I thought about Persia, but chose not to attack them. If I end up at war with the Soviets, I only want 1 front to fight them on.Phoenix Dace said:
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After the victory against India and Afghanistan, Pakistan released India with a friendly government. The Earth Unification Alliance was officially created, with India as the first new member. Jairon decided to keep the territory gained from Afghanistan, and plan his next move.
War Cabinet Meeting, 1937:
Jairon: The plan is codenamed Operation Poison Dagger.
Arribi: Are you sure this plan will work against such a numerically superior enemy?
Jairon: We have the technological advantage and superior tactics, I know we can pull this off.
Marron: I have done some research, and the enemy has nothing that can challenge our new technology.
*Rashbehari Basu, the new leader of India, enters the room*
Jairon: Welcome, friend! Everyone, meet Mr. Basu and make him feel at home.
Basu: How does the new plan fare in the cabinet meeting?
Jairon: Operation Poison Dagger will be a success.
War Cabinet Meeting, 1937:
Jairon: The plan is codenamed Operation Poison Dagger.
Arribi: Are you sure this plan will work against such a numerically superior enemy?
Jairon: We have the technological advantage and superior tactics, I know we can pull this off.
Marron: I have done some research, and the enemy has nothing that can challenge our new technology.
*Rashbehari Basu, the new leader of India, enters the room*
Jairon: Welcome, friend! Everyone, meet Mr. Basu and make him feel at home.
Basu: How does the new plan fare in the cabinet meeting?
Jairon: Operation Poison Dagger will be a success.
Sorry to tell you this, but I think your AAR is diying. Everything is too similar to Butter and Iron, even the color of the country. I think that if the aliens don't appear soon this will just keep going down the page until it is forgotten.
I think it is DEAD too! Not dying, but DEAD!General Roca said:
God! I put hours of work into it and it DIES!
Christ, I am deleting the files. This is not worth it, not a single reply in 9 hours...
Well, maybe you could do one last update/a epilogue, with a massive battle to end it or something like that... But don't abandon it right in the middle.
I tried that in Batter and Iron, nobody replied until I posted a second time.General Roca said:
I think I might try Victoria...
NO!!!!! Don't quit!! NO!!!!
I enjoyed the heck out of Batter and Iron, and I'm enjoying this one too. Do something uncoventional, like, write a story from the standpoint of a Pakastani Commando Squad. Write a couple of posts from the standpoint of the aliens. Write a couple of posts explaining how Jairon found out about the aliens. Write it from the stand point of a Pakastani scientist! How did they discover the advanced alien technology. Heck, if you want me to, I could even help you write this AAR. BUT DON'T QUIT!!!
Nameless
I enjoyed the heck out of Batter and Iron, and I'm enjoying this one too. Do something uncoventional, like, write a story from the standpoint of a Pakastani Commando Squad. Write a couple of posts from the standpoint of the aliens. Write a couple of posts explaining how Jairon found out about the aliens. Write it from the stand point of a Pakastani scientist! How did they discover the advanced alien technology. Heck, if you want me to, I could even help you write this AAR. BUT DON'T QUIT!!!
Nameless
Sorry, but it is too late now. I deleted the files about an hour ago, and it didnt seem this AAR ever had more than a couple of readers.Nameless said:
Thanks for reading, though.
Oh, your out to get me. I know it. this is the first AAR of yours I supported and deigned to read, and yeahh.
oh well. Like you said, maybe try victoria, although I think someone else had a franchise on the blatant cheating AAR's there awhile back.
oh well. Like you said, maybe try victoria, although I think someone else had a franchise on the blatant cheating AAR's there awhile back.
I had a strange feeling that this AAR was dead even before it started...Jubal.Early said:
There is nothing wrong with cheating, it spices things up. Mankind has a natural yearning to blow his enemies to smithereens.
Earth's Savior said:
General Roca is right. Its the same in every one of your AARs, don`t get angry now. I liked those AARs.
It just gets me mad when I put hours into in AAR and nobofy reads it.Freddan said:
Earth's Savior said:It just gets me mad when I put hours into in AAR and nobofy reads it.
Sure, it made me angry too when I wrote my AAR. But If you keep writin they give replies.
Freddan said:
Yea a lot of ppl read it but dont reply, i read some parts and then browse on. So dont give up that easy
Earth's Savior said:It just gets me mad when I put hours into in AAR and nobofy reads it.
Join the club, ES. Lots of people have AARs that dont get many responces, but they still post. It is harder to continue when there are few responces, but closing down a story after no responce after nine hours? Nine? ES, I dont think any posts of mine get more than 2 posts. Don't give up when you write, even when there are few readers. For me, it's because I'm not well known and I'm not doing an incredible job. However, I continue because I've got to start somewhere with my AAR writing. You, though, you've written enough AARs to where the formula is known. Therefore, fewer new people read yours, but you've got a core of readers who will read each and every ES AAR there is.
Aswell as what Deadcommand said (seriously, quitting after nine hours is far too fast), you must remember that quite a lot of the responses before were people making fun, but now they've gone. Whats left is the readers who were reading it properly from the beginning, and its only a matter of time before we cant be bothered to type "Great work" every few hours.