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Thank you, @Cora Giantkiller . This was a happy and contented ending to Book I. Good to see Ermengarda and her king with their triumphs even if they aren't as grand as some empires not too far away.

That's an interesting thought but honestly I never saw it that way. The Finnish pagans permit concubinage, both in the game and in the story, so it never really struck me as something illicit. And since Ermengarda is very much the only woman of her culture, I think people see her more as a curiosity than a threat.
I do like how you handled this romance. It does have the feeling of a practical arrangement although you do wonder what happened to the queen. Did Otso divorce her?

There is the earlier chapter where one gruff man calls Ermengarda Otso's concubine. It is unclear if that was her status at that time or if she took on that role only after the queen's scandal was revealed. Regardless, the way this turned out, it appears you made the choice to keep this vague as a way to build up interest in the growing romance. Either way, she transitioned from being a de facto concubine to taking that role and much more. Nicely done.
 
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Brilliant chapters as always and belated congratulations on your honeymoon!
It’s nice to see that Ermengarda has found her happiness far in the north. I wonder if she’ll ever see her birthplace again, I’m sure she’d like to show its delights to Otso.
The new church is sure to be a marvel, I’m curious to find out what such a temple will look like; surely, future generations will remember the reign of Otso (and Ermengarda) with reverence and awe
 
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Book II: The Captive
Book Two
The Captive

The first two decades of the twelfth century constituted a general peace among the kingdoms of the Baltic Sea. While Church officials disapproved of the pagan truce in public, the bishops in Poland and Sweden used the time fruitfully through internal missionary work. For his part, the pagan king Otso dedicated himself to the construction of towering shrines and the issuance of a general legal code. Meanwhile, the capture of Novgorod gave the Suomi control over the Dnieper river trade. Their merchants could be found as far south as Constantinople and as far east as Kent.

During the 1110s, however, the generation that had forged this unlikely peace began to pass away. King Erik II Stenkilsson was the first to die, in 1112, although his daughter Queen Ingrid maintained the policy of detente for a time. King Zbigniew suffered from a stroke in 1117, leaving behind him the boy king Siemomysł the Shy. Finally, in 1118, Otso joined his consort Ermengarda in Tuonela, and the pious king Satajalka took his father’s throne.

In Poland, the accession of a minor to the throne was met with a palace coup by Siemomysł’s uncle Mszczuj. Mszczuj held the throne only briefly himself before being overthrown in favor of Wiesław the Chaste. Two years after that, Wiesław was assassinated in a plot masterminded by his son Bolesław. In all, the throne of Poland changed hands six times in sixteen years. The civil war would only resolve after 1133 when Siemomysł, now in his majority, seized the throne that had once been taken from him.

The Polish civil war gave an opportunity to Satajalka, who had long desired to claim the duchy of Masuria for his own kingdom. Masuria was home to many prosperous market towns, most significantly the city of Toruń. The city was considered to the Slavic, Baltic and Suomi peoples alike. In 1119, the Suomi marched into northern Poland, and seized the duchy with little resistance. By the end of the summer, they were sailing back to Ulvila with the riches of Masuria in tow.

The Suomi also carried back with them the land’s ten year old duke, one Zygmunt Ossowski, who would prove the most fraught prize of them all. Other men might have put the boy aside and assigned Masuria to one of their own loyal vassals. Indeed, the king’s spymaster Risto advised the king to do just this.

There were also advantages to retaining the child as duke, however. His father had ruled Masuria for decades, and was much loved by the common people. Retaining a ruler of Ossowski blood would help them accept the conquest easier. Satajalka also felt, as he spoke with the solemn child before, that this was a boy with character. He would be a credit to the realm if he could be raised in the ways of the Suomi.

Satajalka decided thus to dispatch a distant Virtanen relative to Masuria, as temporary steward rather than duke. The king would raise this young Pole himself, alongside his own sons, and see to his education in leadership, warfare, and respect for the gods. The duchy of Masuria was held in trust, pending the outcome of Zygmunt’s education. If he would adopt the ways of the Suomi, forsaking all others, all honors would be restored to him.

