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Hello and Happy New Year! I have an out-of-the ordinary offering for you.

This AAR is the result of two events that overlapped with each other: a self-imposed writing challenge and a gauntlet being thrown down by a forum user.

A couple weeks ago, I ended the Stormbreaker Universe and planned to enjoy my winter break, just having fun. Part of that fun was a personal challenge I laid down for myself: "Write a Stellaris story within the time limit while following strict restrictions."

You see, I consider myself to be bad at writing romantic stories. So I challenged myself to write a Stellaris Story centered on two lovers. And there were some restrictions for added difficulty:
  • The story must be centered on some kind of romantic plot and be finished before Valentine's Day 2023.
  • The story must include elements from at least one Stellaris major expansion (such as Federations, Nemesis, Utopia, etc)
  • The main couple must have at least one public declaration of love.
  • The couple must go through a "rough patch" and repair their relationship afterward.
  • All chapters must be shorter than 1200 words (roughly 3 pages in Microsoft Word, this is massively shorter than what I am used to writing)
  • The completed story cannot be longer than 14 chapters.
  • Re-using elements from the Stormbreaker Universe is permitted HOWEVER the 7 main protagonists are NOT allowed to appear in the story.

Like I said, this story was supposed to be a self-imposed challenge for the fun of it. I had no plans to share this tale with anyone.

And then I won the Weekly AAR Showcase Award.

Just a few days later, @coz1 hit me with the WritAAR of the Week Award.

I joked around with folks about my old house rule, the one where I would post new chapters of my stories immediately after winning a weekly awAARd, but being unable to do so because the Stormbreaker Universe ended. That was when @Wraith11B hit me with the metaphorical glove:

Clearly, a double post is in order, @Macavity116!


Well, you know what? Challenge accepted!

Here comes the double post! ;)

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January 30, 2096


A cold wind whistled across the landscape. Trees rustled and grass swayed gently. Up above, the night sky was clear as crystal. The whole Galaxy was laid out for a viewer to observe. Even though it was the middle of the night, the ground was illuminated by the heavenly bodies above. A stellar formation called the Shining Hinterlands emitted dim light, causing everything on the planet's surface to cast a shadow.

In the valley below, a city was nestled between two hills. It shone brightly with white and gold lights while starships came and went in an orderly manner. The scene was as tranquil as it possibly could be. On top of the west hill, two people were able to enjoy this tranquility.

Standing atop the hill, a pair of young lovers were so caught up in one another that neither noticed the cold breeze.

Both of these people were Humanoid, standing on two legs and holding each other with two arms as they kissed. Because of the chilly weather, they were both bundled up in very heavy winter clothes. It was difficult to tell at first what species the lovers belonged to. When they paused to breathe and pulled apart, a glance at their faces revealed that they belonged to different species.

The young man had brown skin, short silver hair, and vivid purple eyes. His face was incredibly Human-like and covered in an extensive tattoo. The image on his face contained patterns and images reminiscent of ocean waves. This man was clearly a descendant of the Maori people of Earth, yet he also had the look of someone who had never set foot on a Human planet. He was in fact, from the world of Aoraki. This man was a member of the Partogan race, a group of people descended from the Maori; abducted from Earth and transplanted to a new Homeworld across the Galaxy. The emblem of the Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth was stitched onto his winter jacket.

The young woman was also Human-like, but her body diverged from the so-called “Human template” in two certain ways. First: the upper half of her ears curved upward and tapered into a point. Second, she was shorter than her lover by a head. She needed to stand on the tips of her toes to reach his lips. Any Human looking at this woman would have (mistakenly) called her an “elf,” a name reserved for mythical pointy-eared people. Just like her lover, she had a tattoo on her face. Her left eyebrow was completely shaved off, and in its place, there was a small emblem. The narrow symbol was the emblem of Kiith Manaan, a clan of people known for seeking thrills and adventure. She was, as her tattoo implied, a native of the planet Hiigara.

The Partogan was called Kiri Ranginui.

The Hiigaran was named Mina Soban-Re.

