, so far he identifies. Leaning on the side of the bridge in the alley, another stream of people but sparse, another flow of sky-rides, ground-hovers, cleaner-rigs, low-freighters on the levi-road.

“Tired of the old world, doing the old jobs, living by the old ways? You need an adventure, an exciting job, a new world full of wonders! Off-world opportunities are waiting for you: BrightSun Ltd is promising you a new world, a new job, a new life, from Three Stations to the ends of the System and beyond! Sign up early to claim your bonus today!”

He presses on the icon in the corner, the pages disappear, another one emerges, displaying his account accompanied with absurdly large fonts, Zonnestelsel Groep NV, the net is in the negative, and getting worse by the day and the night. I should have moved out to the Plains when I had the chance. Then again the expenses appear in his mind. The waste-converter, the sun-poles, the wind-engines, added on the farming licence. Fantasies of the day, as if a visa would be given. Allowed or not, the calculation predicts a higher number than seeking a place off-world.

He hears a siren, immediately his eyes search the source, yet slowly it disintegrates in one of the pseudo-continuous sky-lanes, losing its effect in the doppler, then the sounds regain their amorphous oscillation in the downstream wake, and his posture returns to the normal. Acquired experience, repeated practice, learned behaviour, forming the patterns of organism into motor skills, and beyond, performing as if under autonomic nervous system. Time has not helped him to adjust since the retirement so far.

Off-world it is, despite unwilling. Moving will take time, judging by the unfortunate numbers shown undisputedly. Selling the old place may alleviate the circumstances. Adding it in the list of bargain, but then his belongings have to be brought to the Aukt-Markt. A new sky-ride, perhaps rental, then.

I should not have returned. Scowling at the direct-targeted digi-ads for a moment, knowing they are able to detect every behaviour of every instant within every designated search-area, this place has it all just as the others, yet it also carries the residual of the recent for him, different than usual, those he wants to actually leave behind. Change is simple, but not an easy process, the psych-eval was brief. He needs a drink, now. Old habits. Scowling is followed by a sighing breath in exhaustion, and the focus is back to the moment, and his hunger grows into the night. Simple, small steps, despite seeming extremely difficult to undertake, then will come the tomorrow. He presses the icon again, and the account disappears leaving the page for the digi-stream.

But the order is getting late. He checks the stand. Still serving the others, his will have to wait more.

“Live the best life in the best parts of the best city, but only we provide the best house you deserve: ValleyDream ACRP finds your house of dreams from your dreams into your life you dream of!”

His forefinger makes the move over the synth-paper continuing the weariness from where it has been left. The page turns into the news, from yearly summaries, weekly submits, daily reports, hourly alerts, onwards to instant flows, yet the moment they appear, he swipes with all fingers to exit. Out of the hunger it would seem as if he has already lost the patience he can afford, else due to the endless commercial advertisements. No, not them, but no holo-news, no stream-news, no digi-news; he does not care any more.

“आपका खाना तैयार है!”

His eyes move, he folds the synth-paper into rectangular, holds it over his head before diving into the walk-pave, crosses through the stream as the few drops of the night-rain fall on his shoulders, on his sleeves, on his hand, whereas everyone in the alley is preparing their um-shields for the expected shower.

“No, I ordered nihari with four momos.”
“आपने दो कहा.”

“Don’t mock me Shankar. I said four. Four,” then the brawl of the eyes remains in the silence, and he realises: “You’ve already given them to someone else, didn’t you?” The black hair with a couple of white on the sides, under it the eyes of red-brown pierce while are the strong brows raising, Shankar smiles in defiance. “Then give me one naan,” he replies back in adamant stance despite the lost battle. The extra bread is delivered readily, again with the smile but now for the small victory, accompanied with the question: “क्या आप वापस आ रहे हैं?”

“No,” he prepares to eat, “this is not a return.”

“ठीक है अगर तुम ऐसा कहते हो,” the smile continues for a while, not expecting for more, but hoping never ceases in the eyes, yet the brows change to a stern level, silent inquiry focuses on not him, but over what is coming.

He notices it, and the steps. The distinct sounds indicate a pair walking alongside, casual yet rhythmic, the frequency suggests they have a certain target. He does not move his head, his hands do not leave the fork and the knife, he does not bother but continues to cut the mutton. Behind him from his left, the pair stops, and one of them speaks:

“Captain Nowanqa, Unit 87-b, you are officially summoned to Precinct – ”

“No. Check your orders again. I’m retired,” in utter indifference. The pause follows, and finishing the cut, leaving the fork and the knife aside, grabbing the spoon, biting a piece from naan, he begins eating while his eyes nodding the vendor asking for his calmness. No need for any action.

But he hears the taps of the cane behind him, yet from his right. He chews slowly, knowing he fails in noticing the simplest strategy for approaching a target, and the tapping renders his reaction null. He nods to the vendor one last time, I will deal with this myself.

