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MEIOU AAR's are springing up all over the place! I love it!
It's just such a great mod that deserves its AARs. Let's look at it at the final push before the end.

Well looking forward to the return Wiliart, its a good start so far
I'm back (but not in black, I'd call it red/brownish). This has been a good start for certain, now to continue it.


I have had a very productive and inspirational week, I have written 14/15 chapters, worth lots and lots of pages to read. Look forward to them!
 
Chapter 5: My will be done.

”All this conquering and constant wars are no fun. It’s not about skill, it’s about might. I don’t need to see might, I am might. I am the King of Bohemia and Emperor of the Holy Roman Empire. No, I want some distraction, something to entertain me and those other nobles too. It will distract them too, keep them away from those Hussite thoughts. Thoughts that will blow over, thoughts that don’t matter. It are thoughts for the pebble, that needs some kind of security.

Didn’t I say I wanted to be entertained? Go make sure there is a joust, I want to see fights with skill.”


It will make them train for the next war too, for a new war will come. Those Silesians claim they could rule themselves, but without me they would be nothing. If I tell them, they disagree. They are weak leaders and can´t admit it to themselves. If they won´t listen, I will show them. First this joust and when the knights are all together we can march to war.

A few months later
I knew it and I have shown it to another Silesian lord, I am might and they are weak. They are too weak to rule, so the Silesian land will be ruled by me, Wenzel IV, Holy Roman Emperor and King of Bohemia. Too bad there wasn’t a new promising officer, the current general are capable enough, but they are not the best. My army deserves the best, these can only win because of my mighty army. I want my victories to be remembered because they were victories, not because they were clear from the start to be won.

Now it’s time for that Joust to entertain me. I do hope that there will be awkward falling of horses. It’s good to laugh at those beneath you. Jan Petr has been left in charge of it and he’s a capable man. He should be able to arrange a good Joust. I do hope his son doesn’t compete in it though. He’s a terrible general and even a worse proper knight, it’s only a small favour I could give to Jan Petr though. I want action in this joust, some proper fights that show the valour of the knights in this joust. My will be done, I will be entertained.

“Jan Petr! Present me the knights that will fight in my joust.

Yes, my King. If you will walk with me to the jousting arena I will show you the knights that will compete for the honour to be called best jouster of your Kingdom. There will be competing 16 knights in total. The one I am post proud of is..

Oh no, don’t say your son is competing.

He..he is, my King. Is there something wrong with him? I hope I haven’t displeased you, my King.

You have actually, I don’t think he is a knight good enough to compete in a joust before me. You have served me well in the past though, so I will allow it for this time. Perhaps I will be entertained by him falling of his horse.

My.. my King, I am sorry. I did not know you thought he was an incompetent knight. He is my son and I may therefore be lacking in my objectivity concerning his skill. I hope you can forgive me, my King.

I will forgive you this time Jan Petr. Know what, we’ll make a bet out of it. If your son manages to win I’ll let him command on a major campaign. He’ll get to command an army of 15 thousand of my men. If he’s able to defeat 15 of the best knights in my kingdom than he deserves that.

Thank you my Ki..

Don’t interrupt me! If, however, he loses, he will never command an army again and he will be left to a position that will not give him any honour. Something like guarding the ladies of the court. Although perhaps fun, it will not require any skill a knight needs. Are you sure you still want him to compete in my joust?

It will be his choice, my King. Although it will be hard to find a replacement knight if he would redraw from the joust. I will ask him and when he has made his choice I will make arrangements according to it to make sure the joust will be a success.

That will suffice. I have glanced at the other knights training for the joust and they will suffice. Make sure the tribunes of the arena are filled tomorrow.


That should make it clear to him what I think of his son. Now, of to my chambers. It is time I take my thoughts off the son of Jan Petr and move my thoughts to something nicer.

The next day
How great to see the arena of the joust filled with my noble subjects. It is great to hear them cheer for me, like they should.

Welcome, my noble guests! At this great joust of mine. Let me show you the greatest knights in my Kingdom. They will compete for the honour to be called the greatest and grandest knight of Bohemia. The winner will be given ten thousand ducats and the honour to command the royal army for one campaign. Let the joust commence!

Well, let’s see where this will go.


I.. I can’t believe my eyes. How could this have happened? The son of Jan Petr actually has skill in something. He has been able to defeat all the other knights. Although most battles were close, he has won. From where did this skill suddenly emerge? It matters not, he has won and I will give him the honour he deserves.

Thank you for this great display of battle! As promised you will be given a chest of gold and you will be lead the armies on a campaign. You will command the royal armies on their goal to conquer the last Silesian lord.

This way he shouldn’t be able to do that much damage. An army at least 3 times the size of the army he must defeat will be able to the job mostly be themselves.


About half a year later
Didn’t I pray the correct way? I have always followed the priests in the faith. Surely they must know the correct way, they are men of the church. Or perhaps that Hus was right? No, no, no, no the Pope is right and would excommunicate me if he knew I had thoughts like this. I will not burn in hell as a heretic, I will follow the true path. God must have had a reason, a lesson for me to learn. Why else would he take my only child and heir?