They came to this planet separately because of their occupations. They met during a work-related event and soon fell in love, and this hilltop tryst was only the second time Kiri and Mina found the time to be alone together.

The wind howled and blew some leaves out of a tree, causing Mina to huddle up in Kiri’s arms.

“This view really is beautiful.” Mina said. “But it’s still winter. Next time, let’s try to get a hotel in the city, alright?”

“Are you willing to risk getting caught?” Kiri replied. “I thought your handler was really strict.”

He rubbed his hands across Mina’s back, trying to warm her up.

“Yeah, my handler would freak out.” Mina confessed. “I’m sorry, but… I can’t help it. I’ve never been as happy as when I’m with you.”

They looked at one another.

“I am too.” Kiri replied. “You’ve become the brightest Lightstone in my life.”

“You know,” Mina confessed. “I always thought Partogan Lightstones were the most beautiful things in the Galaxy. Means a lot that you’d compare me to one.”

Kiri and Mina kissed again, holding the embrace against the noisy wind. They locked lips for another few moments before a vibration caught their attention. Mina groaned and pressed one hand to her breast pocket.

“That’s probably my handler.” Mina grumbled.

“Ugh… same.” Kiri replied, reaching into his own pocket and withdrawing a smartphone.

Kiri and Mina stepped apart, making sure to put almost a hundred feet between each other before answering the calls from their respective bosses. Kiri and Mina listened to their respective employers for a few moments, and them simultaneously waved goodbye to one another, their faces downcast and forlorn.



About two hours later, in the seedy red-light district of the city, a nondescript storefront was the site of a very interesting scene:

Ten Partogans, dressed in construction worker outfits, patrolled around the building. They looked like ordinary workers, but the bulges in their clothes told otherwise. Each Partogan was carrying a concealed weapon under his or her clothes: pistols and submachineguns.

Kiri was among their number. Dressed up as a foreman, he was hiding a plasma pistol under his safety vest and a needle grenade in his cargo pocket. Kiri watched the building from across the street, pretending to talk about the local prostitutes with another disguised Partogan. There were so many people in the street, he could not do much else. Kiri nodded at a group of Voor as they passed by.

Inside the shop, six Hiigarans frantically moved from room to room. They destroyed all of their computers by shooting them with laser pistols. The Hiigarans also shredded papers and smashed their data drives. Finally, once the structure was purged of anything that could carry data, the Hiigarans moved into the basement. Underneath the building, a bookcase was moved from one of the walls, revealing a tunnel entrance.

Mina was standing inside of the tunnel, waiting for the bookcase to be moved. She carried a laser submachine gun in one hand and a portable scanner in the other. She verified the identities of all six Hiigarans before allowing them to enter the tunnel. Once they were through, Mina shifted the bookcase into its original position, hiding the tunnel entrance once more.

Finally, about an hour before sunrise, the red-light district was clear of civilians. The multispecies city of Rotorua was still and silent.

Moving swiftly and silently, the disguised Partogans started their raid. No weapons were drawn until one of the doors was forced and they gained entry. Kiri and his compatriots kicked open doors, expecting to find their Hiigaran enemies at any moment. Instead, the shop was deserted.

That night, clandestine operatives from the Hiigaran Empire and Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth narrowly avoided a gunfight that would have caused the Galactic Cold War to go hot. Kiri and Mina both breathed a sigh of relief in their separate hiding places, grateful to know that conflict was averted.

After all, they would not be able to see one another if there was a war on.
 
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The Hiigaran Military Counterintelligence Service, or MCS for short, is an intelligence agency that serves the Hiigaran Empire. Their duty is to hunt down spies from alien empires. Their work takes them across the Galaxy. The agency employs over a thousand clandestine operatives, many of whom are hidden in plain sight, watching and waiting for enemy agents to make their move. The MCS seeks to pre-emptively neutralize threats to Hiigaran security before they arise.