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I am quite happy to manipulate events from the game to make the story better, but for the record the instability in Poland is just literally what happened. I wasn't even responsible, most of the time.

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The reformed faith's emphasis on religious tolerance will win it great support from modern day historians in this world, as it will contrast with the aggression the neighbouring Christians have had towards paganism.

Also, Otso is right about the gods wanting to be the center of attention, which makes sense, seeing as they're gods.

For sure; although not every king is going to see that emphasis as a good thing.

Reforming the religion is good. The Finns just need to hope Christendom doesn't see it as a threat.

Seeing what has happened during the time skip will be interesting. Looking forward to it!

I think many Christians will see it as a threat, honestly.

I do like how you handled this romance. It does have the feeling of a practical arrangement although you do wonder what happened to the queen. Did Otso divorce her?

There is the earlier chapter where one gruff man calls Ermengarda Otso's concubine. It is unclear if that was her status at that time or if she took on that role only after the queen's scandal was revealed. Regardless, the way this turned out, it appears you made the choice to keep this vague as a way to build up interest in the growing romance. Either way, she transitioned from being a de facto concubine to taking that role and much more. Nicely done.

Thank you! And for the record, my thought was that Kalevi called her a concubine as an insult. But it's hard for me to know sometimes what's been successfully communicated to the audience and what hasn't.

Brilliant chapters as always and belated congratulations on your honeymoon!
It’s nice to see that Ermengarda has found her happiness far in the north. I wonder if she’ll ever see her birthplace again, I’m sure she’d like to show its delights to Otso.
The new church is sure to be a marvel, I’m curious to find out what such a temple will look like; surely, future generations will remember the reign of Otso (and Ermengarda) with reverence and awe

I would not expect to see her go back to Catalonia, and there is a sadness in that; but I think she found a lot of happiness where she was.
 
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Poland! You're not supposed to have 6 changes of ruler in 16 years, if there was stability Masuria wouldn't have been lost.
 
Exciting to have a timeskip!
Wow, this Poland is quite a mess, definitely a great opportunity for Suomi
 
Taking Masuria was a golden opportunity. But now that Siemomysł has regained his power, he may not like the Suomi so close.

Zygmunt needs to balance his fealty to his new lord, and try to keep peace with his Catholic subjects. A tricky position.
 
Well, this is an interesting second beginning. Will Spymaster Risto end up being correct?

I suppose we are buckled in to see a coming of age story. Will the young Polish duke become assimilated? Or will he hold a grudge against his Finnish captors? The friction of the plot elements seems already set even if we don't know which path (or other possible ways) this story will take. And what will Satajalka bring with him from Book I? Has he gained the wisdom of his father?
 
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Ulvila, Suomi
April, 1122​

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It all started when Prince Mieletty learned that there was wine in the chapel by the harbor. This was not that fermented cloudberry nonsense that some folk tried to pass off as wine here in the north, this was true southron wine from true southron grapes. To the prince, this was apparently like finding out that Father Otto had the Sampo and he was using it as a footstool.

“So you mean to say,” Mieletty said, “that this fat German man buys wine, does some kind of magic, and turns it into blood? Is he mad?”

Zygmunt had to shrug his shoulders. This interpretation was missing some of the basic essence of the sacrament, but he could not admit that he cared about such things.

“Blood into wine, now _that_ I could understand. Blood is everywhere, in chickens and stoats and just about everything. A fellow could make a lot of money turning blood into wine. But wine into blood? You would have to be the world’s biggest fool to do it the other way around.”

Zygmunt laughed at his friend’s logic. “He doesn’t do it for the gold, Mieletty.”

Mieletty stood there for a second, thinking. “You know what this means, Ziggy.”

Oh no. Mieletty was full of bad ideas, and somehow Zygmunt found himself going along with all of them. “No, I don’t think that I do.”

