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Zygmunt plays a dangerous game. I hope he knows what he's doing.
The king’s guards had left a lot for the scavengers to pick through, although it seemed that the locals did not dare.
This part is interesting. I guess the Suomi don't want to potentially defend any deity, even the Christian God.
 
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The interesting thing is that Zygmunt and the king’s son appear to be friends. Friendship often sidesteps religion. I don’t think Zygmunt wants to faithfully serve the king, but can he serve his friend?
 
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Chełmno, Suomi
March, 1125​

The sun was rising behind the Chełmno city walls when Zygmunt’s longship arrived in the harbor. Somebody was ringing the bell at Saint Vojtěch’s, a sound that brought back memories of childhood days at the market. Tradespeople were already up and about, calling to each other with a multitude of languages: Prussian, Norse, Polish, Viro and of course Suomi. For a second, it was as if nothing had changed in his homeland. But only for a second.

Standing on the docks was a reminder that things most certainly had changed. Aapo Virtanen’s skinny frame and shock of blonde hair made him look like a stalk of barley. He had served as the castellan in Chełmno after the conquest, while Zygmunt was in Ulvila; and as the king’s cousin, he must surely have hoped that the title would in turn fall to him.

If he was put out, however, Aapo did not show it. Instead, he wore an amiable smile. “I trust that your grace had an easy voyage?”

“Easy enough. Some ice, but not as bad as it might have been.”

“Ahti is kind. I understand too that congratulations are in order. Cousin Pihla must be thrilled.”

“I couldn’t be happier. It is a great honor, of course.” The notion of being married into the royal household did not thrill Zygmunt, but he had seen no way to refuse the king’s offer without raising suspicions. He still did not.

The two made pleasantries as they walked along the market road. Zygmunt was struck by the little differences. Some had taken to wearing small wooden symbols of the Suomi gods here, Ukko’s bear or a kantele for Väinämöinen. Kuutar’s moon and Päivätär’s sun were popular for women of means. Danish or Norse merchants had owned much of the street when he was a boy, but they had been largely replaced by Suomi from Ulvila or Turku.

Still, nothing startled him as much as the sight of a brown-robed Catholic priest standing in front of a large stave church. He had imagined that Aapo would have purged the city of Christian worship, in accordance with the king’s wishes. When Zygmunt said as much, however, Aapo only smiled. “My royal cousin saw no reason to exacerbate tensions here unnecessarily. Better that you see to matters when you return. The people would be more likely to accept it, coming from a native son.”

That sounded reasonable enough, but something about it still gave Zygmunt pause. Was this a test? Relations with the king had been much warmer in the last two years, but perhaps some of his suspicions remained. Or I’m just imagining things. Satajalka was not the only one with a suspicious nature.

Zygmunt was still mulling this over when they turned the corner and his father’s castle–his castle was in front of him. He suddenly remembered, with great clarity, the crash of the onager’s stone, the breach of the walls, the fearsome pagans screaming as they clambered over the rubble that had once been his home. A dozen boys died in the first few seconds; they were fresh recruits from the city, no more guardsmen than Zygmunt himself. Karol the braggart took a spear in the throat. Leszko, old Leszko the guards-captain who seemed as ageless as the sea, even Leszko was overwhelmed and hacked apart.

His signet ring alone saved him, because it signified him as a person of rank. The pagans seized him at once. When he tried to wriggle away from their grasp, a man cuffed him in the face as casually as he might a dog. Zygmunt pissed his breeches when he saw Satajalka, the fearsome one-eyed zealot Finn that Father Andrzej said had the spirit of antichrist inside him. Satajalka had dismissed him with a casual command, all in his strange foreign tongue. Zygmunt had wept then, sure that they were leading him off to be executed.

Fear had been his constant companion. Even now, it was. He learned how to pretend to be the man that Satajalka hoped that he would be, but he never learned how to stop being afraid.

“You must be happy to be home, your grace.”

For a moment, Zygmunt did not know who had spoken. Then he remembered where he was. He cleared his throat and tried to keep the quaver out of his voice. “Of course. I–you have kept it in good order, Aapo. I am grateful for that.”

Aapo gave Zygmunt a self-deprecating smile. “I hope you continue to think so when you see inside. This way, your grace?”

*****​

On Zygmunt’s third day home, he held court. For much of the day, his attention was consumed with petty concerns: boundary disputes, the rights of villages, alleged violations of guild prerogative. He found that he enjoyed making decisions that held an immediate effect on his subjects; and as the day came to a close he felt a level of satisfaction that he had not in years.

As the sun was setting, he found that there was only one petitioner left. The man had waited until the very last, letting others go before him. He wore a merchant’s robes, frayed and patched; but he stood like a trained warrior and there was a curious restriction to his range of motion, as if there was something bulky beneath the robes.

When he stepped forward at last, he introduced himself as Jakub of Toruń and announced that he had a lucrative trade deal to discuss with His Grace the Duke of Masuria. “I would rather we discuss it privately; competition is fierce among the merchant class as you may know.”

“Let us proceed to my solar, then.” Zygmunt did not take this man for a true merchant, but best to keep him out of sight regardless.

Once the man had settled inside the solar, Zygmunt asked him simply, “Siemomysł or Bolesław?”

The man looked at him, astonished. “My lord, what–”

“You’re wearing mail under that cloak of yours and you speak like a noble. Don’t insult my intelligence. Are you here for Siemomysł or Bolesław?”

The man nodded. “I have the honor to serve his majesty Siemomysł Piast, the one true king of Poland. He was forced from his rightful throne as a boy because of the intrigues of villains.” Jakub gave Zygmunt a shrewd look. “A sad story, no?”

“A tragedy,” Zygmunt said drily.

“His majesty has a daughter, Elizabeta, a maid of eleven years with such delicate beauty that your heart would break to look upon her. He would see the two of you wed, once she comes of age.”

“His majesty should know, I am betrothed already.”