Yeah, there should be a screen shot here about the death of the Prince, but at the moment in the game I didn’t think I’d use this in the AAR, so I didn’t take one.



More chapters will follow later today. This was a look at how the King thinks about thing, I see him as a vain man and I hope I have shown that well enough. I also thought this would be a longer chapter, but it seems my writing is a lot bigger than the font size here. I think I'll just use the short chapters, for they are nicely chronologically parted.

EDIT: I have expanded the chapter a bit (25th October 2013).​
 
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Chapter 6: Doubt and fear.

The land was mourning, and we joined, for the land had lost its prince. We were also afraid, for we didn't know how the King would react. Would he think it was a part of life and just carry on as he did before? Or would he think it was a punishment from God because he let us heretics live? It would mean that he would let the Catholic clerics have their way. We would be persecuted and hunted throughout the land. There would be people that would think that we Hussites are personally responsible for the death of the prince. It would start with that, and soon they would think us responsible for all kind of things. They would make us a second kind of Jew.
Or the King could doubt his faith, he could see that the Catholic clerics are wrong. He could see that they only claim to tell the word of God, but that in truth they don't. Would it be a sign of God, to show more people that the Catholics are wrong? It may just be, but would the King and the clerics see it that way? They probably wouldn't, they would see the signs they want to see. The King might still doubt his faith, he might see the true path, the path Jan Hus has shown to us. But this is probably wishful thinking. I doubt that a King would ever doubt about his own life.

We should prepare ourselves for the worst. Although we should still show others the true path. The sessions continued and I think we reached higher and higher. That one man looked richer than most of us, but sophisticated, and not to full of himself. He might be the youngest son of a nobleman, looking for a way to be great on his own, Vilém Borek I believe his name was. If he is the son of a nobleman and he truly believes in the path of Jan Hus than he might help us. He could help us prepare for fights, as he probably has had some training as an officer, as most younger sons of a nobleman become just that. I don't want us to fight, but I fear that one day we must. I would have asked Ludvik to train us, but I have heard nothing from him since he founded Tarbor. Sometimes I advice people to flee to Tarbor, when they are too afraid to keep living in their own town. I feel myself doing that less and less, as I don't know where I send them of too. We haven't had word from Tarbor in two years and I'm afraid that it doesn't exist anymore. They could have succeeded in creating their own community, a Hussite community, but I fear for the worst. I know Ludvik is a capable man, but I fear because we have hear nothing.​
 
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Looking forward to the short but regular updates, especially if you have over a dozen prepared. I'll try and throw come constructive criticism in here. Keep an eye out for typos and maybe run your text through Word or a similar program first. Ideally it would have grammar checks as well as spell checks. I know it caught you by surprise but if the main text looks like it's going to be too short then don't hesitate to throw some filler in. It doesn't need to be directly related to the plot. It could be a bit of world-building by talking about Wenzel leading Bohemia (say complaints from the clergy in a village about more Hussites or an account of his Silesian wars) or perhaps a personal issue that gives extra insight into his personality (you said he was vain so perhaps a foreign champion could've won his joust and embarrassed him or a drunken lord spilled wine on an expensive outfit).

(EDIT) Aaaahhh, you sneaked in Chapter 6 while I was typing. I better read that now.
(EDIT #2) Nice work with that chapter. I could really feel the protagonists worries and uncertainty about the current situation.
 
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Yeah, I could add some filler. The longer chapters or some of the later chapters. A page of writing is a lot shorter here, although this forum is one of the few that used your entire screen if you have a wide-screen monitor.

Let's just say that the shorter chapters here will be more than compensated by some really long chapters later.
 
Chapter 7: A new hope

It was five months later and most of my doubts were gone. The King hadn't changed his actions against us, which meant there weren't really any. I don't know his opinion about us, or if it had changed, but his actions hadn't.

Vilém has turned out to be a great man, he indeed is the youngest son of a nobleman, he has 3 elder brothers and 3 elder sisters. His father isn't important enough so that he might be used to marry and gain better allies, his sisters are used for that. His father has destined him to be an officer in his forces, but Vilém longs for something different. He has helped us with training though, although he has refused to help us train with weapons. it would make us too big of a threat for the King, who might change his mind about us. I agree with him, I think we should be prepared, but not bring to much of the King's attention to us. Vilém has trained us to defend ourselves, not to win, but to get away and alert others. I think it's a smart thought and I don't want to fight others to convince them of the Hussite path. A fight would be too dangerous against the armies of the King, we would stand no chance against knights.

Some of Viléms friends have joined us too, they are in situations just like his and just like him they want to fight for a cause, instead of just for the army of their father or their elder brother. If their life is destined for fights and wars, they want it to be for a cause they believe in. the doubt about the church and hate the way the Catholic clerics behave, like they own the world. I think they are uncertain about their lives and want to have the idea to have some control over it by becoming Hussites. It could be that they don't really believe the conception of Jan Hus, but they help our cause and I am glad for that.