Mieletty’s grin was wide and damnably charismatic. “We need to show these Christians what to do with their wine, they obviously have no idea.”

That evening, the two boys were perched behind a hedge waiting for Father Otto to leave the small rectory behind the chapel. He had taken a lover, the gossip went. A Danish widow who lived on the other end of the city. Nobody truly expected celibacy of a village priest, and so few blinked an eye when he spent most nights at her house by the river.

When night fell and the priest was still inside, Mieletty started to get restless. “I never should have listened to you,” he whispered.

“Me? This was all your idea.”

“No, about the woman. What does a eunuch want with a woman after all? What’s he going to do with her?”

“Eunuch?!” This was a new one on Zygmunt.

“Mikko says his dad saw a priest once in the sauna. He had his balls cut right off. They have to, they take a vow and everything.”

Zygmunt rolled his eyes. Mikko was seventeen years old and a man grown, and to Mieletty that made him a font of authority beyond question. So naturally Mikko amused himself by telling the prince tall tales, just to see what the boy would repeat. “You shouldn’t listen to Mikko. He’s just fucking with you.”

Mieletty scoffed. “You know, Mikko said you would say that.”

“He’s from Tampere. There’s no way he even saw a priest until he came here.”

“How do you know? Have you been ther–?” Mieletty stopped mid-sentence when he saw the candle extinguished inside the rectory. Zygmunt could feel his heart thudding in his chest as they crouched in silence, waiting for the priest to emerge.

They waited there for what felt like hours. Finally, with not a little relief, Zygmunt concluded that the priest was not leaving. “We should go,” he whispered.

“Why? He’s probably asleep. Or crying because he misses his balls. Either way, he won’t see us.”

“I don’t know about this.”

“Oh, come on. We’re here already, and we’re not even going into his little cabin anyway. We’ll sneak in, grab the wine, and be out. Easy peasy.” Mieletty righted himself and started walking softly toward the chapel. Zygmunt groaned but crept along behind him.

The moonlight cast an eerie glow on the empty chapel, and Zygmunt winced at every slight creak in the floorboard. The wood carvings of Christ and the Virgin took on a sinister aspect when cast in shadow, and the heavy wooden tabernacle had the look of a grave marker. The cross atop accused him with every step he took. I shouldn’t be here. I shouldn’t be doing this.

Mieletty’s own thoughts were more practical, if you could call it that. “You didn’t tell me that it would be locked.”

Locked! Of course! It had been so long, Zygmunt must have forgotten, but of course the priest would not have left the supplies for the Eucharist just lying around. He exulted at the notion that this whole stupid plan had been foiled at last. “Well, there’s nothing we can do now,” he said, relieved. “Guess we should be going.”

As he was speaking, however, Mieletty was attempting to lift the whole tabernacle, even though his arms couldn’t quite get around it. “Come on, give me a hand with this. It’s not–grunt–that heavy.”

Zygmunt had reached his limit, however. His heart seemed like to burst in his chest, and all he could think about now was Father Andrzej describing the devils and the lake of fire. He wanted to run, to run as far as Chełmno and leave this whole place behind. “Come on, leave it,” he whispered.

The tense silence of the chapel was shattered by a thundering baritone. “What is the meaning of this?!

Father Otto stood before them in the chapel door, silhouetted against the full moon. He seemed far less comical now. As Zygmunt stared at the angry priest, petrified in fright, he could hear a sudden crash as the tabernacle fell to the floor. Not for the first time, the boy considered that he was going to hell.

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Satajalka was sitting on his throne lost in thought when the Christian priest arrived, with the king’s son and ward in tow. It said a lot about the kingdom, the king reflected, that this man Otto was here before him at all. The man was a disgusting panderer and follower of a despised cult, and yet he stood here now expecting the king’s justice against the king’s own son. Otto would get it too, justice swift and sure. Satajalka took a grim satisfaction in that, if little else.