Jakub made a dismissive gesture. “An oath made at swordpoint, to a pack of barbarians and their bloodthirsty warchief? It is of no consequence, your grace, as you well know.”

Zygmunt chuckled, imagining Satajalka hearing the words ‘bloodthirsty warchief.’ “And what would the one true king of Poland ask of me?”

“Nothing you do not long to do already, my lord. Throw off the chains of the oppressor, embrace the cross once more, and fight alongside your countrymen for a righteous cause. You can be a free man, Zygmunt.” Fire filled Jakub’s eyes as he spoke, and by the end he was half out of his seat.

Zygmunt was thoughtful. It was a stirring thought. He could imagine the banner of the cross flapping in the winds. He might even take his father’s place on the king’s council in Krakow. Still, the man’s words made him uneasy. It was easy to speak of such things, harder to do them. “You would have me fight Bolesław as well as the Suomi, both at once.”

Jakub scoffed. “Once Siemomysł has united Poland, it will be trivial to throw the pagans out. The heathens fear a kingdom united under Christ’s banner, that much is obvious. What else could restrain their natural bloodlust?”

The more that Zygmunt listened to this man, the more that he heard the desperation behind it. Why come here and offer this unlikely scheme, unless he was hard pressed? Forget his daughter. I could have Siemomysł’s wife if I wished, like as not.

“You were not here six years prior,” Zygmunt said. “For if you were, you would remember the bodies choking the Vistula, the merchant district aflame. Inside this castle, we were reduced to eating shoe leather. I will not forget the taste. Peace is not a thing to be thrown aside cheaply, my lord.”

“Peace?” Jakub’s voice suddenly had a sharp edge to it. “Your grace, the peace of our fathers died with them. Everywhere men covet what their neighbors have. You will have war, whether you wish it or not.”

Zygmunt arose. “Be that as it may: tell your king, I will not save him from Bolesław.”

*****​

The light was soft inside Saint Vojtěch’s, as it always was. When Father Andrzej stood in front of the nearly empty church to sing the hymns for Terce, it seemed for a second as if the last ten years had disappeared entirely. Andrzej was older now, and the flesh had melted away from his frame leaving him as narrow as a bishop’s mitre. Still, as he listened to the priest sing Nunc Sancte Nobis Spiritus in a strong tenor, Zygmunt felt briefly for a second that he was a boy again.

Zygmunt had lost his father when he was four years old, and he scarcely remembered that man beyond a vague sense of his towering strength. Andrzej had served as regent and tutor and confessor, all in one. If Zygmunt had a true father, Andrzej was it. Him, or Satajalka.

Seeing Andrzej before him, Zygmunt had a sudden urge to leave and send an intermediary. However, he was here now, with his captain of the guard behind him. If Adam saw him beat a hasty retreat now, the rest of the garrison would learn of it soon enough. Besides, he supposed that Andrzej deserved to hear this from him.

The old priest finally noticed him, standing quietly in the back, once the hymns were done. He stared for a long moment before his eyes widened in recognition. Tears filled the old man’s eyes, and he rushed forward to greet his long lost ward. Zygmunt wanted nothing more than to embrace him, and confess to him all of his troubles as he had as a boy. However, he was in public, and here on unpleasant business to boot.

“It is good to see you again, Andrzej,” Zygmunt said with a tight smile. He dared not even refer to the man as Father in front of his guards.

If Andrzej noticed his ward’s reticence, he didn’t say anything. Instead he gave Zygmunt an appraising look. “Lad, it is a blessing to see you back here at last. You have the look of your father as a young man, I would say, and–” Abruptly, the old priest paused. “That’s one of their sigils.”

Around his neck, Zygmunt wore a small wooden ship, a symbol of the god Ahti. He had put it on this morning without much thought. It was simply part of his disguise. But now he was mortified, as if caught in an obscene act before the man he admired most. “It is,” he said tightly.

He should say more, commit to the lie and declare his allegiance to the Suomi gods. That would be the safer course. But Zygmunt would not blaspheme in this place, to this man. So instead he just stood there stiffly, willing away the shame that he felt.

Andrzej’s voice was cold when he spoke next. “Your grace has been gone too long.”

Zygmunt could hear the rebuke in that, but there was nothing he could do but proceed. He hoped to keep the emotion out of his own voice as well. “Andrzej of Toruń, you are ordered in the name of the king to relinquish this building for the disposal of the tietäjät. You have until the fifteenth of April to comply.”

The order was from the king, but the delay was Zygmunt’s innovation. Let them celebrate Easter here one last time, at the very least. It was a small mercy, the only one he could give.

It seemed, for a time, that Andrzej had not heard him. He simply stared, incredulity plain on his face. Finally, he said in a croak, “He sent you.”

“...I’m sorry?”

“He might have sent his warriors in to loot this place, he might have stabled horses in here, he might have had us all placed to the sword. Better that he had than… than this. I would have gone to the sword gladly to stop…” Andrzej made a helpless gesture. “...to stop this.”

Zygmunt was taken aback by the disgust on the old man’s face. “He didn’t send me, I came because you deserved to h…”

Deserved?!“ Andrzej spat. “I have committed many sins in my life, boy, but surely nothing so bad that I deserved to see you reduced to apostasy.”

Adam, his guard-captain, stepped forward and drew his sword. “Your grace, shall I remove this traitor’s tongue?”

Zygmunt paused for a second. He could send his guards outside, and explain everything now. He deeply wanted to, if only to stop Andrzej from regarding him with contempt. He could confess everything, tell the truth, maybe even shed a few tears, and then Andrzej would sit him down and tell him that everything would be okay. That thought had a physical pull on him.

Andrzej was always a terrible liar, though. Zygmunt could make himself feel better, but only by putting his mentor in danger.

Instead, he sneered at the man who had been like a father to him. “Leave the fool to his superstitions, Adam. We have pressing business elsewhere.” As they left the church, Zygmunt kept his eye fixed before him.
 