We also had word from the herald that the King has a new son, Jan Petr, I hope he is distracted by his new heir and that he won't think about us too much. For it is best that he leaves us alone.

When I shared the news of the new prince with Markéta that evening she began to cry. It caught me totally of guard, she was such a strong woman and I had never seen her cry before. I quickly threw my arms around her and held her head to my shoulder. Soon it was all wet from her tears, but I didn't care. I had never seen her cry, not even when her father had thrown her out, and I knew she needed me to be there for her. I would have been a bad husband if I hadn't been there for her, and worse, I would never forgive me that I hadn't been there for the person that I love most of all. When her sobs had calmed down a bit I took her head in my hand, I looked into her eyes with all the love I could show her and kissed her. Her thoughts started to flow into words soon after.

"Oh Viktor, the news of a new baby makes me think of how Jan has never met his grandfather. Not that I like the man very much, but he is still my father and perhaps he would love his grandson. He didn't like that he had a daughter as heir, but perhaps a grandson would do."

I didn't knew that she still thought about her father so much and that she cared about her father and what he thought of her. Off course, he was her father and a child always wants to impress their parents. He had never treated her right, always sour that he didn't have a son and bringing all the anger about it into all his contact with Markéta. What would happen though if he did change and would come to us. It could help us financially too, although we didn't want to admit it, the work for me had been hard to come by. Some Catholics didn't care, but most of them didn't want a Hussite smith. It was slowly compensated by the Hussites, who all went to me. Overall though I had lost more work to the Catholics than what I had gained from us Hussites. There were more Hussites every week, so if we could survive the coming fe months than we would be fine. In a few years the work might even be too much for me alone, and I would need an apprentice. Jan would be too young, turning three in December this year. I told Markéta this, as I want her to know how I fell about this all.

"Yes, it would be great if we could have a little bit more money to spare. Let us hope that the King doesn't crack down on us and that the Hussites can keep growing. It's a part of why I'd like to be at better terms with my father, I want to be sure we can province a bright future for Jan.. and his little brother or sister."

I was baffled for a few seconds, but I quickly regained myself and kissed her again, tender and long. This was great, I would become a father again.​
 
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I wonder how the father-in-law will treat his heretic grandson. Perhaps the merchant has begun to have his doubts about the Papal church since the last time they met. Has there been news of the Hussite faith spreading to other parts of the Kingdom or is it restricted to the Hradecko area?
 
I wonder how the father-in-law will treat his heretic grandson. Perhaps the merchant has begun to have his doubts about the Papal church since the last time they met. Has there been news of the Hussite faith spreading to other parts of the Kingdom or is it restricted to the Hradecko area?

The answers to all your questions will come in chapter 10. (Sorry, just teasing you there to keep reading, but I don't want to spoil to much of the story.) At this moment there are Hussites in Hradecko and Morava (Tarbor), I think. Perhaps in another province too, also, the province where an event happens doesn't necessary mean that it will happen in that province in my story, although I try to keep it up as possible. Only slight tweaks will happen story wise, I usually do that the events happen in the town that the people of my AAR live. That way I don't have to move them around all the time, just because an event happened in a neighbouring province.

Also, I think it's funny that you ask about the father and the spread of the Hussite faith, but that you say nothing about the fact that you finally know the name of the protagonist.
 
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Chapter 8: To be a father.

Our second son was born in December too, his name is Jarek Dobromil, meaning strong, kind and dear (or strong, good gracious). I showed Jan around my workshop that day, for a son doesn't need to hear the screams of pain from his mother giving birth to sibling. I think Jan liked the workshop and I hope he will grow up a strong man like me. Off course I hope for Markéta that one day her father will come to us and hope to make things better. As a father though, I hoped that my eldest son will follow my trade, like I took over from my father. He may not be with us anymore, dying of old age just a year before I first heard Jan Hus preach. I am sure he would have liked Markéta and would have loved to be a grandfather. He taught me to think before I act and only use violence as a last resort. He was a wise man and tried to raise me as best he could after mother died giving birth to me. There was no woman after her, as he had loved her dear and couldn't imagine another woman in his life. The consequence was that I practically grew up in the workshop. It made me into a man who knows everything about blacksmithing that my father knew, but it left me with few friends.

But this is me talking about my youth again, back to what happened concerning the Hussites. Not much to be honest, our numbers steadily grew and indeed I had no problems getting work. Vilém had asked me if I could smith weapons too, just in case. I answered him that I couldn't and that I wouldn't. I thought that he didn't want us trained in weapons. When I asked him about it he replied that it was for the nobles, as more and more of them joined our cause. Even when I knew where it was for, I still wouldn't craft weapons. I would rather convince the Catholics with words than with force. If they would see reason they would become Husites willingly, if we would force them they wouldn't be true Hussites and they could turn on us again.