On the left side of the priest, Mieletty stood, shoulders hunched and eyes averted, a sulky look on his face. The prince was thirteen, nearly a man grown, and yet he was still wasting time on boyish pranks. He had energy enough, good with a sword and well liked by the men, but he would need to grow up fast or else the obligations of leadership would hold a rude surprise for him.

Zygmunt had the character to look his king directly in the face, his face solemn and calmly accepting of his fate. He had given Satajalka much the same look years ago, when he first came to Ulvila as a captive. The boy was studious, responsible, and he did what you asked of him with a smile. Even tonight, apparently, the king thought ruefully.

And yet, and yet. Was it that easy to leave behind the ways of his fathers? His father’s beloved, the woman Ermengarda, had rejected the cross entirely, so perhaps Zygmunt had in truth done the same. Perhaps tonight’s prank should be seen as proof of that. But Ermengarda had not come here in chains. Someday I would like to know what this boy really thinks.

The whole matter made his head hurt. It was late and he had much else to do before he slept. Kuutar, why did you bring this before me, tonight of all nights? The missive from Viro was still sitting in his solar, unaddressed.

Satajalka directed his attention to the priest. “This… tabernacle? It is a carved wooden box? With wine and bread inside?” The priest began to quibble over the word ‘bread’, but Satajalka waved him away. “Regardless. You shall have whatever wine and bread you require from the royal stores, plus gold for the damages. Speak to my steward and he will provide it for you.”

He then turned a cold eye to the boys in front of him. “Tomorrow morning, bright and early, the boys will present themselves to you. You may not require them to assist in any ritual observance, but they will be happy”--here he looked pointedly at Mieletty–”to do whatever chores you need, for as long as you need.”

Otto gave him a grateful nod. “Your majesty is most wise. Thank you.”

To Satajalka’s surprise, his son stepped forward now and finally met his eye. “Iskä… this was all my idea. I alone should be punished.”

Zygmunt began to protest, but Satajalka held up a hand. “A man is judged by his actions, Mieletty, and pleading it was not my idea counts for little.” To the priest, he said, “The boys will be at your church at sunrise. I expect that you will keep them busy.”

Otto hastily bid his goodbyes, making obeisance over and over again as he left. Satajalka tried hard not to let his lip curl. Bad enough that he preached a false creed, did he have to be so obsequious as well? Regardless, he was the wronged party tonight. Best to recall that.

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The priest left, and for a brief moment Zygmunt thought that Satajalka would excuse them as well. He longed to return to the room he shared with the squires and pages and escape into a dreamless sleep. Instead the king studied the boys in front of him for a long moment, his one good eye full of doubts and suspicion.

What does he see when he looks at me? A Suomi, or a Christian? Does he keep me close because he trusts me, or because he suspects me most of all? Zygmunt had never been sure.

Finally the king sighed and took a seat upon his throne, his shoulders sagging as he slumped in the chair. “Mieletty, when you are king, you will be bound by the ancient laws and customs of our people. Do you think that you can toss that aside on a whim? The chieftains will toss you aside as easily, rest assured.”

“I thought you said that Otto was a loathsome Saxon pimp, Iskȁ,” Mieletty said defensively. Zygmunt could not be surprised at the sentiment. The king’s loathing for all Christians was well known.

“Loathsome, yes. And protected by the law.”

Mieletty did not look convinced, but he kept his mouth shut. Satajalka turned his attention to Zygmunt, who felt a sudden impulse to crawl out of his skin. “Zygmunt, you are to guard my southern marches when you grow to manhood. You cannot always say yes to everybody. Do you understand me?”

Zygmunt swallowed nervously. “Yes, majesty.”

“Good. Now there is news from Viro that you two need to know, serious news. Suomi is between a she-bear and her cubs and neither of you can afford to act the boy any longer.”

Mieletty gasped. “Is there something wrong with cousin Ihar? Is it war?” Ihar was the boy king of the Viro after his grandfather Tasulemb had perished two winters previously. Zygmunt had heard the king’s men worry over the prospect that Ihar’s youth would encourage the White Russians or the Swedes to intervene.