The Commonwealth Defence Intelligence Agency (DIA) is based in the Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth and is an extension of the Royal Military. Their duty is to secretly prepare for the next war. The DIA accomplishes this by spying on all spacefaring nations, observing their military capabilities, and then taking action to ensure the Commonwealth can never fall victim to surprise attack. The Commonwealth has good reasons for doing this. Ten years ago, the Royal Space Fleet was crippled in a surprise attack perpetrated by the United Nations of Earth. This must never happen again.

Over the past ten years, relations between the Commonwealth and Hiigaran Empire have soured. Tensions were high, and the specter of war loomed in the background. Both interstellar nations were spying on each other intensely. And their clandestine intelligence services took an interest in a small urban planet that could be found between them…

Hokianga was settled by Partogans and Levakians from the Commonwealth about two hundred years ago, and for very good reason.


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The planet Hokianga is what is known as a “Gaia-class” world. The terrain and weather conditions on the surface are perfect for all known forms of life. Any and all sentient lifeforms in the Galaxy can live on the planet comfortably, with access to near-unlimited natural resources.

There are only two Gaia Worlds in the Galaxy.

Hiigara is one.

Hokianga is the other.

Over a century ago, Partogans and Hiigarans came to an agreement to transform Hokianga into a “Condominium Territory.” This means the planet would be shared between the Empire and the Commonwealth, with both governments sharing power over it. One planet ruled by two interstellar empires, located at the very point where their borders touched. Eventually, Rotorua was opened up to all spacefaring peoples.

Now, in the present day, every civilization capable of Hyperspace technology has a permanent presence in the city of Rotorua. Even the Humans are here, less than a decade after the War of the Paradox, a conflict that shifted interstellar boundaries once again.

Hokianga’s location is of crucial importance as well. The planet is found in a region of space called the Talas Crossroads. Previously, it was the only point in the Galaxy where the borders of the Hiigaran Empire and the Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth touched. Now, in the aftermath of the Second Hyperspace War, three interstellar empires had a permanent presence in the region: the United Nations of Earth was here as well. During the War of the Paradox just ten years ago, the Humans established themselves as the Galaxy’s third major superpower.

Hiigara, Aoraki, Earth. They are the most powerful planets in the Galaxy, and their borders touch in this one system. All three civilizations have a permanent presence on the planet and a claim to its surface. This is the only such political boundary in the Galaxy.


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For half a century, this situation was the status quo. During the time when it was shared by three empires, Hokianga knew the same kind of peace and tranquility as when it was shared by two.

And then the War of the Paradox happened.

In just two short years of conflict, the longtime friendship between Hiigara, Earth, and Aoraki collapsed. All three of the former allies traded blows, doing battle with one another before a peace agreement was signed.

This brings us to the present, and to the two protagonists of our little story.

Outwardly, Kiri Ririnui is employed as a shipbreaker at Rotorua’s main wrecking yard. In reality, he is a covert operative for the Commonwealth DIA. The Agency keeps its local headquarters at the nearby Smuggler’s Port, an unauthorized spaceport that remains off-record thanks to bribery and blackmail.

Mina Soban-Re is an employee at “The Cosmic Garden.” During the daylight hours, Cosmic Garden operates as a fancy, high-end restaurant for the wealthiest people in the Galaxy. At night, the Cosmic Garden plays host to an underground club that caters to every imaginable vice. In reality, the whole building is a base of operations for the MCS, and Mina herself is an MCS field agent.

Operating out of their secret bases, Mina and Kiri live their “daylight lives” until called for by their respective spymasters. Even so, they must keep their relationship the closest of secrets…

Because in Rotorua, spies are everywhere.
 
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First to comment, this will be a godchild. Spy story! Bogart/Bergman (Casablanca) or maybe Max/99 (Get Smart) at minimum Boris/Natasha (Bullwinkle).

You are not going to make me learn Stellaris basics to enjoy this tale, are you?
 
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First to comment, this will be a godchild. Spy story! Bogart/Bergman (Casablanca) or maybe Max/99 (Get Smart) at minimum Boris/Natasha (Bullwinkle).