Bohdan had returned from another church council again half a year later and it seemed that the King continued his business as usual. Although he had conquered all his vassals, he had conquered Meissen too and had made them into his new vassal. It appeared that the King had been less vivid and that he was less sure of himself. That could lead to him caring even less about us, or the clerics getting their way more easily.

Now that the King wasn't busy any more conquering his vassals he might turn his attention to us. If he does, I hope that he sees our reason and that he sees our path as the true path of God it is. That might be wishful thinking, but only seeing the worst possibilities doesn't get you anywhere. It might make you prepared though, so I can't not think about possible negative outcomes of the King's insecurity. I wouldn't mind if he keeps doubting himself, because things aren't that bad at the moment.

Jan really likes it that he has a little brother, even though Jarek is still too small to really play with, at only half a year old. Not that Jan is that much older at three and a half years, but he off course thinks otherwise.​
 
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Chapter 9: Growing big

It has been some time since the last church council that Bohdan attended, although it seems that a council every few years is more often that the last few decades. Perhaps it is because the Hussite numbers keep growing, we are not a majority in any province, but we are certainly a presence in multiple provinces.

I am glad that we are mostly left alone, it has made it possible for us to raise Jan and Jarek in peace. Jan is turning into a busy little man full of energy. Jarek is a bit more quiet, perhaps in awe of his big brother. Markéta is a great mother, which I admire her for. I find it more easily to work in the smithy than to keep Jan in check. It's all his questions in particular, there never seems to be a stop to it. When he is with me I try to teach him some of my craft, but I'm not sure if he is interested. Or at least more interested in it than he is in everything else, which is a lot. Perhaps he would have been a good trader, as he wants to know something about everything. Markéta has taught him to read a bit already, but it's small and simple words only. I think it's a bit early to teach him about the Hussite way, but we have taught him to pray for his dinner and before he goes to sleep. Jarek is a strong little fellow, when he grows older he might be more suited for the smithy than Jan is. At his two years of age it's still a 'little' too early to see if he has a knack for it.

Markéta and I have slowly moved away from teaching others how to read, more and more already knew how to. More often we find ourselves in discussions with other Hussites how to continue our cause. As some nobles have joined us too, they somehow have the tendency to take control. They may have more experience with it, but they haven't been here since the start and don't always follow the true spirit of Jan Hus. I am fine though with not being one of the leaders any more, I have my family to worry about. I am not sure though if the nobles follow the faith as Jan Hus wanted it. if things go wrong I'll try to intervene, but right now I am happy that more people, and more powerful people at that, follow the true faith. I am not sure what to do, on one hand I want to make sure that God is followed as Jan Hus has shown us. On the other hand I want to be there for my family, I want to be there when Jan and Jarek learn more and new things. I have to be in the workshop, so we can stay alive.​
 
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Chapter 10: A return.

At the end of the year it appeared that the King had finally made a decision and it had been away from the way the Catholic clerics wanted it. I hope he was sick and tired of them and that is why he granted more religious freedom to his people. Maybe he felt sorry for all the people who had to put up with the clerics all the time. Or perhaps he wasn't sure of his Catholic faith any more.

The greater religious freedom had made more people come out for their real thoughts and it seemed there are more Hussites than we thought there were. We might even have the majority in Wroclaw.

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As we sat at the table eating the pork stew I had made, a remnant recipe from the time before Markéta and I had married and that she and the children really loved, there was a knock on the door. I looked surprised at Markéta and saw the same look on her face. What had happened now? Markéta stood up and opened the door.

"You!?" she exclaimed.

"Yes me, your father." I heard a man say.

"I..I.." Markéta began.

I walked to the door and asked them both to come inside, it was cold outside. Even though Markéta did not have fond memories of him and here negative feelings had also rubbed off on me, I did want to give him a chance to explain himself.

"Who is that, daddy?" Jan popped. I told him that man was his grandfather. Jan looked at him and I saw him thinking. "You look lonely and you look like you need a hug." Jan went of his chair, went to Markéta's father and hugged his grandfather. At first he didn't know what to do, but soon he dropped to a knee and hugged Jan back.

He soon went up his feet again, although he had a bit of trouble doing so. I saw something in his eyes, I don't know what to call it, but it seemed like a wish finally came true. I looked at Markéta again and saw a mix of emotions on her face and body, disgust for the man that had thrown her out, love for Jan who so easily accepted him and worry about what to do now.

"I know that I haven't been the best father for you, and a grandfather for the last few years, but please let me explain," he started.

"Well, we were just eating, so we might as well listen while we do so," Markéta answered. "Here, have a bit yourself."

"Thank you for showing some hospitality I really have no right to,"
he replied "Good stew by the way."

"Thank you, Viktor made it."
I nodded and Markéta took the children, telling them it was time for bed and that we had to discuss something with their grandfather. At first they wouldn't go, but after a stern look from both Markéta and me they bulged and went to bed.

When Markéta came back we had finished our stew and hers had become cold. It didn't seem to bother her, or she was just distracted, she beckoned for her father to begin.