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A general update on the AAR; I'm about 2/3 of the way through book two in my writing currently. I suspect that it will wind up being somewhere between 9 and 11 chapters depending on how I decide to break it up, so it should last us through the end of the year. It's also going to be longer in terms of word count; Book 1 is 15.5k words and I just passed the 16k mark for book two.

With the crackdown on Christianity in Suomi, surely its only a matter of time before the Christian realms (Sweden in particular) strike back.

There will be a Christian counterreaction in time, and things will get ugly.

This part is interesting. I guess the Suomi don't want to potentially defend any deity, even the Christian God.

Honestly, I suspect that your average Suomi peasant thinks that the Christian god has power and they probably would love to escape his notice.

The interesting thing is that Zygmunt and the king’s son appear to be friends. Friendship often sidesteps religion. I don’t think Zygmunt wants to faithfully serve the king, but can he serve his friend?

That's a good point. I would say that Zygmunt's bond with Mieletty is the strongest tie that he has to the kingdom.

This is proceeding nicely. I like how Zygmunt is being tested. You've established some suspense now so we will await Zygmunt's next bold moves.

And he's continuing to walk a tightrope in this chapter as well. A lot of people have a lot of expectations saddled on poor Ziggy.
 
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Zygmunt arose. “Be that as it may: tell your king, I will not save him from Bolesław.”
Zygmunt won't join Siemomysł, but he said nothing about rebelling from Satajalka.
Zygmunt could make himself feel better, but only by putting his mentor in danger.
How many others might Zygmunt be willing to put down, just for his own sake?
 
Zygmunt's masquerade continues but we see where his heart is going. Nevertheless, his strategy remains sound and he is moving carefully.

However, given the title of this AAR, I see tragedy ahead. Zygmunt no doubt is going to take many Suomi down but ultimately I wonder if victory is really possible for him.

Thanks for the update on your plans.
 
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I'm slowly playing catch up here (well, yours and others). I just reached 'June - September 1095'. I enjoyed the juxtaposition between the battle (very well done, I might add) and the romantic elements. Love and War. Hopefully I'll be caught up over the next few days.
 
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Ulvila, Suomi
March 1126​

When Zygmunt returned to Ulvila to prepare for the wedding, Mieletty had accosted him and insisted that they go hunting together. Just the two of them, to celebrate “Ziggy’s last night of freedom.” Hunting, Zygmunt soon learned, was a bit of a euphemism. The supplies for this trip into the wilderness included a surfeit of beer but precious few weapons. If the two of them did come across an elk, they would be hard-pressed to do anything about it.

Zygmunt had found that it ill-suited a man with as many secrets as him to drink to excess. Tonight, however, he was alone in the woods with the person who knew him best in the world. What could be the harm? So it was that the young duke was well and truly drunk on the night before Midsummer.

Of course, once the beer started flowing, the talk turned to the pair’s youthful exploits. Mieletty was waving his hands around in the theatrical mannerisms of a street performer. “So Sohvi comes down, mad as can be, and screams, WHO PUT THE CATTLE IN MY STUDY?! All the while, you’re standing there, covered in cowshit–”

“Not covered with cowshit,” Zygmunt retorted. “Daubed, here and there. Lightly perfumed.”

Mieletty waved the objection away. “Regardless, you’ve got shit on you and you’re standing very still, like–” The prince slipped into an eerily accurate imitation of Zygmunt’s Slavic accent: “Maybe she won’t notice me.”

Zygmunt pointed a finger back at his friend. “It didn’t help that you kept looking at me and snickering.”

The prince placed a theatrical hand over his heart, trying his best to look serious. “In my defense, your majesty, it was hilarious.”

“Where did you get the idea that cows couldn’t walk down stairs anyway?”

“Oh, well, Mikko told me–”

“Oh, Mikko,” Zygmunt said with a laugh. “I should have guessed. That little asshole had you eating out of his hand.”

Mieletty laughed too. “Oh, gods, I thought he was so learned too. He was, what, sixteen? He wasn’t smarter than us, he was just taller.”

“Remember that shitty little mustache he had?”

Mieletty did his best impression of Kaur’s Latgalian accent. “You need to clean your lip, lad.

“Whatever happened to him anyway?” Zygmunt had not seen Mikko in years.

“A’kkel. He’s guarding the shrine up there now. Married to a Sami lass, I think, supposed to have a son on the way.” Mieletty gave a crooked smile. “He figured that we didn’t get enough snow down here.”

“Too much light in the winter too.”

Mieletty raised his cup to the night sky. “To Mikko! May he fill their heads with lies!”

Zygmunt crashed his cup into his friend’s. “Hear hear!”

The duke staggered off then to find a tree to piss on. Settling back in, he found that the prince had gone from gregarious to somber. Mieletty waved a finger in his face and said, “I want to tell you something.”

Zygmunt tried to laugh, but it came out forced. “You’re drunk.”

“I’m serious. I want to tell you something, I want to tell you…” Mieletty stared into the fire for a second, having lost his train of thought. “I want to tell you that I know all about your little secret, and I don’t care. You’re a good guy, Ziggy, and I love you no matter what.”

A chill ran down Zygmunt’s spine. “Secret? I don’t have any secrets.”

Mieletty barreled on, not listening. “You were always disappearing, always holding back something. Took me forever to figure it out. It just came to me one night.”

Zygmunt felt the bile rise within him. The night seemed so much darker than it had a moment ago. “Mieletty, I don’t–”

Mieletty gave an exasperated sigh. “Dammit, Ziggy, I don’t care that you’re a sodomite!”

A sodomite? The thought was so absurd, so wildly off the mark, that Zygmunt couldn’t help but laugh. “Mieletty, what on earth are you talking about?”

“Aapo told me all about it, Ziggy. He says every time they were going out whoring or wenching, you would slip off to go see some man in town. Starts with a T, I think.” Mieletty stopped for a moment, his brow furrowed. “Is he like your wife or something? Is that how it works, with sodomites?”