“Something is grievously wrong with Ihar, I am afraid.” Satajalka’s face was grave, and again he studied Zygmunt for a long moment before proceeding. “Your cousin has written to us, saying he has rejected the gods of his people. He has burned the sacred groves and slaughtered a hundred tietäjät. He follows the cross now, the foolish child.”

Careful now. Smart hostages watched their tongues in times like these, and that was still what he was. Zygmunt kept his voice even as he replied, “So it’s to be war?”

Satajalka nodded. “Risto believes that the boy was not truly behind this. Ihar’s court is dominated by Russians from Smolensk, he says. Clear out the snakes and the boy should get his head on straight.”

Should. Neither boy missed the implication of that. There was a tremulous note in the prince's voice when he asked, “And if Ihar won’t come back to the gods?”

The king softened his tone, and regarded his son with sympathy. “I do not wish him harm, poju, but we cannot have a Christian king in Viro. That would be a blade to our throats.”

Mieletty looked distraught, and no wonder. The two cousins had been close, once. “As you say, Father. Still, you won’t…”

“He will live. Have no fear on that account.” Zygmunt could well imagine what that would be like. They would put the boy with a chieftain among the Sami, somebody tied to the Suomi by blood and honor, where he would be watched. A thrall in all but name.

Careful.

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Poland! You're not supposed to have 6 changes of ruler in 16 years, if there was stability Masuria wouldn't have been lost.

Exciting to have a timeskip!
Wow, this Poland is quite a mess, definitely a great opportunity for Suomi

Taking Masuria was a golden opportunity. But now that Siemomysł has regained his power, he may not like the Suomi so close.

Zygmunt needs to balance his fealty to his new lord, and try to keep peace with his Catholic subjects. A tricky position.

Zygmunt's narrative proper starts in the middle of the Polish civil war; but when Poland is re-united the question of Masuria is going to be top priority. As for Zygmunt, I think managing Satajalka is going to be a full time job all in itself.

Well, this is an interesting second beginning. Will Spymaster Risto end up being correct?

I suppose we are buckled in to see a coming of age story. Will the young Polish duke become assimilated? Or will he hold a grudge against his Finnish captors? The friction of the plot elements seems already set even if we don't know which path (or other possible ways) this story will take. And what will Satajalka bring with him from Book I? Has he gained the wisdom of his father?

A lot of good questions, most of which I'm going to let the narrative answer in time; I will say that King Satajalka reveres his father a lot but he's going to face a complicated political situation without a lot of easy answers.

Very interesting! I don't think I've ever played as a Finnish character in CK3 so I'll be following this with interest!

Thanks! The Baltic sea is one of my favorite places to play in CK3, so I've played Finns and Latgalians and Livonians and Prussians and so forth.
 
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The man was a disgusting panderer and follower of a despised cult, and yet he stood here now expecting the king’s justice against the king’s own son. Otto would get it too, justice swift and sure. Satajalka took a grim satisfaction in that, if little else.
The king’s loathing for all Christians was well known.

“Loathsome, yes. And protected by the law.”
Satajalka is the King, he can ban Christians from existing if he wants to!

In all seriousness, his pragmatism is the better idea, persecuting Christianity directly tends to have the side effect of making them stronger, just ask the Romans.
 
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Satajalka is the King, he can ban Christians from existing if he wants to!

In all seriousness, his pragmatism is the better idea, persecuting Christianity directly tends to have the side effect of making them stronger, just ask the Romans.

In his own mind, I think he is simply continuing the laws laid down by his father; but as you can see in this chapter, it goes against his natural instincts to do so.
 
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The time for youthful fun and games is ending. I hope the boys' friendship can survive the coming war and whatever cynicism life/adulthood throws at them.
 
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The truth of Zygmunt's feelings is definitely going to propel this next section and I like the suspense of it. Will he eventually lead the young prince astray or keep him from further temptations? This new potential war or mission provides some interesting additional friction. So far, liking this coming of age story quite a bit.
 