"Recent years have got me thinking, I am growing old and lonely. the advance of the Hussites pressed me into trading with them. At first I was reluctant to do so, but after time passed on I got to know more and more of them. At first I still thought they were wrong, moving away from the Catholic church. As a trader though, I just can't pass up the opportunity for trade and more and more of my contacts became Hussites too. Up to the point now where I trade more with Hussites than with Catholics. I have deepened myself into what Hussites believe and found myself agreeing with it. the Catholic church just seems to be afraid they lose the power they have gotten over the years. They concern themselves more with that than to really express the word of God. Power corrupts and a lot of power corrupts until you are afraid to lose it. I have become a Hussite myself, but was afraid to show it to anybody. I wanted to tell you must of all, Markéta, but I was afraid of waht you would say and how you would act. I was wrong throwing you out and thought you would throw me out when I came here. I'm glad you haven't and that you turned out to be so kind to me. I was a bitter old man, afraid to lose what I had and to stubborn to change. It only lead to me losing what I loved most. Now I feel my old age well and I want us to be at better grounds with each other before it is too late. I want to see my grandchildren grow up and I want them to remember me as a kind man. With the recent freedom in religion I thought now ould be a good moment and I finally managed to gather my courage and come over here. I hope you can forgive me."

Markéta sighed and answered: "I cannot just forgive you so easily, I cannot just forgive all the years and how you have treated me, but I will give you the opportunity to make it up. Show us that you are a true Hussite and that you love your grandchildren. You are the only grandparent they have and deserve that you be a good grandparent to them. So please, come over more often and perhaps you can show them your love better than you showed it to me in the past."
 
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Chapter 11: Growing up.

It was only a year and a bit later that Bohdan had to go to another church council. It seemed that they wanted to know the effects of a more securalistic country. It wasn’t good for the Catholics, they lost more and more ground. Although we Hussites only were present in three provinces and had the majority just here in Wroclaw. It would be the last church council that Bohdan would attend, as he had made it clear that he was a Hussite now, they didn’t seem surprised. The King hadn’t been there, he busy helping an ally defend against Hungary.

At home things had changed too, Markéta’s father had come by more often and the children loved him. Markéta was reserved at first, but she saw that he really had changed. He had seen that he was wrong and he wanted to make it up by giving his grandchildren the love he had never shown here when she had grown up. He showed her more love too, although he showed his love most to Jan and Jarek. He loved to play with his grandchildren and he often brought them toys.

We also had a daughter, now only a month old, we named her Darina Libena Daniela, meaning gift of love, god is my judge. The Daniela part was named after Markéta’s mother. Her father had been rejoiced with it and seemed to have a mind to spoil her even more than Jan and Jarek. It was nice that the children had some more toys, as the years in the past had been hard. Markéta’s father had also placed all his orders for blacksmithing with me, that had increased my order to more than I could process. He had a lot of wagons that all needed to be maintained and repaired. It brought us some prosperity and together with his help and donations of some Hussite nobles we could start thinking of building our own church. It would replace the meeting place, where all Hussite preaches were still held. That might have to wait though, until we were certain that the King wouldn’t forbid it.

All those order made me hire an apprentice, Jan could do some small things, but he wouldn’t be able to do the things where I needed strength. He may have thought about it otherwise, thinking he was almost as strong as his father, but he was only a boy of eight. He also didn’t seemed that interested in blacksmithing, he liked the ways of his grandfather more. We wondered when he would ask if he could join a trade journey of his grandfather. We still thought it was a bit too early for that, perhaps when he was twelve. As his grandfather had changed, Markéta and I didn’t mind that Jan would follow the traders path. It would probably be a bright future for him.

Jarek seemed stronger than his brother at the same age. He has inherited the strength of me and my father, but he is three years younger than Jan. It would take even more years before I could get an apprentice that would be my own son and I couldn’t wait so long. Therefore Tomás became my first apprentice, a boy of thirteen.​
 
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You weren't kidding about regular updates. I miss two nights of reading and I find four chapters waiting for me. It's quite the evolution that the family has had there. Interesting that the Wroclaw Hussites were a result of a random religion change after slider move and not the normal Hussite events. Did the change in faith stick or did it revert back to Catholic after a year or two?
 
You weren't kidding about regular updates. I miss two nights of reading and I find four chapters waiting for me. It's quite the evolution that the family has had there. Interesting that the Wroclaw Hussites were a result of a random religion change after slider move and not the normal Hussite events. Did the change in faith stick or did it revert back to Catholic after a year or two?

Indeed I wasn't kidding, although I am running a bit out of time that I've played. Still a lot of chapters written though.

Yes, quite the evolution, and it isn't over yet. The Wroclaw Hussites become Catholic again after a while, I only noticed that later when I wrote the story and checked the screenshots (or I just forget I noticed) and had to rewrite a bit of story. Good thing it wasn't that much, but still. Perhaps I'll rewrite the chapter of the King too somewhere in the coming days, it really is short and I'd like more about him known.

Speaking of regular updates..
 
Chapter 12: Another return and no way back.