You are not going to make me learn Stellaris basics to enjoy this tale, are you?
Damn, I thought I was moving faster than everyone, but nope! Yes, our two protagonists are neck deep in the world of spycraft and espionage.

Oh no. I decided to re-use a location from the now-concluded Stormbreaker Universe and the story will remain grounded there. Furthermore, I'm going to keep my narrative-focused method of AAR writing, so expect a similar style to the SU... with the obvious differences of the chapters being ridiculously short. :)
 
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Oooh a new Macavity story already? A suprise to be sure, but a welcome one.

The cold war between the Hiigarians and Partogans is an interesting affair. Where does earth stand here, still closer to Partoga or has it turned inwards in the aftermath of the Last Heroes? Is there apetite for war among either the Partogan or Hiigarian public?

I pity our protagonists. Each of them is routinely put in a position of trying to (unwittingly) shoot their love. That's rough!
 
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  • All chapters must be shorter than 1200 words (roughly 3 pages in Microsoft Word, this is massively shorter than what I am used to writing)
  • The completed story cannot be longer than 14 chapters.

Sounds like I'll be able to keep up! Which is great, I was loving your previous works before I fell hopelessly behind.
 
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Is it unwitting thought, or are they aware of what's going on?

Also, I'll be following this as I clearly threw the spacesuit glove into the microgravity for this to become reality!
 
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Oooh a new Macavity story already? A suprise to be sure, but a welcome one.

The cold war between the Hiigarians and Partogans is an interesting affair. Where does earth stand here, still closer to Partoga or has it turned inwards in the aftermath of the Last Heroes? Is there apetite for war among either the Partogan or Hiigarian public?

I pity our protagonists. Each of them is routinely put in a position of trying to (unwittingly) shoot their love. That's rough!
I was just as surprised. This AAR was never supposed to happen.

This is very much a continuation of the Partogan-Hiigaran Cold War we saw brewing in The Last Heroes. Earth has chilly relations with both Aoraki and Hiigara due to the War of the Paradox (which is 10 years in the past now) but Earth is slightly closer to Aoraki, owing to the fact that Partogans are Human in all but name.

Mina doesn't know it yet, but Kiri gets to see her a lot. Usually through the scope of a sniper rifle.

Sounds like I'll be able to keep up! Which is great, I was loving your previous works before I fell hopelessly behind.
You and many others, my friend. My suffering under a strict page limit will make for a different story compared to my previous works. But maybe different can be a good thing. We'll see.

Is it unwitting thought, or are they aware of what's going on?

Also, I'll be following this as I clearly threw the spacesuit glove into the microgravity for this to become reality!
Kiri and Mina are fully aware of each other's true occupations. It has to do with the circumstances of their first meeting.

Pat yourself on the back. Not many people can claim credit for the creation of an AAR without being its author. :)
 
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I was just as surprised. This AAR was never supposed to happen.

This is very much a continuation of the Partogan-Hiigaran Cold War we saw brewing in The Last Heroes. Earth has chilly relations with both Aoraki and Hiigara due to the War of the Paradox (which is 10 years in the past now) but Earth is slightly closer to Aoraki, owing to the fact that Partogans are Human in all but name.
I'm clearly going to have to revisit your previous works!
You and many others, my friend. My suffering under a strict page limit will make for a different story compared to my previous works. But maybe different can be a good thing. We'll see.
I've always found a page limit both infuriating and exhilarating. First, because you want to include so much of the world that you build in your mind... The latter because it usually makes one's writing tighter: more focus on the important details.
Kiri and Mina are fully aware of each other's true occupations. It has to do with the circumstances of their first meeting.

Pat yourself on the back. Not many people can claim credit for the creation of an AAR without being its author. :)
Eh, it's not the creation of the AAR that I can claim credit for, that's your credit because I wouldn't have thought of it. I was more like the executive producer. I recognized the talent and provided the prod required to get the project greenlit.
 
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A Partogan-Hiigaran love affair? While they have a Cold War? This'll be interesting.

Has the Partogan-Human relation come out yet?

Trying to write things with a word limit can be difficult. Guess the Author is good for practicing short pieces... although I have a project that sprung from that now, so... maybe it isn't amazing.