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Interesting introduction to our new characters!
It looks like religious tension will be a key factor in this new reign
 
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Ulvila, Suomi
April, 1122​

The shadows were long on the ground now, the sun about to dip over the castle walls, and the council was still arguing over money. Kaur, who styled himself Duke of the Latgalians, insisted that the need for the coming campaign justified any expense. Manvydas, the king’s youngest uncle on his mother’s side, worried about debts already owed to the Christian traders.

Meanwhile, Risto was watching the debate with a disconcertingly eager look on his face. He was silent as ever, but he looked… hungry. It took long hours before he requested a chance to speak, politely clearing his throat.

Inward, Satajalka groaned. What are you up to now, piru? “My lord?”

“I apologize, majesty. It’s just… we were speaking of the Swedes in Ulvila, yes?” His pale blue eyes flashed with the hint of hidden knowledge.

Gods, Satajalka despised that insinuating look. Risto owed the Virtanens a great deal, but he had no scruples and no sense of dignity. ”Just speak, Risto. I won’t have you whining for scraps from the table.”

Risto ignored the jibe, as he often did. “Your majesty, you learned Latin as a young man, yes? I have obtained a letter that you might want to read. It’s from the Archbishop, to our dear friend Otto.”

“Obtained?” Manvydas raised an eyebrow. The old man liked these intrigues as little as his king.

The look on Risto’s face almost passed for conciliatory. Almost. “An agent of mine shares the priest’s bed from time to time. She copies his letters once his… appetites are satisfied. Given recent events, I thought it best to keep an eye on him.”

There was more byplay between the lords, but Satajalka was no longer listening. He was well into the letter now, and what it said… That pack of scheming snakes, I should have killed them all. The king slammed a fist on the table.

The council chamber was blessedly silent for a moment, before finally Kaur had the courage to speak. “Majesty? Is aught amiss?”

Too filled with wroth to speak himself, Satajalka shot a dark look to his spymaster. Risto began to expand with relish. “The archbishop asks how many men hold the castle while his majesty is out on campaign. Asks how many might be raised from the Christian merchants, whether any Christians work inside the palace. Which of the two princes would be most biddable. Questions of this nature.”

“He means to seize the kingdom by intrigue, as the Christians have in Viro.” Kaur’s voice was grim.

Despite his rage, Satajalka did not miss the doubtful look on Manvydas’ face. It took an effort to calm himself long enough to speak. “My dear uncle,” he said eventually, “you know that honest counsel is always welcome here.”

Manvydas looked a little tentative, but he proceeded. “Well, assuming that the letter you have is an accurate copy… we do not know Otto’s response.” He shot a sharp look to Risto, and his next words were dripping with scorn. “You would have told us had you known, yes? You don’t simply mean to inflame the passions, I am sure.”

Begrudgingly, Risto replied, “The Saxon does not share his plans with his bedmate, no.”

Manvydas took that for confirmation, and turned back to the king. “This man Otto is a sensual creature, we all know that. Would he jeopardize his pleasures for this… adventure? Surely not.”

Satajalka thought about that for a long moment. It was true, undoubtedly, that Otto had done nothing more than receive a letter from another, a letter with sinister implications. By law, that was no crime. Still… whether the plot was in motion or not, the possibility itself made clear that these Christians were a threat. Perhaps Otto would not do this thing, but what of the man after him?

“Go to Otto, tell him that his presence is no longer required here. He has broken no law, but I will not wait around until he decides to do so. Any other foreigner who wishes to live in Ulvila may do so… provided that they swear to the gods that they will abide by our law. Our gods, not theirs.

“Let it be proclaimed: Suomi extends its welcome to the Christians no longer.”

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King Satajalka had ordered the expulsion of the Christians from Ulvila the day before. Zygmunt had watched with a sense of unreality while Father Otto was marched to a Swedish knaur, two grim-faced guards carrying the tabernacle behind him. Most of the foreign merchants had left as well, rather than take an oath before the Suomi gods. The foreign quarter in Ulvila was now nearly stripped of foreigners.