It was October Anno Domini 1412, when Ludvik came back again. It was nice to see him again, but it seemed that he had changed. I couldn’t say exactly how he had, but something about him was different.

Tabor was flourishing, it had become a small city in size, almost six thousand Hussites strong. The numbers of new inhabitants had decreased lately and Ludvik had wondered why. It was clear to him now, the King had given us more religious freedom and we didn’t need to flee to Tabor any more. He didn’t think it was enough and he wanted more people to follow the Hussite path. I agreed with him that more people should become Hussite, as the Catholic church was corrupt and didn’t spread the true word of God. However, I had seen the progress we had made the last few years and was content with it. It takes time to show people the true path. I let Tomás keep the fire hot and let him repair some wheels, it was not to difficult and he could do it without my supervision now, most of the time anyway.

I brought Ludvik to the meeting place and found Vilém and his friends there. I introduced Ludvik to them, as they hadn’t met before. They seemed to get along, so I let them be and said I’d go back to my workshop, I still had a lot of work to do. Before I left I heard a bit of their conversation, I couldn’t quite make it out, but I think they said something about spreading the Hussite faith more and quicker.

The next day Ludvik asked me to come with him to Praha. I was surprised at the question and asked him to give me some time to think about it. “I am afraid I can’t wait very long. Will it be okay if I come over tonight?” I told him it would be okay, Markéta would love to see him again and the children wanted to see the guard hero that saved the wedding of mommy and daddy. “I guess I have some catching up to do, and a bit of hero to play,” he smiled.

That evening Ludvik came around for dinner and after some nice chit-chat the children went to bed. ”I am glad I saved your wedding. You have wonderful children and Jan has grown up to be quite the kid. I wondered when his questions would stop.”

When Markéta came back from bringing the children to bed I asked Ludvik why he wanted me to go to Praha with him. ”Not just with me, Bohdan and Vilém are coming too. We are going there to see if we can convince some people there to spread our word a bit more around. We know there are Hussites there, but our numbers there don’t seem to be very large. Something must change about that, or else we might get put as a backwater religion from the provinces. We must see why the Hussites aren’t more successful there. Something must be holding us back.”
I looked at Markéta while I knew I had to go. I still had a lot of work here to do at the blacksmith, and I had done less for the Hussites, but it was still very close to my heart and I just had to show people that the Catholics church was corrupt and power hungry. We weren’t in real trouble financially, having some money to spare, and her father would probably help her out if I would be away for a long time. Markéta simply nodded and said: ”I know I can’t hold you back and I too want the people to see what the Catholic church is really like.”

So we went to Praha on a cart Markéta’s father provided for us. Luckily there were no storms or any heavy rain, which normally are there this time of year, and we arrived in Praha soon. We found an inn to stay at and asked around a bit about the Hussites here. The innkeeper told us the city council wouldn’t have it. Only the priests were allowed to speak about the word of God. They were all strict Catholics and wanted to make sure their city would remain so, even more so now that they had to watch the city while the King was at war in Hungary. Ludvik thanked him for the information and came back with a beer for each of us.

”It seems clear where we need to go to, the problem will be to be let in. Perhaps I can do something as former captain of a guard.”

“Or we could just burst in,“
Vilém proposed, “but that wouldn’t the best way to start talking.”

“We could just ask for an appointment and if that doesn’t take too long it would be the best solution.”
Bohdan offered. “I’ll go ahead and see if they have time for us, perhaps they’ll make time for a man of the church. Seems like they think there is only one around here, and I don’t think they know that I don’t follow the Catholic way anymore.”

We all thought we might as well try it, we could always try something different if this didn’t work. Although it seemed that Bohdan and I were more convinced of the diplomatic way and Ludvik and Vilém wanted to use a more.. practical way. The next morning Bohdan went to the building of the city council and came back about halfway the afternoon.

”Well, that’s some success,” he started, ”we can talk to somebody tomorrow, but I fear he’s just an even bigger bureaucrat than those I spoke to today to get an appointment.”

“It’s better than nothing.”
Ludvik complained, but he didn’t seem all that pleased about it.

We discussed a bit more of how we would say what we want; freedom for the Hussites to practise their religion. We also knew that we wouldn’t get if from the bureaucrat we would talk too, but we had to start somewhere. The next day we went to the building where the city council was seated and hoped for the best, whatever that might turn out to be. That turned out to be something different for me than what it was for Ludvik and Vilém. The discussion turned into a heated debate and the bureaucrat didn’t want too budge even the slightest. Ludvik and Vilém, man from whom I knew that they thought before they acted, moved to either side of the bureaucrat and grabbed him. Before he or I could react they had thrown him out through the window. I was shocked.
”With the arguments he used, I knew we were never going anywhere and would get nothing, no matter how high up the ranks we took it. The time has come that we act and take matters into our own hands instead of waiting if we get the freedom to act. With the King and his armies fighting in Hungary we can take our chances her at home.” Ludvik declared.
Now I knew what had changed about him, he had become more radical and would use force to get his way. Living in Tarbor had shut the Hussites that lived there off from the outside world. They had become much more orthodox, their way or no way.