A sudden thought popped into Zygmunt’s head, and it made him laugh all over again. “Is that why you wanted to do this trip? To to talk me about being a sodomite? It’s okay if you’re fucking some man so long as you treat my sister right, that sort of thing?”

Enlightenment finally came to the prince. “Wait… you’re not…?”

“I’m not, I swear.” Zygmunt might have stopped there, but alcohol had loosened his tongue and he was so damn tired of hiding. “Tadeusz isn’t my lover, Mieletty. He’s my priest. My Christian priest.”

Mieletty just stared at him for a long moment, his eyes narrowed. Just as Zygmunt was thinking that he had made a big mistake, the prince blurted out, “So you’re a virgin?!

Zygmunt laughed again. The look on his friend’s face was really too funny for words. “If I say no, will you drop this?”

“Who was she?”

“Do you remember that summer that the trade delegation came from Perm? The chieftain’s daughter?”

The prince’s eyes were wide. “Her? Oh my god, you never said anything.”

Zygmunt smiled. “Of course I didn’t. Most girls are going to avoid you if they think you can’t keep it a secret after. You talk too much, that’s your problem.”

Mieletty chuckled. “Put that on the karsikko tree for me: here lies Prince Mieletty Virtanen, he talked too damn much.”

There was a long amiable silence then, as the two men watched the campfire flicker in front of them. Eventually, Mieletty regarded his friend with a gentle expression. “It doesn’t matter to me what gods you worship, Ziggy. You’re a good man, I know that for a fact.”

To his surprise, Zygmunt found that there were tears in his eyes. “Thank you. I’ve been so… alone.”

Mieletty threw an arm around Zygmunt. “You’re never alone. We’re brothers. Nothing’s going to change that.” He then got a sudden shy smile on his face as he added, “Agne’s pregnant. Sohvi says it’ll be a boy. I’m… I’m going to have a son, Ziggy.”

“Mieletty, that’s wonderful!” Agne was Mieletty’s wife, the daughter of Duke Kaur; their marriage was the cornerstone of the Baltic-Suomi unity that the kingdom was based on. A son meant much for Mieletty as his friend and much more for the kingdom; Zygmunt could only imagine how overjoyed the king was. “When is she… I mean, how long?”

“It’s still early. Father wants to be sure before he announces anything, but the midwife is optimistic and Sohvi is too. If all goes well? This winter, sometime.” Mieletty gave his friend a meaningful look. “This won’t be all fun and games for you, Ziggy. I’ll want you to see to his education, when he’s old enough.”

Zygmunt stared at his friend, startled. Words of brotherhood were one thing, but this was something else entirely. “The king will surely…”

“Father will abide by my wishes on this. I’ll see to it.” Mieletty’s voice was calm but sure. In that moment, Zygmunt could almost believe it.

*****​

It was hard to know what to make of Pihla. She had struggled to make eye contact during the wedding, leaving Zygmunt to wonder if he had offended her. Perhaps she was simply reluctant to be married at all, reluctant to have the life of an adult woman after being cosseted as the king’s youngest daughter. She had been a girl when he was still living in Ulvila, a queer girl obsessed with her books and long walks through the woods in the early morn. Mieletty was little help when it came to his youngest sister, but he did offer one insight that proved crucial: “She likes birds.”

There was a brief hiatus between ceremony and reception, where bride and groom might speak to each other, perhaps for the first time. Pihla spent much of her time studying her shoes, while wiggling her left hand back and forth in a rhythmic fashion. Zygmunt could not think of a word to say to her. It suddenly struck him that he would be married to this shy awkward girl for his whole life. Just then, that seemed a long time.

Eventually, for lack of anything better, he asked Pihla if she would like to receive his present just then. She gave him a furtive little nod before returning to her intense study of the floor. So Zygmunt ducked out and soon enough returned with a small bird cage containing a colorful red-faced songbird. At the sound of the bird’s trill, his new wife looked up and was immediately entranced.

“A goldfinch? How wonderful! This is a male, I suppose, from the darker red markings on the face. I don’t suppose you have a female too? A breeding pair would have many advantages for the attentive scholar, I believe. In any case we could always get one. I had one as a girl but of course I dissected it before writing a careful description of the bird’s song; it’s always good to return to one’s youthful mistakes.”

The sudden outburst left Zygmunt astounded. “Dissect it?”

Pihla looked him in the eye for the first time, blinking in confusion. “Yes, of course. How else to properly sketch the skeleton? I still have the skull somewhere, it really is remarkable.”

“And… do you mean to dissect this one too?”

She considered this for a time and shook her head. “No, my old sketches are simplistic but they should suffice. This one shall teach me about the life cycle, mating practices, things of that nature. A corpse can’t tell you everything, you know.” She finally noticed him, seemingly for the first time. “It’s so fortunate that you support my study. Mother says that it’s odd. You know, for a young lady.”

It was odd, Zygmunt felt, and yet perhaps odd was not the worst thing that one could be. Now that she was talking with such excitement, a knot inside him began to loosen. “I confess, I don’t know much about birds,” he said encouragingly, “Will you tell me?” This turned out to be the exact right thing to say.

The torrent of words that followed was overwhelming but oddly charming. She struggled with most of the duties of a conventional princess, but something about her father’s hunting falcon put her racing mind at ease. She spent much of her early life feeding and caring for the bird, until eventually Satajalka had invited her with him on a hunting trip. The falcon in flight was wondrous to her, but the grouse that it brought back was almost as interesting. She begged to see the fowl butchered, and marveled at its curious hollow bones.

The king and queen soon found that she was more cooperative with the traditional feminine pursuits if they permitted her time to follow her own personal obsession. Thus a pair of guards would tromp with her through the fens to see a spotted redshank in its breeding plumage. (One of the great joys of her girlhood, she told him with a shy smile.)

Of course soon there were books, some Latin volumes from churchmen or Christian nobles who made a practice of studying birds as she had. But the true wealth of scholarship, she learned as a teenager, was not in Latin but Arabic. It seemed that she had spent most of the last year endeavoring to convince her father to permit an Arabic tutor, and Zygmunt got the impression that her cooperation with the marriage was part of that deal.