Zygmunt had half expected to be marched before the sacred grove to take the oath of loyalty himself. Part of him would have welcomed it. At least it would have offered some clarity as to how they saw him, some way to ease the king’s doubts. Instead those doubts went totally unacknowledged. He did not feel more secure as a result, only more uncertain. There was some secret test for him, but how to satisfy it?

He scarcely slept the night before, so consumed was he with worries. He needed to walk, to move, to go somewhere. So he walked, slipping out a postern gate unseen and walking through the dark Ulvila streets. Eventually he found himself standing inside the empty chapel. The king’s guards had left a lot for the scavengers to pick through, although it seemed that the locals did not dare.

Among Otto’s things, there was a handsome bound volume. Zygmunt opened it to see a Greek Vulgate, lavish and illuminated. He could not read Greek but he could see the love and the craftsmanship that went into every page. On one page there was an image of Christ so vivid that it appeared to be looking directly at Zygmunt, right into his soul.

Careful, he thought again. His castellan’s final words. You must be careful, lad. They will always watch you. Suddenly it was obvious what he must do.

The chapel was small enough, but working alone it took long hours to encircle it with grasses, dry twigs and kindling. By the time Zygmunt was finished, it was well into morning. Sweat was pouring down his back and a small crowd had gathered to watch. Most were Suomi, staring with interest; but a few were Swedish or Danish merchants, who had taken the king’s oath and remained. He recognized the guarded looks on their faces.

Fire in a city like Ulvila was nothing to take lightly. The riverfront was crowded with wooden structures, warehouses and customs houses; a single spark might set the whole city alike. The chapel had been built at some remove from the city proper, and thus the risk of a larger conflagration was small. And yet the Suomi would not have tolerated Zygmunt’s actions if they did not, on some level, resent the church. For two generations, much of the city’s wealth was held by foreign merchants who worshiped foreign gods, and this chapel was a symbol of that great disparity.

It was only Mieletty who dared try to stop it. The prince arrived at nearly noon, breathless and sweating in his sparring leathers. His eyes were filled with concern. “You don’t have to do this,” he said. “Ziggy, please, you have nothing to prove.”

Mieletty was so earnest in that moment that Zygmunt could not help but love him. He had a fierce protective streak to him that helped you forgive aught else that he might do. Still, he was his father’s trueborn son, and this he did not understand. I have to do it and I have to be seen doing it. Your father will worry about me forever if I do not, and may God save me from the king’s worry.

There was no explaining this to Mieletty however. He was his father’s trueborn son, and so he could not see the king the way that others might. Instead, Zygmunt just shrugged, and offered as reassuring a smile as he could. “It’s just a building,” he said.

Mieletty did not look convinced, but he stepped back all the same, concern evident in his face.

The kindling caught quickly. Ulvila had not seen rain in some days, and they were primed for fire. As the fire consumed the chapel, Zygmunt schooled his face to remain still.

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Zygmunt walked into the king’s solar late that evening. The shadows were long, and his every footfall echoed in his ears. It took a moment to master himself so that his voice didn’t break. “You sent for me, majesty?”

Satajalka regarded him for a long moment, his face inscrutable. Finally, he said in a neutral voice, “I’m told that you burned the chapel today.” He did not seem upset, nor particularly encouraged. He simply seemed… blank.

“I did, majesty.” Zygmunt swallowed heavily.

The king’s eyes suddenly blazed with a cold fury. “I can hardly send you to work for that priest now, I suppose. I will have to think of something else.”

“I will take any punishment that you see fit, majesty. You should know that. Only…”

“Yes? You may speak.”

“You told me once… you said that Suomi was like a shieldwall. The nobles were in the front, holding the line; and the common folk were in the back. Their safety depends on each of us, you said.”

“I believe I stole those words from my father, in fact. It was his favorite metaphor.” His expression softened by a degree, and he gestured for Zygmunt to continue.