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Chapter 13: An unlucky day.

I did not want us to force people to be Hussites, I wanted them to see reason and convert on their own. History is written by the victorious however and I want that to be us so the Hussite faith can emerge victorious. Ludvik, Vilém and one of his friends, Josef Turn, took charge of an army. Ludvik led the army in Morava, so he could protect Tarbor too if he needed too. Vilém took charge of the army in Hradecko, protecting our town as much as he could. Josef took the one in Wroclaw, to protect our brethren in the province where we might have the majority. It seemed that they wanted Wroclaw to become totally Hussite and not just a possible majority. Each one of them had eight to nine thousand man under their control, although they were all infantry.

I raced home, I wanted to be sure that Markéta and the children would be fine. It worried me that of the persons leading the armies, the one protecting my home was the one who didn’t want us to fight in the first place. What had changed his mind?

As I got closer to Hradecko I saw more and more destruction. Not only of Catholic property, but also that of Hussites. It seemed that the Catholics wanted to pay back some of the death and destruction that was done to them. I feared for the worst and spurred the horses to run faster, it was only a few hours ride still. The moment I came into the street of our home I knew something was wrong. First I went into the workshop and quickly grabbed a hammer, I need something to defend myself with. I heard a scream, a horrible scream of a voice I recognized, there was something wrong with Markéta. I went into our house and the first thing I saw were soldiers that held Markéta.

“Good, you’re here,” I heard a voice say. ”Now we can get rid of her too.”

I looked to the right and saw a captain making a gesture. I looked back at Markéta and could just see how one of the soldiers that held her sliced her throat.


Something snapped inside me, I stopped caring, I stopped thinking. I only felt an anger rising in me of the likes I had never felt before. Time stopped moving, and still it was over before I realised. When I came back to my senses again I only saw blood everywhere. Of the soldiers that had been here nothing was left that was recognizable. It appears that I had used the hammer that I held to beat them bloody, and far beyond that. I collapsed onto the ground and crawled towards Markéta. There she lay, the love of my life, the mother of my children. Where were my children? I looked around me and saw the lifeless body of Darina. Where were Jan and Jarek? I searched the house and found nothing. Where could they have gone? I panicked. I looked around again, there were only the bloody remains of soldiers. The captain had fled away. Might he have taken Jan and Jarek? What would I have to do now. Where should I go to now? I had to find Jan and Jarek. I decided to go to Markéta’s father, he deserved to know that had happened to his daughter and granddaughter. Perhaps he had a clue on where Jan and Jarek were, if he would be able to overcome the shock of the death of his two little girls.

I walked towards his house, thinking of how I should say that his daughter had been murdered. As I walked towards his house the people who were still on the streets looked at me with shock. I must have been because of all the blood on my clothes. When I arrived at the house of Markéta’s father I still didn’t know what to say, but still I knocked on his door. It took a minute before I heard him ask: ”Who’s there?” It seems that he didn’t feel safe at his own house, and he did so with reason. I said who I was and the door opened.

“Daddy!” Jan exclaimed. Thank God, Jan was save.

“What happened?” Markéta’s father asked. ”Who’s blood is that?”

I told him he might want to sit down.
”It has to do with Markéta, hasn’t it? She didn’t feel safe and brought the boys here. She went back to.. where is she? Oh God, is that her blood?!”
I said it wasn’t, not all of it.
”Daddy, where is mommy?” Oh God, the questions of a child, I could I ever tell him. Markéta’s father had sat down, one of the boys on either of his knees. I told them, with tears in my eyes that some soldiers or guards had killed Mommy and Darina.
”Does that mean that Mommy can’t come here? “ I said it meant that mommy will never be back, that she could never come back.

I looked at Markéta’s father and saw a broken man, his only child was no more. He had done what no parent should ever do, outlive their own child. He was not alone, as I had lost my daughter too. I was glad that I still had Jan and Jarek. I saw Markéta’s father look at them and realize that, at least, he had them too. I took Jan and Jarek from him and hugged them with all the love I could muster. I wanted that hug to last forever, so I could forget the world out there. Just a father hugging his children, not children hugging their father who’s eyes were filled with tears because their mother had been murdered.

”You have to take revenge for her. Tell me everything, how did it happen?”

This was not a story for young boys to hear, they shouldn’t dream nightmares for the rest of their lives. I put them in another room and let a maid look after them. I came back to Markéta’s father and told him everything that I could remember. When I was done he asked me how the captain looked like. All I could remember was that he was bold with a black moustache, with a look in his eyes that he cared of nothing but himself.

”I know that bastard, a real Catholic zealot. He and his boys always took an extra look at my wagons after they knew I had become a Hussite. Make him pay, make them all pay for what they have done! I know you are not a man of violence, but this calls for a fight. Come to the meeting place in two hours. Watch the boys and try to explain a bit to them what happened. My maid will watch the boys until we return, and the stable boys can protect them. Right now, they need their father, their daddy.” I saw a determined look in his eyes, although he had just lost his daughter, he held dealt with crisis’s before. He was taking action for as much as he could.