Let's see how this goes...
 
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A Partogan-Hiigaran love affair? While they have a Cold War? This'll be interesting.

Has the Partogan-Human relation come out yet?

Trying to write things with a word limit can be difficult. Guess the Author is good for practicing short pieces... although I have a project that sprung from that now, so... maybe it isn't amazing.
It's a simple story, but maybe simple can be interesting. I got the idea for this plot on Christmas Day while I was watching The Lion King II with my six-year-old cousin. (Yup. That's really what I was doing during the 6-hour gap between the final chapter and Envoi of TLH :D )

Yes, the historical/genetic relationship between Partogans and Humans is well-known now. Sadly, the Partogan-Human reunification was badly undermined by the War of the Paradox. By the 2090's, Partogan repatriations to Earth are at an all time low. Some Partogans who settled on New Zealand in the 2040's have actually left Earth and resettled on Hokianga.

The word limit is already hitting hard. The first chapter was 4 pages long and a whole conversation had to be cut out. I'm currently trying to see if I can worm the lost dialoged into another chapter.
 
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I've always found a page limit both infuriating and exhilarating. First, because you want to include so much of the world that you build in your mind... The latter because it usually makes one's writing tighter: more focus on the important details.
This. This right here is why all of my previous Stellaris Stories have chapters that run 10 pages long on average. I've got to learn a whole new way of storytelling to accomplish this challenge.
 
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Around midday, a group of patrons entered the Cosmic Garden. The restaurant’s ornate decorations hinted at just how expensive this outing was going to be. The dining party paid no mind to the opulence around them; they only had eyes for the two people at the center of the group: a pair of elderly Levakians.

Levakians are feline mammalians, lionlike in their size, shape, and detriment.

The two old lions snarled at a young Partogan following them. He was carrying a black briefcase. At their command, he drew closer and received instructions from one of them. He gave the briefcase to the other Levakian and departed. At the same time, one of the employees guided the Levakian entourage to their table.

Mina Soban-Re glided around the Cosmic Garden with a special kind of grace. She felt very comfortable in her waitress uniform, a sleek blue dress with fancy elbow-length gloves, and she felt at ease despite the presence of a dozen massive lions. She knew there were Hiigaran Marines in the building, dressed up as wait staff. If a problem arose, she was completely safe.

The young Partogan dismissed by the Levakians walked past Mina on his way to the front entrance before turning around and standing by the door. Mina kept moving, but made sure to continue observing him as she waited on other tables. She could tell he was waiting for a signal from the Levakian patrons. Walking around a pillar, Mina made eye contact with one of the busboys. His uniform just barely covered the bright-red colors of Kiith Soban tattooed on his arms. The gauss pistol in his vest was even more poorly concealed.

“Tighten yourself up.” Mina whispered as she walked by. “We’ve got a situation.”

After a few minutes, the signal came. One of the Levakian patrons vigorously shook his mane.

Moving swiftly, the Partogan approached the table and took the briefcase away. He was heading for the exit. By then, Mina and the other Hiigarans had already acted. In a matter of moments, someone found the car used by the Levakians. Inside, the Hiigarans found a second identical briefcase and rifled through its contents. A frantic, last-second decision was made, and less than a minute after the whole thing started, Mina was moving quickly into the kitchen, stuffing a single piece of paper down the front of her dress.

The Partogan opened the car, switched briefcases, and then returned to the dining table, never knowing the second case had been pilfered.



“These are construction schematics.”

Mina and her handler huddled together in the far corner of the kitchen, looking over the single piece of paper recovered from the Levakian’s briefcase. Mina’s handler was a big Hiigaran man covered from head to foot in tattoos, nearly all of which were variations of the Kiith Naabal emblem.


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His name was Dasra Naabal-Sa. He tapped the paper and continued:

“It looks like the Partogans and Levakians are planning to construct an Emporium at Tripoint Park.”