“Eventually I had to explain that these tutors were not Christians at all, but followed some creed of their own that Christians seem quite opposed to. This seems to have done the trick.” She cocked her head and frowned. “There will be room for Hasan, I hope. At Chełmno, I mean. I’m not yet through Kitāb al-Hayawān, and then it’s to be volumes by al-Jahiz and al-Tawhidi.”

“Of course we can make room for Hasan,” he said with a smile. “We shall have the most educated children in the kingdom, I suppose.”

When he mentioned children, she blinked and then said, “I will want to have coitus, you know.”

Zygmunt started to cough. “Excuse me?”

“Tonight. The bride is often nervous, Mother says. But I have considered it and it seems prudent.”

“That’s–that’s good to know.”

Pihla frowned. “Did I say that wrong? I only meant… It’s so damned hard to know how one is supposed to say things, when one is never told how to say them.”

Zygmunt did his best to manage his discomfort, because something about her frustration struck a chord of sympathy in him. “It was… unexpected. More bluntly said than I was used to. People expect young women to talk about sex with a lot of pretty euphemisms.”

“But why? Why not just say what you mean?”

He thought for a moment. “I suppose, because people wish to believe that young women are innocent and virginal.”

Pihla snorted. “I suppose that I have ruined that illusion for you.”

“Plain words don’t offend me, Pihla. We are married, thus you might as well say what you mean to me.” Zygmunt considered for a moment before continuing, “I should add: sex doesn’t have to just be prudent. It can be pleasurable as well.”

She flushed a little. “Truly? For the woman as well?”

Zygmunt smiled. “For the woman as well. Of course, we’ll need to see what you like.”

Pihla blinked. “Oh. Well. Mother didn’t say a word about that.”

*****​

It was not yet dawn, and Satajalka was about to speak of war. He had a sudden memory of his sister Tyyne’s wedding, and a similar council that his father had called on the beach at Oulu. That was a moment of triumph, however, and this was anything but.

There was an anxious, claustrophobic mood among the assembled lords. Much of the nobility had come to see the princess get married and do business in the capital, and this morning they were all squeezed into a chamber meant for a few. Many of the lords gathered in the king’s solar had a bleary, bedraggled look, and plainly wondered at the early morning summons.

Duke Zygmunt was the last to arrive, which Satajalka supposed was a bridegroom’s prerogative. He stopped by the king for a private word before joining the rest of the nobility. “Pihla is outside the castle, majesty. Shall I send a guard to retrieve her?” He had plainly sized up the gathering as an announcement of war, and in that he was not wrong.

“Outside the castle? Now?” The sun was not even up.

“She said something about the call of the great reed warbler, sire. Found in the fens at sunrise.” There was a fondness in the young man’s voice, which gave Satajalka reassurance that perhaps the marriage would work. Pihla was an unusual girl, and would require a certain kind of husband.

Satajalka replied, “I will send Erkki to look after her. The situation is not so dire as yet.” Erkki Sydӓnmaa was a head taller than the next tallest man in Ulvila, and his implacable strength inspired the commons to call him Surma’s Blade. He would keep the princess safe if any man could.

Relieved, Zygmunt gave his king a grave nod and moved to join the other nobles.

With the safety of his youngest assured, Satajalka called forward the rider who had arrived that night. Janis was a sharp-featured youth, obviously common, with mud-spattered leathers. He had spoken briefly to the king himself, and answered a number of sharp questions, but now he seemed overwhelmed by the sheer size of the crowd before him.

Janis began haltingly, “If it please m’lords, I…”

“Speak up, lad! We can scarcely hear you.” This was Duke Kaur, as gruff as ever.

The boy’s eyes widened, and he started to stammer, but no louder than before. “If it please m’lords, I– that is, begging your lordship’s pardon…”

This would never do. The lords were getting restive, and some of the more anxious were beginning to imagine the worst. Satajalka put a gentle hand on the boy’s shoulder and said, “Lad, nothing you say here will stand against you. Please, continue.”

Janis swallowed heavily, and then continued in a loud, clear tone. “There’s an army, m’lords. In Riga. Nine, maybe ten thousand.”

A hush fell over the nobility. That was more than Suomi can call up herself, even with Satajalka’s alliances among the Sami clans. “Were they flying the banner of the Cross?” one lord called out. “Was it the Swedes?” cried another.

Janis shook his head. “No, m’lords. They came cross the Daugava, m’lords. Flying the flag of Curonia, I think Pommeri besides.”

“Sviendorog rībeigais,” Duke Kaur said with a growl. Sviendorog the Hideous, a haughty Latgalian warchief who hated the presence of Suomi on Baltic lands. He had raided the Pruessi lands for years when Satajalka was a boy, until King Otso had sent a warband to extract tribute from him. “So he’s moved at last. That foul man has hungered after my lands for years. Begging your majesty’s pardon, but your father should have dealt with him when he had the chance.”

“Close your mouth, you filthy Baltic cur. King Otso fashioned a mighty kingdom where once there was nothing. A man like you is not worthy to polish his boots.” The outburst, to the surprise of all, came from Count Risto; the narrow-faced spymaster was flushed red with rage at the insult to the Virtanen name.

Before Kaur could strike Risto, Satajalka stepped forward. “My lords, squabbling will get us nowhere. Rather, say what would you have us do.”

“Cede him Selpils, and it may mollify him. That land is south of the Daugava, no? It is more naturally part of Curonia, it seems to me.” This notion came from Duke Susi; he ruled Karelia on the kingdom’s eastern border, and plainly did not care to fight over land so far from his own.

Duke Kaur scoffed. “Aye, and perhaps we should give Viipuri to the Russians while we’re at it. Or are you only generous with the land of other men?”