The taps approach, and the seat to his right is now taken. He takes another spoon-full, then one more time, chewing, swallowing, and finally he turns his head to his right. The dark blue long coat, the sharp black tie, the dark grey hat of a fashion from centuries before, now the eyes of grey-brown are looking at him, a modest smile is given as a salute between the moustache and the goatee.

He replies almost unnoticeable bowing his head. The confusion of the officers behind is obvious in their words: “Evening Captain, do we…?”

The eyes of grey-brown turn to them, blink momentarily under the brows of negation while shaking the head, then return to looking at him, and he hears the pair departing. He frowns, turns to the dish, slowly continues on, then he takes the first momo in one bite, and the last one he bites off half. The moments stretch into time, the sound of the street does not pause, the alley of the stream does not stop, the lane of the sky-rides does not break in its flexible, curved, meandering flow.

He turns his head again, the pairs of eyes lock on each other, but his eyes escape down focusing on the cane and the left leg, he pauses, and only then: “I am – ”

The eyes of grey-brown are bewildered, but the words hide: “I know you are. This is not for it.”

The pause ensures the silence, and the eyes lock again. His frowning relieves back to serious idleness, and he turns to finish off the dish, now as an excuse to break the tension. The eyes of grey-brown are still on him: “I need you to come with me. Robert’s orders.”

Readying the cane, standing up from the seat, the eyes of grey-brown are waiting for him, but he dismisses: “I have no intentions to listen to Robert any more. Nothing to say except that I decline. Whatever he is offering.”

“You can tell that to the Commander yourself if you insist,” smile follows, but now he is surprised at the eyes of grey-brown, instinctively asks back: “Commander?”


“Yes, and you will want to hear about this one.”






CHAPTER I - Part III


“This be troublesome for your ambition, I do think.”

“Far from your fears.”

“I am not seeing what you will achieve.”

Sebastiano sighs. I have to be patient. A little more.

“It is our duty to hold the nobles of the senate leashed, keep the well-being of the people secure, protect the republic against the madness of tyrants. Against those using their status for foul gains. Even against the Doge. Such accusations should have brought him down to his knees, yet he is able. We could not wait after that day. You did good.”

“The war certainly served him well.”

“Yes. Absolute power by illegal means. And he is planning for more, while buying out the nobles for support. Most are embroiled in his extravagant feasts at the Palace.”

“But I thought his son…”

“He would get him acquitted, and he tried so. All we did could only increase our chances for the case, yet he was to get away. We rendered him incapable, desperate, hopeless. Not the heroic leader of the war, but the shameful man of infamy shall be tried now.”

“So it was also…?”

“No,” Sebastiano takes a deep breath, “It was one of his son’s rivals. That man had innumerable enemies.”

“I see. But Seysell is… was… could be…”

“No, be done with your doubts. The case could be dismissed, we needed the reason for the support of the Senate. The Doge played with fire dreaming of taming it. Any noble still supporting will now abandon him. Even the Habsburg Emperor sent emissaries demanding justice. The only repercussion he can demand is justice, he is very busy with that lunatic count in Burgundy. Lord Seysell… has brought that reason for us.”

“For the Republic.”

“Yes. For the Republic. Did the Grand Master Raimundus send his heralds?”

“You were right. He had sworn the oath to protect the Toccos by the grace of God and the power of sword. Even against the Doge, should he plans so, he says. How did you –”

“Fine. Then it is set. Lead the cernida to the palace by the dawn.”

“Will you not be there?”

Imbecile. Sebastiano feels losing the battle to remain patient. He brushes off his anger, trying for a gentle smile. The cheapest bargain, it only took a couple of positions to support at the Great Council to persuade this low-life. I should consider what to do with this scoundrel, yet he is still useful, and the day awaits.

“I will secure the Senate and the Councils. Lead the men, and bring him to the court.”

Sebastiano watches the man nodding him, turning his back, running into the night, while his captain-of-arms approaches from behind: “Men are ready for the journey, master. We will arrive before the dawn if we board now.” He approves without any words, but keeps watching the trails of the night for a while.

After the elections. He slowly turns, his eyes of the amber checking at the corners, as if to stay where they were, then finally looks at the docks behind, walks vigilant, still thinking about the possibilities, especially of this night, this dawn, and the day to come.

Patience. His heart is pounding. After the elections, I should take care of that scum Lorenzo. He boards the small boat to the ship. But first, the day of judgement for Francesco Foscari.




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[*] A Long Way Back, from the soundtrack of Life (d. Daniel Espinosa), by Jon Ekstrand (2017)

Edit 16.04.2024: Corrected conceptual, grammatical mistakes. Corrected major error in plot flow; changed a character name.
 
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