Mina knew what Tripoint Park was. It was a landmark in the heart of the city, where the embassies of Earth, Aoraki, and Hiigara were constructed close together in a triangular formation. In the open space between the three embassies, there was a municipal garden, divided into three sections. This garden, divided three ways with each slice facing an embassy, symbolically represented the tripoint border between the Hiigaran Empire, Partogan-Levakian Commonwealth, and United Nations of Earth.

Mina looked at the schematics again and realized her handler was right. The Commonwealth was planning to expand their own embassy, adding a shopping center to the structure, where Rotorua residents would be able to get a genuine taste of life on the planet Aoraki.

“This is some kind of propaganda push by the Commonwealth. I’m sure of it.” Dasra said. “Mina, I want you to take this to the public Hyperwave terminal down the street and give it to our pointman. He’ll take it from there.”

Mina put on a coat and departed the Cosmic Garden. Behind her, the Levakians were getting angry and raising their voices at one another. Just before the door closed behind her, Mina heard someone roar:

“And you call yourself a professional? There are pages missing! What kind of cut-rate operation is this!?”



Mina walked briskly out of the red light district, but did not take a direct route to the public Hyperwave terminal. Instead, she skirted the perimeter of the Smuggler’s Port, walking around the illegal structure. Several shipbreakers saw her from their perches on top of dismantled starships. Mina smiled to herself as she started to receive catcalls from Assurians, Kelt, Amadii, Vanians, Scyldari, Voor, Blorg, Morbuzakh, Taiidani, Vaygr, Hiigarans, Partogans, and Humans.

One voice caught Mina’s attention:

“Don’t let me catch you walkin’ this way again!” A Partogan shouted. “I won’t be responsible for what I do!”

At the same moment he spoke, someone aimed a green laser pointer into a nearby alleyway.



Mina dropped off the stolen schematic at the Hyperwave terminal. The Hiigaran man waiting for her was another member of the Military Counterintelligence Service, and the handoff occurred wordlessly. Then she turned around and walked back the way she came.

This time, instead of walking by the Smuggler’s Port, Mina ducked into the narrow alley adjacent to it. As she walked, Mina kept one hand in her coat pocket, clenched around a laser pistol. She strained her ears, listening to the echo of the city around her. A Blorg shuffled around the corner and onto the next road. A shuttle flew overhead. A Vanian unfurled his wings and took flight from a rooftop. Someone stepped in a puddle behind her.


Mina whirled around, drawing her laser pistol. There was a Partogan behind her, halfway through drawing his own weapon, a plasma submachine gun.

Mina recognized Kiri and Kiri recognized Mina. They both returned their weapons to their hiding places, and then looked around to make sure they were alone. Once she was sure the alley was deserted, Mina said:

“I… uh… I can’t believe nobody’s ever told you this, but there are no women anywhere in the Galaxy who think Ambush Alley is a good place for a date. The atmosphere’s just not romantic, you know?”

“It’s sentimental for me.” Kiri replied. “This is the place where we first met.”
 
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Awww, so cuuuute....
 
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… uh… I can’t believe nobody’s ever told you this, but there are no women anywhere in the Galaxy who think Ambush Alley is a good place for a date.
:D I love their dynamic!

And today was a victory for the Hiigarians. Let's see how the Partogans respond. The problem with cold wars is always that you never know which seemingly innocent spark will trigger a dramatic escalation until we reach the open warfare stage.

And if we reach open warfare I fear the relationship between our protagonists will shatter as thoroughly as galactic (or at least planetary) peace.
 
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I've never gotten that kind of response before. Warms my heart. :)

:D I love their dynamic!

And today was a victory for the Hiigarians. Let's see how the Partogans respond. The problem with cold wars is always that you never know which seemingly innocent spark will trigger a dramatic escalation until we reach the open warfare stage.

And if we reach open warfare I fear the relationship between our protagonists will shatter as thoroughly as galactic (or at least planetary) peace.
There are so, so many ways cold wars can go sideways.