Caution, he had said so many years ago. But maybe tonight boldness was called for.

Zygmunt straightened his shoulders and looked the king in the eye. “Well… a shieldwall can’t function if you don’t trust the men besides you, right? And you can’t trust me.”

The blunt statement took Satajalka aback. For a moment, it felt as if Zygmunt was sitting in judgment of his king and not the other way around. The reversal was dizzying. “I have no idea what you mean,” the king said after a long pause.

“Yes, you do. You look at me and you think, he’s going to turn against us when he comes of age. Maybe it doesn’t seem just to you to feel this way, but you do. I can tell.”

Satajalka sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose. “You’re right, of course. I do wonder about you. I have a responsibility to the realm, to my ancestors, to my son… I can’t ignore risks. So this business with the chapel was…”

“I had to pick a side, majesty. I needed you to know that I picked a side.” Zygmunt kept his face carefully still.

Once again Satajalka was studying him, this time with something suspiciously like approval. “You are a sensible young man, Zygmunt, I’ve always said so. You have an impertinent tongue, I see, but for now I suppose I can forgive that.” The king snorted, a rare sign of amusement. “Yes, you would do well as my duke in Masuria. Once you come of age, of course.”

Zygmunt felt a sudden lightness in his chest, and he tried desperately to keep a straight face. “You honor me with your trust, majesty.”

“Don’t thank me just yet. You’ll be reporting to Duke Kaur tomorrow morning, bright and early; he’s leading the assault on Viro and I’m sure he’ll have use for a youth with a good head on his shoulders.” Satajalka made a gesture of dismissal. “Best get some rest, this may be your last chance for a while.”

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It took some patience, but Zygmunt was able to slip out of the castle again that evening. He passed down the streets of Ulvila as quietly as a shadow, and once again appeared before the chapel. What was left of it, that was. The roof had collapsed, leaving the building nothing more than a pile of charred timbers. Zygmunt felt a pang of guilt at the sight, but he ignored it. He wasn’t here to brood over his decision. Instead, he stepped gingerly past the ruined church and into the woods just beyond.

There had been no time to bury the thing properly. Anybody strolling past this spot in the woods would have noticed that the earth had been recently disturbed. Zygmunt dared not leave things alone even one night. Digging with his hands was slow work, and each bird call made him jump for fear. It was easy to imagine the guards showing up behind him, their torchlight casting in his face, the word traitor on their lips.

Finally his hands hit not dirt but a sodden wool blanket. There beneath the earth, right where he had hidden it the night before, was the Greek Vulgate. Hiding it had been a risk. Having it shipped back to the Archbishop was an astronomically bigger risk. However, when he regarded the face of the Christ that morning, he found that he could make no other choice.

Zygmunt glanced about reflexively and then whispered a quick prayer. Christ have mercy on me, a sinner. He could feel his shoulders sag as he said it, as suddenly a wave of exhaustion came over him. It was always difficult to hide in front of all these people, and today had been a truly long day.
 
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The time for youthful fun and games is ending. I hope the boys' friendship can survive the coming war and whatever cynicism life/adulthood throws at them.

I'm glad that you feel that way. I really enjoy write conversations between the two of them.

The truth of Zygmunt's feelings is definitely going to propel this next section and I like the suspense of it. Will he eventually lead the young prince astray or keep him from further temptations? This new potential war or mission provides some interesting additional friction. So far, liking this coming of age story quite a bit.

I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying it. Since we had a main character in book 1 who was ambivalent for most of the book between the church and Suomi beliefs, I wanted to give Zygmunt a different attitude; and that's going to cause all sorts of temptations.

I was sad to see book one end, but you have found such nice characters for us to enjoy and you do marvelous things to bring them to life.

Thanks!

Interesting introduction to our new characters!
It looks like religious tension will be a key factor in this new reign

You could definitely say that, yes.
 
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With the crackdown on Christianity in Suomi, surely its only a matter of time before the Christian realms (Sweden in particular) strike back.
 
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