At that, Mieletty stepped forward. “My lords, we have all stood on a shieldwall, have we not? And on a shieldwall, my shield protects you and your shield protects me. We fight alongside each other, or we are each overwhelmed.” Men were nodding as he spoke, the prince’s words getting through. “I do not know the dog Sviendorog, but I know this. I know we shall bleed him for every inch of land he means to claim. I know he will rue the day that he crossed swords with us.”

Satajalka was flush with pride. Mieletty had looked like nobody so much as Satajalka’s own father in that moment, or perhaps like the king he would one day become. With the nobility now quiet, the king stepped forward himself. “Summon your banners, my lords. We shall march on Riga immediately, and roust him from it. My son shall command.”

The men filed out to go send riders to their lands, or in some cases to ride back themselves. Soon only Risto lingered behind. “Your majesty, if I may have a word…”

Satajalka suppressed a wave of irritation. “Duke Kaur is a fierce marshal, Risto. I will not replace him now of all times.”

Risto offered his king a pained smile. “As you say, your majesty. I just meant to observe… this Sviendorog is a man of some charisma, but his heir is not. We do not need to stop ten thousand angry Balts, only the one.”

The spymaster’s implication turned Satajalka’s stomach. “You are talking about murder, Risto,” the king said as coldly as he could.

Risto nodded, not looking apologetic in the slightest. “As you say, your majesty.”

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Zygmunt may not like the King, but why would he throw away his friendship for the sake of Christianity? Jakub was a fool to even ask.

Well, as I tried to indicate, not everything is going well for Jakub's liege; so they're trying some desperate plays.

Zygmunt’s life is not his own to live. I feel bad for him and wonder if he will ever be able to make a choice of his own.

Good question. I think he made one in this chapter.

Zygmunt won't join Siemomysł, but he said nothing about rebelling from Satajalka.

How many others might Zygmunt be willing to put down, just for his own sake?

Zygmunt's masquerade continues but we see where his heart is going. Nevertheless, his strategy remains sound and he is moving carefully.

However, given the title of this AAR, I see tragedy ahead. Zygmunt no doubt is going to take many Suomi down but ultimately I wonder if victory is really possible for him.

Thanks for the update on your plans.

Zygmunt doesn't love Satajalka but he's becoming more and more tied into the Virtanen family. As long as that's true, it will complicate anything else that he might want to do.

I'm slowly playing catch up here (well, yours and others). I just reached 'June - September 1095'. I enjoyed the juxtaposition between the battle (very well done, I might add) and the romantic elements. Love and War. Hopefully I'll be caught up over the next few days.

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed the battle, that was probably the most difficult part to write so far.
 
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Usually revealing secrets while drunk doesn't end well. It's good to see Zygmunt's friendship with Mieletty is strong enough to overcome that.

Zygmunt is going to educate Mieletty's offspring one day. I can see him becoming conflicted when those kids start asking about "the meaning of life, the gods, etc." What might he tell them?

Risto is slimy even for a spymaster. I wouldn't want to make an enemy of him.
 
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Aapo Virtanen’s skinny frame and shock of blonde hair made him look like a stalk of barley.​

Nice, evocative description.

As the sun was setting, he found that there was only one petitioner left. The man had waited until the very last, letting others go before him. He wore a merchant’s robes, frayed and patched; but he stood like a trained warrior and there was a curious restriction to his range of motion, as if there was something bulky beneath the robes.

When he stepped forward at last, he introduced himself as Jakub of Toruń and announced that he had a lucrative trade deal to discuss with His Grace the Duke of Masuria. “I would rather we discuss it privately; competition is fierce among the merchant class as you may know.”

I'm surprised Ziggy agreed to meet this mysterious person with bulky clothing in private. He could have been an assassin.

“Peace?” Jakub’s voice suddenly had a sharp edge to it. “Your grace, the peace of our fathers died with them. Everywhere men covet what their neighbors have. You will have war, whether you wish it or not.”

Zygmunt arose. “Be that as it may: tell your king, I will not save him from Bolesław.”

Ziggy should be careful. This meeting could be used against him at some point.

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed the battle, that was probably the most difficult part to write so far.

Battles are tough to write. Yours had a Bernard Cormwell feel to it, especially in the detail.

“A goldfinch? How wonderful! This is a male, I suppose, from the darker red markings on the face. I don’t suppose you have a female too? A breeding pair would have many advantages for the attentive scholar, I believe. In any case we could always get one. I had one as a girl but of course I dissected it before writing a careful description of the bird’s song; it’s always good to return to one’s youthful mistakes.”

The sudden outburst left Zygmunt astounded. “Dissect it?”

Pihla looked him in the eye for the first time, blinking in confusion. “Yes, of course. How else to properly sketch the skeleton? I still have the skull somewhere, it really is remarkable.”

A real sweetheart. I think I dated her... :)
 
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Wow I’ve really been loving the take of Zygmunt, you’ve done an incredible job!

I especially enjoyed the scene with him and Mieletty, it promises well for the future.

Also I’m loving Pihla, sounds like a great gal!
 
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Excellent to have this chapter. Very rich: from the drunken fireside chat to the revelations of Pihla's character. This was quite the discussion of birdwatching of a particular era.

Zygmunt seems hemmed in more than ever though, which makes me believe the war may give his character a reason to show more of his true colors. Well done.
 
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Tallinn/Ulvila, Suomi
September, 1126​

The Tallinn shrine had been fashioned into a make-shift hospital, with injured warriors packed from edge to edge wherever they would fit. A handful of youthful tietäjät were among them, administering healing to those who seemed like to survive and singing Tuoni’s death-ode to those who would not. This was only a small fraction of the casualties at Metsepole, Zygmunt reflected; the rest had been unable to leave the battlefield, or had fallen by the side of the road on the forced retreat north.

The Curonian invasion had been a rude surprise, but despite their inferior numbers, Suomi hopes had been high on the march south from Ulvila. Prince Mieletty was placed in command, carrying with him the family sword to symbolize the royal authority. Men seemed proud to be marching beside him.