Trivia time! Remember how I would use real-world history as a source of inspiration for the Stormbreaker stories? Well over the past few days, I've been using some personal history to build both the setting and events of A Coldwar Affair:

My dad was a US Army soldier stationed in West Berlin during the Cold War, and he had a lot of face-time with the infamous wall. A few years back, I took him to see the Berlin Wall Museum at Checkpoint Charlie, (pictured below) where he used to work. To write this story, I've been leaning heavily on information I learned about Cold War spycraft from either the Berlin Wall Museum or dad's experience. And yes, the previously mentioned "Tripoint Park" that is divided up by political borders is supposed to be a sly reference to occupied Berlin.

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Part 4
I didn't mention this before, but this story has no defined release schedule. New chapters are posted once they're good and ready.

I'm making progress on the writing challenge so far. This will be the last worldbuilding chapter. In part 5, I'll start to introduce the mystery/conflict. I think it's a simple mystery for a short story, but I'm sure I found a way to make it interesting. I'm really curious to see if I can resolve it before the end of Part 14. I've got a general plan, but no plot outline survives contact with the first draft.

Oh! Almost forgot! If any of you have read my other Stellaris stories, you may notice that I re-used a character from The Last Heroes in this chapter.




Six months ago…

It was Kiri’s first week on his new assignment. DIA leadership assigned him to the Rotorua spy network and dispatched him to the city with very little fanfare. To make matters worse, he had to keep the reason for his move a secret. Naturally, his family asked why Kiri was moving to Rotorua. He was not allowed to tell them he worked for a spy agency, so the DIA gave him a cover story: Kiri had found a lucrative job as a shipbreaker in the city.

This was a bad idea.

Kiri’s parents and grandparents vocally disapproved of his new line of work. Being a shipbreaker was unbecoming for a member of the illustrious Ranginui family.

“Your great Aunt was Queen of the Commonwealth! You must hold up the family reputation!” His father had said.

Kiri wanted to remind his family that Queen Marka was killed ten years ago, but he held his tongue and stuck to the story. In the end, Kiri was disowned by not just his immediate family, but the entirety of the Ranginui clan… the single most powerful family on the planet Aoraki.

So Kiri spent his first week in Rotorua in absolute misery. DIA leadership told him to refrain from espionage activities for his first month. Instead, he should establish himself as a normal resident of the megacity, living and working an ordinary life. Kiri threw himself into his work at the wreckyard, to distract himself from the loss of his family. This went on for six days.

Shipbreaking was a rough job that kept him busy. Kiri used advanced tools to cut starships to pieces, salvaging any technology that could be sold or reused. About one quarter of the men and women who worked at the wreckyard were also DIA agents. The wreckyard and nearby Smuggler’s Port were fully under the DIA’s control. Partogan and Levakian spies were embedded among the dockworkers, so Kiri was not alone… yet… he felt very lonely.

At the end of his seventh day, Kiri tried to break up the monotony by spending the evening sitting atop a Human warship. Kiri settled down on what used to be the conning tower of an Antwerp-class frigate and absentmindedly snacked on some Ruki fish. He looked around, memorizing the layout of Rotorua city around him. The nearest landmark was a narrow gap between buildings called “Ambush Alley.”

Spies avoided this place. And not just the Hiigarans and Partogans. Kiri knew that Humans, Taiidan, Assurian, Kelt, and Levakian operatives all avoided this dangerous roadway.

So imagine Kiri’s surprise when he spotted four Hiigarans stepping out of a truck and into Ambush Alley.

Three of them were armed.

The fourth was handcuffed.

Kiri knew something was off. He grabbed his pistol, concealed it in his jacket, and slipped out of the wreckyard. In moments, he was swallowed up by the shadows of Ambush Alley.

Kiri found an incredible scene waiting for him.

In the dark heart of Ambush Alley, the trio of Hiigarans forced their prisoner to kneel in front of three Humans. The trio were all dressed in business attire, with weapons concealed beneath their clothes. The prisoner was a Hiigaran woman. Her hands were shackled, and she was gagged. She was on her knees in between the two groups. The Humans were looking at the prisoner with confused expressions on their faces.