I tried to explain to them as best I could, but how do you tell your children that their mother and little sister were dead and that they would never return. Time will have to tell how they’ll react and how they’ll cope with it.
I didn’t want to leave them behind, but I had to take revenge for Markéta and Darina, I had to make sure my children would have a future. I left them in hands I knew I could trust, we had been there often and the maid and all the workers loved Jan and Jarek. They would protect them and people would think twice before they would enter the house of the wealthiest merchant in town.

When I arrived at the meeting place it was absolutely packed to the brim. There must have been hundreds of people in there. I moved to one of the sides where a few tables had been put together to make a makeshift podium. I had to push a bit, but people tried to clear a path for me as best they could. As I came close to the podium I saw Markéta’s father, he saw me too and beckoned me to come closer.

”Your time has come, I have made preparations and we should be able to burry Markéta and Darina at the end of the day. I know it is quick and that you have almost no time to say your goodbyes, but we couldn’t leave her laying in your house. They need, no, they deserve a proper funeral. Now though it is time you made speech, rally them for a fight, rally them for revenge.”

I nodded and climbed onto the tables, I hadn’t prepared for this. I didn’t knew what to say, but when I started the words came on their own.

”MY FELLOW HUSSITES!” I began, and the talking stopped. People turned and looked at me. ”Today the Catholics have shown what kind of people they are. What they will do when they have power in their hands. They are not afraid to use it for their own good, they are not afraid to use force, they are not afraid to misuse their power. Today they have killed my wife and daughter, they have killed Markéta.”

I let a silence fall and heard the inhales of shocked people, people from whom most had learned to read from Markéta.

”They didn’t kill her on a battlefield, or in a fight with the guards. No, they came to our house, to a place that we deemed safe, where we felt secure. Before Markéta’s eyes they murdered our daughter, and when I came home they murdered Markéta before my eyes. They have slit their throats before they eyes of those who loved them most.
Some of them got what they deserved, but their leader got away. I know he will lead other man against us, and he will not be afraid to murder you in your own home. He is not alone however, he is inspired by the Catholic clerics. Who have tricked Jan Hus before and murdered him when he thought himself save. We can no longer tolerate such men to have the power our country, to have power over us. They are not afraid to kill innocent women and children. We must act, we must take revenge for all the harm they have done to us. We must take control into our own hands. We must fight for our right to follow the true path of God. We must fight against the corrupt and power hungry Catholic church. We must fight the crusade they have started against us and take the fight to them. FOR GOD! FOR JAN HUS! For Markéta.”

“FOR GOD! FOR JAN HUS. FOR MARKÉTA!”
The crowd cried out loud after me. ‘

Forth we went, with Markéta on our shoulders. We buried here and gave her the respect she deserved. Darina was buried in Markéta’s arms, a mother protecting her daughter, even in her grave.

We marched and called forth all the Hussites we could muster, from Hradecko we went to Wroclaw, to release our Hussite Brethren from their Catholic oppressors. The King thought our rebellion would die down on his own, never has he been so wrong.

And so, I, Viktor Purkune, lead sixteen thousand man to fight against our Catholic oppressors, to take revenge for Markéta, and Darina.

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This was one of the hardest chapters to write, you probably see why.
 
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Guys.. some feedback would be nice. Now I only see the views rise, it would be nice to know what you think of the events in the life of Viktor. Some critique of what could be improved in writing style, or how you didn't expect things to happen like this, stuff like that. Even a "still reading" would be nice.

Yeah, I know, this is just begging for attention and I know this AAR is followed, for the views rise, but .. something, just something would be nice to keep my morale up. I like to write the story, but if nobody watches it's hard to keep writing.
 
I have the feeling this is finally starting.
Waiting for the Hussites to finally pop up could have been boring, but you managed to keep us entertained for 13 updates (and probably a couple more) with a pure yellow map.
As soon as you turn blue and spread it on Europe, I guess you'll have more feedback :)
 
This has to be my favourite story-based AAR, if not one of my favourites in general. Keep it up!
Thank you very much, good to know that people like it.


I have the feeling this is finally starting.
Waiting for the Hussites to finally pop up could have been boring, but you managed to keep us entertained for 13 updates (and probably a couple more) with a pure yellow map.
As soon as you turn blue and spread it on Europe, I guess you'll have more feedback :)
Well, the fighting Hussite events have finally started, but the life of Viktor has been going for a while off course. Even though it has 13 updates, some are quite short, at some point it had one light blue province, but that defected back to catholic. The blue will spread, but some feedback now would be nice too. A story isn't only the end, it isn't only the bulk in the middle, without a good start you won't come those two. I think I should combine some more events into one chapter, or this AAR could become one of the longest AARs on the forum, not that that would be that bad.

Speaking of spreading stuff, let's spread another chapter, with the colour of crimson red blood.