Reports from Latgalia could not have been more positive, as well. Sviendorog’s forces were bleeding from a thousand cuts, it was said, as loyal Latgalian barons harried the invaders with hit and run attacks. Tensions were on the rise between the Curonians and allied Slavs. The greybeards were cautious as always they were, but Mieletty saw the opportunity to split his enemies apart with a single bold stroke.

Thus, it was a rude surprise when the Suomi awoke one morning on the road south to Riga and found Sviendorog’s forces arrayed against them, still some ten thousand strong. The wily old chieftain had been slipping them false reports, encouraging his inexperienced rival to act rashly. Now the Suomi found themselves in a battle on the enemy’s terms. The cost had been severe.

Zygmunt could see Mieletty now sitting by a Viro warrior with an arrow broken off in his upper thigh. Warrior was perhaps too strong a word, since he looked half a child still. When the prince looked up, he treated Zygmunt with a weary smile. “See, Ziggy can confirm. It was a half dozen cows, right there in Sohvi’s solar, right?”

The boy attempted a weak chuckle. “I don’t–*cough*–believe you.”

“Sadly true,” said Zygmunt, with a levity that he did not feel. “There was shit everywhere. What’s your name, lad?”

“Margus, my lord. From”–he winced–“from Vijandi.” He lifted a weak clammy hand in salute. The boy’s wound was red and inflamed, and his face was shiny with sweat; it did not take a healer to see that Margus would die.

Mieletty forced a smile. “Margus, tell Ziggy about that girl? The rose of Viljandi, right?”

Margus smiled. “Riina. Eyes like… deep pools of water. Glazier’s daughter…”

For long moments after Margus finally perished, Mieletty and Zygmunt sat in silence. The shrine echoed with groans and cries of pain, but the prince’s eyes were glazed over and he seemed scarcely to hear them. “You’re exhausted,” Zygmunt said at last. “How long have you been here?”

Mieletty blinked in surprise, as if he had forgotten that Zygmunt was there. “Not long enough,” he said quietly.

Zygmunt walked over to the prince and extended his hand. “All right, Highness, stand up. You’re going to rest if I have to wrestle you into bed myself.”

The prince’s weary eyes showed resistance, mixed with the barest hint of his usual humor. “This is treason, you realize.”

Zygmunt snorted. “You can fashion a gibbet for me tomorrow, your highness. Once you’ve had some sleep.”

Mieletty returned to his commander’s tent easily enough, and there started to wearily remove his royal cloak and other heavy insignia of office. Zygmunt moved to call the squire, but the prince held up a hand and that was that. Plainly he did not feel that he deserved the service of another, not after the defeat three days before. Zygmunt was saddened to see his dear friend so full of self-recrimination, but this did not seem like a battle worth fighting.

Midway through removing his boots, the prince’s eyes suddenly alighted on the family sword, what the commons called the Sword of Virtanen. “Did you know Isänisä, Ziggy?”

“I was still in Poland when King Otso died.” It showed the depth of Mieletty’s exhaustion that he had forgotten this, Zygmunt reflected.

“Ah, well… there was a king, Ziggy. Growing up, it was like I had Lemminkäinen for a grandfather.” The prince smiled sadly at the memory. “Once there were legends who walked the earth. How far things have fallen, right?”

Zygmunt sat back next to him. “Mieletty, you were a child. Things always seem easier when you’re a child.” Almost always. “No doubt he had his moments of doubt like you do.”

“I suppose. I just…” Mieletty sat in silence for a moment, before finishing the thought. “All day, I was thinking, you put these men here. Their blood is on your hands.”

“Mieletty, no.” Zygmunt was getting heated now, hoping desperately to puncture his friend’s dark turn of mind. “That crime lies with Sviendorog, the treacherous dog. You–you just made a mistake, as all men do, and one that you won’t make again. But you fought for those men, and they all know it.”

Mieletty did not look convinced, but at least he removed his boots at last. The prince then regarded his old friend with a tired smile. “You should go to bed too, Ziggy. We have a long day ahead of us.”

*****​

Tap tap tap tap tap. Pihla was tapping her left forefinger against her leg in a simple rhythm, one-two-three-four-five-pause-pause-one-two-three-four-five.

The sun was too bright, it seemed to her, and always flashed distractingly off the surface of the river. The masked revels of Kekri were too loud, and the presence of so many people seemed to push in on her. The string for her mask was digging ever so slightly into the back of her scalp.

And the mask itself? She had been quite specific in her description of the bird to be depicted, but the woodcarver had decided to fashion a hellish raptor arising entirely out of his own fancy. It will be more striking, Highness, he had said; but she knew that the image was simply absurd, no true bird at all.

This fiendish combination of irritants and absurdities was taxing to her, as such things had always been. She could not figure any reason why she should be afflicted so, but she was. Only the tapping seemed to help, for a time. The rhythm pleased her. It was orderly… symmetrical. Tap tap tap tap tap.

Father was addressing the commons now behind his own mask, the traditional Suomi bear. It would be something about the gods and the harvest. Despite the recent loss of Selpils, the commons seemed to be in good spirits; perhaps the loss seemed too distant to be real. Beside him stood her mother, the Queen Aime Virtananen, looking the very picture of regal womanhood; her younger brother, the Prince Arvo, thirteen and convinced of his own maturity; and finally Pihla herself. She was attempting a radiant smile but suspected that it came off as a grimace. Behind them all was the disconcertingly large presence of Erkki Sydӓnmaa.

Pihla had asked to stay home, perhaps to tend to the pregnant Agne. Mother was having none of that. “It is bad enough that Mieletty is not here, child. How are we to explain your absence as well?” Mother acted like her elder brother was off on one of his boyhood escapades rather than returning home from war.

Tap tap tap tap tap.

A sudden familiar honk caught her attention, and now she truly did smile. There, over the harbor, was a barnacle goose, the first of the season. It was a beautiful creature, with lovely black and white plumage. There was a pleasure in simply watching it fly.