The other three Hiigarans were all pointing their weapons at the prisoner. One of the armed Hiigarans was wearing a tattered blue cape. From his hiding spot behind a dumpster, Kiri eavesdropped on the conversation, holding a pistol in one hand and an audio recorder in the other. The Hiigaran wearing a cape spoke in a voice Kiri recognized:

“This is the ISO spy I found in my drydock, skulking around the Ashoka. If you want her back, you’re going to pay me fifteen million Human Credits. If not, I’ll blow her brains out.”

Oh… these guys are ISO agents. Kiri thought to himself.

The Internal Security Office, or ISO, was the Human spy agency.

The trio of ISO agents turned to speak with one another. Kiri, meanwhile, had to hold back a gasp. The caped Hiigaran was none other than Ruunhan Somtaaw! She was the commander of the notorious pirate ship Ashoka and leader of the Hiigaran Syndicate, a criminal organization.

Ruunhan was getting impatient:

“Give me the money!” Ruunhan snapped. “Or I’ll kill your spy!”

Finally, one of the ISO agents replied. He said:

“Well, go ahead and kill her. She’s not one of ours.”

Ruunhan charged her laser pistol and pressed the barrel into the prisoner’s head. The bound woman let out a muffled scream, her eyes wide and wet with tears.

“If she’s not with the Syndicate, and she’s not with the ISO, then who is she with?” Mused one of Ruunhan’s pirates.

Before anyone could answer, the situation took a sudden turn. Against all odds, an ambush occurred in Ambush Alley!

Red and green lights flickered in the darkness as both the pirates and ISO found themselves being attacked by a third party. In the midst of the chaotic melee, Kiri saw Ruunhan raise her weapon and prepare to shoot the prisoner. The young woman was lying on her side, immobilized.

Kiri lunged out of cover. He did not know why. All he knew was that in a matter of seconds, he had sprung into the open, raised his pistol, shot Ruunhan in the arm, grabbed the prisoner, and carried her away into the darkness.



Kiri and the Hiigaran prisoner burst out of Ambush Alley and into the open street next to his workplace. Kiri guided her into the wreckyard, then the pair took shelter inside the remains of a Taiidani Corvette. Kiri tried to ask the Hiigaran if she was okay, while simultaneously undoing her gag and cutting her handcuffs. In that short moment, he was only able to memorize two details about her appearance:

First, she had the emblem of Kiith Manaan tattooed on the spot where her left eyebrow should have been.

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Second, she was extremely pretty. She stared at Kiri intensely, her eyes locked on his.

As soon as her hands were cut loose, the Hiigaran woman said:

“Thank you! Thanks so much, I owe you one, seriously. I promise I won’t cause trouble for you, alright?”

And before Kiri could ask what she meant by that, or say anything else for that matter, the Hiigaran woman scrambled to her feet and ran away. She ran out of the wreckyard at high speed before turning a corner and making her way toward the red light district. Kiri was left puzzled and confused.



The next morning, when Kiri showed up for his shift at the wreckyard, he saw Galactic Police agents swarming around Ambush Alley, doing some kind of investigation. He also found a paper bag inside the Taiidan Corvette. It contained a travel mug full of hot Thornax Stew, along with a note that said:

"To the DIA agent who pulled me out of a nightmare: I owe you one, so your secret is safe with me. Let’s talk. Tomorrow at sunrise, Tree of Life Sapling in the Plantoid District."
 
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Oofta, bit of a savior complex, this one! (Speaking of Kiri, of course!)

Hopefully the woman isn't playing on the lonely heartstrings of our courageous hero.
 
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Poor Kiri. He lost his family because the spy agency couldn't be bothered to come up with a good cover story.

Mina and Kiri's relationship looks to be going okay, and Kiri is so sentimental. Still, meeting in Ambush Alley has to be dangerous... even for 2 spies. I guess it does provide a lot of secrecy, though.

How long has the DIA existed? When were they founded? What were they doing during events like the Second Hyperspace War or the Levakian Rebellion (did that get renamed for the 116th Cycle? What do they call it now?)?
 
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