The bird was also a puzzle to her, one that she enjoyed mulling over. The barnacle goose was so called because all summer the young grew in barnacles deep underwater. Only once the weather started to cool did the birds triumphantly burst forth from beneath the waves, and return to Suomi and similar climes. In fact, Pihla had heard that some Christian clerics considered the goose a fish rather than a bird, although why the clerics weighed in on such things was a mystery to her.

She did not doubt that this story was true, precisely, because it was attested to by Suomi and Chistians alike. And yet she would dearly love to study this process for herself, because there were many mysteries to it. Much like Aristotle’s hibernating swallows, none could claim to have observed this for themselves.

As she stood there, musing on how to capture a goose for her own study, she felt a sudden sharp elbow in her ribs. She could not understand at first why everybody was staring at her: her parents, her brother, the crowd. Belatedly, she recalled that she was to give a short benediction too.

“We, uh… we make this offering to Päivätär, for the gift of her warmth.” Pihla finished with a half-hearted little flourish, feeling like an utter fool. Her father gave her a diplomatic smile, and proceeded with the ceremony. However, she could feel Mother’s disapproving stare boring into her, and she had no doubt that she would hear about this moment again.

Pihla’s worry was interrupted by the sound of a commotion in the rear of the crowd. She peered back, trying to discern what had caused the outburst, when suddenly a plume of black choking smoke arose from the harbor. Fire.

The crowd as a whole seemed to realize this just as she had. Suddenly, the commonfolk were scrambling forward, to get as far from the riverfront as possible. Pihla could see an old man stumble and fall, and then the crowd surged over him and she saw him no more.

Father called the guards to link arms, and for a second there was an island of calm where all else was bedlam. He spoke in a low and decisive voice. “Arvo and I will take the guard and help combat the fire. Erkki, take my wife and daughter back to the castle; and then return with as many of the warband as you can find.”

Iskӓ, I’ll go with you,” Pihla said impulsively. Seeing the indecision in her father’s good eye, she added, “I can hoist a bucket at the least.”

“Fine,” Father said finally in a clipped voice. “Arvo and Pihla, with me.”

The royal guard formed a wedge and marched to the fire. Or rather, they attempted to form a wedge. The crowd was pressing in on all sides, blind with panic, and the guards could not stop them all. Pihla was nearly knocked over more than once.

For this reason, she thought nothing of the man who brusquely rushed past her, saying, “Pardons, m’lady” in a thick Pruessi accent. Nothing until she saw her father crumple forward, nothing until she saw the blood pouring from a wound on his side. Arvo called out in horror, his cry one of thousands in the chaos of the riverfront, and the guards in front of them stopped and gaped at the sight of their king prostrate before them.

She knelt before her father and placed her shaking hands on his wound. She was briefly vexed by her occluded vision before it occurred to her that she was still wearing the damned bird mask. She tore it off her head with one hand and said, quickly, “Somebody get me a cloth for his wound.” She never saw who handed the scarf to her, she only grabbed it from their hand and held it against her father’s side.

Father’s face was pale, but he was still conscious, staring at her in mute appeal. She wished that she could offer him some soothing words, but that had never been her way. She tried to ignore the panicky, helpless feeling that was currently squeezing her chest. She was no healer, no true princess even, how could his life be in her hands? You could not even remember a simple prayer, you witless fool.

She closed her eyes for just a moment, and behind the din of the panicking crowd she thought she heard the honks of the geese. She imagined them frantically clawing through the water unable to breathe, before bursting forth from beneath the waves like Ilmatar bringing forth the land from the sea. A voice seemed to say to her, You too will figure out a way. Was it the goddess? Was it herself?

When Pihla opened her eyes again, the knot in her chest had loosened. She looked up and saw that Arvo was still there, staring at their father with wide eyes. “Arvo,” she said bluntly, “go back to the castle and grab the physic. You’re no help here.” As he gave her a tentative nod, she selected two guards to go with him. The rest would need to stay here, to guard their king. Or his body.
 
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There's no good way to say this explicitly in a medieval setting but I do intend Pihla to be autistic (as I am).

This Sviendorog needs to be dealt with before he does any damage to the Finnish realm.

Too true. He's going to be a threat as long as he's alive.

Zygmunt is going to educate Mieletty's offspring one day. I can see him becoming conflicted when those kids start asking about "the meaning of life, the gods, etc." What might he tell them?

This is a great question. I added a moment in a later chapter because of this post.

I'm surprised Ziggy agreed to meet this mysterious person with bulky clothing in private. He could have been an assassin.

He could be an assassin--good point, and one that I wish I had considered. First draft problems!

A real sweetheart. I think I dated her... :)

I love writing Pihla so much, I really do.

Wow I’ve really been loving the take of Zygmunt, you’ve done an incredible job!

I especially enjoyed the scene with him and Mieletty, it promises well for the future.

Also I’m loving Pihla, sounds like a great gal!

Thanks! There's more with Pihla and with Zygmunt/Mieletty, although both in more dire circumstances than they were last week.

Excellent to have this chapter. Very rich: from the drunken fireside chat to the revelations of Pihla's character. This was quite the discussion of birdwatching of a particular era.

Zygmunt seems hemmed in more than ever though, which makes me believe the war may give his character a reason to show more of his true colors. Well done.

Thanks. I spent a fun afternoon looking up medieval notions of birds, and among other things I learned that a lot of medieval people didn't really understand bird migration, and so more obscure legends and notions came up instead.

And I think the war is going to inspire a lot of people to show their true colors too.
 
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Is Mieletty in for a rude awakening once he returns home?

There's no good way to say this explicitly in a medieval setting but I do intend Pihla to be autistic (as I am).
I kind of picked up on it (I'm also), but I also didn't want to assume (probably because I personally struggle with writing neurotypical characters - if I did a primarily narrative AAR, most of the major characters would be on the spectrum because I don't really know how to do neurotypical characters without being stereotypical).